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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Asif khan

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ALAG ALAG JAGAH PAR KUCH LOG VARTAMAN , BHAVISHYA AUR SAHI WAQT KI BAATIEN KAR RAHE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KE BOARD EXAMS SHURU HO GAYE HAIN...


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UPDATE-7





PLACE-ALFREEN ORPHANAGE






MAI DEKH RAHI HUN AAJ KAL AAP KABHI MOBILE ME TOH KABHI LAPTOP ME KUCH ZYADA HI KHOYE HUE REHTE HAIN.....


subah ka waqt hai... FLORIN orphanage ke lawn me baithe kaafi der se apne phone ko haathon me le ussi me khoye hue the....

aur ye sirf abhi ya fir ye kahun aaj ka hi haal nahi tha..kuch dino se lagatar FLORIN yunhi apni sochon me goom rehne lage the aur ye baat unki patni see chhupi nahi thi...

par unhone abhi se pehle tak FLORIN se is baare me kuch bhi nahi kaha tha

but abhi morning tasks complete kar wo baahar aayin toh apne husband ko fir waise hi haath me mobile liye sochon me goom dekha toh is baar unhone baat chhed hi di...

wahin apni wife ki awaaz sun FLORIN ek jhatke me apni soch se baahar aaye aur muskurate hue...


FLORIN-aap kab se hum par shak karne lagi!!!!

MARIA-maana aap baaton ko ghumane me expert hain but humpe aapka ye hunar kaam nahi aane waala....

us raat RAAZ ke bed par jo alphabets ke scratches dikhe the,unhi ke baare me soch rahe hain naa aap pichle kuch dino se....

FLORIN-jab aapko pata hai toh fir sawal kyun???

MARIA-bas aise hi...dekhna tha aap sidhe sidhe batate hain ki nahi....aur aapne

FLORIN- nahi bataya...


MARIA ke baat ko FLORIN ne pura kiya...


MARIA-as usual....aapko har problem akele hi solve karne ki aadat jo hai...

but ek baat bataiye,is baar toh problem jaisi bhi koi cheez nahi hai...fir itni chaan been kyun???

i mean wo jo alphabets bane the,unka koi matlab ho,ye zaroori bhi toh nahi..

humne dekha toh tha ki RAAZ ki body kitni vibrate ho rahi thi..aise me uske nails se scratches ban gaye honge...

FLORIN-Nahi MARIA..its not as simple as it looks...pehli baat toh wo alphabets nhi words the jinse koi na koi sentence zaroor banta hai....

aur us sentence ka koi deep meaning bhi zaroor hoga...

MARIA-and what makes you so sure about that???

FLORIN-RAAZ....kuch toh hai is bacche me jo naa toh normal hai aur naa hi common..he is very very different...

tum khud ek baar rewind me jaakar uski history dekho...

minus celcius me ye hume ek tokre me milta hai...itni kam degree me ek new born baby ka 2 minute bhi survive karna impossible hai but ye normal tha....

fir hume uske tokre se ek paper milta hai jispar kisine uska naam likh chhoda tha..aur naam kya likha tha??? RAAZ...!!!i mean koi kisika aisa naam kyun rakhega...???

aisa nahi hai ki is naam ke aur bache nahi hain,but fir bhi ek bacche ko jisse chhod diya gaya ho,uska bakayada naam karan karkar chhodna,ye normal nahi hain...

uske baad ye baccha bada hone laga..but apne naam ko matlab dete hue bilkul ussi ki tarah raha hai he ladka...

kisi bhi chiz me ruchi nahi hai iski, behaviour bhi ek RAAZ ki tarah hi hai,yahan tak aaj tak ek bhi exam aone dum par clear nahi kiya isne...

aisa lagta hai maano iska life me koi aim hi nahi hai...aisa baccha jisne kabhi kisi se communicate bhi nahi kiya ho, usse kisi bhi tarah ke tark ki ummid bhi nahi ki jaa sakti...

but iska case toh ulta hai..ye nahi bolta toh nahi bolta,but agar bole toh fir koi aur bolne laayak nahi rehta...

wo 3 din pehle ki baat yaad hai naa jo maine batayi thi???

MARIA- haan wo warden waali naa...!!!

FLORIN- haan wahi...jo baatein RAAZ ne kahi,maine aisi baatein,and more importantly, aisi soch uski umar ke bacchon me kabhi nahi dekhi hai.....

itna intellectual dimag,aur koi passion nahi..ye kaise ho sakta hai???

MARIA-usse bhi wierd mujhe ye laga ki jo baccha kabhi books ko chhuta bhi nahi hai,usne holy books ki itni deep baatein kahan se jaan li....

FLORIN-thats my point...is bacche me kuch na kuch toh zaroor hai jo aabse alag hai...aur isiliye hi mai guarentee ke saath keh sakta hun ki us raat uske nails ne jo bhi likha,uska koi naa koi matlab zaroor hai....

MARIA-but main question toh wahi hai....KYA???kya matlab chhupa hai un writings me....

jahan tak mujhe pata hai aapne abhi tak saare decoders try kar liye honge,even world me kahi jaane waali saari languages se bhi un words ko match karkar dekh liya hoga....!!!

FLORIN-haan,wo sab toh kar liya hai,but no result....

MARIA-toh fir ab!!!!

FLORIN-ussi ke baare me toh soch raha tha...dekhte hain,kahin se koi hint toh zaroor milegi...


FLORIN ki baat par MARIA kuch kehne hi waali thi ki tabhi unke paas se guzarta hua mai school ki taraf nikal gaya jisse unka topic change ho gaya...


MARIA-aaj iska second paper hai..i hope is saal ye paas ho jaaye....

FLORIN-i hope so too...waise mai soch raha hun ki ek baar jaakar khud check kar lun...

MARIA-mai bhi yahi kehne waali thi....infact aaj hi chale jaana...

FLORIN-sure...mai shower le leta hun...

MARIA- thik hai...mai tab tak kitchen ke samaan ki list bhi warden ko de aati hun...

FLORIN-alright....


ye bol dono nikal gaye...chaliye jab tak FLORIN school pahunchte hain,hum kahin aur se hokar aa jaate hain...

but usse pehle ye jaan lijiye ki FLORIN kya check karne ki baat kar rahe hain....

pehle ki tarah board exams ke papers check hone ke liye ab central board ke paas nahi jaate the balki baaki classes ki hi tarah ye papers bhi examination centres waale school me hi check hote the..

but unhe check karne waale teachers dusre centres ke hote the...

par jis school me RAAZ padhta hai,us school ke principal board exams ke committee ke chairman hain aur hamare FLORIN,ussi school ke head trustee hain...

aur main baat,us school ke principal ko FLORIN ke recommendation par hi central board ka chairman banaya gaya hai...

isiliye FLORIN principal se keh bas ek baar RAAZ ke likhe papers dekhna chahte the aur isiliye hi wo aaj school jaa rahe hain...

ab dekhte hain,school me unhe RAAZ ka paper dekhne ko milega ya fir kuch aur......!!!!!





PLACE-TONGASS NATIONAL FOREST





SHIT....LAG RAHA THA IS BAAR KAAMIYAB HO HI JAAUNGI PAR AAKHIR YE HAI KYA JO MUJHE AAGE JAANE SE BAAR BAAR ROK DE RAHA HAI....

IS BAAR TOH LAG HI RAHA THA KI KUCH NAYA DIKHEGA,BUT FIR SE WAHI.....


subah ka waqt hai... apni gufa ke baahar MAHI dhyan ki mudra me baithi thi...

mudra isiliye kyunki dhyan uska toot chuka tha...aut ye pehli baar nahi hua tha jab uska dhyan toota tha...

ab toh ginti bhi yaad naa rahi ki MAHI ka najaane kitni baar dhyan toota hai...

aur issi baat se wo frustrate ho rahi hai....par aakhir MAHI dhyan me baithi hi kyun hai aur wo wajah kya hai jiski wajah se uska dhyan toot raha hai....

aayiye pehle is baare me jaan lete hain....waise pehle ye jaan lijiye ki MAHI bachpan se hi dhyan lagati aa rahi hai...

wo AWAAZ jisne MAHI ko lagatar books laa kar diye hain,bachpan me hi usse us awaaz ne dhyan lagane ke liye MAN SHAKTI naam ki ek book laakar di thi jisme meditation se judi kaafi jaankari thi...

MAHI ko shuru se hi ye kriya kaafi bhaayi thi aur isiliye usne us book ko padh meditation karna shuru kar diya tha...

MAHI ke dimag ke lagatar chalne ki wajah se meditation ne uski jaafi madad ki...
meditation process ke dauran mahi ka dimag naa sirf shaant rehta tha balki MAHI ki seekhi har cheez ko aur behtar banane me bhi madad karta tha...

jaisa ki maine bataya tha ki MAHI ka dimag MAHI ke neend me bhi active rehkar uski sikhi chizon ko perfect banane me laga rehta hai isiliye 3 raat pehle jo MAHI ke sapne me awaaz gunji thi, MAHI ke dimag ne us awaaz ki tarango ko apne andar store kar liya tha...

aur filhal MAHI dhyan me baith unhi awaaz ki tarangon se us awaaz ke shroth ko khojne ki koshish kar rahi thi...

waise filhal kehna sahi nahi hoga...kyunki jis raat wo awaaz MAHI ke kaano me gunji thi,uske agle din uththe hi usne dhyan me baith us awaaz ke baare me aur jaanane ki koshish shuru kar di thi..

par lagatar kayi baar koshish karne ke baawjud usse kuch haasil nahi hua...

par jo haar maan jaaye wo MAHI nahi ho sakti...aur isiliye....

apne man ko puri tarah se shaant kar MAHI ne ek baar firse apni aankhen band kar li aur....

tez roshni ke beech MAHI apne dimag ko shunya ki taraf le jaane lagi..

ye karna MAHI ke liye kaafi aasan tha kyunki wo ye bachpan se karti aa rahi thi...

roshni ke bhul bhulaiyon se guzarte hue MAHI ek aise bindu ki taraf jaane lagi jisse ye saari roshni faili hui thi aur kuch hi samay me wo us bindu k saamne thi...

ek chote se nukile point ki tarah dikhne waala bindu asal me MAHI ke dimag ka wo hissa tha jisme uske saath aaj tak ghati saari ghatnaon ka sangrah tha....

apni manzil ke shuruati point par pahunchte hi MAHI ka dhyan aur strong ho gaya aur aisa hote hi MAHI us bindu ke andar khinchi chali gayi..

us bindu ke andar pahunch MAHI uski yaadon ke har khaachon ko dekhne lagi aur dekhte dekhte usse ek alag tarah ki urja ka abhaas hua..

ye wahi urja thi jo MAHI ne us raat sapne me aaye AWAAZ se mehsoos ki thi...

us urja ko dekh MAHI uski taraf badh gayi...aur kuch hi palon me MAHI us urja ke andar thi..

jaise mastishk me roshni hoti hai,waisi hi kuch roshni us urja me bhi thi but ye roshni apne andar behad taakat samete hue thi jo MAHI saaf mehsoos kar paa rahi thi...

dheere dheere MAHI us roshni numa urja me khoti hui aage badhti chali gayi..

par jaise jaise MAHI aage badh rahi thi,usse aisa lag raha tha maano koi usse piche dhakka dene ka prayas kar ho...

aur yahi wo wajah thi jiski wajah se MAHI ka dhyaan lagatar tutatha aa raha tha but is baar MAHI ka nishchay atti dridh tha....wo apne pure dhyan ko ek jut rakh bina concentration ko tutne diye dheere dheere hi sahi but aage badhti gayi...

aur dekhte hi dekhte MAHI us point ko paar kar gayi jisse wo ab tak aage badh nahi paayi thi...

aur yahi wajah thi ki ab wo urja,wo roshni behad ugra ho gayi thi...aisa kag raha tha maano agar MAHI aise hi aage badhti rahi toh wo urja phat padegi....

par in saari baaton se anjaan MAHI aage badhti chali gayi..uske dimag ki nason me tanav dikhne laga tha par ye MAHI ki zidh hi thi jiski wajah se sab kuch jhelta hua uska dimag abhi bhi dhyan me hi tha...

par us urja ka tej bhi lagatar badhta hi jaa raha tha aur isiliye hi ab MAHI ke mastishk ke nason me sujan dikhne lagi thi...

ab situation ye thi ki yaa toh MAHI apni koshish me kaamiyab ho jaayegi yaa fir uska dimag fat jaayega...

aur shayad in dono me se koi ek chiz ho hi jaati ki tabhi....


