Incest Wo ALBELA SA

[soank]

Hello My all dearest mitro.....
ek samay tha. jab mai XP se anjan tha. before covid tak xossip se bhi ajnan tha.. xossip band hui to xforum wajud mein aaya.. yahan old xossip aur new stories ki bharmar dekh main achambit rah gaya tha.. itni zayada woh bhi kamal kamal ki stories dekh main surprised rah gaya tha.
bohut khush bhi hua tha.. kuch hi samay mein kuch bekar se stories ko chhod baki sari ki sari read kar daali..
yahin ek aur anhoni hui... xforum mere liye, milne wale sabhi platforum se unique platforum sabit hua.. every genre mein likhi stories isse pahle mujhe kabhi dekhne tak ko nahi mili thi. padhne ki baat to alag thi.
bass fir kyaa tha. padhte padhte awen hi achanak se mann bana aur main likhne ki soch gaya. likhari banne ka koi talent nahi tha mere andr.. fir bhi ichha badhi aur likhta chala gaya.
anyway.. baat kahin ki kahin nikal gai.. is post ko likhe ke maksad ko bayan kar daalun.
jab maine likhna start kia to stories padhni band kar di. tab jab mai jo jo stories read kar raha tha.. werewolf ki story top story thi.. 55 ke bad ki koi bhi update regular nahi padh saka..
fir sandeep bhai ki raj hero of the family padhne laga.. woh bhi puri nahi padh saka..
ek to samay ki kami dusre likhne ka junoon..
kahani padh nahi paya..
lekin.....
lekin.....
lekin.....
hementstar ki stroy woh to hai albela ke speed se badhte views, aur comments padh mere andr curiosity ne janam lia.. aur aisa mujhe pareshan kia.. main [woh to hai albela] read karne laga..
aur kyaa hi kahun.....
mere pass shabd hi nahi han.. jo main kuch likh paun... nahi likh sakta. is story ka plot aisa plot laga mujhe.. aisa laga, aaj tak aisi koi story likhi hi nahi gai. jaise andaz mein likhi gai.. padhte hue khud ki story likhni bhul jaya karta tha..
fir samay guzra... aur meri tarah, dusre kai writers ki tarah ye wali story bhi adhuri rah gai... writer meri tarah bhagoda nikla.. aur readers ke emotions ke sath khel kar nikal gaya..
main bhi aisa kai bar kar chuka hon.. i am too bad person like others..
itna samay guzr jaane ke bad bhi log is kahani ko, kahani ke ek ek kirdar ko bhul nahi sake han.. ye iklote aisi kahani ban gai hai.. jise koi bhi writer, kaise bhi likh kar puri kar daale..
readers ko sweekar hoga.. bass readers kahani ka end chahte han.. sare screts reveel chahte han..
sandhya kyun is hadh tak gir gai. jaanna chahte han. raman itna ghatya kyun han.. jaane bina chain nahi milega kisi ko..
abhay kya karega.. apni maa ko maa karega.. kab karega.. karega bhi ke nahi..
ye sabb jaanne ke liye to mai bhi bada bechain raha hon..
jaise jaise kahani aage badhti chali ja rahi thi.. sandhya ka kirdar shuru se hi meri nazaron mein bura nahi tha.. ek shatir person seedhe saadhe logo ki buddhi apne vash mein kar hi lia karta hai.

