Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

 

[Salu bhai]

Apny aap par bharosa hona ache bat ha lakin itna bara faisla lena be bohat bary bewkofi ha jo jivisha ne ke

Apny pati ko km samjne aur plane ma shamil na krne ke galti as se ya sabit hota ha wo nischal se ziyada dosro pe bharosa krte ha
Wah ajeeb patni ha jesko apny pati pe bhrosa nh tha lakin nand ke pati aur baki pe atotvishwas tha

Ab to nischal ko guru ke zriye apasyu ke dosti ke lye be manwa liya mtlb ab pyar krege khulam khula aur nischal chah kr be kuch nh kr sakta

Wah wah wah kya izat afzai ke ha jivo ne apny pati nischal ke

 

[Yuvi333]

Nainu uncle ki karstani hai bina pite apsyu ko baga diya..... .... Jivisha aur nainu uncle ke bich kuch chal rah hai... Jivisha ke kahne pe apsyu ko bacha liya.... Bechara masoom nischal nainu se anjan hai...

 

[Yuvi333]

500+ din me sirf 3 barrrrrrr...... ......

 

[Nevil singh]

Update:-57 ​

HuYu apni baat samapt kiya hi tha, ki pass se ek awaj aayi... "Kya main aapki kuchh madad kar sakti hun"…


Jivisha awaz ke ore dhyan dee. 2-3 mahilayen aur 4-5 pursh ekal vastr dharan kiye unke pass khade the. Jivisha kuchh puchhti uss se pahle HuYu hi puchh baitha... "Aap sab kya Jhon'Wick Aashram se hain"…


Jivisha HuYu ko ghurti.… "Serin ke sath koi shandar action movie to nahi dekhe the na"..


"Pade thappad"… jaise hi HuYu ko khyal aaya ki wo jaldbaji me kya kah gaya natije yahi hone wale the, bus kab hoga ye bada sa questions mark tha…


Tapasvee:- Ji ye Jhon'Wick nahi sattvik Aashram hai..


Jivisha:- Maaf kijiyega…


Tapasvee:- Galat kuchh bhi nahi kaha gaya jo aap maafi maang rahi hain... Itni dur aap log pahunch kaise gaye... Aur aane ke pichhe ka karan kya hai?


Karan, karan se jyada Jivisha ka yahan hona shayad uski Niyati thi. Kyonki vishesh kul ki mul matribhumi yahi thi... Na sirf visesh kul samuday ki mul bhumi yahi thi, balki Surpmarich aur aur Vishesh kul ki pahli gyani Vish-Kritima ke gyan ki prapti bhi yahin se hui thi…


Fir to Jivisha ne khud ka bhavya swagat aur Vishesh kul ka wah gaurvanvit itihaas ka bhi pura gyaan hua, jisme har Vishesh samuday ki striyon ne apna bahumulya yogdan diya tha... Vish-Kritima se lekar Vish-Nilayani tak ka itihas maujood tha...


Guru Vashudhar bus moh se bandhe the uss kritrim se dimag me. Unki yadon ko koi chura na le, isliye unka kalpnik aanshik sharir, wah half ball chhodne ko taiyar nahi tha... Lekin charo ore ka mausam tab badal gaya, jab Jivisha aur HuYu ke sath-sath Guru Vashudhar ko bhi wahan ek Guru dikhe...


Fir unka kalpnik sharir khud ko bahar aane se rok nahi paye… Sadiyon ki sangrahit yadon ka varish mil chuka tha, jis par wo jimmedari daal'kar sukoon ki shwans lete... Haan Jivisha aur Apasyu ki pahli mulakaat yahin hui thi.


Jab Guru Vashudhar khud ko uss mahol me vilin kar liye, Jivisha ek baar fir kisi ki kalapti hui aatma ko mehsus kar rahi thi... Guru Vashudhar ka kalapnik ansh aise viyog kar rahi thi, mano kuchh anhoni sa yahan ke mahol me mehsus kar rahe ho...


Yah Jivisha ke liye thode vichlit karne wale kshan the aur jab wo hawa me apna chehra kiye, Guru Vashudhar se unke rone ki vajah puchhne lagi... Fir samne aaya ek aur narsanhar ki kahani, jisne iss jagah se puri sabhyta ko hi sadiyon pahle samapt kar diya tha.


