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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Update 25 Ruhi Reveals It

Shaam ke 5.15 se 6.45 tak Abhi ne Ruhi se baat kiye, aur usski maa sath thi uss waqt. Maa ki haaziri mein sab kuch kaha suna gaya, thoda English mein thoda hindi mein baatein kiye donon ne, rona dhona bhi hua, aur maa ne bhi beech beech mein baat kiye.

Mehboob ne jab dekha saare kaam karne wale chale gaye aur Abhi Ruhi ke kitchen ke chaukath par khada hai to pucha,

“are Abhi aaj ghar nahin jana hai kia tumko?”

Rahima ne Abhi ki jagah jawab diya apne pati ko,

“lagta hai aaj Abhi Ruhi ke saat dinner karke jaega ya ussi ke yahan rahega!”

Ruhi hansste hue Abhi ke chehre mein dekh raha tha, aur Mehboob ne kaha,

“Acha yeh baat hai, to thik hai kal subha phir sab se pehle kaam shuru kar dena tumko door se nahin ana padega.”

Aur Abhi ne Ruhi aur usski maa se kaha,

“Dekha, sahi to keh raha hai Mehboob, main yahin theher jaata hoon aaj ek jagah milega kia raat beetane ke liye?”

Donon maa beti hanss rahe the aur Ruhi ne thoda gambhirta se kaha,

“Aap sapnon ki dunya se nikaliye nah Abhi main ne aap se kaha nah ke it’s too late now main kissi aur ki amaanat hoon!”

Abhi ko thoda ghussa aya aur usska dil ne chaha ke chilla kar Ruhi se kahe “phir kia naatak kar rahi hai itne dinon se usske saath, kyun ussko kiss kiya kyun uss se milne aati rahi ghar ke piche, kyun ussko lunch par invite kiya, kyun ussko jeeb se chidhati hai kyun itna kuch kiya, khilwaad samajh rakah hai kia?!!”

Magar Abhi ne sayyam rakhte hue araam se kaha,

“please ghar ke piche aao nah tumse akele mein baat karni hai mujhe, bahot serious baatein karni hai.”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“nahin jo kuch kahna hai yahin kehiye aap.”

Abhi ne usske maa ke taraf dekha aur kaha,

“Magar hum donon ke beech ki baatein hein tumhari mummy ki zaroorat nahin hai nah yaar!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“are meri mummy ko sab kuch pata hai nah usske saamne hum kuch bhi baat kar sakte hein!”

Aur mummy ji ne kaha,

“haan Abhi mere saamne baat karoge to koyi sawaal bhi nahi karega nah, agar Ruhi ke saath akele piche gaye to sawaal uthenge!”

To Abhi ne kaha okay thik hai aur baton baton mein aise hi ek ke baad ek baat nikalte gaye.

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap ko nahin yakeen ke koyi hai jo mera intezar kar raha hai to meri mummy se puch lijiye.”

Abhi ne usski maa ke taraf dekha to ussne kaha,

“Haan yeh sach hai, Ruhi ko propose kar diya gaya hai shadi ke liye humne ladke walon ko zubaan de diye hein to kuch nahin kar sakte nah ab!”

Abhi bhi serious hua aur kaha,

“Main yakeen nahin karta,yeh sab aap donon ne milkar khichdi pakaaye hue hein hai nah?!”

Ruhi Abhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue jaise usski haar par khush ho rahi thi jab usski mummy ne wo sab kuch kaha to. Aur Ruhi boli,

“kia meri maa aap se jhoot bolegi?”

Abhi: “haan jaise subha kaha tha ke tum apni nani ke ghar chali gayi ho!”

Abhi ne uss aadmi ke baare mein pucha, to Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“wo wahin ka rehne wala hai jahan isski naani rehti hai.”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Aap Ruhi ko France bhej rahi ho, itni door aap ko pata bhi hai wahan isski kia haal ho sakta hai?!”

Mummy ji ne kaha,

“khair dekhte hein isski kismat mein kia hai, Ruhi ko hamesha se foreign jaane ki tamanna thi to jane diya jaye main ne socha.”

Abhi ne tab Ruhi ko dekhte hue kaha,

“issi liye main ne tumse kuch der pehle pucha tha kia tumko life ki luxuries chahiye?!”

Abhi bahot depressed feel karne laga tha yeh usski chehre se zaahir tha, jab bhi Abhi udaas hota ya koyi bhi chiz ussko pareshan karta to Abhi ke chehre pe saaf nazar ata tha aur wo Ruhi ko achi tarah se pata tha, wo Abhi ke chehre mein hi dekhe jaa rahi thi, ussko pata tha ke Abhi ko gehri choat lagi hai yeh sab baatein sunkar…… Abhi itna khushnuman insaan tha ke usske chehre par hamesha ek raunak hua karta tha, doston ke beech bhi koyi bhi usske chehre se pehchan leta tha jab bhi Abhi ko koyi pareshani hoti thi, kyunke Abhi tha hi aisa ke usska chehra sab bata deta tha. Abhi ek joyful happy going insaan tha. ab aise insaan ko choat lage to saaf dikhta hai.

To Ruhi Abhi ke chehre mein dekh kar samajh sakti thi ke Abhi ghayal hua hai aur khud Ruhi ke aankhen bhar aayi abhi ko weise dekh kar.

Abhi ne sar jhuka liya tha aur kuch der tak kuch nahin bola, aur jab phir se Ruhi ke chehre mein dekha to Ruhi ne ussko jeeb se chidhaya. Iss baar Abhi ko usska chidhana acha nahin laga, Abhi ne bahot seriously Ruhi ke chehre mein dekha ur ek gehra saans liya….

Bina kuch kahe Abhi ne apne kadam ko jaane ke liye moda, sar jhukaate hue to Ruhi ki maa ne usskko roka yeh kehte hue,

“are ruko to, abhi sirf 15 mins baat kiye hein aur jaane lage thehro to aur baatein karte hein nah!”