sandhya ko abhay se bohut pyar tha.. hai aur hamseha rahega.. akhir uska iklota beta jo tha.. kaise usse badhkar kisi aur ko chah sakti thi. kaise uski nazron mein gir sakti thi..
story padhte padhte bohut kuch maine imagine kar lia tha.. andaze laga liye the. raman kyun sandhya aur abhay ke sath aisa kar raha hai.. hawasi to raman ha hi.. lekin aur bhi bohut kch ha woh.. kya hai.. ye bhi maine apne hisab se soch lia tha..
puri ki puri kahani saala meri dimag ne create kar dali thi.
ab yahan kuch writers famous unfamous [woh to ha albela] ko likhna chah rahe han. aur ek to koshis kar bhi daali. aur mai yahan readers ke emotions dekh surprised rah gaya..
aisi koi story shayad hi is forum par kabhi likhi jaaye..
last year mera khud ka kai baar mind bana. is kahani ko mai pura karun..
[lekin XP ke payare readers ke EMOTIONS ki KASAM......]
main himmat nahi kar paya.. khud ke kai thread start karke pending chhod gaya.
is kahani ko shuru karke kisi ke emotions ke sath khelne ki gustakhi nahi kar saka..
warna jahan itni saari stories likh kar adhuri chhod gaya tha.. wahan ek ye bhi rah jati to ghanta kisi ko fark padne wala tha..
lekin.....
lekin.....
lekin.....
is kahani ke sath jude emotions ke chalte readers ke dilon par ghavo ko badhana bohut galat hai..
main to yahi kahunga.. ise koi start na kare.. kare to woh kare.. jo ise har surat puri kar sake..
warna.....
warna.....
warna......
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
kaash main ise puri kar sakta.....
[no more words to write]
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Hlw mere bhai ...bilkul esii hii comments me chahta thaaa.....ager aap jisi reader ho to writer ko story likhne me maja aataa hai ....

Lekin jub me iss story ko likh rhaa thaa..to maximum audience story pedhne ke bad buss comments kerte thee....NEXT UPDATE...yaaa phir story ko apne hisab se chalane ke kosis kerte thee....

Iss story ke short script abhi bhi mere paas hai ....lakin likhne ka mun nhi kerta....Bhai me buss appreciation ka bhukha hu...ager mujhe sub applicate kerte ....aur ager nhi bhi kerte ..to buss story ke bare me apne thoughts Shere kerte comment me to me kbhi story bund nhi kerta....

Mujhe buss un logo se nafrat hai jo story pedhne ke baad comment kerte hai NEXT UPDATE .....I hate these type of peoples....

Ager mere bhai log unn logo ko comments me counter kerte hote to ye story kbhi bund nhi hotee...lakin jinhe story pasand bhi aate wo kbhi mera support nhi kyaa comment section me ....me story bhi likhun aur logo ke galyaan bhi khauu....itna bhi begerat nhi mu mee....

 

[asadjee]

Hlw mere bhai ...bilkul yhee comments me chahta thaaa......kya mujhe is story ko restart kerna chayee....?

 

[soank]

Haaaaa bilkul

 

[Bosskhatri]

Kahani koi bhi pura kre ye nhi ki 20 like 30 like chahiya ....
Or plot bhi change ho jae ...
Khani hm padhe ge or coment bhi krenge bs home khani ka moto or base pasand aana chahiye...

 

[MAD DEVIL]