Sattvik Aasharam ke dusri ekaeyon (unit) dwara, kanchanjangha ki sabhyta ke samapt hone ke pichhe kisi amanviya takat ka hath maana tha, jo iss alokik jagah ko falte-fulte nahi dekhna chahte the,. Aur chunki uss daur me yahan na to mukhiya the aur na hi unke utkrishth shishya, jo samjh pate ki mahamari ki un hawon me kya tha aur kiski sajis thi...


Jivisha ek baar fir se thode viyog me thi... Koi aisi jagah nahi thi jahan ke manav hit me kaam karne walon ko Surpmarich ne apna shikar na banaya ho aur apna maksad sadhne ke liye logon ko corrupt na kiya ho...


Jivisha kanchanjangha me hui narsanhar ke pichhe Surpmarich ka naam ujagar karti hui sabko batane lagi "Surpmarich na sirf kanchanjangha me base prachin sabhyta ko mitaya hai, balki kayi aisi sabhyta ko ya to ye Surpmarich mita chuka hai ya unhe corrupt kar chuka hai jo bhi usse challenge kar sakte the"...


Sari baten dhire-dhire khulne lagi thi. Bahut pahle bite daur ka itihas sattvik Aashram ke samaksh khulne laga tha aur ussi ke sath ab wo naam bhi Apasyu aur sattvik Aashram ke pass aa chuka tha, jiske panne sattvik Aashram ke itihas ki kitab se badi hi chaturai se hataye gaye the...


Shayad Jivisha ka hona niyati hi tha. Kyonki pichhle 200 saal se iss alokik jagah ko, wapas se sattvik Aashram guru, apne purane swaroop me lane ki kosis kar rahe the... Aakhri Guru Nishi yahan ka jinnodhar lagbhag kar chuke the, lekin unki akasmat mirtyu ne yahan ke pragti karya ko kuchh varsh pichhe le gaya...


Kanchanjangha me base iss gaanv me uski mul nivasi pahunch chuki thi. Yah apne aap ke ek khushi ka vishay tha. Fir shuru hua Apasyu, Jivisha aur HuYu ke mulakaton ka daur. Jivisha ko pariwar ke bich se nikal'kar kanchanjangha pahunchna kafi mushkil tha, isliye Apasyu gupt roop se dono se mila karta tha...


Mulakaton ka wo daur aisa tha ki teeno ek alag hi bound me dikhe the. HuYu jiski pratibha lagbhag chhipi hui thi, ussi ne "Dust particle" ki taknik ko nayi unchai diya tha. Aashanka puri thi ki bhavishya me kabhi Nischal aur Apasyu ka samna yadi hua, tou kisi ko samjhane ka waqt bhi nahi milega ki Apasyu, Jivisha ke kahne par sab kuchh kar raha tha...


Dhire-dhire uss artificial brain se yadon ko dekha gaya... Kafi lambi yaden chura chuki thi Jivisha aur kafi vichlit karne wali thi Surpmarich ki yaden. Ek nakqabposh ka naqab utar chuka tha aur unhi yadon ke dauran pata bhi chala tha ki wo dimag se kaise dusron ki yaden mita'ta hai...


Surpmarich se ladai ke lagbhag mahine din baad hi, bade bhaiya par suniyojit humla hua tha Pune me. Jahan Nischal ko bhi yah ehsas dilwaya gaya ki Surpmarich abhi mara nahi hai. Yahin se Nischal ke uss adhure prashikshan ka daur bhi shuru hua, jo Guru Vashudhar apne putr maan chuke Nischal ko dena chahte the... Chatthe indriyan jagrit karne ka gyan.


Agle 4-5 mahine Jivisha Nischal ke sath kanchanjangha ke god me, Aarcharya ji ke dekh rekh me apna prashikshan karte rahi... Kade abhyash, sahi margdarshan aur in sab se badh'kar, Nischal aur Jivisha ke ander jo jivan ko samjhne ka apna mul najariya tha, sab ne mil'kar dono ko un unchai tak pahunchne me madad kar rahi thi jahan Guru Vashudhar unhe dekhna chahte the...


Nischal jab uss gaanv se bahar nikal raha tha usse apne Guru ka purn gyan mila tha... Uss gaanv se jab Nischal bahar nikla, tab'tak Serin HuYu ke sath milkar Russia me ek base bana chuki thi... Na sirf Aarsi aur Chirag ki jid ki vajah se, balki bhavishya ko dekhte huye Serin ko bhi laga ki ek apna base earth par bhi hona chahiye...