Abhi ne dabbe awaaz mein kaha,

“Ab kia kehna baki hai aunty?!”

Abhi ne ek cigarette jalaya, aur Ruhi ko piche apne kamre ki khidki ke paas aane ko kaha. Magar usski maa ne kaha,

“nahin wo ab aap se akeli baat nahin karegi, jo kuch kehna hai mere saamne kehye nah aap!”

To bhi ne kaha,

“To aap bhi wahin aaiye usski kamre mein wahin baat karte hein nah yahan Mehboob aur Rahima hamaare baton ko sun sakte hein nah!”

To Abhi piche gaya Ruhi ke khidki ke paas aur dekha ke Ruhi wahan uss se pehle pahunch gayi hai aur apne donon kehuniyon ko khidki se tek kar sar baahar nikaal kar muskuraate hue Abhi ko aate hue dekh rahi thi…. Jab Abhi wahan reach hua to dekha usski maa usske piche khadi hai.

Abhi ne ruhi ke aankhon mein dekhte hue kaha,

“Ruhi ab main apne gharwalon se, Naina se, doston se kia kahunga?!”

Donon maa beti ne ek saath kaha,

“Yeh aap ki ghalati hai kyun sabko bataya aap ne?!”

Baatein gambhir hote gaye, Abhi bahut hi seriously baat kar raha tha, ussne apni maa ke baare mein kaha Ruhi ko, uss se kaha ke ussko usski maa ki jaisi saas life mein kahin nahin milegi, usskki maa itni achchi hai…..

Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi ke thartharaate hue honth ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Ab yahan rona mat Abhi….”

Abhi ne kaha,

“nah, yahan nahin yeh tab hoga jab akele tanhaayi mein hunga tab…”

Jab Abhi ne weisa kaha to dekha ke Ruhi ki aankhen bhar aaye aur ansoo chalak gaye… Abhi ne turant apna haath badhaya usske chehre ke taraf aur Ruhi ne ek kadam piche kiya aur Abhi ne usski honton ko kaampte dekha…. Usski maa wahin rahi bina hille to Abhi ne usski maa se kaha,

“Ab aap mujhe yeh samjhao ke Ruhi kyun rone lagi? Dil mera tuta nah? dard mujhe hua, takliff mujhko ho rahi hai to Ruhi kyun ro rahi hai? Samjhaiye aap mujhe yeh baat! Agar Ruhi mujhse pyar nahin karti to ussko kyun aise mere haal par rona ata?!”

Ruhi apni bed par leyt kar ro rahi thi apne aankhon se aansoo poncte hue, to Abhi ne ussko bulaya, paas aane ko kaha…. Aur kaha,

“Ab tumhi batao mujhe Ruhi, ke kyun rone lagi tum? Rona to mujhe tha nah? wo main ghar jaakar kar lunga ya bus mein jaate hue munh chhupa kar ro lunga magar tum kyun rone lagi agar mujhse pyar nahin hai to?!”

Ruhi ne aur zor se rona shuru kiya apni takiye mein munh dabaate hue to Abhi ke bhi aankhen bhar aaye aur chalak bhi gaye aur tadapti awaaz mein, rote hue Abhi ne kaha,

“aao nah Ruhi ek saath milkar rote hein aao rona share karte hein donon aah nah Ruhi!!”

Abhi Ruhi ko zorse apne seene se lagaana chahta tha uss waqt, magar wo ghar ke baahar tha aur Ruhi andar thi apni bed par thi to behte aansoowon se Abhi ne usski maa ko dekha aur kaha,

“Please aap piche wala darwaza open karo nah, main Ruhi ko hug karna chahta hoon chaahe wo aakhri baar hi kyun nah ho, kholo nah please….”

Ruhi ki maa ne nah mein sar hillaya magar Ruhi apne aansoo ponchte hue uth kar piche wale darwaze ko khol diya, to jhapat kar Abhi wahan gaya aur uss chawkat par Ruhi ko zor se baahon mein bhar kar rone laga… donon ek dusre ko baahon mein bhade ro rahe the, maa dekh rahi thi aur kaha,

“Ruhi!! ahista sabko batana hai kia sssshhhh”

Aur maa ne uth kar darwaza band kiya aur donon ko bed par baithne ko kaha, khidki ke parde ko khinncha aur donon ko bilkool aahiste baat karne ko kaha, magar baat kahan donon ek dusre ke baahon mein rote jaa rahe the do chhote bachon ki tarah…..

Aur ab Ruhi ne kal ki tarah dobara apni maa ke saamne pucha,

“aap mere saare ghalatiyan maaf kar sakte ho Abhi?!”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke aankhon ko ponchte hue kaha,

“are baba kal keh diya nah HAAN” HAAN” HAAN” sab maaf kiya main ne kuch bhi ho!”

Tab Ruhi ne English mein baat kiye….

“And if I am not what I am looking to you, if I am someone else, different then?!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“It makes no difference to whatever it be! I would accept to marry you even if you had a child, even if you are a divorcee, even if you are a widow!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke uss baat ko sunkar, upar chhat ko dekha, usski aankhen phir bhar aaye aur ek bacchi ki tarah rote hue Abhi ka haath bahut zor se pakar kar Ruhi ne pucha;

“AND IF I AM NOT A VIRGIN ABHI??!”
To be continued…. (5,752 words from all 3 updates)

