Incest SAAJAN

[anandsngh12]

Bhai munshi premchand banna hai Kya ???
Mai is thread pe story padhne aaya ,,itne saare charachter hai dimaag ka dahi ho gya ,,time by time introduce krwana tha character ko ,,,,dusri baat sala hero Kon hai pta nhi ,,alag alag kitne family ko daal rakha h yaar ,,,,,by the way it's your story apne according chlao ,,mujhe itne pachde me nhi pdna ,,bye

First to welcome bhai
Apka hardik abhinandan hai
Ab aata hu apke review par, to bhai apka kahna sahi hai ki time by time introduce karana tha characters ko
Lekin ye meri pahli story hai isliye mujhe likhne ka kuch idea tha nahi ki kya sahi hai aur kya galat, uss samay jaisa samajh me aaya vaisa likhta chala gaya.
Jitne characters ko starting me introduce kiya gaya hai unka role hi vahi hai isliye unke bare me bataya gaya hai aur intro diya tha...baki ke character jaise ki veer ki entry jaha se huyi vaha uska intro diya hai
Kahani me hero to ek hi hai starting se hi aur story uske hi ird gird ghum rahi hai
Story me family bhi ek hi hai...haan family me character jarur jyada hain, lekin unka role apne apne samay par highlight hota rahta hai
Dost ho sakta hai ki shayad apki nazar me family ka arth kewal hum do hamare do se hi hai baki dada, dadi, chacha, chachi ke character ko apni family ke nahi mante hain aap...lekin meri soch thoda alag hai bhai...vo sab bhi ek hi family ka hissa hain
Ye basically saajan aur divya ki love story hai aur story ke yahi sabse main character hain
Secondary character me Pari aur priyadarshani hain
Kewal in char character par aap focus rakhenge to kahi bhi confuse nahi honge
Aage padhna ya na padhna dost apki ichcha hai
Shukriya bhai for this valueable review.

 

[KOHINOOR]

very nice update..par bahut chota tha.koi na kabi kabi chlta h..tahkhane m raj ko jo kagaj mile unme science ki jankari h.payal wali wohi ladki h jo payal ko dikhi thi.sab fir se usi kamre me pahuch gye.raj ne ye kya dekha..kya h inka matlab..bada hi ajib jeev hai ye to..jisne raj ko bi behosh kr diya..kahi tilsm ka jal to nhi h
waiting next update

 

[Fighter]

SAAJAN
UPDATE- 195 (Revised)​

Payal ki awaz ab kabhi idhar se to kabhi udhar se goonjne lagi....aisa lag raha tha ki jaise koi athakheliya kar raha ho har baar mujhe aisa mahsoos hota jaise koi mere paas khada hai.

Raj (chillate huye)—koun hai.... ? samne kyo nahi aati.... ?

Aur tabhi vaha ek madhur geet goonj utha jise sunte hi hum chounk gaye.....

“Upar Ambar Niche Dharti Beech Me hain Dil Ke Afsaane
Afsaano Me Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jane”

Ab Aage……

Ye geet ke bol sunte hi hum sab chounk gaye….geet me dard bahut tha….maine kayi baar awaz lagayi ki koun ga rahi hai..samne aaye kintu vo idhar se udhar ghum rahi thi.

Payal (shocked)—ye to vahi shayari hai…jiske piche hum yaha aaye hain.

Neha—lagta hai ki minakshi idhar hi hai…ab yaha kahi vo mombatti aur mil jaye to uss sawal ka jawab poora ho jayega aur hum minakshi tak pahuch jayenge.

Achanak vo geet band ho gaya aur payal ki jhankar andhere me chhan chhan kar aati rahi…har baar mujhe aisa mahsoos hota jaise ki koi mere bilkul paas me khada hai.

Neha (cheekh kar)—aaahhhhh

Raj—kya hua….?

Neha—kisi ne mere piche jor se nakhun se chimti kaati.

Paridhi—aap bhi na mummy...ek to vaise hi hum iss bhutiya qile me darr rahe hain aur aap aur bhi dara rahi ho.

Payal—aaaaaaa

Raj—ab kya hua...... ?

Payal—kisi ne jor se mere kaan marode.

