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Thriller WLHTA - The Serpent Of Underworld.

Lord xingbie

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nice update
mannar ko pakdne ke liye nikle the sabhi but mannar bhi smart hai
usne hi jaal bichaya AP ko pakadne ka great villian bhi dimag wala ho to maza ata hai
jack ko bachana zruri tha isliye bhai ne nahar me kud kar sahi kiya
jabtak sans hai AP family ke liye kuch bhi karega aur ack bhi family me ataa hai
sahi samay pr hospital pahucha diya jack ab behosh ho gaya par ye to aur khatarnak ho gaya
mujhe laga kahi 3.0 agaya but good for all ki 2.0 ayaa jaan bachane ko AP ki
ab dekhte hai 2.0 kya tehlka machata hai

keep writing
 
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Rohit1988

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Ab wohlog bhi thakne lage they unki speed kam horahi thi but sathmein humaari bhi speed kam horahi thi kyunki bhenchod bahot derr se bhaag rahe they humlog.. And finally unke pair bhi jawaab de gaye or pata nahi kyun wohlog wahaan kuch containers k piche chipp gaye and main or Jack bhi finally rukk gaye..


Main-Mmaa. Maadarchod Olympic mein aaye ho kya bhenchod.. Itana bhaagta hai koi?? Maaamamaamamaaadarchod.. Fuck.. Dont worry chipp le kuch seconds orr wahin thok dunga maadarchod..


But ek second.. Yelog daru pee rahe they.. Kaafi derr se infact.. Fir bhi itani durr bhaage?? And if i think about it maadarchod aise planning se bhaage hain ki hum sab alag alag hain.. Nooo..


Main samajh gaya tha ye ek trap hai bhaagne mein main itana busy tha ki main ye samjh nahi paaya or ye trap mere liye he tha kyunki Manaar ko pata tha ki maine uss bandey ki shakal dekhi hai jo uss din roof k uppar se firing kar raha tha humaare uppar or usse pata tha ki main uska he pichha karunga kyunki woh important hai issliye usne usse bheja.. Or abhi humlog ek aisi jagah they jahaan humein 5 feet takk nahi dikh raha tha and chaaron taraf humlog containers se ghirre hue they..


Main-Jackkk.. Its a traaa...


Lekin main aage kuch bol paata usase pehle ek hath meri taraf aaya jisme chaaku tha mere pass literally ek second thi react karne k liye or maine kiya bhi maine mere dono hath aage kiye jisase woh chaaku meri deagle pe laga meri deagle niche girri but meri Jaan bach gayi and maine usko maari laat jisase woh piche jaake girra .. Main thoda piche bhi hua isase lekin mujhe mere piche bhi aahat hui issliye main jhatt se piche mudda toh piche se bhi ek chaaku meri taraf aaraha tha but thankfully Jack ne uss piche waale bandey ko laat maari or literally i wont lie agar Woh chaaku mujhe lagjaata toh most probably like 50% main marr jaane waala tha lekin Jack ne apne dimag se kaam liya woh usse goli nahi maar shakta tha kyunki goli mujhe bhi lag shakti thi, ulta jack ne usse laat maari jo uss bandey k pait mein lagi or woh banda piche jaake girra or main baal baal bacha..


Main-Jack.. You are a god.. Bhenchod bach gaya abhi chedd hojaata.. Jaan bacha lee tune..


Jack-Yahi toh kaaa.....


Jack aage kuch bol paata usase pehle Jack k left se ek tisre bandey ne ek chaaku Seedha jack k stomach mein daag diya Jack wahin freeze hogaya or apne ghutano pe girra....


Main-Nooooo..


Maine chilaatey hue apni dusari deagle nikaali lekin jaise he dusari deagle nikaali woh piche waale bande ne mere hath pe jhatka diya or meri dusari deagle bhi niche girri or jhatke k baad uss bandey ne mujhe apne chaaku se maarna caaha but abki baar main taiyaar tha main usase piche hoke bacha and ulta usko laat di jisase woh piche hatta and main uske piche hotey he uske Uppar jhapta and woh doobara chaaku utha paata usase pehle uske hath pe laat di maine jisase uska chaaku niche girra and ye hotey he maine uske munh pe punches ki baarish kardi woh bokhlaa gaya and niche girra, main turant piche mudda toh woh banda jisne jack ko chaaku maara tha woh Jack k pait mein se chaaku nikaalne k liye niche jukha he tha or woh chaaku ko touch kar paata usase pehle maine bhaag ke usko maari flying kick jisase woh piche jaake girra and maine Jack ko sambhaala toh Jack hosh mein tha but chaaku bahot critical jagah laga tha woh bhi bahot jyaada deep or bahot khoon beh raha tha uska..


Main-Hang in there Jack...


Main Jack ko dilasha de he raha tha ki woh banda khadda hoke mere uppar jhapta lekin main turant he khadda hua and uske punches se bacha ye wahi banda tha jiske piche main bhaaga tha..Usne mujhe punch maarna caaha toh maine uska right hand pakkad liya apne left hand se and right hand se diya uske pait mein ek bhayanak punch jisase woh piche hatta..


