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Thriller WLHTA - The Serpent Of Underworld.

Ahsan Ali

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Bhai Log mai tu Part 3 read kr raha hon again mery khyal mai Part three Merchant of Death hi master piece hai jo 28-30 month mai boht kuch intresting raha readers k liye, training bhi thi, MOD bhi or serpant role bhi. abhi 18 months sy AP india mai hi phansa hoa hai or jesy story ki uthan n speed hai mazeed saal india mai hi samjho. baqi koi plot change ho jaye tu alag baat. behrhal writer ki apni life hoti apni masrofyat, family life, study, job k issues phir wo hamara paid empolee nai hota tu jo kuch writer day raha saber shuker k sath guzara krna chaye or old stories revise krty rahien
 
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So filhaal chal ye raha tha ki Dino or Mick milaawati drug bech rahe they Haryana mein jiske side effects ki wajah se saikdon log hospital pohanch chuke they or ye silsila chal he nahi raha tha Bhai kaafi gussa they iss wajah se kyunki media or opposition dono bhai k piche hath munh dhoke padde they but uska ilaaj maine kar liya tha temporary he sahi maine Dino ko pakkad liya tha uski rakhail Mary ka picha karke.. Uske alawa mujhe kalse kuch Whispers bhi sunaai derahe they maano koi help maang raha tha mujhse jo kaafi awkward or scary tha..


Jaisa maine kaha Main Mary ka picha karke Dino takk pohanch gaya tha or Dino ko pakkad liya tha but usko marrne ki bahot jaldi thi issliye usko maarne mein mujhe koi interest nahi tha issliye maine Dino ko NCB waali Shruti k saamne parkat kardiya Or ye dekh uski ankhein fatti ki fatti rehgayi thi..


Main-Passand aaya na mera gift??


Shruti-Y. Y. Ye.. Ye yahaan kai.. Kaise??


Main-Well long story hai baad mein bataunga filhal important ye hai ki he is here aapke saamne saakshaat..


Shruti-But tum isse yahaan laaye kyun?? Or most shockingly isko jinda chhoda tumne.. You captured him alive..


Main -Well story ye hai ki humne isko pakada iske sathi maare gaye last mein ye bhi fansa or honestly isse marrne ki bahot jyada jaldi thi like no fear you know toh mujhe laga isko maarke kyun time waste karna instead isko moutt se behtar punishment di jaaye toh obviously main isko arrest karke rakhne waala hun nahi , kyunki bahot saara paper work fir court case ka lafda fir jail bhejo too much headache fir kuch bolega ye nahi ,issliye main isko yahaan le aaya ab aapko ye chahiye toh bolo warna agla number CBI waalon ka try karne waala hun main Or wohlog toh isko yahin se lejaaenge uthaake mujhe kahin jaane ki jarurat bhi na hai, issliye jaldi bolo..


Shruti-We are taking him abhi k abhi...


Main-Good.. Chal beta Dino have a great day..


Dino-You will regret this, you bastard..


Main-Good bye..


Ye bolke main Or Ami wahaan se waapis aagaye..


Abeer-Kya hua be thokdiya??


Main-Kisse??


Anjali-Dino ko be Or kisko..


Main-Actually thoda change tha plan mein, maine Dino ko NCB ko dediya..


Ye Sun Anjali or Abeer ne mujhe ankhein faadke ghurra..


Anjali-You are kidding right??


Main-Nope.. He is gone..


Abeer-What the fuck bhosdk.. Itane din se NCB se he bach bach ke toh uske piche lage they toh agar unhe he dena tha toh fir ye sab kyun??


Anjali-Arrey unhe diya he kyun hai Dino humaara shikaar tha woh kya karenge.