"S....a...a...j...a....n" kisi ne mere kaan me dhire se kaha to main bhi chounk gaya aur jaise palta to vaha koi nahi tha.. par nazar koi na aaya.

Aur ek baar phir se payal ki chhan...chhan karne ki awaz vaha goonjne lagi....tabhi vo chhan chhan ki awaz karib aati gayi aur jaise hi mujhe laga ki vo ab mere bagal me hi hai to turant maine usko pakadne ke liye hath badhaya ki vo awaz mujhse door ho gayi.

Hum kafi der tak uska picha karte huye bhatakte rahe....lekin kuch fayda nahi hua.....akhir me maine achanak se apni mani ka prakash vaha phaila diya....

Prakash phailte hi hum sab chounk gaye.….hum jaha khade the vaha phool hi phool bikhre huye the....main abhi kuch aur sochta ki achanak payal didi jor se cheekh uthi.

Payal (jor se)—rajjjjjj...vo...v..o

Raj—kya hua ab.... ?

Payal (darte huye)—maine...abhi vaha...ussi ladki ko dekha....vaha....vo yahi hai....

Sab ke sath main bhi chounk gaya...lekin phir jyada dhyan nahi diya ye soch kar ki aisi jagaho par iss tarah ki ghatnao ka hona koi hairat ki baat nahi hai.

Raj—come on didi....maine pahle bhi bataya hai na ki ye jagah kaisi hai.... ? phir usme itna pareshan kyo ho rahi ho aap.... ? balki main to khush hu ki uske geet se mujhe meri manzil karib nazar aane lagi hai.

Neha—vo kaise….?

Divya—vo aise chachi ki…iss shayari aur mombatti ka aapas me gahra sambandh hai…ye geet yaha sunayi diya iska matlab ki minakshi tak pahuchne ka rasta yahi se ho kar niklega aur shayad iss tilism ko todne ke baad hi hame vo rasta milega.

Raj—par hame iss tilism ko todne ka rasta to talash karna hoga…..lekin mujhe lagta hai ki sabse pahle hame yaha se juda itihas janna chahiye …bina uski jankari ke tilism ko tod pana bahut mushkil hoga.

Saloni—to chalo..apni talash aage badhate hain.

Raj—hmmmm…chalo…inn sidhiyo se chalte hain…dekhte hain kya milta hai….?

Dhool se sani tuti footi sidhiya chadhte samay dahshat se par fadfadate huye hamare kano ko chhu kar koi nikal gaya jisse sab darr se ghabra gayi.

Uss mlaan nistabdh qile me mujhe vichitra anubhuti ho rahi thi….dhool se bhare pade, patthar aur toote phoote sidhiyo par ghumte huye har kshan yahi lag raha tha ki rundhi huyi hawa ke beech koi dhire dhire hamare sath chal raha hai aur ateet ke jeern sheern kale parde ko ughar dega …..aur sahaj hi me iss darawne andhiyare vatavaran me mann prano ko ek bargi stambhit kar dega,

Abhi hum qile ke aangan me ghum rahe the ki tabhi meri nazar kisi gupt tahkhane me jane ke liye ek chote se darwaje par padi.

Raj—lagta hai ki yaha koi tahkhana hai….chalo dekhte hain

Neha—mujhe to darr lag raha hai

Payal—to aap yahi ruk kar hamare vapis loutane tak intazar karo.

Neha—nnn..nahi…nahi…main bhi sath me chalungi.

Hum darwaje ke andar aa gaye…vaha niche jane ke liye chakkar daar sidhiya thi….pahle niche utarne me sab ko darr avashya laga lekin mere utarte hi sab sahas kar ke fatafat mere piche piche utarne lagi.

Karib 8-10 sidhiya utarne ke baad mujhe kafi lamba chouda ek kamra mila….main dekhne ke liye uss kamre me ghus gaya…seelan aur badbu se bhara tha poora kamra.

Divya (naak daba ke)—kitni badbu hai yaha….

Payal—chal jaldi bahar niklo yaha se nahi to iss badbu se hi marr jayenge.

Raj—sab naak band kar lo ya kuch der bahar wait karo…main thodi talashi to le lu iss kamre ki…sab darwaje ke paas ja kar khadi ho gayi.

Main kamre ko bariki se dekhne laga….ek kone me lohe ka ek sandook rakha hua tha….lagbhag saat foot lamba, char foot ooncha aur lagbhag utna hi chouda tha vah….usme lock laga tha.

