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Jay Sutar

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Chapter 28

Close aane ke baad Veer us spider monster ko dekh kar yeh samajh gaya tha ke uska exoskeleton kaafi sturdy hai.

Suddenly us spider monster ne apne saamne ke 2 legs ko upar uthaya aur ek certain angle me bend kiya.

Yeh dekhne ke baad Veer yeh dekhna chahta tha ke yeh spider monster aage kya karne wali hai.

Uske liye use zyada der wait nahi karna pada.

Kaafi force ke saath us spider monster ne Veer par apne un 2 legs se strike kiya. Par Veer jaise is sab ke liye ready tha.

Usne bhi apne dono haath upar uthaye aur un dono legs ko beech hawa me hi rok diya.

Ab Veer aur spider monster ke beech jaise strength ki battle start ho gayi thi. Dono ek dusre ko peeche push karne me lage hue the.

Veer ko jaise yeh sab excite kar raha tha. Aaj jaise use ek chance mil gaya tha apni strength use karne ka. Isliye usne aur bhi force use karte hue spider monster ko peeche push kiya.

Veer use push karte hue khud bhi aage steps lene laga. Ground par uske deep footprints ban rahe the jo yeh show kar rahe the ke Veer apni strength ko us monster ke equal level par use kar raha hai.

Veer ne ek gehri saans li aur phir aur force use karke us spider monster ko peeche dhakel diya.

Us push me itna force tha ke wo bada sa spider monster slide hote hue boss room ki wall par ja kar crash ho gaya. Ab wo poori tarah se gusse me aa gaya tha aur usne Veer ko dekh kar zor se screech kiya. Par Veer bina kisi darr ke wahi khada tha.

Jaise hi wo spider monster Veer ke paas aaya, Veer jaise apni jagah se gayab ho gaya aur suddenly uske saamne aakar usne ek zor ka punch maara.

Boom!

Phir se wo spider monster wall par ja kar crash ho gaya.

Itna strong exoskeleton hone ke baad bhi wo Veer ke punch ko feel kar raha tha, isliye usne pain me phir se zor se screech kiya.

Usne apna left leg uthaya aur Veer par strike kiya.

Par Veer ne kuch steps peeche hoke usse dodge kar liya.

Wo spider monster phir se Veer ki taraf badhne laga aur is baar usne dono legs se rapid strikes karna start kar diya, pehle se bhi zyada force ke saath.

Left, right, right, left, right, right, right, left, left!

Ek ke baad ek Veer sab attacks ko smoothly dodge karta gaya.

Jab bhi monster ke strikes ground par lag rahe the, wahan deep holes ban rahe the.

Jahan Veer fight kar raha tha, wahi dusri taraf Yash yeh sab dekh kar completely shock ho gaya tha.

Wo thoda distance par khada tha, lekin phir bhi wo un attacks ka force feel kar pa raha tha. Har baar jab ground toot raha tha, Yash ki body darr se kaanp rahi thi.

Par sabse badi baat yeh thi ke itna close hone ke baad bhi spider monster Veer par ek bhi hit land nahi kar pa raha tha. Veer bina kisi pressure ke sab dodge kar raha tha.

Yeh sab dekh kar Yash ne apne aap se poocha:

"yeh aadmi hai kaun?"

Veer ki swift movements dekh kar Yash samajh gaya tha ke wo bilkul bhi weak hunter nahi hai.

"kya yeh sach me E-rank hunter hai?"

Ab to Yash ko bilkul bhi yakeen nahi ho raha tha.

Agar Veer ki jagah wo hota, to ab tak wo mar chuka hota. Wo ek bhi attack dodge nahi kar pata.

Par Veer sab kuch smoothly handle kar raha tha.

Ek E-rank hunter aise attacks dodge kar raha tha jinke baare me ek D-rank hunter sapne me bhi nahi soch sakta.

Yeh dekh kar Yash ke mind me ek hi baat aayi,

Veer ek fake registrant hai.

Jaise hi yeh thought aaya, uske expressions serious ho gaye.

Kuch talented hunters apni ether energy ko control karke apni rank chhupa sakte the. Aise log fake registrants kehlate the.

Aur zyada tar aise log criminal activities me involved hote the.

Jaise ek serial killer jo low-rank gates me ja kar hunters ko maar deta tha.

Gate ke andar kya hota hai, wo bahar kisi ko pata nahi hota isi liye crime karna aasaan hota hai.

In sab baaton ki wajah se Yash aur bhi darr gaya. Ab use spider se zyada darr Veer se lag raha tha.