5700 + words hamare liye likhne ke liye tehe dil se dhanyawad Casi ji :love:
Ab aate hein update pe.
Casi ji emotion dikhaane, feel karaane aur likhne mein aap pakka ustaad ho. Hats off isske liye :bow:
Rula hi diya aap ne mujhe. Lag raha tha rone wale scene aega aur jabardast aya. Wow.... ufff... mujhe ruk kar rona pada aage nahin padh paayi, kuch mins baad padhna jaari rakha to aur bhi rona aya.
Kia likhte hi aap Sir. Dhamaal, kamaal.
Pehla rona tab aya jab khidki k baahar se Abhi ke honth thartharaaye aur Ruhi ki maa ko dikh gaya aur ussne Abhi se kaha ke rona mat... aur ulta Ruhi ko Abhi ke chehre ko dekh kar rona agaya. Tab mere aankhen dabdaba gaye.
Phir jab Abhi ne jawab diya k kissi kone mein baad mein roega ya buss mein chehra chhupa k roega tab main fut padi Ruhi k saath...
Aur jab Abhi ne kaha aawo ek saath milkar rote hein aawo nah Ruhi.... tab mujhse sambhala nah gaya, padhna rok kar rona pada.
Padhna resume kiya to aur bhi jiada rone lagi jab Abhi ne rote hue kaha ke chot ussko lagi, dil usska tuta to Ruhi kyun ro rahi hai.... main ne fir padhna roka aur khub royi.
Phir royi jab Abhi ne darwaja kholne ko kaha ye kehte hue k wo Ruhi ko hug karna chahta hai magar maa ne mana kiya....
Aur jab khud Ruhi ne door open kiya aut jab donon ek dusre ko baahon mein bhar kar rone lage to main bekaabu hokar rone lagi. Mujhe laga ke main hi Ruhi hoon aur mujh par sab beet rahi hai.....
Aap readers ko character k andar ghusaa dete ho casi ji yehi aap ka likhne ka kamaal hai hats off.
Baaki jo hua mere liye secondary hai
Thanks itni khubsurat lajawaab update dene k liye casi ji. :love:
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Update 26 The Unexpected Happened

“It makes no difference to whatever it be! I would accept to marry you even if you had a child, even if you are a divorcee, even if you are a widow!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke uss baat ko sunkar, upar chhat ko dekha, usski aankhen phir bhar aaye aur ek bacchi ki tarah rote hue Abhi ka haath bahut zor se pakar kar Ruhi ne pucha;

“AND IF I AM NOT A VIRGIN ABHI??!”

Ab aaguey….

Ruhi ki uss baat ko sunkar Abhi ko nah shock laga, nah heyraan hua nah kuch kyunke Abhi ko yakeen ho gaya tha ke aisi hi koyi baat hogi jissko Ruhi “apni life ki ghalatti” kehti ya maanti thi. To bina soche turant on the spot Abhi ne kaha,

“Main tab bhi tumse shaadi karne ke liye tayyaar hoon Ruhi”

Ruhi kuch der khamosh rahi, tab pucha,

“Are you sure Abhi?”

Palak jhapakne se pehle Abhi ne kaha,

“YES I AM SURE A THOUSAND, A MILLION, A BILLION PERCENT SURE”

Aur Abhi ne tutant pucha,

“kia yehi vajah thi ke tum mere proposal ko refuse kar rahi thi?!”

Sar jhuaaye hue, zameen taakte hue, aankhon ko saaf karte hue Ruhi ne udaas awaaz mein kaha,

“haan”

Phir Abhi ke chehre mein ek chamak dikhaayi diya aur Khushi se pucha,

“Aur phir baaki jo kuch bhi tumne kaha ke kissi ka tumhara intezaar karna, wo Amit, wo abroad wala, sab planned tha nah? sab naatak the nah?!”

Ruhi thodi si hanssi, Abhi ke chehre mein dekha aur kaha,

“Now, please don’t tell this matter to anyone, I have not told anybody about it”

Abhi ne pucha,

“your relatives hereabout know about it?”

Ruhi: No, No, No one.”

Abhi: “your father?”

Ruhi: “Noooooo”

Abhi: “your bothers?”

Ruhi: “No Abhi not at all!!!”

Abhi: “hmm only your mother knows all!”

Ruhi: “No, even she does not know!”

Aur Ruhi ki maa uss waqt hanss rahi thi to lag raha tha ke wo donon ke baton ko samajh rahi thi halaan ke English mein baat kar rahe the donon.

To Abhi ne kaha,

“Now you must be lying, your mother must be aware of all, I am sure!”

Ruhi: “No Abhi, she is not aware, no one else know it!”

Phir kuch der kamre mein bilkool sannata ho gaya, khamoshi chah gayi, koyi kuch nahin bol raha tha, Abhi Ruhi ki saanson ko sun sakta tha uss waqt.

Ruhi ka haath Abhi ke haath mein tha, donon bed par baithe hue the, maa, do kadam bagal mein khadi donon ko dekh rahi thi. Baahar andhera hone laga tha, suraj dhal chuka tha, kamre mein thoda andhera hone laga tha…. Abhi ne ek haath Ruhi ke kaandhe par kiya, usski gardan ko khud se sataaya, usski gaal ko chuma, tab mudhkar usski maa ko dekha ek smile ke saath, aur Abhi uss baare mein Ruhi se swaaal karna chahta tha, socha ke puchein ya nahin puchein, mauka sahi tha uss topic par hi baat karne ko kyun ke wo topic cheda gaya tha, magar Abhi soch raha tha usske sawaal karne se Ruhi ko takliff ho sakta hai, phir socha ke abhi nahin pucha to kabhi bhi puchega tab bhi takliff hi hogi, to ya iss baat ko kabhi nah karen ya aaj hi sab puch kar khatam karen, to Abhi ne Ruhi se puchne hi jaa raha tha ke Ruhi ne kaha,

“aap ko aur kuch puchna hai to puchiye, main sab bataungi,

To Abhi ne pucha,

“Who did that to you? The one who is abroad?”

Ruhi ne sar jhukaaye hue hi jawaab diya,

“No, not he”

Abhi jhuk kar Ruhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue phir pucha,

“when did that happen? Long time ago or recently?”

Ruhi: “A long time ago!”

Abhi: “then who did that?”

Ruh bahot upset dikh rahi thi aur kaha,

“Oh, I don’t want to talk about it, please.”

