double updates?
enjoy the read bhai
double updates?
Fantastic updates sir
Pyara update bhai
Ruhi bimar thi phir bhi maa ke kehne par Abhi ka wait kiya ek ghante tak ye padhke acha laga.
Jitna kuch Abhi keh paya Ruhi se uss se Abhi ko chain aya to hoga magar last me Abhi ko bahut dard hua hoga ke Ruhi baahar milne nahin aayi aur ab maa beti donon Mebhoob ka naam lekar Abhi se door rehne ki baat karne lage hein Kyun??
bahut dard bhara daur hai ye....................
jab kisi ke liye emotions paida hote hain to thoda dard hota hai...........thodi khushi
jise meetha-meetha dard kahte hain
jab dono ke emotions jud jate hain..........to sirf khushiyan...........
lekin jab jude huye emotions ektarfa rah jate hain...........
dusre ko apke emotions ki parwah honi band ho jati hai...........
to dard bahut jyada hota hai.......
lekin roohi ne to inteha kar di.............
uski shadi na karne wali baat to jaanleva thi
agar usne majak bhi kiya to............shayad jindgi mein kabhi ye jakhm dil se hatega nahi
aur agar kahin sach huya to.............. abhi ki jindgi hi jakhm ban jayegi
keep it up
aur casinar bhai...... for dual update
waiting for next.......... eagerly
bahot shukriya indian bhaiCasi bhai bahut dard bhada hua hai ye update.
Kia kahun kuch samajh mein nahin araha.
Abhi k liye dil ro raha hai....
Kitni taklif ho rahi hogi Abhi ko?
Ruhi kyun aise behave karne lagi hai ab?
Excellent writing Casinar ji. Your narration is impeccable as always.
The update is both sad and happy at times. Despite that Ruhi is now reluctant to meet Abhi in the open she still obey and come to see him which no doubt pleases Abhi, but I can understand what Abhi must be feeling as Ruhi gave him that habit of seeing each other so much everyday. Abhi must be missing the lunch time kisses, the hugs and her embrace. Dont know If Ruhi also could be missing all that. From a girl's point of view I bet that she will be missing all that more than Abhi.
Casinar ji once you wrote this on Aisa Vijay's story that girls/women have that inner power of bearing pain which men do not have. Remember? So Ruhi is using that power to hide her feelings. She is a STRONG girl. One day she may explode like Aisha did.
Great writing my dear.
Very painful update.
More painful for Abhi I could feel that. I understand what he is going through. I still maintain that Ruhi is killing herself by behaving that way towards Abhi. By hurting Abhi Ruhi is hurting herself and when Abhi goes home she must be crying on her actions. She must be crying for she knows she is making Abhi suffer.
Wonderful update. Great writing and showing plus describing emotions. You excel in that Casinar ji.
Woooooowww......
So this is called the update.....a very good update......
Sach kahu to wese to aaj ke update me koi khas baat nahi thi....na hee kuch aisa event hua jo ki jyada sochne ya baat karne laaya k ho.....
Lekin.......lekin.....
Yahi is update ki khas baat thi....think why....
Mujhe bahut jyada suspicious or doubtful laga ue pura update.....KHAS KAR Ruhi ki side se.....
Mai samjhata hu.....
Actually sex aisi chij hai.....jisne ak bar kar liya....chahe wo boy ho ya girl....use bar bar karne ki ichacha hoti hai.....
Bajaate unke ki....jinhone kabhi nahi kiya hai......
Wo ladka ya ladki iss chij ko control kar sakta hai....
Lekin jisne kar rakha he....uska control karna hard hota hai....
Ab same situation Abhi or Ruhi ke saath hai....Abhi ne nahi kiya hai....isliye usne khud ko sambhal liya....
Bhale hee wo ak bar Phisla ho.....lekin tab wo pahli bar kisi female ke interaction me aaya tha.....aisa hona swabhavik tha....OR upar se ladka bhi.....jinme ki sex or us se Judi chije jyada hoti hai.....
Lekin Ruhi.....ruhi pahle ye sab kar chuki hai....isliye use....jyada feel ho rahi he ye sab.....
Lekin iss baat ka ak or pahlu hai.....
Ruhi raat ko excited thi.....OK.......subah jyada excited thi......chalo ye bhi chalta hai...lekin sham ko phir se super excited thi.....