Uske mind me bas yahi chal raha tha ke wo yahan aaya hi kyun.

Wo kisi bhi moment ro sakta tha.

Dusri taraf spider monster abhi bhi lagataar Veer par attack kar raha tha.

Itne time me Veer uske attack pattern ko samajh chuka tha. Ab uske liye attacks slow lag rahe the.

Veer ek 3 meter ka jump maar kar uske head tak pahunchne wala tha, par tabhi use kuch feel hua.

Jaise hi usne danger sense kiya, wo peeche jump kar gaya.

Usi moment spider ke muh se liquid shoot hua jahan Veer khada tha.

Veer land hote hi slide karke ruk gaya aur balance bana liya.

Jahan wo khada tha, wo jagah liquid se melt ho gayi thi.

Yeh dekh kar Veer bhi serious ho gaya. Agar koi aur hota, to bachna impossible tha.

Thoda distract hone ka fayda uthate hue spider monster uski taraf tez aaya.

Par Veer turant react kar gaya.

Spider ne us par leg strike kiya.

Veer ne dono haathon se block kiya.

Boom!

Impact itna heavy tha ke Veer peeche ud kar wall par crash ho gaya.

Veer ne turant recover kiya aur force use karke khud ko aage push kiya.

Agla moment wo spider ke saamne tha.

Usne ek powerful punch seedha uske muh par maara.

Spider peeche slide ho gaya.

Ab Veer usse koi chance nahi dena chahta tha. Wo lagataar punches maarne laga.

Boom!
Boom!
Boom!

Uske punches itne powerful the ke spider ke fangs tak toot gaye.

Ab Veer bore ho chuka tha.

Aur phir

Ek powerful uppercut ke saath usne spider ka poora head destroy kar diya.

Spider ki headless body peeche gir gayi…

Aur Veer wahan shaant khada raha.
 

parkas

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Chapter 28

Close aane ke baad Veer us spider monster ko dekh kar yeh samajh gaya tha ke uska exoskeleton kaafi sturdy hai.

Suddenly us spider monster ne apne saamne ke 2 legs ko upar uthaya aur ek certain angle me bend kiya.

Yeh dekhne ke baad Veer yeh dekhna chahta tha ke yeh spider monster aage kya karne wali hai.

Uske liye use zyada der wait nahi karna pada.

Kaafi force ke saath us spider monster ne Veer par apne un 2 legs se strike kiya. Par Veer jaise is sab ke liye ready tha.

Usne bhi apne dono haath upar uthaye aur un dono legs ko beech hawa me hi rok diya.

Ab Veer aur spider monster ke beech jaise strength ki battle start ho gayi thi. Dono ek dusre ko peeche push karne me lage hue the.

Veer ko jaise yeh sab excite kar raha tha. Aaj jaise use ek chance mil gaya tha apni strength use karne ka. Isliye usne aur bhi force use karte hue spider monster ko peeche push kiya.

Veer use push karte hue khud bhi aage steps lene laga. Ground par uske deep footprints ban rahe the jo yeh show kar rahe the ke Veer apni strength ko us monster ke equal level par use kar raha hai.

Veer ne ek gehri saans li aur phir aur force use karke us spider monster ko peeche dhakel diya.

Us push me itna force tha ke wo bada sa spider monster slide hote hue boss room ki wall par ja kar crash ho gaya. Ab wo poori tarah se gusse me aa gaya tha aur usne Veer ko dekh kar zor se screech kiya. Par Veer bina kisi darr ke wahi khada tha.

Jaise hi wo spider monster Veer ke paas aaya, Veer jaise apni jagah se gayab ho gaya aur suddenly uske saamne aakar usne ek zor ka punch maara.

Boom!

Phir se wo spider monster wall par ja kar crash ho gaya.

Itna strong exoskeleton hone ke baad bhi wo Veer ke punch ko feel kar raha tha, isliye usne pain me phir se zor se screech kiya.

Usne apna left leg uthaya aur Veer par strike kiya.

Par Veer ne kuch steps peeche hoke usse dodge kar liya.

Wo spider monster phir se Veer ki taraf badhne laga aur is baar usne dono legs se rapid strikes karna start kar diya, pehle se bhi zyada force ke saath.

Left, right, right, left, right, right, right, left, left!

Ek ke baad ek Veer sab attacks ko smoothly dodge karta gaya.

Jab bhi monster ke strikes ground par lag rahe the, wahan deep holes ban rahe the.