Main-Arrey guys chill chill chill suno meri baat.. Dekho Dino humaare yahaan koi kaam ka nahi tha literally nothing woh koi information nahi deta or woh marrne k liye ready tha toh darr use moutt ka bhi nahi tha toh kya faayda insabka ab iss bich mujhe sujha ek plan Dino apne business ka dimag tha wahin Mick physical work dekhta tha , beshak kuch bhi ho Dino Mick ka bhai hai saga woh bhi or woh usse aise he toh nahi jaane dega woh sanki hai dimag na hai uske pass woh khouff or power k dum pe kaam karta hai issliye ab woh kuch bhi karke apne bhai ko bachaane k liye jarur aaega bc unhone apne ek gurge ko bachaa liya tha NCB headquarters se woh Max bawligand ko toh ye toh bhai hai uska or bhai ko bachaane jaaega woh NCB k pass jabki humlog uska wait kar rahe honge and bam usse dharr lenge.. Ab agar Dino humaare pass hota toh Mick try he nahi karta usse bachaane ki kyunki usse pata hai hum Dino ko maar he detey Or agar jinda rakha hai toh bhi koi na koi planning he hogi jabki NCB se unko itana darr hai nahi pehle bhi toh Max ko gayab kar chuke hain woh log NCB ki naak k niche se issliye woh fir try karenge but abki baar keval NCB nahi humlog bhi honge wahaan..


Anjali-And obviously ye baat NCB ko pata nahi hogi..


Main-Arrey kya baat kar rahi hai Anjali,unhe pata hoti toh ghanta humein kuch karne detey wohlog ..


Abeer-Toh agar ye plan thoda sa bhi idhar udhar hua toh naa keval Mick balki Shruti bhi humari gand tod degi..


Main-Well technically haan but dont worry guys mera plan hai floop thodi hoga..


Abeer-Bhosdk itana bada plan assumptions pe bana toh diya thoda soch bhi liya kar plan bananey k baad hain??


Main-Sochne ka time nahi hota sochne baithunga toh galatiyaan nikalengi fir kabhi plan banega he nahi..


Abeer-Bhosdk galatiyaan theek karne k liye he toh sochna padta haina...


Main-Arrey chup kar bawligand sab theek hoga tu ek kaam kar ab kuch log jaao Or 24*7 NCB waalon pe najar rakho headquarters mein kuch nahi hoga kyunki last breakout k baad wahaan security bahot jyaada hai toh fir jab bhi woh Dino ko medical k liye yaa fir court k liye leke jaein humein batao humlog durr se sath honge unke Or jaise he Mick bawligand aaega usko dharr lenge ek teer se do nishane Or 2 he kyun most probably kai machali hath lag shakti hain..


Abeer-Matlab..


Main-Dekh Dino Or Mick kiske liye kaam kartey hain??


Abeer -Patrick k liye.


Main-Exactly..Patrick ka Right hand Anthony hai or left hand ye dono bhai Dino or Mick or ye dono he Patrick k liye bahot important hain toh baat aai unhe bachaane ki toh Mick Patrick se help maangega or Patrick help karega kyunki Dino uske liye important hai toh woh yaa toh Anthony ko bhejega yaa better khud bhi sath aaega issliye Dino ko bachaane k liye Mick Anthony or Patrick takk mill shaktey hain humein or ye teeno fans gaye toh bc Vilas k pass kuch nahi bachega kyunki uska right hand Patrick toh humaare pass hoga fir Vilas ko maarna or jyaada aashaan hoga yaani Sanjay ka ek or pillar jaaega bc..


Abeer-Fuck yeah ye badhiya hai..


Main-Toh bc issliye toh sab planning ki hai maine tu bus wait kar..


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Dino ko NCB ko deke , apni team ko unpe najar rakhne bolke main ghar aake sogaya tha kyunki thakaan he itani horahi thi late night soya toh late he utha main Or utha toh bhi mere phone ki wajah se call aaraha tha Jiya ka..


Main-Haan jiya..


Jiya-Boss uthjaao NCB waale Dino ko Medical k liye leke jaane ki taiyaari kar rahe hain.


Main-Gajab Tu baaki team ko bulaa with weapons and all ekdum ready hoke, pakka kuch toh hoga he..


Jiya-Sab aarahe hain boss aap jaanwar ko leke pohancho..


Main-10 minutes..


Call disconnected..


Maine Abeer ko ready hone ka bola jhatt se fresh hua or apni deagles uthaake niche aaya.. Niche Jaanwar Meenu Or Babhi he they..