Main-You fucked up..


Ye bolke main uske Uppar jhapta and punches jaddne laga woh ek punch se bachta toh dusara punch lagta usko, maine bawla bana diya usko punches maar maar k.. Maine usko tab chhoda jab mujhe mere piche se aahat hui, main turant mudda toh piche woh suru waala banda meri taraf bhaagke aaraha tha hath mein chaaku liye usne aatey he mujhe chaaku maarna caaha but Maine uska hath bichmein he pakkad liya and apna sir maara uske munh k uppar jisase woh bokhla gaya and maine jhatt se uske hath se chaaku cheen liya and woh kuch samjh paata usase pehle uska galla kaat diya and woh girra niche.. Tabtak woh dusara banda bhaag gaya tha jisne Jack ko chaaku maara tha and jiske piche main bhaaga tha and woh third banda still khadda nahi ho paa raha tha itane bure punches maare they maine usko maine apna chaaku faink k maara usko jo seedha jaake ghussa uske heart k uppar and woh khadda hone ki bajaae duniya se he uth gaya and main waapis Jack k pass aaya Jack ki condition harr second kharaab hoti jaarahi thi Jack k pass kuch 15-20 minutes baaki thi issliye maine uska chaaku nikaala or apne ek hath se uske wound pe pressure banaaya and dusare hath se apna phone bahaar nikaala or main Abeer ko call kar he raha tha ki mujhe mere saamne aahat hui or maine dekha toh ek chaaku meri taraf aaraha tha maine hattne ki koshis bhi ki lekin Jack meri godi mein tha jiss wajah se main puri tarah hatt nahi paaya or woh chaaku aake laga mere heart se thoda uppar yaani shoulder or heart k bichmein or bhenchod jisne bhi fainka gand faad speed and technique se fainka hoga kyunki woh bhenchod chaaku kaafi dhans gaya mere andar jisase main piche ko lait gaya and gand faad chilaaya...Jaan nikal gayi thi bhenchod..


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Slow ho gaya hai AP
 

Rohit1988

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Main niche girra toh mera phone bhi hath se girra kyunki maine jhatt se chaaku nikaalna caaha or chaaku nikaaltey hue mujhe bhayanak dard bhi hua jo mujhe chaaku nikaalne k baad realise hua, ye chaaku k side mein cuts they ye aise designed tha ki andar jaatey time makhan ki tarah jaaye lekin bahaar nikaaltey time double damage dey.. Ek minute ye toh Manaar kaa chaaku hai, yahi toh dikha raha tha woh tv pe maadarchod..


Main khadda hua toh saamne mujhe kuch log meri taraf aatey dikhe. Wohlog mujhse thodi durr aake khaddey hue andhere or fog ki wajah se unka cehra nahi dikha but body se andaaja laga liya maine ki sabse aage waala banda Manaar tha..


Manaar - So we meet again AP. Hahahahahah..


Main-You fucking bitch..


Manaar-Seems like you are fucked here.. For your kind information tere dost is scrapyard k dusare kone mein hain toh untak teri awaaj nahi pohanchaney waali.. Aakhir yahi plan tha mera tujhe tere dost or teri guns se durr karne ka.. Aakhir muqabla baraabar kaa hona chahiye naa...Oh also tumhare iss dost k liye I'm really sorry. But the game is the game kuch minutes baad ye bhi mere mama k pass pohanch jaaega and..


Jack-B.. Bb. BHaii.. Dont ww. Ww.w.worry abouttttt.. Mmmmme... Killllll.... Themmmm... Kill Themmmm alll...


Manaar-Oho ho itane loyal log... I feel bad for him..But haal tere bhi theek nahi hain minutes tere pass bhi limited he hain.. Wound tera bhi bahot critical hai yahi khaasiyat hai mere knife ki double damage karke bahaar aata hai..


Woh sahi bol raha tha ghaav mera bhi bahot jyaada deep tha, woh toh thanks to my body mera khoon slowly behta hai bahar issliye main kuch minutes extra nikaal shakta tha but ghaav mera bhi critical tha.. Maine Jack ko ishara kiya or aaram se kaha ki "Apna saara dum laga dena"


Manaar-So AP kya bolta hai. Tu or main one vs one aaj fainsla ho he jaaega...


Maine jack ki taraf ishara kiya and uska hath pakad k usko khinch or woh apna pura dum lagaake khadda hua and maine uska hath apne kandhe par daala or usko khinchke aage jaane laga but Jack muskil se chal paa raha tha..


Manaar-Hahahaha. Bhag nahi shakta tu AP..Get him..kahaan takk jaaega.. Get him...


Ye sunke uska ek banda meri taraf badha or main ek second k liye rukka and mudtey he woh hath mein liya chaaku usko faink k maara and woh jaake laga uss bandey k pait mein or ye tha mera moka..


Main - Jack bhaag..


But jack caahke bhi bhaag nahi paa raha tha badi mushkil se uske kadam aage badh rahe they issliye mujhe usko khinchna padd raha tha and finally humlog nehar k kinaare par they. And piche se Manaar wagairaah bhi aagaye...


