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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Waah kya scene dikhaya h aapne.
Kyaa varnan kiya h aapne adrishi or Raajnandini ke vyaktitva ke bare me.
Prem ki manodasha ko bhi aapne bakhoobi apne shabdon daal bade hi behtareen dhang se pesh kiya h HUM logon ke samne.
Mzaaaa aa bhai waah.
Chha gye fir se ek baar.
Fantastic or Kamal ka update bhai.

Or ab ,
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UPDATE- 101

FLASHBACK CONTINUES......

Vardan ke nashe me chur azgar har kisi par atyachar karne laga...jaha bhi koi pooja path karte dikh jata to unko utha kar ussi agni kund me phenk deta...striyo aur jawan ladkiyo ko uske sainik jabran ghar se sab ke samne nagn kar ke ghasit le jate aur raat din unka shosan karte rahte...unse paida hone wali santane bhi paap ke marg par chalne wali hoti..aise hi azgar ki kali sena badhti chali gayi....logo ne apne apne gharo se bahar nikalna tak band kar diya tha uske darr se.

Vahi dusri taraf priyamedh ki nauvi (9th) pidhi me ek balak ka janam hua...jiske sharir me adbhut tez tha..ussi gaon ke ek vidwan brahman ke hatho naam karan ke pashchat uss balak ka naam rakha gaya..Adiirishi

Uss vidwan brahman ke ghar uss din hi ek bahut hi sundar kanya ne janam liya...jiska naam rakha gaya..Rajnandini

Ab aage......

Adirishi ke mata pita sukhdev aur aprajita dono hi bade dharmik vicharo wale vyakti the....adirishi ko apne pariwar se hi dharm aur sanskaro ki shiksha apne mata pita se milti rahi samay samay par.

Adirishi jaise jaise bada hone laga uski gyan ke kshetra me vidwata sabke samne aane lagi....har baat me vo sabse aage rahta tha...phir chahe vo gyan ki baate ho ya phir koi aur vishay....uski ruchi yuddh kala me bhi thi.

Uske char dost bhi ban gaye the....chuttad, gangu, pangu aur nangu...halanki inke naam to kuch aur hi the lekin adirishi inhe yahi naam se bulata tha....uski dekha dekhi sabhi ke juban par ye naam famous ho gaye.

Udhar azgar aur kilwish ka aatank sir chadh ke bol raha tha.....jo ki din prati din badhta hi ja raha tha....isme uska bharpoor sahyogi ban gaye the tantrik kapali aur naravali.

Kapali aur naravali dono hi kali shaktiyo ke upasak the.....dono ne kayi tarah ki shaktishali siddhiya hasil kar li thi jinke dum par vo kilwish aur azgar ke kale samrajya ko din duna raat chouguna badha rahe the.

Priyamedh ki ab tak ki sabhi pidhiyo me adirishi hi aisa tha jiski ruchi gyan ke sath sath yuddh vidhya me bhi thi... kintu usko yuddh kala ki shiksha dene wala vaha koi nahi tha.

Vahi dusri taraf rajnandini bhi badi hone lagi dhire dhire.....jaise jaise vo badi hoti ja rahi thi vaise vaise uska roop soundarya bhi chandrama ki kalao ki tarah aur bhi nikharta ja raha tha.

Rajnandini me ek avgun jarur tha ki usko gussa bahut aata tha bachpan se hi....apni saheliyo me bhi agar koi uski baat manne se inkar kar deti ya galat thahra deti to vo gussa ho ke unko thok peet deti thi....chahe phir uski baat galat hi kyo na ho agar kisi saheli ne ye aur kisi ne kah diya ki aisa nahi hai to phir samajho ki uski shamat aa gayi.

Uske pita vidhyadhar poore gaon ke purohit the...isliye unka behad maan samman tha....pooja path kane ke baad vo poora din ved aur purano ke adhyayan me hi leen rahte the...uski maa shakuntala ek grahini thi....uske pita rajnandini ko bhi ladai jhagda na karne ki salah dete rahte the....unke samne to vo haa kah deti thi lekin jaise hi koi uski baato ko galat thahrata to bhool jati sab kuch aur ladna chalu.

