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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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Takriban aadhe ghante ki kharidari ke baad dono wahan se flat pahunche… Ansh wahan pahle se pahuncha hua tha aur un dono ke aane ke kuch samay baad hi Sawalker aur Jyoti bhi pahunch gaye.


Sablog wahan se taiyar hokar sidha Jivisha ke ghar nikle. Mukhya dwar se hote huye jaise hi hall me pahla kadam para samne majistrate ko dekh kar Sawalker salam thokne laga.


"Abe ye tera sasur, registar office ke log aur ye majistrate ko bitha kar kya panchayat kar raha hai"..

"Mujhe kya pata bade bhaiya, lagta hai dahej me bahut sara maal milne wala hai"..

"Sun chhote, 2-4 lakh apne bhai ko bhi gift kar dena, teri bhabhi ke liye bahut dino se shopping nahi ki hai"..


Dono ki baat sun'kar Jyoti gusse se kahne lagi… "Sharm karo tum dono, yahan darwaje par hume khade kiye hain.. koi ander aane ke liye puchh nahi raha aur tum dono lalchi insan.. dahej ki baat kar rahe ho"…
So jivu ke gharwale pehle se ready the..
dahej lena aur dena buri baat hai :nope:
lalchi insaan :lol: nischal :lol1:
Itne me Nandita unke pass pahunchi… "Maaf kijiyega, wo sab paper work me vyast the to dekh nahi paye... Aaeye na aap log bahar kyon khade hain.. Nischal tum jara mere sath aao"..


Nandita un sab ko bithati hui Nischal ko akeli le jakar… "Main apne pariwar ke ore se aaj subah ki ghatna ke liye mafi mangti hun… manti hun bahut bura vayvhar kiye the, lekin kya karen thodi dwidha me sabhi fase hain, jis wajah se kisi ka dimag kaam nahi kar raha"..


Nischal:- Rahne do bhabhi, mujhe bura bhi laga aur ab main uss baat ko bhul bhi chuka hun.. haan lekin kisi ke liye nafrat nahi hai dil me..


Nandita, muskurate huye uske gaal thap-thapate… "Dono khush rahna. Thik hai chal ab jara kaam ki baat kar liya jaye"..


Nischal:- kaun sa kaam bhabhi..


Nandita:- Sawal nahi chal chupchap..


Nischal jab wahan sabke bich pahuncha, tab Jivisha bhi taiyar ho kar aa chuki thi.. abhi dono ki najar milni shuru hui thi aur chehre par muskan tairna shuru hi hua tha, ki itne me aawaz aane lagi… "Nischal kaun hai.. Yahan aakar sign karo"..


Nischal:- Lekin ye signature kis liye..


Kramchari:- Shree Bhupendra ji ne apni 12 carore ki hotel aap ke naam ki hai, jiska malikana haq aaj se aap ka hoga. Yahan aa kar sigh kijiye.. ..
sach mein nandita sabse zyada suljhi huyi nikli... sahi ko parakhna achhe se jaanti hai woh.. sath hi dariya dil bhi .


Nischal sab ke madhya me khade hokar Jivisha ko dekh'kar muskuraya aur sab ko sambodhit karte huye kahne laga...


"Sab se pahle to main Nandita bhabhi ka dhanywad kahna chahunga, kyonki apni nanad ke liye koi aankh mund kar bina soche 12 carore ki sampatti dan kar de.. koi mahan hi hogi.

"Halanki main unki bhawna ko chot nahi pahunchana chahta tha, kyunki bhabhi ne to Jivisha ko apni beti hi mana hai aur humare yahan ka riwaj hai ki beti ko dan-dahej ke sath bhejte hain.. lekin maaf kijiyega… Aap log kam se kam ek baar mujh se puch to lete ki main bhawishya me kya karna chahta hun."

"Paise kamane ke liye meri kya plannig hai ya fir abhi main paise kamane ke liye kuch kar raha hun ya nahi. Agar wakai me main koi nakara hua to fir 12 carore ki sampatti mujhe de do ya 1200 carore ki, lutane me koi waqt nahi lagega.. aur yadi mujhe khud par viswas hai to 12 kya 12000 carore, kama kar Jivisha ke kadmon me bichha dunga"..

"Basically matter sirf itni si hai ki, kuch bhi ek tarfa faisla lene se pahle puchh to lete ki main kya karta hun aur bhawishya me kya karna chahta hun.. khud hi sari baton ko soch kar bhadi sabha me mera collor pakad liye.. Kaun se sabhya samaj me aisa hota hai"..


Himanshu:- Isme ek tarfa sochne wali baat nahi thi. Tumhare kapde ke paise Jivisha de rahi thi. Free me apne dost ke yahan pare rahte ho. Na koi sampatti hai aur na hi tumhare parent ka koi pata. Tumhara admission management kota me hua hai.. ummid karta hun tumhe ye bhi pata nahi hoga ki kisne paise diye hain.. wo tumhari dost Nandni ne diye the 2 lakh rupye.. Haan manta hun ki maine jo kiya wo galat tha.. kaho to sabke samne main mafi bhi maang sakta hun.. main ego nahi palta beta.. lekin tumne ye kaise soch liya ki maine pata nahi lagaya hoga.. maine sab pata lagaya hai.. ab tum batao ek ladki ka pita iss se jyada kya kare..


Nischal:- Aap ne adhura pata lagaya uncle.. ek baar sidhe bhi to puch sakte the... Khair thodi si galatfehmi abhi dur kiye deta hun... Filhaal to Nandita bhabhi, yadi aap sach me Jivisha ko apni bachi manti hain to uske chunaw par bharosa rakhiye aur sabko wapas bhej dijiye.