Main-Jaanwar jaldi chal..


Meenu-Arrey kya jaldi chal kuch kha toh le dinner bhi nahi kiya tha tune..


Main-Woh aake karunga Meenu abhi jaane dey mereko... Urgent hai..


Babhi-Fir bimaar hojaaega ab hero bana ghumta reh harr baar kaa hai..


Main-Babhi aake sunaana aap.. Love you..


Ye bolke main or jaanwar aaye bahaar tou jaanwar ne gaadi nikaal rakhi thi already toh humlog turant nikale NCB headquarters k liye..


Abeer-Pakka attack hoga??


Main-Aaj nahi toh kal hoga jarur Mick aise he apne bhai ko nahi lejaane dega..


Abeer-Okk..


Humlog headquarters pohanchey toh puri team thoda piche he rukki hui thi humne Anjali se Bulletproof vests lee and Bluetooth devices liye..


Main-Ok dhyaan se suno keval ek gaadi Jiya ki unke just piche rahegi baaki sab log yaa toh aage rahenge yaa thoda piche agar by chance kuch hota hai toh humaari priority hai NCB waalon ko bachaana or sath sath Mick ko dharlena.. NCB k pass limited agents he hain or usme se aadhe headquarters ki security k liye yahaan rukkenge toh wohlog maare jaaenge humne help naa kee toh , so jaise he attack ho try karna ye sab..


Sab-Got you boss.


Main-Bus fail jaao fir..


Ab Main Jaanwar or Ami ek gaadi mein they humlog piche rehne waale they thoda 11 baje they subah k lekin bhenchod shardi or dhund abhi takk full thi toh humein dikkat hone waali thi.. Wohlog nikal gaye they hospital k liye NCB waalon ki 3 gaadiyaan thi or 12-15 agents bataa rahi thi Jiya..


Abeer-Mujhe nahi lagta kuch hoga yahaan se hospital bc 5 minute durr he toh hai isase better hai wohlog wait karein court jaane ka court yahaan se durr hai or area bhi sunsaan hai woh toh wahaan chances jyaada hain. Wohlog itane shyaane toh hain he ki ye pata ho unhe..


Main-I agree but soch wohlog ko lage ki NCB wale yahi soch rahe honge ki itani derr mein kya hoga toh wohlog guard down karein apna.. Reverse psychology you know....Bahot smart play hojaae...


Main aage kuch bolta usase pehle jiya Bluetooth pe chilaai..


Jiya-(Bt) Attack attack... Ambushhhhsh...


Main-Maadarchod..


Ye suntey he Maine gaadi pel di wohlog humse 200-300 meter he aage they or humlog seconds k hisaab se pohanchey wahaan..


Jiya(Bt) -aage ek tata 407 lagaake raasta bandh kiya hai left or right mein 5-6 gaadiyaan hain NCB ka kaafila rukk gaya hai wohlog unke uppar firing nahi kar rahe gaadiyon k tires par firing kar rahe hain.. Kuch automatic guns hain baaki pistols hain..


Main-(Bt) unke uppar firing nahi kar shaktey wohlog goli Dino ko lag gayi toh wohlog pehle confirm karenge woh kahaan hai time kam hai jaldi se tackle karo unko.. Aage waale jo hain turant truck driver ko thoko or raasta khulwao Jiya or baaki sab gaadiyon ko target karo.. Let's go.. On foot..


Sab-Copy..


Jiya-(Bt) Right waale humlog handle kartey hain..


Main-(Bt) we got left .. Jaanwar Ami niche uttaro paidal jaao aage main kuch crazy karta hun..


Abeer-Dhyaan se be..


Main- mujhe kuch naa hoga bullet proof gaadi hai..


