Update 1
Ye kahani ak bary shehr me rehny vali ak choti si family ki ha.
Mr. Akram Choudary family head hain. Jo ak school teacher hain.
Unki wife tania choudary housewife ha.
Unki beti neeta choudary jo university me parhti ha 24 sal ki ha.
Aur unka beta Daniel choudary (Dani) hamara hero. 17 sal ka ha aur college me parhta ha.
Akram ka ak chota bhai ha Aslam choudary.
Uski wife Jiya choudary aur uss k 2 bety hain aman aur ashar
Unki beti priya choudary jo neeta sy 2 saal choti ha.
Yani 22 sal ki ha aur ur university me parhti ha..
Ye sb ak choty sy 2 floor k ghr me rehty hain.
Ground floor k Ak kamry me akram aur tania.
Dusry kmry me dani aur teesry kmry me neeta rehti ha. Dani ka kamra guest room bhi ha. Agr koi guest aay tou dani hall me so jata ha.
1st floor per
Ak room me aslam aur jiya
Dusry room me aman aur ashar
Teesry kmry me priya rehti ha
Ak guest room ha.
Kitchen alag alag hain lakin zyada time khana ak sath he bnta ha.
Sb log bht payar sy rehty hain.
Ab aaty hain hero k introduction per.
Hmara hero Daniel jisko pyar sy "Dani" bolty hain aur iss kahani me bhi "Dani" he likha jaey ga.
Ak bht he bigda hua larka ha. Hr din college sy uski complaint aati ha.
Study ko chor kr koi bhi kaam krva lo dani shok sy kry ga.
Dani college k badnam tareen larkun me aata ha.
Maar Peet krna, larai jhagda krna dani ka roz ka kam ha.
Dani bht shok sy gym jata ha aur usko body bnany ka shok ha. Karate classes leta ha. Aur uss ki practice krny k liye kisi na kisi sy larta bhi rehta ha.
Ak cheez jo dani me thek ha vo ye k dani ortun ki izzat krta ha. Aur kabhi kisi ko nahi chedta.
Dani porn addict bhi ha.
Larai jhagdy sy time mil jaey tou porn dekhta rehta ha.
Ab aaty hain kahani ki taraf.
Ak choty shehr me kisi jagah.
Admi. Saaly teri okaat he yhi ha. Tu ha he gandi nali ka keera. Saly madarchod.
Dusra admi. Dekho seth maa ki gali mat do.
Admi. Dun ga maa ki gaali. Behn ki gaali bhi dun ga jo kr skta ha kr ly. Sala madarchod
Dusra admi. Seth bola na meri hatt jaey gi tou lafda ho jaey ga.
Seth. Bakwas bnd kr randi ki olad.
Dusra admi. Bss seth bht ho gya ab meri maa k bary me ak lafaz nahi (Uss ny pas para rod uthaya aur seth ki tang me dy mara. Seth ki taang ki haddi toot gyi.)
Seth. Aaahhhh mar dala ryyy. Pakro isko maro jany mat dena isko.
Pas khry mazdur dekhty rhy lakin kisi ny usko nahi pakra.
Phr ak budha mazdur uss k pas aaya aur bola
Beta tum jao. Isko hm dekh lain gy. Aur shehr me vapas kabhi mat aana.
Vo admi pichy dekhta hua vahan sy chla gya
Budha mazdur. Seth ko uthao aur hospital ly kr jao.
Dani ka ghr.
Sunday ka din tha. Papa ki awaz sy Dani ki neend khuli.
Dani uth kr beth gya. Papa bht ooncha bol rhy thy.
Akram(papa). Nawabzada abhi tk soya hua ha. Itna khyal nahi k sunday ha ghr ka koi kam he krva dy. Bss khana aur sona ha.
Tania(maa). Ap aisy he gussa ho rhy hain. Bacha ha. Samajh jaey ga.
Akram. Kab samjhy ga. Jb hm marr jaen gy. Zinda tou iss ny hmain koi khushi deni nahi.
Dani kamry sy bahar aaya.
Dani. Good morning.
Akram. Uth gaey nawab sahab. Kabhi time sy uth jaya kro
Tania. Chorain na kyu subha uthty he bachy ko daant rhy hain.
Akram. Tum ny he sar per chrha kr rakha ha isko.
Aslam. Kya ho gya bhai sab kyu itna chilla rhy hain.
Akram. Aslam dekh na yar kal phr verma k larky ko mara iss ny.
Vikram. Dani tujhe kitni bar samjhaya ha. Larai jhagda na kia kr.
Me. Chacha agr vo galat baat kry ga tou me chup thori bethun ga.
Aslam. Aisa bhi kya keh dia tha uss ny.
Me. Vo papa ko ganja bol raha tha.
Akram. Haan hun me ganja. Iss me usko marny ki kya zrurat thi.
Dani. Apko koi kch boly tou muje bardasht nahi ha.
Akram. Beta tu rehny dy. Koi mujhe ganja bol dy tou tu usko mar dy ga kya.