Jabtak Nischal baat kar raha tha, Jatin bhi wahan pahunch chuka tha, jise dekh'kar Kasak ghabrayi si uske pass ja kar uske aane ka karan puch rahi thi aur wo bus kah raha tha dekhti jao…


Nischal ne Jatin ko bulaya aur bag se laptop nikal'kar usse kuch dikhane laga…. "Nischal lekin translator to google me hai, aur wo log aur aage isse develope bhi karenge"..


Nischal:- Unse baat kar'ke unhe ye translator software bhejo. Unki agle 5 sal ki mehnat kam ho jayegi. Lagbhag earth ki puri bhasha decode hai, aur pahle se jyada accuracy hai..


Jatin ne software detail lekar Google ke India operation ke head se baat kiya aur usse wo softwere bhej diya. Kuch der me hi unka official reply aaya… wo log ye software ko 1 carore me kharid rahe hain, aur yadi softwere developer Google ke sath kaam karna chahe to usse naukri bhi offer kar rahe hain…


Nischal ne associate ke job ke liye haami bhi bhad diya, jisme uske hisse me bhi kayi aise Google ke mahatwkanshi project aayenge jiske app ya software Google develope karne ke liye intrested hai. Usse project me help aur yadi softwere develope kar leta hai hai uske according pay kiya jayega…


Ab madhya me Nischal ke sath Jivisha bhi khadi thi. Hath badha kar usne Nischal ko apne pass bulaya… dono hi samne khade the aur pariwar ke sabhi sadasya dono ko he dekh rahe the…

Nandita:- Sab yahin hain aur mujhe nahi lagta ki ab kisi ko aitraj bhi hona chahiye Nichal aur Jivisha ke rishte se… kyon mammi, kyon papa.. Ravi, Abhinash… koi aitraj….


Sabne ek sath… "Nahi hume koi aitraj nahi hai"…


Jivisha daud'kar Nandita ke pass pahunch gayi aur uske gal ko chumti hui kahne lagi… "Bhabhi aap superb hain"..


Nandita:- Aur tu duffer hai… Jab usse itna chahti hai to tumhe sidha mere pass aana chahiye tha na… Tumhari bewakoofi ka natija hai sab, warna itne drame hote hi nahi..


Jivisha, Nandita ke kandhe se apna sar tika kar kahne lagi… "Ab chhodo bhi bhabhi, jo bit gaya so bit gaya"..


Sawalker:- Himanshu ji, jab sab ne Nischal ko pasand kar hi liya hai to fir baki baten bhi ho jaye to acha rahega..


Himanshu:- Ye bhi sahi hai, lekin uss bechare Shresh ka kya karen jise maine dusri baar shadi ke liye haan kah diya hai. Kaise mana karun ussi bare me soch raha hun..


Nischal:- Uncle aaj aap rahne dijiye.. Aaram se kal usse mana kar dijiyega..


Nischal ne Sawalker ke kan me kuch baten kahi, aur wo sab logon se izazat lekar, Jyoti ke sath nikal gaya. Dhire-dhire ek-ek karke pura pariwar bhi wahan se chala gaya…
hmm... toh dono aaur se paksh rakhe gaye.. jahan nischal ka palda bhari raha... jivu ke gharwalo ne bhi hansi khushi razamandi de di....
nischal bhi nandita ne joh vishvas dikhayi uspe khada utra... par ab baat shresh ki toh woh kal tak ya toh zoren chala jayega ya phir maut ko gale lagayega, nischal ki kripa se...


Nischal aur Jivisha dono hi hall me baithe the aur ek dusre ko dekh'kar muskura rahe the… "Tumhe dekh kar kuch-kuch hota hai baby"… bolte waqt gudgudate arman aur mast si muskan Jivisha ke chehre par chhayi hui thi…


Nischal usse lekar sofe par baitha aur uska hath thame… "To mujhe itne din se jaan bujh'kar pareshan kar rahi thi... Haan.. Tumhe jara bhi raham nahi aayi"..


Jivisha, Nischal ke sine par apna sar tikati… "Tumahre liye itni mehnat se taiyar hui, aur tumne ek baar bhi meri tarif nahi ki"..


Nischal, Jivisha ke sar par hath ferte-ferte dhire se apna hath uske gardan tak le jate huye, kuch nabj ke sath chhed-chhad kiya aur wo apni baat samapt karti hi behosh ho gayi. Nischal uske mathe ko chumte huye…. "Aahhh ! Tum kitni pyari lag rahi ho. Main kya bataun apne arman.. tumhe dekhte huye to main sadiyan gujar dun. Filhaal kuch logon se hisab karke aata hun, fir hum aur humara pyar hoga.."


Nischal kafi teji se uss ghar me chakkar katna shuru kiya. Jis kisi ke bhi karib se wo hawa ke jhonke ki tarah gujarta, wo besudh hokar behosh para hota. Har kisi ko behosh karne ke baad Nischal pure ghar ko ache se dekha ki kahin koi narbhakshi to yahan pahle se nahi chhipe. Pura sunischit karne ke baad Nischal bahar aaya aur Nandni se uss jagah ko pura cover karwaya..
Yeh achha kiya dono ne hi.. kyunki sabse zyada khatra jivu ke gharwalo ke liye hi tha... aur nischal risk lena nahi chaahta tha.. Oh toh woh power isliye control karna sikhaya nischal ne... ek tarah se shield taiyar kar di hai ghar ki chaaro taraf nandu ne... ab shayad waha parinda bhi par nahi maar payega..


Andhera ho chuka tha aur sham ke 6.30 baj rahe the. Nischal apne prayogsale me pahuncha.. Apne sbhi kapde utar kar, apne us sahjade ke roop me taiyar hua, jiske liye usse pura Aizem grah janta tha… Ek laparwah jo kewal ek badi si khanjar aur bina kisi tecnology ke dushman kheme me samne se ghusta tha..