Jahan Veer fight kar raha tha, wahi dusri taraf Yash yeh sab dekh kar completely shock ho gaya tha.

Wo thoda distance par khada tha, lekin phir bhi wo un attacks ka force feel kar pa raha tha. Har baar jab ground toot raha tha, Yash ki body darr se kaanp rahi thi.

Par sabse badi baat yeh thi ke itna close hone ke baad bhi spider monster Veer par ek bhi hit land nahi kar pa raha tha. Veer bina kisi pressure ke sab dodge kar raha tha.

Yeh sab dekh kar Yash ne apne aap se poocha:

"yeh aadmi hai kaun?"

Veer ki swift movements dekh kar Yash samajh gaya tha ke wo bilkul bhi weak hunter nahi hai.

"kya yeh sach me E-rank hunter hai?"

Ab to Yash ko bilkul bhi yakeen nahi ho raha tha.

Agar Veer ki jagah wo hota, to ab tak wo mar chuka hota. Wo ek bhi attack dodge nahi kar pata.

Par Veer sab kuch smoothly handle kar raha tha.

Ek E-rank hunter aise attacks dodge kar raha tha jinke baare me ek D-rank hunter sapne me bhi nahi soch sakta.

Yeh dekh kar Yash ke mind me ek hi baat aayi,

Veer ek fake registrant hai.

Jaise hi yeh thought aaya, uske expressions serious ho gaye.

Kuch talented hunters apni ether energy ko control karke apni rank chhupa sakte the. Aise log fake registrants kehlate the.

Aur zyada tar aise log criminal activities me involved hote the.

Jaise ek serial killer jo low-rank gates me ja kar hunters ko maar deta tha.

Gate ke andar kya hota hai, wo bahar kisi ko pata nahi hota isi liye crime karna aasaan hota hai.

In sab baaton ki wajah se Yash aur bhi darr gaya. Ab use spider se zyada darr Veer se lag raha tha.

Uske mind me bas yahi chal raha tha ke wo yahan aaya hi kyun.

Wo kisi bhi moment ro sakta tha.

Dusri taraf spider monster abhi bhi lagataar Veer par attack kar raha tha.

Itne time me Veer uske attack pattern ko samajh chuka tha. Ab uske liye attacks slow lag rahe the.

Veer ek 3 meter ka jump maar kar uske head tak pahunchne wala tha, par tabhi use kuch feel hua.

Jaise hi usne danger sense kiya, wo peeche jump kar gaya.

Usi moment spider ke muh se liquid shoot hua jahan Veer khada tha.

Veer land hote hi slide karke ruk gaya aur balance bana liya.

Jahan wo khada tha, wo jagah liquid se melt ho gayi thi.

Yeh dekh kar Veer bhi serious ho gaya. Agar koi aur hota, to bachna impossible tha.

Thoda distract hone ka fayda uthate hue spider monster uski taraf tez aaya.

Par Veer turant react kar gaya.

Spider ne us par leg strike kiya.

Veer ne dono haathon se block kiya.

Boom!

Impact itna heavy tha ke Veer peeche ud kar wall par crash ho gaya.

Veer ne turant recover kiya aur force use karke khud ko aage push kiya.

Agla moment wo spider ke saamne tha.

Usne ek powerful punch seedha uske muh par maara.

Spider peeche slide ho gaya.

Ab Veer usse koi chance nahi dena chahta tha. Wo lagataar punches maarne laga.

Boom!
Boom!
Boom!

Uske punches itne powerful the ke spider ke fangs tak toot gaye.

Ab Veer bore ho chuka tha.

Aur phir

Ek powerful uppercut ke saath usne spider ka poora head destroy kar diya.

Spider ki headless body peeche gir gayi…


Aur Veer wahan shaant khada raha.
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Jay Sutar bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
 

Jay Sutar

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Chapter 29

Us cave mein ab kaafi shanti fail gayi thi.

Veer palat kar cave ke dusre side aaya aur ek bade se stone par baith gaya.

Is spider monster ke battle ne Veer ko kaafi excite kar diya tha. Upar se wo yeh bhi jaanta tha ke Hitesh aur uski team kabhi bhi wapas aa sakti hai.

Kyunki wo sab Veer aur Yash ko weak hunter samajh rahe the, isliye wo yeh soch rahe honge ke spider monster ne ab tak unhe maar kar kha liya hoga aur phir se so gayi hogi.

Lekin Veer ab unke expressions dekhna chahta tha jab wo use aur Yash ko zinda dekhenge.