Hello My all dearest mitro.....
ek samay tha. jab mai XP se anjan tha. before covid tak xossip se bhi ajnan tha.. xossip band hui to xforum wajud mein aaya.. yahan old xossip aur new stories ki bharmar dekh main achambit rah gaya tha.. itni zayada woh bhi kamal kamal ki stories dekh main surprised rah gaya tha.
bohut khush bhi hua tha.. kuch hi samay mein kuch bekar se stories ko chhod baki sari ki sari read kar daali..
yahin ek aur anhoni hui... xforum mere liye, milne wale sabhi platforum se unique platforum sabit hua.. every genre mein likhi stories isse pahle mujhe kabhi dekhne tak ko nahi mili thi. padhne ki baat to alag thi.
bass fir kyaa tha. padhte padhte awen hi achanak se mann bana aur main likhne ki soch gaya. likhari banne ka koi talent nahi tha mere andr.. fir bhi ichha badhi aur likhta chala gaya.
anyway.. baat kahin ki kahin nikal gai.. is post ko likhe ke maksad ko bayan kar daalun.
jab maine likhna start kia to stories padhni band kar di. tab jab mai jo jo stories read kar raha tha.. werewolf ki story top story thi.. 55 ke bad ki koi bhi update regular nahi padh saka..
fir sandeep bhai ki raj hero of the family padhne laga.. woh bhi puri nahi padh saka..
ek to samay ki kami dusre likhne ka junoon..
kahani padh nahi paya..
lekin.....
lekin.....
lekin.....
hementstar ki stroy woh to hai albela ke speed se badhte views, aur comments padh mere andr curiosity ne janam lia.. aur aisa mujhe pareshan kia.. main [woh to hai albela] read karne laga..
aur kyaa hi kahun.....
mere pass shabd hi nahi han.. jo main kuch likh paun... nahi likh sakta. is story ka plot aisa plot laga mujhe.. aisa laga, aaj tak aisi koi story likhi hi nahi gai. jaise andaz mein likhi gai.. padhte hue khud ki story likhni bhul jaya karta tha..
fir samay guzra... aur meri tarah, dusre kai writers ki tarah ye wali story bhi adhuri rah gai... writer meri tarah bhagoda nikla.. aur readers ke emotions ke sath khel kar nikal gaya..
main bhi aisa kai bar kar chuka hon.. i am too bad person like others..
itna samay guzr jaane ke bad bhi log is kahani ko, kahani ke ek ek kirdar ko bhul nahi sake han.. ye iklote aisi kahani ban gai hai.. jise koi bhi writer, kaise bhi likh kar puri kar daale..
readers ko sweekar hoga.. bass readers kahani ka end chahte han.. sare screts reveel chahte han..
sandhya kyun is hadh tak gir gai. jaanna chahte han. raman itna ghatya kyun han.. jaane bina chain nahi milega kisi ko..
abhay kya karega.. apni maa ko maa karega.. kab karega.. karega bhi ke nahi..
ye sabb jaanne ke liye to mai bhi bada bechain raha hon..
jaise jaise kahani aage badhti chali ja rahi thi.. sandhya ka kirdar shuru se hi meri nazaron mein bura nahi tha.. ek shatir person seedhe saadhe logo ki buddhi apne vash mein kar hi lia karta hai.

sandhya ko abhay se bohut pyar tha.. hai aur hamseha rahega.. akhir uska iklota beta jo tha.. kaise usse badhkar kisi aur ko chah sakti thi. kaise uski nazron mein gir sakti thi..
story padhte padhte bohut kuch maine imagine kar lia tha.. andaze laga liye the. raman kyun sandhya aur abhay ke sath aisa kar raha hai.. hawasi to raman ha hi.. lekin aur bhi bohut kch ha woh.. kya hai.. ye bhi maine apne hisab se soch lia tha..
puri ki puri kahani saala meri dimag ne create kar dali thi.
ab yahan kuch writers famous unfamous [woh to ha albela] ko likhna chah rahe han. aur ek to koshis kar bhi daali. aur mai yahan readers ke emotions dekh surprised rah gaya..
aisi koi story shayad hi is forum par kabhi likhi jaaye..
last year mera khud ka kai baar mind bana. is kahani ko mai pura karun..
[lekin XP ke payare readers ke EMOTIONS ki KASAM......]
main himmat nahi kar paya.. khud ke kai thread start karke pending chhod gaya.
is kahani ko shuru karke kisi ke emotions ke sath khelne ki gustakhi nahi kar saka..
warna jahan itni saari stories likh kar adhuri chhod gaya tha.. wahan ek ye bhi rah jati to ghanta kisi ko fark padne wala tha..
lekin.....
lekin.....
lekin.....
is kahani ke sath jude emotions ke chalte readers ke dilon par ghavo ko badhana bohut galat hai..
main to yahi kahunga.. ise koi start na kare.. kare to woh kare.. jo ise har surat puri kar sake..
warna.....
warna.....
warna......
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
kaash main ise puri kar sakta.....
[no more words to write]
​

Wah ji wah batte to bhot badiya boli hai bhai aapne
Pehle ye to bta ki itne din tha kaha bhai
Or
Aaya to itna bada ESSAY leke ky bat hai
Ab bhai tu bta Teri ichha ky hai

