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★☆★ XForum | Ultimate Story Contest - 2026 - Chit Chat & Discussion Thread ★☆★

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Story ek ladka(Arjun) aur ladki(Neha) ki hai. Jo pahli baar 12th ke exam centre me milte hain. Aur ek dusre se pyaar kar baithte hain. Par kuch time baad dono ki life change ho jati hai.

Exam centre, attraction, meets, confession, fame, ego and breakup... Concept realistic aur readers se connection bana tha hai.
Story smoothly flow me chalti hai. Khaas kar flashback.

Charactors ki depth aur emotions missing hain. Connection feel nahi ho pata.
Neha ka suddenly badal jana ajeeb feel deta hai. Pahle foreshadowing ki ja sakti thi, like... Call, msg, kam ya behaviour me changes note karna.
Arjun ka character weak hai. Wo har chiz aasani se accept kar raha hai.
Ending curious karti hai, aage kya hoga. Par kuch readers ko unsatisfied feel karati hai. Aur villain wale hint se kahin na kahin mind me ye aata hai ki arjun Neha se dhokhe se shaadi karega.(It's my pov)

Rating 6/10
jise review kar rahe ho uska naam????
 
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vihan27

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Suryavanshi... Baaki sab bsdk nallee bhar rakhe team me..
 
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