MAHI................


ek tez dahad si awaaz MAHI ke dimag me gunji aur aisa hote hi MAHI ek jhatke me dhyan se baahar aa gayi....

par MAHI ka dimag itni urja ke pressure ko jhel nahi paaya jiski wajah se MAHI behosh ho chuki thi........





PLACE-SCHOOL OF RAAZ





how are you doing principal sir????

principals cabin ke andar aate hue FLORIN ne ye baat kahi jisse sun principal jo ki kuch padh rahe the,unki nazar saamne khade FLORIN par padi...

(role nahi hai principal ka isiliye naam nahi likh raha)


PRINCIPAL-arre FLORIN sir..aap yahan???what a pleasant surprise....waise agar aapne kaha hota toh mai apke paas aa jaata...

FLORIN-kyun mai yahan nahi aa sakta kya???


FLORIN samne rakhi chair par baiththe hue bole...


PRINCIPAL-ofcourse u can sir...after all its ur school...toh pehle bataiye,kya mangwaun??? coffee aur some thing else...!!!

FLORIN-no formalities needed sir...aap bataiye,kaise chal raha hai school???

PRINCIPAL-its good sir, actually very good..last year acadamic competition ke base par hamara school pure ROMANIA me 5th position par tha,par is baar hum 2nd position par hain...

FLORIN-wow,thats really impressive...


FLORIN ko baat ghumakar karne ki aadat thi nahi isiliye...


FLORIN-acha ye bataiye, how are the exams going???

PRINCIPAL-great sir...sab smoothly ho jaayega...

FLORIN-great..and what about RAAZ???wo paper properly de raha hai naa!!i mean likh raha hai naa,answer sheet blank toh nahi chhod de raha hai....!!!!

PRINCIPAL-sir mai toh rounds par jaata nahi isiliye no idea...but i hope ki wo is saal toh likh raha hoga...!!!

FLORIN-can i see his last papers sheet???

PRINCIPAL-sir sheets toh saare roll numbers ke according lockers ne rakh diye jaate hain..checking fir ek saath hoti hai isiliye....

aur lockers ki safety ke liye unki keys bhi kisi specific appointed faculty member ke paas hi hogi...

but haan,aaj ke papers abhi just hi khatm hue hain..agar unhe lockers me rakha naa gaya ho toh mai check karwa sakta hun???

FLORIN-mai yahin baitha hun???


FLORIN ki baat ka matlab samajh PRINCIPAL turant utha aur baahar ki taraf nikal gaya,wahin principal ke jaane ke baad FLORIN apna mobile nikalkar dekhne lage....


KUCH DER BAAD:-


sorry sir, actually aaj ke papers bhi lockers me daale jaa chuke hain.. toh filhaal toh papers nahi nikal sakte but agar aap kahen toh next paper ke waqt mai nikalwa lunga.

wapas apne cabin me ghuste hue principal ne kaha jisse sun


FLORIN-mai aapko call kar lunga...


uththe hue FLORIN ne kaha...


PRINCIPAL-sure sir...sir ek baat puch sakta hun???


FLORIN jaane ke liye palte hi the ki tabhi principal ne ye kaha jisse sun FLORIN ruk gaye...


FLORIN- kahiye???

PRINCIPAL-aapko ENOCHIAN padhni aati hai???

FLORIN-ENOCHIAN!!!ye kya hai???

PRINCIPAL-sorry sir,but jab mai andar aaya tab aap mobile me ek pic dekh rahe the,toh galti se meri nazar us pic par padh gayi...isiliye mai aapse puch baitha....


principal ki baat sun FLORIN ko laga jhatka....

FLORIN ne turant apna mobile lock open kar RAAZ ke naakhun se likhi likhawat waali pic nikaali aur usse principal ke saamne kar pucha...

aap iski baat kar rahe hain..!!!


PRINCIPAL-jee sir,ye ENOCHIAN language hai....

FLORIN-ENOCHIAN language...!!!ye kahan boli jaati hai...???maine toh saare present aur yahan tak ki dead languages bhi check kiye net pe,par wahan toh maine is ENOCHIAN language ke baare me kahin bhi nahi padha...

PRINCIPAL-wo isiliye sir kyunki ye language humans ki hai hi nahi...

FLORIN-i didn't understand..matlab???

PRINCIPAL-matlab ye ki ENOCHIAN ANGEL'S LANGUAGE hai...kaha jaata hai ki ANGEL'S is language me baat kiya karte hain....


(APNE MAN SE NAHI LIKHA HAI GUYZZ.. THERE'S ACTUALLY A LANGUAGE CALLED ENOCHIAN JISKE BAARE ME KAHA JAATA HAI KI YE EK ANGELS LANGUAGE HAI...CHAHO TOH GOOGLE KAR LO)


PRINCIPAL-actually mujhe mythology me kaafi interest hai..mere paas mythologies ki kaafi books bhi hain,wahin maine aisi writings dekhi hain aur iske baare me bataya bhi gaya hai...

principal ki baatein sun FLORIN ke dimag me dhamake ho rahe the...unhe zara bhi andaza nahi tha ki aisa bhi kuch hoga....

jab FLORIN bina kuch kahe ek tak sunya ko ghurte hue chup chaap baithe rahe toh....


PRINCIPAL-kya hua sir??are u all right????


FLORIN ke haath ko halka hilate hue principal ne kaha tab jaakar kahin FLORIN wapas present me aaye...


FLORIN-haan!!!haan,i am fine...bas wo kuch yaad aa gaya tha..

PRINCIPAL-ok..waise sir, ye writings aapko kahan mili???


ab FLORIN usse sach toh bata nahi sakte the isiliye,


FLORIN-wo kahin likhi hui dekhi thi maine.. interesting lagi toh photo click kar liya tha...

waise kya aapke paas is ENOCHIAN language ki koi alphabetical book hai...

PRINCIPAL- book toh nahi hai but haan, ENOCHIAN alphabets ke english translation ka ek page hai mere paas...


principal ki baat sun FLORIN khush ho gaye....

FLORIN-can you show me...??

PRINCIPAL-of course,why not sir???


ye bol principal uthe aur paas hi rakhe ek daraz ke paas jaakar khade ho gaye...

wahan kuch books rakhi thi jo different mythologies par based thi...

unhi me se ek book nikal uske beech ke panno me se unhone ek page jo alag se rakhi hui thi wo nikali aur.


PRINCIPAL- here we go sir...ye rahi wo page....


principal ne FLORIN ke aage ek page dikhaya jisse FLORIN ne turant le liya...


FLORIN chahte toh us page ko ghar bhi le jaa sakte the but curiousity itni thi ki unse control nahi hua aur wo wahi par rakhi ek plain page aur pen utha ENOCHIAN to English translate karne me lag gaye....

aur kuch hi seconds me translation puri ho chuki thi...par translation hone ke baad bhi FLORIN thode confused se dikhe jisse shayad principal bhaamp gaye.....


PRINCIPAL-sir ENOCHIAN language ko left se right nahi balki right se left padha jaata hai....


ye ek nayi baat thi..ek baar principal ko dekh FLORIN ki nazar wapas apne translate kiye page par padhi aur is baar jaise hi unhone proper translate kiya toh unhe fir ek jhatka laga....

bina kuch kahe FLORIN khade hue aur chupchaap principal ke cabin se nikal gaye bina ye dekhe ki principal unki haalat dekh muskura raha tha....

aur jaise hi FLORIN baahar nikle,uske agle hi minute koi us cabin ke andar aaya...

par...arrreee ye kyaaaaa,ye toh PRINCIPAL hai...fir jo banda FLORIN se baat kar raha tha aur jo is waqt pehle hi andar baitha hai.....wo....arree ab ye kya hai ???andar toh koi hai hi nahi..jo baitha tha,wo principal toh gayab ho chuka tha......

wahin in sab se alag FLORIN thage se chup chaap bahar nikalte chale gaye the...

unke dimag me baar baar wo shabd gunj rahe the jo ab translation ke baad clear ho chuke the...

but ab problem ye thi ki FLORIN jisse jawab samajh rahe the wo toh ek naya sawal nikla ye fir ye kahun ki ek PAHELI nikli....

FLORIN ne ek baar firse us paper ko dekha jispar ENOCHIAN ka english translation tha aur unke mooh se apne aap wo shabd,wo translation nikal gayi....



UNFOLD.....THE ......RAAZ........


(NAME OF THE FIRST CHAPTER)







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V.J.....
Kia baat h bahi hamesha dhmake pe dhmaka hi kerte ho

Oh ye Kon tha principle ki jaga

Is ne to Florian ko or uljha dia

let's see what happend
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KA DIMAG ATYADHIK PRESSURE NAHI JHEL PAATA JISKI WAJAH SE MAHI BEHOSH HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF FLORIN KO ENOCHIAN BHASHA ME LIKHE WAKYA KA MATLAB PATA CHAL JAATA HAI...


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CHAPTER-1




(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




UPDATE-8





PLANET- EARTH



PLACE-ALFREEN ORPHANAGE





IS WAQT YAHAN KYA KAR RAHE HO????


ye awaaz MARIA ki thi...MARIA kaafi der se FLORIN ko dhund rahi thi par jab wo baaki jagah par nahi mile tab wo RAAZ ke room ki taraf aayi jahan unka shak sahi saabit hua kyunki FLORIN RAAZ ke room me hi the aur uske books ko check kar rahe the...


MARIA-ab ye kya kar rahen han aap??camaras toh install kiye hain fir khud aakar check kyun karna padh gaya aapko????


ek hafte se upar guzar chuka tha us wakiye ko jab FLORIN ko un ansuljhe alphabets ka matlab samajh me aaya tha...