Jack-B. B. B. Bhai... Leave me.... I'll die happpppily... Maineenene meraaaa kaakaaam kardiya...


Main-Tu kahin nahi jaane waala..


Manaar-(Hanke) Lagta hai mistake hogayi AP galat side bhag liya..


Main-(Hanske) I Don't make mistakes.. Never.. Don't worry jald millenge humlog and i promise kuttey ki moutt maarunga main tujhe...


Manaar- Iss nehar mein jaaega tu?? Marr jaaega.. Ye toh marr he gaya.. No way tuu..


Manaar aage kuch bolta usase pehle maine Jack ko dhakka diya Nehar mein or Jack girra seedha nehar mein and pressure itana tha paani ka ki Jack uske sath behne laga obviously Jack bhi iss nehar mein nahaata aaya hai but abhi uski himmat itani nahi thi ki woh tair le toh main bhi aage bhaagke Jack k piche kudda and paani k sath swim karne laga.. Yahi tha mera plan..I know Jack injured tha or main bhi i know paani bahot jyaada thanda hone waala tha and utana he mousam thanda tha but yahi ekmaatar option tha humaare pass.. Main kuch he seconds mein Jack takk pohanch gaya and uska hath pakkada tairtey hue or paani itana tejj tha ki bus uska hath he pakkad paaya, main ek jagah rukk k usko uppar nahi khinch shakta tha paani bahot tej tha, issliye main tairtey hue he usko uppar khinchne laga .. Gand takk kaa dum lagaake main usko khinch paaya uppar tak And Jack ne bhi apni bachi hui saari energy lagaai or uppar aake mere kandhe se chipak gaya woh or main firse aage tairne laga.. Maine Jack ko toh khinch liya tha but again paani itana thanda tha ki agar jyaada derr paani mein rahe toh Hypothermia ka shikar hojaaenge or thand ki wajah se humaari body yahin jamm jaaegi or hum dono ki laash kal yahaan se almost 65 kilometers durr dam pe milegi.. Main nehar k iss area k chappe chappe se waakif tha.. Aage thodi he durr ek bridge tha jahan se iss nehar k andar se kheton mein paani bhejne ki jagah hain or wahaan seedhiyaan bhi hain bahot lambi jo nehar se bahaar nikaalne mein madad karengi meri kyunki no way aise main nehar se bahaar nikal shakta tha bina stairs....Mujhe bus wahaan seedhiyon mein apna hath fansaake rukkna tha kyunki ek baar woh seedhiyaan nikal gayi toh main paani k bahaav k against waapis nahi swim kar shakta tha no fucking way and uske baad aage almost 6-7 kilometers baad he doobara chance millega or tabtak I'm sure Jack toh marr he jaaega.. Ab ye kaam easy tha agar main akela hota or fit hota.. Lekin main naa toh akela tha or bhenchod naa he main fit tha ulta mera khoon bhi beh raha tha... Fuckkk..


Continued..


Batao AP ko koi maar gaya or uske rahte huye koi uske partner ko bhi maar gaya
 

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Anjali ka call aachuka tha, Manaar k kuch aadmi mill gaye they unhe issliye Main jhat se utha bed se, Ami ko call kiya usko bola jaanwar ko uthaae and main hone laga ready kyunki bhenchod aisi shardi mein bina preparations nahi jaane waala tha main.. Sabse bhaari bharkam jacket pehani maine then shoes pehne or apni deagles leke niche aaya toh Abeer Or Ami ready they Jack bhi bahaar he tha as babhi ne orders diye they usko bhi mere sath rehne k. So hum 4on nikale turant he, yahaan se 5 minutes ka he raasta tha but bhenchod again dhund (fog) itani jyaada thi ki gaadi ekdum araam se leke gaye humlog 3-4 minutes faltu he lagi and humlog pohanchey, gaadi thodi pehle he roki jahan Anjali and team humaara wait kar rahe they.. Humlog gaadi se utare toh mujhe realise hua ki meri taiyaari shardi k muqable kam thi kyunki bhenchod bahaar kaafi jyaada shardi thi but unko thokne k liye itana toh seh lunga main..


Main-Kya situation hai..


Anjali-Boss ek khabri ko khabar mili ki kuch log jo typical south indian he lag rahe hain woh yahaan sharaab pee rahe hain theke k just side waale dhaabe mein baithke.. Aamtor pe trucks waale yahaan 24 ghantey aatey rehtey hain but kapdon se wohlog koi truck waale nahi lagtey or awaaj bhi thodi ajeeb hai, so ye news milte he humlog yahaan aaye Rajat or Deepak gaye they wahaan kuch photos bhi laaye hain unki, woh bandey mujhe toh thode awkward lage issliye aapko call kiya.. Ye dekho photos..


Anjali ne mujhe apna phone diya usme kuch log dhaabe k andar baithtey they shakal se he wohlog south indian lag rahe they and jab main scroll kar raha tha toh ek photo mein mujhe ek shaks dikha jisse dekhtey he ye confirm hogaya ki ye Manaar k bandey hain..