Yanha tak ki usne frustrate hokar Abhi ko jhidak bhi diya......
Ye....ye jo scene tha wo mujhe kaafi gadbad laga......kese....
Sex ke liye itna utawala hone ka ye kaaran ho sakta hai.....ki kosis kisi insan me.....chahe wo ladka ho ya ladki....sex or us se Judith feelings auro ki tumnai me jyada hota hai....
Unhe jyada pasand hota hai....sex ke baare me baat karna.....us se just chije karna sex karna..mm usme verity....OR experiments.....
Ho sakta hai ki shaayad Ruhi ke saath aisa hee ho......OR isme kuch galat nahi hai.....
Jaisa ki aapki likhi LOVE WITH A RAPIST.....waali story ki pahli heroine ke saath tha.....usne kya kiya wo baat yanha par nahi kar raha hu.....bas bata raha hu ki jaise usme sex jyada tha....possibly Ruhi me bhi jyada ho.....
OR iss baat par aapne usi story me ak bada review bhi diya tha....jisme ki aapne ak aadmi or uske dwara kiye multiple tapes in one night....ka jikra kiya tha....
I hope you remember.....
Waisi kuch position ho sakti hai....isliye maine kaha ho sakta hai Ruhi me sex thoda jyada ho....
Ha to ab iss baat ko ab ham thoda story ke hisaab se clear kar lete hai......
Maine iss update ko suspicious or doubtful isliye laha......
Kyoki.....Ruhi ki itni excitement mujhe confuse kar rahi hai.....
OR wo aise ki.....Ruhi virginity kho chuki hai....doesn't matter.....koi baat nahi.....
Lekin virginity iss baat ka saboot nahi hoti....ki usne bas 1 bar sex kiya hai ya kai bar....agar koi ladka ya ladki 1000 bar bhi kar le tab bhi koi nahi bata sakta....
OR jis tarah ki over excitement Ruhi dikha rahi hai....OR badi hee jaldi jaldi Abhi ke kareeb aakar rahi hai.....us se mujhe nahi lagta ki ye sirf ak bar ka asar hai....
Kahne ka matlab ye hai ki Ruhi ne bhale hee ye bata diya ki wo virgin nahi hai.....
Lekin usne ye nahi bataya ki kon ya phir uske kitne affairs rah chuke hai.....
Dhyaan rahe yanha me uske character ko judge nahi kar raha hu.....
Yanha me uske dimaag or harkato ko judge kar raha hu....
Multiple affairs ya encounters ke kaaran hee aisa ho sakta hai....OR Ruhi khud bhi to kah rahi hai ki uski galati hai.....
Ak example deta hu.....mujhe films dekhne ka bahut shaukh hai.....KHAS KAR Hollywood movies....lekin kabhi kabhi hindi or kuch south ki bhi dekh leta hu.....
To aisi hee ak film maine dekhi thi south ki.....RX100....usme bhi heroine ka character kuch aisa hee tha.....
Pahle ishaare phir khud jaan bujh kar nazdikiya badhana....phir sex....
OR us ladki ka pyar starting me to bahut pakka lagta hai....lekin baad me pata chalta hai ki wo ladki bas us ladke ki physic ko or looks ko dekh kar uski taraf attract ho gayi thi.....
Baaki aap samajh hee gaye honge...
Abhi ne apne private moments bhi diary me likh diye... jabki use pata he ki uski diary uski bahan bhi padhti hai.....
Embarrassing to hoga hee.....
Anyways
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai.....
Thanks....
ok sahi baatAre bhai.....wo museums waali baat mazaak thi.....yar....
OR wo Mahesh pr Manoj wala matter....to maine bataya to hai ki mai kuch kuch chije bhool jata hu....to use thoda adjust kar lo yar....
Ab baat the kare Manoj ki to bhai maine bhi wo baat likhi thi apne reviews me ki.....ak bhai hone ke naata ye sahi kaha usne.....
Lekin saath me or bhi kuch likha tha....aap ak bar dubara padhna.....
OR ha aapne MERI TIT FOR TAT a waali baat ka jawaab nahin diya....
Thanks....
Wah bahi Kia dil torne wala update dia h
Mere ansoo nikal aye hain agy Kia ho ga