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Bahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab updateUpdate - 65
Trishool lagte hi Darmen cheekhne chillane laga ...uska sharir galne laga ....pahele upar ki chamdi ..phir maas ....majja ...iss tarah galte hue aur chillate hue woh bada vibhatsa lag raha tha ....dard se tadapte hue ...uske ek ek ang galne lage ....aur bach gaya sirf uska haddiyo ka dhancha ....
ab aagee .......
vahan se nikal kar Abhi mahal k bahar aagaya ....Bahar ..Arsalan ...apne bal aur talwar se ...Nebhru ..apni jadui vidya k praharo se ....Glaco ....agni aur prakash ki shakti se ...Ferron ....Bijli aur toofan ki shakti se ....Zecro ..apne mrityu dand se ....Shivali ..Ritu aur Vibhakta ...apni urja k ghatak praharo se Darmen ki sena ko maut k ghat utar rahe the .....
Abhi ne ab apni shakti trishool ..k ..dhamake se Darmen ka woh saara mahal ....Bhumi k bhiter dafan kar diya .....ab waha thi kewal ...registhan ki ret ....apna yaha ka kaam samapt karke sab wapas ...nagar aagaye ....
Yaha aakar dekha toh Ritu ka bhai Shankar apni sena lekar aaya tha ...parantu uska nagar dur hone k kaaran uss yaha pahunchne mein der ho gayi ....Shankar yaha pahunchkar .....uss yudh bhumi ko dekh hi raha tha ..k usdi samay Abhi ..aur baaki sab bhi waha pahunche ...
Abhi ne saare ranbhumi ki taraf nazar daali ...charo taraf laasho k dher ....uske veergati prapt hue kate fate sainiko k shav bikhre pade the ....hazro striyo k suhag ujad gaye the ....hazaro bacche anath ho gaye the ....yudh ki iss vibhishika k kaaran Sabki aankhon mein ashru aagaye ....Nagar k bhiter ka bhi kuch kuch aisa hi haal tha .....hazro striyo aur baccho ka krandan un sabko vyakul kar raha tha.....
Abhi ne Shankar ko Veergati prapt hue ..sabhi ...yodhao chahe woh usne pakhs k ho chahe shatru paksh k sabhi k antim sansar ka prabandh karne ko kaha ..Shankar apne saath aaye hue sabhi sainiko ki madat se ...uss karya mein lag gaya ....
Abhi ..ne bhi apne Diwangat ...palak mata pita ...k parthiv sharir ko ashrupurit shradhanjali di ..unn dono k charno mein pranam kiya .....aur poori shradha k saath vidhivat ...unka antim sanskar kiya .....Sabhi ne Uss yudh mein veergati prapt hue yodhao ki aatma ki shanti k liye prarthana ki ....
ujde hue nagar ki vyastha thik karne mein do char din lag gaye ......Abhi ne Shankar ko waha ka Raja banaya aur ...usse rajya ka karyabhar saunpa ....Nebhru ...Ferron ..Glaco ...Neilster ....aadi sab bhi apne apne nagar gaye waha ki saari vyastha thik karke yogya vyakti ko waha rajyabhar saunpa ..inn sab mein kuch aur din bit gaye ....
Yudh samapt hue ...karib 1 varsh bit chuka tha......inn 6 mahino mein Abhi aur uske bhaiyo ne kai chote chote rajya sthapit kiye ...aur pritvi par swarnyug ka samay shuru hua ......
Aise hi ek din sab apni ab tak ki uplabdi aur aage kya karna hai isspar vichar kar rahe the ....
Arsalan - Abhi se - beta ab humahara samay ho gaya hai apne grah Arin wapas jaane ka ....Darmen ne jo vinash waha phailaya hai ....aur himare graho ko ujad diya hai ....ab usse wapas thik karke .....apne grah ko purvavat ..hara bhara banana hai ....
Abhi - aap thik kah rahe ho pitashri ..mein bhi ab issi baare mein soch raha hu ....meri bhi bafi icvha hai apni matribhoomi ka darshan karne ki ....ab yaha ka karya bhi lagbhag poora ho gaya hai .....
Arsalan - woh toh thik hai beta ...parantu .....abhi bhi ek karya baaki hai ..aur woh hai Maha astra ..uske bina ..hum apne garho ko purva vat nahi kar sakte ....Arin k saath graho k samuh se poori tarah nakaratmak urja ko samapt karke ...unka punarnirman karne k liye ....uss astra ki bahut aawashyakta hai ......
Neilster - ek kaam aur hai pitashri ....aur woh hai ...humare grah tak pahunchne k liye anariksh yaan ka nirman ....
Abhi - yaan ki kya aawashyakta hai ..mein aap sabko ..kuch hi palo mein waha pahuncha sakta thu .....