Abhi: “OKAY…NEVER MIND….. SO RUHI NOW ITS ALL OKAY BETWEEN ME AND YOU? ALL IS FINE? SEE I LOVE YOU DESPITE THAT, YOU MUST BE HAPPY RIGHT?”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke chehre mein dekha aur kaha,

“Maa andhera ho gaya light on karo nah mujhe Abhi ka chehra nahin dikh raha thik se!”

Usski maa ne light ko on kiya, aur chali gayi baaki ke Kamron mein light on karne tab Ruhi ne Abhi ko baahon bharkar kaha,

“yes, it’s all okay now Abhi. Thank you Abhi.”

Abhi ne ne usske peeth ko thapthapaate hue kaha,

“Dekho Ruhi ab mere tumhare beech mein koyi doorie nahin honi chahiye okay?”

Ruhi ne apni dheemi, meethi, pyari awaaz mein kaha,

“OKAY ABHI”

Aur baahar baarish sunaayi diye, to Ruhi ki maa wapas kamre mein aayi aur kaha,

“Baarish hone lagi, Manoj Shweta wapas nahin aaye Abhi tak, bheeg jayenge donon!”

Maghrib ki namaz ki azaan sunaayi diye phir, aur Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Aazan ho rahi hai Mehboob masjid jaega ab!”

To Abhi ne pucha,

“Mehboob religious hai? Mujhe nahin pata tha din mein to bilkool nahin jata wo!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Sunset ke baad aur raat ki last prayer ko jaate jein wo.”

Tab Ruhi ki maa ne donon ko dekhte hue Abhi se kaha,

“Abhi tum kitne lambe ho aur Ruhi tumhare saamne kitni chhoti hai”

Abhi ne turant kaha,

“jisski biwi chhoti usska bu bada naam hai”

Iss par Ruhi hanssi aur Abhi ko maara usske haath par.

Phir Abhi ne continue kiya

“goad mein bithalo bachche ka kia kaam hai…”

Ruhi zor se hanssi aur phir Abhi ko maarna chaha magar Abhi wahan se hatt gaya to Ruhi ne ussko miss kiya iss liye aur bhi hanssne lagi….

Phir achanak Ruhi ne Abhi se pucha,

“Are you sure that you still love me despite that?... you see I do not want to deceive you that’s why it was my duty to tell you the truth”

Abhi ne phir usske kaandhe par haath rakh kar kahaa,

“yes sweetheart I love you and will always do, look Ruhi, I told you I am a very sentimental person, I need LOVE AND YOU WILL GIVE ME MUCH MUCH LOVE AND THAT LOVE WILL COVER EVERYTHING ELSE.”

Abhi ke baat ko sunkar Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“YES.”

Abhi ne phir pucha,

“Can you give me that much love Ruhi?”

Ruhi kuch der khaamosh rahi, to Abhi ne sawaal ko dohraya, tab Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“YESSSS”

Abhi bahot hi khush hua, ussko jaise naachne ka mann kar raha tha, jhumne ko mann kar raha tha, socha Khushi se aaj bus mein safar karega….

Aur tab Abhi ne kaha,

“okay ab mujhe jana hoga, kaafi der ho gayi hai…”

Ruhi ne achanak Abhi ka haath zor se pakra aur udaas hokar kaha,

“Aap jaa rahe ho? Main ne socha aap rahoge, please aaj yahin theher jao nah please!”

Abhi ko heyraani hui aur Usski maa ke chehre mein dekhne laga. To maa ne kaha,

“thik hair reh jaiye aaj, kal chale jana nah!”

Abhi ne sapnon mein aisa kayi baar socha tha aur aaj usska sapna pura hote dikhaayi de raha tha ke wo Ruhi ke ghar mein raat guzaarega….. phir bhi ussne pucha,

“magar abhi Manoj aakar sawaal karega to kia jawaab denge ussko?!”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“wo aap mujh par chor do, wo kuch nahin kahega hum uss se kahenge ke aap ko rehne ka mann kiya buss aur phir dada ji hai nah ghar mein aur ussko to pata hai”

Tab Abhi ne kaha,

“mere ghar par sab intezaar karenge, yahan kiss ke paas phone hai main ghar phone karke bata dun ke kal ghar aunga….”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke chehre mein ghaur se dekhte hue pucha,

“Aap ke yahan phone hai Abhi?”

Abhi: “lines lagaa rahe hein telecom waale ek do mahine mein lag jaega, main ne application kar diya hai, abhi paas ke dukaan mein phone karke ghar bataane ko kahunga.”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Hum ne bhi apply kiya hua hai, papa Saudi Arabia se uss filling station wale ke yahan phone karta hai to humko weh log bulaate hein tab hum jaate hein papa se baat karne ke liye, chaliye aap uss dukaan se phone kar sakte ho jahan aap cigarette kharidne jaate ho……. Maa main Abhi ko phone karane lejaa rahi hoon!”

Aur Ruhi aur Abhi ghar se nikle, main road ke taraf jaate hue dikhe uss aangan mein jahan Abhi ne sapna dekha tha ke wo Ruhi ke saath wahan weise hi chalega kabhi. Andhera tha, street light to main road par tha uss aagan mein to nahin, to Ruhi ne chalte hue khud Abhi ke baazu ko pakra hua tha, wo Abhi ke right hand side mein thi to usske right arm ko apne donon haathon se thaame hue thi.

Abhi ko kitna achcha feel ho raha tha, usska dil machal raha tha wo itna khush tha ke ussko zoron se chilla kar apni Khushi ko izhaar karne ka mann kar raha tha uss waqt. Wo uss pal ko jee bhar ke jina chahta tha, Ruhi ko thaamna chahta tha magar Ruhi ne usske baazu pakre hue the aur wo ussko disturb nahin karna chahta tha.

Aur Abhi ne araam se aur dhimi awaaz mein jhuk kar Ruhi ne gardan ke paas apne munh ko laakar kaha,

“kitna romantic lag rahe honge hum donon iss waqt aise chalte hue, kaash koyi hum donon ki film utaarta aise, ya Manoj hamara ek photo leta iss position mein!”

