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Dhanyvad bhai, likhate likhate writings skill bhi improve hoti jaati hai.

Yes! But teen baar changes hue hain, pahli bar tab hua tha Jab Aryan ke upar wo bijali Giri Thi dragon se, tab uska sharir se ghav mit chuke the, kapde tight Ho chuke the.

Dusri bar Avni wali ushi raat mein usko apne biceps mein Thoda changes mahsus huye.

Teesri baat last update wali right mein, jo thoda extreme bhi tha.
Ohh sorry dhyan nahi raha mera teen baar changes hue hai aur bijli Aryan par pehle dragon se bijli giri thi kya Aryan ke andar lighting like superpowers hongi??
Shayad aisa hi kucch ho, aap ki theory kafi had Tak Sahi Disha per hai. Per jo hoga woh dekhne layak hoga.
Mene to ese hi soch liya tha mujhe kya pata tha sahi disha pakad legi..
Yes! Unko aabhas ho chuka hai aryan zinda hai hai, aur woh teen zikr elders ne kiya unki bhi Stroy mein important roll hai.

Yup! Do eyes hai. Aryan ke upar jab bijali Giri thi tab bhi waha eyes thi. Pahle ki Kuchh update check Karna Jaha Rohan aur Aryan ka bathroom wala seen hota hai vah eye's waha per bhi thi. Narration Dhyan se padhne se ek hint mil jaega waha. :smartm:
Ohh firse update read karne padenge..
Yes! Naina jaisi character sab ki favourite Ban jaati Hai, baaki ke characters ka bhi personality dikhai jayegi.
Yup.. Naina ki jesi personality hai wese koi aur character introduce mat karna, aur aapne ek teacher ko rakhne ke baare mai socha tha, i think aapko Purnima (aryan ki chachi) ko rakhna chaiye...

Purnima ne Aryan ko kabhi nahi dekha aur na hi Aryan ne dekha hai, may be yeh possible ho sakta hai..🤔
Well humne Avni ke flashback Mein padha ki Viraj Kapoor sabhi Ke liye ek businessman hai but uska ko real estate ka business hai vah Sabse chhupa ke Rakha Hai. Toh Aise mein nahi, myra ke dad viraj ke rel States come business ke bare mein nahi jaanta.
Ohhhh..
Yes! Kanish ne Aryan ko neeche dikhte hai.


Bahut dhanyvad Bhai detail review tha, saath Bane rahiye bas :cheersbeer:
Bro mai to pehle update se es story ka Reader hu, hum sabhi aapke sath hai..

And congrats aapka 100k ka milestone touch ho gya hai..
 

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Well Naina Aryan ko bohat care karti hai uss waqt Aryan ko jo feel huya naina ko bol diya. Kitne saal toh woh apne maa ke chhaye mein nahi hai, aise Mein naina hi hai jo hai
Update 2 ya 3 mein tha sayad, Aryan 19 saal ka huya tha aur woh sapne mein apne past ko dekhta hai

'Maa mujhe maat maaro'
'Maine aap pe viswas kya tha'

I wonder Jyoti sayad ek Acchi character nahi Hogi, kyunki Aryan ke through jitna pata chalta hai Jyoti ne Aryan ko maara tha Jann se? Aryan jab pheli baar Barthroom mein Rohan se maar khaya tha tab bhi woh past drama Mein chala gaya tha, keh same yehi keh raha tha.
'maa mujhe jaan se maat Maro, maine aap pe viswas Kiya tha'
 
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Ohh sorry dhyan nahi raha mera teen baar changes hue hai aur bijli Aryan par pehle dragon se bijli giri thi kya Aryan ke andar lighting like superpowers hongi??
Thunder dragon se nikala tha aur direct Aryan pe Laga tha, i don't think so lightning ki koi power hogi. Maybe kucch dragon se related powers hogi.
 
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Thunder dragon se nikala tha aur direct Aryan pe Laga tha, i don't think so lightning ki koi power hogi.
Possibility to ho sakti hai ya shyd multiple elements ho sakte hai..
Maybe kucch dragon se related powers hogi.
Yup, mujhe bhi esa hi lagta hai, aur esa lagta hai woh teen shakhs jinka jikr elders ne kara tha woh bhi Aryan jese hai jinke pass powers hai lekin yeh nahi pata unki powers dragon se related hogi ya kisi aur se..
 
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Nice update Lagta h Naina ko Aryan s pyar hone laga h jabki Aryan Nisha ko apni behen k roop dekhta h Next Update m Aryan K real family k bhi kch scenes rkhna
 
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Ohh sorry dhyan nahi raha mera teen baar changes hue hai aur bijli Aryan par pehle dragon se bijli giri thi kya Aryan ke andar lighting like superpowers hongi??
Ajeeb baat thi baarish nahi ho rahi thi, fir bhi bijli kaise gir sakti thi? Yeh prakriti ke niyamon ke bilkul virudh tha. Lekin... yahi hua.

Woh bijli ki teekhi dhaar aasman mein bani us dragon jaisi akriti se nikal kar seedhe Aryan ke seene par ja lagi.

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Yeh huya tha.
And congrats aapka 100k ka milestone touch ho gya hai..
Thanks bhai.
 
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Update 2 ya 3 mein tha sayad, Aryan 19 saal ka huya tha aur woh sapne mein apne past ko dekhta hai

'Maa mujhe maat maaro'
'Maine aap pe viswas kya tha'

I wonder Jyoti sayad ek Acchi character nahi Hogi, kyunki Aryan ke through jitna pata chalta hai Jyoti ne Aryan ko maara tha Jann se? Aryan jab pheli baar Barthroom mein Rohan se maar khaya tha tab bhi woh past drama Mein chala gaya tha, keh same yehi keh raha tha.
'maa mujhe jaan se maat Maro, maine aap pe viswas Kiya tha'
Yes Aryan ne yehi kaha tha, past mein uska bohat bada trauma hai.
 

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Possibility to ho sakti hai ya shyd multiple elements ho sakte hai..

Yup, mujhe bhi esa hi lagta hai, aur esa lagta hai woh teen shakhs jinka jikr elders ne kara tha woh bhi Aryan jese hai jinke pass powers hai lekin yeh nahi pata unki powers dragon se related hogi ya kisi aur se..
Yeah woh teen ko enders dhoondh rahe hai uske anusar teenon powerful ho chuke hain. Maybe iska explanation hamen baad mein dekhne ko mile
 
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