Main-Abeer ye wahi banda haina jo kal raat roof se humaare uppar firing kar raha tha.. Or fir niche bhaag gaya tha...


Abeer-Abe haan.. Wahi maadarchod hai.. 100% wahi hai.. Maine saaf dekha tha..


Main-Gajab.. Matlab Manaar k he log hain ye..Lets get them..Humlog seedha entry karenge.. Kuch log bahaar he rukkenge.. Ye banda mujhe jinda caahiye kissi bhi keemat pe kyunki yahi Manaar takk leja shakta hai but dhyaan rahe yahi ekmaatar banda hai jo gun rakhta hai yaani ye koi toh important banda hai Manaar ka.. Guns baakiyon k pass bhi ho shakti hai but most probably nahi lekin dhyaan se aage badhna hai.. Lets go.


Anjali-Vests??


Main-Uski jarurat nahi hai inke pass guns nahi hain waise bhi, late nahi kartey chalo.. Main Abeer Ami Anjali jiya or Jack andar jaaenge inko hath uppar karne bolenge agar hath uppar karletey hain toh best hai otherwise humlog thok denge sabko iss bandey k alawa.. Samjhe..


Sab-Copy..


Maine apni deagle nikaali and humlog aage badhe.. Ye basically truckers ka area tha bahot bada woh bhi 3-4 kilometers mein faila tha ye sunsaan area, yahaan steel or iron ki kaafi factories thi aage chalke so trucks aatey jaatey yahaan rukktey they khaana or daru dono ka intejaam tha yahaan toh pura din bheed rehti thi behisaab trucks khaddey they abhi bhi wahaan..Humlog unhi trucks ka cover letey hue bhage dhabe ki taraf, dhaba lakdi ka tha jugaadu type ka kuch log bahaar aag jalaake baithe they daru or khaana dono chal rahe they. Humaare shikaar andar they toh humlog seedha aage he bhaage but aage aa paatey usase pehle unhone gate se humein andar aatey hue dekh liya woh i guess 8-10 bandey they or humein dekhtey he wohlog bhayanak furti se uthke bhaage kuch front gate se bhaage and baaki back windows se or bache hue kitchen side se bhaage, mera target woh banda tha jo important tha toh main uske piche bhaga mere sath Jack, Ami or Deepak bhaage and baaki log dusare group k sath bhaage... Humaare saamne 4 bandey they or wohlog gand faad bhag rahe they toh humein bhi gand faad bhaagna tha kyunki ek toh yahaan nehar thi pani se bharri jiss wajah se yahaan dhund (fog) itani jyaada thi ki humein muskil se saamne 10feet ka kuch dikh raha hoga so agar woh thoda sa bhi aage nikale toh hum khojj nahi paaenge unko ab unko thok shakta nahi tha main kyunki ye pura area ek scrapyard type tha toh kaafi saare tutte futte trucks wahaan they and uske alawa trucks k bade bade purje chaaron tadaf faile they and containers they bade bade jinke piche se wohlog cut maarte hue bhag rahe they toh clear shot lene lagta tabtak wohlog gayab hojaatey toh humne bhagna jaari rakha.. Aaj fir nahi jaane dene waala tha main unlogon ko..


Ab woh 4 ek sath bhag rahe they lekin jald he unhe samjh aagaya ki aise wohlog Humse nahi bach shaktey issliye wohlog alag alag 2-2 k groups mein divide hue or opposite directions mein bhaage main still uss main waale bandey k he piche tha or maine Ami or Deepak ko baaki dono k piche bheja and main or Jack inhi dono k piche rahe and ab unhone speed or jyaada pakkad lee or idhar humari sans fullne lagi thi lekin again main jaane dene waala nahi tha unlogon ko kissi bhi keemat pe nahi issliye humne bhagna jaari rakha ye bahot bada area tha but faayda ye tha ki wohlog orr kahin jaa nahi shakte they kyunki unke left side humaari baaki teams thi toh udhar jaatey toh pakkade jaatey and right mein nehar thi or aisi waisi nehar nahi Bhakra nehar arguably North India ki sabse powerful nehar iss nehar ka water pressure bahot jyaada tejj hai ache achon ko sath baha lejaata hai ye . Main Ravi Abeer or Mangal bahot pehle nahaane aatey they yahaan par main 14-15 saal kaa raha hounga tab humlog isme nahaatey they lekin normal first timer ko jinda khaa jaati hai ye nehar or uppar se ab shardi itani thi ki paani mein seedhi moutt thi.. So un dono k pass humaare saamne bhaagne k alawa koi moka nahi tha or wahan humlog unko pakkad lene waale they.. No way doobara jaane dunga inko main ..


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Itni Thandi m itna door bhaga laye or woh sab daaru per rehe h Thai yeh bhi samajh m nahi aaya ki yeh trap ho Sakta h
Thandi ki wajah se dimag kaam nahi ker raha h
 

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Ab wohlog bhi thakne lage they unki speed kam horahi thi but sathmein humaari bhi speed kam horahi thi kyunki bhenchod bahot derr se bhaag rahe they humlog.. And finally unke pair bhi jawaab de gaye or pata nahi kyun wohlog wahaan kuch containers k piche chipp gaye and main or Jack bhi finally rukk gaye..


