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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

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  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

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  • Kuch nahi bann paega

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Ab tak...

Suhana : Hum acche dost hi hai. Par woh aisi hi hai. Aur lagta hai woh tum me interested hai. Wo koshish karegi tum se harr baat jaan'ne ki but you better stay silent okay?

Veer : Alright!

Suhana : Aur jitna ho sake uss se duri bana ke rakhna.

Veer : Hmm~

Suhana : Let's go now!!

Aur Divya ke hi peeche peeche Suhana sang Veer bhi chal diye. Apne suitcase ko kheechte hue Veer aage badha, uski nazre paini hokar Divya ki peeth par jam gayi.


Ab aage...

*Vrrrrrooooooooommmm*

Car Las Vegas ki makkhan jesi smooth roads par bhaag rahi thi. Divya car drive kar rahi thi, aur Veer-Suhana dono hi peeche baithe hue the.

Car ka interior dekh, Veer kaafi fascinated tha. Kya hi gazab ka interior tha. Adhbhut!



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Suhana ne bhi ye Divya ki car notice kii toh wo puch uthi,

Suhana : Ye kab lii tumne?

Divya (smiles) : Looks nice right? Ye mene kuch mahine pehle hi lii. Ek tough case solve ho chuka tha toh uski khushi me ye mene khareed lii. Do you like it?

Suhana : Hmm~

Divya : I can gift you one you know?

Suhana : No thanks!!!

Divya : Awww~ Hamesha ki tarah tumhara jawaab aaj bhi naa hi hai.

Veer surprised tha. Suhana ne ek car ka offer yu hi thukra diya? Kyu? Veer ne Suhana ko dekha toh woh jese samjhi ki Veer uss se kuch puchna chaah raha tha. Fir woh Veer ko samjhaate hue boli,

Suhana : Divya ek detective hai. Kaafi famous yaha par. Aur uske husband bhi. Dono hi popular hai crime studies me.

Par Veer ko toh pehle se hi ye pata tha. Usne Divya ko check jo kar liya tha. Fir bhi usne naatak karte hue haan me sarr hila diya. Divya se zyada Veer ko toh iss car me interest tha.

Veer : Ye kitne ki hogi?

Veer ne wese toh pehle hi system se car ko check kar liya tha. Lekin uske bio me price mentioned nahi tha. Jis kaaran se usse Suhana se ye sawaal puchna pada.

Suhana : Umm... I guess...

Suhana jawab de paati ki uss se pehle hi Divya ne unn dono ko mirror me dekh khud hi jawaab de diya,

Divya : Yadi tumhari Indian currency me convert kare toh, around 7-8 crore kii hai ye car. Veer!! Maybe uss se zyaada bhi haha~

Wo mirror se hi usse aankh maarte hue boli. Khaas kar uske naam ko thoda zorr deke pukaari aur sharaarti dhang se muskuraayi.

Veer unfazed tha. Iss nakli flirt ke aage wo jhuk jaaye aur mantra mugdh ho jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Bhale hi Divya khubsoorat thi par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki Veer harr sundar ladki ke saamne pighal jaaye.

Wo jaanta tha Divya ke status me kya likha hua tha. Jawaan ladko ke saath flirt karna aur unki feelings ke saath khelna uski aadat thi. Ek hobby. Behtar yahi tha ki uski befaaltu ki flirtings par dhyaan na diya jaaye.

Aur Veer ne wahi kiya. Jab usne Divya ki harqato par koi reaction na diya, toh Divya aur curious ho uthi. Uski muskaan aur fel gayi.

[Master~ Hum iss se bhi behtar car lenge future me. Don't worry!]

'Yes Pari!!! Definitely!!'

Suhana : Toh? Kaha chal rahe hai hum?

Divya : Mere ghar of course, aur kaha?

Suhana : Okay! Par tumne toh kaha tha ki serious issue hai.

Divya : Of course dear. Uske liye hume shaam ko nikalna hoga. Meeting hogi aaj. You have to be there. Isliye toh tumhe abhi ghar le jaa rahi hu. Acche se araam karna. Jetlag bhi ho raha hoga abhi.

Suhana : Fine~

Divya : Wese maan'na padega Veer. Waqai tum boht handsome ho. Mujhe laga nahi tha Suhana jab tumhe yaha leke aaegi toh mujhe itna bada surprise milega haha~

Veer : Aapko pata tha ki mein yaha aa raha hu?

Divya : Hahaha~ Pata tha? In fact, I was the one who told her to bring you along.

Veer : Whaaatttt?

Ab ye ek nayi news thi Veer ke liye. Divya ne hi Suhana ko kaha tha ki Veer ko yaha leke aaye?

Divya : Well yes! Suhana ko mera ek purana favour repay karna tha. Toh mene uss se ye karne ko kaha. Tumhe kya laga? Suhana ko ye favours ke saath khelne ki tricks kisne sikhaayi hai? Hahaha~

Veer : Whaaattttt!!!!?

Veer ko ab samajh aaya tha ki Suhana jo itne favours leti thi uss se. Wo asal me Divya ki hi den thi. Usse dekh ke hi Suhana ne ye seekha tha.

Suhana idhar apna muh chhipaaye hue thi. Uske gaal iss baar thode laal the.

Suhana : Stop it Divya...

Divya : Hahahaha~ Why now!? Dekha tumne Veer? She learned it from me. Well! Tumhari kaafi tareefe kari thi Suhana ne toh mene uss se yahi kaha tha ki bring Veer along with you. Mein bhi toh dekho kya khaas baat hai tum me? And you both are here now.

Veer khamosh reh gaya. Toh ye maajra tha. Suhana ke upar ateet me kabhi Divya ne koi favour kiya tha. Aur uske badle me aaj Suhana idhar aayi hui thi. Uss favour ko chukaane. Saath me Veer bhi lapete me tha.

'I see~'

Divya : Toh ab pata chala tumhe wo kyu meri car ka offer nahi le rahi? Hahahahaha~

Veer : Ohh!

Tohh ye baat thi. Yadi Suhana Divya ke haatho dii gayi car le leti, toh kahi na kahi ye bhi ek tarah se favours me hi gina jaata.

'Ohh! I see now!'

[This woman is so crafty Masterrr~]

Divya : Par Suhana dear. Sach me mein koi favour nahi kar rahi. I can gift you a same car like this you know.

Suhana : No! I don't need one.

Divya : Anyways!!! Veer!!! I'm not at all disappointed after seeing you now. You have definitely piqued my interest.

Usne kehte hue ek baar fir aankh maar apna nichla honth daato tale daba liya.

[This bitttttcchhhh~]

Suhana (frowns) : Divya...

Divya : Alright alright!! I won't snatch your Boyfriend Suhana. Calm down!!!

Suhana : Whaaaatttt? He's not my Boyfriend Divya. What are you talking about??? I'm already married. Tum jaanti ho. Don't joke like that...

Divya : Hey hey~ Calm down! Kya hua? I was just kidding okay?

Suhana kuch na boli. Par Veer ne ye zaroor notice kiya tha ki uske gaalo par halki laali chhaayi hui thi.

Aur fir car me ek shaanti chha gayi. Vegas ki uchi uchi buildings, wo tezz raftaar me aati jaati gaadiya, bade bade fly overs dekh Veer uss nazaare me kho gaya.



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Aur car kab Divya ke ghar ke baahar aa kar ruk gayi iska pata hi nahi chala. Samay yu beet gaya.

Divya : Okay~ Here we are...

Car se utar kar dekha toh Divya ka ghar kaafi bada aur aalishaan tha.



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Ghar ke theek saamne bagal se ek bada sa swimming pool bhi tha. Jagah jagah hare bhare ped paudhe aur sundarta badhaane ke liye kuch anokhe patthar bhi rakhe hue the.

Ek aisa ghar, jo ek baar dekhte hi pasand aa jaaye.

Divya : I hope tumhe pasand aaya hoga? Veer?

Veer : It's nice...

Divya : Well! Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~ Anyways! Come inside.

Andar aate hi Veer aur bhi dang reh gaya. Interior decor toh aur bhi khubsoorat tha.



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Veer : Kitne log rehte hai yaha?

Veer ko jawaab pata tha. Lekin fir bhi usse apne aap ko anjaan dikhaana tha.

Divya : Just me and my husband. Make yourselves comfortable. Mein coffee ready karti hu. You guys can take a bath and freshen up. Washroom is right there on the right. Fir lunch ki taiyaari karti hu.

Suhana : Mujhe pata hai already kaha hai washroom.

Divya (smiles) : Ohh! Of course dear~ Tum pehli baar thodi hi aa rahi ho. Mein toh Veer ko bata rahi thi. Fufu~

Uski paini nazar ek baar fir Veer ki aankho se pal bhar ke liye takraayi.

[Maaaastttteerrrr~ Don't look at her!!! Hmph~]

Veer Pari ki baat maan washroom me chal diya. Aur andar aate hi wo ek baar fir ghar ki luxury dekh mugdh reh gaya.



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Usse kuch derr pehle ke Divya ke bol yaad aa gaye, 'Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~'

'No wonder ye mehnga mila hoga. Really! Mujhe bhi ek ghar lena hai. Then, Bhabhi mein aur baaki hum sab uss waale me raha karenge.'

[Hmm hmm Master! Definitely!!! Master bathtub me bath loge aap?]

'Naah!'

30 ghante ke safar ke baad, usse zaahir tha ki ek behatreen shower ki zaroorat thi. Body odour aur sweat ko hataane ka sabse behtar upaay aur kya hi tha?

Shower ke neeche wo khade Pari se baato me lag gaya.

'Tumhe kya lagta hai Pari? Divya! Kya woh kuch chhupa rahi hai? Usne mujhe saath me laane ko kyu kaha Suhana se?'

[Don't talk about her Masteeerrr!!! I don't like that bitch. Hmph~ Aur usko aap nahi dekhoge ab. I don't like it.]

'Haha~ Ye tumhe kya ho gaya achanak se? Are you jealous?'

[I... I... Aaargghh!! Mene kaha na Massttteerrr!! Usse mat dekho. Aap mujhse baat kiya karo.]

'Alright Alright! Pari! Suno... Mere stats me intelligence 10 points se badha do aur baaki stats 20 points se.'

[As you wish Master. 900 points aapke use hoenge isme.]

'Go ahead!'

*Ding*

[All done Master.]

[Ye raha aapka full status.]


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'Good!!'

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Shower ke baad, Veer aur Suhana dono ne hi halka fulka khana khaane ke baad araam farmaaya. Jetlag se nijaat paane ke liye.

Aur sooraj dhalte hi wo dobaara se car me baith chal diye.

*Thud*

Car ka door band hua aur tezz kadmo ke saath Suhana, Divya aur Veer crime investigation ke ek office ke andar jaane lage.