Dubara aisi koi harkat ki tou mujh sy bura koi nahi ho ga.
Dani khamoshi sy papa ki daant sunta rha aur phr nashta kr k gym chla gya.
Akram. Dekh lo isko. Parhai nahi krni iss ny bss baki kch bhi krva lo. Body builder bny ga.
Aslam. Bhai sahab ajkal k bachun ko shok hota ha in chezun ka. Abhi na samajh ha. Samajh jaey ga waqt k sath.
Akram. Aslam tu har chez me iski support na kia kr.
Aslam. Bhai sab me ny kch galat tou nahi kaha.
Akram. Tum sb log ak jesy ho. Aur gussy me bahar nikal gya.
Gym me.
Ravi. Dani exams bhi aany valy hain. Tayari kesy karni ha.
Dani. Pta nahi yar mujhe tou bilkul bhi parhny ka mann nahi krta.
Ravi. Yar mann tou mera bhi nahi krta. Lakin exams tou deny hain.
Dani. Mery papa tou pehly he mujh per gussa hain aur agr achy marks na aay tou papa mujhe bht marain gy.
Ravi. Abby marny sy yad aaya khan sir ki karate class bhi ha aj. Agr late ho gaey tou khan sir bht marain gy.
Dani. Arry haan. Chal jaldi chal.
Donu bhagy aur karate center pohnchy.
Khan sir. Tum donu late kyu ho.
Ravi. Sir kch....
Khan sir. Shut up. Donu ground me jao aur 10 rounds lagao. Hurry up.
Ravi. Yes sir.
Dani aur Ravi donu bhagty huey ground me pohnchy aur ground k chakar lagana shru kr diye.
10 rounds pury krny k bd donu vapas aay.
Khan sir. Aj k bd agr late huey punching bag me bnd kr k itna maarun ga k kabhi karate seekhny k kabil nahi raho gy.
Ye tumhari college ki class nahi ha k jb dil kia muh utha kr chly aaey. Understand.
Dani. Yes sir.
Khan sir. Now go and practice your kicks.
Ravi aur dani donu ak dusry ko dekh kr hanse aur kicks ki practice krny lagy.
Kyu k donu janty thy k ye daant tou unhain milni he thi.
Karate class sy free ho kr dani ghr vapas aaya.
Akram. Dani yahan aa.
Dani. G papa
Akram. Kahan sy aa rha ha.
Dani. Gym sy.
Akram. Kabhi ye bhi bol dia kr k parhai kr k aa rha hun. Nalayak.
Dani sar jhuka kr khra tha.
Akram. Chal ja parhai kr. Tery exams bhi sar per hain.
Dani khamoshi sy apny kmry me chla gya.
Dani k papa ny exams tk uska ghr sy niklna bnd kr dia.
Aur dani k exams aa gaey.
Dani ny exams diye aur uss k bd dubara apni routine start kr li.
Gym aur karate.
Dani ko parhai sy zyada gym aur karate me interest tha.
Dani zyada time gym aur karate center me he guzarta tha.
Ak din Dani gym kr rha tha k. Uss ka fone baja.
Ye uss k chacha aslam k bety ashar ki call thi..
Ashar. Dani kahan ha tu?
Dani. Me gym me hun.
Ashar. Jaldi hospital aa tery papa ka. Accident ho gya ha.
Ravi k pas bike tha. Dani aur ravi jaldi sy hospital pohnchy tou hospital me sb ro rhy.
Dani. Aslam k pas gya.
Dani. Chacha kya hua papa ko. Koi kch bol kyu nahi rha.
Ashar tu tou kch bol kya hua ha.
Maa kaha ha neeta kahan ha.
Chachi koi kch bta kyu nahi raha ha mujhe.
Jiya (Chachi). Dani tu hmara bahadur beta ha na. Tu apny ap ko sambhal.
Dani. Chachi kya hua ha.
Maa kahan ha papa kahan hain neeta kahan ha.
Jiya. Dani sb chly gaey. Sab hmain chor kr chly gaey.
Dani ko apny kaanu per yakeen nahi aa rha tha
Dani jiya chachi sy lipat gya aur cheenkhain mar mar kr roany laga.
Sb log dani ko sambhalny lagy.
Dani anaat ho gya tha. Dani k maa papa aur behn usko chor kr ja chuky thy.
Dani jo apny maa baap k liye hero tha ab zero ho chuka tha..
Lakin ye tou shuruat thi.
Dani ko abhi waqt bht kch dikhany aur bht kch sikhany vala tha.
Dani ak aisi dunya dekhny vala tha jo uss ny aj sy pehly kabhi sochi bhi nahi thi.
Dani k sath vo sb hony vala tha jo uss ny sapny me bhi nahi socha tha.
Dani ko zalim dunya ka asal chehra nazar aany vala tha.
Yahan sy shru hoti ha kahani dani k zero sy hero ban ne ki.
Lakin aj tou dani zero he ha.
Aur vo hero kb aur kesy bny ga ye vo bhi nahi janta.
Abhi tou vo ak zero tha
Ak bara sa ZERO........
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