Lekin aisa nahi tha ki usko sirf ladna hi aata tha....vo jab bhi free hoti to koi na koi dharmik kitab padhti rahti thi... uske mann me sabse prabhav dala tha durga maha puran ne....uska saatva aur aathva adhyay jo ki mata mahakali par adharit hai....usse vo behad prabhavit thi aur ye do chapter usko bahut pasand the...shayad kyon ki isme mahakali ne maar kaat kuch jyada hi ki thi..chand, mund aur rakta beez ka vadh karte samay.

Inn dono chapters ne uske mann me itna asar dala ki vo mann hi mann mahakali ko hi apni guru manne lagi... aur jab bhi kahi akeli hoti to vo unka dhyan karte huye astra shastra ka akele hi abhyas karne lagti.

Samay gujarta raha aur iss douran adirishi aur rajnandini dono kab bachpan se jawani ki dahleez par aa gaye unhe khud bhi pata nahi chala....

Jawan hone ke sath hi rajnandini ki sundarta aur youvan me char chaand lag chuke the...vo jis gali se bhi gujarti, log uski ek jhalak pane ke liye ghanto uss raste par taktaki lagaye baithe rahte....magar rajnandini thi ki apne sharir par makkhi tak ko nahi baithne deti thi.

Vidhyadhar prati din pratah kaal uth kar pooja archna kar ke aas paas ke gaon me bhiksha maangne ke liye nikal jata tha....tab tak maa beti dono mil kar ghar ka sara kaam kaaz niptati thi.....tatpashchat bhojan banati thi.... nadi se pani bhar kar lane ka kaam rajnandini hi karti thi.....vidhya dhar bhiksha maang kar vapis loutne ke baad shastra adhyayan me jut jata tha....vo apni putri rajnandini se bahut prem karta tha....aur uske jawan hone ke baad uske liye usne ek suyogya var ki talash bhi shuru kar di thi.

Idhar adirishi bhi bada ho gaya tha....vo dekhne me kisi se kam nahi tha...sajila, hatta, katta, khubsurat nav jawan ho gaya tha........lekin uske jawan hone se kuch saal pahle hi uski maa ek bimari ki chapet me aa kar parlok sidhar gayi.........adirishi jab bada hua to usko ek baat chubhne lagi ki ek paheli ka uttar uski poori aath pidhiya dene me asmarth rahi aur swargvasi ho gayi, parantu uss prashna ko puchne wala ab tak jinda hai....adirishi ne nishchay kiya ki vah iss prashna ka uttar dhoond ke hi chain lega.

Kintu kisi ko kya pata tha ki iss prashna ka uttar talash karne me adirishi ki jeevan dhara hi badal jayegi.....ye prashna usko kaha se kaha pahucha dega, tab ye baat koi nahi janta tha.

Ye prashna hi hai jisne ek rishi putra ke jeevan me prem ka sagar bhar diya, to kahi gyan ka amar deep jalaya, iss prashna ne hi usko kayi shaktiya pradan ki to issi prashna ne hi usko azgar ke samne la khada kiya.

Adirishi jab bhi apne charo dosto ki pandav mandali se fursat hota to aksar nadi kinare baith kar ghanto uss prashna ke baare me hi sochta rahta lekin uska koi uttar nahi mil pa raha tha...

Aise hi ek din vo nadi ke kinare kinare chalte huye ussi paheli ke vishay me sochne me khoya hua tha... vo apni soch me itna magan tha ki usko ye abhas bhi nahi hua ki vo kab apne gaon ko paar kar ke dusre gaon me pahuch gaya hai.

Tabhi uska dhyan kuch awaz se bhang ho gaya....usne jaise hi uss awaz ki disha ki taraf apni nazare ghumayi to bas dekhta hi rah gaya.....uski ankhe to jaise palak jhapakna hi bhool gayi.

Samne nadi par rajnandini apni ek saheli champa ke sath ghade me pani bharne aayi thi....ye awaz ghade ko pani me dubone se huyi thi.....kintu uski iss awaz ki dastak adirishi ko sidhe apne dil me mahsoos huyi....pahli hi nazar me rajnandini ki sundarta ne uske mann ko moh liya.

Vahi rajnandini ne ghade me pani bhar ke jaise hi usko pani se bahar nikalne ko huyi to uski bhi nazar nadi ke dusre kinare par khade adirishi ki nazaro se takra gayi.....rajnandini ki iss ek nazar ne adirishi ka jaise sab kuch hi loot liya tha.