Maine gour se uss lock ko dekha to usme chabi se kholne ke liye koi jagah nahi thi…maine kayi prayas kiye kintu kamyabi nahi mili….akhir me maine mani ki shakti se uss lock ko tod diya.

Na jane kis prerna ke vashibhut ho kar maine uss box ka bhari bharkam dhakkan khol diya maine…..dhakkan khulte hi badbu ka ek tez jhonka bahar nikal kar phail gaya…uss badbu se sab ka jee machla utha to darwaje se bahar ho gayi.

Payal—uuuu….ye kya haiii…..?

Neha—mujhe to ulti hone wali hai

Divya—yahi bahar se dekhte hain…andar rukne ki himmat nahi hai ab.

Maine uss box ke andar dekha to usme taambe aur pital ki lagbhag do foot ki teen char pipes thi…..unn pipes me dhakkan lage huye the.

Unn dono pipes ko maine utha liya aur bahar aa kar khola to dekha ki usme kagaz jaise patle tambe ke patro par kisi agyat bhasa me koi pandu lipi thi….kul mila kar usme tamra patro ki sankhya chalis thi.

Neha—ye kya hai…?

Divya—chachi inko tamra patra kahte hain…..pahle ke jamane me inke upar hi likha jata tha kuch bhi.

Payal—par inme likha kya hai…? Koun si bhasa hai ye….?

Raj—yah kafi mulyavan aur ati durlabh sampatti hai.....ye pali bhasa se ek milti julti ek vishesh bhasa hai, inn pandu lipiyo ki aaj se lagbhag 500 varsh pahle ek prantiya bhasa thi.

Paridhi—kya likha hai inme..... ?

Raj—aayurved tantra ke antargat ras rasayan ke anek durlabh siddhanto aur unn siddhanto ke aadhar par anek rasaynik prayogo ka savistar varnan kiya gaya hai.

Payal—inme khas baat kya hai…..?

Raj—ab ye to inko padhne ke baad hi malum chalega…..ab chalo aur aage chalte hain

Hum vaha se aage badh gaye….kuch sidhiya aur niche utarne par do kamre dikhayi diye vaha….maine ek kamre ko chun kar uske andar ghus gaye…aur chalte chalte ussi kamre me pahuch gaye jaha kuch der pahle payal didi ne vo drishya dekha tha.

Payal—arey…ye to vahi kamra hai….?

Raj—hmmmmm

Tabhi maine nazar ghuma kar piche ki taraf khidki me dekha to vaha vo shisha phir se apni jagah par fit ho gaya tha jisko ki kuch der pahle maine niche gira diya tha.,,magar kuch dekh kar main chounk gaya.

Khidki ke bahar tez roshni thi……jaise ki din hi ho aur tez roshni me mujhe khidki se bahar thode se fasle par ek vistrat maidan dikhalayi diya.

Maidan ke ek oor kayi tope, jinka muh akash ki oor tha, ek katar me rakhi huyi thi……magar unn topo ko dagne ke liye vaha koi nahi tha…magar kuch hi pal ke baad vo tope swayam apne aap hi aag ugalne lagi.

Unme se kala sa dhua nikal kar maidan ke charo taraf phail gaya......thodi der baad hi maidan ke paas ki oonchi imarto me ek visfot hua aur aag tatha neele ranga ka dhua akash me chha gaya.

Phir achanak tope shant ho gayi aur vo dhua bhi adrishya ho gaya……aur uss maidan me antariksh se ek badi si hilti dulti vartulakar tashtari aati dikhayi dene lagi.

Pahle to main ye samajh hi nahi paya ki ye udan tashtari hai…..neele aas maan me ek lal taare jaisi dikhayi de rahi thi vo……bilkul mangal tare jaisi.

Pahle yahi vichar mere mann me aaya, par jab vah paas aane lagi to yakin ho gaya ki vah mangal tara nahi hai…aur nazdik aane par main samjh gaya ki ye udan tashtari hai.