Main-Mmaa. Maadarchod Olympic mein aaye ho kya bhenchod.. Itana bhaagta hai koi?? Maaamamaamamaaadarchod.. Fuck.. Dont worry chipp le kuch seconds orr wahin thok dunga maadarchod..


But ek second.. Yelog daru pee rahe they.. Kaafi derr se infact.. Fir bhi itani durr bhaage?? And if i think about it maadarchod aise planning se bhaage hain ki hum sab alag alag hain.. Nooo..


Main samajh gaya tha ye ek trap hai bhaagne mein main itana busy tha ki main ye samjh nahi paaya or ye trap mere liye he tha kyunki Manaar ko pata tha ki maine uss bandey ki shakal dekhi hai jo uss din roof k uppar se firing kar raha tha humaare uppar or usse pata tha ki main uska he pichha karunga kyunki woh important hai issliye usne usse bheja.. Or abhi humlog ek aisi jagah they jahaan humein 5 feet takk nahi dikh raha tha and chaaron taraf humlog containers se ghirre hue they..


Main-Jackkk.. Its a traaa...


Lekin main aage kuch bol paata usase pehle ek hath meri taraf aaya jisme chaaku tha mere pass literally ek second thi react karne k liye or maine kiya bhi maine mere dono hath aage kiye jisase woh chaaku meri deagle pe laga meri deagle niche girri but meri Jaan bach gayi and maine usko maari laat jisase woh piche jaake girra .. Main thoda piche bhi hua isase lekin mujhe mere piche bhi aahat hui issliye main jhatt se piche mudda toh piche se bhi ek chaaku meri taraf aaraha tha but thankfully Jack ne uss piche waale bandey ko laat maari or literally i wont lie agar Woh chaaku mujhe lagjaata toh most probably like 50% main marr jaane waala tha lekin Jack ne apne dimag se kaam liya woh usse goli nahi maar shakta tha kyunki goli mujhe bhi lag shakti thi, ulta jack ne usse laat maari jo uss bandey k pait mein lagi or woh banda piche jaake girra or main baal baal bacha..


Main-Jack.. You are a god.. Bhenchod bach gaya abhi chedd hojaata.. Jaan bacha lee tune..


Jack-Yahi toh kaaa.....


Jack aage kuch bol paata usase pehle Jack k left se ek tisre bandey ne ek chaaku Seedha jack k stomach mein daag diya Jack wahin freeze hogaya or apne ghutano pe girra....


Main-Nooooo..


Maine chilaatey hue apni dusari deagle nikaali lekin jaise he dusari deagle nikaali woh piche waale bande ne mere hath pe jhatka diya or meri dusari deagle bhi niche girri or jhatke k baad uss bandey ne mujhe apne chaaku se maarna caaha but abki baar main taiyaar tha main usase piche hoke bacha and ulta usko laat di jisase woh piche hatta and main uske piche hotey he uske Uppar jhapta and woh doobara chaaku utha paata usase pehle uske hath pe laat di maine jisase uska chaaku niche girra and ye hotey he maine uske munh pe punches ki baarish kardi woh bokhlaa gaya and niche girra, main turant piche mudda toh woh banda jisne jack ko chaaku maara tha woh Jack k pait mein se chaaku nikaalne k liye niche jukha he tha or woh chaaku ko touch kar paata usase pehle maine bhaag ke usko maari flying kick jisase woh piche jaake girra and maine Jack ko sambhaala toh Jack hosh mein tha but chaaku bahot critical jagah laga tha woh bhi bahot jyaada deep or bahot khoon beh raha tha uska..


Main-Hang in there Jack...


Main Jack ko dilasha de he raha tha ki woh banda khadda hoke mere uppar jhapta lekin main turant he khadda hua and uske punches se bacha ye wahi banda tha jiske piche main bhaaga tha..Usne mujhe punch maarna caaha toh maine uska right hand pakkad liya apne left hand se and right hand se diya uske pait mein ek bhayanak punch jisase woh piche hatta..


Main-You fucked up..