Ek laparwah sahjada, jiske dushmano ke bich bhade mahol me hona hi, sabke liye chinta ka vishay ho jaise. Apne dushmano ke bich Nischal ka bekuff gast lagana, jaise uss mahol ke bhid me bhay paida kar deta ho…. Aur jab wo apni tej atthas lagata to mano sabke ruh kanp gati ho. Ek laparwah sahjada, ek baar fir apne dushmano ke bich jane ke liye taiyar ho chuka tha.


Milne ka samay raat ke 9 baje sunischit kiya gaya tha. Rijo sham ke 6.30 baje tak apni ranniti anusar sab logon ko taiyar kar chuka tha… Rijo ke sath ek pura jattha Malkia ke ghar ke liye kuch karne wala tha. Nischal yahan par behrupiya Rijo aur Apini se baat karta aur udhar jabtak Malkia ko le jane ki puri prakriya samapt ho jati. Wahin baton ke dauran aisi jahar wali manmohak chij Nischal ko pilayi jati ki uska sarir niskriya par jata aur uske sainik usse khatm kar dete.
So Prince nischal phir ek baar ranbhumi mein utarne ko taiyar... khoon ki holi hogi shayad ush park mein... Kyunki shayad hi kisiko maaf kare wahan pe chaahe Rijo ho ya phir apini.. in logo ne nischal ke chaahe walo ko Hani pahunchane ki koshish ki hai.. anjaam toh ghatak hoga hi...


Sham ke 6.30 baje… Rajeev Gandhi Geological Park ke maidani hisse me aag jal rahi thi. Aag ke charo ore baithne ko vyavstha thi, jahan par Rijo aur Apini baithe huye the. Bahrupiye Rijo aur Apini wahin unke samne baithe the aur Asli Rijo unse aakhri baar apni ranniti dohra raha tha.


Pass me hi sainikon ke ek jattha Jivisha ke pariwar par humla kar, unka safaya karne tatha pariwar ke logon ka roop badlne ke baad Jivisha ko chhal kar Zoren le jane ke liye taiyar tha, Jo apne apne Rijo aur Apini ke isharo ki pratiksha me tha.


Un logon thik piche 1000 sainik aadha gola banakar baithe the aur 500 adrishi janwar usse ardh gole ko pura karte uss jagh ko gol ghere baithe huye the…


Rijo bilkul madhya me baitha hua apne bahrupiye Rijo ke samjha'kar jaise hi khada hua, usse aisa laga tej hawa ka jhonka uske kano ke pass se gujra ho. Jab najar utha kar jhonka ki disha ke ore Rijo ne dekha, to uss sidhi rekha me parne wala har adrishi janwar thoda bahut hulchal kar raha tha.


Rijo jungle ke mahol me chalne wali aam hawa ka jhonka samjh kar baat ko andekha kiya aur jaise hi bahrupiye Rijo ke kandhe par hath dala, uska pura sharir bhar-bhara kar sqare ke aakar me jamin par bikhar gaya… Jaise hi yah najara sabhi sainikon ne dekha, unko Josefer ki baat yaad gayi. Ek Viggo Sigma wo bhi unidentified first class Alpha.
inlogo ne bahot badi galati kar di nischal ko kam aank ke usse bhi badi galti jivu aur uske gharwalo pe hamla karne ki taiyari karke....
toh nischal ne khooni khel ki agaz kar diya hai.... ab bas raktranjit, raktranjit, raktranjit...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 
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KEKIUS MAXIMUS

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kamaal ka update ...isse jyada maja aur kisi update me nahi aaya ,shayad aage aa jaaye ....sabko dhool chata di hero ne ???...
aur us ladki ka sar kaat diya isse mast kya ho sakta hai ,,jisne commissioner ki beti ko maara tha bedardi se ???.....

aur apini aur rijo ko ulti kyo aa gayi inhone bhi to bahut saare logo ko aise hi nochkar maara tha ...
maja aa gaya jab hero sabko maar raha tha ????
 

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Har sainik ki fusfusahat shuru ho gayi thi. Apini aur Rijo ashrya se ek dusre ka muh dekh rahe the. Aur thik Rijo ke piche se kadak dahar si awaz sunai di…. "Thode aaschrya thode dar me dikh rahe, dono. Baat kya hai"..


Nischal piche se Rijo ke kandhe par hath dete huye kaha, lekin Rijo jaise hi pichhe muda wo uske thik samne khada tha….. "Wahan pichhe kise dhundh raha hai be.. samne dekh"..


Samne ka najara dekh'kar to Rijo aur Apini ki dhakane aur bhi jor marne lagi. Bahrupiye Rijo ke pass baitha bahrupiye Apini ke sharir par dhire-dhire lambi si khanjar chal rahi thi aur Nischal uske badan ko bade maje se square shape me kat raha tha… Rijo apna thuk gatakte huye… "Ye aap kya kar rahe hai Viggo"..


Nischal apna kaam teji se pura kiya, khada hokar shaynn se thik uske samne khade hokar… "Apne bahrupiye ko tune kat'te huye nahi dekha na Rijo, isliye iss kide Apini ke bahrupiye ko slow motion me kat kar dikha raha tha. Waise ye square shape me mast dikh raha hai tera behrupiya.... Le apni bhukh mita le kha'kar.


Apini, apna sar jhukaye hath jode… "Viggo aap to baat karke samsya ka hal nikalne aaye the na"..