Ruhi ne thoda sa darr dikhaate hue kaha,

“uff wo ata hi hoga Shweta ke saath, hum ussko cross kar sakte hein raaste par….”

Aur Ruhi ne turant Abhi ke baazu ko chorr diya.

Tab Abhi ne Ruhi ke kaandhe par hath rakh kar ussko khud se sataya, to Ruhi ne kaha,

“ofo chorro nah main road agaya, yahan kitne log honge, dekho dukaan wahan hai jahan se phone karna hai…”

Ruhi ne phir filling station ko dikhaate hue kaha,

“aur wo hai filling station, usska maalik piche rehta hai, wahin papa phone karta hai humko!”

{main ne sketch mein uss filling station ko lagana bhool gaya. Wo station main road par nikalte hi thik opposite mein hai Ruhi ke ghar se wo filling station dikhta hai, agar Ruhi apne kitchen ke chaukath par khadi hoti hai to seedha filling station ki maalik ka ghar, aur aadha filling station saamne dikhta hai main road ke uss paar --- yeh iss liye bata raha hoon kyunke uss filling station ke baare mein baad mein kuch part aane wala hai}

To Abhi aur Ruhi uss dukaan tak gaye, kuch log pee kar ladkhadaate hue dukan se nikal rahe the, kuch log pee rahe the kone mein, Ruhi Abhi ke piche hokar jaise usske piche chhup rahi thi wo sab dekhte hue.

Abhi ne phone kiya apne mohalle ki dukaan par aur by chance uss waqt usske pita wahin tha uss dukaan mein, wo bhi daru hi pine gaya hua tha udhar, to dukaandar ne Abhi se kaha ke usska pita wahin hai uss waqt to ussi ko phone diya baat karne ko.

Abhi ne apne pita se keh diya ke aaj wo ghar nahin araha kal sham ko aayega. Baap ne sawaal kiya ke kahan rehega kiss ke ghar, to Abhi ne kaha jisska bus bana raha hai ussi ke ghar par rukega aaj ki raat.

Phir Abhi ne Ruhi ke liye chocolates kharida, aur kuch snacks aur pucha ke Shweta kia passand karti hai, to Ruhi ne Abhi ko unn chizon ko dikhaya jo Shweta ko passand hai aur Abhi ne ek plastic bag bhar ke cakes aur sweets liya sabke liye, Ruhi aur usski maa ke liye ice creams bhi liye Abhi ne, aur apne liye cigarettes chhupa kar liya bina Ruhi ko dikhaaye.

Wapas aate hue Ruhi ne abhi se kaha,

“kitna kharch karte ho aap, itna kuch kharidne ki kia zaroorat thi, Rs.250 ke cakes hmmm?!”

Abhi ne buss Ruhi ko jakar liya aur us aangan mein donon ne ek dusre ke kamar mein haath daale hue chal kar ghar aaye….. Aur jab bus tak pahunche jahan Abhi har roz kaam karta tha to Ruhi ne kaha,

“rukiye nah ek baat bataati hoon aap ko….”

Abhi ruk gaya bus ke paas, to Ruhi ne Abhi ka haath khinch kar uss bade darkhat ke paas gayi aur Abhi ke gale mein apne bahon ko lapet kar kaha,

“Har shaam ko jab aap chale jaate ho nah to main yahan aakar aap ko yaad karti hoon, din bhar jo kuch aap ne kiya, kahan kahan kaam kiya sab unn jagahon par jaakar dekhti hoon ke Abhi aaj yahan kaam kar raha tha, yeh kar raha tha wo kar raha tha yahan se mujhko dekh raha tha…..”

Abhi ne Ruhi ko zor se baahon mein bhadte hue kaha,

“Ruhi tum bhi mere jaise feelings rakhti ho, are main ne tumko letter mein yeh sab kaha hai nah? Main bhi har subha ata hoon to tumko har uss jagah par feel karta hoon jahan jahan tum mujhe dikhti ho, yaar yeh hum donon ek jaise hein yaar!!”

Aur donon ne ek dusre ko uss darkhat ke niche kiss kiya. Ek lamba aur passionate kiss. Ruhi ko jaise Abhi ko chorrne ka mann hi nahin tha.

Abhi behad khush tha, yeh ussko sab ek sapna jaisa lagne laga tha. Ussko yakeen nahin ho raha tha ke yeh sab sach mein ho raha hai. Haan ussne yeh sab khayaalon mein kayi baar socha tha magar sab hakikat mein badal jaega yeh ussne bilkool nahin socha tha. Tha to wo bilkool positive, hamesha bhala hi sochta tha, aur umeed karta tha ke jo soch raha hai wo sach aur sahi ho jaaye magar weisa sach mein hoga wo nahin sochta tha. Aur aaj jo ho raha tha usske saath wo buss ek dream come true tha.

To be continued…… (2307 words)
Fantastic update sir
Finally abhi ko uska pyar mil gya
 

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Update 26 The Unexpected Happened

“It makes no difference to whatever it be! I would accept to marry you even if you had a child, even if you are a divorcee, even if you are a widow!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke uss baat ko sunkar, upar chhat ko dekha, usski aankhen phir bhar aaye aur ek bacchi ki tarah rote hue Abhi ka haath bahut zor se pakar kar Ruhi ne pucha;

“AND IF I AM NOT A VIRGIN ABHI??!”

Ab aaguey….

Ruhi ki uss baat ko sunkar Abhi ko nah shock laga, nah heyraan hua nah kuch kyunke Abhi ko yakeen ho gaya tha ke aisi hi koyi baat hogi jissko Ruhi “apni life ki ghalatti” kehti ya maanti thi. To bina soche turant on the spot Abhi ne kaha,

“Main tab bhi tumse shaadi karne ke liye tayyaar hoon Ruhi”

Ruhi kuch der khamosh rahi, tab pucha,

“Are you sure Abhi?”

