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Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

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Not much was known in this meeting but little was understood. This plan is to be done after 3 months. Marriage or engagement, this moment is a moment of happiness, everyone's heart is filled with enthusiasm. There are decorations everywhere, everything looks great. Apasyu had made Megha very bad….?? Everything was almost fine in the second update as well. Aarav did not appear in these two updates.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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THE FIGHTER said:
First update me Megha ki to vaat laga di ghamandi aurat soch rahi hogi ye hai kya insan hai ya koi divyaladka Ami aur apsyu ka jab tak clear nahi hota unpar koi tipani dena nahi cahta kyu jab tak realtion hi pata na hai kahe energy gawau unke bareme likh ke par dono hai bade mast jab sath me hote hai to ye sachi bekar hai usko Dhruv hi thik rahega level na match hota uska apsyu ke sath judne ka
Abhi to shuruvat hui hai dono me baten clear hone ki apsyu ne to koi reham na kiya diya ek rakh ke ek aur deta to bhi chal jata
Criminal background family keh rahi hai khud ke khandan ke bareme sunegi to heart attach se kahi tapak na jaye
Apsyu apna andar jo bhi hai wo sab nikal na chaiye kyu ki uski bahot si feelings chupa kar rakhi gai hai
Crazy boy ki kuch sacchi feeling na hai wo to moti se Taras kar bhag raha hai moti hote hue bhi sachi ke piche bhag raha hai nirlajya insan hai wo uska sath na do
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Aur kitna clear karun .. Apasyu aur Aimee ke bare me .. ek pura update to diya tha .. tumhe chhod kar sab ko pata hoga :doh:... Pata nahi aaj kal to ye update chhod kar bhi padhne laga hai :angry:..

Baki crazy boy ya girl ka mamla tu khud nipat le bhai main na kuch kahunga... Kyonki RG moti chamri wala hai... Mujhe blood pressure ho jayega lekin use kuch asar na hona.. to kya fayda tease ka :D
 
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rgcrazyboy said:
chalo aaj jake dil ko thodi se rahat mili.
dono ke bich jo bhi tha par.
saachi ab paka apsayu ki tarah ban gai hai.
uski soch pahle se he apsayu ki tarah thi.
par kahe na kahe uske parivar ka mohol uske upar hawai tha.
ab to saachi bhi dard ko apne dil main rakha kar muskurana sekha gai hai.
ab se ek kaam kar na kabhi bhi do tarafa sachi mohbaat vala koi seen mat likhana.
ye bhut torchar karata hai dimag ko.
ye sare updates ek satha deke bhut acha kiya.
kaam se kam yaha koi shikyat updates ko leke to nhi bachi.
haan do tarfa sacha pyar akhar gaya :D
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Are wo reaction bus chhota sa tha aur sochne ka najariya thoda badla hai.. baki sachi sachi hai aur sachi hi rahegi .. u tensayayo mat...

Do tarfa sacchi mohabbat :hehe: .. are a.b script ki demand thi to kya kar sakta hun bata do .. aur shuru se kaun tease kar raha tha .. PGK ki copy... kNTb ki copy .. writer majboor hai.. tum log koi purana chij accept nahi karte to aise naye naye concept sochne parte hain :D ..

Baki shukriya kuch to likha hai aaj comment me dhang ka :D ..
 
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Naina said:
gatar ki badbu to tere se aa rahi hai..
jaa, jaake nale mein muh dhoke aa :D

Iske baad bhi joh kuch bhi hua hai ushme hazar baatein chupa liya apsyu ne.... kyun.. kyunki ushe hero bane rahna hai chaahe woh kuch kar le woh galat nahi...
Achha yahan baat aati hai ki agar saachi ke pita thik nahi hai toh us apsyu ke pita kounse dudh ke dhule huye the.... khud ke hi bhai ke sath chi chi... aur baat karta hai khandaan ki... are pehle apne rago pe daudte khoon ko pehchaan lo ki kiske hai.. phir baat karna.kisipe hath uthana... hmm.. control naina control :D

Haan apsyu chutiya hai aur yahin is kahani ki akhiri sach bhi hai :lollypop:


waise bach gaya nibba...
Yaar achha mauka tha.... kissa hi khatam kar deni thi... roz, roz ki jhik jhik hi khatam hamesha ke liye... :lollypop:

Agar apsyu dhokhebaz nahi hai, agar woh sachha hai toh puri sachhai samne rakh deta... kya uske ponga gurujii ne yeh nahin sikhaya ki adhura sach ka natija baad kitna ghatak ho sakta hai... jab saachi yeh sach Jan jayegi ki apsyu ka target mein se do uske pita aur chacha bhi hai tab uspe kya bitegi.... Jaane kya sikhaya us pounge ne aur kya shikha is nibbe ne. :lollypop:

Chalo jhuthi tassali hi sahi par idea kaam kar gaya.. ab saachi ghut ghut ke nahi jayegi..par ye dekhne wali baat hai ki kab tak.. kyunki apsyu sang joh raha woh apne barbadi ko gale lagaya... joh jald hi saachi ke pita ke sath hone wala .. sari baatein cclear huyi..sochne wali baat yeh hai ki Kya sach mein ?
ek se badhkar ek.........kirdaar Hai idhar..
Aur Saare milke saachi ko hi pagal bana rahi hai... :D

Khair....

Chal nalli ab tu khush ho jaa...
Kamal hai.. Ab yeh parth, swastika jaise jhingul bhi naye adhyay suru karenge :lollypop:
(nothing personal, just a simple review;) )

Khair.... kaafi dilchasp aur romancit kar dene wale updates the teeno..
har ek shabd dil ko chu jaye.. ek gajab ki taazgi thi har update mein..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
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Ye upar kya tha :eek: aur ye nothing personal itni bar likha gaya hai ki na chahte huye bhi sochna par raha hai ki, mujhe hi jalakar aage muh na kholne ka koi upay to nahi likha ja raha ... Nothing personal :hehe: ..

baiharhal jo bhi ho, jale dil padhkar maine to enjoy kiya .. main dekh pa raha tha .. koi reader apne pale bache ko dusre kheme me jate dekh jali kati suna rahi hai .. aur mere dil ko sukoon mil raha hai... aur mera bhi ek chhota sa... "Nothing personal just a counter reply" :D

Thanks a lot for such a lovely comment ... I really enjoyed and appreciate your affort :thanks:
 
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THE FIGHTER said:
Second update me to bhai pitai hi pitai sacchai ka khulasa continue
Par ghusse me sachi ye puch na bhul gai 4 saal se ami use kaise ladka banke bol rahi hai kyu bol rahi hai kya baat hai akhir may be next update me puchle
aur shayad hi apsyu uske baap aur chachi ki kahani sachi ko sunayega lekin last me jab use pata chalega to bada jhatka lagega hi
Sachi ne apni feelings jahir kar di hai aur uske baad ghusaa bhi jahir kar diya hai aur action bhi kiya hai
Aaj bhi sachi intjar kar rahi hai ki apsyu use apna banale lekin age kya likhna hai ye to writer hi Jane
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Hahaha .. agge to usi ke sath chhap diya hun .. jakar padhne ka man .. sachi ka ek lamba chepter tha aur main ise saste me niptane nahi chahta tha .. isliye bade aaram se likhkar post kiya tha ... :thanks: a lot aadi
 
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