Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

 

[Chutiyadr]

Naah ... Uss waqt parellel me ek chindi chor mujhe lounge me khinche hua tha ... Main in chhote baton se naraj kahe hone laga.. bacchon jaisi baten... Maine 20 update tak comment diye but ju mina kumari style me 36-37 update me kahani ka pack up kar diye... Fir gussa aaya tha... Why this why this kolaveri di...

Waise lounge me uss chindi chor apne har post me ek hi baat... Main bhi incest story par comment kare hun... Ben stokes ko itni akal na howe ki ek funny se khule thread par aakar intentional jhagra kar raha...

Uske baad to Ben stokes ne jaise kasam kha lee ho... Main naina ke ek post ka reply kar raha tha lounge me... Wo udhar bhi kud aaya... Aur fir se wahi logic ka magic... Main bhi incest story par comment kare hun...

Fir bhi apan ne kisi ko na bataya aur bc ye log jhagra karne ke liye what's aap se apne doston ko utha laye... 5-6 alias lekar utar aaye the ... Mahol dekh'kar apan kalti ho liya... Kahan nange naach rahe naach lene do... Apna story likhta hai...

But ju disappointed... Itna hungame ke kuchh din baat main punah story padhna shuru kiya and what u did.. ... Kuchh bhi conclusion nikal kar khatam kar dale ... Main comment kar raha oichhe ke upadte par aur log kahani complete hone ki badhai de rahe...

Na blood bath hua... Na blood baath me hot aur hit erotica aaya... Aur story band... ...

Kya hi kah dun... Logo ne mere vishay me itna pre concept mind me dale hai ki ab to lagta hai kahin jana hi bekar hai...

Batao ... Jis comment karne ko lekar hafton mujhe lounge me khincha ja raha tha... Idhar to doc babu ko laga ki main hi naraj hun... Had hau je to... Aaj sham mujhe bhi naina ji ke pass jana hoga ... Unse kahna hoga aaj 8 chamach shot kharidne... 4 mere liye bhi

sorry my mistake , mujhe ye sab pata hi nahi tha ki kisi ki gandiya me aapke comment matra se petrol pad gaya hai
baki story band karne ki baat to ye baat to sahi hai ki wo story hi bakwas chal rahi thi isliye use jaldi se nipta diya
wo erotic scene bhi likhane wala tha lekin main khud us story se bor ho gaya tha aur likhne se sanyaas lene chala gaya ....
wo likhane ka adaat lag gaya hai wo khujali bardast nahi hoti isliye fir se likhna shuru karna pada warna us story ke bad se hi mujhe mahsoos hone laga tha ki meri creativity total lul ho gayi hai to ab basta bandh ke nikal lo
main to basta bandh ke chal bhi diya tha lekin dimag me jo backchodi chalte rahti hai use likhkar hi shanti milti hai kya kare

 

[nain11ster]

sorry my mistake , mujhe ye sab pata hi nahi tha ki kisi ki gandiya me aapke comment matra se petrol pad gaya hai
baki story band karne ki baat to ye baat to sahi hai ki wo story hi bakwas chal rahi thi isliye use jaldi se nipta diya
wo erotic scene bhi likhane wala tha lekin main khud us story se bor ho gaya tha aur likhne se sanyaas lene chala gaya ....
wo likhane ka adaat lag gaya hai wo khujali bardast nahi hoti isliye fir se likhna shuru karna pada warna us story ke bad se hi mujhe mahsoos hone laga tha ki meri creativity total lul ho gayi hai to ab basta bandh ke nikal lo
main to basta bandh ke chal bhi diya tha lekin dimag me jo backchodi chalte rahti hai use likhkar hi shanti milti hai kya kare

Aapko wapas dekhkar achha laga... Aap ki story didi aur dost ek wonderful story hai... Jo duniyabhar ke tamam sex sites par mil jayenge... Kajal ki kahani bhi mast hai.... Aap ka kahna galat hai ki creativity nahi rahi...

All time hit batsman Rahul Dravid me koi creativity nahi thi log kahte the usse bahut slow khelta hai... Lekin aap uske match utha kar dekh lijiye... Jo class ke sath khelta tha uss class ke sath anth tak khelta rha... Usse apne batting me koi creativity ki jaroorat nahi pari... Aur jab usse 5th down utara gaya tha tab kuchh match me itna tej khel gaya bhai ki log hakke bakke rah gaye....

Creativity se jyada aap alne class par dhyan den... Kyonki wo best hai aapka aur mujhe nahi lagta ki usse drive karne ke liye creativity ki jaroorat hai... Isliye likhte rahne ka mitra... Kuchh achhi aadat jani nahi chahiye... Bhale log kitna bhi bara bhula bole...

Khud par bhi kabhi kabhi chipka lene ka wo gana... Kuchh to log kahenge

 

[Chutiyadr]

Aapko wapas dekhkar achha laga... Aap ki story didi aur dost ek wonderful story hai... Jo duniyabhar ke tamam sex sites par mil jayenge... Kajal ki kahani bhi mast hai.... Aap ka kahna galat hai ki creativity nahi rahi...

All time hit batsman Rahul Dravid me koi creativity nahi thi log kahte the usse bahut slow khelta hai... Lekin aap uske match utha kar dekh lijiye... Jo class ke sath khelta tha uss class ke sath anth tak khelta rha... Usse apne batting me koi creativity ki jaroorat nahi pari... Aur jab usse 5th down utara gaya tha tab kuchh match me itna tej khel gaya bhai ki log hakke bakke rah gaye....