Jagah jagah afra tafri ka mahaul tha. Veer ko aisa laga jese woh kisi stationary ki factory me ghus gaya tha, kyuki siwae panno ki gandh ke alawa waha aur koi gandh samajh me hi nahi aa rahi thi.

Chaaro orr nazre ghumaate hue wo peeche peeche hi chalta raha jab achanak se...

'Huh!!???'

Ek ajeeb sii feeling usse mehsoos hui. Badan me rongte khade ho gaye. Usse aisa laga jese usse koi dekh raha tha, ghoor ke.

'There's something wrong.'

Andar aate hi Divya ne ek ek jodi gloves fekte hue dono Suhana aur Veer ko diye. Jo dono ne hi pehen liye.

Uske baad ek jawaan sa ladka daudate bhaagte hue aaya, wo haatho me ek plastic ki transparent thaili liye hue tha.

Divya : Evidence?

Ladka : Yes ma'am!

Divya : Okay! You can leave now!

Aur wo chala gaya.

Veer ne notice kiya ki aas paas ke log unhe kuch zyaada hi acchi nazro se nahi dekh rahe the.

Packet ke andar evidence maujood tha. Kisi crime ka...

Suhana : This...

Divya : Issi ke liye tumhe yaha bulaaya hai.

Veer : Yaha pe koi object kyu nahi kar raha? Mein ye mehsoos kar sakta hu ki ye log mujhe yaha paa kar khush nahi hai. Fir bhi koi kuch keh nahi raha.

Divya : Kyuki mein khadi hu tumhare saath. Veer! Suhana ek prakaar se meri assistant hai. Aisa samajh lo ki usse yaha ki thodi boht access mili hui hai.

Veer : And what about me?

Uske sawaal par Divya usse apna sarr upar kar dekhi.



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Divya : Kaha na... Tum mere saath khade ho. They won't do anything.

Suhana : Mujhe ye batao baat kya hai!? Jaldi!!!

Aur fir Divya ne evidence ko baahar nikaala.

Andar khoon se sana ek pen tha. Ek kaagaz ka tukda aur uss kaagaz ke tukde par kuch likha hua tha.

Suhana : Mein kuch samjhi nahi.

Divya Suhana ko kuch samjha paati ki tabhi,

"You are not allowed here brat!!!"

Ek kathor awaaz unke peeche se aayi. Palat ke dekha toh Divya ka pati, Nicholas khada hua tha.

White shirt ke upar ek long coat daale, aur sarr par typical detective waali cap pehen wo waha khada unhe ghoor ke dekh raha tha. Khaas kar Veer ko.

Divya (khade hote hue) : Nik!!!

Nicholas : Tell him to get lost. Only Sonny babe can stay...

Suhana : I told you not to call me by that name ever again...

Pal bhar me teeno ek dusre ke upar chadh pade. Jaha Nicholas Veer ke yaha hone se niraash tha toh wahi Divya uske iss ravaiyye se gussa thi aur wahi Suhana isliye tilmila uthi kyuki Nik ne usse Sonny kehke pukaar diya.

'Lagta hai Suhana ka past inn dono se juda hua hai.'

[Yes master!!!]

Mauka dekh ke Suhana ne confused Veer ki orr jhukte hue usse samjhaaya,

Suhana : Divya ek personal detective hai Veer. Personal detectives general cases me apni hastakshep nahi karte. Inhe paise zyaada milte hai. Well... Ek prakaar se ye dalaal jese hote hai. Isliye Divya ke paas itna paisa hai.

Veer : I see...

Suhana : Nik bhi ek personal detective hai. Aur isliye yaha ki general investigation unit hume acche se nahi leti kabhi. Kyuki harr tough cases ko aksar hum log solve kar dete hai. Jiske chalte GIU haath par haath dhare baithe reh jaate hai.

Veer : Tabhi woh hume ghoor ke dekh rahe the.

Suhana : Haan! Par Nik... Well! He likes to keep some lackeys around. Wo GIU me apne chele bana ke rakha hua hai. Jis kaaran se uska yaha virodh utna nahi hota. Par Divya ka aisa nahi hai. She doesn't like boot licking...

Veer : In other words, Nik paisa fek yaha chele banaaye hue hai toh wahi aapki friend Divya wahi paise liye apni jebo me daal rahi hai!?

Suhana : Exactly!!!

Yaha Divya ne jese tese Nik ko manaaya toh maamla shaant hua aur Veer ke yaha hone se bhi ab koi dikkat nahi thi. Filhaal ke liye...

Nik samet baaki investigators bhi baithe hue the. Screen par ek ke baad ek graphic images aa rahi thi.

Qatl ki...

Aur qatl bhi kiska? Unke apne ek investigator ka...

Saamne khada Nik ne jab bolna shuru kiya, toh sab shaant ho gaya.

Kal!!! Kal hamaare crime investigations ke members me se ek bade hi mehanti investigator ne apni jaan kho dii.

Jaan khoyi nahi, usse bedardi aur badi hi kroorta se maara gaya.

Daniel hamaara khaas tha. Par jaate jaate apne antim palo me usne hamaare liye ek sandesha chorra hai. Hume kuch bataane ke liye.

Aur hum iski teh tak jaake Daniel ke hathiyaare ko saza dilwaa kar hi rahenge...

"YEEEESSSSSSSS!!!"

Sabhi ek saath waha par chillaaye. Nik ne jab kehna band kiya toh usne evidence Divya ke haatho se lete hue saamne sabhi ko dikhaaya.

Khaas kar uss paper ko...

Jisme Daniel ki hi likhawat me likha hua tha,


Heinous thoughts destroys the mind.
Often the glee tuns into, Unhappiness.

Sorrow remains but shall be forgotten. Emergence of a new beginning prevails.

Opulent, rich thoughts fills the mind once more.
Fend off the fiend this time.

Kindle the fire in yourself. Intensify it. Lure the evil out of it. Lecherous demons shall be punished.

Escape if you realize you cannot handle it.
Remember, there ain't a single one, if you do get caught...

Soul shall burn!!!

Aur uss parche me likhi gayi saari likhaawat peeche badi sii screen par ujaagar ho gayi.

Panne me jagah jagah khoon laga hua tha. Zaahir tha ki kitni hi jaldbaazi me Daniel ne likha hoga isse. Ek paheli thi. Jo kisi orr ishaara kar rahi thi.

Las Vegas ki harr guzarti raat ki tarah kal raat bhi, Daniel keval aur keval ek party me gaya tha apne jeevan ki rozzmarra busy life se thoda relaxation paane ke liye.

Par dikkat tab ho gayi jab woh...

Ussi hotel me ho rahi kisi aur party me ghus gaya. Ek aisi party jidhar usse kabhi nahi ghusna chaahiye tha.

Daniel akela tha. Uske saath koi aur uski pehchaan ka nahi tha. Party me harr vyakti aankho me mask lagaaye anjaan logo se baatein kar rahe the. Daniel ko kya pata tha ki uski itni choti si bhul uski jaan lene waali thi.

Jese hi wo uss party me ghusa...

Na jaane usne aisa kya dekha ya aisa kya suna ki usne forun hi office me team ko call lagaana chaaha. Wo Paseene se tar batar...

Lekin jese uske haatho se phone chhina liya gaya tha. Phone se keval Daniel ka hello hi sunn'ne ko mil paaya.

Shayad koi usse maarne ki koshish kar raha tha. Bhaago!!!!! Yahi khayaal aaya usse. Daniel jese chakma dene me kuch waqt ke liye toh qamyaab bhi ho gaya. Aur ussi beech usne ye likha.

Aur uske baad...

*Sppllluuuurrrtttt*

Subah uski laash hotel ke baahar dustbin me paayi gayi.

Police sahet investigators site ka muaayna lene pohuche par siwae Daniel ke khoon ke alaawa unhe aur kuch bhi haasil nahi hua.

Hotel me puch taach ki toh pata laga ki hotel me party me boht saare log aaye the. Aur jidhar Daniel ko maara gaya, waha koi bhi cctv camera maujood nahi tha.

Yaha tak ki... Footprints bhi saaf saaf ujaagar nahi ho paaye.

Evidence ke taur par kuch bhi nahi chorra tha hatyaare ne. Daniel ki maut chaaku ke vaar se hui thi. Filhaal toh blood ki jaanch aur Daniel ka post mortem hi kuch bata sakte the. Fir bhi eye witnesses ke liye khoj jaari thi.

Aur wo clue... Jisse Daniel ne likha tha. Zaahir hai wo clue hi tha.

Nik ne jab bolna band kiya toh woh baahar chala gaya. Tough cases me Divya aur Nik dono ko hi yaad kiya jaata tha. Bhale hi koi unhe pasand kare ya na kare. Akhir professionalism bhi koi cheez hoti thi.

Assistant Sheriff se khaas pehchaan bhi thi Nik ki. Jis kaaran se usse aur Divya ko aksar ye cases mil jaate the.

Nateeja? Paisa aur tarakki.

Suhana : Toh ye baat hai? Isliye tumne mujhe yaha bulaaya?

Divya : Hmm! Daniel pehla nahi hai Suhana.

Suhana : Tumhara matlab...!??

Divya : Yes! Daniel teesra shikaar hai. Pehle do investigators bhi maare gaye. Aur unke murderers ka pata bhi nahi chala abhi tak. Par iss baar Daniel... Wo khaas tha team ka. Aur ye ussi ki wajah se jo usne hamare liye ek note chorra hai... Mujhe pehle hi pata tha ye saare murders connected hai. Isliye... I called for your help.

Suhana : Hmm...

Divya : You will help me. Right?

Suhana : Hmm~

Divya (smiles) : Thanks!!!

Suhana : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer!?

Veer ki aankhein projector par hi jami hui thi. Uss likhawat par... Daniel ne jo likha tha..

Uska saral shabdo me matlab ye tha ki...

Daniel aagah kar raha tha. Mann ke bhre vichaaro se dur raho. Ye waha le jaate hai jaha kabhi nahi jaana chahiye. Aur baad me ye musibat me daal dete hai. Aisi musibat jis se aap baahar nahi aa sakte.

Aur jab aapko pata lag jaaye ki aap baahar nahi aa sakte. Toh bhaagiye iss se. Bhaagiye!!! Warna... Ye maut ka kaaran bante hai.

Kuch aisa hi likha hua tha ghuma fira ke Daniel ne.

Par inn sab ka uske murder se kya lena dena??

Divya khud zorr dete hue dekhne lagi jab kuch derr baad hi...

Uske poore badan ke ruye khade ho gaye aur wo apni jagah se chillaate hue uth khadi hui hai.

"Aaaaaaaaaaahh....."

Nik : Whaaatttt!!!?

Suhana : Divya?????

Veer : !!??