Kadam se kadam mila kar sath diya tha HuYu ne aur char chand tab lag gaye, jab ek gyani ko murt roop Nischal ne de diya.... Haan Guru Vashudhar ki kalpnik aanshik sharir to nahi rahi uss artificial brain me, lekin ab bhi wo autonomous body hi thi kyonki uss artificial brain me mehsus karne ki kshmta thi...


Alexa ke nirman ke sath hi Jivisha ke madadgaar bhi prithvi par taiyar ho chuke the. Thoda sa badlav Alexa me, HuYu aur Aimee ne mil'kar kiya tha, jo ab energy absorb karne aur energy relese karne me mahir tha… Iske liye Apasyu ne Guru ke pass rahne wale wo twin energy patthar ko diya tha, jo Aacharya ji ki dekh rekh me Tibbath ke matth me rakha hua tha...


Wo Alexa hi tha jo yadast jane ke pahle 6 mahine tak Jivisha ko shant roop se ek hi kamre me rakhne me safal hua tha… 2 yadon ke bich shayad jab confusion creat kiya gaya tha tab Surpmarich kafi lambe samay tak Jivisha ke dimag me rah gaya tha... Kyonki Jivisha ke ander ke kale vikar ko absorb karne me kafi gahnton laga karte the aur issi ke sath Alexa Jivisha ko moral support bhi diya karta tha... Ek alag hi tarah ki niti ke sath sabhi aage badh rahe the...


HuYu, Decca par baith'kar dur sanchar ki puri prakriya dekh raha tha aur sabhi logon ko ek channel se jode huye the... Ye majboot channel aur kisi ka nahi balki Alexa ka majboot channel tha... Har ek kirdar random role play karne me laga hua tha, kyonki bhuli yaad me corrupt dimag kab kya kar jaye kise pata...


Lekin Jivisha ka sahi aaklan itna kaam aa raha tha ki Nayla ki mehnat kam ho gayi thi... Anath bacchon ka sath hona, Nischal aur Serin ke emotion ko bahut had tak kabu me rahta... Dono itne suljhe huye rahte, ki bacchon ke samne khun ka ek katra nahi girate the... Aur yadi bahoot majboori hoti tab Nischal aur Serin ko utni hi mehnat bhi karni parti thi...


Haan lekin Nischal aur Serin ke prithvi lautne ke kram me, jo 15 din ka deadline samay Nayla ko mila tha, wo dono ke black hole me jane se fail ho chuka tha… warna jivan ke mulya ko Nischal aur Serin wapas apne ander, Jivisha ke sath un khatarnak islnad bhraman ke dauran hi sikhte... Jo ki jaan lene ki pravriti aur gusse ke nature ka purn kaat tha…


Surpmarich ko laga tha ki Jivisha aur Nischal apni khoyi yadon me hai.… Lekin issi bhul ki vajah se Yuvi ko ladai ke maidan me ek kadadi shikast jhelni padi thi, jiska purn nishkarsh tou uske 4 dimag milkar bhi nahi laga pa rahe the ki nausikhyon ne unhe hara kaise diya… Itne random log mil'kar usse hara kaise sakte the...


Iss baar bhi Surpmarich, Jivisha ki yaden churane ki kosis kar raha tha, lekin iss baar aisa kar pana uske liye sambhav nahi tha, kyonki bhule dimag me bhi uski puri shakti jagrit thi aur Jivisha me dobara se shakti jagrit itne kam waqt me hua tha ki Aacharya ji bhi aaschrya me the… Aur in sab ka pura natija Yuvi ke sath ladai me dekhne ke liye mili...


Sath hi sath dobara jab Surpmarich ke dimag me Jivisha thi, iss baar bhi usse chhalne me kamyab rahi thi... Kyonki iss baar Apasyu ne usse sikha'kar bheja tha... "Jab tum dimag me jao... Uski tatkaal chal rahi yadon ko chura lo"… aur Jivisha puri ladai ke dauran safai se apna kaam kar chuki thi..


Jin teen mahine wo brain surgery ke baad padi rahi thi, uss dauran Jivisha ka kalpnik sharir, Apasyu ke sampark me tha aur dono mil'kar Surpmarich ke chal rahe muhim par charcha kar rahe the...