Vah tashtari kuch hi kshan me maidan me utar kar sthir ho gayi……vo neele rang ki thi….samne ki oor ati tivra gati se ek pankha chal raha tha, jisme se aag ki halki halki lapte hawa ke sath nikal rahi thi…achanak uske bagal ka darwaja khula aur usme se jo nikla usko dekh kar main hairan rah gaya…..shakal itni bhayanak ki agar koi dekh le to vaise hi bina poison piye hi mar jayega.

Kisi bhi jivit prani se uski koi samanta nahi thi…..kaddu jaisa gol aur bada sa matha, kafi ooncha lalat, teen badi badi ankhe, ek lalat me aur do agal bagal thi.

Naak to thi hi nahi….ekdam sapat tha, mathe ke niche ka hissa…..sirf ek muh tha aur vo bhi ek lambe faank jaisa… kano ki jagah do bade bade nariyal lage huye the….aur unhi ke paas se foot dedh foot lambe baalo ki jataye upar ki oor nikli huyi thi….bilkul kisi jhingur ke muchho ki tarah.

Gala nahi tha balki gale ki jagah ek hath hi tha…..uske agal bagal hatho ke panjo me barah barah ungliya thi…..aur kafi lambe lambe nakhun the.

Uss vilakshan prani ke sharir par kapde the ya nahi ya uske sharir ka gathan hi iss prakar ka tha, yah samajh pana kathin hi tha…karan ki yadi vah kapde pahne tha to uske kapde uske badan se ekdam chipte huye the.

Chhati aur pet ka aakaar nagade jaisa tha…..aur teen pair the uske….piche ke ek pair par khade ho kar samne ke dono pair utha kar usne ek chhalang li to 40 – 50 foot ka fasla paar kar liya.

Ek chhalang le kar aur pichla pair tek kar usne phir se chhalang lagayi..iss tarah vah poore maidan me koodta phirta raha.

Iske baad vah sidhe meri taraf aaya aur pahle apni dono ankho se mujhe dekhta raha….phir mathe par ka teesra netra khula uska….atyant tivra prakash ki kiran jaisi nikli uski teesri ankh se….aur phir meri ankho ke samne andhera chha gaya.

Tad tad aur phir jhann ki awaz huyi…mere seene me dard sa uthne laga aur phir cheekh maar kar main behosh hota chala gaya.




Sorry Friends, Jitna Abhi Tak Likh Paya Utna Post Kar Raha Hu...Main Koshish Karunga Iss Story Ko Daily Update Karne Ki.

Super & Jabardast & Gajab update bro

Y kya bhoot b majak krne lga ya fir raj k kavach k karan unhen jyada asar nhi huaa ?

Ek baat clear ko bro raj ka chehra milta h sajan se ya nhi kyoki y jo bhoot h vo use sajan bul rhi h to rajguru raj ka chehra dekh fir kyo nhi pahachan paye ya fir unhhonne kabi raj & divya ko dekha hi nhi sirf vo kahaniya hi sune h ?

Or bro kya raj ki power uski body vajar ki hone k alava or kuch h use kyoki yaha b usne mani ka sahara liya h .

Y jo aatma h iski shakti b kam nhi h y to pta chal gya kyoki n y mani ki roshni me dikh rhi or na raj ki power active krne pr

To ab sb ko manjil sa rasta to mil hi gya aakhir ab dekhte h kis tarh usko par krta h raj .

Sala y room to tilsam ki suruaat ka ek namuna lg rha or niche aane pr b badbu itni lgta h is tilsam m badbu se marne ka hi h or dar b mast h

Y tamar patra pr kya h jo raj ne btaya h vo un sbi k hi nhi bro mere b upr se gyi h lekin kamaal h .

Ab y bagiche me y naya , bada khatrnak or ajib jeev kon h or y abi kyo aaye h .


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[anandsngh12]

Update abhi likh raha hu.
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[Iron Man]

Update abhi likh raha hu.
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Ok Anand Bhai
Intzar rhega update ka

 

[Mr.X796]

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[Rohan008]

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intzaar rhega bhai

 

[King of light]

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Waiting bhai

 

[Riyansh]

Mast update he bhai fantastic

 

[anandsngh12]

SAAJAN
UPDATE- 196​

Iske baad vah sidhe meri taraf aaya aur pahle apni dono ankho se mujhe dekhta raha….phir mathe par ka teesra netra khula uska….atyant tivra prakash ki kiran jaisi nikli uski teesri ankh se….aur phir meri ankho ke samne andhera chha gaya.