Ek ek ki nazar uske upar jamm gayi...

Aur wo haklaate hue fir boli,
"I-I got it... It was so easy!! But nooooo!!!!! Noo no no no no.... This is huge!!!!! It's a big problem... Ohhhhh goooodddd!!!!"

Divya jese paagal ho chali thi. Na jaane usne aisa kya dhundh liya tha Daniel ki likhawat me.

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Mumbai...
Evening ~ 6 : 24 PM

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Aasmaan se ek vimaan neeche utar airstrip par land kiya.

Andar se ek aurat aur ek naujavaan khubsoorat ladki baahar nikli.

Aur wo ek cab me sawaar ho gayi.

"Hum kidhar jaa rahe hai? Kuch toh kahiye!" Wo ladki kheejte hue puchi.

"Mene kaha na! Tum ek bhi sawaal nahi karogi."

"Par mujhe jaan'ne ka haq hai. Hum yaha kis se milne aaye hai? Aur kya karne?"

"Mein abhi nahi bata sakti."

"Par kyuuuuu? Aap aisa kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse!?"

Lekin uss aurat ne ek na suni. Cab ek hotel ke saamne ruki aur dono hi mahilaaye andar chali gayi.

Uss aurat ne receptionist ko kuch diya aur badle me kamre ki chaavi thaam wo ladki ke saath upar kamre ki orr chali gayi.

"Akhir kab tak aap mujhse chhupaogi?"

Ek baar fir ladki uchi awaaz me puchi,

"Ek baar me samajh me nahi aati kya Tej??? Mene kaha hai na. Mein nahi bata sakti abhi."

Jii haan! Ye Tej aur Bhavna hi thi.

*Thud*

Aur kamre ke hi andar Tej ko lock kar Bhavna baahar chal dii.

Gusse me aa kar Tej ne apna bag yu hi bistar par patka aur woh window khol kisi soch me doob gayi.

Mumbai ki ye mand mand hawa pata nahi kyu par... Usse ek apnepann ka ehsaas de rahi thi.

'I feel strange... Somewhat... Familiar!!'

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Wahi baahar idhar Bhavna ghanghor chinta me thi. Uske haath mobile ko thaame hue the aur zorr zorr se kaanp rahe the.

'That was it.... Yes!!! That was it... Mein galat ho hi nahi sakti. Meri aankhein chakma khaa hi nahi sakti. I definitely saw it. Aur yadi wo chori ka nahi hai then he is none other than...'

Sochte sochte ek sihran uske badan me machal gayi.

Aankh band kar ke bhi wo pendant ko maatr chhu kar pehchaan sakti thi. Toh dekhna to dur ki baat thi.

Usne fatafat ek call bhidaaya,

"Hello?"

Bhavna : Hello! Purvi!!!!!

Purvi : Haan? Bhavna? Kya tum ho?

Bhavna : Haan! Mein hi hu, Purvi! Bhavna!

Purvi : Oh my god!! Kaha se bol rahi ho tum? Kaha thi itne din? Ab yaad kiya mujhe?

Bhavna : Purvi! I'm sorry... Par unn sab ka samay nahi hai.

Purvi : H-Hey calm down you know-

Bhavna : I need you!!!!! Right NOW!!!!

Purvi : H-Huh???
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
I'm still not fuly recovered yet. Toh full potential se nahi likh paaya hu iss update ko. But like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Thodi paheliya, thodi mysteries, thoda romance aur dherr saara action aana shuru hoega ab. Sorry for the late update too.
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Update - 96 ~ Riddle
Ab tak...

Suhana : Hum acche dost hi hai. Par woh aisi hi hai. Aur lagta hai woh tum me interested hai. Wo koshish karegi tum se harr baat jaan'ne ki but you better stay silent okay?

Veer : Alright!

Suhana : Aur jitna ho sake uss se duri bana ke rakhna.

Veer : Hmm~

Suhana : Let's go now!!

Aur Divya ke hi peeche peeche Suhana sang Veer bhi chal diye. Apne suitcase ko kheechte hue Veer aage badha, uski nazre paini hokar Divya ki peeth par jam gayi.


Ab aage...

*Vrrrrrooooooooommmm*

Car Las Vegas ki makkhan jesi smooth roads par bhaag rahi thi. Divya car drive kar rahi thi, aur Veer-Suhana dono hi peeche baithe hue the.

Car ka interior dekh, Veer kaafi fascinated tha. Kya hi gazab ka interior tha. Adhbhut!



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Suhana ne bhi ye Divya ki car notice kii toh wo puch uthi,

Suhana : Ye kab lii tumne?

Divya (smiles) : Looks nice right? Ye mene kuch mahine pehle hi lii. Ek tough case solve ho chuka tha toh uski khushi me ye mene khareed lii. Do you like it?

Suhana : Hmm~

Divya : I can gift you one you know?

Suhana : No thanks!!!

Divya : Awww~ Hamesha ki tarah tumhara jawaab aaj bhi naa hi hai.

Veer surprised tha. Suhana ne ek car ka offer yu hi thukra diya? Kyu? Veer ne Suhana ko dekha toh woh jese samjhi ki Veer uss se kuch puchna chaah raha tha. Fir woh Veer ko samjhaate hue boli,

Suhana : Divya ek detective hai. Kaafi famous yaha par. Aur uske husband bhi. Dono hi popular hai crime studies me.

Par Veer ko toh pehle se hi ye pata tha. Usne Divya ko check jo kar liya tha. Fir bhi usne naatak karte hue haan me sarr hila diya. Divya se zyada Veer ko toh iss car me interest tha.

Veer : Ye kitne ki hogi?

Veer ne wese toh pehle hi system se car ko check kar liya tha. Lekin uske bio me price mentioned nahi tha. Jis kaaran se usse Suhana se ye sawaal puchna pada.

Suhana : Umm... I guess...

Suhana jawab de paati ki uss se pehle hi Divya ne unn dono ko mirror me dekh khud hi jawaab de diya,

Divya : Yadi tumhari Indian currency me convert kare toh, around 7-8 crore kii hai ye car. Veer!! Maybe uss se zyaada bhi haha~

Wo mirror se hi usse aankh maarte hue boli. Khaas kar uske naam ko thoda zorr deke pukaari aur sharaarti dhang se muskuraayi.

Veer unfazed tha. Iss nakli flirt ke aage wo jhuk jaaye aur mantra mugdh ho jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Bhale hi Divya khubsoorat thi par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki Veer harr sundar ladki ke saamne pighal jaaye.

Wo jaanta tha Divya ke status me kya likha hua tha. Jawaan ladko ke saath flirt karna aur unki feelings ke saath khelna uski aadat thi. Ek hobby. Behtar yahi tha ki uski befaaltu ki flirtings par dhyaan na diya jaaye.

Aur Veer ne wahi kiya. Jab usne Divya ki harqato par koi reaction na diya, toh Divya aur curious ho uthi. Uski muskaan aur fel gayi.

[Master~ Hum iss se bhi behtar car lenge future me. Don't worry!]

'Yes Pari!!! Definitely!!'

Suhana : Toh? Kaha chal rahe hai hum?

Divya : Mere ghar of course, aur kaha?

Suhana : Okay! Par tumne toh kaha tha ki serious issue hai.

Divya : Of course dear. Uske liye hume shaam ko nikalna hoga. Meeting hogi aaj. You have to be there. Isliye toh tumhe abhi ghar le jaa rahi hu. Acche se araam karna. Jetlag bhi ho raha hoga abhi.

Suhana : Fine~

Divya : Wese maan'na padega Veer. Waqai tum boht handsome ho. Mujhe laga nahi tha Suhana jab tumhe yaha leke aaegi toh mujhe itna bada surprise milega haha~

Veer : Aapko pata tha ki mein yaha aa raha hu?

Divya : Hahaha~ Pata tha? In fact, I was the one who told her to bring you along.

Veer : Whaaatttt?

Ab ye ek nayi news thi Veer ke liye. Divya ne hi Suhana ko kaha tha ki Veer ko yaha leke aaye?

Divya : Well yes! Suhana ko mera ek purana favour repay karna tha. Toh mene uss se ye karne ko kaha. Tumhe kya laga? Suhana ko ye favours ke saath khelne ki tricks kisne sikhaayi hai? Hahaha~

Veer : Whaaattttt!!!!?

Veer ko ab samajh aaya tha ki Suhana jo itne favours leti thi uss se. Wo asal me Divya ki hi den thi. Usse dekh ke hi Suhana ne ye seekha tha.

Suhana idhar apna muh chhipaaye hue thi. Uske gaal iss baar thode laal the.

Suhana : Stop it Divya...

Divya : Hahahaha~ Why now!? Dekha tumne Veer? She learned it from me. Well! Tumhari kaafi tareefe kari thi Suhana ne toh mene uss se yahi kaha tha ki bring Veer along with you. Mein bhi toh dekho kya khaas baat hai tum me? And you both are here now.

Veer khamosh reh gaya. Toh ye maajra tha. Suhana ke upar ateet me kabhi Divya ne koi favour kiya tha. Aur uske badle me aaj Suhana idhar aayi hui thi. Uss favour ko chukaane. Saath me Veer bhi lapete me tha.

'I see~'

Divya : Toh ab pata chala tumhe wo kyu meri car ka offer nahi le rahi? Hahahahaha~

Veer : Ohh!

Tohh ye baat thi. Yadi Suhana Divya ke haatho dii gayi car le leti, toh kahi na kahi ye bhi ek tarah se favours me hi gina jaata.

'Ohh! I see now!'

[This woman is so crafty Masterrr~]

Divya : Par Suhana dear. Sach me mein koi favour nahi kar rahi. I can gift you a same car like this you know.

Suhana : No! I don't need one.

Divya : Anyways!!! Veer!!! I'm not at all disappointed after seeing you now. You have definitely piqued my interest.

Usne kehte hue ek baar fir aankh maar apna nichla honth daato tale daba liya.

[This bitttttcchhhh~]

Suhana (frowns) : Divya...

Divya : Alright alright!! I won't snatch your Boyfriend Suhana. Calm down!!!

Suhana : Whaaaatttt? He's not my Boyfriend Divya. What are you talking about??? I'm already married. Tum jaanti ho. Don't joke like that...

Divya : Hey hey~ Calm down! Kya hua? I was just kidding okay?

Suhana kuch na boli. Par Veer ne ye zaroor notice kiya tha ki uske gaalo par halki laali chhaayi hui thi.

Aur fir car me ek shaanti chha gayi. Vegas ki uchi uchi buildings, wo tezz raftaar me aati jaati gaadiya, bade bade fly overs dekh Veer uss nazaare me kho gaya.



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Aur car kab Divya ke ghar ke baahar aa kar ruk gayi iska pata hi nahi chala. Samay yu beet gaya.