Palak jhapakne se pehle Abhi ne kaha,

“YES I AM SURE A THOUSAND, A MILLION, A BILLION PERCENT SURE”

Aur Abhi ne tutant pucha,

“kia yehi vajah thi ke tum mere proposal ko refuse kar rahi thi?!”

Sar jhuaaye hue, zameen taakte hue, aankhon ko saaf karte hue Ruhi ne udaas awaaz mein kaha,

“haan”

Phir Abhi ke chehre mein ek chamak dikhaayi diya aur Khushi se pucha,

“Aur phir baaki jo kuch bhi tumne kaha ke kissi ka tumhara intezaar karna, wo Amit, wo abroad wala, sab planned tha nah? sab naatak the nah?!”

Ruhi thodi si hanssi, Abhi ke chehre mein dekha aur kaha,

“Now, please don’t tell this matter to anyone, I have not told anybody about it”

Abhi ne pucha,

“your relatives hereabout know about it?”

Ruhi: No, No, No one.”

Abhi: “your father?”

Ruhi: “Noooooo”

Abhi: “your bothers?”

Ruhi: “No Abhi not at all!!!”

Abhi: “hmm only your mother knows all!”

Ruhi: “No, even she does not know!”

Aur Ruhi ki maa uss waqt hanss rahi thi to lag raha tha ke wo donon ke baton ko samajh rahi thi halaan ke English mein baat kar rahe the donon.

To Abhi ne kaha,

“Now you must be lying, your mother must be aware of all, I am sure!”

Ruhi: “No Abhi, she is not aware, no one else know it!”

Phir kuch der kamre mein bilkool sannata ho gaya, khamoshi chah gayi, koyi kuch nahin bol raha tha, Abhi Ruhi ki saanson ko sun sakta tha uss waqt.

Ruhi ka haath Abhi ke haath mein tha, donon bed par baithe hue the, maa, do kadam bagal mein khadi donon ko dekh rahi thi. Baahar andhera hone laga tha, suraj dhal chuka tha, kamre mein thoda andhera hone laga tha…. Abhi ne ek haath Ruhi ke kaandhe par kiya, usski gardan ko khud se sataaya, usski gaal ko chuma, tab mudhkar usski maa ko dekha ek smile ke saath, aur Abhi uss baare mein Ruhi se swaaal karna chahta tha, socha ke puchein ya nahin puchein, mauka sahi tha uss topic par hi baat karne ko kyun ke wo topic cheda gaya tha, magar Abhi soch raha tha usske sawaal karne se Ruhi ko takliff ho sakta hai, phir socha ke abhi nahin pucha to kabhi bhi puchega tab bhi takliff hi hogi, to ya iss baat ko kabhi nah karen ya aaj hi sab puch kar khatam karen, to Abhi ne Ruhi se puchne hi jaa raha tha ke Ruhi ne kaha,

“aap ko aur kuch puchna hai to puchiye, main sab bataungi,

To Abhi ne pucha,

“Who did that to you? The one who is abroad?”

Ruhi ne sar jhukaaye hue hi jawaab diya,

“No, not he”

Abhi jhuk kar Ruhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue phir pucha,

“when did that happen? Long time ago or recently?”

Ruhi: “A long time ago!”

Abhi: “then who did that?”

Ruh bahot upset dikh rahi thi aur kaha,

“Oh, I don’t want to talk about it, please.”

Abhi: “OKAY…NEVER MIND….. SO RUHI NOW ITS ALL OKAY BETWEEN ME AND YOU? ALL IS FINE? SEE I LOVE YOU DESPITE THAT, YOU MUST BE HAPPY RIGHT?”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke chehre mein dekha aur kaha,

“Maa andhera ho gaya light on karo nah mujhe Abhi ka chehra nahin dikh raha thik se!”

Usski maa ne light ko on kiya, aur chali gayi baaki ke Kamron mein light on karne tab Ruhi ne Abhi ko baahon bharkar kaha,

“yes, it’s all okay now Abhi. Thank you Abhi.”

Abhi ne ne usske peeth ko thapthapaate hue kaha,

“Dekho Ruhi ab mere tumhare beech mein koyi doorie nahin honi chahiye okay?”

Ruhi ne apni dheemi, meethi, pyari awaaz mein kaha,

“OKAY ABHI”

Aur baahar baarish sunaayi diye, to Ruhi ki maa wapas kamre mein aayi aur kaha,

“Baarish hone lagi, Manoj Shweta wapas nahin aaye Abhi tak, bheeg jayenge donon!”

Maghrib ki namaz ki azaan sunaayi diye phir, aur Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Aazan ho rahi hai Mehboob masjid jaega ab!”

To Abhi ne pucha,

“Mehboob religious hai? Mujhe nahin pata tha din mein to bilkool nahin jata wo!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Sunset ke baad aur raat ki last prayer ko jaate jein wo.”

Tab Ruhi ki maa ne donon ko dekhte hue Abhi se kaha,

“Abhi tum kitne lambe ho aur Ruhi tumhare saamne kitni chhoti hai”

Abhi ne turant kaha,

“jisski biwi chhoti usska bu bada naam hai”

Iss par Ruhi hanssi aur Abhi ko maara usske haath par.

Phir Abhi ne continue kiya

“goad mein bithalo bachche ka kia kaam hai…”

Ruhi zor se hanssi aur phir Abhi ko maarna chaha magar Abhi wahan se hatt gaya to Ruhi ne ussko miss kiya iss liye aur bhi hanssne lagi….

Phir achanak Ruhi ne Abhi se pucha,

“Are you sure that you still love me despite that?... you see I do not want to deceive you that’s why it was my duty to tell you the truth”

Abhi ne phir usske kaandhe par haath rakh kar kahaa,

“yes sweetheart I love you and will always do, look Ruhi, I told you I am a very sentimental person, I need LOVE AND YOU WILL GIVE ME MUCH MUCH LOVE AND THAT LOVE WILL COVER EVERYTHING ELSE.”