Tad tad aur phir jhann ki awaz huyi…mere seene me dard sa uthne laga aur phir cheekh maar kar main behosh hota chala gaya

Ab Aage……..

Mere behosh hote hi mani ki roshni bhi band ho gayi….sath hi mere behosh hone ke karan unke upar mere dwara banaya gaya suraksha kawach bhi khandit ho gaya…..uss kamre me ek baar phir se andhera chha gaya…mere aise cheekh kar behosh ho jane se sab ghabra gayi…upar andhere aur anjan jagah ka darr alag.

Payal (ghabrate huye)—rajjj….kya huaaa….? Tujhe kya hua….uth na….rajjj….tu cheekha kyo….? Ye andhera kyo ho gaya…? Doctor dekho na…kya ho gaya hai mere raj ko….? Rajjj uth na.

Divya (hilate huye)—saajann…kyaaa huaaa…utho naaa…kisne kiya hai ye….samne kyo nahi aata…bujdil kahi ka….? Saajan utho…kya maine sadiyo se isliye intazar kiya hai ki har baar tum mujhe chhod kar chale jao…? Iss baar main aisa nahi hone dungi……samajh gaye na…..tumhe meri khatir uthna hoga…..saajan tumhe apni divya ke liye uthna hoga.

Paridhi (nam ankho se)—rajjj…kya ho gaya…mummy dekho na mere rajj ko kya hua hai…ye kuch bol kyo nahi raha hai….kya meri qurbani bekar chali jayegi….? Nahi..nahi..aisa nahi ho sakta

Neha—rajj…kya hua beta….uth na….dekh agar tu hi aise karega to hum sab ka kya hoga…..koun sambhalega hame yah hame to sirf tera hi bharosa hai.

Saloni—aap log shanti rakho…raj ko kuch nahi hoga….dekhna jaldi hi uthega vo…raj ko maarna itna asan nahi hai kisi ke liye…shayad thakan ke karan aisa hua hoga

Sabhi buri tarah se ghabra chuke the….unki ankho me nami utar aayi thi….lekin sabse jyada ghabrahat payal didi aur paridhi ko ho rahi thi……neha bhi pareshan thi…..halanki ghabra to divya bhi gayi thi kintu jaise hi usko guru maa aur devi laxmi ki baate smaran huyi to uski ghabrahat kuch kam ho gayi thi lekin phir bhi raj ko dard me mahsoos kar ke uske seene me bhi taklif ho rahi thi.

Tabhi neha chachi jor jor se cheekhne lagi…..ek baar phir se vahi payal bajne aur kisi ladki ke hasne ki awaz aas paas me sab ko sunayi dene lagi….sab darr se kampne lagi.

Neha (cheekhte huye)—aaaaaaaaa….bachaooooo….rajjjjjj…..aaaaaaaa…….koi mere pair pakad ke mujhe ghasit raha hai…aaaaaaaaa

“Chhan….chhan…chhan…..chhan……hihihihihihihi”

Paridhi—mummyyyyy…..aap kaha hoooooo…..?

Payal—chachiiiiiii……?

Divya—chachiiiii…..aap bolti kyo nahiiiiiiii……..?

Neha—(koi jawab nahi)

Sab ne aas paas tatol kar dekha lekin neha ka kahi koi pata nahi tha……ab to sab ki halat bahut jyada kharab hone lagi thi……sab rajjjjj….rajjjj…chillate huye andhere me mujhe tatolne lagi.

Tabhi ek baar phir se vahi payal ki goonj sunayi dene lagi…..payal aur paridhi ek dusre se chipak gayi darte huye… kyon ki andhera hone ke karan mujhe dhoondh hi nahi pa rahi thi….lekin main unhe kahi nahi mila…to unki dasha par kate pakshi ki tarah ho gayi.

“Chhan….chhann…chhan…chhann…chhannn”

Paridhi (darte huye)—kkkkkk…..koun hai yaha…….?