Nayla aur baki sabhi log jab prithvi par pahunche the, tab unka kaam khatm tha. Kyonki yahan ka pura jimma Alexa aur Apasyu ke upar tha... Inhe to bus time pass karna tha aur intzar karna tha, ki kab sab ki yadast wapas laut aaye... Baki jo bhi hua uss daur me wo to sabke samne hi tha.…


Tatkal samay...


Jivisha ke ek ishare par hi uske sabhi sathi, jinhone Jivisha ko uske sabse mushkil waqt me sath nibhane ka bharosa dilaya tha, uske vishwas aur yojna par bharosa jatate huye, bina kisi dusri soch ke, sabhi kewal Jivisha ke kahe yojna par amal karne lage the, wo sabhi Jivisha ke pichhe khade the... Aur samne Nischal ke sath khade the baki log...


Jivisha muskurati hui jaise hi challenge ki... Agle hi pal ek tej hawa ka jhonka chala, itna tej ki logon ne palken jhapki aur wahan se 2 log gayab the... Nandni hansti hui sabse kahne lagi... "Challenge accepted"…


Mahol thoda uljha to tha, lekin HuYu ko Jivisha ke pichhe dekh sab samajh chuke the ki, kuchh kahani uss daur me rachi gayi thi jab Surpmarich se ladai kar'ke laute the... Aur tab bhi HuYu, Jivisha ke kafi karib hua karta tha...


Pura tou ab baith'kar hi baat karne se pata chalta... So sab log chale mathh me. Aatithiyon ke bhavya swagat ke bich ghir gaya tha bechara HuYu aur Alexa... Kahna galat nahi hoga ki iss pure khel ki rachna aur usse pure karne me Alexa ne center point ki bhumika nibhayi thi... Ussi ke sequre channel ne puri team me coordination bana raha… aur jarooratmandon tak madad pahunchti rahi...


Khair universe se le'kar earth tak ki kahani jaise-jaise pata chalte gayi... Sab ke sab aaschrya me dube huye the... Ek akeli Jivisha ke vishwas ki kahani aur uske vishwas patr log, jinhone ek kalpna se pare plan ko safal bana diya tha...


Haan Nandni ko gussa bhi utna hi aa raha tha, kyunki uske dono jaan se ajij dost... Nischal aur Jivisha hi iss poore khel me dav par lage huye the aur bina kisi ek ke to wo kalpna bhi nahi kar pa rahi thi..…


Serin ke liye bhi utne hi chaukane wale pal the. Fakr khud me tab mehsus ho gaya jab pata chala ki Jivisha ki poori yojna Serin ko dhyan me rakh'kar ki gayi thi... Wo dono (Nischal aur Jivisha) ho ki na ho... Aage Serin ko hi poora mission drive karna tha... Haan ek baat HuYu ne gol kar diya, wo tha Nischal aur uske hone bacchon ki planning, jise Jivisha ne sabko mana kar rakha tha batane se... Ye uske aur Nischal ke bich ka entertainment tha…


Poori charcha samapt hone ke baad Apasyu wahan se apne sabhi logon ko le'kar nikal gaya... HuYu usse pichhe se tokte... "Guruji khanjar ke jakhm ka dard jyada to nahi"… Apasyu pichhe mud'kar muskurate huye sab ko dekha.…


"Ye sab jab khatm hoga tab mai tum se milne jaroor aaunga HuYu… Jivisha ko bolna bevajah mujhe pareshan na kare, aur jitna dhairya aur sujh-bujh ka parichay puri planning me dee thi... Aage bhi deti rahe. Main ab apne raste ja raha hun"…


Apasyu gaya aur wahan rah gaya bechara HuYu, jiski band bajne wali thi, kyonki sabko iss bade se mission ka hissa hona tha, aur waqt rahte unhe nahi bataya gaya... Samne hi pahla culprit baitha hua tha... Baki tou 1 urran chhu ho chuki thi Nischal ke sath...


Ek tej aankdhi gujri aur Jivisha bahon me jhulti hui hawa ke rath par sawar thi... Dono ek bade se pahadi ke samtal hisse par the. Jivisha ek chhote chattan par baith'kar aaram se Nischal ko dekh rahi thi aur wo funf'kaar marta idhar udhar tahal raha tha...


"Kya hai ye sab... Kyon Jisa kyon"???? Nischal thode gussa aur thode uljhano ke sath puchha..