Divya : Okay~ Here we are...

Car se utar kar dekha toh Divya ka ghar kaafi bada aur aalishaan tha.



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Ghar ke theek saamne bagal se ek bada sa swimming pool bhi tha. Jagah jagah hare bhare ped paudhe aur sundarta badhaane ke liye kuch anokhe patthar bhi rakhe hue the.

Ek aisa ghar, jo ek baar dekhte hi pasand aa jaaye.

Divya : I hope tumhe pasand aaya hoga? Veer?

Veer : It's nice...

Divya : Well! Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~ Anyways! Come inside.

Andar aate hi Veer aur bhi dang reh gaya. Interior decor toh aur bhi khubsoorat tha.



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Veer : Kitne log rehte hai yaha?

Veer ko jawaab pata tha. Lekin fir bhi usse apne aap ko anjaan dikhaana tha.

Divya : Just me and my husband. Make yourselves comfortable. Mein coffee ready karti hu. You guys can take a bath and freshen up. Washroom is right there on the right. Fir lunch ki taiyaari karti hu.

Suhana : Mujhe pata hai already kaha hai washroom.

Divya (smiles) : Ohh! Of course dear~ Tum pehli baar thodi hi aa rahi ho. Mein toh Veer ko bata rahi thi. Fufu~

Uski paini nazar ek baar fir Veer ki aankho se pal bhar ke liye takraayi.

[Maaaastttteerrrr~ Don't look at her!!! Hmph~]

Veer Pari ki baat maan washroom me chal diya. Aur andar aate hi wo ek baar fir ghar ki luxury dekh mugdh reh gaya.



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Usse kuch derr pehle ke Divya ke bol yaad aa gaye, 'Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~'

'No wonder ye mehnga mila hoga. Really! Mujhe bhi ek ghar lena hai. Then, Bhabhi mein aur baaki hum sab uss waale me raha karenge.'

[Hmm hmm Master! Definitely!!! Master bathtub me bath loge aap?]

'Naah!'

30 ghante ke safar ke baad, usse zaahir tha ki ek behatreen shower ki zaroorat thi. Body odour aur sweat ko hataane ka sabse behtar upaay aur kya hi tha?

Shower ke neeche wo khade Pari se baato me lag gaya.

'Tumhe kya lagta hai Pari? Divya! Kya woh kuch chhupa rahi hai? Usne mujhe saath me laane ko kyu kaha Suhana se?'

[Don't talk about her Masteeerrr!!! I don't like that bitch. Hmph~ Aur usko aap nahi dekhoge ab. I don't like it.]

'Haha~ Ye tumhe kya ho gaya achanak se? Are you jealous?'

[I... I... Aaargghh!! Mene kaha na Massttteerrr!! Usse mat dekho. Aap mujhse baat kiya karo.]

'Alright Alright! Pari! Suno... Mere stats me intelligence 10 points se badha do aur baaki stats 20 points se.'

[As you wish Master. 900 points aapke use hoenge isme.]

'Go ahead!'

*Ding*

[All done Master.]

[Ye raha aapka full status.]


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'Good!!'

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Shower ke baad, Veer aur Suhana dono ne hi halka fulka khana khaane ke baad araam farmaaya. Jetlag se nijaat paane ke liye.

Aur sooraj dhalte hi wo dobaara se car me baith chal diye.

*Thud*

Car ka door band hua aur tezz kadmo ke saath Suhana, Divya aur Veer crime investigation ke ek office ke andar jaane lage.

Jagah jagah afra tafri ka mahaul tha. Veer ko aisa laga jese woh kisi stationary ki factory me ghus gaya tha, kyuki siwae panno ki gandh ke alawa waha aur koi gandh samajh me hi nahi aa rahi thi.

Chaaro orr nazre ghumaate hue wo peeche peeche hi chalta raha jab achanak se...

'Huh!!???'

Ek ajeeb sii feeling usse mehsoos hui. Badan me rongte khade ho gaye. Usse aisa laga jese usse koi dekh raha tha, ghoor ke.

'There's something wrong.'

Andar aate hi Divya ne ek ek jodi gloves fekte hue dono Suhana aur Veer ko diye. Jo dono ne hi pehen liye.

Uske baad ek jawaan sa ladka daudate bhaagte hue aaya, wo haatho me ek plastic ki transparent thaili liye hue tha.

Divya : Evidence?

Ladka : Yes ma'am!

Divya : Okay! You can leave now!

Aur wo chala gaya.

Veer ne notice kiya ki aas paas ke log unhe kuch zyaada hi acchi nazro se nahi dekh rahe the.

Packet ke andar evidence maujood tha. Kisi crime ka...

Suhana : This...

Divya : Issi ke liye tumhe yaha bulaaya hai.

Veer : Yaha pe koi object kyu nahi kar raha? Mein ye mehsoos kar sakta hu ki ye log mujhe yaha paa kar khush nahi hai. Fir bhi koi kuch keh nahi raha.

Divya : Kyuki mein khadi hu tumhare saath. Veer! Suhana ek prakaar se meri assistant hai. Aisa samajh lo ki usse yaha ki thodi boht access mili hui hai.

Veer : And what about me?

Uske sawaal par Divya usse apna sarr upar kar dekhi.



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Divya : Kaha na... Tum mere saath khade ho. They won't do anything.

Suhana : Mujhe ye batao baat kya hai!? Jaldi!!!

Aur fir Divya ne evidence ko baahar nikaala.

Andar khoon se sana ek pen tha. Ek kaagaz ka tukda aur uss kaagaz ke tukde par kuch likha hua tha.

Suhana : Mein kuch samjhi nahi.

Divya Suhana ko kuch samjha paati ki tabhi,

"You are not allowed here brat!!!"

Ek kathor awaaz unke peeche se aayi. Palat ke dekha toh Divya ka pati, Nicholas khada hua tha.

White shirt ke upar ek long coat daale, aur sarr par typical detective waali cap pehen wo waha khada unhe ghoor ke dekh raha tha. Khaas kar Veer ko.

Divya (khade hote hue) : Nik!!!

Nicholas : Tell him to get lost. Only Sonny babe can stay...

Suhana : I told you not to call me by that name ever again...

Pal bhar me teeno ek dusre ke upar chadh pade. Jaha Nicholas Veer ke yaha hone se niraash tha toh wahi Divya uske iss ravaiyye se gussa thi aur wahi Suhana isliye tilmila uthi kyuki Nik ne usse Sonny kehke pukaar diya.

'Lagta hai Suhana ka past inn dono se juda hua hai.'

[Yes master!!!]

Mauka dekh ke Suhana ne confused Veer ki orr jhukte hue usse samjhaaya,

Suhana : Divya ek personal detective hai Veer. Personal detectives general cases me apni hastakshep nahi karte. Inhe paise zyaada milte hai. Well... Ek prakaar se ye dalaal jese hote hai. Isliye Divya ke paas itna paisa hai.

Veer : I see...

Suhana : Nik bhi ek personal detective hai. Aur isliye yaha ki general investigation unit hume acche se nahi leti kabhi. Kyuki harr tough cases ko aksar hum log solve kar dete hai. Jiske chalte GIU haath par haath dhare baithe reh jaate hai.

Veer : Tabhi woh hume ghoor ke dekh rahe the.

Suhana : Haan! Par Nik... Well! He likes to keep some lackeys around. Wo GIU me apne chele bana ke rakha hua hai. Jis kaaran se uska yaha virodh utna nahi hota. Par Divya ka aisa nahi hai. She doesn't like boot licking...

Veer : In other words, Nik paisa fek yaha chele banaaye hue hai toh wahi aapki friend Divya wahi paise liye apni jebo me daal rahi hai!?

Suhana : Exactly!!!

Yaha Divya ne jese tese Nik ko manaaya toh maamla shaant hua aur Veer ke yaha hone se bhi ab koi dikkat nahi thi. Filhaal ke liye...

Nik samet baaki investigators bhi baithe hue the. Screen par ek ke baad ek graphic images aa rahi thi.

Qatl ki...

Aur qatl bhi kiska? Unke apne ek investigator ka...

Saamne khada Nik ne jab bolna shuru kiya, toh sab shaant ho gaya.

Kal!!! Kal hamaare crime investigations ke members me se ek bade hi mehanti investigator ne apni jaan kho dii.

Jaan khoyi nahi, usse bedardi aur badi hi kroorta se maara gaya.

Daniel hamaara khaas tha. Par jaate jaate apne antim palo me usne hamaare liye ek sandesha chorra hai. Hume kuch bataane ke liye.

Aur hum iski teh tak jaake Daniel ke hathiyaare ko saza dilwaa kar hi rahenge...

"YEEEESSSSSSSS!!!"

Sabhi ek saath waha par chillaaye. Nik ne jab kehna band kiya toh usne evidence Divya ke haatho se lete hue saamne sabhi ko dikhaaya.

Khaas kar uss paper ko...

Jisme Daniel ki hi likhawat me likha hua tha,


Heinous thoughts destroys the mind.
Often the glee tuns into, Unhappiness.

Sorrow remains but shall be forgotten. Emergence of a new beginning prevails.

Opulent, rich thoughts fills the mind once more.
Fend off the fiend this time.

Kindle the fire in yourself. Intensify it. Lure the evil out of it. Lecherous demons shall be punished.

Escape if you realize you cannot handle it.
Remember, there ain't a single one, if you do get caught...

Soul shall burn!!!

Aur uss parche me likhi gayi saari likhaawat peeche badi sii screen par ujaagar ho gayi.

Panne me jagah jagah khoon laga hua tha. Zaahir tha ki kitni hi jaldbaazi me Daniel ne likha hoga isse. Ek paheli thi. Jo kisi orr ishaara kar rahi thi.

Las Vegas ki harr guzarti raat ki tarah kal raat bhi, Daniel keval aur keval ek party me gaya tha apne jeevan ki rozzmarra busy life se thoda relaxation paane ke liye.

Par dikkat tab ho gayi jab woh...

Ussi hotel me ho rahi kisi aur party me ghus gaya. Ek aisi party jidhar usse kabhi nahi ghusna chaahiye tha.

Daniel akela tha. Uske saath koi aur uski pehchaan ka nahi tha. Party me harr vyakti aankho me mask lagaaye anjaan logo se baatein kar rahe the. Daniel ko kya pata tha ki uski itni choti si bhul uski jaan lene waali thi.

Jese hi wo uss party me ghusa...

Na jaane usne aisa kya dekha ya aisa kya suna ki usne forun hi office me team ko call lagaana chaaha. Wo Paseene se tar batar...

Lekin jese uske haatho se phone chhina liya gaya tha. Phone se keval Daniel ka hello hi sunn'ne ko mil paaya.