Nischal:- Haan yaar aaya to wahi sochkar tha lekin ye 2 ek jaise shakl ke kidon makodon ki prajati bahut confusion paida kar rahi thi. Baith jao tum dono, ab koi confusion nahi hai"…


Nischal ke apmanit shabd sabko chubhe to jaroor, khun bhi khaula kintu uska hona hi wahan par bhay tha aur har koi ussi bhay me daba sa ja raha tha. Rijo aur Apini apne mathe ka pasina pochh'kar baith gaye aur Rijo kahne laga…. "Viggo aap to yahan ke samaynusar 9 baje aane wale the na"..


Nischal:- Tune kisi ko mujh par najar rakhne nahi kaha tha kya? Matter tujhe pata to chal hi chuka hoga. Fir bhi yadi koi shanka hai to main usse dur kiye deta hun…

Nischal un dono ke charo ore chakkar lagana shuru kiya.. aur apni attahas bhadi awaz me bolna shuru kiya… "Mujhe, mera joda iss prithvi par mil gaya..… Naam Jivisha hai aur chunki aaj hi pyar ka izhar hua hai isliye maine socha 7 baje tak kaam khatm karke usse thoda samay dun… koi galat socha kya"..


Nischal un dono ke charo ore chakkar kat'te huye aise bhay paida kar raha tha ki wo agar piche se hath bhi unke kandhe par rakhta to shwans atak jati aur aisa lagta jaise ab gardan gaya uska. Nichal agar piche hota to dono ke gardan piche ghum jata aur jab bayen hota to gardan bayen hoti.


Wahin dur bhid ke bich me baithi Tanisha, pure gusse se chillati hui kahne lagi…

"Rakhail maa ke kokh se paida hua ek badjaat sahjada, jo apne grah ka bhagoda hai, wo Viggo kya nikal gaya tum sab to dar ke mare jamin me gade ja rahe. Prithvi ke kamjor se begairat prajati, jiske maans hum jab chahe noch-noch kar khate hain, un badjaat insano ke liye, ye Nischal, apne pita ka ye najayaj santan tum sab ko jalil kar raha hai aur tum sab sun rahe… 2 tukdi ek sath humla karo aur iska sar kaat kar mere kadmon me lakar do.


Nischal, Rijo aur Apini ko dekhte huye… "Kya yaar main to yahan pyar se mamla suljhane aaya tha… Khair, let the show begin"…


Tanisha ne yuddh bigul funk dee. 2 nahi balki apman jhel rahe sabhi sainik ek sath khade ho gaye. Har do sanik ke pass ek adrishi janwar aur 2 sainik tukdi, mauth ka ghere me fasa kar Nischal ko marne ke irade se teji se aage badh gayi. Nischal bhi unki ore daud laga diya… Itni tej wo dauda ki Rijo aur Apini ko aisa laga jaise Nischal yahan se gayab hokar wahan pahuch gaya aur wahan se gayab ho kar,l daur rahe sainikon ke najdik…


Nischal ko marne ke liye jabtak hath upar uth'ta, lagbhag na dekh wali speed se chalta khanjar apna faisla karte aage badh chuki hoti. Gala fade dard bhari chinkh bahar hoti… sharir se kata hua hissa hawa me upar hota aur bacha hua dhar niche jamin par. Aisa lag raha tha halal hone ke baad bakda jamin par gida hai aur farfrate badan se nikalte pran ke sath khun bhi nikal raha ho.


Sainikon ke jhund ke bich Nischal aisa ghira ki usse ab Rijo aur Apini to nahi dekh pa raha tha, lekin kata, fata hath, kamar se upar ka sarir aur chinkhte huye kata sar jamin par gir rahe the aur lashon ke dher wahan banta ja raha tha.. Koi beraham katil unke bich me ghusa, iss kadar kahar barsa raha tha ki wahan se sabhi sainik apne-apne adrishi janwar ke sath, apni jaan bachakar bhagna shuru kar chuke the…


60 sainik aur 30 adrishi janwar ke jatthe ko katne ke baad, khun me nahaya hua Nischal, lashon ke dher ke upar khada tha. Apne ek hath me bada sa khanjar aur dusre hath ki mutthi me Tanisha ke baal ko daboch kar, uska kata hua sar upar uthaye huye tha… taja khun ab bhi Tanisha ke gardan se tap-tap kar chu raha tha…


Nischal lashon ke dher ke upar khade hokar Tanisha ke chehre ko apne chehre ke karib laya aur khun se sane apne honth se uske honth chumte puchne laga….

"Janeman aise naraj hokar chup kyon hai… kya bol rahi thi jara fir se bol."…. Tanisha ke ore se koi jawab na aane par Nischal jor se daharte huye puchne laga…. "Bol na nich prajati, mai uss waqt sun nahi paya tha"..… Dobara puchne par bhi koi jawab na milne par, kata sar Rijo aur Apni ke kadmo me fekte huye… "Oye Apini, ye teri maasooqa kya kah rahi thi yaar, puchh kar bata jara. Lagta hai mere se naraj ho gayi hai. Je mayla Rijo, ye tere log aur wo kamjor se janwar kahan bhag gaye re"


Nischal ke aatank ke bhay se Rijo aur Apini kanp rahe the… jaise hi Tanisha ka kata sar Apini ke kadmon me gira, wo sar ko pakad kar rone laga… Idhar Nischal ke sawal ka jawab nahi mila tha isliye wo shaynnn se hawa bankar thik Rijo aur Apini ke samne tha… "Oye Apini tu romance baad me kar lena, pahle uss se puch ki wo kah kya rahi thi.. Aur sannata tu.. abe idhar udhar kya dekh raha hai, tujh se hi kah raha hun chutiye Rijo"..


Rijo:- Jaaa .. jaaaaa … ji Viggo..


Nischal:- sala tu to yahan shahrukh khan ko fail kar de… kaaa.. kaaaa… Kiran… Abe wo tere Zoren ke khatarnak tukdi kidhar gayi be..