Neilster - nahi yeh thik nahi ......kyu ki Abhi toh waha ...pal bhar mein pahunch jaayega ......parantu hum sabke paas itni urja nahi hai k hum aisa kar sake ....yadi yeh hume bhi apne saath le jaayega ....toh isska asar bhi him par bahut hoga ....kyu k yaha ki urja..aur samay mein bahut antar hai ...aur ...itni dur pal bhar mein pahunchne k liye Abhi jitni urja ka prayog karega ....uss urja ko humara sharir sah nahi paayega ...
phir thodi der aisi hi charcha chalti rahi ....Raat mein Abhi apne kaksh mein ...aakar ...prithvi par bitaye ab tak k samay ko yaad kar raha tha ......kyuki ab jiss dharti ne usse aashray diya tha ..prem mamta ...apna pan diya ...jaha usne ek karmyogi ki tarah apne karm poore kiye ab uss dharti ko chodkar jaane ka samay aagaya tha ....
inhi sab vicharo mein khoya hua ...uski aankhon se aansoo ki kuch bunde chalak aayi ...thi ...Tabhi Shivali ..Ritu ..aur Vibhakta ...kaksh mein pravesh karti hai ....unhe kaksh mein aate hue dekhkar Abhi apne aansoo chupa leta hai ....aur unki taraf dekhkar muskurane lagta hai ...
Shivali - kya baat hai aaj aap bade muskura rahe ho ....
Abhi - woh issiliye meri jaan kyu ki aaj tum teeno kahar dha rahi ho ...teeno itni khubsurat lag rahi ho .....k ..lagta hai aaj raat meri khair nahi ...yehi sochkar muskura raha tha ....
Ritu - baatein banana koi aapse sikhe ....parantu ...aap apni inn baaton k piche apni bhawnao ko chupa nahi sakte ....hum jaante hai ..k . aap iss bhumi ko chodkar jaane ka sochkar pareshan ho rahe ho .....na ..
Vibhakta - hume bhi iss bhumi ko chodkar jaana accha nahi lag raha parantu ....hume apna kartya path par aage badhte hue jaana hi hoga ....kai baar hum iss dharti par aaye hai ..aur aage bhi aayenge ....issilye yeh bhumi bhi humari maa k saman hi hai ....
uske baad thodi der aise hi baatein chali phir Abhi apni teeno patniyo k saath kuch pyar bhare pal bita kar ...ek dusre ki baahon mein so gaye ....
Dusre din brahma muhurat mein uthkar apne nitya karm niptakar Abhi ne thoda dhyan kiya ...Aaj usse Maha astra ki khoj k liye jaana tha ...toh usne Divya drishti ka upayog karke ...usse dhundne ka prayatna kiya ....Maha astra k swarup ko woh pahele hi Arsalan k mastishk mein dekh chuka tha ...
divya drishti k dwara usse ek grah dikhayi diya ....jiska ...aadha bhag ....hara bhara tha ..aur aadha bhag ..poori tarah ujda hua tha ......usse andaja ho gaya k hona ho woh Maha astra issi grah par kahi na kahi hai .....
Abhi teleport hokar ....uss grah k hariyali wale ksetra pahunch gaya ....usne ab apni divya drishti dwara ...uss poore grah par ...Maha astra ko khojne ka prayatna karne laga ..paratu woh woh astra ..kahi bhi dikhayi nahi diya ...
Abhi saf saf uss astra ki urja ka anubhav kar paa raha tha ...parantu woh astra usse kahi bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha ....Abhi ..uss astra ko khoj hi raha tha ...k usse aisa ahsas ho raha tha k koi usse dekh raha hai .....toh usne charo taraf dekha toh ..paas hi zhafiyo k picvhe kuch hulchal usse nazar aayi ...woh ..uss or badha ..hi tha ..k usse waha se ...aisicaawaj aayi k jaisw koi waha se bhag raha ho .....
Woh turant zhadiyo k paas pahuncha toh waha koi nahi tha ....usse dur se woh kadmo ki aawaje sunayi de rahi thi ...wih unn aawajo k picha karta hua ....ek pahadi ilake mein pahuncha ....waha usse kuch kritrim gufaye nazar aayi ...woh gufa ki taraf badha hi ....k jungli bello k fando mein uske pair fas gaye ..woh chahta tha ....toh pal bhar mein unn fando se aazad ho jaata ...parantu woh dekhna chahta tha k aakhir yeh log kaun hai ....issiliye woh aise hi khada raha ..tabhivdo aur fande uspar aakar kas gaye ......
Thodi hi der mein usne dekha k bahut saare ...kuch ajeeb se log jinka sharir bilkul safed tha ...aur sar sahiri k mukable bada tha ....unn gufao se nikalkar ekattha hue ....woh usase duri banakar hi khade the ...unke chehro par bhay saaf nazar aaraha tha ...jo shayad Abhi ko dekhkar dar rahe the .....tabhi ..unmein hulchal si hui aur ...unhi ki tarah ek aur vyakti aage aaya ...woh shayad in sabka mukhiya tha ....
Woh Abhi ko apni bhasha mein kuch bol raha tha ....jisse Abhi apne gyan dristi se samazhne ka prayatna kar raha tha ......
Mukhiya - Kaun ho tum....kaha se aaye ho .. aur yaha humare garh par kya kar rahe ho .....hum sab shanti priya log hai ...chale jaao yaha se ....