Shayad koi usse maarne ki koshish kar raha tha. Bhaago!!!!! Yahi khayaal aaya usse. Daniel jese chakma dene me kuch waqt ke liye toh qamyaab bhi ho gaya. Aur ussi beech usne ye likha.

Aur uske baad...

*Sppllluuuurrrtttt*

Subah uski laash hotel ke baahar dustbin me paayi gayi.

Police sahet investigators site ka muaayna lene pohuche par siwae Daniel ke khoon ke alaawa unhe aur kuch bhi haasil nahi hua.

Hotel me puch taach ki toh pata laga ki hotel me party me boht saare log aaye the. Aur jidhar Daniel ko maara gaya, waha koi bhi cctv camera maujood nahi tha.

Yaha tak ki... Footprints bhi saaf saaf ujaagar nahi ho paaye.

Evidence ke taur par kuch bhi nahi chorra tha hatyaare ne. Daniel ki maut chaaku ke vaar se hui thi. Filhaal toh blood ki jaanch aur Daniel ka post mortem hi kuch bata sakte the. Fir bhi eye witnesses ke liye khoj jaari thi.

Aur wo clue... Jisse Daniel ne likha tha. Zaahir hai wo clue hi tha.

Nik ne jab bolna band kiya toh woh baahar chala gaya. Tough cases me Divya aur Nik dono ko hi yaad kiya jaata tha. Bhale hi koi unhe pasand kare ya na kare. Akhir professionalism bhi koi cheez hoti thi.

Assistant Sheriff se khaas pehchaan bhi thi Nik ki. Jis kaaran se usse aur Divya ko aksar ye cases mil jaate the.

Nateeja? Paisa aur tarakki.

Suhana : Toh ye baat hai? Isliye tumne mujhe yaha bulaaya?

Divya : Hmm! Daniel pehla nahi hai Suhana.

Suhana : Tumhara matlab...!??

Divya : Yes! Daniel teesra shikaar hai. Pehle do investigators bhi maare gaye. Aur unke murderers ka pata bhi nahi chala abhi tak. Par iss baar Daniel... Wo khaas tha team ka. Aur ye ussi ki wajah se jo usne hamare liye ek note chorra hai... Mujhe pehle hi pata tha ye saare murders connected hai. Isliye... I called for your help.

Suhana : Hmm...

Divya : You will help me. Right?

Suhana : Hmm~

Divya (smiles) : Thanks!!!

Suhana : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer!?

Veer ki aankhein projector par hi jami hui thi. Uss likhawat par... Daniel ne jo likha tha..

Uska saral shabdo me matlab ye tha ki...

Daniel aagah kar raha tha. Mann ke bhre vichaaro se dur raho. Ye waha le jaate hai jaha kabhi nahi jaana chahiye. Aur baad me ye musibat me daal dete hai. Aisi musibat jis se aap baahar nahi aa sakte.

Aur jab aapko pata lag jaaye ki aap baahar nahi aa sakte. Toh bhaagiye iss se. Bhaagiye!!! Warna... Ye maut ka kaaran bante hai.

Kuch aisa hi likha hua tha ghuma fira ke Daniel ne.

Par inn sab ka uske murder se kya lena dena??

Divya khud zorr dete hue dekhne lagi jab kuch derr baad hi...

Uske poore badan ke ruye khade ho gaye aur wo apni jagah se chillaate hue uth khadi hui hai.

"Aaaaaaaaaaahh....."

Nik : Whaaatttt!!!?

Suhana : Divya?????

Veer : !!??

Ek ek ki nazar uske upar jamm gayi...

Aur wo haklaate hue fir boli,
"I-I got it... It was so easy!! But nooooo!!!!! Noo no no no no.... This is huge!!!!! It's a big problem... Ohhhhh goooodddd!!!!"

Divya jese paagal ho chali thi. Na jaane usne aisa kya dhundh liya tha Daniel ki likhawat me.

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Mumbai...
Evening ~ 6 : 24 PM

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Aasmaan se ek vimaan neeche utar airstrip par land kiya.

Andar se ek aurat aur ek naujavaan khubsoorat ladki baahar nikli.

Aur wo ek cab me sawaar ho gayi.

"Hum kidhar jaa rahe hai? Kuch toh kahiye!" Wo ladki kheejte hue puchi.

"Mene kaha na! Tum ek bhi sawaal nahi karogi."

"Par mujhe jaan'ne ka haq hai. Hum yaha kis se milne aaye hai? Aur kya karne?"

"Mein abhi nahi bata sakti."

"Par kyuuuuu? Aap aisa kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse!?"

Lekin uss aurat ne ek na suni. Cab ek hotel ke saamne ruki aur dono hi mahilaaye andar chali gayi.

Uss aurat ne receptionist ko kuch diya aur badle me kamre ki chaavi thaam wo ladki ke saath upar kamre ki orr chali gayi.

"Akhir kab tak aap mujhse chhupaogi?"

Ek baar fir ladki uchi awaaz me puchi,

"Ek baar me samajh me nahi aati kya Tej??? Mene kaha hai na. Mein nahi bata sakti abhi."

Jii haan! Ye Tej aur Bhavna hi thi.

*Thud*

Aur kamre ke hi andar Tej ko lock kar Bhavna baahar chal dii.

Gusse me aa kar Tej ne apna bag yu hi bistar par patka aur woh window khol kisi soch me doob gayi.

Mumbai ki ye mand mand hawa pata nahi kyu par... Usse ek apnepann ka ehsaas de rahi thi.

'I feel strange... Somewhat... Familiar!!'

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Wahi baahar idhar Bhavna ghanghor chinta me thi. Uske haath mobile ko thaame hue the aur zorr zorr se kaanp rahe the.

'That was it.... Yes!!! That was it... Mein galat ho hi nahi sakti. Meri aankhein chakma khaa hi nahi sakti. I definitely saw it. Aur yadi wo chori ka nahi hai then he is none other than...'

Sochte sochte ek sihran uske badan me machal gayi.

Aankh band kar ke bhi wo pendant ko maatr chhu kar pehchaan sakti thi. Toh dekhna to dur ki baat thi.

Usne fatafat ek call bhidaaya,

"Hello?"

Bhavna : Hello! Purvi!!!!!

Purvi : Haan? Bhavna? Kya tum ho?

Bhavna : Haan! Mein hi hu, Purvi! Bhavna!

Purvi : Oh my god!! Kaha se bol rahi ho tum? Kaha thi itne din? Ab yaad kiya mujhe?

Bhavna : Purvi! I'm sorry... Par unn sab ka samay nahi hai.

Purvi : H-Hey calm down you know-

Bhavna : I need you!!!!! Right NOW!!!!

Purvi : H-Huh???
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
I'm still not fuly recovered yet. Toh full potential se nahi likh paaya hu iss update ko. But like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Thodi paheliya, thodi mysteries, thoda romance aur dherr saara action aana shuru hoega ab. Sorry for the late update too.
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Dhanyavaad!
साली दिव्या तो एकदम्मे चूत का खिलाडी लगती है बे, अपने वीर को ऐसे ताड़ रही थी जैसे... एक प्यासी औरत अपने भ्रतार के जोशीले और कठीले जिश्म को निहारती है....
साली उस झांट के बाल को अभी वीर के किस्से के बारे मे पता नही है, वरना एक सांढ को छेड़ने की इतनी बड़ी गलती वो कतयी नही करती ।

सुहाना भले ही वीर या फ़िर किसी और के सामने ये बाते ज़ाहिर नहीं होने देना चाहती है की उसे भी वीर के कारनामे जानकर बहुत खुशी मिलती है, जैसे की दिव्या ने बताया की सुहाना अक्सर वीर की कसीदे मे तारीफ के पुल बांधा करती थी उसके सामने।

वैसे भले ही सुहाना किसी की सुहागन है, पर जिस तरह से उसकी सुंदरता का वर्णन सुरुआत से ही वोल्फी भाई करते आरहे है, मेरी दिली तमन्ना बढ़ गयी है की मै सुहाना और वीर के मिलन को पढ़ने बाले पाठको मे अपना नाम भी देखू ।
काश वो दिन जल्दी आये जब सुहाना भी वीर को अपना दे देगी.... (मेरे कहने का मतलब हाथ से है ना की चूत से ... हमेशा लोडे से सोचोगे तो यही सब थाउट दिमाग मे
आयेंगे ना... कभी दिमाग भी लगा लिया करो)


भावना और तेज़.... बंबई की व्यस्त धरती पे.... जहाँ भावना को ये पक्का करना है की जो लड़का (veer) उससे एजेप्त मे खोज़ के समय मिला था, वो ही उसका बेटा है या नहीं , क्योंकि वीर के पास वोही चीज़े मौजूद थी जो बचपन मे उसके बेटे के पास था ।

वोही तेज़ को समझ नही आरहा है की आखिर ऐसा क्या हो गया की उसकी माँ ऐसे बिना कोई प्लान बनाये, मुम्बई आगयी थी । और कुछ बता भी नही रहे है,

बेहद ही रोचक और रोमांचक अंश था वोल्फ़ी भाई ।
धन्यवाद🙏
 

Paraoh11

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If I remember correctly, the updates when Suhana took Veer with her for a party in Delhi, so that he can accompany Sonia... Right after that Update, somehow it started looking like Suhana was hiding something... Suhana, beshak wo ek bohot badi company ki member hai ya kahun ki maalkin hai, afterall usi ke pita ki company hai wo... But apart from that, it seemed to be like Suhana was something bigger and more different than that... Slogan ke case mein jis tarah usne Veer ki help ki, she seemed to be familiar with using guns, she handled the police too... It was clear that Suhana had connections & apart from that she had a deep past too, past which was dark maybe... :hmm2:

Aur is update ke baad wo doubt kaafi pukhta ho gaya hai... Suhana, Divya ki ek call par hi Las Vegas jaane ko taiyar ho gayi thi and now we know ki wo Veer ko apne saath, Divya ke hi kehne par lekar gayi hai... The reason is a favour Divya did on Suhana in the past... Suhana ko pata tha ki yadi Divya ne use itni urgently bulaya hai to problem bohot badi hogi, means it would be risky to go there... Still, wo gayi, ye kewal ek hi baat ki taraf ishara karta hai ki Suhana par Divya dwara ki gayi wo favour, mamooli nahi thi... :think:

Well, kaafi pehle se ye point clear tha ki Suhana has definitely killed someone in her past... I guess, jab wo teddy ke saath masti kar rahi thi, aur Veer use dekhkar ghabra gaya tha (:shy:), usi update ke aas – paas Veer ne Suhana se seedhe ye baat kahi thi, that he has understood that Suhana has killed someone earlier... And abhi tak ki kahani se main yahi samjha hoon, ki wo shakhs Pushkar tha, Sonia ka childhood friend... Is baare mein shayad pehle kabhi maine apne review mein kaafi baatein likhi bhi thi... And, now I think ki jo favour Divya ne Suhana par kiya tha, wo use Pushkar waale maamle mein help karne se juda hoga (assuming she killed Pushkar)... Means, Divya, being a skilled and experienced detective would've helped Suhana get out of that matter, by removing all the proofs & clues out there, and finally they would've made Pushkar 's murder look like a suicide, as Sonia mentioned... :dontknow:

Khair, ye raaz to aage chalkar hi khulega, par mera yahi maan na hai ki ya to Pushkar ka intention Sonia ko harm karne ka raha hoga, ya fir Suhana ne unintentionally use maar diya hoga, other than these two I don't think there could've been any other reason for the same... :dazed: Iske atirikt mujhe aur koyi bada maamla nahi dikhta jiske liye ki gayi favour ke badle Suhana wahaan jaane ko taiyaar ho gayi ho... Chahe Divya aur Suhana langotiya saheliyan :D kyon na hon but still hamari Suhana madam ko jitna hum samjhe hain, wo itni bhi pyaari mahila nahin hain ki yunhi dariya dilli dikha kar uski sahayta ko pahunch jaayen :laugh:...

