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Update:-26
Kuchh haalat bayan nahi kiye ja sakte, lekin dilon ki bhavna chhipye nahi chhipti. Sia jab 10th me gayi thi tab Som school chhod raha tha. Haan Som thoda sunischit tha, kyonki Sia apne kuchh juniors ke sath kafi time spend kiya karti thi. Wo log Sia ke dil ke kafi karib the.
Yun to Som aur Sia ke bich video call hoti rahti thi lekin 8 sal ka waqt ho gaya tha aamne samne mile. Haan in 8 salon me kuchh mulakat hui thi jisme sabse lambi mulakat Sia ke 12th baad UK nikalne ke waqt ki thi jab Som, Sia aur unke dad Anurag teeno Delhi airport par mile the.
Jab se India lauti thi tab se bus sab se milne ke liye bechain thi. Haan lekin ye bhi tha ki wo har kisi se milne Som ke sath hi jati. Ye dono me tay ho chuka tha. Bich me Diksha ki shadi aa gayi aur dono ke milne me takriban 15-20 din ka gape ho gaye...
Vyas aur uske doston se mulakat ke baad Sia laut kar jab aayi tab sab se pahle Som se uski baat chit hui. Issi bich uske dad Anurag Malhotra bhi waitng me aa gaye...
Sia, Som ko bye kahti hui Anurag ko line par lee... Thoda gusse se unhe ghurti... "Dad what is this?"
Anurag:- Nothing my sweetheart. Kya hua hai jo meri ladli itne gusse me..
Sia:- Dad, at least you should come..
Anurag:- So I am the culprit one.. kisne mujhe mana kiya tha aane se...
Sia:- Sorry dad... Aap to UK aate rahte the. Main sochi Som ke sath main hi aaungi. Wo bhi aapko bahut miss karta hai...
Anurag:- He is a big boy. Uski chinta itni mat karo. My little angel pareshan achhi nahi dikhti..
Sia:- Ya I know dad, he is a big boy. Lekin emotions ye baat nahi samjhte na. Abhi uske bina achha nahi lag raha. I wish main Diksha ki shadi me ja sakti..
Anurag:- Shadi ke baad uske sasural chali jana. Don't be upset Sia… ..
Sia:- Dad aap kab aa rahe ho...
Anurag:- Tommorow..
Sia:- No..
Anurag:- Ab kisne roka..
Sia:- Main nahi chahti mere hero apna kaam chhod kar aaye. Kaam se free ho kar kab tak aa sakte ho. Aur kam se kam hafte din..
Aunrag:- Sure to nahi hun lekin 2 se 3 month baad September or October me..
Sia:- I am desperately waiting dad. By the way pahle se kafi handsome lag rahe ho. Did you propose Archna Sahay..
Anurag:- Ha ha ha, nahi maine to nahi kiya lekin wo kar chuki hai..
Sia:- No way, aap jhuth bol rahe hain?
Anurag:- Thik hai jaisa tum socho wahi sahi..
Sia:- Dadddd
Anurag:- Siaaa..
Sia:- Dad sach-sach bolo na...
Anurag:- Som ne to tumhe khinch kar lagaya nahi hoga. Mujhe Lata ko ye kaam dena hoga..
Sia:- Diksha ki shadi me to aap bhi nahi ja rahe honge.
Anurag:- Diksha ne khud mana kar diya. Usne mujhe tum dono ke sath bulaya hai..
Sia:- Fir aapne kya kaha..
Anurag:- Aree beti hai wo bhi meri. Main aane se pahle inform kar dunga. Tum aur Som Delhi chale aana. Hum bina waqt ganwaye Diksha ke pass chalenge...
Sia:- Good idea Dad, achha wo paise bhijwa diye the.
Aunrag:- Haan bhijwa diya hai. One more thing Sia..
Sia:- Yes Dad,
Anurag:- Maine ek ladke ki detail bheji thi. Mujhe ladka pasand hai..
Sia:- Ho gaya..
Aunrag:- Listen me sweetheart..
Sia:- You listen me Dad... I am happy..