 

[asadjee]

Wah ji wah batte to bhot badiya boli hai bhai aapne

baaten to bohut si han mere pass karne ko beloved brother

Pehle ye to bta ki itne din tha kaha bhai

sab ke jaise busy life related bhag daud mein vyast tha. wese 1 month hone ko aya ha. Xp par laut aaaya hon. aur apni ek story ko resume kar chuka hon............. manhoos ya masum

Or
Aaya to itna bada ESSAY leke ky bat hai

essay isliye likha. thread lovers aaj tak ise bhul nahi sake han. aur ye story hai, jo meri life me read kari hazaron stories mein top 5 ki list mein aati han.

Ab bhai tu bta Teri ichha ky hai

kahani jab mene read karni shru ki thi. tabhi kahani ke mukhe kirdaron ki all story with all rahasy mere mind mein khud se create ho gai thi. khud se hi situation bani aur saare rahasay auto solve hote gaye. agar aage chal kar kahani aur bhi kitni zayada romanchak ho jaayegi. aisa mujhe andaza ho gaya tha. aage chal kar abhi aur sandhya raman aur lalita aman ke sath woh kuch hone wala tha mere hisab se.. jo is kahani ke padhne walun ko jhatke jhatke to deta hi.. curisity adhiktar badh jaati... har guzarte lamhe kahani mast se mast hoti chali jaati..
lekin mere hisab se hementstar priy writer ne thodi si sandhya aur raman relation kaise bana, ki detail na de kar pathakon ke sath bada galat kia.
thodi si detail aur fir kahani mein maza badh jaata.
kahani ke adhura chhode jaane se pahle hi mera khud ka mind banne laga tha. mai aise hi plot par koi kahani likhun.
lekin nahi likh saka. fir stroy band ho gai.
tab main bechain ho utha.. dil chahne laga. main likhun. lekin meri khud ki kai stories pending list ki zeenat bani.. aur mere khud ke aise emotions ban chuke han is thread ke sath. dusron ke emotions ke chalte main khud ko sambhal gaya. is kahani ko start karne aur fir adhuri chhod dena.. nahi main ye nahi kar sakta tha. isliye chah kar bhi ise likh nahi paya. apni kitni hi stories ko adhura chhod kai ke dil aur emotions ke sath khela maine. parr...parr....parr... is kahani ke sath jude priy pathakon ke emotions ki koi seema nahi hai..
dil to ab bhi ha.. aur sabhi rahasay solved han mere mind mein.. but himmat nahi ho rahi ha likhne ki ...

 

[asadjee]

Kahani koi bhi pura kre ye nhi ki 20 like 30 like chahiya ....

ye kahani aisi hai mere bhai.. likes comments ki barish barasne wali ha

Or plot bhi change ho jae ...

thoda sa change zarori ho jaya karta hai.. par, plot ke sath insaf karna asaan baat nahi hai

Khani hm padhe ge or coment bhi krenge bs home khani ka moto or base pasand aana chahiye...

meri likhi to aap ko kyaa sabhi ko pasand aayegi.. but purani adat ke chalte darr raha hon.. pending?.. pending?.. pending?...

 

[asadjee]

Hlw mere bhai ...bilkul esii hii comments me chahta thaaa.....ager aap jisi reader ho to writer ko story likhne me maja aataa hai ....

Lekin jub me iss story ko likh rhaa thaa..to maximum audience story pedhne ke bad buss comments kerte thee....NEXT UPDATE...yaaa phir story ko apne hisab se chalane ke kosis kerte thee....

Iss story ke short script abhi bhi mere paas hai ....lakin likhne ka mun nhi kerta....Bhai me buss appreciation ka bhukha hu...ager mujhe sub applicate kerte ....aur ager nhi bhi kerte ..to buss story ke bare me apne thoughts Shere kerte comment me to me kbhi story bund nhi kerta....

Mujhe buss un logo se nafrat hai jo story pedhne ke baad comment kerte hai NEXT UPDATE .....I hate these type of peoples....