Ye bolke main uske Uppar jhapta and punches jaddne laga woh ek punch se bachta toh dusara punch lagta usko, maine bawla bana diya usko punches maar maar k.. Maine usko tab chhoda jab mujhe mere piche se aahat hui, main turant mudda toh piche woh suru waala banda meri taraf bhaagke aaraha tha hath mein chaaku liye usne aatey he mujhe chaaku maarna caaha but Maine uska hath bichmein he pakkad liya and apna sir maara uske munh k uppar jisase woh bokhla gaya and maine jhatt se uske hath se chaaku cheen liya and woh kuch samjh paata usase pehle uska galla kaat diya and woh girra niche.. Tabtak woh dusara banda bhaag gaya tha jisne Jack ko chaaku maara tha and jiske piche main bhaaga tha and woh third banda still khadda nahi ho paa raha tha itane bure punches maare they maine usko maine apna chaaku faink k maara usko jo seedha jaake ghussa uske heart k uppar and woh khadda hone ki bajaae duniya se he uth gaya and main waapis Jack k pass aaya Jack ki condition harr second kharaab hoti jaarahi thi Jack k pass kuch 15-20 minutes baaki thi issliye maine uska chaaku nikaala or apne ek hath se uske wound pe pressure banaaya and dusare hath se apna phone bahaar nikaala or main Abeer ko call kar he raha tha ki mujhe mere saamne aahat hui or maine dekha toh ek chaaku meri taraf aaraha tha maine hattne ki koshis bhi ki lekin Jack meri godi mein tha jiss wajah se main puri tarah hatt nahi paaya or woh chaaku aake laga mere heart se thoda uppar yaani shoulder or heart k bichmein or bhenchod jisne bhi fainka gand faad speed and technique se fainka hoga kyunki woh bhenchod chaaku kaafi dhans gaya mere andar jisase main piche ko lait gaya and gand faad chilaaya...Jaan nikal gayi thi bhenchod..


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Bechara jack ki Zindagi dao per lag gayi h ab saath m AP ko bhi chaku lag Chuka h
 

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Main niche girra toh mera phone bhi hath se girra kyunki maine jhatt se chaaku nikaalna caaha or chaaku nikaaltey hue mujhe bhayanak dard bhi hua jo mujhe chaaku nikaalne k baad realise hua, ye chaaku k side mein cuts they ye aise designed tha ki andar jaatey time makhan ki tarah jaaye lekin bahaar nikaaltey time double damage dey.. Ek minute ye toh Manaar kaa chaaku hai, yahi toh dikha raha tha woh tv pe maadarchod..


Main khadda hua toh saamne mujhe kuch log meri taraf aatey dikhe. Wohlog mujhse thodi durr aake khaddey hue andhere or fog ki wajah se unka cehra nahi dikha but body se andaaja laga liya maine ki sabse aage waala banda Manaar tha..


Manaar - So we meet again AP. Hahahahahah..


Main-You fucking bitch..


Manaar-Seems like you are fucked here.. For your kind information tere dost is scrapyard k dusare kone mein hain toh untak teri awaaj nahi pohanchaney waali.. Aakhir yahi plan tha mera tujhe tere dost or teri guns se durr karne ka.. Aakhir muqabla baraabar kaa hona chahiye naa...Oh also tumhare iss dost k liye I'm really sorry. But the game is the game kuch minutes baad ye bhi mere mama k pass pohanch jaaega and..


Jack-B.. Bb. BHaii.. Dont ww. Ww.w.worry abouttttt.. Mmmmme... Killllll.... Themmmm... Kill Themmmm alll...


Manaar-Oho ho itane loyal log... I feel bad for him..But haal tere bhi theek nahi hain minutes tere pass bhi limited he hain.. Wound tera bhi bahot critical hai yahi khaasiyat hai mere knife ki double damage karke bahaar aata hai..


Woh sahi bol raha tha ghaav mera bhi bahot jyaada deep tha, woh toh thanks to my body mera khoon slowly behta hai bahar issliye main kuch minutes extra nikaal shakta tha but ghaav mera bhi critical tha.. Maine Jack ko ishara kiya or aaram se kaha ki "Apna saara dum laga dena"


Manaar-So AP kya bolta hai. Tu or main one vs one aaj fainsla ho he jaaega...


Maine jack ki taraf ishara kiya and uska hath pakad k usko khinch or woh apna pura dum lagaake khadda hua and maine uska hath apne kandhe par daala or usko khinchke aage jaane laga but Jack muskil se chal paa raha tha..


Manaar-Hahahaha. Bhag nahi shakta tu AP..Get him..kahaan takk jaaega.. Get him...


Ye sunke uska ek banda meri taraf badha or main ek second k liye rukka and mudtey he woh hath mein liya chaaku usko faink k maara and woh jaake laga uss bandey k pait mein or ye tha mera moka..


Main - Jack bhaag..


But jack caahke bhi bhaag nahi paa raha tha badi mushkil se uske kadam aage badh rahe they issliye mujhe usko khinchna padd raha tha and finally humlog nehar k kinaare par they. And piche se Manaar wagairaah bhi aagaye...


Jack-B. B. B. Bhai... Leave me.... I'll die happpppily... Maineenene meraaaa kaakaaam kardiya...


Main-Tu kahin nahi jaane waala..


Manaar-(Hanke) Lagta hai mistake hogayi AP galat side bhag liya..


Main-(Hanske) I Don't make mistakes.. Never.. Don't worry jald millenge humlog and i promise kuttey ki moutt maarunga main tujhe...


Manaar- Iss nehar mein jaaega tu?? Marr jaaega.. Ye toh marr he gaya.. No way tuu..