Rijo:- Viggo . Wooo .. Woooooo..


Nischal usse ek thappad khich kar marte…. "Sale saste mimikary artist, ek hi baar haklana achha hai... Baar-baar bore karta hai... Fir mujhe gussa aa jayega… tere wo khatrnak tukdi aur kide jaisa wo tera janawar ki fauj kahan gayab hai..


Rijo:- wo bhag gaye ..


Nischal fir se usse ek thappad marte … "Abe kahne ko to tum sab sale apni badai me kahte ho .. hum toofan hain... nakara se grah Zoren ki shan hai.. kiske pichwade me ghused aaya aan, ban shan… Sale tujh se acha to mera sasur hai... Koi sainya prasikshan nahi liya usne, lekin fir bhi baat-baat me mera collor pakad leta hai aur ek ye tere trained log the.. dar ke bhag gaye... Thuuuuu…

"Ye to cheating hai yaar, main yahan baat karke masla suljhane aaya, to pahle ye Tanisha bhadak gayi aur uske sath sena ki ek tukdi bhadki. Unko samjane gaya to tumhare sena ke bache log yahan se bhag gaye. Sala ye chal kya raha hai. Tu bus apne Mahamahim ke hilane ke liye uska khas bana kya chutiye, koi control hi nahi tera to tere sena par.. ruk teri izzat bacha deta hun aur jara unko saja dekar aata hun, fir aaram se baat karenge…


Nischal apni baat kahkar lagbhag gayab sa ho gaya wahan se aur jo un fizaon me sunai de rahi thi, wo tha kahar. Rijo ke sath aaye adrishi janwaron ke maut ki changhar aur unke sainikon ki chinkh aur pukar dil dahlane wala tha.


Mar kahin bhi rahe the, lekin kate-fate sharir ek jagah hi lakar jama kiya ja raha tha… Rijo Apini ke hath se Tanisha ka kata sar lekar unhi lash ke dher me fekte huye… "Apini wo Sigma Viggo humare logon ko marne me laga hai.. Apini .. hosh me aao . Jab tak wo vyast hai hum bhag lete hain … chalo yahan se."


Apini kuch hosh me aaya aur Rijo ke sath wo bhi bhagne laga.. takriban 300 meter ki duri par jab dono pahunche to aage badh hi nahi pa rahe the.. aisa lag raha tha wahan kisi ne pardarshi dewar khadi kar di ho…


Jab najar ghuma kar Rijo aur Apini ne dekha, to kinare se uske kayi sainik aur adrishi janwar pura jor laga'kar bahar bhagne ki kosis kar rahe the.. Thabhi aisa laga jaise koi majboot pahad uske janwar ke upar giri ho aur fachak se uska sarir kisi machhar ki tarah masal kar ussi pardarshi deewar se chipka di gayi ho. Dekhte hi dekhte kuchli hui lash kisi painting ki bhanti chipak rahi thi, jiska rang diwaron se niche chu raha tha... Aatank ka aisa khufnak najara dekh kar dono ki ultiyan nikal aayi aur dono uss pardarshi deewar ke pass se hat kar apni jagah par wapas aa gaye.


Bus kuch der aur lage, sabhi sainik aur adrishi janwar ki lashon ka dher bilkul wahin ussi aag ke pass laga hua tha… Nischal aaram ki ek angdai lete un dono ke pass pahuncha… "Abe jab main apne dayre se baha bhagne walon ko masal'kar chipka raha tha, fir tum dono ko kisne kaha tha ki wahan deewar par apne sar pito. Acha hua main mud gaya wahan se, warna tum dono bhi dher me pare hote. Fir main baat karke mamla kis se suljhata…"


Apni ek pura bhada hua handi Nischal ke ore badhate… "Viggo aap sabko saza dekar kuch thaka sa mehsus kar rahe honge, isse pikar apne ander sfurti le aaeye"..


Nischal us handi ko lekar un lashon ke upar fekte huye kahne laga…. "Sale Zoren grah ke Jalil log, lana hi tha to prithvi ki ye anuthi aur sabse nayab pine ki chij le aate, jise shrab kahte hain. Ye kya utha'kar laga tha jo pesab se bhi ganda bash mar raha tha. Khair samay kya hua hai wo bata"..


Apini:- 7 baj kar 10 minute ho rahe hai..


Nischal:- Kamal hai sala Aizem grah ke sab se kamjor seema ki sabse kamjor 100 logon ki tukdi bhi mujh se ladti to kam se kam 2 ghante to tik hi jati aur saath me mujhe jaal mahal ilaz ke liye to bhej hi deti. Ye kaisa shaktishali tukdi tha be.. mahaj aadhe ghante me bhagte huye dher ho gaye. Iss se acha to lad hi lete…


Rijo:- wahan kewal ek hi ladta hai aur jab wo ladta hai tab uske samne khade hone ki himmat kisi me nahi hoti. Matr 1000 ki tukdi thi ye.. humare pass 5000 carore sainik 2000 carore adrishi janwar ki fauj hai Viggo. Aap ki hatt prithvi par ek anchana yudh ke sanket lekar aayegi. Aur jab wo khud aayega fir waqt kitna beraham ho sakta hai, ye aap bhi nahi soch sakte… beshak hum aur humare log nahi tike aapke samne lekin aapke jaise 100, Mahamahim ke samne nahi tikenge…


Nischal:- "Yaar thoda kamjor ho gaya hun yahan aakar, isliye dhang se nahi lad paya, iska ye matlab nahi ki tu bejjati karne lag jaye. Khair mudda ye hai ki maine to apni zindgi ki jivan sangni to chun liya. Aur mujhe umr bhar akele jine ki koi ikchha nahi hai. Isliye apne taam-jham samet aur tum dono niklo yahan se."