Beharhal, Divya ka character bhi dheere – dheere behtar tareeke se samajh aane laga hai... Usko check karte waqt hi samajh aa gaya tha ki Veer jaise ladkon ke liye uske dil mein kitna prem, kitna apnapan hai :D:... But after reading this update, it's clear that she is seriously intelligent & smart... Her antics & words points towards this only... Veer ko wahaan bulaane ke pichhe Divya ki kya mansha thi, ye to aage hi pata chalega... But I think, Slogan ki maut aur us se pehle Aatish ka safaya (If Divya knows about Aatish's incident, I think she knows), ye do mukhya kaaran ho sakte hain Divya ke use wahaan buland ke liye... Plus, I think Suhana se baat cheet ke dauraan usne Suhana ki Veer se closeness ko bhi observe kar liya hoga, aur isiliye uska sach jaan ne ke liye usne donon ko saath mein wahaan bulaya ho... Abhi tak to wo, isi prakar ki praani lagi hai, typical 30-35 year old woman with a more notorious brain (no disrespect though) :evillaugh:...

Idhar, saamne aa gaya hai ki asal mein Divya ke saath wahaan ho kya raha hai... Divya aur Nicholas ke teen investigators ki maut ho chuki hai & the latest one is Daniel... Daniel ne party mein kuchh aisa suna aur dekha jiski keemat use apni jaan dekar chukani padi... A really really important & big planning, I think... Kuchh bada hone waala hai, aur uski jaankari Daniel ko mil gayi, aur nateeja hamare saamne hai... Kya seedha target Divya-Nicholas hain, un murderer/murderers ka? Ya fir unke raaste ki rukavat bani huyi hai in donon ki agency, and isi liye donon unke nishane par hain..? :confused: Btw. Jo note usne evidence ke taur par chhoda tha...


Kya hai ye House Of Killers!!?? Koyi sangathan? Kisi operation/plan ka naam? Par jo kuchh bhi hai, Divya ko us baare mein jaankari hai... She cracked the puzzle I think, aur uske baad jo shabd usne kahe, wo isi aur ishara karte hain ki nischit hi khatra bohot bada hai... Lagta yahi hai ke abhi to bas laashein girna shuru hi huyin hain, abhi bohot sa raktpaat hona baaki hai... And most importantly, the brain behind all this.. I guess, we're really not ready for what's coming, as you said... :eyes2:

Nicholas ka Suhana ko Sonny kehkar pukarna aur uspar uska reaction, saaf hai ki teenon ek – doosre ko kaafi pehle se jaante hain... Kuchh hi der ke liye padha hai abhi humne Nicholas ke baare mein, and it's too early to make an opinion about him... Par fir bhi, lag to wo so and so hi raha hai, it's possible ki wo black sheep nikle, aage chalkar... :huh:

Beharhal, Veer ne apne stats increase kar liye hain... 20 points in the appearance, another reason for Divya to do what she loves to do... Suhana ka reaction bhi dekhne laayak hoga next day... Intelligence mein 10 aur points add karna ek smart move hai filhal ki situation mein... Lagbhag 4,000 points baaki hain Veer ke paas, looks like ke is trip par ek aadhi nayi skill bhi purchase karni pad sakti hai use... Status mein Shweta aur Bhumika ki favourability mein aaya rise highlight raha... Ragini ka aankda bhi 90 ko paar kar chuka hai & finally, Nidhi's number is on a constant rise too...

Pari ak behaviour is update mein, I hope uska koyi human form na ho... Anyatha.. :rip:Veer!! Har 5 minute mein personality badalne waali ladki ko kaise sambhalega Veer, ye sabse bada sawaal hai, yadi Pari ki human form huyi to... Ek aur personality bhi thi shayad Pari ki jo is waali ke similar thi... Par uske comparison mein ye waali thodi aur intensify ho gayi hai... So, I guess ki Pari ki personalities Intensify hokar repeat hoti hain, kuchh particular level ups ke baad..? :think:

Bhavana & Tejal are back in Mumbai, Bhavana ke mann mein jo doubt chhodkar aaya tha Veer, wo doubt use waapis Mumbai kheench hi laaya... Kya hoga, jab Bhavana ka shakh yakeen mein badal jaayega, taking into note ki possible hai us realisation ke waqt Veer Vegas mein hi ho... Brijesh and Family ka koyi sadsya yadi Bhavana se takraya, tab kya hoga... And important one is Tejal, use Mumbai ki hawa familiar lag rahi hai, aur lage bhi kyon na... She knows that she has a brother but jab use pata chalega ki Egypt mein aaya Vikram hi uska bhai Veer tha, jab use pata chalega ki uski Maa ke Mumbai aane ki wajah wahi hai,tab uski pratikriya dekhne laayak rahegi... As you mentioned in the end, a bunch of exciting things are waiting for the readers in the coming updates... Btw. Who's that Purvi..? Bhavna's good old friend...

Again, it was a wonderful update, exactly what we're used to... The lines, in the form of a riddle by Daniel, you did a great job there, definitely, except that House Of Killers, acronym, there's some other meaning too hidden in the lines... As far as I've understood the lines, maybe Daniel was pointing towards a black sheep too... Nicholas!!?? Maybe I'm wrong but I think, The lines meant that happiness might turn into sorrow but one should get rid of that sorrow and move ahead {Related to Divya & Nicholas (:confused:)}... Maybe he's pointing towards finding and eliminating the evil inside, or to be exact within them in the form of a Vibhishan..? But one thing is for sure, the opponents are really strong in strength as well as in number... Well, let's see what happens next...

Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Bhai ji aisa review padh kar writer’s chest will become breast (with pride) 🤣👌🏽

Astute observation sirji 👌🏽

Aur writer Ji agar bhaisaab ka review kuch aur lamba hota to word count mein update jitna hi ho jaata!!! 🤣🎩
 

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Update - 96 ~ Riddle
Ab tak...

Suhana : Hum acche dost hi hai. Par woh aisi hi hai. Aur lagta hai woh tum me interested hai. Wo koshish karegi tum se harr baat jaan'ne ki but you better stay silent okay?

Veer : Alright!

Suhana : Aur jitna ho sake uss se duri bana ke rakhna.

Veer : Hmm~

Suhana : Let's go now!!

Aur Divya ke hi peeche peeche Suhana sang Veer bhi chal diye. Apne suitcase ko kheechte hue Veer aage badha, uski nazre paini hokar Divya ki peeth par jam gayi.


Ab aage...

*Vrrrrrooooooooommmm*

Car Las Vegas ki makkhan jesi smooth roads par bhaag rahi thi. Divya car drive kar rahi thi, aur Veer-Suhana dono hi peeche baithe hue the.

Car ka interior dekh, Veer kaafi fascinated tha. Kya hi gazab ka interior tha. Adhbhut!



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Suhana ne bhi ye Divya ki car notice kii toh wo puch uthi,

Suhana : Ye kab lii tumne?

Divya (smiles) : Looks nice right? Ye mene kuch mahine pehle hi lii. Ek tough case solve ho chuka tha toh uski khushi me ye mene khareed lii. Do you like it?

Suhana : Hmm~

Divya : I can gift you one you know?

Suhana : No thanks!!!

Divya : Awww~ Hamesha ki tarah tumhara jawaab aaj bhi naa hi hai.

Veer surprised tha. Suhana ne ek car ka offer yu hi thukra diya? Kyu? Veer ne Suhana ko dekha toh woh jese samjhi ki Veer uss se kuch puchna chaah raha tha. Fir woh Veer ko samjhaate hue boli,

Suhana : Divya ek detective hai. Kaafi famous yaha par. Aur uske husband bhi. Dono hi popular hai crime studies me.

Par Veer ko toh pehle se hi ye pata tha. Usne Divya ko check jo kar liya tha. Fir bhi usne naatak karte hue haan me sarr hila diya. Divya se zyada Veer ko toh iss car me interest tha.

Veer : Ye kitne ki hogi?

Veer ne wese toh pehle hi system se car ko check kar liya tha. Lekin uske bio me price mentioned nahi tha. Jis kaaran se usse Suhana se ye sawaal puchna pada.

Suhana : Umm... I guess...

Suhana jawab de paati ki uss se pehle hi Divya ne unn dono ko mirror me dekh khud hi jawaab de diya,

Divya : Yadi tumhari Indian currency me convert kare toh, around 7-8 crore kii hai ye car. Veer!! Maybe uss se zyaada bhi haha~

Wo mirror se hi usse aankh maarte hue boli. Khaas kar uske naam ko thoda zorr deke pukaari aur sharaarti dhang se muskuraayi.

Veer unfazed tha. Iss nakli flirt ke aage wo jhuk jaaye aur mantra mugdh ho jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Bhale hi Divya khubsoorat thi par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki Veer harr sundar ladki ke saamne pighal jaaye.

Wo jaanta tha Divya ke status me kya likha hua tha. Jawaan ladko ke saath flirt karna aur unki feelings ke saath khelna uski aadat thi. Ek hobby. Behtar yahi tha ki uski befaaltu ki flirtings par dhyaan na diya jaaye.

Aur Veer ne wahi kiya. Jab usne Divya ki harqato par koi reaction na diya, toh Divya aur curious ho uthi. Uski muskaan aur fel gayi.

[Master~ Hum iss se bhi behtar car lenge future me. Don't worry!]

'Yes Pari!!! Definitely!!'

Suhana : Toh? Kaha chal rahe hai hum?

Divya : Mere ghar of course, aur kaha?

Suhana : Okay! Par tumne toh kaha tha ki serious issue hai.