Abhi ke baat ko sunkar Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“YES.”

Abhi ne phir pucha,

“Can you give me that much love Ruhi?”

Ruhi kuch der khaamosh rahi, to Abhi ne sawaal ko dohraya, tab Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“YESSSS”

Abhi bahot hi khush hua, ussko jaise naachne ka mann kar raha tha, jhumne ko mann kar raha tha, socha Khushi se aaj bus mein safar karega….

Aur tab Abhi ne kaha,

“okay ab mujhe jana hoga, kaafi der ho gayi hai…”

Ruhi ne achanak Abhi ka haath zor se pakra aur udaas hokar kaha,

“Aap jaa rahe ho? Main ne socha aap rahoge, please aaj yahin theher jao nah please!”

Abhi ko heyraani hui aur Usski maa ke chehre mein dekhne laga. To maa ne kaha,

“thik hair reh jaiye aaj, kal chale jana nah!”

Abhi ne sapnon mein aisa kayi baar socha tha aur aaj usska sapna pura hote dikhaayi de raha tha ke wo Ruhi ke ghar mein raat guzaarega….. phir bhi ussne pucha,

“magar abhi Manoj aakar sawaal karega to kia jawaab denge ussko?!”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“wo aap mujh par chor do, wo kuch nahin kahega hum uss se kahenge ke aap ko rehne ka mann kiya buss aur phir dada ji hai nah ghar mein aur ussko to pata hai”

Tab Abhi ne kaha,

“mere ghar par sab intezaar karenge, yahan kiss ke paas phone hai main ghar phone karke bata dun ke kal ghar aunga….”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke chehre mein ghaur se dekhte hue pucha,

“Aap ke yahan phone hai Abhi?”

Abhi: “lines lagaa rahe hein telecom waale ek do mahine mein lag jaega, main ne application kar diya hai, abhi paas ke dukaan mein phone karke ghar bataane ko kahunga.”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Hum ne bhi apply kiya hua hai, papa Saudi Arabia se uss filling station wale ke yahan phone karta hai to humko weh log bulaate hein tab hum jaate hein papa se baat karne ke liye, chaliye aap uss dukaan se phone kar sakte ho jahan aap cigarette kharidne jaate ho……. Maa main Abhi ko phone karane lejaa rahi hoon!”

Aur Ruhi aur Abhi ghar se nikle, main road ke taraf jaate hue dikhe uss aangan mein jahan Abhi ne sapna dekha tha ke wo Ruhi ke saath wahan weise hi chalega kabhi. Andhera tha, street light to main road par tha uss aagan mein to nahin, to Ruhi ne chalte hue khud Abhi ke baazu ko pakra hua tha, wo Abhi ke right hand side mein thi to usske right arm ko apne donon haathon se thaame hue thi.

Abhi ko kitna achcha feel ho raha tha, usska dil machal raha tha wo itna khush tha ke ussko zoron se chilla kar apni Khushi ko izhaar karne ka mann kar raha tha uss waqt. Wo uss pal ko jee bhar ke jina chahta tha, Ruhi ko thaamna chahta tha magar Ruhi ne usske baazu pakre hue the aur wo ussko disturb nahin karna chahta tha.

Aur Abhi ne araam se aur dhimi awaaz mein jhuk kar Ruhi ne gardan ke paas apne munh ko laakar kaha,

“kitna romantic lag rahe honge hum donon iss waqt aise chalte hue, kaash koyi hum donon ki film utaarta aise, ya Manoj hamara ek photo leta iss position mein!”

Ruhi ne thoda sa darr dikhaate hue kaha,

“uff wo ata hi hoga Shweta ke saath, hum ussko cross kar sakte hein raaste par….”

Aur Ruhi ne turant Abhi ke baazu ko chorr diya.

Tab Abhi ne Ruhi ke kaandhe par hath rakh kar ussko khud se sataya, to Ruhi ne kaha,

“ofo chorro nah main road agaya, yahan kitne log honge, dekho dukaan wahan hai jahan se phone karna hai…”

Ruhi ne phir filling station ko dikhaate hue kaha,

“aur wo hai filling station, usska maalik piche rehta hai, wahin papa phone karta hai humko!”

{main ne sketch mein uss filling station ko lagana bhool gaya. Wo station main road par nikalte hi thik opposite mein hai Ruhi ke ghar se wo filling station dikhta hai, agar Ruhi apne kitchen ke chaukath par khadi hoti hai to seedha filling station ki maalik ka ghar, aur aadha filling station saamne dikhta hai main road ke uss paar --- yeh iss liye bata raha hoon kyunke uss filling station ke baare mein baad mein kuch part aane wala hai}

To Abhi aur Ruhi uss dukaan tak gaye, kuch log pee kar ladkhadaate hue dukan se nikal rahe the, kuch log pee rahe the kone mein, Ruhi Abhi ke piche hokar jaise usske piche chhup rahi thi wo sab dekhte hue.

Abhi ne phone kiya apne mohalle ki dukaan par aur by chance uss waqt usske pita wahin tha uss dukaan mein, wo bhi daru hi pine gaya hua tha udhar, to dukaandar ne Abhi se kaha ke usska pita wahin hai uss waqt to ussi ko phone diya baat karne ko.

Abhi ne apne pita se keh diya ke aaj wo ghar nahin araha kal sham ko aayega. Baap ne sawaal kiya ke kahan rehega kiss ke ghar, to Abhi ne kaha jisska bus bana raha hai ussi ke ghar par rukega aaj ki raat.

Phir Abhi ne Ruhi ke liye chocolates kharida, aur kuch snacks aur pucha ke Shweta kia passand karti hai, to Ruhi ne Abhi ko unn chizon ko dikhaya jo Shweta ko passand hai aur Abhi ne ek plastic bag bhar ke cakes aur sweets liya sabke liye, Ruhi aur usski maa ke liye ice creams bhi liye Abhi ne, aur apne liye cigarettes chhupa kar liya bina Ruhi ko dikhaaye.