"Sorry jaan, ab tum uss Surpmarich ke jaal me the... Jab tak tumhe jivan ka mulya yaad nahi aata, tab'tak tumhari aakrmata jati nahi… Isliye iss ladai ki yojna bani thi"..


Nischal ek thappad lagate... "Don't divert the topic, tumhe pata hai main kis bare me baat kar raha hun"...


Jivisha, chhota sa muh banati… "Apna hath dekho aur mere ye soft gaal... Jin hathon ko pyar se gaal par ferne chahiye, un hathon se thappad laga rahe… tum badal gaye ho Nischal…"


"Nautanki kahin ki..."… Kahte huye Nischal Jivisha ke ore lapka aur agle hi pal wo hawa me... "Ye cheating hai Jisa... Tum ye ghadi-ghadi power jo mujh par istamal karti ho"…


"Kya karun Love, tumhara bhagna aisa hai ki ab pakdam pakdai to hum khelne se rahe… so tum bhi to cheting hi karte ho"…


"Areeee lekin ye in built hai... Maine thode na kisi experiment se paya hai tej daurna"…


"Pahle sorry bolo... Mujhe jo thappad mara... Fir main niche utarungi"…


"Main ek julmi pati hun... Ego.. ego hai mere ander.. maine sorry bol diya to shakt patiyon ki bejjati hogi"…


"Main bhi bhartiya patni hum jaan... Apne pati ko hamesha apne sir par bithaya hai... Baithe raho.."

Nischal thoda jod lagaya, vayu ke bandhan me thoda sa badlav aur gulati maar'kar niche.… Aur agle hi pal, haath khinch'kar Jivisha ko pith ke ore se khud se chipkate huye, uske gale ko dabaya... Jivisha khil'khailar hansti hui.… "Ya tou angry ho'kar action kar lo, ya pura romance... Aise gussa bhi hain.. aur pakad'kar romance bhi kar rahe... Mujhe pasand nahi"…


Nischal, Jivisha ke kaan ke nichle hisse me tej daant gadaya... "Ouchhhh.. kya kar rahe ho jaan"…


Nischal:- Apna gussa dikha raha hun... Jo sachhai mujhe shuru se pata honi chahiye the wo Guruji mujhe ladai ke dauran bata rahe the…


Jivishsa:- Mujhe laga tum apne bachpan ki koi yaad dekh rahe the... Ladai ke dauran Guru Vashudhar tunhare pass aaye...


Niachal:- Bol tou aise rahi ho jaise wo tumhare pass nahi aaye honge… mujhse mile... Aur haan pahle mujhe unhone wahi samjhaya... "Shakti matr ek jariya hai apni budhhi ko parakhne ka... Jiske pass gyan hota hai usse shaktiyon ki jaroorat nahi... Vishwas jagao aur tum apni wo kala dikhao jo bachpan se tumne sikha hai"...


Jivisha:- Haan isliye bachpan yaad aane ke baad bhi Apasyu ke kandhe me angutha daal diye... Jarra bhi daya na aayi...


Yah sun'kar Nischal, Jivisha ke gaal ko danton se aisa kata ki daton ke laal nishan pad gaye... "Aaaaaa, jungleeeee... Mere gaal hain ye"..


Nischal, apne honth ke madhur chhuan se Jivisha ke gardan ko chumte huye.… "Soft hai ki nahi wahi check kar raha tha…


Jivisha, Nischal ke honth ki iss chhuan se thodi bikharti hui.… "Love, mat karo abhi please… aur batao na kya uss chand second ke mulakat me Guruji ne sab bata diya"...


Nischal:- Haan unhone mujhe tumhare aur unke pahli mukakat se lekar pura kissa dikhaya…


Jivisha:- Ye tou guruji ne galat kiya...


Nischal:- Ohhh hooo hoooo, mera daudna band karne ka raaj kisne khola tha, jo Guru Apasyu ne mujhe bandh diya... Guruji mere pass naa aaye hote tab tou tum mujhe aur maar khilate rahti…


Jivisha, thodi mayus hoti, Nischal ko khud se alag karti.…. "Ek yodhha ka jitna ya harna iss baat par nirbhar nahi karta ki yudhh me usne kitni lash girayi, balki natija jiske paksh me hota hai wahi vijeta hota hai... Tumhara maar khana kaun si bari baat thi... Lekin ek samanya si kashmta me bhi tumhara uth khada hona, khud me vishwas dikhana, ye Maksad tha.