ENOCHIAN LANGUAGE...yahi tha wo language jisme RAAZ ke naakhun ne un alphabets ko likha tha...

wapas orphanage pahunch kar FLORIN apne room me jaa apna sir pakad kar baith gaye the...

us shock ka asar ab tak unke dimag se utra nahi tha aur shayad itni jaldi utarne waala bhi nahi tha...

waise baat koi mamuli bhi toh nahi thi.... FLORIN ke khayalon ke aakhri chhor ne bhi aisa nahi socha tha ki jis code numa alphabets ka matlab wo janana chah rahe the,wo kuch aisa niklega....!!!!

wo apne sir par haath rakh yunhi apni sochon me goom the aur shayad aage bohot der tak rehne bhi waale the but tabhi unki wife MARIA room me pahunchi aur jab unhone apne pati ko yun chehre par chinta liye gehri soch me dooba paaya toh unhe bhi shock laga..

aur wo shock 440 volt ke jhatke me tab badla jab unke pati FLORIN ne unhe apni soch ka kaaran bataya...

jab MARIA ko RAAZ dwara likhe alphabets ka matlab aur un alphabets ke language ke baare me pata chala toh unka dimag bhi chakra gaya...

unki condition bhi same unke pati ke jaisi ho gayi.....us pure din shanti ne dono ke beech ek adrishya deewar ko banaye rakha....

par fir agle din MARIA ne aage kya karna hai,iske baare me FLORIN se pucha tab FLORIN ne kaha ki unhe RAAZ ke upar 24 hours nazar lagaye rakhna hoga kyunki jo bhi chiz in sabke piche chuppi hai,wo RAAZ ke through hi saamne aa sakti hai aur isiliye jab shaam ko RAAZ lake side baitha hua tha aur uske room mates bhi room me nahi the tab FLORIN ne chupke se RAAZ ke room me ek safe jagah dekh kar camaras install kar diye taaki apne room me baith wo lagatar RAAZ ki harkaton ko dekh saken..

aur ussi camera ki baat MARIA kar rahi hain....


FLORIN- itne din beet chuke hain,camaras install kiye but sab toh normal hi lag raha hai..

RAAZ ke taraf se kuch bhi abnormal ya unusual activity nahi dekhi hai humne isiliye socha ki ek baar khud aakar dekh lun...

MARIA-toh kuch pata chala???

FLORIN-nahi...socha books check kar leta hun...

shayad books ke andar kuch likh kar ya koi hint rakha ho but ye dekho uske books...

dekhkar lagta hai mai pehla hun jisne isse khola hoga....aisa laga hai jaise abhi abhi books depo se fresh uthakar laaye gaye hain....


ek thandi saans chhodte hue FLORIN ne kaha...

FLORIN ki baat sun pehle toh MARIA muskurayi par for unhe ek idea aaya....


MARIA-wo language....kya naam tha???haan, ENOCHIAN...uske baare me pata karo...shayad koi nayi baat saamne aaye!!!

FLORIN-jitna pata kar sakta tha, already pata kar chuka hun....but fir bhi UNFOLD THE RAAZ....is phrase se koi link connect nahi kar paaya hun...

MARIA-hmm..but strange hai naa,ki aisi bhi koi language exist karti thi,aur logon ko iski knowledge bhi nahi hai...

FLORIN-haan,ye toh hai aur wo bhi tab jab isse judi baatein itni interesting hai...

MARIA- interesting matlab!!!

FLORIN-maana jaata hai ki jab GOD ne duniya ka nirmaan kiya toh issi ENOCHIAN language me aisa hone ke liye order diya tha...

ye bhi kaha jaata hai ki is language ko antediluvian language bhi kaha jaata hai...

kehte hain ki kyunki pehli baar ye language GOD ke awaaz se nikli thi isiliye jab bhi GOD ke angels is language me baat karte the,tab un sab ke visual forms aur sound waves se ek energy nikalti thi jo ki pure universe se bhi zyada strong thi isiliye zyada tar ANGELS aisi jagah par hi baat karte the jahan kayi lights door tak bhi koi living planet naa ho...

MARIA-you mean hamare earth ko chhodkar bhi living planets hain!!!???

FLORIN-is book ke hisab se chalen toh yes..but ye hamare concern ka matter nahi hai...

hume toh bas is language ka us phrase se connection dhundna hai...

MARIA-aur mujhe lagta hai ki ye hume khudse toh milne waala hai nahi...

FLORIN-and why do u say that???

MARIA-kyunki jo tumhe already pata chala hai,ye ENOCHIAN language..ye bhi tumne khud nahi dhunda hai...

kahin aur se pata chala hai..socho ki agar us din tum principal sir se nahi mile hote,toh shayad is baare me hum kabhi bhi nahi jaan paate..

isiliye meri maano,toh ab iske baare me sochna chhodo....agar iske baare me pata lagna hoga,toh kisi naa kisi zariye se hume pata chal hi jaayega...


MARIA ki baat sach hi thi..aur isiliye....


FLORIN-i think u are right...mujhe bhi lagta hai,iske baare me aur sochne ka koi matlab nahi hai...jab pata lagna hoga lag jaayega...

MARIA-exactly....chalen...

FLORIN-chalo...


apne saare vicharon ko jhatak MARIA aur FLORIN RAAZ ke room se nikal corridor se hote hue apne room ki taraf nikle hi the ki....


WARDEN-sir,school se principal sir aayen hai..aapse milna chahte hain...

MARIA-principal...aur wo bhi is waqt???

FLORIN-chaliye, hum aate hain...


warden apne room ki taraf nikal gaya wahin FLORIN MARIA ke saath apne cabin ki taraf chal pade jahan principal ke roop me ek naya sawal unka intazar kar raha tha...

ek aisa sawal jo bohot jald unke saare sawalon ke jawab me badalne waala tha....



WAHIN DUSRI TARAF:-



TONGASS NATIONAL FOREST




HATH,ZIDH JAB MASTISHK PAR HAAWI HO JAATA HAI,TOH PARINAAM BHI UTNA HI BHAYANKAR HO JAATA HAI...

LAKSHYA PAR PAHUNCHNE KI CHAAH GALAT NAHI,PAR USKE LIYE WAQT KE SAATH CHEDCHHAD BHI SAHI NAHI....


behosh padi MAHI ke saamne is waqt koi khada tha jiske chehre ko toh padha nahi jaa sakta tha par uski aankhon me MAHI ke murchit sharir ko dekh dard saaf jhalak raha tha....ye koi aur nahi ussi awaaz ka swami tha jisne MAHI ke gyan ko badhane me bachpan se lekar ab tak uski madad karta aaya tha...


AWAAZ-tumpar krodh karun yaa garv....

krodh is baat ka ki jis awaaz ke shroth ko tum khoj rahi thi,us awaaz ki swamini,aur uske kahe gayi baatein,sab ka pardapran hone hi waala tha,phir bhi tumne usse khojne ki koshish ki....

aur garv isiliye kyunki mastishk ke jis chakshayu tak pahunchne ka marg band kar diya gaya hai,tum apne asli jeeven me kadam rakhne se poorv hi wahan tak pahunch gayi jo ki durlabh hai...

bhale hi niyati ne tumhari manzil pehle hi tay kar di hi, par tumme wo sahas hai jo niyati ka rasta bhi mod de.....

tumhe yun dekh acha toh bilkul nahi lag raha..hriday kehta hai ki tumhari chetna tumhe louta dun par mastishk aisa nahi chahta...

kyunki uththe hi tum bina ruke fir wahi jaane ki koshish karogi jahan filhal tum pahunch nahi sakti...

isiliye......


us awaaz ke maalik ke mooh se ek roshni nikli aur sidhe MAHI par padi...

MAHI jo apne gufa ke baahar hi behosh padi hui thi,us roshni ke uspar padhte hi uska sharir hawa me utha aur gufa ke andar chala gaya jahan pehle hi narm gadde biche hue the...

us roshni ne MAHI ko ghere usse us gaddhe ke upar leta diya...


AWAAZ-tumhari chetna ab ussi din khulegi jis din tumhara naya safar shuru hoga jahan tumhare man me ufante saare prashno ko unka uttar bhi milega...



TAK TAK KE LIYE ALVIDA......





PLACE-ALFREEN ORPHANAGE



HELLO PRINCIPAL SIR....


cabin me ghuste hi FLORIN ne principal ko gesture diya jo ki saamne chair par baithe the...


PRINCIPAL-hello sir..hello ma'am...

MARIA-hello......

FLORIN-baithiye...


principal se baari baari haath milane ke baad FLORIN aur MARIA saamne rakhi revolving chair par baith gaye....


FLORIN-sabse pehle bataiye kya lenge aap???

PRINCIPAL-thanks for asking sir but filhal nothing. thodi der pehle hi chaay pi hai.

FLORIN-waise maaf kijiyega,us din jo info aapne di uske liye mai aapko
bina thanks kahe hi chala gaya tha..actually kuch bohot important kaam yaad gaya tha....

PRINCIPAL-kis din ki baat kar rahe hain???

FLORIN-arre wo ek hafte pehle mai school aaya tha aur aapne mujhe ENOCHIAN language ke baare me bataya tha naa..uske liye thanks...

PRINCIPAL-3 din pehle...par sir mai toh aapse aaj 2 months ke baad mil raha hun...

last baar hum school ke annual function me mile the jo 2 months pehle hua tha...


ab ye laga FLORIN aur MARIA ko ab tak ja sabse bada jhatka....aankhen fade,chehre par avishwas liye wo dono kabhi principal ko dekhte toh kabhi ek dusre ko...

principal ke liye bhi FLORIN ki baatein shocking thi...


PRINCIPAL-kya hua sir????are you ok....

FLORIN-ye aap kya keh rahe hain???!!!hum kuch dinpehle hi toh mile the...

mai aapke paas RAAZ ke answer sheet dekhne ki request karne ke liye aaya tha aur aapne kaha tha ki saare answer sheet specific roll number ke according lockers me rakhe jaate hain aur check karne ke liye last me ek saath nikale jaate hain...

fir aap bahar bhi gaye,ye dekhne ki agar us din ke papers lockers me nahi rakhe honge toh aap RAAZ ke us din ke answer sheet ko le aayenge mujhe dikhane...

but fir aakar aapne kaha ki answer sheet lockers me rakhe jaa chuke hain...

aur fir aapne mere mobile me ENOCHIAN language ki pic ko dekh uski info di...


ab jhatka lagne ki baari principal ki thi....usse toh kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki FLORIN aakhir kya baat jo ki uske liye bakwaas hi tha, kiye jaa rahe hain...


PRINCIPAL-but sir hum toh aaj 2 months ke baad mil rahe hain...aur rahi baat answer sheets ki toh haan unhe lockers me hi rakha jaata hai but unki keys mere paas hi rehti hai and as boards head, mai jab chahun usse khulwa sakta hun...

agar aap mujhse mile hote aur aapne mujhe RAAZ ke papers dekhne ki baat kahi hoti toh ye mai kisi bhi situation me aasani se kar sakta tha...

infact mere abhi yahan aane ka main reason bhi yahi hai.... RAAZ ke papers ki chinta mujhe bhi bohot hai kyunki hamare school ka board result hamesha hi 100 percent aata raha hai but RAAZ ki wajah se is baar ye record kharab ho sakta hai,is baat ka mujhe dar tha...

maine kayi baar socha ki uske papers ko check karun but har baar kuch naa kuch kaam nikal aata tha jiski wajah se mai aisa nahi kar paa raha tha....

but aaj last exam tha toh maine RAAZ ke class ke invigilator se pehle hi keh diya tha ki exam ke baad RAAZ ki sheet mere paas lekar aaye...

aur jab RAAZ ki sheet mere haath me aayi toh mujhe shock toh laga hi par saath hi mai bohot upset bhi ho gaya....


aadhe adhure concentration ke saath MARIA aur FLORIN principal ki baat sun rahe the..unka aadha dhyan toh principal ke diye jhatke par hi atka hua tha...

but jaise hi principal ne shock aur upset hone ki baat ki toh dono hi apne vartaman me puri tarike se wapas aa gaye aur....


