Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

[nain11ster]

Running Story....

Read The Fantasy Drama Menia
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai~Ajab Sa Risk Hai~Reload


Real All My Completed Stories....

Enjoy The Emotions And Thriller Journey..
100 Encounter:- The Journey Of An Innocent Girl

Read The Thrill In Romance...
Bhanvar

Read Crazy Fantasy Romance Drama
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai..... Ajab Sa Risk Hai....​

 

[nain11ster]

That Review is of some previous updates..... It seems quiet weird that Bangalore mein Amy and Apasyu ne ekk Secret file ko chori kiya party is inspected party ko shak hua lekin party ko nhi jo ki itna high security k
Rakhi sirf ekk file ke liye shak tou banta hain boss, itna aasani see jane dena......that Fashion was gone jahan intellect sirf hero k pass ho ......
Anyway waiting for further more updates to see how it going....?? ​

Ji aap ne pura gaur kiya hota to weired shayad na lagta .. mai aap ka dhyan le jata hun ...

Police ke pass ghatna wale din ka koi evidence nahi tha.. bus jankari thi .. kuch chor ka group (because of device unhone jab entry mari thi ground floor par tab bahut admi dikh rahe the) ne us ghatna ko anjam diya.. jime wo unke security system ko tod to paye lekin basemnet me koi nahi gaya..

Ab police kis shaq par inquiry kar rahi thi.. to unko shaq hua ki kal jo gadi ka accident rd office ke samne hua tha isme shamil log involve ho sakte the.. kyonki 8 ladke 2 car me aur 2 aimee aur Apasyu ..

So pahle local ko dhundha .. koi link nahi dur dur tak .. fir Aimee aur Apasyu se puchtachh .. jahan evidence ke nam par koi ek hint b nahi .. kyonki 3 rat ka pura lekha jokha tha jo banawti nahi tha...

Upar se ek nashakhor itne bade chori ko anjam de bada sawal hai... so now u self decide .. agar ab bhi koi doubt ho then ask again

 

[nain11ster]

update pls

I love this tarika ... Aise magne ka .. thoda aur request karo

 

[rgcrazyboy]

I love this tarika ... Aise magne ka .. thoda aur request karo

mat do update fear

 

[nain11ster]

N i have some expectations Mr writer... Main yahan sirf thriller aur suspense k chakker mein aayi thi..... Romance is secondary...
I have expected Apasyu n aarav in not hero form wo kehte hain nah bhut bure aur bure main ......tou bura wala type Bas dil nah todi

Uffff ... Ye ladki hai ya saitan .. ladkiyan to pari katha padhti hai... Love story dekh kar khush hoti hai.. mujhe b bahut sare expections hai aap se miss reader ...

Ek kaam karte hai.. 2-4 expectations par aap khadi ho jayen 1-½ expectations par mai bhi raji ho jaunga .. let's work together

 

[nain11ster]

mat do update fear

Thankoo so much rg ye to aur bhi jyada pasand aa gaya .. aaj ek Jodu ka gulam na dikh raha .. kahan gaya ke sath

 

[rgcrazyboy]

Thankoo so much rg ye to aur bhi jyada pasand aa gaya .. aaj ek Jodu ka gulam na dikh raha .. kahan gaya ke sath

use gali sune bina tum ko nid nhi aaye gi

 

[nain11ster]

nain11ster

Are aise kaun mangta hai update ... Aap ne jis. Vyakti ko gun dikhwaya hai wo behosh hokar pade hain... Unse kaam lena hai to kripya hospital le jayen warna goli markar kissa khatam karen

 

[nain11ster]

use gali sune bina tum ko nid nhi aaye gi

bulane ka fir .. today I am on full mood with 8 peg

 

[rgcrazyboy]

bulane ka fir .. today I am on full mood with 8 peg

fear to vo door se he hat jod kar nikal jai ga

 

[nain11ster]

Ab samajh aaya na Sanchi ko. Jab apsyu use ek aam ladki ek collage friend ki tarah milta hai na ki apne f.g ki tarah tab kaisa lag raha hai.
Lagta hai ab saja puri ho gai Sanchi ki qki ab use apne galti ka ehsas hai or wo is galti ko accept bhi kr li hai to apasyu ab use maaf kr apna lega.
Dekhte hai kya hota hai.

Maza aaya na saza ka ... Bechari ki kismat .. galti ka ehsas kitna baad me hua .. kash pahle ho jata .. itna nukshan na uthana parta...


for such a wonderful comment