Vahi rajnandini ne bhi aaj pahli baar apne dil ko dhadakte huye mahsoos kiya.....uske sath aisa pahli baar hua tha... kaha vo gaon ki alhad bebak gori jo baat baat par har kisi se ladne ko taiyar rahti thi....aaj kisi ko dekh kar uske dil me ek anjani si uthal puthal paida ho gayi thi.

Champa ke awaz dene se vo jaldi hi hosh me aa gayi aur turant apni nazaro ko jhuka liya...ye bhi shayad pratham baar hi tha ki rajnandini ne aaj sharam aur laaz ke karan usne apni ankho ko jhukaya tha....champa ke awaz lagate hi vo ghada le kar uth khadi huyi aur dhire se ek baar mud ke adirishi ki taraf dekha aur phir chupchap vaha se chali gayi.

Airishi usko tab tak bina palak jhapkaye dekhta raha jab tak ki vo uski ankho se ojhal nahi ho gayi.....kuch der tak aise hi vaha khade rah kar vo uss jagah ko dekhta raha jaise ki iss jagah ko achche se apne dil aur dimag par baitha lena chahta ho....phir vapis apne ghar ki oor mud gaya.

Aaj adirishi ka mann ashant tha....kaha vo kuch pane ki khoj me nikla tha ghar se aur kaha jab ghar louta to apni sabse keemti cheez bhi usse kho chuki thi.....vo gaya to tha uss paheli ka uttar pane ke liye ...uss paheli ka uttar to usko nahi mila magar uska dil jarur kho gaya.

Raat aise hi karwat badalte badalte mushkil se kati.....rajnandini ka hasin chaand jaisa mukhda uske dil aur dimag se ojhal hi nahi ho raha tha....subah hote hi usne jaldi jaldi nitya kriya poori ki aur bina kisi ko kuch bataye phir se uss jagah aa kar baith gaya, jaha kal usne rajnandini ko dekha tha....iss ummid me ki shayad vo subah bhi nadi me pani lene aati ho.... ?

Intazar karte karte subah se dophar ho gayi aur dophar se shaam....vo bina kuch khaye piye aise hi rajnandini ki ek jhalak ke liye tapti dhoop ki parwah kiye bagair yo hi baitha raha...uski gali me taktaki lagaye, asha ka ek deep jalaye.....magar rajnandini nahi aayi....aaj usko ehsaas hua ki intazar karna kya hota hai.... ? kisi ka intazar karna kitna taklifdeh hota hai.... ?

Vo subah se intazar karte karte nirash ho chuka tha...lekin phir bhi uske dil ke kisi kone me ye ummid thi ki shayad vo shaam ko aaye pani lene.... ? kahte hain ki sachche dil se nikli pukar ko sun kar to bhagwan ko bhi aana padta hai....aur uss din ye chamatkar bhi satya ho hi gaya.

Suraj dhalna shuru hi hua tha ki akhir rajnandini aaj phir champa ke sath hasi majak karte pani lene pahuch hi gayi nadi kinare....adirishi ko jaise naya jeevan mil gaya, rajnandini ko dekhte hi....lekin dono ko shayad aaj loutne ki jaldi thi...isliye jaldi se ghada bhar ke dono vaha se chal di....magar na jane kyo rajnandini ke dil me kal wali vahi tasveer achanak ubhar aayi.

Barbas hi uski nigahe uss taraf ghum gayi jaha adirishi aaj bhi ektak usko hi dekhe ja raha tha.....adirishi par nazar padte hi rajnandini ke dil ki dhadkan tez ho gayi.....vo chah kar bhi apni nazare hata nahi pa rahi thi...uske dil me ek mithi mithi chubhan uthne lagi thi.

Champa ne jab usko aise khade dekha to chounk gayi ki isko kya ho gaya... ? usne kayi baar usko naam lekar awaz kagayi magar uski awaz bahar hi dafan ho gayi….rajnandini apni sudh budh kho chuki thi…ant me champa usko hath pakad ke khich le gayi apne sath…. uske jate hi adirishi bhi gaon lout aaya.

Uske dosto ne jab usko gumsum dekha to usko pareshan karne lage….koi kuch kahta to koi kuch….halanki vo sab bhi usko aise chup dekh kar chintit hone lage the.

