Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[anandsngh12]

Koi baat nahi bhai, its ok
Mout se kis ki Rishtedari hai
Aaj meri to kal teri bari hai

 

[Nkmahakal]

Superb update

Ek aur adventure start ho gaya

 

[anandsngh12]

Awesome update dear kafi interesting updates hain lekin ab yesa lag raha hai ki Sona , Shree , khaskar Margret aadi ke sath galat kar rahin hain

pyar main Viswas bhi hona chahiye aur uski bat bhi sunni chahiye lekin koi use uska pakchh rakhne ka time bhi na diya aur jane kya kya soch liya Maa ne bhi pura sach janne ki koshish na ki aur kasam dekar dur bhej diya

Aadi ka Ganpat ray wala seen bahot gajab ka likha tha aapne aur isne bharpur sabko
entertain kiya hai Ganpat ray( gaand fat raha hai) aur ganth maro ( gaand maro) bechari carnal smith ki beti ke pichwade ka naksa hi bigad giya ek bar main itna bada andar kar diya ki wo sahan na kar payi aur bachao bachao daddy bolte huye behosh ho gayi aur yo apna hero to uske daddy ke samne bhi uski beti ki mare ja raha tha ye to achha huya ki gusse main aake smith ki goliyan usko nahin lagi warna jane kya hota

Ab to aadi un sabko chhod ke chala gaya hai mere khayal se aadi ko tab tak sabse dur hi rahna chahiye jab tak unhe apni galti ka ehshas ho jaye aur is samay main aadi ko khud ko janne ki koshish karni chahiye aur mature hona chahiye usne to sabki bhalai ke liye apne real Maa Pitaji se milne bhi na gaya apne gam ko daba ke rakha hai story hai story is mod se thoda serious hoke chalegi aur hero ko gyan ki Prapti hogi lekin uske pahle lagta hai use kai muskil halato se gujarna hoga jiski Suruwat shayad ho chuki hai

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[anandsngh12]

Dear Anand,
So far as comedy is concerned, only a person not understanding the importance of comedy in life can get bored of. So please continue with the comedy stuff.
Next, the poem in the last update was excellent.
Third, I am unable to understand why it's necessary to end Adi's role? This will only hurt a mother who doesn't know even in iota of the reality. Let the hero continue with both.
It's just a suggestion, that I seldom give to any author as suggestions usually corrupt the originality of any story.
Keep writing and keep rocking...

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Thanks bro for Liking the update
Some buddy's are frustrating from comedy
They not much like laughing
So, I have closed this chapter before more three updates
Adii's role has not end but converted from adii to rishi
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[anandsngh12]

Mai aapki baat samjhta hun bhai jo aap samjhana chahte hain par aap nahi samjhte jo mai kah raha hun aap apni jagah sahi ho mai apni

Main apki baat samajh gaya hu, tabhi to maine dubara us update ko padhne ke liye kaha hai
Meri adat hai ki koi bhi incident likhta hu to uske bare me hazar tarah se soch leta hu pahle ki iske likhne se kitne aur kya kya sawal uthenge Isliye main har sawal ke jawab ke liye every time ready rahta hu

 

[anandsngh12]

Bhai agla update mega update hoga to maza ajeyega

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[anandsngh12]

Nice update

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[anandsngh12]

Badiya update Bhai

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[anandsngh12]

Shandar update bhai

Adi ka itne aasani se marne ka karna shayad wo under totna or kamjor hona hai.

Pr usko kya dono rasto ke baare me pta tha jo usne ab bhog ko chuna tha ?

Abi to do heroine or bachi hoyi hai...

Waiting...

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[anandsngh12]

Bhai mene asie thodi kaha ke hindi kahena bura hai aur app to pm ko bhi le aaye ,aur itna kuch suna diya.me bas itna kahe raha tha agar ek admi ko hindi proper kahena nahi aata to vo hindi me baat kyun karega vo bhi london me jisse samjh ne me misunderstanding ho rahi ho isisliye bola agar app ko bura laga to sorry me ab se reply nahi dunga bas padha karunga.

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Mai naraz nahi hu bhai
Maine sirf apke dwara uthaye gaye sawalo ke jawab diye hain
Hindi me baat karne ki vajah hai bhai, bahut badi vajah hai
Sabse pahli baat ki vo army ka bada officer rah chuka hai
Army ke top officers ko har desh par nazar rakhni hoti hai
Dushmano ki bhasa aur dusre desho ki bhasa ka knowledge rakhna hota hai
Aur ek important baat bhai aap hi sochiye ki hamare desh me english bolne wale ki kitni jyada value hai
Agar ganpat se english bolni aati hoti to kya wo driver ka kaam karta....?
Kahi bhi aram se kam se kam supervisor ki job to mil hi jati usko english bolne wale ko
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