MARIA-matlab???

PRINCIPAL-matlab aap khud hi dekh lijiye...


ye bol principal ne apne suitcase khola aur usme se sheets nikalkar FLORIN aur MARIA ke saamne rakh di...

ye aur kuch nahi RAAZ ke answer sheets the jisse dekhne le baad wo FLORIN aur MARIA ko dikhane ke liye laaye the....

wahin jaise hi FLORIN aur MARIA ne us sheet ko dekha ya fir ye kahun ki sheet me jo likha hua tha,usse dekha toh unhe fir jhatka laga...

aisa jhatka jisne unke dimag ko hi puri tarike se ghuma diya tha...kabhi wo sheet ko dekhte,aur kabhi saamne baithe principal ko...

unhe ye bhi samajh aa gaya tha ki principal sir ek saath shocked aur udaas dono kaise ho gaye the....

darasal sheet par jo likhawat thi wo english alphabets me bas likhi gayi thi but wo english nahi thi.. English kya wo koi bhi known language nahi thi...

ajeeb tarah ki spellings ke beech words me gap laga sentence me badla gaya tha.....thik waisi hi jjaise ENOCHIAN language ki hoti hai.....

aur yahi wajah thi principal ke shock hone ki..aur rahi udaasi ki baat toh jo kuch bhi likha hua tha uspar sirf research hi kiya jaa sakta tha but numbers toh milne se rahe......


PRINCIPAL-neeche RAAZ ke baaki ke papers bhi hain...

principal ki baat sun FLORIN ne jab us sheet ke neeche ke sheets ko dekha toh fir wahi hua..SHOCK.....

sabme same alphabets jo ki ek language hi thi,likhi gayi thi....


PRINCIPAL-unfortunately RAAZ ki wajah se is saal hamare school ka record kharab ho jaayega....


ab record ki fikr sirf principal ko hi thi, FLORIN aur MARIA ka dimag toh is naye guthi me ulajh gaya tha....

par filhal un dono ne waise bhi principal ke saamne kaafi react kar diya tha isiliye....


FLORIN- sorry sir..humare orphanage ke bacche ki wajah se aapke school ka record kharab ho raha hai....


PRINCIPAL- arre sir, isme aapki kya galti...afsos toh RAAZ ko hona chahiye..anath hone ke baawajud itni achi guidence,itni achi opportunity thi uske paas ek achi life banane ke liye,but agar wo hi serious nahi hai toh koi kya kar sakta hai???


saare sheeta ko sameththe hue principal ne apni baat kahi...


FLORIN-agar aapko sahi lage toh kya mai kisi ek sheet ki pic le sakta hun...???

RAAZ-ofcourse..le lijiye..agar board exams ke sheet nahi hote toh mai pura sheet hi aapko de deta...

FLORIN-thanks...


ye bol FLORIN ne sheet ki ek pic le li....


PRINCIPAL-ok sir..i will take your leave...


RAAZ ki is nayi ajeebo garib harkat ki wajah se FLORIN ki kahi gayi pehle ki baatein principal filhal bhul chuka tha...

FLORIN aur MARIA ko bye keh wo nikal gaya... par jaise hi principal baahar nikla,ek adrishya roshni uske dimag par padi jisse uske dimag se FLORIN ki usse kuch din pehle milne waali saari baatein bhi nikal chuki thi...

wahin principal ke jaane ke baad kuch der tak us cabin me shaanti bani rahi...

FLORIN aur MARIA dono hi apne apne khayalon me goom se the...

jahan ek taraf FLORIN is nayi gutthi ke baare me soch rahe the,wahin MARIA ke dimag me toh RAAZ ke orphanage me aane ke baad se aaj tak ki saari ghatnayen flashback me ghumne si lagi jiski wajah se unke man me ek anjaana se dar ne ghar kar liya tha..


MARIA-FLORIN...mujhe dar lag raha hai...


MARIA ki baat sun FLORIN apni soch se baahar aaye aur jab unhone MARIA ka halka dara hua chehra dekha toh...


FLORIN-hey,kya hua???dar kyun rahi ho???


side se hug karte hua FLORIN ne kaha....


MARIA-darne ki hi toh baat hai naa FLORIN...ye ladka hai kya chiz....??ajeeb si haalat me hume milta hai,apne me hi khoya rehta hai,neend me isse jhatke lagte hain....

angels ki bhasha likhta hai ye aur wo bhi unconsciousness me aur aaj phir kuch naya likh raha hai....


FLORIN-MARIA ye baat ajeeb ho sakti hai but darne waali nahi...15 saalon se RAAZ yahan hamare saath hai,but aaj tak usne orphanage ke kisi bhi bache ke saath kuch galat nahi kiya...

aur naahi aaj tak uske yahan rehne se hume kuch hua hai..so relax...


FLORIN ki baatein bhi sahi thi.. RAAZ ki wajah se unhe kabhi koi dikkat nahi hui thi.... MARIA bhi FLORIN ki baaton ko sun kuch shaant ho gayi...


MARIA-par ab kya karen???is ladke ne toh apne board exams bhi kharab kar liye...

FLORIN-uske baare me baad me sochenge.. pehle ia nayi gutthi ko solve karna padega....


apna mobile nikal kuch der pehle khinchi pic ko dekh FLORIN ne kaha...


MARIA-isme dekhna kya hai....ye wahi ENOCHIAN language hogi...

FLORIN-pehle mujhe bhi yahi laga tha..but nahi...ye kuch aur hai....

MARIA-and how can you say that???


FLORIN ne kuch kaha nahi bus is nayi pic ko ENOCHIAN LANGUAGE wali pic ke saath merge karkar saamne rakh diya jisse dekh...

MARIA-arre haan,ye toh alag hai...

FLORIN-hmm..aur pata nahin kyun par mujhe lagta hai ki agar isse humne crack kar liya,toh sab kuch clear hota chala jaayega....

MARIA-par pehle ye toh clear ho....

ye bol FLORIN aur MARIA ki nazar ek baar firse mobile ki screen par atak gayi jahan kuch aisa likha hua tha....



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AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....






AAPKA APNA V.J....
Bahi ab is update k bare mai mai Kia likho

Maria or florain,ko jhtke pe jhtka shok lag Rahe hain

Wese ab ye nayi language Kon c h
Raaz,sach mai ek mystry hi h

Or ye heroin Mar gayi,ab tb hi Uthe gi jb is ka safar shoro ho ga

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KE MURCHIT SHARIR KO WO AWAAZ MURCHIT HI REHNE DETI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNE BOARD EXAMS KE ANSWER SHEETS KO EK NAYI LANGUAGE SE BHAR DIYA HOTA HAI...


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CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-9



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RESTORE D CONSCIOUSNESS



SPELL bolne waale ke haathon se ek roshni nikli aur saamne ek bade se bed par lete shaksh ke mastishk me sama gayi aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal....

bed par lete shaksh ke body ko pehle kuch halke jhatke lage maano wo khudko thik kar raha ho aur uske kuch der baad us shaksh ne apni aankhen khol di....

sunya ko ghurti us shaksh ki aankhen aisi lag rahi thi maano khudko khudhi ke mastishk ke saath jodne ka prayas kar rahi ho..

khudko yakin dila rahi ho ki wo dekh sakti hai...aisa nahi tha ki ab se pehle wo aankhen drishtiheen thi, par jab aapka sharir,aapka dimag aur aapki aakhen bohot zyada waqt tak band rahe hon toh aisi maansikta hona swabhavik hota hai...

kuch der tak self processing karne ke baad us lete hue shaksh ke dimag ne reverse me jaana shuru kiya...

yaad karna shuru kiya ki ab se pehle aakhri baar kya kya hua tha...

uski aankhon ne kya manzar dekh khudko band kiya tha....

wahin in sabse alag us saksh ke saamne khade SPELL dharak jisne usse uski chetna loutayi thi,uske lab khamosh hi the.....

usse pata tha ki ek baar wo shaksh jiski chetna usne loutayi thi,normal hote hi uska reaction kya hoga!!!uske sawal kya honge aur khaas kar unke jawab usse kaise dene hain????

BOOMMMMMM...................

jhanaka sa hua bed par lete shaksh ke dimag jiske baad uska sharir ek jhatke me uth baitha....

chehre par hairani liye wo sththi ko samajhne ki koshish karte karte uski nazar usse kuch dur par khade dusre shaksh par gayi jiski nazarein uspar hi thi....

1ST-aap kaun???ye kaun si jagah hai aur mai yahan kaise???mai toh

2ND-shaant ho jaao...tumhare saare puche gaye aur tumhare mastishk me chal rahe sawalon ko jawab tumhe mil jaayega....

par sabse purv apne dimag ko sthir karo...kyunki iske bina meri kahi koi bhi baat tumhare samajh me nahi aayegi...

kehna aasan tha par jis haalat me 1st shaksh ka dimag tha,wo is waqt do bhaagon me vibhajit tha..

ek past aur ek present..aur dono hi situations itne weird the ki usse digest karna asaan nahi tha aise me dimag ko sthir rakhna bohot mushkil tha aur dimagi uthal puthal ki jaankari us shaksh ka chehra de raha tha jisme is waqt bohot zyada bechaini thi aur ye bechaini uske saamne khade shaksh se chuupi nahi thi....

2ND-tumhari haalat se anjaan nahi hun mai...par itne tez dimag ka yun hadbadana uchit nahi...

aur khaas kar tab jab humare beech aage hone waali baat behad pechida hai...

aisi baat jisme tumhare mastishk ka shaant hona anivarya hai...

saamne khade saksh ki baat kis aur jaa rahi thi,ye toh behoshi se baahar aaye shaksh ke palle nahi pad rahi thi par waqt beetne ke saath uska dimag shaant hone laga tha...

1ST-aapne bataya ki mere puche gaye saare sawal aur wo sawal jo aage puche jayenge,wo sab aapko pata hai.....toh fir bataiye saare jawab...par pehle ye bataiye ki aap hai kaun???

2ND-mera naam MARILIZA hai.....aur rahi baat tumhare man me chal rahe sawalon ke jawab ki toh uspar aane se pehle mujhe tumse maafi chahiye...tumhe is haalat me laane ke liye...

1ST-mujhe aapki kahi gayi koi bhi baat samajh ne nahi aa rahi hai...

MARILIZA-bas kuch der ki baat hai..sab samajh me aane lagega...

waise jawabon ki shuruat toh pehle prashn se hoti hai,kintu mujhe lagta hai ki hume aakhri paaydaan se shuru karna chahiye.....