‘’Hihihihihihihihihihihi......chhan......chhann...chhan...chhan’’

Paridhi (chillate huye)—aaaaaaaaaaaa.......raajjjjjjjjjj......mummyyyy.......rajjjjj...bachaaoooooo....koi mujhe bhiii pair pakad kar ghasit raha hai......aaaaaaaa.....raaajjjjjjjj

Payal (jor se)—paridhiiiiiiiiiiiii.......rajjjj uthooooo......nahi to hum sab maare jayenge yahaaaa....paridhiiiii

Divya—didiiiiiiiiiiiii

Paridhi—(no response)

‘’Chhan...chhan....chhan...hihihihihihi’’

Payal (rote chillate)—raaaaajjjjjjj.......bachaaaooooooooo......raaaajjjjjjjjjj.....aaaaaaaa.....koi mujhe bhi ghasit raha hai...rajjj

Divya—didiiiiiiiiii.......saajannnnn....uthoooooo....saajannnnnn

Saloni—payallllllll

Payal ka bhi koi jawab nahi aaya.....ab to divya aur saloni bhi buri tarah se dahshat aur khauf ke saaye me doob chuki thi....dono baar baar sabhi ko awaz laga rahi thi lekin kisi ki taraf se koi bhi prattuttar nahi aa raha tha.... agar kuch sunayi de rahi thi to sirf kisi ke payal ki ghungharoo ki awaz aur uski dil dahla dene wali bhayanak hasi.

Jaise hi ye awaz paas aane lagi to divya aur saloni bhi ghabra kar yaha vaha andhere me bhagne lagi....divya mera naam lekar chillaye ja rahi thi to saloni bhi.....par dono ko ye pata nahi tha ki vo ek hi jagah par bhag rahi hai... ek kadam bhi vaha se nahi bhag payi thi jabki unhe lag raha tha ki vo bhagte huye door nikal aayi hain kamre se.

‘’Hihihihihi.....bhago....aur tez....aur tez.....hihihihihihihi....Ek baar aane ke baad koi yaha se kahi nahi bhag sakta...hihihi’’

Divya (chillate huye—saajaannnnnnnn

Saloni—rajjjjjjjj.....aaaaaa......mujhe bhi koi ghasitttt raha haiiii....aaaaaaaa

Par ab ki baar kuch alag hua......saloni ki cheekh ke sath ek cheekh aur bhi vaha goonj uthi....dusri cheekh uski thi jo saloni ko ghasit raha tha ya rahi thi.

Aur dusri cheekh ki vajah ye thi ki jo bhi saloni ko ghasit rahi thi....dard se cheekhte huye achanak saloni ki ankho se aag nikalne lagi....jaise hi vo aag ghasitne wale ke upar padi to uski bhi cheekh nikal gayi jabki divya ye dekh kar stabdh rah gayi.

Divya (shocked)—koun ho tum.... ? tum doctor nahi ho sakti... ? koun ho…?

Saloni—mere baare me saajan ko pata hai…pahle isse to nipat lu.

‘’Ohhhh...to tu mujhe takkar dena chahti hai…..ab dekh main tera kya haal karti hu’’

Saloni (jor se)—koun hai tu...... ?....baki logo ka kya kiya tune....jaldi bata warna tere liye achcha nahi hoga

Magar jawab dene ki jagah usne bhi aag ka jawab aag se dena shuru kar diya...lekin uss aag ki roshni me jo chehra nazar aaya vo bada hi bhayanak tha...divya ke to hath pair hi dheele pad gaye.

Lekin saloni bhi jyada der tak uska samna nahi kar payi.....aur akhir kuch der baad uski bhi cheekhe goonjne lagi aur uska bhi vahi haal hua jo baki ka hua tha.

Divya akeli asahay saajan ko ghabrate huye phir se tatol tatol kar andhere me khojne lagi aur sath me roti bhi ja rahi thi...tab tak saloni ko thikane lagane ke baad vo phir se payal chhankati huyi uske hasne ki awaz paas me sunayi dene lagi.

‘’Hihihihihi...chhan...chhan....chhann....ab tu bhi cheekh....bachaoo...bachaaooo....cheekh...hihihihihihi’’

Divya (darr se chillate huye)—dekho...mere paas nahi aana....door raho mujhse.....saajan tumhe chhodega nahiii

‘’Saajannnn....hhihihihihi...vo to kabbbb kaa marrr chukaaa...hihihihi...ab teri bari hai’’

Divya (chillate huye)—saajan ko maar sake aisi teri aukat nahi.