Chuttad—arey yaar kya baat hai, tu kal se itna shant shant kyo hai..... ?

Nangu—lagta hai ki hamare dost ko pyar to nahi ho gaya hai kisi se….? hahahaahaha

Adirishi—pyar….pyarrr….haann shayad ye pyar hi hai…

"Mohabbat Kab, Kis se aur Kaha Ho Jaye,
Iska Koi Andaza Hi Nahi Hota...
Ye Ghar Hi Aisa Hai Dost,
Jiska Koi Darwaja Nahi Hota."

Pangu—koun hai vo..... ?

Adirishi—pata nahi....

Gangu—kaha rahti hai.... ?

Adirishi—pata nahi

Chuttad—ye bhi pata nahi...vo bhi pata nahi....lagta hai ki ye bhi ishq ke rog me gaya kaam se

Adirishi vaha se uth kar ghar aa gaya...ab ye roj ka kaam ban gaya tha....vo subah uth ke vahi nadi kinare pahuch ke rajnandini ka intazar karne lagta....haan, iss douran ek badlav jarur aaya tha ki ab rajnandini bhi din me do teen baar nadi me pani lene aane lagi thi..aur ghanto vo bhi adirishi ko niharti rahti thi.

ek din rajnandini bade subah subah din nikalne se pahle hi nadi kinare pahuch kar adirishi ke aane ki raah dekhne lagi...ek ek pal usse badi mushkil se kat raha tha...din bhi nikal aaya aur dhoop bhi khil gayi thi lekin adirishi ko uskepita ne kuch meuljha diya tha to vo nahi aa paya tha ...idhar intazar karte karte rajnandini ko gussa aane laga tha...jab dophar tak vo nahi aaya to gusse me usne padosi ke ghade ko nadi ke pani me phenk diya aur tunk kar ghar lout aayi.

Rajnandini (gusse me khud se)-- kya samajhta hai apne aap ko...? nahi ayega to main marr jaungi kya usko dekhe bina...? mere hath pair jal gaye dhoop me baithe baithe, upar se maa ki daant khani padegi so alag....ab se main bhi nahi jaungi nadi.

phir ek ghante baad.....

Rajnandini (mann me)--ho sakta hai ki ab vo aa gaya ho....? vo bhi to meri raah dekh raha hoga....? agar main nahi gayi aur vo kal se nahi aaya to....? nahi..mujhe jana hoga...

aur vo chupchap khidki se kood kar dophar me hi nange pair nadi ki taraf bhag gayi....

Shayad dono hi ek dusre ke dil ki halat ko samajh rahe the....rajnandini ne ab kisi se ladna jhagadna bhi chhod diya tha....baat baat par gussa hone wali rajnandini ab shant rahne lagi thi.....uski saheliya aur gaon wale bhi hairan the ki ye chamatkar kaise ho gaya.... ?

Ab uski saheliya jab kayi baar usko chidati to bhi vo koi jawab nahi deti thi....ya phir sahi shabdo me ye kahna jyada uchit hoga ki usko apni saheliyo ki baate ab sunayi hi nahi deti thi....kyon ki uske dil, dimag, ankh, naak, kaan sab band the.....sab me adirishi ne kabza kar liya tha.

Rajnandini ko khud hi nahi malum ki kab aur kaise ye sab ho gaya....bas uske dil me yahi laga rahta tha ki kab subah ho aur maa usko nadi se pani lane ke liye kahe....kayi baar to vo nadi se khali ghada hi sir me rakh ke vapis aa jati thi....use pani bharne ka hosh hi nahi rahta tha.

Gaon walo ke sath sath uske maa pita bhi uski halat dekh ke chinta me the....kayi baar jab shakuntala usko pani lane se mana kar deti to vo chupke se padosiyo ke ghade le kar nadi me bhag jati thi...ab to uska jyadatar samay nadi kinare hi gujarta tha.

Prem dono taraf se tha, kintu moun tha......fasla kewal nadi ke do kinaro ka tha….aksar prem me aisa hota hai… jisko hum chahte hain, vo hamare paas hota hai, hamare sath hota hai….lekin phir bhi hum uske samne apna prem vyakt nahi kar paate….shayad dono hi ke dil me ye udhedbun chal rahi hoti hai ki “Kahi main aisa kuch na kah du ki vo mujhse naraz ho jaye."