1ST-i'm still not getting u....

MARILIZA-MAGIC me believe karti ho...

1ST- what???ye kaisa sawal hai???

MARILIZA-simple & straight.....

1ST-okay..magic....!!!u mean to say illusion,right....???

MARILIZA-nope..magic..pure magic...ek jagah se dusri jagah antardhyan matlab teleport hona...hawa se tez doudna.. apne se laakhon guna vazan ko ek ungli se utha lena...
hawa me udna and a lot of more stuffs...

MARILIZA ne toh apni baat keh di thi par wahin pehle shaksh ke chehre par abhi aise shaksh the jaise MARILIZA ka dimag hil gaya hai...

1ST-mujhe pehle hi samajh jaana tha...is this a mental assylum....!!!

MARILIZA-hahahahaha.......my bad...mujhe tumhe practical ke saath theory batani thi...

1ST-please kuch aisa bole jisme sense feel ho...

MARILIZA-chalo,khud dekh lo,fir sense khud hi dhund lena...

ye bol us shaksh ne apne kadam ek taraf badhaye wahin pehle shaskh ne kuch der tak MARILIZA ko ghura,par fir kuch soch uske kadam bhi us disha me ho liye...

kuch hi palon me wo dono us room ke left side par bane balcony par the...

2ND- saamne dekho....

uski baat sun pehle shaksh ne bina Ruchi ke hi sahi,saamne ki taraf nazar ghumayi..kuch der laga,par fir....

1ST-HOLY F****K......

uske reaction ko dekh MARILIZA ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi....

MARILIZA-kaisa laga mental assylum...???

MARILIZA ke taunt ka toh jaise uske saamne khade saksh par koi asar pada hi nahi tha....

uski nazarein toh saamne chal rahe scenes ko digest karne me laga hua tha...darasal hua ye ki balcony ke saamne kuch seconds pehle tak sirf garden dikh raha tha par fir MARILIZA ne apne man me kuch kaha aur uske aisa karte hi uske haathon se ek white ray nikli aur saamne hawa me ruki aur agle hi pal saamne ka drishya badal gaya aur jo scenes dikhe usse dekh MARILIZA ke peeche khade shaksh ka dimag hi ghum gaya....

kuch der tak aakhen faade saamne dekhte rehne ke baad....

1ST- ye sach nahi ho sakta...ye bas ek sapna hai..yaa, that's what it is...just a wild dream....

aaahhh...

ye dard bhari karah ussike mooh se nikli thi...reason...uske saamne ke drishya ko sapna kehne par MARILIZA ne uske kandhe ko pinch kiya tha...

MARILIZA-sapne aankh band kar ke dekhe jaate hain..aankhen kholkar nahi....

MARILIZA ki baat sun pehle toh saamne khade saksh ko yakin hone laga ki uske saamne ka drishya vaatav me hai,koi sapna nahi...

but MARILIZA ke sapne ke udaharan ko sunkar uske dimag me kuch aur bhi chal utha jisse yaad kar uske chehre par smile bhi aayi aur dard bhi aur ye dono hi bhaav MARILIZA ki aankhon se chhup nahi paaye....

MARILIZA-sapne wo nahi,jo neend me dekhe jaate hain.. sapne toh woh hain jo jab tak pure na hon,neend hi nahi aati...

yahi khayal ghum raha hai naa tumhare dimag me...

MARILIZA ki baat sun saamne khade shaksh ko jhatka sa laga kyunki MARILIZA ne sach kaha tha....

1ST-how do you know this...??

MARILIZA-mai tumhe aur tumhare baare me tumse zyada jaanti hun...

1ST-but how???.aur ye sab kya hai???aap hain kaun???please bina ghumaye sidhe sidhe bata dijiye...!!!!

MARILIZA-batati hun....sab batati hun...

ye keh MARILIZA saamne khade saksh ko usse judi sari sacchayi batati chali gayi jisse sun kayi saare expressions us shaksh ke chehre par aane jaane lage....

MARILIZA ki puri baat khatm hote hote uske saamne khade saksh ki aakhen puri tarh se bheeg chuki thi....

puchna toh uski zubaan bohot kuch chahti thi,but sawalon ki gathri itni ulajh gayi uske dimag me ki uske mooh se bas ek shabd nikal paaya...

UNKNOWN-KYUN!!!!!?????

MARILIZA-iska jawab dene ke liye mai sahi insaan nahi hun...aur naahi ye sahi waqt hai...tumhe kuch din tak intazar karna hoga...

1ST-intazar...kya is shabd ko ab tak arth nahi mila hai...kya iske pura hone ka waqt ab bhi nahi beeta hai...

MARILIZA-tumhare haalat se mai anbhigya nahi hun...par ye sach hai ki abhi upyukt samay nahi aaya hai...par yakin maano, bohot jald aayega...

1ST-abhi abhi jo dekha hai maine,usse itna toh saaf hai ki aap koi maamuli insaan nahi ho aur naahi mai aapse yudh ke laayak hun....

aapki baat manane ke siwa mere paas aur koi rasta nahi hai.par aap mujhe nyaya priye bhi lagte ho..

aap bataiye,ki jo aapne mere saath kiya,kya wo sahi hai???

MARILIZA-kartavya ke path par kayi baar aise faisle lene padhte hain,jo lete waqt sahi nahi lagte...

but jab waqt karwat leta hai, us kartavya ke pure hone ka waqt aata hai, saare RAAZ se parde khulte hain,tab us kathin faisle ka mahatv samajh me aata hai aur fir sab kuch sahi lagta hai....

1ST-gyan baatna tab bohot aasaan hota hai,jab receiving end me aap khud nahi hote...

MARILIZA-shayad..par jo tumhe end lag raha hai,wo toh end hak hi nahi..bus ek stoppage hai..kuch hi waqt me paar ho jaayega....

tumhe bas sabr rakhna hai...

1ST-aur ye mai kaise rakhun,ye bhi bata dijiye....

MARILIZA-do tarike hain.. pehla,upyukt samay aane tak yahin par apna waqt bitao ya fir mai tumhe ek baar firse ussi gehri nidra me bhej deti hun jahan se tum loute ho...

1ST-agar behosh hi karna tha toh hosh me laaya hi kyun???

MARILIZA-taaki tumhe tumhare sawalon ke jawab mil sake aur jab sahi waqt aaye,tab tum sayyam me raho.....

kyunki dusri chhor me aisa nahi hoga....

1ST-mujhse aise aur intazar me raha nahi jaayega..isse toh acha hai.....

us unknown shaksh ke mooh se aur kuch nikalta,usse pehle hi uski aankhen band ho chuki thi matlab ek baar phirse behoshi ne usse gale laga liya tha...

aur ye kiya tha MARILIZA ne...usse pehle hi pata tha ki us unknown shaksh ka kya faisla hoga...

usse behosh kar uske body ko hawa me tairate hue MARILIZA ne wapas bed par lita diya...

MARILIZA-ye sab kyun hua,ye toh mai bhi nahi jaanti...bas itna pata hai ki agli baar jab tumhari aankhen khulengi,toh tumhare dard ka malham tumhare saamne hoga...




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KUCH PATA CHALA!!!!!


ye awaaz MARIA ki thi jo abhi abhi apne room me enter hui thi..wahin FLORIN apne laptop me is kadar khoye huye the ki unhe naa toh MARIA ke aane ki aahat mehsoos hui aur naahi unki awaaz se unka dhyan tuta...

wahin maria jo room me aa kuch kapdon ko fold karne me lag gayi thi,jab uske sawal ka koi jawab FLORIN ne nahi diya toh unhe ajeeb laga...

MARIA-FLORIN.....

ek baar aur awaaz di MARIA ne par jab tab bhi FLORIN ne koi jawab nahi diya toh wo unki taraf badh chali aur jaise hi unki nazar FLORIN aur unke saamne rakhe laptop par gayi toh unhe laga shock...

reason.....

ek taraf jahan laptop me 1 tab open tha aur saath hi 10 se zyada tabs minimize mode par rakhe hue the wahin uske saamne baithe FLORIN ki bas aankhon ki putliyan hi harkat kar rahi thi....

jo lagatar laptop ke screen par dikh rahi infos ko padh rahi thi...

aisa lag raga tha maano FLORIN kisi trance me chale gaye hain aur ussi trance me ghum se ho gaye hain...

par is shock ke beech MARIA ko FLORIN ki haalat dekh bohot bura bhi laga....

reason....

FLORIN ke aankhon ke neeche dark circles banane lage the..unke chehre par is waqt kaafi zyada thakawat aur tanaav,dono hi dikh raha tha...

aur ye sthithi aaj hi ki nahi hai...do din beet chuke hain jab principal ne FLORIN aur MARIA ke upar us naye language ka bomb foda tha....

aur tabhi se MARIA aur FLORIN itne zyade tension me rehne lage the ki unhe orphanage aur usme rehne waale bacchon ki toh kya ek dusre ki bhi sudh nahi rahi thi....

jahan ek taraf MARIA thodi dari dari si rehne lagi thi..apne aap me hi goom chup chaap reh wo bas RAAZ aur uske saath chuppe itne saare RAAZ ke baare me hi sochti rehti thi wahin dusri taraf FLORIN ka toh haal aur bhi bura tha...

wo din bhar apne room me laptop ke saamne baith saare known aur unknown languages ke baare me research karte rehte the aur der raat ko ussi laptop ke through RAAZ ke room me nazar gadaye rehte the...

aur yahi wajah thi ki wo abhi kamzor bhi lag rahe the aur tensed bhi....

wahin MARIA ko ab khudpar ghussa aa raha tha..kyunki wo in do dino me khud me itna khoyi hui thi ki unhe apne husband ki haalat tak ka andaza nahi raha tha...

niyamit samay par breakfast,lunch aur dinner karne waale FLORIN ne in do dino me inme se koi bhi food time par liya bhi hai yaa nahi, unhe pata nahi tha...

umr ke is padhav par bhi jahan kuch din pehle tak FLORIN ache khaase jawan dikhte the wahin sirf do hi dino me unki haalat kharab ho gayi thi....

kuch der tak aatm glani karte rehne ke baad...


MARIA-FLORIN.....

FLORIN-haan......


kandhe ko zara zor se jhanjhorte hue jab MARIA ne FLORIN ko pukara tab kahin jaakar FLORIN apne trance se baahar aaye.

aur jaise hi unki nazar unki wife par gayi,unhe jhatka laga...reason... MARIA ke aankhen gili ho chuki thi aur ussi tairti hui jheel ke saath wo apne husband ko dekh rahi thi...

apni beti ko khone ke gum me nikle aansu ke baad aaj jaakar FLORIN ne apni wife ko rote dekha tha jo unhe bardasht nahi hua aur unhone jhat se uth MARIA ko apne gale se laga liya....


FLORIN-hey....shhhh...kya hua???why are you crying....????kisi ne kuch kaha kya???


aakhri shabd bolte bolte FLORIN ki awaaz kadak ho gayi thi jisse sun MARIA ke dil aur dimag me ek saath do do khayalon ne ghar kiya.

pehla khayal ye ki khud itne zyada tention me hone ke baawjud FLORIN bas unke aansu dekh baaki sab kuch bhul chuke the aur dusri unki aatm glani ka jo aur badh gayi thi...