Un dono ko niche uttarra Maine left side 2 black scorpio thi or unmein 10+ log they jinmein se 4-5 toh dono gaadiyon k andar se he sishon se and sunroof se firing kar rahe they or baaki 5 niche uttare hue they or firing kartey hue kaafile ki taraf badh rahe they Dino ko laane k liye wohlog still bus warning fire he kar rahe they or Shruti itani toh shyaani thi ki woh samjh gayi thi ki jabtak wohlog gaadiyon mein hain safe hain kyunki unke uppar firing karke Dino ko hurt karne ka risk nahi lenge wohlog issliye i guess usne order diya tha gaadiyon k andar rehne ka lekin wohlog ab aage badh rahe they toh NCB waale chud jaane waale they issliye Maine full speed gaadi unhi ki taraf doudaai or wohlog kuch samjh paate tabtak late ho chuka tha 2 bando ko toh seedha takkar maari Maine ek toh bilkul middle mein laga or ek thoda side mein bonut k or Range Rover ki build quality itani strong hai ki dono ko bahot durr fainka gaadi ne ye dekh unke 3 sathiyo ne mere uppar firing ki gaadi thodi out of control hui takkar ki wajah se but gaadi ko Maine sambhaal liya or jo 3 firing kar rahe they mere uppar unko piche se Abeer or Ami ne thok diya..


Main-(Bt) Gajab guys...


Jiya-(Bt) Boss time kam hai saamne se or bhi 2 gaadiyaan aai hain we need to act fast..


Main-Bhenchod..


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Ab Maine bahaar waalon ko thok diya tha or left mein bus 5-6 log bache they jo dono scorpio k andar se firing kar rahe they ..


Main-(Bt) Jaanwar in dono gaadi waale bando ko target kar main nikaalta hun bahaar inhe..


Ab maine back gear lagaaya or fir pel di gaadi unki taraf unhone mujhe dekha bhi kuch ne mere uppar firing ki kuch gaadiyon se bahaar kudde dono scorpio side by side khaddi thi or range Rover k back se maine dono k front mein maari takkar woh bhi badhiya speed se andar waale pure hill gaye honge .. Hilla main bhi or gaadi bhi attak gayi lekin iska faayda ye hua ki jo bahaar kudde they gaadiyon se unko niche se uthne he nahi diya Abeer or Ami ne bc sabko thok diya ab dono gaadiyon k bus driver he bache wohlog bhi fans gaye kyunki airbags khulgaye they unke main niche uttara or apni deagle nikaali pehle left waale driver ko goli maari tabtak dusara driver bahaar nikal he aaya tha but nikalte he usko bhi goli nasheeb hui..


Main-(Bt) Left clear..


Anjali-(Bt) Front mein we need help boss 12-15 log aaye hain..


Main-(Bt) Ok got you.. Ami Tu mere sath aa humlog front mein help karwaate hain jaanwar Tu Right mein jaa jiya wagairah ki help karwa..


Abeer-Copy..


Main or Ami front mein aaye humein dekh NCB waale bhi niche uttarke meri taraf aaye unki gaadiyaan aage jaane laayak nahi bachi thi Shruti k sath tha Dino uske hathon mein hathkadi lagi thi..


Main-Morning guys..


Shruti-You set us up..


Main-Areey naa naa.. Set up??kaisa hai beta Dino..


Dino-Wohlog bachalenge mujhe.. Kitano ko maarega..


Main-Sabko.. jitane aayenge un sabko thok dunga likhwaake lele bhosdk kya baat kar raha hai mera kaam he ye hai. Ek kaam karo isko leke piche jaao or backup bulaa lo and isko waapis headquarters lejaao..


Lekin mere itana bolte he humaare uppar hui firing humlog bhaagke NCB waalon ki gaadiyon k piche kuddey, actually left se 2 gaadiyaan or aagayi thi ek Scorpio or dusari Mercedes thi koi .Mercedes ko drive kar raha tha Mick usko dekhte he pehchan gaya main humlog gaadiyon k piche baith gaye they cover leke..


Shruti-Dino... He is running..


Iss bhagdad kaa faayda uthaake Dino unki taraf bhaag gaya tha kyunki uske uppar firing toh hui nahi thi ab woh bhaag raha tha or jaise he hum uski taraf dekhne bhi lagein toh Mick wagairah humaare uppar firing kar de rahe they...


Main-Oh hell no aise naa jaaane dunga madarchod.. Ami follow me..


Shruti-Main bhi aarahi hun..