"Dono ko sirf isliye jinda chhod raha hun, kyonki jakar apne uss Mahamahim se batao ki yahan ek Viggo ko uski Malkia pasand aa gayi hai. Yahi nahi Malkia ke sath sath uss Viggo ko apna ye sasural prithvi bhi pasand aa gaya hai."

"Fir chahe tera 1 Mahamahim yahan aane ki ikchha rakhe ya 100 Mahamahim. Tere pass 5000 carore ka Sanya bal ho ya 500000 carore ka sainya bal ho… main sirf akela .. sirf akela… unhe iss grah ke orbit ke bahar khatam kar dunga.. Tumhare ek viman iss prithvi par laut kar yadi utar aaye, to main apna gala kat kar tere Mahamahim ko bhent kar dunga…"

"Jakar usko bol main akela khada hun yahan aur yadi usme dum hai to yahan ki sima me ghus kar dikhaye… Ab ja iske pahle ki mujhe uss bechari ladki Sapna ka khyal dil me aa jaye aur main shayad tumhe bhi un lash ke dher me pahuncha dun.."

"Oye aur sun, jane se pahle in sab lashon ko wo narbhakshi wala roop dete jana, jiske ajib se nakhun aur dant nikle hote hain… bade bhaiyya ko commissioner to bana hi dun yahan ka… aur laut'kar dobara mat aana yahan…"
Marvelous update bhai super
Mast fight scene tha bhai rijo ke samne nischal ki entry faadu tha aur Jivisha aur nischal ki acting Nandu ke samne mast tha . Nandu is my Favourite character in this story
 

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Kya jalwa dikhaya hai nishchal ne. Saalon ko hijado ki fauj sabit ker diya. Gajab to is lagayi me to bahute maza aane wala hai.
BHAI aap to apane heros ko lekar ek super hero wala universe bhi bana sakte ho jaha nishchal, drishk apni team ke Saath, Rahul, aarav apasyu apni team ke Saath aur sabse powerful jivisha to hai hi.????
 

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Update:-62





Har sainik ki fusfusahat shuru ho gayi thi. Apini aur Rijo ashrya se ek dusre ka muh dekh rahe the. Aur thik Rijo ke piche se kadak dahar si awaz sunai di…. "Thode aaschrya thode dar me dikh rahe, dono. Baat kya hai"..


Nischal piche se Rijo ke kandhe par hath dete huye kaha, lekin Rijo jaise hi pichhe muda wo uske thik samne khada tha….. "Wahan pichhe kise dhundh raha hai be.. samne dekh"..


Samne ka najara dekh'kar to Rijo aur Apini ki dhakane aur bhi jor marne lagi. Bahrupiye Rijo ke pass baitha bahrupiye Apini ke sharir par dhire-dhire lambi si khanjar chal rahi thi aur Nischal uske badan ko bade maje se square shape me kat raha tha… Rijo apna thuk gatakte huye… "Ye aap kya kar rahe hai Viggo"..


Nischal apna kaam teji se pura kiya, khada hokar shaynn se thik uske samne khade hokar… "Apne bahrupiye ko tune kat'te huye nahi dekha na Rijo, isliye iss kide Apini ke bahrupiye ko slow motion me kat kar dikha raha tha. Waise ye square shape me mast dikh raha hai tera behrupiya.... Le apni bhukh mita le kha'kar.


Apini, apna sar jhukaye hath jode… "Viggo aap to baat karke samsya ka hal nikalne aaye the na"..


Nischal:- Haan yaar aaya to wahi sochkar tha lekin ye 2 ek jaise shakl ke kidon makodon ki prajati bahut confusion paida kar rahi thi. Baith jao tum dono, ab koi confusion nahi hai"…


Nischal ke apmanit shabd sabko chubhe to jaroor, khun bhi khaula kintu uska hona hi wahan par bhay tha aur har koi ussi bhay me daba sa ja raha tha. Rijo aur Apini apne mathe ka pasina pochh'kar baith gaye aur Rijo kahne laga…. "Viggo aap to yahan ke samaynusar 9 baje aane wale the na"..


Nischal:- Tune kisi ko mujh par najar rakhne nahi kaha tha kya? Matter tujhe pata to chal hi chuka hoga. Fir bhi yadi koi shanka hai to main usse dur kiye deta hun…

Nischal un dono ke charo ore chakkar lagana shuru kiya.. aur apni attahas bhadi awaz me bolna shuru kiya… "Mujhe, mera joda iss prithvi par mil gaya..… Naam Jivisha hai aur chunki aaj hi pyar ka izhar hua hai isliye maine socha 7 baje tak kaam khatm karke usse thoda samay dun… koi galat socha kya"..


Nischal un dono ke charo ore chakkar kat'te huye aise bhay paida kar raha tha ki wo agar piche se hath bhi unke kandhe par rakhta to shwans atak jati aur aisa lagta jaise ab gardan gaya uska. Nichal agar piche hota to dono ke gardan piche ghum jata aur jab bayen hota to gardan bayen hoti.


Wahin dur bhid ke bich me baithi Tanisha, pure gusse se chillati hui kahne lagi…

"Rakhail maa ke kokh se paida hua ek badjaat sahjada, jo apne grah ka bhagoda hai, wo Viggo kya nikal gaya tum sab to dar ke mare jamin me gade ja rahe. Prithvi ke kamjor se begairat prajati, jiske maans hum jab chahe noch-noch kar khate hain, un badjaat insano ke liye, ye Nischal, apne pita ka ye najayaj santan tum sab ko jalil kar raha hai aur tum sab sun rahe… 2 tukdi ek sath humla karo aur iska sar kaat kar mere kadmon me lakar do.