MARIA-i am sorry FLORIN..tum pichle do dinon se itne tention me ho,aur maine is baat par dhyan bhi nahi diya...

FLORIN-isiliye ro rahi ho...!!!!par isme tumhari kya galti hai!!!jis khayal ne mujhe ghere rakha hai,ussi khayal ki shikar tum bhi toh hui ho naa...

mujhe pata hai ki tum bhi pichle do dino se ussi chiz ke baare me soch rahi ho jisse solve karne ki koshish mai kar raha hun...

fir ye aatm glani kyun???

MARIA-fir bhi..mai kitni selfish hun jo sirf khudme hi khoyi rahi..tumhari haalat par gaur tak nahi kiya...shaadi ke itne saalon ke baad shayad pehli baar tumhare dim me ye khayal aaye ki kahin mera tumhare liye pyar kam toh nahi ho gaya.....

FLORIN-batane ye jatane se hi pyaar saabit hota hai kya???tum jab mere aas paas hoti ho naa,toh bhale hi mujhe khabar naa ho par meri body,meri soul sab kuch shaant ho jaate hain...

jitna bhi tensed kyun naa rahun mai,agar tum saath ho toh aag bhi paani ho jaata hai...isiliye kabhi bhi i am very serious about it,kabhi bhi mere liye khudko dosh mat dena...


ye keh FLORIN ne MARIA ke chehre ko apne haathon me thaama aur usse dekhne lage... MARIA ab ro toh nahi rahi thi but unki aankhen ab bhi geeli thi jisse dekh....


FLORIN-tumhari aankhon me har waqt mujhe mera aks dikha hai MARIA.. par filhal jis paani ne tumhare aankhon par kabza kiya hua hai,usne mere aks ko dhundla kar diya hai...

aur bas yahi baat thik nahi hai...ye aankhen mera aayna hai aur tumhara kaam hai is aayne ko hamesha saaf rakhna....

agar apna pyar saabit hi karna hai toh bas itna hi kar diya karo mere liye....


FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA ki saari aatmglaani khatm si ho gayi... unhone FLORIN ke ird gird apne haathon ke ghere ko aur majboot kar liya tha...

kuch der tak ek dusre ki dil ki dhadkon me apna apna naam sunane ke baad...


MARIA-ek baat puchun???

FLORIN-aapko ijazat ki zaroorat kabse padh gayi....

MARIA-ek mystery solve karne ke liye itna effort, kyun????

FLORIN-pata nahi MARIA...but najaane kyun,jab bhi dimag kehta hai ki rehne deta hun, dil mana kar deta hai......

aisa lagta hai jaise ye mera koi mission hai jisse mujhe har haal me pura karna hai....


MARIA ko pata tha ki agar wo FLORIN ko ye sab nahi karne ke liye bolengi,tab bhi wo nahi maanenge...

aakhir the toh wo ek soldier hi....bhale hi army se wo nikal chuke the,but army unke andar se kabhi nahi nikal saki hai....

aur waise bhi, FLORIN shuru se hi jigyasu tarah ke rahe hain,unhe mila har task unhone har haal.me pura kiya hai...yahi passion,ya fir sahi shabdon me kahun toh yahi ATTITUDE hi unhe baakiyon se alag banata aaya hai...

aur shayad yahi wo khubi bhi thi jis wajah se MARIA ko unse pyaar hua tha...aur isiliye....


MARIA-mai aapko mana nahi karungi but in sabme apni sehat ko kharab mat hone dijiye....

agar aisa hua toh fir mai aapko dobara in chakkaron me nahi padne dungi...

FLORIN-jaisa aap kahen my queen....


muskurate hue FLORIN ne ya baat kahi aur wapas apne laptop ke saamne baith gaye...

wahin MARIA bhi muskurate hue FLORIN ke baaju me khadi unke laptop ko dekhne lagi...


MARIA-waise itne saare tabs kis cheez ke hain...???

FLORIN-ye saare alag alag languages ke sites hai...ek ek karkar check kar raha hun....

MARIA-koi hint mila!!!!

FLORIN-kahan!!!!???divine language,aramaic,ferizon aur aise hi najaane kitni hi mythology se judi languages,holy languages check kar chuka hun but abhi tak kuch haath nahi laga....

MARIA-ye RAAZ aur uske RAAZ...!!!ye ladka naa sikke ke do pehlu ki tarah hai...kabhi kuch toh kabhi kuch....


apni baat keh MARIA palti aur dusri taraf jaane lagi wahin FLORIN bhi apni patni ki baat sun pehle muskuraye par fir unke dimag me unki patni ki kahi gayi baat jaise gunj si gayi aur aisa hote hi unhone turant ek naya tab khola aur fatafat kuch type karne lage aur jaise hi unki type kiye gaye words ke result saamne aaye.....


FLORIN-OH SHIT...........TOH YE HAI WO.....


chillate hue unhone apni baat kahi jisse sunte hi MARIA turant unke paas aayi...


MARIA-kya hua FLORIN???is something wrong!!!!???

FLORIN-wrong toh ab tak tha,but ab sab right hi right hai and all thanks to you....

MARIA-thanks to me!!!matlab!!!saaf saaf bolo naa....!!!

FLORIN-arre tumne abhi kaha naa,ki RAAZ sikko ke do pehlu ki tarah hai..

MARIA-haan toh!!!

FLORIN-toh jo usne likha hai,wo bhi toh ek dusre pehlu ka hi hissa hai...

MARIA-kuch aisa bolo jo samajh me aaye...

FLORIN-mai ab tak galat segment me dhund raha tha...pehle jo RAAZ ne likha tha,ENOCHIAN....mai ussi language ke reference ko lekar baaki languages ko khoj raha tha but yahi mai galat tha....

tumne kaha naa ki RAAZ sikke ke do pehluon ki tarah hai..RAAZ ke ek pehlu me wo bewakuf jaisa lagta hai aur dusre me bohot intelligent.

waise hi uske through likhi languages bhi contrasting hain...

MARIA-mai ab bhi kuch nahi samjhi....

FLORIN-abhi samajh jaaogi..ye dekho,ye hai ENOCHIAN.... also known as ANGELS LANGUAGE... jo raaz ne pehle likha tha...yaani sikke ka pehla hissa....

aur ye hai DEMONOIC LANGUAGE... also known as DEVIL'S LANGUAGE....jo RAAZ ne abhi likha hai....


FLORIN ne RAAZ ke pehle ki likhi alphabets aur abhi ki likhi alphabets ko laptop me dikh rahe do alag alag language ke alphabets ke saath match karte hue MARIA ko dikhaya....

jahan ek taraf is nayi paheli ko crack karkar FLORIN khush dikh rahe the wahin MARIA ki toh haalat hi kharab ho gayi thi...


MARIA-FLORIN....ye sab kya hai!!!!pehle ENOCHIAN aur is baar DEMONOIC....ye ladka hai kya aakhir???

KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL....


itni der me ab jaakar FLORIN ki nazar MARIA ke chehre par gayi jahan is waqt dar hi dar tha...


FLORIN-MARIA..i know ye sab bohot complicated hai...aur kahin na kahin mai bhi in sab cheezon se ghabraya hua hun..but trust me,agar isse hamara koi nuksaan hona hota,toh ab tak ho chuka hota...

isiliye darna chhodo......ab jab hume ye pata hai ki ye kya language hai,toh isse RAAZ ke likhe alphabets ke saath mila kar dekhen ki kya matlab nikalta hai...????


dar toh MARIA ko ab bhi lag raha tha but usse bhi janana tha ki RAAZ ke likhe alphabets me kaun sa naya RAAZ chuppa hua hai isiliye unhone apne sir ko haan me hilaya...

unke aisa karte hi FLORIN turant laptop par us DEMONOIC LANGUAGE ke saath RAAZ ke likhe alphabets ko match kar uska matlab nikalne me lag gaye aur kuch hi der me RAAZ ke likhe shabd decode ho chuke the aur aisa hote hi FLORIN aur MARIA ko ek naya jhatka laga..

reason..laptop me screen par is waqt RAAZ ke likhe gaye jo alphabets the,wo ek RIDDLE me convert ho chuke the jo khudko kuch yun bayan kar rahe the....




sukoon chhupa hai tera,
bas samajh har alfaaz jo KEHTI hai...

chinta ki har jad ko pakad,aur
aaja wahan jahan se pashchimi hawa BEHTI hai....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....





AAPKA APNA V.J.....
Ye cheez to akhir florin ne us pahli ko suljha hi Liya very nice

Kabhi angel kabhi devil,,,,,,,,

Excellent birrilant fantastic good update

I guess yr 1st heroin hi thi na
Or ye mariliza akhir h Kon or Kia btaya esa k us ki ankhoo mai ansoo a gay

Let's see what happend
 

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Ye cheez to akhir florin ne us pahli ko suljha hi Liya very nice

Kabhi angel kabhi devil,,,,,,,,

Excellent birrilant fantastic good update

I guess yr 1st heroin hi thi na
Or ye mariliza akhir h Kon or Kia btaya esa k us ki ankhoo mai ansoo a gay

Let's see what happend
brother heroin toh ek hi hogi...ek se zyada waala concept mujhe sahi nhi lagta...or rahi baat saare secrets ki,next 2 updates me kaafi kuch unfold ho jaayega....
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KE MURCHIT SHARIR KO WO AWAAZ MURCHIT HI REHNE DETI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNE BOARD EXAMS KE ANSWER SHEETS KO EK NAYI LANGUAGE SE BHAR DIYA HOTA HAI...


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-9



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SPELL bolne waale ke haathon se ek roshni nikli aur saamne ek bade se bed par lete shaksh ke mastishk me sama gayi aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal....

bed par lete shaksh ke body ko pehle kuch halke jhatke lage maano wo khudko thik kar raha ho aur uske kuch der baad us shaksh ne apni aankhen khol di....

sunya ko ghurti us shaksh ki aankhen aisi lag rahi thi maano khudko khudhi ke mastishk ke saath jodne ka prayas kar rahi ho..

khudko yakin dila rahi ho ki wo dekh sakti hai...aisa nahi tha ki ab se pehle wo aankhen drishtiheen thi, par jab aapka sharir,aapka dimag aur aapki aakhen bohot zyada waqt tak band rahe hon toh aisi maansikta hona swabhavik hota hai...

kuch der tak self processing karne ke baad us lete hue shaksh ke dimag ne reverse me jaana shuru kiya...

yaad karna shuru kiya ki ab se pehle aakhri baar kya kya hua tha...

uski aankhon ne kya manzar dekh khudko band kiya tha....

wahin in sabse alag us saksh ke saamne khade SPELL dharak jisne usse uski chetna loutayi thi,uske lab khamosh hi the.....

usse pata tha ki ek baar wo shaksh jiski chetna usne loutayi thi,normal hote hi uska reaction kya hoga!!!uske sawal kya honge aur khaas kar unke jawab usse kaise dene hain????

BOOMMMMMM...................

jhanaka sa hua bed par lete shaksh ke dimag jiske baad uska sharir ek jhatke me uth baitha....

chehre par hairani liye wo sththi ko samajhne ki koshish karte karte uski nazar usse kuch dur par khade dusre shaksh par gayi jiski nazarein uspar hi thi....