Anurag:- But I am not... Khud se koi pasand ho to wo batao, nahi to iss se ek baar mil to lo...
Sia:- No means no, understood..
Anurag:- Ziddi..
Sia:- Daddd
Anurag:- Lagta hai jab marta rahunga tab last wish me...
Sia:- Ha ha ha ha... Thik se decide kar lo last wish me kiski shadi pahle dekhni hai... Don't be upset dad. Aap ko kanyadan karne ka poora mauka milega, Mr. Malhotra. Bus mujhe thoda waqt de do mentally prepared hone aur ek orphan ko dhundhne me...
Anurag:- Not again Sia. Diksha ki bhi to shadi ho rahi hai. Hum itne salon se screen par hi mil rahe, kya ho gaya..
Sia:- Chilla kyon rahe ho dad... Ek kosis karne do, nahi to jaisa aap chahte ho waisa hi hoga.. chalo smile karo.
Anurag:- Haan mujhe hi sikha le beta. Na to tum orphane ki talash me ho na hi kisi aur ke. Tum dono (Som & Sia) logon ko dur se hi namaskar kyon kar lete ho..
Sia:- Thik hai sadak par chali jati hun aur sabko pakad kar le aati hun. Kahti hun chalo ghar me chay pilati hun...
Anurag:- I wish you could do that..
Sia:- Dad sometimes you talk like f00l.
Anurag:- Maaf karo mujhe aur apna gussa shant kar lo. I am sorry..
Sia:- Thik se mafi maango... Aur ye kisi ka jabardasti apnapan mujhe achha nahi lagta.
Anurag:- Ok beta samajh gaya. Ab main rakhta hun. Gotta go... Khyal rakhna apna..
Sia:- You too day.. love you..
Anurag:- Love you too beta..
Apne dad aur Som se baat karne ke baad Sia, Diskha aur Mishra family se connect hui. Dono ke bich bhi kafi lambi baten chalti rahi. Baton ke dauran kayi baar Som ka jikr aaya jahan Sia to kuchh nahi batayi, haan lekin Diksha ne khud hi kah diya.… "Som bhi nahi hi aayega".. ..
Haalanki Sia aur Lata Mishra ko pata tha ki Som, Diksha ki shadi me ja raha hai, lekin Diksha se uske khubsurat lamhe ko Sia kaise chhin sakti thi. Jab kisi khas dil ke karibi ke aane ki koi ummid nahi thi, fir bhi wo pahunch gaya.
Ek khubsurat raat, jo kafi sukoon bhadi aur Sia ke chehre par muskaan banaye rakhi. Agli subah ek Khushnuma subah thi. Sia taiyar ho kar college ke liye nikal gayi. Campus aur wahan ka invironment to badhiya tha, lekin canteen ki coffee me Sia ko maza nahi aa raha tha. Wo 2 time yahan coffee pine aati aur dono baar complaint kar hi deti.
Uss din jab Sia college gayi tab parking ke aage medical section me usse ek aur canteen dikh gayi. Sia ne tay kar liya aaj yahan ki coffee wo pi kar dekhegi. Apne pahle class ke baad Sia ussi canteen me pahunchi aur ek cup coffee ka order de di. Kafi aaschrya tha iss canteen me. Yahan kewal aur kewal medical students hi aate the.
Sia coffee ka pahla sip lee aur dil khush ho gaya. Abhi wo dusra sip le hi rahi thi tabhi samne se kucch medical students chale aa rahe the...
Ek ladki:- What's your name..
"Sia..."
Ladki:- Medical student..
Sia:- No..
Ladki:- Bahut badhiya... Dear friends humare bich ek non medical student baithi hai. Swagat to karo...
Takriban 20 students Sia ke aage khade ho gaye... "Koi baat nahi hai, isse allowed kar dete hain"… Table par rakhe phool me se 1 phool nikal kar wo ladka Sia ke ore aage badhate huye kahne laga...
Uske sath wala dusra ladka bhi phool badhate huye... "Haan isse allowed kar dete hain Nisha"
Nisha:- Captain yahan tumhari jaroorat hai.