Aur agle hi pal kroadhit ho kar usne jaise hi divya ko ghasitne ke liye usko hath lagaya hi tha ki usse aisa jabardast jhatka laga ki vo uss aakashiya bijli ke jhatke se phisalti huyi aur dard se cheekhti na jane kaha aur kitni door ja kar giri.

Divya andhere me mera naam le kar har taraf mujhe dhoondhne lagi.....idhar mere behosh hone ke baad meri ankho ke samne kuch drishya baar baar jhilmilane lage.

Meri ankho ke samne ek kamra dikha jisme bahut sara saman rakha hua hai, uske baad raj sabha ka drishya dikhayi diya.....sabha ke beecho beech latakta hua ek tarazu nazar aaya aur phir uske baad mata mahakali ki ek pratma dikhayi dene lagi.

Ye sab drishya meri ankho ke samne baar baar jaldi jaldi ghum aur badal rahe the...ant me ek tahkhana nazar aaya aur uss tahkhane ke andar ek darwaja dikha....jaise hi vo darwaja khula ki tabhi.......

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Dusri taraf yaha ghar me mamta ko hosh to aa gaya tha lekin vo phir se jaldi hi behosh ho gayi thi dubara...aise me doctors ne unhe hospital me admitt karne ke liye kaha.

Doctor—dekhiye...ye abhi hi to coma se bahar aayi thi...aise me kisi bhi tarah ka sadma inko phir se coma me le ja sakta hai...inka baar baar behosh hona theek nahi hai....behtar yahi hoga ki mrs. Thakur ko hospital me rakha jaye jaha 24 hrs. Doctors ki nazar rahegi inki condition par.

Veer—theek hai doctor...jaisa aap theek samjhe

Mamta ko turant hospital admitt kar diya gaya….ghar ke lagbhag sabhi log hospital me moujud the…..siwaye vidhya aur chanchal ke.

Vidhya to uske baad se apne room se bahar hi nahi nikli thi, pata nahi kis soch me doobi huyi thi jabki chanchal mamta ke hospital le jate hi sidhe ek mandir ke bahar dharne par baith gayi thi.

Halanki Raat hone ki vajah se mandir ke darwaje band the….tathapi vo bahar hi baith kar upar wale se prarthana karne me lag gayi thi.

Chanchal (rote huye mann me)—hey bhagwan….meri maa ko theek kar do…..ye sab mere hi paapo ka dund hai jo aaj unhe bhugatna pad raha hai….mere hi kadam manhoos hain….mujhe paida hi kyo kiya bhagwan tune….? Mere kadam uss mandir me padte hi vaha gum ke badal chha gaye hain….bas ek baar meri maa ko theek kar do bhagwan aur mere raj ko jindagi ki har khushi dena….main aaj ke baad kabhi apni manhoos shakal kisi ko nahi dikhaungi…bahut door chali jaungi sab ki zindagi se.

Vahi hospital me doctor barabar mamta ka check up karne me lage huye the…mamta ko VIP ward me shift kiya gaya tha…doctor ke mana karne ke bavjud sab andar ghus gaye the…..jo doctor chair par baithe huye mamta ko check kar raha tha uske sir me baal nahi the ye dekh kar mrinal ke hath me khujli hone lagi thi…jo ki doctor se thoda hat ke khadi thi.

Doctor ke agal bagal ruchi aur veer khade the..veer ke baju me mrinal khadi thi….usne ek baar sab ki taraf dekha aur phir piche se hath le ja kar chatttt se doctor ke sir me maar diya.

Mrinal (mann me)—hmmmmm…..bajta hai….maza aa gaya….ek baar aur baja kar dekhti hu.

Iss achanak maar se doctor chakra gaya aur usne charo taraf dekha lekin sabhi ka dhyan mamta ki oor tha….usne ek baar veer ko ghur kar dekha aur phir se ilaz karne me lag gaya apne sir me hath ferte huye.

Jaise hi usne sir se hath hataya vaise hi mrinal ne ek baar phir se uske takle par chatt se maar diya lekin ab ki baar jara jor se hath pad gaya…jiski awaz bhi sab ko sunayi de gayi.

Doctor apne takle ko sahlate huye baukhla kar khada ho gaya aur veer ko gusse se dekhne laga…