"Aur ye mera maksad nahi tha balki Guru Vashudhar ka maksad tha... Duniya ko alvida karne se pahle, wo ek baar tumse milna chahte the… ek pita apne putr se milne aaye the… aur wo sab yaad dilane jo unhone tumhe bachpan se sikhaya tha"…


Nischal, thoda mayus hote... "To kya wo bhi mujhe chhod'kar chale gaye???"…


Jivisha:- Kayi varshon tak wo bandhe rahe iss shansar se... Jane ka unko mauka mila lekin ek kalpnik sharir moh me par gaya Love, apne putr ke moh me… Chahte tou tumse kabhi bhi mil'kar wo ja sakte the, lekin ye puri ladai unhi ki ikchha thi… Jane se pahle tumhe aakhri baar mehsus kar'ke, tumhe wo sab yaad dilate chale jo unhone tumhe sikhaya tha...

Aakhri baar wo apne putr se mil rahe the aur tumse mil'kar iss shristhi ko alvida kah gaye… Pyar ki takat me tou unhone Prakrit ke niyam me chhut maang lee thi...


Nischal:- Haan tum sahi kah rahi ho.… Wo sach me mahan hain.…


Jivisha:- Haan aur tumse itna moh tha ki jane se pahle mere sari planning ki pol patti khol dale...


Nischal:- Tumhari bahut tarif kar rahe the Guruji... Kafi der tak guruji tumhari hi baten karte rahe... waise tarif tumhare temporary boyfriend Guru Apasyu ki bhi jar rahe the..


Jivisha:- Arre yaar... Wo Apasyu hai… tunhare Guru ji, Guru Vashudhar the...


Nischal:- Nah, Guruji (Vasudhar) bol'kar gaye hain mujhe, ki ab se meri jagah Guru Apasyu mila karnege tumse... Haan unhone bata diya hai tumhare atoot mitrwar rishte me bare me, mujhe jo unhone kaha main wo follow karunga... Aur sharm to nahi aayi hogi na... Mere bina sab kuchh plan kar lee..


Jivisha:- Aree nahi baba aisi koi baat nahi thi...


Nischal:- Haan haan main sab samjhta hun... Vish-Jivisha ke itihaas ke kitab jo Sattvik Aashram wale likh rahe, uski lead tou tum hi rahogi na... Tumhara naam lead me aur baki sab naam sahayak me honge… Uss sahayak me bhi upar tou pahle number par HuYu, Nayla aur Shwetna hogi... Sala hum doni bhai bahan ka patta kat gaya... Bechari Nandu to apne pati ko hi bijli ke jhatke deti rah gayi... Wo Kasak bechari... Jiski jaan tum me basti hai, usse tak ignore maar gayi... Kamal ki swarthi nikli...


Jivisha:- Naak tod dungi kuchh bhi bakwas kiye tou...


Nischal:- Achha, aisi baat nahi thi tou kya mujh'par yakin na tha... Sharv shaktiman Jivisha... Nana Vish-Jivisha…


Jivisha, aankhen dikhati.… "Tumhe mujhse jhagra karna hai abhi"…


Nischal:- Ohhh hooo... Abhi jhagra na karun.. to kya pyar karun.. Aaeye jaante hain kuchh Vish-Jivisha ke pyar ke bare me... Jiski shurwat mai aise karna chahunga... (Achanak fir chillate huye)… Pyar ka to naam mat lo... You stone heart.… Log hasne lage hain, jab sunte hain 500+ dino ki shadi me kewal 3 baar hua hai...


Jivisha, apni aankhen badi karti hui.… "Nichal chup ho jao, warna mai sar phod dungi"…


Nischal, apne ghutne par aa'kar apna sar jhukate.… "Aap to Universe ki Queen hai... Har planet ke jitne bhi shashak honge wo aapke samne sar jhuka lenge... Mujh garib ki kya aukaat hai... Chahe sar phod do ya gala daba do... Aap ka hi dominence chalna hai"…


Nischal jab apni baat kah'kar sar upar kiya samne Jivisha nahi thi... Charo ore najar ghuma'kar dekh liya… "Areee yaar ye tou gussa'kar bhag gayi"…

Bahad sunder update mitr

 

[ragish7357]

Haan obviously... Iss waqt me to ek yahi bachi hai jis se khunchatani chalti hai.. I hope the arena is back...