Main-Suicide karne ka shokk hai kya??


Shruti-Tum bhi toh jaa rahe ho.. Isko nahi jaane de shakti main already ek criminal bhaag chuka hai custody se not anymore.. Nilesh tumlog backup bulaao dont follow me..


Main-Ami main piche se jaa raha hun tu aage se jaa Mercedes bulletproof hogi uske tires pe goli maarna bhaagna nahi chahiye. .


Main khadda hua or gaadiyon kaa cover letey hue piche ki taraf gaya Shruti or Ami gaadiyon se aage ki taraf gaye Mercedes mein keval Mick or ek banda baithey they jabki Scorpio mein se 4 log toh niche uttare hue they or 1 driver andar baitha tha wohlog humaare uppar firing kiye he jaa rahe they taaki humlog piche naa aa paaein unke .. Ab finally udhar se Ami or Shruti ne unke uppar firing ki toh unhone un dono ki taraf focus kiya or ab main nikala idhar se pehli goli toh seedhe scorpio k driver ko maari Maine woh bechaara kuch kar bhi nahi raha tha but ab bhaag nahi shaktey Scorpio waale toh atleast usko goli maartey he Maine bahaar waalon pe firing ki ab cover lene ki baari unki thi ek ko toh bahaar he maar giraaya Maine baaki 3 cover le gaye iska faayda uthaake Main aage badha udhar se Ami or Shruti bhi aage badhi unhone Scorpio waalon ko target kiya or Maine Mercedes ko. Mick ne Mercedes ka gate khola andar se he or Dino usmein baitha but Maine idhar se unke tire pe firing ki kyunki baaki toh bulletproof thi gaadi meri pehli goli he front left tyre mein lagi uske baad nahi aim kar paaya main or meri pehli deagle ki goliyan khatam hui toh Maine dusari nikaal lee.. Mick ko back leke jaani thi gaadi or woh back le raha tha tabtak front left tyre toh niche he ghiss gaya but woh gaadi ko modne mein kaamayaab hogaya tha lekin tabtak main dusari deagle nikaal chuka tha or tabtak unke close bhi tha main toh back tires par nishaana lagaana easy tha mere liye Maine speed pakadne he naa di unko tabtak dono back tires ko goli maar di gaaadi k 3 tires gaye they bc ek baar toh gaadi speed se aage badhi but turant he saare tires cut gaye ab gaadi bhaagi nahi rengne lagi, idhar ab mere bichmein aaye Scorpio waale bandey but unko Ami or Shruti sambhaal rahe they toh main thoda right se bhaagke aage gaya and gaadi k piche bhaaga wohlog mujhse aage they or finally unhe samjh aagaya tha ki gaadi se tej paidal bhaaglenge wohlog toh wohlog gaadi se uttar gaye ab Dino or Mick toh bhaagne lage aage or woh ek or banda rukka piche obviously mujhe roukane k liye usne mere uppar firing ki but idhar cover bahot tha trees wagairah ka toh cover leta hua main aage badhne laga ab shikaar mere saamne tha toh no way ab jaane dunga unko main..


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Thanks for the support guys and sorry gayab hojaane k liye actually Haryana mein elections ka time hai toh ussi mein busy tha uppar se beemar bhi hogaya tha . 3 updates posted next update kal agle 1 maheene takk updates slow he aaenge as jaisa maine kaha election's ka time hai or main bhaari busy hun usme toh 1-1 minute nikaalke likhne padrahe hain updates uske liye sorry in advance but 4-5 updates per week toh de he dunga.. Keep supporting as always.
 

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Thanks for the support guys and sorry gayab hojaane k liye actually Haryana mein elections ka time hai toh ussi mein busy tha uppar se beemar bhi hogaya tha . 3 updates posted next update kal agle 1 maheene takk updates slow he aaenge as jaisa maine kaha election's ka time hai or main bhaari busy hun usme toh 1-1 minute nikaalke likhne padrahe hain updates uske liye sorry in advance but 4-5 updates per week toh de he dunga.. Keep supporting as always.
Gzb update hai bhai intejar rahega next update ka
 
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