Yaha bhi shayad kuch aisa hi tha.....bhay aur sankoch, ye do hi hain jo kisi insan ko moun rahne par majboor kar dete hain....ab inn dono ke dil me, bhay hai ya phir sankoch kahna mushkil hai.

Rajnandini (mann me)—ye mujhe kya ho gaya hai... ? mera mann kyo mere vash me nahi hai…? Vo kuch kahta kyo nahi hai…?

"Khwabo Ki Duniya Mein, Hum Khote Chale Gaye,
Na The Madhosh Par, Madhosh Hote Chale Gaye,
Na Jane Kya Baat Hai, Uske Chehre Mein ?
Na Chahte Huye Bhi, Unke Hote Chale Gaye…."


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UPDATE- 102

FLASHBACK CONTINUES......

Yaha bhi shayad kuch aisa hi tha.....bhay aur sankoch, ye do hi hain jo kisi insan ko moun rahne par majboor kar dete hain....ab inn dono ke dil me, bhay hai ya phir sankoch kahna mushkil hai.

Rajnandini (mann me)—ye mujhe kya ho gaya hai... ? mera mann kyo mere vash me nahi hai…? Vo kuch kahta kyo nahi hai…?

Khwabo Ki Duniya Mein, Hum Khote Chale Gaye,

Na The Madhosh Par, Madhosh Hote Chale Gaye,
Na Jane Kya Baat Hai, Uske Chehre Mein ?
Na Chahte Huye Bhi, Unke Hote Chale Gaye….


Ab aage……

Vo dono ghanto ek dusre ko niharte huye nadi ke dono kinaro par baithe huye dekhte rahte….magar dono me se koi bhi apne dil ki baat ko kahne ki himmat nahi juta pa rahe the.

Aise hi ek din dono ek dusre ko dekhte huye nadi kinare baithe ek dusre ki ankho me khoye huye the ki tabhi achanak se rajnandini ka pair fisal gaya aur vo nadi me ja giri.

Usko nadi me girte dekh kar adirishi bhi turant nadi me kood gaya aur usko apni balishtha bhujao me samet kar pani se bahar nikal laya.

Adirishi—dhyan se nahi baith sakti thi….agar abhi doob jati to…..?

Rajnandini (mushkura kar)—kaise doob jati….? Aap jo the na mujhe bachane ke liye, mujhe doobne thodi hi dete.

Adirishi—phir bhi thoda dhyan to rakhna hi chahiye tha na apna..

Rajnandini—vaise aap yaha roj kyo aate hain….?

Adirishi—pata nahi.....bas dil khich lata hai mujhe yaha.....aur aap kyo aati ho..... ?

Rajnandini (sharmate huye)—mmm...main...main to pani bharne aati hu...aap ki tarah tanka jhanki karne thodi hi aati hu...

Adirishi—achcha ji....bhala maine kya hai kisi ka.... ?

Rajnandini—aur nahi to kya.....apko achcha lagta hai aise ladkiyo ko yaha aate jate dekhte huye.... ? ye koi achchi baat thodi hai..

Adirishi—main sabko dekhne thodi hi aata hu.....main to bas tumhe dekhne aata hu...kisi aur se mujhe kya lena dena…

Rajnandini—achcha ji...to janab ko mujhse kuch lena dena hai....par main to apko janti tak nahi to phir ye lene dene wali baat kaha se aa gayi.... ?

Adirishi—koi baat nahi...to ab jaan pahchan kar lete hain...mera naam adirishi hai..aur tumhara.... ?

Rajnandini—main kyu batau apna naam kisi ajnabi ko.... ? vaise sab mujhe rajnandini kahte hain....aur ye adirishi kaisa ajib naam hai....rishi ya phir adii theek hai.....main to rishi hi kahungi

Adirishi—rajnandini....bahut pyara naam hai...main bhi nandini hi kahunga.

Rajnandini—mera naam mat bigado....vaise hi itna badnam kar diya hai tumne mujhe..

Adirishi—maine kab badnam kiya tumhe.... ?

Rajnandini—vahi to....ab aise poora din bhar mujhe ankhe phad phad kar dekhoge to meri badnami nahi hogi to kya hoga.... ?