Captain final year student tha aur Nisha ka boyfriend. Poore campus me 8-10 terror the jisme ek naam captain ka bhi tha. Captain Amarnath Chaudhry, theth Haryanvi.… "Kya hua Nisha baby"
Nisha:- Kisi ladki ko dekh kar humare 2 sitare fail ho gaye aur ye miss medical student nahi hai..
Captain:- Aisa hai kya? Kyon miss idhar kaise bhatakti hui aa gayi... Bahar dekhi na likha hua tha, only for medical students..
Sia:- Ek cup coffee pine ke liye board dekhna hoga kya? Aap logon ko jyada issue hai to management se shikayat kar sakte hain..
Captain:- Na chhodi to kayde kanoon batiya rahi hai. Sun chhodi yahan hum hi management hai. Le khud se hi shikayat kiye deta hun... "Captain saar, ek non medical student coffee shop me aa gayi hai"… "Thik hai ja, chhodi ko ek sahi sabak de kar usse samjha de, yahan non medical student ke aane ka kya parinam hota hai?"
Sia, chup chap inka tamasha dekh rahi thi. Captain ek kadam aage badha. Sia apne cup ko table par rakhti... "Main PhD ki student hun. Tumhari senior"
Captain:- O senior, yahan sirf hum hi hote hain baki andu jhandu ko hum nahi jante. Chal ek kiss kar de mere iss dost ko, aur dobara dikhna mat.
Sia:- Yadi maine kiss nahi kiya aur dobara dikh gayi to...
Captain:- Fir tu campus me kisi ko na dikhegi…
Sia:- Fine mr Captain. So u want mess with me. Bus 2 min sun lo, uske baad jo karna hoga aage tumhari marji... Bhaiya ek coffee lana 2 minute baad.. So... Mr Captain, main jara apne bare me bata dun..
Sia itna kah kar apne bag se ek rumal nikal lee. Rumal ko hath par lapeti aur table par lagatar punch karti hui samne uss captain ke aankhon me dekhti... "Main pichhle 10 sal se ye punching practice kar rahi hun. Ye punch main koi bhi kaam karte aur kisi bhi surface par chala sakti hun. Tum 5 ladke mujhe mil kar marne aaoge... Main kisi ek ko pakad kar aisa marungi ki uski haalat mujh se jyada kharab hogi. Ek ladki ko 5 ladke marne aaye. Iss campus me baat phail jayegi. Upar se uss ladki ne ek ko pakad kar hospitalized kar diya. Iss campus ki public figure main hi rahungi."
"Aur kahin galti se tumne apne in fuljhariyon ko bhej diya to south ka action hoga. Mere ek punch ko jhelne ki aukad nahi hogi inki. Charo ore ye chhuyi-muyi doctors ground me bichhi hui hogi. Kyon na tum sab mujhe apna senior aur special case maan lo. Main chup chap yahan aa kar coffee piyungi aur chalti banugi. Oh 2 min khatam ho gaye. Thank you bhaiya. Aap ke yahan ki coffee bahut mazedar hai. Ek mere junior captain ko bhi pilaeye. Baitho junior..
Captain:- It's ok senior. Lekin dusre ko mat le aana senior apna dab daba kam jayega…
Sia:- Don't worry junior ab main bhi to team me hun...
Captain:- Senior kya tum boxer ho..
Sia:- No, main ek student hun... Tumhari tarah.. tum sab ko bhi coffee pini hai kya?
Captain:- Thanks senior... Koi baat nahi aap lo...
Captain Amarnath apne doston ke sath bahar aaya. Uski Gf Nisha usse ghurti hui abhi ke bare me puchhne lagi... Captain usse kahne laga... "Wo maar-pit karne ko taiyar thi. Ab kya ye din aa gaye ki ek ladki ko hum ladke maarte. Hum haryanviyon ki kuchh izzat hai ki nahi. Gaanv me khabar phail jati to log thuu thuu karte. Upar se kahin usne mujhe pakad kar dho diya hota to"..