Jahan readers ke bahut bada group hua karta tha alomost 10 to 15 readers, jo group bana'kar khunchatani karte the... Ek aur baat... Sabke apne apne vichar rahte the aur u wouldn't believe mujhe khinchne ke liye 10 se 15 point alag alag disha ke taiyar rahte the..

People not enjoy only the story but story ke hit aur hot discussion bhi... Tane aise hote the ki anya writer ki thread par waise 2 comment ho jaye to wo bhag jaawe aur apne reply aise hote ki iss waqt ke jitne reader mujhe najar aa rahe... Unme se ek bhi na jhel paye... Unhe lagega main hi gusse me hun...

Bhasha utni hi maryadit... Kisi se close ho gaye to yah na bhulte the ki hum kahan reply kar rahe.... Aur yadi kuchh over hone lagta... Haan kabhi-kabhi emotion bhi orignal ho jate the... Tab sabhi reader ek chhota sa break lete the... 3-4 din ki shanti bhada update to update comment aur wapas se fir wahi mahol...

Khair har waqt ki apni apni kahani hai.... Iss waqt bhi mujhe achhe readers base mile hain... Kafi pyare aur innocent..... Unhe khincha tani nahi aati to koi baat nahi... Unke comments aur thodi bahut hansi mazak enjoy karta hun..

Haan aur kuchh to katai dhit huye ja rahe... Kasam khayi hai iss baar kahani ko padhenge lekin comment na karenge... Jaise ki..
CG Mast fakir Nitin1990 Monty cool sorbobhuk bd sharkar .. ... Ghor aalsi huye gaye hain... Kahani bich me chhod dunga to comment aayega waiting...

waise mujhe iss baat ka bhi khamiyaja bhugatna padta hai ki kahani to complete hogi hi Kai ko comment karna... This leads to vulnerable... Alag level ki ye khunchatani hai... Kuchh to inme se xp ke samay se close howe as a reader and writer... Fir b dikhte na.. chhota sa afsos howe hai ...

but overall.. aap sab ke sath maza aa raha hai.... Innocent readers base hain...

Ju apun ko bhi innocent bole Kya nain11ster bhai

 

[The king]

Itana sannata Naina ji aap ne revo bhi nahi diya aaj

 

[11 ster fan]

Let's start the review
Nishchal bilkul badiya kaam rha hai kyoki agar mingal rahana hai to jiviya ki sari baate thoda sa gussa hokar hi sahi manana parta hai ..aur nishchal jiviya ki baat isiliye jyada maan rha ki wo ekmatra aisi girlfriend hai Jo 4 girls ke sath sambandh banawa di ...hey bhagwan hamari bhi sun le hame bhi aisi girlfriend dilwade ..yaha pe dusare ko dekhane se bhi apni wali chid jati hai ...
Nishchal janta hai ki single boys ki ijjat hi nhi hai yaha pe ..abhi abhi nain sir bolo ki gf na hone interview se bhaga Diya jata hai...agar gf bol de ye sham nhi subah hai to ham wo bhi maan lete hai yaha toh wo bas gurudev hi bola hai ( ye kataksh hai) ...

 

[11 ster fan]

Waise huyu ne Kya taunt kiya uss apasyu ko

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Kayi sadiyan purv ... Vish Kritima aur Surpmarich prithvi se gyan prapt karke... Universe me jivan ki asthapna karne tatha jahaj jivan hai wahan sabhayta bahal karne ke liye muhim par nikle...

Vishesh samuday ki Vish-Kritima bas gayi Zoren grah par... Aur wo Nilbhut samuday jo sarp jivi hote hain aur ek shape shifter hain unke sath base... Kayi hazar saal tak ye kul wahin Zoren par falta fulta raha... Tab satta me aayi thi Vish-Nilayani...

So Vish-Nilayani aur Surpmarich ke ladai ke baad vishesh kul ka vinash hua... Jiska jikr aap ko pata hai... Guru Vashudhar ne hi Vish-Nilayani ke 6 bahno me Vish-Nilayni ki takat ko barabar baata tha... Lekin yahan bhi wahi niyam... Koi bhi siddhi jo hai wo jis sharir aur aatma ki hai ussi ki rahegi...