Ager mere bhai log unn logo ko comments me counter kerte hote to ye story kbhi bund nhi hotee...lakin jinhe story pasand bhi aate wo kbhi mera support nhi kyaa comment section me ....me story bhi likhun aur logo ke galyaan bhi khauu....itna bhi begerat nhi mu mee....

ye to aam samjh mein aane wali baat hai mere bhai.... jahan hum rahte han, wahan bhi sab hamare apne nahi hote.. har zubaan par alag baat hoti hai. har dil mein alag prakar ki bhavanaen aur har buddhi mein alag vichar..
kahte han [kamal ka banda] wahi hota hai.. jo logo ko dil aur diamg mein apne liye purity ko bhar de. jo acha bolna likhna nahi chahta/janta.. woh bhi majbur ho jaaye. aur sach kaha jaaye to har hath acha acha hi likhna chahta hai. par har hath wala ek samman nahi hota.. jo dil mein ho, dimag mein aaye, fir hath se likhte samay dil aur dimag se daghabazi uchit nahi hogi..
mann tabhi halka hota hai, jab apne mann ki bat kahi jaaye. vicharon ko badalte wala hi dilon ko jeetne wala hi asli bazigar hota hai.. yahan thread [woh to ha albela]
ke sath wpiy readers k emotions hi aur han mere bhai.. sahi galat comments to hementstat ke thread par bhi anek the.

 

[Smith_15]

Please continue this story and complete it.

 

[MAD DEVIL]

baaten to bohut si han mere pass karne ko beloved brother

sab ke jaise busy life related bhag daud mein vyast tha. wese 1 month hone ko aya ha. Xp par laut aaaya hon. aur apni ek story ko resume kar chuka hon............. manhoos ya masum

essay isliye likha. thread lovers aaj tak ise bhul nahi sake han. aur ye story hai, jo meri life me read kari hazaron stories mein top 5 ki list mein aati han.

kahani jab mene read karni shru ki thi. tabhi kahani ke mukhe kirdaron ki all story with all rahasy mere mind mein khud se create ho gai thi. khud se hi situation bani aur saare rahasay auto solve hote gaye. agar aage chal kar kahani aur bhi kitni zayada romanchak ho jaayegi. aisa mujhe andaza ho gaya tha. aage chal kar abhi aur sandhya raman aur lalita aman ke sath woh kuch hone wala tha mere hisab se.. jo is kahani ke padhne walun ko jhatke jhatke to deta hi.. curisity adhiktar badh jaati... har guzarte lamhe kahani mast se mast hoti chali jaati..
lekin mere hisab se hementstar priy writer ne thodi si sandhya aur raman relation kaise bana, ki detail na de kar pathakon ke sath bada galat kia.
thodi si detail aur fir kahani mein maza badh jaata.
kahani ke adhura chhode jaane se pahle hi mera khud ka mind banne laga tha. mai aise hi plot par koi kahani likhun.
lekin nahi likh saka. fir stroy band ho gai.
tab main bechain ho utha.. dil chahne laga. main likhun. lekin meri khud ki kai stories pending list ki zeenat bani.. aur mere khud ke aise emotions ban chuke han is thread ke sath. dusron ke emotions ke chalte main khud ko sambhal gaya. is kahani ko start karne aur fir adhuri chhod dena.. nahi main ye nahi kar sakta tha. isliye chah kar bhi ise likh nahi paya. apni kitni hi stories ko adhura chhod kai ke dil aur emotions ke sath khela maine. parr...parr....parr... is kahani ke sath jude priy pathakon ke emotions ki koi seema nahi hai..
dil to ab bhi ha.. aur sabhi rahasay solved han mere mind mein.. but himmat nahi ho rahi ha likhne ki ...

Badiya hai chlo koi bat nhi
Jld he teri icha poori hone wali hai
Koi hai jo is story ko fir se start kr rha hai
Usne apni running story me ABHAY ki entry ki hai single update me Action ke sath umeed hai jis trh action show Kia us hisaab se story bhi shyd achi present kre