Nisha:- Kyon ek ladki se jit na pate kya?..
Captain:- Wo 10 sal se traning kar rahi hai. Usse kitne bhi ladkon se bhidne me koi dar na tha. 10 hum marte to bhi log ye na kahte ki wo ladki pit kar aa gayi… Lekin jis hisab ki practice hai uski, wo bhid me se bhi kewal ek ko hi marti. Jise marti uska muh ya naak fatna tay tha. Ufff kya embarrassing moment hota. Chhodi poori dil se Haryanvi hai, isliye uske liye sath khoon maaf. Wo mari senior main uska junior...
Nisha:- Senior.… Uske bare me soch kar kuchh jyada chahak rahe ho tum. Lagta hai girls hostel ko active karna hoga...
Captain:- Bawari sath me hospital ki khatiya bhi book karwa lena…
Nisha:- Aisi baat hai kya...
Captain:- Chaho to aajma lo… Tum jitni der me stick uthaogi uss se pahle hi 4-5 ka jabda tod kar sula chuki hogi... Punch karne ki speed nahi dekhi kya?..
Nisha:- Kahin ye wo ladki to nahi jisne University ke mukhya prabandhak Manohar laal ko class me intro dene par majboor kar diya tha...
Captain:- Baat bilkul shanti ke sath aankhon me dekh kar poore confidence ke sath kar rahi thi… Ho sakta hai ye wahi student ho..
Wo poora group ek baar fir wapas ander aaya. Sia coffee ke sip le rahi thi... Captain uske pass aa'kar… "Senior tum kahin wo invironmental science ki student to nahi jisne kuchh din pahle Manohar Laal Joshi ko pani pila diya tha"
Sia:- Haan main wahi student hun but maine kisi ko pani nahi pilaya. Main bus apni problem ka solution maang rahi thi…
Captain:- Senior yadi ye meri dumbo gf na hoti to main tunhare ghar, class aur har jagah ke chakkar kaat kaat'kar pata leta. Waise single ya committed..
Sia:- Baad me baat karte hain junior abhi class ka time ho raha hai. Oh haan ek request hai. Medical science aur environmental science hai to science hi na. Yadi niyam me koi gunjaish ho sake to request maan lena. Ab yahan ke management to tum hi ho.
Captain:- Senior rahne do. Tum yahan nayi aayi ho na isliye yahan ke mahol nahi pata hai. Tum aao na.. Apne doston ko bhi lao, hume koi issue nahi hai.. lekin uske baad thodi si issue ho jayegi. Yahan ke canteen ko humne bahut mehnat se maintain kiya hai. Sab ko laogi to coffee ke liye fir bahar bhatakna hoga...
Sia:- Ohhh !! Koi baat nahi hai junior main kisi ko nahi laungi... Ciao..
Sia apne class me aa gayi aur medical students apne class me chale gaye. Apne class khatm kar ke Sia ghar ke liye wapas nikali. Jab wo raste me thi, usse dur se hi Vyas, Asif aur Riaz, society ki sadak par ulluon ki tarah chalte huye najar aa gaye. Chal sadak par rahe the aur najren har ghar ki khidki par. Kisi bewakoofon ki tarah taaka-jhaanki karte huye ja rahe the…
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ufff.... apsyu, jiviya, imli ke liye ye dillegi writer sahab ki
wo ek dialogue kya tha haan... . are hum to dube Sanam tumhe bhi sath le dubenge
Btw ek hi post ko kitna edit karte hai aap
(pehli baat nischal nandu ke samne baaki kirdaar chai kam pani hai aur yahin akhiri sach bhi hai)
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...... revo subhah 
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phir se sia ki story suru ho gyi som ke baad
ye shadi ke naam se lgta h dono bhai - bhno ko chid h
dekhte h ab malhotra uncle ki wish kb tk puri hoti h
wese ldki dabang h pure medical gp se akele hi bhid gyi
or so called hariyanvi management ko hi junior bna diya
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ufff.... apsyu, jiviya, imli ke liye ye dillegi writer sahab ki
wo ek dialogue kya tha haan... . are hum to dube Sanam tumhe bhi sath le dubenge
Btw ek hi post ko kitna edit karte hai aap
(pehli baat nischal nandu ke samne baaki kirdaar chai kam pani hai aur yahin akhiri sach bhi hai)
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ye kya bas ek hi update 
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Sia...... waise story suru hone se pehle is kirdaar se koi jyaati dusmani na thi... wo kya hai na writer sahab ne galat waqt galat jagah post kiya tha story title with iski pic... us din mood bhi kharab so isko mendak jaisi ankhon wali bol di.... Khair..... wo baatein purani thi.... aur wo lamhe bhi...