Wapas aate hue Ruhi ne abhi se kaha,

“kitna kharch karte ho aap, itna kuch kharidne ki kia zaroorat thi, Rs.250 ke cakes hmmm?!”

Abhi ne buss Ruhi ko jakar liya aur us aangan mein donon ne ek dusre ke kamar mein haath daale hue chal kar ghar aaye….. Aur jab bus tak pahunche jahan Abhi har roz kaam karta tha to Ruhi ne kaha,

“rukiye nah ek baat bataati hoon aap ko….”

Abhi ruk gaya bus ke paas, to Ruhi ne Abhi ka haath khinch kar uss bade darkhat ke paas gayi aur Abhi ke gale mein apne bahon ko lapet kar kaha,

“Har shaam ko jab aap chale jaate ho nah to main yahan aakar aap ko yaad karti hoon, din bhar jo kuch aap ne kiya, kahan kahan kaam kiya sab unn jagahon par jaakar dekhti hoon ke Abhi aaj yahan kaam kar raha tha, yeh kar raha tha wo kar raha tha yahan se mujhko dekh raha tha…..”

Abhi ne Ruhi ko zor se baahon mein bhadte hue kaha,

“Ruhi tum bhi mere jaise feelings rakhti ho, are main ne tumko letter mein yeh sab kaha hai nah? Main bhi har subha ata hoon to tumko har uss jagah par feel karta hoon jahan jahan tum mujhe dikhti ho, yaar yeh hum donon ek jaise hein yaar!!”

Aur donon ne ek dusre ko uss darkhat ke niche kiss kiya. Ek lamba aur passionate kiss. Ruhi ko jaise Abhi ko chorrne ka mann hi nahin tha.

Abhi behad khush tha, yeh ussko sab ek sapna jaisa lagne laga tha. Ussko yakeen nahin ho raha tha ke yeh sab sach mein ho raha hai. Haan ussne yeh sab khayaalon mein kayi baar socha tha magar sab hakikat mein badal jaega yeh ussne bilkool nahin socha tha. Tha to wo bilkool positive, hamesha bhala hi sochta tha, aur umeed karta tha ke jo soch raha hai wo sach aur sahi ho jaaye magar weisa sach mein hoga wo nahin sochta tha. Aur aaj jo ho raha tha usske saath wo buss ek dream come true tha.

To be continued…… (2307 words)

Ohhh aakhir uss dard bhare update vke baad ek to khushi ki update aayi. Dil ko chain mili ab. Magar ye khushi kan tak barkarar rehta hai ye dekhna padega kyunke title k hisaab se to jud hona hai nah? Chalo filhaal abhi ke update je bare mein baat karte hein.
Bahut bahut hi khubsurat aur pyar bhara update hai ye.
Kaise Ruhi ki maa maan gayi k Abhi uss raat ko usske ghar par thehre? Kia donon ko rote dekh kar maa bhavuk ho gayi? Taras aa gayi ussko donon par? Ya koyi planning chal rahi hai maa ki dimaag mein?
Abhi Ruhi donon ek saath kitne ache lagte hein, Ruhi kitna pyar karti hai Abhi se ye ussne iss update mein saabit kiya.
Donon ek saath baahar bhi gaye, kitna romantic moment tha donon ke liye khaas kar jab bus ke paas donon ne kiss kiye.
Bahut acha laga ye update casi ji. Aise hi kuch aur khushi ke updates aate rahe to baat ban jaaye.
:applause: :applause: :applause:
 

Casinar

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Casi sir ji plz ek request in dono premiyo ko alag mat kijiyega aur last kuch updates bahot hi emotional the... Plz plz plz readers pe raham khake in dono abhi & ruhi ki shaadi kara dijiyega plz :pray:
1. Agar waisa kiya to kahani ko END kar dun aur jhoot story bana dun?
2. Waisa kiya to Title jhooti ho jaegi.
3.kahani wohi hona chahiye nah jo MAIN likh raha hoon ya jo readers chaahe?
4. Main APNE hisaab se likhta hoon nah?
5. Rahi baat donon ki milan ki to kahani ko end tak to padho Naina ji bich mein climax kyun chahti ho?
6. Abhi climax dala to kahani khatam.
 

Rahul

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hahaha Rahul jab updates nahin padha to kehde nah yaar!
tumhare iss reply se pata chal gaya ke last update to padha hi nahin kyunke ussko padhta to tu chahukta aur puchta ke agar Ruhi Virgin nahin to kaun si badi baat hai ya virgin nahin to kahin aur shadi kaise tey hui!!
yaar nahin padho to aise hi reply mat kiya kao nah
hum aisi baat nahi bhai ji mai update padh raha tha aur jab update mere hisaab se nahi hota to mai bahut hi tez padhta usko aur tammam baten ingnor kar jata hun fir bhi mujhe lagta aage jakar sahi ho jayega sab ishiliye reply deta hun
 

Rahul

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last update padh liya hai ruhi se bahut kuch janna chahta tha abhi par nahi jaan paya mujhe aisa laga update me fir bhi jo hua use ingnor karke abhi zindgi me aage badhne ko taiyaar hai bas use ruhi ka sath imandaari se chahiye:applause:
 
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Chinturocky

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1. Agar waisa kiya to kahani ko END kar dun aur jhoot story bana dun?
2. Waisa kiya to Title jhooti ho jaegi.
3.kahani wohi hona chahiye nah jo MAIN likh raha hoon ya jo readers chaahe?
4. Main APNE hisaab se likhta hoon nah?
5. Rahi baat donon ki milan ki to kahani ko end tak to padho Naina ji bich mein climax kyun chahti ho?
6. Abhi climax dala to kahani khatam.

Lekhak sahab jo likhana hai likho per hame bhi to likhane do.
Pathak wo chahta/chahti hai jo use Achchha lagata hai.
Lekhak wo likhata hai jo kahani ke liye Achchha hota hai.
 
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