1ST-aap kaun???ye kaun si jagah hai aur mai yahan kaise???mai toh

2ND-shaant ho jaao...tumhare saare puche gaye aur tumhare mastishk me chal rahe sawalon ko jawab tumhe mil jaayega....

par sabse purv apne dimag ko sthir karo...kyunki iske bina meri kahi koi bhi baat tumhare samajh me nahi aayegi...

kehna aasan tha par jis haalat me 1st shaksh ka dimag tha,wo is waqt do bhaagon me vibhajit tha..

ek past aur ek present..aur dono hi situations itne weird the ki usse digest karna asaan nahi tha aise me dimag ko sthir rakhna bohot mushkil tha aur dimagi uthal puthal ki jaankari us shaksh ka chehra de raha tha jisme is waqt bohot zyada bechaini thi aur ye bechaini uske saamne khade shaksh se chuupi nahi thi....

2ND-tumhari haalat se anjaan nahi hun mai...par itne tez dimag ka yun hadbadana uchit nahi...

aur khaas kar tab jab humare beech aage hone waali baat behad pechida hai...

aisi baat jisme tumhare mastishk ka shaant hona anivarya hai...

saamne khade saksh ki baat kis aur jaa rahi thi,ye toh behoshi se baahar aaye shaksh ke palle nahi pad rahi thi par waqt beetne ke saath uska dimag shaant hone laga tha...

1ST-aapne bataya ki mere puche gaye saare sawal aur wo sawal jo aage puche jayenge,wo sab aapko pata hai.....toh fir bataiye saare jawab...par pehle ye bataiye ki aap hai kaun???

2ND-mera naam MARILIZA hai.....aur rahi baat tumhare man me chal rahe sawalon ke jawab ki toh uspar aane se pehle mujhe tumse maafi chahiye...tumhe is haalat me laane ke liye...

1ST-mujhe aapki kahi gayi koi bhi baat samajh ne nahi aa rahi hai...

MARILIZA-bas kuch der ki baat hai..sab samajh me aane lagega...

waise jawabon ki shuruat toh pehle prashn se hoti hai,kintu mujhe lagta hai ki hume aakhri paaydaan se shuru karna chahiye.....

1ST-i'm still not getting u....

MARILIZA-MAGIC me believe karti ho...

1ST- what???ye kaisa sawal hai???

MARILIZA-simple & straight.....

1ST-okay..magic....!!!u mean to say illusion,right....???

MARILIZA-nope..magic..pure magic...ek jagah se dusri jagah antardhyan matlab teleport hona...hawa se tez doudna.. apne se laakhon guna vazan ko ek ungli se utha lena...
hawa me udna and a lot of more stuffs...

MARILIZA ne toh apni baat keh di thi par wahin pehle shaksh ke chehre par abhi aise shaksh the jaise MARILIZA ka dimag hil gaya hai...

1ST-mujhe pehle hi samajh jaana tha...is this a mental assylum....!!!

MARILIZA-hahahahaha.......my bad...mujhe tumhe practical ke saath theory batani thi...

1ST-please kuch aisa bole jisme sense feel ho...

MARILIZA-chalo,khud dekh lo,fir sense khud hi dhund lena...

ye bol us shaksh ne apne kadam ek taraf badhaye wahin pehle shaskh ne kuch der tak MARILIZA ko ghura,par fir kuch soch uske kadam bhi us disha me ho liye...

kuch hi palon me wo dono us room ke left side par bane balcony par the...

2ND- saamne dekho....

uski baat sun pehle shaksh ne bina Ruchi ke hi sahi,saamne ki taraf nazar ghumayi..kuch der laga,par fir....

1ST-HOLY F****K......

uske reaction ko dekh MARILIZA ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi....

MARILIZA-kaisa laga mental assylum...???

MARILIZA ke taunt ka toh jaise uske saamne khade saksh par koi asar pada hi nahi tha....

uski nazarein toh saamne chal rahe scenes ko digest karne me laga hua tha...darasal hua ye ki balcony ke saamne kuch seconds pehle tak sirf garden dikh raha tha par fir MARILIZA ne apne man me kuch kaha aur uske aisa karte hi uske haathon se ek white ray nikli aur saamne hawa me ruki aur agle hi pal saamne ka drishya badal gaya aur jo scenes dikhe usse dekh MARILIZA ke peeche khade shaksh ka dimag hi ghum gaya....

kuch der tak aakhen faade saamne dekhte rehne ke baad....

1ST- ye sach nahi ho sakta...ye bas ek sapna hai..yaa, that's what it is...just a wild dream....

aaahhh...

ye dard bhari karah ussike mooh se nikli thi...reason...uske saamne ke drishya ko sapna kehne par MARILIZA ne uske kandhe ko pinch kiya tha...

MARILIZA-sapne aankh band kar ke dekhe jaate hain..aankhen kholkar nahi....

MARILIZA ki baat sun pehle toh saamne khade saksh ko yakin hone laga ki uske saamne ka drishya vaatav me hai,koi sapna nahi...

but MARILIZA ke sapne ke udaharan ko sunkar uske dimag me kuch aur bhi chal utha jisse yaad kar uske chehre par smile bhi aayi aur dard bhi aur ye dono hi bhaav MARILIZA ki aankhon se chhup nahi paaye....

MARILIZA-sapne wo nahi,jo neend me dekhe jaate hain.. sapne toh woh hain jo jab tak pure na hon,neend hi nahi aati...

yahi khayal ghum raha hai naa tumhare dimag me...

MARILIZA ki baat sun saamne khade shaksh ko jhatka sa laga kyunki MARILIZA ne sach kaha tha....

1ST-how do you know this...??

MARILIZA-mai tumhe aur tumhare baare me tumse zyada jaanti hun...

1ST-but how???.aur ye sab kya hai???aap hain kaun???please bina ghumaye sidhe sidhe bata dijiye...!!!!

MARILIZA-batati hun....sab batati hun...

ye keh MARILIZA saamne khade saksh ko usse judi sari sacchayi batati chali gayi jisse sun kayi saare expressions us shaksh ke chehre par aane jaane lage....

MARILIZA ki puri baat khatm hote hote uske saamne khade saksh ki aakhen puri tarh se bheeg chuki thi....

puchna toh uski zubaan bohot kuch chahti thi,but sawalon ki gathri itni ulajh gayi uske dimag me ki uske mooh se bas ek shabd nikal paaya...

UNKNOWN-KYUN!!!!!?????

MARILIZA-iska jawab dene ke liye mai sahi insaan nahi hun...aur naahi ye sahi waqt hai...tumhe kuch din tak intazar karna hoga...

1ST-intazar...kya is shabd ko ab tak arth nahi mila hai...kya iske pura hone ka waqt ab bhi nahi beeta hai...

MARILIZA-tumhare haalat se mai anbhigya nahi hun...par ye sach hai ki abhi upyukt samay nahi aaya hai...par yakin maano, bohot jald aayega...

1ST-abhi abhi jo dekha hai maine,usse itna toh saaf hai ki aap koi maamuli insaan nahi ho aur naahi mai aapse yudh ke laayak hun....

aapki baat manane ke siwa mere paas aur koi rasta nahi hai.par aap mujhe nyaya priye bhi lagte ho..

aap bataiye,ki jo aapne mere saath kiya,kya wo sahi hai???

MARILIZA-kartavya ke path par kayi baar aise faisle lene padhte hain,jo lete waqt sahi nahi lagte...

but jab waqt karwat leta hai, us kartavya ke pure hone ka waqt aata hai, saare RAAZ se parde khulte hain,tab us kathin faisle ka mahatv samajh me aata hai aur fir sab kuch sahi lagta hai....

1ST-gyan baatna tab bohot aasaan hota hai,jab receiving end me aap khud nahi hote...

MARILIZA-shayad..par jo tumhe end lag raha hai,wo toh end hak hi nahi..bus ek stoppage hai..kuch hi waqt me paar ho jaayega....

tumhe bas sabr rakhna hai...

1ST-aur ye mai kaise rakhun,ye bhi bata dijiye....

MARILIZA-do tarike hain.. pehla,upyukt samay aane tak yahin par apna waqt bitao ya fir mai tumhe ek baar firse ussi gehri nidra me bhej deti hun jahan se tum loute ho...

1ST-agar behosh hi karna tha toh hosh me laaya hi kyun???

MARILIZA-taaki tumhe tumhare sawalon ke jawab mil sake aur jab sahi waqt aaye,tab tum sayyam me raho.....

kyunki dusri chhor me aisa nahi hoga....

1ST-mujhse aise aur intazar me raha nahi jaayega..isse toh acha hai.....

us unknown shaksh ke mooh se aur kuch nikalta,usse pehle hi uski aankhen band ho chuki thi matlab ek baar phirse behoshi ne usse gale laga liya tha...

aur ye kiya tha MARILIZA ne...usse pehle hi pata tha ki us unknown shaksh ka kya faisla hoga...

usse behosh kar uske body ko hawa me tairate hue MARILIZA ne wapas bed par lita diya...

MARILIZA-ye sab kyun hua,ye toh mai bhi nahi jaanti...bas itna pata hai ki agli baar jab tumhari aankhen khulengi,toh tumhare dard ka malham tumhare saamne hoga...




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KUCH PATA CHALA!!!!!


ye awaaz MARIA ki thi jo abhi abhi apne room me enter hui thi..wahin FLORIN apne laptop me is kadar khoye huye the ki unhe naa toh MARIA ke aane ki aahat mehsoos hui aur naahi unki awaaz se unka dhyan tuta...

wahin maria jo room me aa kuch kapdon ko fold karne me lag gayi thi,jab uske sawal ka koi jawab FLORIN ne nahi diya toh unhe ajeeb laga...

MARIA-FLORIN.....

ek baar aur awaaz di MARIA ne par jab tab bhi FLORIN ne koi jawab nahi diya toh wo unki taraf badh chali aur jaise hi unki nazar FLORIN aur unke saamne rakhe laptop par gayi toh unhe laga shock...

reason.....

ek taraf jahan laptop me 1 tab open tha aur saath hi 10 se zyada tabs minimize mode par rakhe hue the wahin uske saamne baithe FLORIN ki bas aankhon ki putliyan hi harkat kar rahi thi....

jo lagatar laptop ke screen par dikh rahi infos ko padh rahi thi...

aisa lag raga tha maano FLORIN kisi trance me chale gaye hain aur ussi trance me ghum se ho gaye hain...

par is shock ke beech MARIA ko FLORIN ki haalat dekh bohot bura bhi laga....

reason....