Lekin story ke suruwat se jab se is kirdaar ne kadam rakhi hai is story pe... jo bhumika nibhati aa rahi hai ek shalinata ke sath, ye kirdaar dhire dhire meri favorite kirdaar banti jaa rahi hai... hope jald hi Sia mere favorite characters ki list add ho jaye.... bas character change na ho...
Pehli baat to iski attitude mujhe xp ke jamane ki ek lead character ki yaad dilaati hai,, lage ki jaise Sainy hi laut aayi ho...
Sia bilkul straight forward bolne walo mein se hai.... na ek le na ek de... na tu mere Raaste aa na mein tere Raaste aaungi... lekin agar iske raste ghuse chale aaye to consequences ke liye taiyar rahe...waise isko hath per chalane ya action karne ki jarurat nahi.... iske dwara boli gayi point to point baatein hi kaafi hai saamne wale ko dharashayi karne ke liye... aur iske namuna college ke pehle din hi de chuki hai puri class ke samne .
Anjano se zyada matlab na rakhne wali... ye bhi achha gun carry karti hai...
.......................
So ye update pe jo baatein kar rahi hai Sia apne dad phir Diksha & Lata ji se, ye undino ki jab Som gaya bhi nahi tha Diksha ke ghar....
Diksha ki shaadi dekh ek Pita ko chinta beti ki shaadi ko lekar lekin unko itni kyun jaldi padi hai Sia ki shaadi ke liye... abhi to wo padh rahi hai.... kisi dehati gaon wala bolta ki ab to jawan ho gayi, kya karegi padh likh kar.. shaadi kar le, tab bhi samajh aaye ki anpad gawar hai aisa hi bolega ... lekin Sia ke dad high educated vyakti hai.. unki aisi soch aur boli kuch atpati si lagi.... Haan har pita beti ki shaadi ko lekar chinta kare lekin anurag apni beti ko bhali bhaanti jaanti hai ki wo khud apne pasand ke ladke se samay aane par shaadi karegi,
phir bhi chinta jataye...
is line ne emotional kar diya yaar....
lage ki aankho ke samne Diksha ka murjhaya hua chehra aa gaya ho..
epic
lol ×100
matlab are 
lcoffee kharab hai to log pine jana chhod dete hai aise cafes pe.. lekin Sia to Sia thahri... lage ki sia jaan bujh kar jaati thi coffee pine taaki complaint kar sake aur dono coffee cup ki complaint kiye bager ushe shanti nahi milti... Khair baaki ka to pata nahi lekin itna pata hai ki wo cafe wala bhi dhith hi hoga koi
......
. (medical students ki jagah engineering ya agricultural students ya aise koi agal department ke students hote to baat kuch aur hoti.... Lekin abhi ek taraf dhire dhire favorite character banne wali Sia to duji taraf medical students so
: 
)
Khair.. update kaafi dilchasp tha aur sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..
Btw technology log kaise dur kar rahe hai ishi update se pata chale bas milna ho to video call hai na.. bas mobile ya lappy ke samne baith ke baatein karo.... jab aise hi aame saamne baat kar rahe to milne ki jarurat hi kya hai.... 8 saal dono bhai bahan dur rahe.... pure 8 saal bahot bada gap hota hai...kya video call kar lene se hi wo khushi mil jayegi jo apne samne se milne par hoti hai... . dono ke pita bhi video calling hi kare,
milne ke liye bhi to kabhi kabhar surprise planning kar sakte hai... jisse unke dono bachhe bhi khush ho jayenge...
waise teeno ko Diksha ki shaadi ek sath attend karna chaahiye tha.. Diksha & uske gharwale bhi kitne khush hote..