Manaar aage kuch bolta usase pehle maine Jack ko dhakka diya Nehar mein or Jack girra seedha nehar mein and pressure itana tha paani ka ki Jack uske sath behne laga obviously Jack bhi iss nehar mein nahaata aaya hai but abhi uski himmat itani nahi thi ki woh tair le toh main bhi aage bhaagke Jack k piche kudda and paani k sath swim karne laga.. Yahi tha mera plan..I know Jack injured tha or main bhi i know paani bahot jyaada thanda hone waala tha and utana he mousam thanda tha but yahi ekmaatar option tha humaare pass.. Main kuch he seconds mein Jack takk pohanch gaya and uska hath pakkada tairtey hue or paani itana tejj tha ki bus uska hath he pakkad paaya, main ek jagah rukk k usko uppar nahi khinch shakta tha paani bahot tej tha, issliye main tairtey hue he usko uppar khinchne laga .. Gand takk kaa dum lagaake main usko khinch paaya uppar tak And Jack ne bhi apni bachi hui saari energy lagaai or uppar aake mere kandhe se chipak gaya woh or main firse aage tairne laga.. Maine Jack ko toh khinch liya tha but again paani itana thanda tha ki agar jyaada derr paani mein rahe toh Hypothermia ka shikar hojaaenge or thand ki wajah se humaari body yahin jamm jaaegi or hum dono ki laash kal yahaan se almost 65 kilometers durr dam pe milegi.. Main nehar k iss area k chappe chappe se waakif tha.. Aage thodi he durr ek bridge tha jahan se iss nehar k andar se kheton mein paani bhejne ki jagah hain or wahaan seedhiyaan bhi hain bahot lambi jo nehar se bahaar nikaalne mein madad karengi meri kyunki no way aise main nehar se bahaar nikal shakta tha bina stairs....Mujhe bus wahaan seedhiyon mein apna hath fansaake rukkna tha kyunki ek baar woh seedhiyaan nikal gayi toh main paani k bahaav k against waapis nahi swim kar shakta tha no fucking way and uske baad aage almost 6-7 kilometers baad he doobara chance millega or tabtak I'm sure Jack toh marr he jaaega.. Ab ye kaam easy tha agar main akela hota or fit hota.. Lekin main naa toh akela tha or bhenchod naa he main fit tha ulta mera khoon bhi beh raha tha... Fuckkk..


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Sala abhi Bata raha tha yeh naher kitni khaternaak h or ab aisa time aa gaya ki usi m koodna pada
 

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Task muskill tha but karna jaruri tha.. Bhosdk AP hai tu.. Aise chaaku lagtey rehtey hain tujhe.. Or tu thand ki baat kar raha hai bhosdk headquarters mein first day Mount Everest ki baraf mein nanga hoke test diya tha tune bawligand remember.. Jack ne teri jaan bachaai abhi, uske alawa najaane kitani baar teri family ki jaan bacha chuka hai infact teri family kaa hissa he hai or iski jindagi tere hath mein hai.. You can do it... Tu AP hai...


Main-Ofcourse bhenchod...


Mujhe saamne bridge k uppar lagi lights najar aarahi thi toh mera escape najdeek aaraha tha issliye pehle he main left side tairne laga tha kyunki fir ekdum se nahi taira jaane waala tha wahaan takk... Jaise jaise stairs najdeek aarahi thi saare ache bure kand saamne aane lage they ye hota hai hypothermia ka symptom lekin main haar nahi maananey waala tha main time se stairs ki side aagaya or jaise he stairs aai maine apna right hand fansa diya bricks k andar or main rukk gaya wahin, paani mere munh pe thapede maar raha tha but main ladd gaya gand takk kaa dum laga diya and main seedhiyon pe aagaya and turant he bahaar jaane laga.. 75 kg kaa aadmi apni pith pe uthaake main un stairs par paani se ladtey hue jaa raha tha ek baar pair slip hua or mera game over hone waala tha but mujhe AP yun he nahi Kehte main nahi fisla or finally main nehar se bahaar aagaya and aatey he niche girr padda sans full gayi thi bhenchod or thand k maare gand fatt rahi thi woh alag or uss chaaku ne gand maari thi Woh alag... But main padda nahi reh shakta tha wohlog bhi bridge ki taraf aaenge jarur issliye main jhatt se utha Jack almost behonsh ho chuka tha bus uski aankhein thodi khulli thi issliye maine usko 3-4 thappad maare..


Main-Jack.. Stay with me bhai.. Jackkk.. Jack...Aise nahi jaane dunga bhosdk tujhe..