Creativity se jyada aap alne class par dhyan den... Kyonki wo best hai aapka aur mujhe nahi lagta ki usse drive karne ke liye creativity ki jaroorat hai... Isliye likhte rahne ka mitra... Kuchh achhi aadat jani nahi chahiye... Bhale log kitna bhi bara bhula bole...

Khud par bhi kabhi kabhi chipka lene ka wo gana... Kuchh to log kahenge

gurudev
aapne didi aur dost aur kajal wali story padhi hai jankar khushi hui

 

[The king]

Jabarjast updated bhai huyu ki to puri band bajni he par aap ne wo nahi dikhaya ki uski band kese baji or yaha nischal or jisa to alag hi tarike se romanc ke sath zagda kar rahe he sab se jyada ye line mast thi 500 + din me sirf 3 bar jisa to ab nischal ki halat ptali kar degi waiting for next update

 

[The king]

Wese nain11ster bhai 1 bat sach batana dil se ki aap bhi Naina ji ke revo ka intezaar karte he ki kab wo revo de or aap unse kuch khatti kuch mithi kuch tikhi nokzok kare

 

[nain11ster]

Wese nain11ster bhai 1 bat sach batana dil se ki aap bhi Naina ji ke revo ka intezaar karte he ki kab wo revo de or aap unse kuch khatti kuch mithi kuch tikhi nokzok kare

Haan obviously... Iss waqt me to ek yahi bachi hai jis se khunchatani chalti hai.. I hope the arena is back...

Jahan readers ke bahut bada group hua karta tha alomost 10 to 15 readers, jo group bana'kar khunchatani karte the... Ek aur baat... Sabke apne apne vichar rahte the aur u wouldn't believe mujhe khinchne ke liye 10 se 15 point alag alag disha ke taiyar rahte the..

People not enjoy only the story but story ke hit aur hot discussion bhi... Tane aise hote the ki anya writer ki thread par waise 2 comment ho jaye to wo bhag jaawe aur apne reply aise hote ki iss waqt ke jitne reader mujhe najar aa rahe... Unme se ek bhi na jhel paye... Unhe lagega main hi gusse me hun...

Bhasha utni hi maryadit... Kisi se close ho gaye to yah na bhulte the ki hum kahan reply kar rahe.... Aur yadi kuchh over hone lagta... Haan kabhi-kabhi emotion bhi orignal ho jate the... Tab sabhi reader ek chhota sa break lete the... 3-4 din ki shanti bhada update to update comment aur wapas se fir wahi mahol...

Khair har waqt ki apni apni kahani hai.... Iss waqt bhi mujhe achhe readers base mile hain... Kafi pyare aur innocent..... Unhe khincha tani nahi aati to koi baat nahi... Unke comments aur thodi bahut hansi mazak enjoy karta hun..

Haan aur kuchh to katai dhit huye ja rahe... Kasam khayi hai iss baar kahani ko padhenge lekin comment na karenge... Jaise ki..
CG Mast fakir Nitin1990 Monty cool sorbobhuk bd sharkar .. ... Ghor aalsi huye gaye hain... Kahani bich me chhod dunga to comment aayega waiting...

waise mujhe iss baat ka bhi khamiyaja bhugatna padta hai ki kahani to complete hogi hi Kai ko comment karna... This leads to vulnerable... Alag level ki ye khunchatani hai... Kuchh to inme se xp ke samay se close howe as a reader and writer... Fir b dikhte na.. chhota sa afsos howe hai ...

but overall.. aap sab ke sath maza aa raha hai.... Innocent readers base hain...

 

[nain11ster]

gurudev
aapne didi aur dost aur kajal wali story padhi hai jankar khushi hui

Maine kya kya padha tha wahi batane ke liye to break lene wala hun... Fir sab ke istory par kale badal mandrate rahnge... Mere padhne ki speed bahut high hai aur main 10k word bina escape kiye 15 se 20 minute me complete karta hun with feeling all emotions... and word correction too ...

 

[Naina]

kya entry maari hai nalle apsyu ne
aate hi gu pe per rakh diya gadhe ne




jidhar jaaye nibba apsyu khud ki hi bajawa ke aaye aur aake rahta bhi kaha hai wo bhikhari ? Kisi saste lodge pe..





lage ki bawla ho gaya hai burbak

Phir kuch der baad apsyu bole





phir dauda pare aisa pagalpan ka ki apsyu ...




...
Akhir mein pura pagal ban kirdaar apsyu ishq risk part 2 story chhod ke hi bhaag jaaye

 

[The king]

kya entry maari hai nalle ne




jidhar jaaye nibba apsyu khud ki hi bajawa ke aaye





lage ki bawla ho gaya hai burbak

Phir kuch der baad apsyu bole





phir dauda pare aisa pagalpan ka ki apsyu ...




...
Akhir mein pura pagal ban kirdaar apsyu ishq risk part 2 story chhod ke hi bhaag jaaye

Wese aap ne jis movie ka seen dikhaya he jabarjast comedy movie he ye

 

[Naina]

kya entry maari hai nalle ne




jidhar jaaye nibba apsyu khud ki hi bajawa ke aaye





lage ki bawla ho gaya hai burbak

Phir kuch der baad apsyu bole





phir dauda pare aisa pagalpan ka ki apsyu ...




...
Akhir mein pura pagal ban kirdaar apsyu ishq risk part 2 story chhod ke hi bhaag jaaye

ishe dekh sabhi kirdaar yehi sawaal puche apne creator nainu saheb se ki yahin change karaya hai..

jiska jawab bhi de tharki jiviya hi