Divya : Of course dear. Uske liye hume shaam ko nikalna hoga. Meeting hogi aaj. You have to be there. Isliye toh tumhe abhi ghar le jaa rahi hu. Acche se araam karna. Jetlag bhi ho raha hoga abhi.

Suhana : Fine~

Divya : Wese maan'na padega Veer. Waqai tum boht handsome ho. Mujhe laga nahi tha Suhana jab tumhe yaha leke aaegi toh mujhe itna bada surprise milega haha~

Veer : Aapko pata tha ki mein yaha aa raha hu?

Divya : Hahaha~ Pata tha? In fact, I was the one who told her to bring you along.

Veer : Whaaatttt?

Ab ye ek nayi news thi Veer ke liye. Divya ne hi Suhana ko kaha tha ki Veer ko yaha leke aaye?

Divya : Well yes! Suhana ko mera ek purana favour repay karna tha. Toh mene uss se ye karne ko kaha. Tumhe kya laga? Suhana ko ye favours ke saath khelne ki tricks kisne sikhaayi hai? Hahaha~

Veer : Whaaattttt!!!!?

Veer ko ab samajh aaya tha ki Suhana jo itne favours leti thi uss se. Wo asal me Divya ki hi den thi. Usse dekh ke hi Suhana ne ye seekha tha.

Suhana idhar apna muh chhipaaye hue thi. Uske gaal iss baar thode laal the.

Suhana : Stop it Divya...

Divya : Hahahaha~ Why now!? Dekha tumne Veer? She learned it from me. Well! Tumhari kaafi tareefe kari thi Suhana ne toh mene uss se yahi kaha tha ki bring Veer along with you. Mein bhi toh dekho kya khaas baat hai tum me? And you both are here now.

Veer khamosh reh gaya. Toh ye maajra tha. Suhana ke upar ateet me kabhi Divya ne koi favour kiya tha. Aur uske badle me aaj Suhana idhar aayi hui thi. Uss favour ko chukaane. Saath me Veer bhi lapete me tha.

'I see~'

Divya : Toh ab pata chala tumhe wo kyu meri car ka offer nahi le rahi? Hahahahaha~

Veer : Ohh!

Tohh ye baat thi. Yadi Suhana Divya ke haatho dii gayi car le leti, toh kahi na kahi ye bhi ek tarah se favours me hi gina jaata.

'Ohh! I see now!'

[This woman is so crafty Masterrr~]

Divya : Par Suhana dear. Sach me mein koi favour nahi kar rahi. I can gift you a same car like this you know.

Suhana : No! I don't need one.

Divya : Anyways!!! Veer!!! I'm not at all disappointed after seeing you now. You have definitely piqued my interest.

Usne kehte hue ek baar fir aankh maar apna nichla honth daato tale daba liya.

[This bitttttcchhhh~]

Suhana (frowns) : Divya...

Divya : Alright alright!! I won't snatch your Boyfriend Suhana. Calm down!!!

Suhana : Whaaaatttt? He's not my Boyfriend Divya. What are you talking about??? I'm already married. Tum jaanti ho. Don't joke like that...

Divya : Hey hey~ Calm down! Kya hua? I was just kidding okay?

Suhana kuch na boli. Par Veer ne ye zaroor notice kiya tha ki uske gaalo par halki laali chhaayi hui thi.

Aur fir car me ek shaanti chha gayi. Vegas ki uchi uchi buildings, wo tezz raftaar me aati jaati gaadiya, bade bade fly overs dekh Veer uss nazaare me kho gaya.



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Aur car kab Divya ke ghar ke baahar aa kar ruk gayi iska pata hi nahi chala. Samay yu beet gaya.

Divya : Okay~ Here we are...

Car se utar kar dekha toh Divya ka ghar kaafi bada aur aalishaan tha.



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Ghar ke theek saamne bagal se ek bada sa swimming pool bhi tha. Jagah jagah hare bhare ped paudhe aur sundarta badhaane ke liye kuch anokhe patthar bhi rakhe hue the.

Ek aisa ghar, jo ek baar dekhte hi pasand aa jaaye.

Divya : I hope tumhe pasand aaya hoga? Veer?

Veer : It's nice...

Divya : Well! Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~ Anyways! Come inside.

Andar aate hi Veer aur bhi dang reh gaya. Interior decor toh aur bhi khubsoorat tha.



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Veer : Kitne log rehte hai yaha?

Veer ko jawaab pata tha. Lekin fir bhi usse apne aap ko anjaan dikhaana tha.

Divya : Just me and my husband. Make yourselves comfortable. Mein coffee ready karti hu. You guys can take a bath and freshen up. Washroom is right there on the right. Fir lunch ki taiyaari karti hu.

Suhana : Mujhe pata hai already kaha hai washroom.

Divya (smiles) : Ohh! Of course dear~ Tum pehli baar thodi hi aa rahi ho. Mein toh Veer ko bata rahi thi. Fufu~

Uski paini nazar ek baar fir Veer ki aankho se pal bhar ke liye takraayi.

[Maaaastttteerrrr~ Don't look at her!!! Hmph~]

Veer Pari ki baat maan washroom me chal diya. Aur andar aate hi wo ek baar fir ghar ki luxury dekh mugdh reh gaya.



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Usse kuch derr pehle ke Divya ke bol yaad aa gaye, 'Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~'

'No wonder ye mehnga mila hoga. Really! Mujhe bhi ek ghar lena hai. Then, Bhabhi mein aur baaki hum sab uss waale me raha karenge.'

[Hmm hmm Master! Definitely!!! Master bathtub me bath loge aap?]

'Naah!'

30 ghante ke safar ke baad, usse zaahir tha ki ek behatreen shower ki zaroorat thi. Body odour aur sweat ko hataane ka sabse behtar upaay aur kya hi tha?

Shower ke neeche wo khade Pari se baato me lag gaya.

'Tumhe kya lagta hai Pari? Divya! Kya woh kuch chhupa rahi hai? Usne mujhe saath me laane ko kyu kaha Suhana se?'

[Don't talk about her Masteeerrr!!! I don't like that bitch. Hmph~ Aur usko aap nahi dekhoge ab. I don't like it.]

'Haha~ Ye tumhe kya ho gaya achanak se? Are you jealous?'

[I... I... Aaargghh!! Mene kaha na Massttteerrr!! Usse mat dekho. Aap mujhse baat kiya karo.]

'Alright Alright! Pari! Suno... Mere stats me intelligence 10 points se badha do aur baaki stats 20 points se.'

[As you wish Master. 900 points aapke use hoenge isme.]

'Go ahead!'

*Ding*

[All done Master.]

[Ye raha aapka full status.]


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'Good!!'

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Shower ke baad, Veer aur Suhana dono ne hi halka fulka khana khaane ke baad araam farmaaya. Jetlag se nijaat paane ke liye.

Aur sooraj dhalte hi wo dobaara se car me baith chal diye.

*Thud*

Car ka door band hua aur tezz kadmo ke saath Suhana, Divya aur Veer crime investigation ke ek office ke andar jaane lage.

Jagah jagah afra tafri ka mahaul tha. Veer ko aisa laga jese woh kisi stationary ki factory me ghus gaya tha, kyuki siwae panno ki gandh ke alawa waha aur koi gandh samajh me hi nahi aa rahi thi.

Chaaro orr nazre ghumaate hue wo peeche peeche hi chalta raha jab achanak se...

'Huh!!???'

Ek ajeeb sii feeling usse mehsoos hui. Badan me rongte khade ho gaye. Usse aisa laga jese usse koi dekh raha tha, ghoor ke.

'There's something wrong.'

Andar aate hi Divya ne ek ek jodi gloves fekte hue dono Suhana aur Veer ko diye. Jo dono ne hi pehen liye.

Uske baad ek jawaan sa ladka daudate bhaagte hue aaya, wo haatho me ek plastic ki transparent thaili liye hue tha.

Divya : Evidence?

Ladka : Yes ma'am!

Divya : Okay! You can leave now!

Aur wo chala gaya.

Veer ne notice kiya ki aas paas ke log unhe kuch zyaada hi acchi nazro se nahi dekh rahe the.

Packet ke andar evidence maujood tha. Kisi crime ka...

Suhana : This...

Divya : Issi ke liye tumhe yaha bulaaya hai.

Veer : Yaha pe koi object kyu nahi kar raha? Mein ye mehsoos kar sakta hu ki ye log mujhe yaha paa kar khush nahi hai. Fir bhi koi kuch keh nahi raha.

Divya : Kyuki mein khadi hu tumhare saath. Veer! Suhana ek prakaar se meri assistant hai. Aisa samajh lo ki usse yaha ki thodi boht access mili hui hai.

Veer : And what about me?

Uske sawaal par Divya usse apna sarr upar kar dekhi.



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Divya : Kaha na... Tum mere saath khade ho. They won't do anything.

Suhana : Mujhe ye batao baat kya hai!? Jaldi!!!

Aur fir Divya ne evidence ko baahar nikaala.

Andar khoon se sana ek pen tha. Ek kaagaz ka tukda aur uss kaagaz ke tukde par kuch likha hua tha.

Suhana : Mein kuch samjhi nahi.

Divya Suhana ko kuch samjha paati ki tabhi,

"You are not allowed here brat!!!"

Ek kathor awaaz unke peeche se aayi. Palat ke dekha toh Divya ka pati, Nicholas khada hua tha.

White shirt ke upar ek long coat daale, aur sarr par typical detective waali cap pehen wo waha khada unhe ghoor ke dekh raha tha. Khaas kar Veer ko.

Divya (khade hote hue) : Nik!!!

Nicholas : Tell him to get lost. Only Sonny babe can stay...

Suhana : I told you not to call me by that name ever again...

Pal bhar me teeno ek dusre ke upar chadh pade. Jaha Nicholas Veer ke yaha hone se niraash tha toh wahi Divya uske iss ravaiyye se gussa thi aur wahi Suhana isliye tilmila uthi kyuki Nik ne usse Sonny kehke pukaar diya.

'Lagta hai Suhana ka past inn dono se juda hua hai.'

[Yes master!!!]

Mauka dekh ke Suhana ne confused Veer ki orr jhukte hue usse samjhaaya,

Suhana : Divya ek personal detective hai Veer. Personal detectives general cases me apni hastakshep nahi karte. Inhe paise zyaada milte hai. Well... Ek prakaar se ye dalaal jese hote hai. Isliye Divya ke paas itna paisa hai.

Veer : I see...

Suhana : Nik bhi ek personal detective hai. Aur isliye yaha ki general investigation unit hume acche se nahi leti kabhi. Kyuki harr tough cases ko aksar hum log solve kar dete hai. Jiske chalte GIU haath par haath dhare baithe reh jaate hai.

Veer : Tabhi woh hume ghoor ke dekh rahe the.