Nischal, Rijo aur Apini ko dekhte huye… "Kya yaar main to yahan pyar se mamla suljhane aaya tha… Khair, let the show begin"…


Tanisha ne yuddh bigul funk dee. 2 nahi balki apman jhel rahe sabhi sainik ek sath khade ho gaye. Har do sanik ke pass ek adrishi janwar aur 2 sainik tukdi, mauth ka ghere me fasa kar Nischal ko marne ke irade se teji se aage badh gayi. Nischal bhi unki ore daud laga diya… Itni tej wo dauda ki Rijo aur Apini ko aisa laga jaise Nischal yahan se gayab hokar wahan pahuch gaya aur wahan se gayab ho kar,l daur rahe sainikon ke najdik…


Nischal ko marne ke liye jabtak hath upar uth'ta, lagbhag na dekh wali speed se chalta khanjar apna faisla karte aage badh chuki hoti. Gala fade dard bhari chinkh bahar hoti… sharir se kata hua hissa hawa me upar hota aur bacha hua dhar niche jamin par. Aisa lag raha tha halal hone ke baad bakda jamin par gida hai aur farfrate badan se nikalte pran ke sath khun bhi nikal raha ho.


Sainikon ke jhund ke bich Nischal aisa ghira ki usse ab Rijo aur Apini to nahi dekh pa raha tha, lekin kata, fata hath, kamar se upar ka sarir aur chinkhte huye kata sar jamin par gir rahe the aur lashon ke dher wahan banta ja raha tha.. Koi beraham katil unke bich me ghusa, iss kadar kahar barsa raha tha ki wahan se sabhi sainik apne-apne adrishi janwar ke sath, apni jaan bachakar bhagna shuru kar chuke the…


60 sainik aur 30 adrishi janwar ke jatthe ko katne ke baad, khun me nahaya hua Nischal, lashon ke dher ke upar khada tha. Apne ek hath me bada sa khanjar aur dusre hath ki mutthi me Tanisha ke baal ko daboch kar, uska kata hua sar upar uthaye huye tha… taja khun ab bhi Tanisha ke gardan se tap-tap kar chu raha tha…


Nischal lashon ke dher ke upar khade hokar Tanisha ke chehre ko apne chehre ke karib laya aur khun se sane apne honth se uske honth chumte puchne laga….

"Janeman aise naraj hokar chup kyon hai… kya bol rahi thi jara fir se bol."…. Tanisha ke ore se koi jawab na aane par Nischal jor se daharte huye puchne laga…. "Bol na nich prajati, mai uss waqt sun nahi paya tha"..… Dobara puchne par bhi koi jawab na milne par, kata sar Rijo aur Apni ke kadmo me fekte huye… "Oye Apini, ye teri maasooqa kya kah rahi thi yaar, puchh kar bata jara. Lagta hai mere se naraj ho gayi hai. Je mayla Rijo, ye tere log aur wo kamjor se janwar kahan bhag gaye re"


Nischal ke aatank ke bhay se Rijo aur Apini kanp rahe the… jaise hi Tanisha ka kata sar Apini ke kadmon me gira, wo sar ko pakad kar rone laga… Idhar Nischal ke sawal ka jawab nahi mila tha isliye wo shaynnn se hawa bankar thik Rijo aur Apini ke samne tha… "Oye Apini tu romance baad me kar lena, pahle uss se puch ki wo kah kya rahi thi.. Aur sannata tu.. abe idhar udhar kya dekh raha hai, tujh se hi kah raha hun chutiye Rijo"..


Rijo:- Jaaa .. jaaaaa … ji Viggo..


Nischal:- sala tu to yahan shahrukh khan ko fail kar de… kaaa.. kaaaa… Kiran… Abe wo tere Zoren ke khatarnak tukdi kidhar gayi be..


Rijo:- Viggo . Wooo .. Woooooo..


Nischal usse ek thappad khich kar marte…. "Sale saste mimikary artist, ek hi baar haklana achha hai... Baar-baar bore karta hai... Fir mujhe gussa aa jayega… tere wo khatrnak tukdi aur kide jaisa wo tera janawar ki fauj kahan gayab hai..


Rijo:- wo bhag gaye ..


Nischal fir se usse ek thappad marte … "Abe kahne ko to tum sab sale apni badai me kahte ho .. hum toofan hain... nakara se grah Zoren ki shan hai.. kiske pichwade me ghused aaya aan, ban shan… Sale tujh se acha to mera sasur hai... Koi sainya prasikshan nahi liya usne, lekin fir bhi baat-baat me mera collor pakad leta hai aur ek ye tere trained log the.. dar ke bhag gaye... Thuuuuu…

"Ye to cheating hai yaar, main yahan baat karke masla suljhane aaya, to pahle ye Tanisha bhadak gayi aur uske sath sena ki ek tukdi bhadki. Unko samjane gaya to tumhare sena ke bache log yahan se bhag gaye. Sala ye chal kya raha hai. Tu bus apne Mahamahim ke hilane ke liye uska khas bana kya chutiye, koi control hi nahi tera to tere sena par.. ruk teri izzat bacha deta hun aur jara unko saja dekar aata hun, fir aaram se baat karenge…


Nischal apni baat kahkar lagbhag gayab sa ho gaya wahan se aur jo un fizaon me sunai de rahi thi, wo tha kahar. Rijo ke sath aaye adrishi janwaron ke maut ki changhar aur unke sainikon ki chinkh aur pukar dil dahlane wala tha.


Mar kahin bhi rahe the, lekin kate-fate sharir ek jagah hi lakar jama kiya ja raha tha… Rijo Apini ke hath se Tanisha ka kata sar lekar unhi lash ke dher me fekte huye… "Apini wo Sigma Viggo humare logon ko marne me laga hai.. Apini .. hosh me aao . Jab tak wo vyast hai hum bhag lete hain … chalo yahan se."