Adirishi—agar tumhe mera dekhna bura lagta hai to kal se nahi dekhunga..

Rajnandini—maine kab mana kiya ki mat dekho.... ? mera matlab hai ki....aise sab logo ke samne mat ektak dekha karo..

Adirishi—kya karu tumhe dekhte hi ankhe apna rasta hi bhatak jati hain...unhe aur kuch dikhayi hi nahi deta to main kya karu... ? tumhi batao na

Rajnandini (sir jhuka kar)—main ...kya...batau.... ? ab main chalti hu..bahut samay ho gaya....maa aaj bhi daantegi bahut…..ye sab tumhare chakkar me ho raha hai….khud to pagal ho, sath me mujhe bhi pagal bana kar ke rahoge.

Adirishi—mere chakkar me kyo.... ?

Rajnandini (sharma kar)—mujhe nahi pata….pata hai apke aise mujhe din din bhar ghurne se, meri poore gaon me badnami ho rahi hai....meri sabhi saheliya mujhe chidati hain.

Adirishi—kya kahti hain….?

Rajnandini—vo kahti hain ki mujhe tumse……jao main nahi batati, jaise tumhe kuch pata hi na ho….?

Adirishi—batao na vo kya kahti hain….?

Rajnandini (sharma kar)—sab kahti hain ki…mujhe…mujhe tumse….p…py..pyar ho gaya hai.

Adirishi—main bhi tumhe bahut chahta hu…tumhe dekhe bina bina na to raat gujarti hai aur na din…kya tum mujhse shadi karogi…..?

Rajnandini (sir jhuka kar)—apni shadi ka faisla main kaise kar sakti hu….? Uske liye to tumhe mere mata pita se baat karni hogi.

Adirishi—main jarur baat karunga unse.

Aur iss tarah se dono ke prem ki shuruat ho gayi….ab dono prati din ek dusre ki baho me simte pade rahte kafi samay tak….na din ka hosh, na raat ka pata….jungle me ek ped ke niche unhone har roj milne ka apna ashiyana bana liya tha…..rajnandini ke baar baar jor dene par vo uske pita se milne ko raji ho gaya….rajnandini ne uska naam rishi rakh diya…

Agle din vo rajnandini ke bataye samayanusar uske ghar pahuch gaya….uss samay vidhya dhar bhiksha yapan karne ke uparant loute hi the…aur bhojan karne baith hi rahe the..tabhi adirishi pahuch gaya…unhone usko bhi sath me bhojan karaya….uske baad….

Vidhya dhar—kaho kaise aana hua…..?

Adirishi—ji maine suna hai ki aap apni beti ke liye kisi var ki talash kar rahe hain….. main apki putri rajnandini se vivah karna chahta hu.

Vidhya dhar—pahle apne vishay me kuch batao….?

Adirishi—ji mera naam rishi…matlab ki adirishi hai…. shri sukhdev ji mere pita ji hain…main apke bagal ke gaon me rahta hu……maa ne bataya tha ki mera naam karan bhi aapne hi kiya tha.

Vidhya dhar (kuch der soch kar)—achcha to tum rishi priyamedh ke vansh se ho.

Adirishi—ji aapne bilkul sahi kaha.

Vidhya dhar—meri putri rajnandini ko jante ho…..?

Adirishi—ji

Vidhya dhar—kya tum meri beti se prem karte ho.... ?

Adirishi—ji haan, apni jaan se bhi jyada.

Vidhya dhar—yadi tum meri beti se prem karte ho to prem ki kimat chukao....de sakoge apne prem ki kimat mujhe.... ?

Adirishi—ji kahiye...aap jo chahe maang lo...main dene ko taiyar hu...

Vidhya dhar—prem tumne kiya hai..to uski kimat bhi tumhe hi pata honi chahiye... ?

Adirishi (hairan ho kar mann me)—prem ki kimat kya ho sakti hai….?

Vidhya dhar—nahi pata…? to pahle apne prem ki kimat pata kar ke aao…..tab meri beti ka hath mangna........ab jao.

Adirishi pareshan ho kar unke ghar se nikal gaya….raste me jo bhi koi milta to usse prem ki kimat ke baare me puchta lekin koi jawab nahi de pa raha tha….uske pita bhi uss prashna ki khoj me bahar gaye huye the kafi din se warna unse hi puch leta.