Veer abhi stone par baith kar apni saanse theek kar hi raha tha ke usne feel kiya ke cave halki halki shake ho rahi hai.

Isse Veer samajh gaya ke boss monster mar chuka hai aur ab unke paas sirf 1 ghanta hai bahar nikalne ke liye.

Tabhi Veer ki nazar spider monster ke chest par gayi jahan kuch brightly shine kar raha tha.

Wo uth kar uske paas gaya aur us shining cheez ko nikala.

Wo ek magic crystal tha.

Us crystal ko dekh kar Veer ke face par smile aa gayi. Agar wo is C-rank boss monster ka magic crystal bechta hai, to use kaafi paise mil sakte the.

"bade bhai!"

Yeh awaaz sunte hi Veer ne palat kar dekha.

Yash uski taraf aa raha tha. Usne Veer ka bag nikala aur bola:

"bade bhai, is crystal ko iske andar rakh dijiye!"

Veer ne haan me sir hilaya aur crystal bag me rakh diya.

Yash ne bag se water bottle nikali aur Veer ko dete hue bola:

"bade bhai, paani peejiye. Aap thak gaye honge."

Veer ne kuch nahi kaha, bas smile ki aur paani pee liya.

Paani peene ke baad wo fresh feel karne laga.

Yash ne poocha:
"bade bhai, ab kaisa feel kar rahe ho?"

Veer ne kaha:
"ab thoda fresh feel kar raha hu."

Phir wo kuch kehne wala tha:
"waise aaj tumne jo dekha wo..."

Par Yash ne beech me hi bol diya:

"of course main yeh baat kisi ko nahi bataunga. Yeh secret mere saath hi rahega."

Veer thoda surprise hua:
"nahi nahi, tumhe itna extreme sochne ki zarurat nahi hai."

Par Yash sunne ko ready nahi tha:
"nahi bade bhai, main kisi ko nahi bataunga."

Veer ne sir hila diya:
"theek hai, agar tumne decide kar liya hai to theek hai."

Waise bhi koi believe nahi karta ke ek E-rank hunter ne C-rank boss ko maara hai.

Tabhi cave phir se shake hui.

Veer bola:
"ab hume yahan se nikalna hoga."

Yash ne bhi haan me sir hilaya.

Dono entrance ki taraf badhne lage.

Boom!

Suddenly ek bright light flash hui aur jo bade stones entrance ko block kar rahe the wo collapse ho gaye.

Boom!

Blast ke saath stones gir gaye aur unke peeche se Hitesh aur uski team andar aayi.

Jaise hi unhone dead spider monster dekha, wo shock ho gaye.

"yeh kya hai? kya monster sach me mar gaya?"
"kya in dono ne milkar maara?"
"agar haan, to yeh monster kaafi weak tha..."

Sab confuse the.

Ab boss mar chuka tha, aur gate jaldi close hone wala tha.

Ether stones mine karne ka time bhi nahi tha.

Hitesh ke paas ab sirf plan B tha.

Usne zor se kaha:
"Yash!"

Yash dar gaya aur ek step peeche gaya.

Hitesh muskuraaya:
"jab maine tumhare gears dekhe tab hi samajh gaya tha ke tum rich family se ho. Maine background check kiya—tum Rathod Constructions ke owner Deepak Rathod ke bete ho."

Yash ne darte hue poocha:
"toh?"

Hitesh muskuraaya:
"hum tumhe ek chance dete hai. Agar tum zinda rehna chahte ho, to hume join karo."

"saathi?" Yash ne poocha.

Hitesh ne Veer ki taraf point karte hue kaha:
"tumhe Veer ko maarna hoga."

Yeh sun kar Veer bhi uski taraf dekhne laga.

Yash shock ho gaya:
"kya?"

Hitesh hansne laga.

Usne plan banaya tha Yash se Veer ko marwa kar video banayega aur uske father ko blackmail karega.

Deepak Rathod ki wealth trillions me thi.

Agar plan successful hota, to wo ether stones se bhi zyada kama sakta tha.

Phir Hitesh ne cold tone me kaha:

"tumhare paas sirf ek option hai. Agar tum Veer ko maar dete ho to tum zinda bachoge. Warna hum dono ko maar denge."

Phir usne taunt kiya:
"kya hua? tum ek E-rank se darr rahe ho?"

Yash ne Veer ki taraf dekha.

Veer ne shoulders utha kar signal diya ke tum jo chaaho wo kar sakte ho.
 
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