Apini kuch hosh me aaya aur Rijo ke sath wo bhi bhagne laga.. takriban 300 meter ki duri par jab dono pahunche to aage badh hi nahi pa rahe the.. aisa lag raha tha wahan kisi ne pardarshi dewar khadi kar di ho…


Jab najar ghuma kar Rijo aur Apini ne dekha, to kinare se uske kayi sainik aur adrishi janwar pura jor laga'kar bahar bhagne ki kosis kar rahe the.. Thabhi aisa laga jaise koi majboot pahad uske janwar ke upar giri ho aur fachak se uska sarir kisi machhar ki tarah masal kar ussi pardarshi deewar se chipka di gayi ho. Dekhte hi dekhte kuchli hui lash kisi painting ki bhanti chipak rahi thi, jiska rang diwaron se niche chu raha tha... Aatank ka aisa khufnak najara dekh kar dono ki ultiyan nikal aayi aur dono uss pardarshi deewar ke pass se hat kar apni jagah par wapas aa gaye.


Bus kuch der aur lage, sabhi sainik aur adrishi janwar ki lashon ka dher bilkul wahin ussi aag ke pass laga hua tha… Nischal aaram ki ek angdai lete un dono ke pass pahuncha… "Abe jab main apne dayre se baha bhagne walon ko masal'kar chipka raha tha, fir tum dono ko kisne kaha tha ki wahan deewar par apne sar pito. Acha hua main mud gaya wahan se, warna tum dono bhi dher me pare hote. Fir main baat karke mamla kis se suljhata…"


Apni ek pura bhada hua handi Nischal ke ore badhate… "Viggo aap sabko saza dekar kuch thaka sa mehsus kar rahe honge, isse pikar apne ander sfurti le aaeye"..


Nischal us handi ko lekar un lashon ke upar fekte huye kahne laga…. "Sale Zoren grah ke Jalil log, lana hi tha to prithvi ki ye anuthi aur sabse nayab pine ki chij le aate, jise shrab kahte hain. Ye kya utha'kar laga tha jo pesab se bhi ganda bash mar raha tha. Khair samay kya hua hai wo bata"..


Apini:- 7 baj kar 10 minute ho rahe hai..


Nischal:- Kamal hai sala Aizem grah ke sab se kamjor seema ki sabse kamjor 100 logon ki tukdi bhi mujh se ladti to kam se kam 2 ghante to tik hi jati aur saath me mujhe jaal mahal ilaz ke liye to bhej hi deti. Ye kaisa shaktishali tukdi tha be.. mahaj aadhe ghante me bhagte huye dher ho gaye. Iss se acha to lad hi lete…


Rijo:- wahan kewal ek hi ladta hai aur jab wo ladta hai tab uske samne khade hone ki himmat kisi me nahi hoti. Matr 1000 ki tukdi thi ye.. humare pass 5000 carore sainik 2000 carore adrishi janwar ki fauj hai Viggo. Aap ki hatt prithvi par ek anchana yudh ke sanket lekar aayegi. Aur jab wo khud aayega fir waqt kitna beraham ho sakta hai, ye aap bhi nahi soch sakte… beshak hum aur humare log nahi tike aapke samne lekin aapke jaise 100, Mahamahim ke samne nahi tikenge…


Nischal:- "Yaar thoda kamjor ho gaya hun yahan aakar, isliye dhang se nahi lad paya, iska ye matlab nahi ki tu bejjati karne lag jaye. Khair mudda ye hai ki maine to apni zindgi ki jivan sangni to chun liya. Aur mujhe umr bhar akele jine ki koi ikchha nahi hai. Isliye apne taam-jham samet aur tum dono niklo yahan se."

"Dono ko sirf isliye jinda chhod raha hun, kyonki jakar apne uss Mahamahim se batao ki yahan ek Viggo ko uski Malkia pasand aa gayi hai. Yahi nahi Malkia ke sath sath uss Viggo ko apna ye sasural prithvi bhi pasand aa gaya hai."

"Fir chahe tera 1 Mahamahim yahan aane ki ikchha rakhe ya 100 Mahamahim. Tere pass 5000 carore ka Sanya bal ho ya 500000 carore ka sainya bal ho… main sirf akela .. sirf akela… unhe iss grah ke orbit ke bahar khatam kar dunga.. Tumhare ek viman iss prithvi par laut kar yadi utar aaye, to main apna gala kat kar tere Mahamahim ko bhent kar dunga…"

"Jakar usko bol main akela khada hun yahan aur yadi usme dum hai to yahan ki sima me ghus kar dikhaye… Ab ja iske pahle ki mujhe uss bechari ladki Sapna ka khyal dil me aa jaye aur main shayad tumhe bhi un lash ke dher me pahuncha dun.."

"Oye aur sun, jane se pahle in sab lashon ko wo narbhakshi wala roop dete jana, jiske ajib se nakhun aur dant nikle hote hain… bade bhaiyya ko commissioner to bana hi dun yahan ka… aur laut'kar dobara mat aana yahan…"
Jabardast update hai bhai...... Nischal or jivisha ke shadi ke liye nandita ne apni 12 ecor jomi likh dena chahti hai....or nischal ne wo sab wapas bhejh diya......or khud software bech ke kamaya or nokry bhi mil geya.......or sath me shadi bhi thik ho geya......or jivisha or unke ghar walo ko behosh karke 9 ke jaghah 6 baje hi pouch geya boithak me......or sab ke bend baja diya or apini or rijo ko chod kar....or use uske mahamahim ke pash suchna dene ke liye bhejh diya....o
Kya nischal prithibi par jivisha ko dhundne aaya tha ya jiske liye aaya wo abhi bhi nhi mili....
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