So Vish-Nilayani ke soye dimag me wo shakti to thi lekin wo istamal nahi kar sakti thi... Niyam toote the... Aur khud Guru Vashudhar ne prakriti ke niyam Tode the... Isliye unko saja bhi utni hi sangeen mili thi... Haan wo apne shaktiyon ke durupyog ki saja ek tarah se pa rahe the...

Idhar vishesh samuday ki 6 bahne prithvi aur nay grah par aayi... Jyadatar prithvi hi aayi thi... So kul dar kul apni khoyi shaktiyon ke sath Vishesh samuday ke log paida ho rahe the... Jinhe pata hi nahi hota tha ki unme shakti hai bhi ki nahi... Aur kayi sadiyon baad Jivisha paida hui... Jiski maa Priya rajpoot hai aur wo hosoital bhi milne aayi thi lekin aapne escape kar diya...

Dhyan se padhiyega aage... Kyonki ab unhi logon ka kabja hoga story me... Aur Jivisha 1000 salon baad paida hui hai... Jise apne vishesh samuday ka pura itihaas pata hai... Aur guru Vashudhar ne 6 mukhya dhara wala yog bataya to tha jisme punah vishes kul ki poorn swaroop stri janm legi... Ye bhi aap ne na padha ... Kewal sochte rahe ki first part connection hai...

Sir ek hi ladki hai aur wahi jar jagah hai... Flashback jo aaya hai wo tab ka aaya hai jab Jivisha universe me thi... Aur ab wo earth par hai... Dono ek hi hai aur har jagah uske ek jaise gun paye jayenge... Thoda ajeeb charecter hai... Par dhire dhire samjh jayenge..

Abhi to pagal wala role dikha kahan hai... Oh by the way maine pura clear kar diya hai... Kuchh rah gaya ho to fir se puchhiye..

HuYu jin yadon ko dekh raha tha wo HuYu ki yaden thi... Uss se guru Vashudhar ko koi fark nahi padta lekin jo yaden Jivisha dekhna chah rahi thi... Usse tarap ke karan nahi dikha rahe the guru aur pahle apne gaanv jana chahte the... Kyon wo samjh jayenge ..

Thankoo so much for your beautiful revoo... Aise hi comment karte rahe

शायद कोई अपडेट छुट गया हो !
लेकिन आज तो गज़ब हुआ...मेरा प्रोफाइल खुल ही नहीं रहा था... मुझे लगा शायद मुझे ब्लाक कर दिया गया हो... फिर दुसरा आई डी बनाया लेकिन वो भी ठीक से बन नहीं पाया । फिर इसी आई डी को बड़े मुश्किल से एक्टिव कर पाया । पासवर्ड मांग रहा था जो मुझे याद नहीं था ।

कल रेभो करूंगा बशर्ते फिर से कोई टेक्निकल प्रोब्लम न हो जाए ।

 

[nain11ster]

Sandar update bhai vish nilayani ke bete ka kya hua Vo bhi batana jara Apne andaj me to main guru ji chale gye or apne apusyu guru ji ko chod gye nishchal ne fir gussa kr diya jivisha ko chirag or arshi ka bhi dikhaiye jo bad me yade chori ki gyi hai usko kaise prayog me laya ja rha hi or apni Orja kaha gyi jabarjast

Hahahaha.... Xabhi bhai... Je to galat baat hai... Ek bada section end kiya hun... Thoda to rest lene do... Ek sath itne kaam par laga diya...

Aapko aane wale har update ke sath ab sabhi log najar aayenge...

Gusse aur pyar ka to choli daman ka sath hai... Wo to abhi kahani me shuru hua hai aur anth tak chalta rahega ...

Chirag Aarsi dikhenge... sath hi sath ishq risk ki puri core family hi najar aane wale hain...

Baad ki yaden chori... Aur pahle ki yaad chori ek sath kabhi nahi aayega ... Wo dhire dhire aapko dikhega... On going story puri ussi yaad ke ird gird role play karegi...

Orja ke vishay me jald hi update milega... Wo iss kahani ka hissa nahi rahi hai.. aur nahi Bhanvar ka... Uske action aur Adventure aapko Aryamani ke sath dekhne ko milegi ek seperate story me... Wahan Orja pure lead charecter me hogi..

Baki dhire dhire sare charecters bil se bahar najar aane lagenge... Bus najren banaye rakhiye kyonki pagalpan ke sath mission ki shuruwat ho gayi hai