FLORIN ke aankhon ke neeche dark circles banane lage the..unke chehre par is waqt kaafi zyada thakawat aur tanaav,dono hi dikh raha tha...

aur ye sthithi aaj hi ki nahi hai...do din beet chuke hain jab principal ne FLORIN aur MARIA ke upar us naye language ka bomb foda tha....

aur tabhi se MARIA aur FLORIN itne zyade tension me rehne lage the ki unhe orphanage aur usme rehne waale bacchon ki toh kya ek dusre ki bhi sudh nahi rahi thi....

jahan ek taraf MARIA thodi dari dari si rehne lagi thi..apne aap me hi goom chup chaap reh wo bas RAAZ aur uske saath chuppe itne saare RAAZ ke baare me hi sochti rehti thi wahin dusri taraf FLORIN ka toh haal aur bhi bura tha...

wo din bhar apne room me laptop ke saamne baith saare known aur unknown languages ke baare me research karte rehte the aur der raat ko ussi laptop ke through RAAZ ke room me nazar gadaye rehte the...

aur yahi wajah thi ki wo abhi kamzor bhi lag rahe the aur tensed bhi....

wahin MARIA ko ab khudpar ghussa aa raha tha..kyunki wo in do dino me khud me itna khoyi hui thi ki unhe apne husband ki haalat tak ka andaza nahi raha tha...

niyamit samay par breakfast,lunch aur dinner karne waale FLORIN ne in do dino me inme se koi bhi food time par liya bhi hai yaa nahi, unhe pata nahi tha...

umr ke is padhav par bhi jahan kuch din pehle tak FLORIN ache khaase jawan dikhte the wahin sirf do hi dino me unki haalat kharab ho gayi thi....

kuch der tak aatm glani karte rehne ke baad...


MARIA-FLORIN.....

FLORIN-haan......


kandhe ko zara zor se jhanjhorte hue jab MARIA ne FLORIN ko pukara tab kahin jaakar FLORIN apne trance se baahar aaye.

aur jaise hi unki nazar unki wife par gayi,unhe jhatka laga...reason... MARIA ke aankhen gili ho chuki thi aur ussi tairti hui jheel ke saath wo apne husband ko dekh rahi thi...

apni beti ko khone ke gum me nikle aansu ke baad aaj jaakar FLORIN ne apni wife ko rote dekha tha jo unhe bardasht nahi hua aur unhone jhat se uth MARIA ko apne gale se laga liya....


FLORIN-hey....shhhh...kya hua???why are you crying....????kisi ne kuch kaha kya???


aakhri shabd bolte bolte FLORIN ki awaaz kadak ho gayi thi jisse sun MARIA ke dil aur dimag me ek saath do do khayalon ne ghar kiya.

pehla khayal ye ki khud itne zyada tention me hone ke baawjud FLORIN bas unke aansu dekh baaki sab kuch bhul chuke the aur dusri unki aatm glani ka jo aur badh gayi thi...


MARIA-i am sorry FLORIN..tum pichle do dinon se itne tention me ho,aur maine is baat par dhyan bhi nahi diya...

FLORIN-isiliye ro rahi ho...!!!!par isme tumhari kya galti hai!!!jis khayal ne mujhe ghere rakha hai,ussi khayal ki shikar tum bhi toh hui ho naa...

mujhe pata hai ki tum bhi pichle do dino se ussi chiz ke baare me soch rahi ho jisse solve karne ki koshish mai kar raha hun...

fir ye aatm glani kyun???

MARIA-fir bhi..mai kitni selfish hun jo sirf khudme hi khoyi rahi..tumhari haalat par gaur tak nahi kiya...shaadi ke itne saalon ke baad shayad pehli baar tumhare dim me ye khayal aaye ki kahin mera tumhare liye pyar kam toh nahi ho gaya.....

FLORIN-batane ye jatane se hi pyaar saabit hota hai kya???tum jab mere aas paas hoti ho naa,toh bhale hi mujhe khabar naa ho par meri body,meri soul sab kuch shaant ho jaate hain...

jitna bhi tensed kyun naa rahun mai,agar tum saath ho toh aag bhi paani ho jaata hai...isiliye kabhi bhi i am very serious about it,kabhi bhi mere liye khudko dosh mat dena...


ye keh FLORIN ne MARIA ke chehre ko apne haathon me thaama aur usse dekhne lage... MARIA ab ro toh nahi rahi thi but unki aankhen ab bhi geeli thi jisse dekh....


FLORIN-tumhari aankhon me har waqt mujhe mera aks dikha hai MARIA.. par filhal jis paani ne tumhare aankhon par kabza kiya hua hai,usne mere aks ko dhundla kar diya hai...

aur bas yahi baat thik nahi hai...ye aankhen mera aayna hai aur tumhara kaam hai is aayne ko hamesha saaf rakhna....

agar apna pyar saabit hi karna hai toh bas itna hi kar diya karo mere liye....


FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA ki saari aatmglaani khatm si ho gayi... unhone FLORIN ke ird gird apne haathon ke ghere ko aur majboot kar liya tha...

kuch der tak ek dusre ki dil ki dhadkon me apna apna naam sunane ke baad...


MARIA-ek baat puchun???

FLORIN-aapko ijazat ki zaroorat kabse padh gayi....

MARIA-ek mystery solve karne ke liye itna effort, kyun????

FLORIN-pata nahi MARIA...but najaane kyun,jab bhi dimag kehta hai ki rehne deta hun, dil mana kar deta hai......

aisa lagta hai jaise ye mera koi mission hai jisse mujhe har haal me pura karna hai....


MARIA ko pata tha ki agar wo FLORIN ko ye sab nahi karne ke liye bolengi,tab bhi wo nahi maanenge...

aakhir the toh wo ek soldier hi....bhale hi army se wo nikal chuke the,but army unke andar se kabhi nahi nikal saki hai....

aur waise bhi, FLORIN shuru se hi jigyasu tarah ke rahe hain,unhe mila har task unhone har haal.me pura kiya hai...yahi passion,ya fir sahi shabdon me kahun toh yahi ATTITUDE hi unhe baakiyon se alag banata aaya hai...

aur shayad yahi wo khubi bhi thi jis wajah se MARIA ko unse pyaar hua tha...aur isiliye....


MARIA-mai aapko mana nahi karungi but in sabme apni sehat ko kharab mat hone dijiye....

agar aisa hua toh fir mai aapko dobara in chakkaron me nahi padne dungi...

FLORIN-jaisa aap kahen my queen....


muskurate hue FLORIN ne ya baat kahi aur wapas apne laptop ke saamne baith gaye...

wahin MARIA bhi muskurate hue FLORIN ke baaju me khadi unke laptop ko dekhne lagi...


MARIA-waise itne saare tabs kis cheez ke hain...???

FLORIN-ye saare alag alag languages ke sites hai...ek ek karkar check kar raha hun....

MARIA-koi hint mila!!!!

FLORIN-kahan!!!!???divine language,aramaic,ferizon aur aise hi najaane kitni hi mythology se judi languages,holy languages check kar chuka hun but abhi tak kuch haath nahi laga....

MARIA-ye RAAZ aur uske RAAZ...!!!ye ladka naa sikke ke do pehlu ki tarah hai...kabhi kuch toh kabhi kuch....


apni baat keh MARIA palti aur dusri taraf jaane lagi wahin FLORIN bhi apni patni ki baat sun pehle muskuraye par fir unke dimag me unki patni ki kahi gayi baat jaise gunj si gayi aur aisa hote hi unhone turant ek naya tab khola aur fatafat kuch type karne lage aur jaise hi unki type kiye gaye words ke result saamne aaye.....


FLORIN-OH SHIT...........TOH YE HAI WO.....


chillate hue unhone apni baat kahi jisse sunte hi MARIA turant unke paas aayi...


MARIA-kya hua FLORIN???is something wrong!!!!???

FLORIN-wrong toh ab tak tha,but ab sab right hi right hai and all thanks to you....

MARIA-thanks to me!!!matlab!!!saaf saaf bolo naa....!!!

FLORIN-arre tumne abhi kaha naa,ki RAAZ sikko ke do pehlu ki tarah hai..

MARIA-haan toh!!!

FLORIN-toh jo usne likha hai,wo bhi toh ek dusre pehlu ka hi hissa hai...

MARIA-kuch aisa bolo jo samajh me aaye...

FLORIN-mai ab tak galat segment me dhund raha tha...pehle jo RAAZ ne likha tha,ENOCHIAN....mai ussi language ke reference ko lekar baaki languages ko khoj raha tha but yahi mai galat tha....

tumne kaha naa ki RAAZ sikke ke do pehluon ki tarah hai..RAAZ ke ek pehlu me wo bewakuf jaisa lagta hai aur dusre me bohot intelligent.

waise hi uske through likhi languages bhi contrasting hain...

MARIA-mai ab bhi kuch nahi samjhi....

FLORIN-abhi samajh jaaogi..ye dekho,ye hai ENOCHIAN.... also known as ANGELS LANGUAGE... jo raaz ne pehle likha tha...yaani sikke ka pehla hissa....

aur ye hai DEMONOIC LANGUAGE... also known as DEVIL'S LANGUAGE....jo RAAZ ne abhi likha hai....


FLORIN ne RAAZ ke pehle ki likhi alphabets aur abhi ki likhi alphabets ko laptop me dikh rahe do alag alag language ke alphabets ke saath match karte hue MARIA ko dikhaya....

jahan ek taraf is nayi paheli ko crack karkar FLORIN khush dikh rahe the wahin MARIA ki toh haalat hi kharab ho gayi thi...


MARIA-FLORIN....ye sab kya hai!!!!pehle ENOCHIAN aur is baar DEMONOIC....ye ladka hai kya aakhir???

KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL....


itni der me ab jaakar FLORIN ki nazar MARIA ke chehre par gayi jahan is waqt dar hi dar tha...


FLORIN-MARIA..i know ye sab bohot complicated hai...aur kahin na kahin mai bhi in sab cheezon se ghabraya hua hun..but trust me,agar isse hamara koi nuksaan hona hota,toh ab tak ho chuka hota...

isiliye darna chhodo......ab jab hume ye pata hai ki ye kya language hai,toh isse RAAZ ke likhe alphabets ke saath mila kar dekhen ki kya matlab nikalta hai...????


dar toh MARIA ko ab bhi lag raha tha but usse bhi janana tha ki RAAZ ke likhe alphabets me kaun sa naya RAAZ chuppa hua hai isiliye unhone apne sir ko haan me hilaya...

unke aisa karte hi FLORIN turant laptop par us DEMONOIC LANGUAGE ke saath RAAZ ke likhe alphabets ko match kar uska matlab nikalne me lag gaye aur kuch hi der me RAAZ ke likhe shabd decode ho chuke the aur aisa hote hi FLORIN aur MARIA ko ek naya jhatka laga..

reason..laptop me screen par is waqt RAAZ ke likhe gaye jo alphabets the,wo ek RIDDLE me convert ho chuke the jo khudko kuch yun bayan kar rahe the....



sukoon chhupa hai tera,
bas samajh har alfaaz jo KEHTI hai...

chinta ki har jad ko pakad,aur
aaja wahan jahan se pashchimi hawa BEHTI hai....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....





AAPKA APNA V.J.....



Dear bhai ji,

Bhai ji bahut khubshoorat update hai
Ese hi likhte raho bhai ji
 

Jay Sutar

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Well janta hu late hu review ke liye but last ke teeno update kaafi achhe the jaise MAHI ka apne dimmag mein Jana........then un UNKNOWN person's ki baate........aur RAAZ ka ANGEL aur DEMON ki language mein kuch likhna.......lagta hai aur bhi bohot kuch aane wala hai aage...... let's see what happens next.
PEACE:applause:.
 
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