.
Well.... aage aur kya add karu
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
Lekin story ke suruwat se jab se is kirdaar ne kadam rakhi hai is story pe... jo bhumika nibhati aa rahi hai ek shalinata ke sath, ye kirdaar dhire dhire meri favorite kirdaar banti jaa rahi hai... hope jald hi Sia mere favorite characters ki list add ho jaye.... bas character change na ho...
Pehli baat to iski attitude mujhe xp ke jamane ki ek lead character ki yaad dilaati hai,, lage ki jaise Sainy hi laut aayi ho...
Sia bilkul straight forward bolne walo mein se hai.... na ek le na ek de... na tu mere Raaste aa na mein tere Raaste aaungi... lekin agar iske raste ghuse chale aaye to consequences ke liye taiyar rahe...waise isko hath per chalane ya action karne ki jarurat nahi.... iske dwara boli gayi point to point baatein hi kaafi hai saamne wale ko dharashayi karne ke liye... aur iske namuna college ke pehle din hi de chuki hai puri class ke samne .
Anjano se zyada matlab na rakhne wali... ye bhi achha gun carry karti hai...
.......................
So ye update pe jo baatein kar rahi hai Sia apne dad phir Diksha & Lata ji se, ye undino ki jab Som gaya bhi nahi tha Diksha ke ghar....
Diksha ki shaadi dekh ek Pita ko chinta beti ki shaadi ko lekar lekin unko itni kyun jaldi padi hai Sia ki shaadi ke liye... abhi to wo padh rahi hai.... kisi dehati gaon wala bolta ki ab to jawan ho gayi, kya karegi padh likh kar.. shaadi kar le, tab bhi samajh aaye ki anpad gawar hai aisa hi bolega ... lekin Sia ke dad high educated vyakti hai.. unki aisi soch aur boli kuch atpati si lagi.... Haan har pita beti ki shaadi ko lekar chinta kare lekin anurag apni beti ko bhali bhaanti jaanti hai ki wo khud apne pasand ke ladke se samay aane par shaadi karegi,
phir bhi chinta jataye...
is line ne emotional kar diya yaar....
lage ki aankho ke samne Diksha ka murjhaya hua chehra aa gaya ho..
epic
lol ×100
matlab are
lcoffee kharab hai to log pine jana chhod dete hai aise cafes pe.. lekin Sia to Sia thahri... lage ki sia jaan bujh kar jaati thi coffee pine taaki complaint kar sake
aur dono coffee cup ki complaint kiye bager ushe shanti nahi milti... Khair baaki ka to pata nahi lekin itna pata hai ki wo cafe wala bhi dhith hi hoga koi ......
. (medical students ki jagah engineering ya agricultural students ya aise koi agal department ke students hote to baat kuch aur hoti.... Lekin abhi ek taraf dhire dhire favorite character banne wali Sia to duji taraf medical students so
: )Khair.. update kaafi dilchasp tha aur sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..
Btw technology log kaise dur kar rahe hai ishi update se pata chale bas milna ho to video call hai na.. bas mobile ya lappy ke samne baith ke baatein karo.... jab aise hi aame saamne baat kar rahe to milne ki jarurat hi kya hai.... 8 saal dono bhai bahan dur rahe.... pure 8 saal bahot bada gap hota hai...kya video call kar lene se hi wo khushi mil jayegi jo apne samne se milne par hoti hai... . dono ke pita bhi video calling hi kare,
milne ke liye bhi to kabhi kabhar surprise planning kar sakte hai... jisse unke dono bachhe bhi khush ho jayenge...
waise teeno ko Diksha ki shaadi ek sath attend karna chaahiye tha.. Diksha & uske gharwale bhi kitne khush hote..
.
Well.... aage aur kya add karu
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
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