Chuttad—yaar baat kya hai…tu itna udas kyo rahta hai….?

Nangu—haa bata na rishi..kya baat hai….?

Gangu—lagta hai ki aaj kal rajnandini bhabhi ne kuch jyada hi kaan khich diye hain apne yaar ke

Pangu—dekh hamse nahi batayega to kisse batayega…?

Adirishi—are yaar baat ye hai ki…(poori baat bata deta hai)

Chuttad—dekh yaar hame to iski kimat ke baare me kuch pata nahi hai lekin maine suna hai ki aaj kal yaha se thodi hi door pipal wali pahadi ke uss paar ek vidwan mahatma rahte hain…unke sharir me bahut tez hai…vah tumhare prashna ka uttar avashya de denge.

Adirishi—agar aisa hai to main aaj hi unke paas jaunga….rajnandini se mile huye do din kya huye aisa lagta hai jaise barso se na dekha ho usko.

Nangu—are abhi mat jana vaha….sab kahte hain ki uss pahadi jo pipal ke ped hain na, uss par brahma rakshas rahte hain….jo bhi raat ke samay vaha jata hai vo jinda nahi aata phir…vo usko maar kar kha jate hain.

Chuttad—arey sidhe sidhe bol na ki vaha jinn rahte hain….jinn ko hi brahma rakshas kahte hain.

Adirishi—koi brahma rakshas nahi hota hai…sab bakwas hai..theek hai..kal chala jaunga

Sab ke chale jane ke baad adirishi bhi ghar lout aaya kintu uska mann nahi lag raha tha kahi bhi…to usne sidhe apne dosto ki batayi ussi pahadi ki taraf chal diya.

Sandhya hone hi wali thi…vah jaldi jaldi chalte huye karib teen ghante me uss pahadi ke paas pahuch gaya…tab tak din to dhal gaya tha lekin abhi andhera poori tarah gahraya nahi tha….uss vishal pipal ke pe ke nazdik pahuchte hi usko apne dosto ki kahi huyi baate yaad aa gayi to usne ek baar uss vishal ped ki oor dekha aur phir sarpat pahadi par chadh gaya bina piche dekhe hi.

Pahadi par chadhte hi use pipal ka ped dekhne laga lekin vaha to charo taraf pipal ke ped lage huye the…usne jaldi jaldi pahadi se niche utar kar idhar udhar dekhne laga tabhi uski nazar ek ghaas phoos ki bani choti si jhopdi par gayi….vo turant udhar hi chal diya aur pahuch bhi gaya jaldi hi.

Jhopdi ke bahar ek ped ke niche ek ati tejaswi mahatma dhyan mudra me baithe huye the….atah vah unke ankhe kholne ki pratiksha karne laga…jaise hi unhone ankhe kholi….

Adirishi—pranam swami ji

Mahatma—tumhara kalyan ho…kaho koun ho tum vats aur iss samay yaha aane ka kya prayojan hai tumhara…?

Adirishi—hey munivar, mera naam adirishi hai….ek prashna ka uttar janne ki abhilasha ne mujhe apke paas aane ko vivash kar diya tha…meri vajah se aap ki sadhna me jo vyavdhan uttapann hua uske liye main kshama chahta hu.

Mahatma (kuch der ankhe band rakhne ke baad)—bolo ! kya prashna hai…?

Adirishi—mera prashna hai ki prem ki kimat kya hai…..?

Mahatma (haste huye)—pagle.. ! ye prashna to tu khud se puch, jo teri kimat hai, vahi tere prem ki kimat hai.

Adirishi—mahatma ji, apki baat meri samajh me nahi aayi...kripaya thoda saral shabdo me samjhaiye.

Mahatma—tu apne sharir se prem karta hai ki nahi.... ?

Adirishi—haan..karta hu.

Mahatma—to apne sharir ki kimat bata.... ?

Adirishi—kaisi baat karte hain munivar... ? iss sharir ke bina mera astitva hi kya hai... ? mere liye yah anmol hai, main isse nahi bech sakta..