Abhi - aap sab pahele shant ho jaayiye ...mein aapko koi nuksan pahunchane k liye nahi aaya hu ....mein toh bas apni ek vastu ...lene aaya hu .....
Mukhiya - nahi hume tumpar vishwas nahi hai ....kyu aaj tak humne kabhi tumahare jaise koi yaha nahi dekha ....toh tumahari koi cheej yaha kaise ho sakti hai ....jisse tum dhundne ka bahana kar rahe ho ....tum jarur hum sabko maarne aaye ho ....
Abhi - yadi muzhe tumhe maarna hi hota toh mein ab tak tum sabko yahi pal bhar mein ab tak maar chuka hota ....parantu maine aisa nahi kiya ...
Mukhiya - woh toh issilye k humne tumhe apne paash mein bandh rakha hai....
Abhi - kiss paash ki baat kar rahe ho ..isski ..toh dekhlo ..Abhi ne ek zhatke mein ..jungli bello se bane hue unn rasiyo ko todkar mukt ho gaya ...usse mukt hota dekhkar ....sabhi log wapas gufa ki or bhage ....Abhi wahi shanti se khada hua ....
Abho - arre aise bhaybhit kyu ho rahe ho ....mein sach mein tumahara shatru nahi hu ....
Abhi ko apni jagah par chup chap khade dekhkar Mukhiya himmat karke phir aage aaya ....
Mukhiya - yadi tum hame maarne nahi aaye ho toh kya aaye ho ....aur tumahari aisi kaunsi chij yaha khogayi ...jisse khjne yaha aaye ho ....
Tab Abhi ne usse astra k baare mein bataya ....aur saari sthiti se awgat karaya .....Jab Uss mukhoya ko pata vhala k woh arsalan ka beta hai ....toh woh bade khush hue ....unn sabne apna shish Abhi k aage zhukaya ....
Abhi - arre aap sab log aise kyu zhukar kahde ho ...mein koi ishwar nahi hu
Mukhiya - bhale hi aap humare ishwar nahi ho parantu humare ishwar humare Bhagwan k putra toh ho ....kai hazaro varsh purva ...Aapke pita ..ne humare grah ki raksha ki thi ...aur isse basaya tha ....tabhi se hum unhe bhagwan hi maante aaye...hai...
Pahele hu poor hara bhara tha ...humahare purvajo k anusar ek din ...ek divya prakash sa kuch yaha aakar gira hai ..uske baad ...humara aadha grah pranhin ho gaya ....woh ..chij jaha giri thi ...abhi bhi samay samay par waha se rang birangi ...urja nikalte rahti hai ..
uski baaton se Abhi samaz gaya k yahi par woh maha astra ho sakta hai ....Abji uss mukhiya k saath ussi jagah gaya .....waha uss jagah bahut bada sa gadha tha ..aur usmein se .teen tarah ki urja nikalte hue saaf mahsus ho rahai thi .....
uss jagah aur unn tarago se Abhi ko saaf pata chal gaya k ...iss samay woh Maha astra apne sthool roop mein nahi hai .....uss garah se takrakar woh astra ..teeno prakar ki uraja aur prakash mein badal gaya tha ...jiss kaaran woh uska pata nahi laga paa raha tha ....
uss astra ko apne sthool roop mein laane k liye ..ab Arsalan ko waha laana jaruri ho gaya tha ....issiliye ..Abhi ...Pritvi Arsalan ko le aaya ....apne bhadwan ko waha aaya hua dekhkar ...waha k sab log natmastak ho gaye ...unhone prapt sadhno k dwara Arsalan ka swagat kiya .....
uske baad Arsalan jaise hi uss gadhe k paas pahuncha ....toh usne apne Mahaastra ki urja ko mehsus kiya .....phir usne parashati ka dhyan karke ek haath aage badhaya ....aisa karte ..hi ...uss gadhe mein hulchal si hone lagai ..aur waha ki saari urja aur prakash Arsalan k haath mein ekatrit hone laga .....aur dekhte hi dekhte uss urja ne ek astra ka roop le liya ..
woh maha astra ab Arsalan k haatho mein tha ...
Maha astra prapt hone k baad ....Arsalan aur Abhi ...waha se nikalkar Prithvi par aagaye ...kuch hi dino mein Neilster ..Arsalan aur Bibhakta ne milkar antariksh yaan ka nirman kar liya .....
Antariksh yaan k nirman k baad ..sab usmein sawar hokar ...Arin grah pahunch gaye ......Yaha ka jeewan lagbhag samapt ho gaya tha ....Arsalan ne apne maha astra ki sahayata se ...wapas Arin k 7 graho ko purvavat bana diya .....Aur apne putro ko unka garh saunp diya ...Abhi apni teen patniyo k saath Arsalan k saath hi rah raha tha .....
Arsalan aur Dhara ne ..apni sammilit urja se phir se waha ki praja ka nirman kiya ....charo taraf phir se khushiyo ka samrajya sthapit ho gaya ....
Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla Update jald hi .....
Bhai kahani apne end ki taraf h ya abhi koyi villain ki entry baki h by the way
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