Suhana : Haan! Par Nik... Well! He likes to keep some lackeys around. Wo GIU me apne chele bana ke rakha hua hai. Jis kaaran se uska yaha virodh utna nahi hota. Par Divya ka aisa nahi hai. She doesn't like boot licking...

Veer : In other words, Nik paisa fek yaha chele banaaye hue hai toh wahi aapki friend Divya wahi paise liye apni jebo me daal rahi hai!?

Suhana : Exactly!!!

Yaha Divya ne jese tese Nik ko manaaya toh maamla shaant hua aur Veer ke yaha hone se bhi ab koi dikkat nahi thi. Filhaal ke liye...

Nik samet baaki investigators bhi baithe hue the. Screen par ek ke baad ek graphic images aa rahi thi.

Qatl ki...

Aur qatl bhi kiska? Unke apne ek investigator ka...

Saamne khada Nik ne jab bolna shuru kiya, toh sab shaant ho gaya.

Kal!!! Kal hamaare crime investigations ke members me se ek bade hi mehanti investigator ne apni jaan kho dii.

Jaan khoyi nahi, usse bedardi aur badi hi kroorta se maara gaya.

Daniel hamaara khaas tha. Par jaate jaate apne antim palo me usne hamaare liye ek sandesha chorra hai. Hume kuch bataane ke liye.

Aur hum iski teh tak jaake Daniel ke hathiyaare ko saza dilwaa kar hi rahenge...

"YEEEESSSSSSSS!!!"

Sabhi ek saath waha par chillaaye. Nik ne jab kehna band kiya toh usne evidence Divya ke haatho se lete hue saamne sabhi ko dikhaaya.

Khaas kar uss paper ko...

Jisme Daniel ki hi likhawat me likha hua tha,


Heinous thoughts destroys the mind.
Often the glee tuns into, Unhappiness.

Sorrow remains but shall be forgotten. Emergence of a new beginning prevails.

Opulent, rich thoughts fills the mind once more.
Fend off the fiend this time.

Kindle the fire in yourself. Intensify it. Lure the evil out of it. Lecherous demons shall be punished.

Escape if you realize you cannot handle it.
Remember, there ain't a single one, if you do get caught...

Soul shall burn!!!

Aur uss parche me likhi gayi saari likhaawat peeche badi sii screen par ujaagar ho gayi.

Panne me jagah jagah khoon laga hua tha. Zaahir tha ki kitni hi jaldbaazi me Daniel ne likha hoga isse. Ek paheli thi. Jo kisi orr ishaara kar rahi thi.

Las Vegas ki harr guzarti raat ki tarah kal raat bhi, Daniel keval aur keval ek party me gaya tha apne jeevan ki rozzmarra busy life se thoda relaxation paane ke liye.

Par dikkat tab ho gayi jab woh...

Ussi hotel me ho rahi kisi aur party me ghus gaya. Ek aisi party jidhar usse kabhi nahi ghusna chaahiye tha.

Daniel akela tha. Uske saath koi aur uski pehchaan ka nahi tha. Party me harr vyakti aankho me mask lagaaye anjaan logo se baatein kar rahe the. Daniel ko kya pata tha ki uski itni choti si bhul uski jaan lene waali thi.

Jese hi wo uss party me ghusa...

Na jaane usne aisa kya dekha ya aisa kya suna ki usne forun hi office me team ko call lagaana chaaha. Wo Paseene se tar batar...

Lekin jese uske haatho se phone chhina liya gaya tha. Phone se keval Daniel ka hello hi sunn'ne ko mil paaya.

Shayad koi usse maarne ki koshish kar raha tha. Bhaago!!!!! Yahi khayaal aaya usse. Daniel jese chakma dene me kuch waqt ke liye toh qamyaab bhi ho gaya. Aur ussi beech usne ye likha.

Aur uske baad...

*Sppllluuuurrrtttt*

Subah uski laash hotel ke baahar dustbin me paayi gayi.

Police sahet investigators site ka muaayna lene pohuche par siwae Daniel ke khoon ke alaawa unhe aur kuch bhi haasil nahi hua.

Hotel me puch taach ki toh pata laga ki hotel me party me boht saare log aaye the. Aur jidhar Daniel ko maara gaya, waha koi bhi cctv camera maujood nahi tha.

Yaha tak ki... Footprints bhi saaf saaf ujaagar nahi ho paaye.

Evidence ke taur par kuch bhi nahi chorra tha hatyaare ne. Daniel ki maut chaaku ke vaar se hui thi. Filhaal toh blood ki jaanch aur Daniel ka post mortem hi kuch bata sakte the. Fir bhi eye witnesses ke liye khoj jaari thi.

Aur wo clue... Jisse Daniel ne likha tha. Zaahir hai wo clue hi tha.

Nik ne jab bolna band kiya toh woh baahar chala gaya. Tough cases me Divya aur Nik dono ko hi yaad kiya jaata tha. Bhale hi koi unhe pasand kare ya na kare. Akhir professionalism bhi koi cheez hoti thi.

Assistant Sheriff se khaas pehchaan bhi thi Nik ki. Jis kaaran se usse aur Divya ko aksar ye cases mil jaate the.

Nateeja? Paisa aur tarakki.

Suhana : Toh ye baat hai? Isliye tumne mujhe yaha bulaaya?

Divya : Hmm! Daniel pehla nahi hai Suhana.

Suhana : Tumhara matlab...!??

Divya : Yes! Daniel teesra shikaar hai. Pehle do investigators bhi maare gaye. Aur unke murderers ka pata bhi nahi chala abhi tak. Par iss baar Daniel... Wo khaas tha team ka. Aur ye ussi ki wajah se jo usne hamare liye ek note chorra hai... Mujhe pehle hi pata tha ye saare murders connected hai. Isliye... I called for your help.

Suhana : Hmm...

Divya : You will help me. Right?

Suhana : Hmm~

Divya (smiles) : Thanks!!!

Suhana : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer!?

Veer ki aankhein projector par hi jami hui thi. Uss likhawat par... Daniel ne jo likha tha..

Uska saral shabdo me matlab ye tha ki...

Daniel aagah kar raha tha. Mann ke bhre vichaaro se dur raho. Ye waha le jaate hai jaha kabhi nahi jaana chahiye. Aur baad me ye musibat me daal dete hai. Aisi musibat jis se aap baahar nahi aa sakte.

Aur jab aapko pata lag jaaye ki aap baahar nahi aa sakte. Toh bhaagiye iss se. Bhaagiye!!! Warna... Ye maut ka kaaran bante hai.

Kuch aisa hi likha hua tha ghuma fira ke Daniel ne.

Par inn sab ka uske murder se kya lena dena??

Divya khud zorr dete hue dekhne lagi jab kuch derr baad hi...

Uske poore badan ke ruye khade ho gaye aur wo apni jagah se chillaate hue uth khadi hui hai.

"Aaaaaaaaaaahh....."

Nik : Whaaatttt!!!?

Suhana : Divya?????

Veer : !!??

Ek ek ki nazar uske upar jamm gayi...

Aur wo haklaate hue fir boli,
"I-I got it... It was so easy!! But nooooo!!!!! Noo no no no no.... This is huge!!!!! It's a big problem... Ohhhhh goooodddd!!!!"

Divya jese paagal ho chali thi. Na jaane usne aisa kya dhundh liya tha Daniel ki likhawat me.

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Mumbai...
Evening ~ 6 : 24 PM

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Aasmaan se ek vimaan neeche utar airstrip par land kiya.

Andar se ek aurat aur ek naujavaan khubsoorat ladki baahar nikli.

Aur wo ek cab me sawaar ho gayi.

"Hum kidhar jaa rahe hai? Kuch toh kahiye!" Wo ladki kheejte hue puchi.

"Mene kaha na! Tum ek bhi sawaal nahi karogi."

"Par mujhe jaan'ne ka haq hai. Hum yaha kis se milne aaye hai? Aur kya karne?"

"Mein abhi nahi bata sakti."

"Par kyuuuuu? Aap aisa kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse!?"

Lekin uss aurat ne ek na suni. Cab ek hotel ke saamne ruki aur dono hi mahilaaye andar chali gayi.

Uss aurat ne receptionist ko kuch diya aur badle me kamre ki chaavi thaam wo ladki ke saath upar kamre ki orr chali gayi.

"Akhir kab tak aap mujhse chhupaogi?"

Ek baar fir ladki uchi awaaz me puchi,

"Ek baar me samajh me nahi aati kya Tej??? Mene kaha hai na. Mein nahi bata sakti abhi."

Jii haan! Ye Tej aur Bhavna hi thi.

*Thud*

Aur kamre ke hi andar Tej ko lock kar Bhavna baahar chal dii.

Gusse me aa kar Tej ne apna bag yu hi bistar par patka aur woh window khol kisi soch me doob gayi.

Mumbai ki ye mand mand hawa pata nahi kyu par... Usse ek apnepann ka ehsaas de rahi thi.

'I feel strange... Somewhat... Familiar!!'

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Wahi baahar idhar Bhavna ghanghor chinta me thi. Uske haath mobile ko thaame hue the aur zorr zorr se kaanp rahe the.

'That was it.... Yes!!! That was it... Mein galat ho hi nahi sakti. Meri aankhein chakma khaa hi nahi sakti. I definitely saw it. Aur yadi wo chori ka nahi hai then he is none other than...'

Sochte sochte ek sihran uske badan me machal gayi.

Aankh band kar ke bhi wo pendant ko maatr chhu kar pehchaan sakti thi. Toh dekhna to dur ki baat thi.

Usne fatafat ek call bhidaaya,

"Hello?"

Bhavna : Hello! Purvi!!!!!

Purvi : Haan? Bhavna? Kya tum ho?

Bhavna : Haan! Mein hi hu, Purvi! Bhavna!

Purvi : Oh my god!! Kaha se bol rahi ho tum? Kaha thi itne din? Ab yaad kiya mujhe?

Bhavna : Purvi! I'm sorry... Par unn sab ka samay nahi hai.

Purvi : H-Hey calm down you know-

Bhavna : I need you!!!!! Right NOW!!!!

Purvi : H-Huh???
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
I'm still not fuly recovered yet. Toh full potential se nahi likh paaya hu iss update ko. But like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Thodi paheliya, thodi mysteries, thoda romance aur dherr saara action aana shuru hoega ab. Sorry for the late update too.
Baaki, keep supporting! ✨

Dhanyavaad!
जबरदस्त लाजवाब update bhai jann

To LA mey suhana aur veer case solved krene gaye hey Sahi hey ye bhi

Bohot din ke bad bhavana ki koi news ayi hey Aur ohh veer ko dhund te huve mumbai aa gayi hey, usne uske kisi frend Ko call lgaya lgata hey

Ab age dekhna padega kya hota hey

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