Mahatma (haste huye)—yahi tere prashna ka uttar hai…prem bhi amulya hai…prem ki koi kimat nahi hoti… prem ka sauda nahi kiya ja sakta…jaha prem hota hai, vaha kuber ka khajana bhi khali pad jata hai…to phir tu kya cheez hai jo prem ki kimat chukayega….? Jis prem ki kimat hoti hai, vo prem nahi sauda hai.

Adirishi—main samajh gaya mahatma ji…mujhe mere prashna ka uttar mil gaya…mujhe agya de ab, pranam

Mahatma—tumhara kalyan ho

Adirishi (jate jate ruk kar)—agar aap bura na mane to kya main ek baat puch sakta hu….?

Mahatma (mushkura kar)—avashya pucho jo bhi puchna hai…?

Adirishi—ye brahma rakshas ya jinn kya sach me hote hain…? Aur kya vo yaha bhi rahte hain... ?

Mahatma—avashya hote hain...kintu vats, brahma rakshas aur jinn dono alag alag hain ..ek nahi hain dono.

Adirishi—lekin mere kuch dost to kahte the ki dono ek hain... ?

Mahatma—nahi putra ye satya nahi hai….brahma rakshas vastav me brahman ki aatma hoti hai jo janam to brahman kul me leti hai lekin bure aur patit karm karne lagti hai….tab lambe jeevan ke baad unhe rakshas yoni me bhatakna padta hai…iski vajah apni vidya ka galat prayog karna hai…brahman kul me kuch uchcha gyani insan ka janam isliye hota hai jisse vo dusro ko apne gyan se prashikshit kar sake, jab vo aisa nahi karte hain tab vo mrityu ke baad brahma rakshas ban jate hain….brahma rakshas banne ke baad unme gyan ka star utna hi rahta hai lekin vo insano ko khane lagte hain…dusre shabdo me unme brahman aur rakshas dono ke gun hote hain, isliye unhe brahma rakshas kaha jata hai….brahma rakshas me bahut shaktiya hoti hain aur bahut kam log hi inn par kabu pa sakte hain ya phir unhe iss yoni se mukti dila sakte hain…..Jabki Jinn chirag me bhi rahta hai..gufa me bhi rahta hai.. purane gharo aur khandahar me bhi rahta hai..aur usko koi bhi tantrik asani se apne kabze me kar ke bottle me band kar leta hai.

(As per Bhagwat Geeta Chapter 8)

Adirishi—to phir inko kaise niyantrit kiya ja sakta hai….?

Mahatma—inke paas apne brahman swaroop ka gyan aur tap hota hai jiski vajah se inhe niyantrit karna behad kathin hota hai…inhe kewal vahi niyantrit kar sakta hai jo usse adhik gyani hone ke sath sath jisne apni kundali jagrit kar li ho….dusra koi anya inhe niyantrit nahi kar sakta.

Adirishi—ye kaha rahte hain….?

Mahatma—ye kewal pipal ke ped me hi rahte hain….pipal ke alawa kisi dusre ped par ye nahi rah sakte kyon ki vo sab nimna shreni ke vriksh hote hain….jab koi uss pipal ke ped ko kaat deta hai jisme vo rahto ho, tabhi brahma rakshas uske upar kroadhit hota hai….yahi vajah hai ki jab bhi koi naya bhawan nirman ka karya prarambh hota hai to brahma rakshas ki pooja ki jati hai.

Adirishi—mahatma ji kya aap mujhe apna shishya swikar karenge….?

Jab koi jawab nahi aaya to adirishi ne piche mud ke dekha to vaha koi nahi tha…to vo vaha se chupchap apne ghar ke liye lout pada….chalte chalte jaise hi vo pahadi ke upar pipal ke paas pahucha vaise hi…..

 
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Hmmm mai yahi samjata ki brhmrakshas or jinn ek hi hai per aapki gyaan ne mere mastisk ko prakashit kar diya bhai


Apki story padne ka yahi ek advantage hai ki entertainment ke sath sath aap gyaan bi batte ho jo muje bahut bahut pasand hai sab koi story likhnewala aise likhe tho kitna acha rehta



Thank you yaar iss anmol update ke liye iss gyaan ko paane ke baad me danya hogaya aap hi mere guruji ho aaj se


Waise bi me south se hu tho muje hindi teek se nahi ati ti ab koi problum nahi ho gi muje hindi me thanks once again
 
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