Usko thoda hosh mein laake maine uska phone nikaala uski jebh se taaki backup bula shakun lekin bhenchod Jack ka android paani ki wajah se bandh hochuka tha maine usko bhi thappad maare lekin koi luck nahi tha or iske uppar or totke use karne ka time nahi tha mere pass kyunki ek toh Jack marr raha tha mere saamne or dusara wohlog aatey he honge.. Issliye main utha then jack ko uthaya or apne kandhe par laadh liya usko.. Ab yahaan se almost 1 kilometer durr sehar ka pehla hospital tha jo Jack ko bacha shakta ths or wahaan takk main Jack ko uthaake 12-14 minutes mein pohanch shakta tha or jahaan takk mera experience tha Jack k pass maximum 16-17 minutes baaki they toh mujhe gand faad mehnat karni thi issliye main seedha chal he padda chalte chalte he socha jo socha, ab main road ki side nahi gaya kyunki wahaan wohlog mujhe dhund he rahe honge kyunki bridge ussi side hai issliye maine kacha raasta select kiya jo mujhe 70-80 meters kam padega by road k muqable.. Main suru mein jitana ho shake utana tej chalne ki koshish kar raha tha kyunki mujhe pata tha ek baar thakk jaane k baad toh fir main caahke bhi tej nahi chal paaunga.. Aaj main meri body or mere dimag dono se bahot jyaada khuss tha bahot din baad dono ne he mera behisaab sath diya tha and i love it.. Ab suru k 300-350 meters maine 2 minutes mein he pure kar liye they jo bahot achi baat thi kyunki ab main or bhag nahi shakta tha sach kahun toh gand fatt gayi thi body tutt rahi thi but main kissi bhi keemat pe Jack ko jaane dene waala nahi tha thakne k baad main slow hogaya but rukka nahi Jack still 5-6% honsh mein tha woh kuch bhi badbada raha tha aahista se jo mujhe sunaai deraha tha but Jack harr second moutt ki taraf badhta jaa raha tha.. Or uske or moutt k bichmein main khadda tha or main moutt se pehle bhi ladta aaya tha or aaj bhi ladunga.. Agle 2 minutes takk aaram se walk karke main bahot jyaada thakk gaya tha maano abhi yahin munh k ball girrunga issliye maine rukkna theek samjha kyunki girr gaya toh uthne mein bahot time lagega yaa maybe uth bhi naa paaun issliye maine rukkna theek samjha mere saamne ek pipal k paid ka chabutra tha jispe maine Jack ko letaya and khud bhi late gaya.. Main bus apni bachi kuchi energy se ladd raha tha abhi rukka toh mujhe realise hua ki pain mein main bhi tha mera khoon mere chest se niche mere pairon takk aagaya tha thand ki wajah se mera pura sareer kaamp raha tha and uska sabse bura ashar mere sir pe hua tha yaani main kabhi bhi blackout ho shakta tha jo hua toh main jack ko kho dunga issliye 20 seconds k rest k baad he maine Jack ko uthaya. Chabutre se usko uthana easy tha issliye maine ye spot select kiya tha.. Main 5 minutes mein half se jyada distance cover kar chuka tha or ab kuch seconds k rest ne mujhe ek baar or dum lagaane ki himmat de di thi issliye main firse bhaga, i mean tej chala kaafi tej chala, bhagna toh almost impossible tha ab.. And kareeb 1 minute baad main firse slow hogaya mujhe saamne hospital k top floor pe laga board dikhne lag gaya tha jo mujhse 100-150 meters he durr tha or ab ek ek kadam uthana mere liye impossible hota jaa raha tha... Mere pair maano jameen mein dhans gaye they or unhe uthaane k liye main khudse lad raha tha or ab ye impossible lagne laga tha..Main humesha moutt se jeetata hua aaya tha lekin aaj i guess din uska tha..


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Bacha laya bhayanak naher se lekin kia hospital ke paas bhi pahoch gaya ab lekin jack Bach payega
 
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Meri body haar maan chuki thi main blood lost or hypothermia ki wajah se hallucinate karne laga tha.. Mujhe kuch bhi kuch bhi dikh raha tha sabkuch dhundhala hogaya tha even woh hospital ka board bhi mujhe blurred dikh raha tha...Main almost behosh he hone waala tha but main hua nahi, bhenchod behosh hojaata toh kya faayda mera bhagwan hone ka, kon AP kehta mujhe.. AP marr jaaega but haarega nahi yahi soch k sath main ladta raha main chalta raha main rukka nahi, lund mera rukkega finally main road pe aaya kyunki road cross kartey he hospital tha maine road cross kiya ab woh hospital ka board clear dikh raha tha mujhe kyunki just mere saamne he toh tha woh board main hospital k saamne aaya toh 2 guards ek side khaddey cigarette pee rahe they..


Main-Hhh. H. H. H. Elllllpppp..


Main chilaaya toh unhone dekha mujhe and turant he bhaagte hue meri taraf aaye maine Jack ko niche utaara toh sansein chal rahi thi uski maine time se pehle pohancha diya tha usko..Thank me later Jack.. Main niche baith gaya ek ambulance k sahaare leke.. Woh guards udhar se aarahe they... Meri aankhein bhi bandh hone lagi thi main almost behonsh hone waala tha ki mujhe mere saamne se awaaj aai..


"Bahot shyaana hai tu i give you that"


Maine dekha toh saamne 4 shaks khaddey they ye 4on Manaar k aadmi they or unmein sabse aage wahi tha jo main banda tha jisne kal firing ki thi jo aaj bhaga tha jisne Jack ko chaaku maara tha uske alawa 3 or bandey they.. 4on k pass chaaku they..


"Maine toh pakka maan liya tha ki teri laash he milegi kal, koi chance he nahi hai ki tum dono jinda bachoge no chance ho he nahi shakta but Boss ko pata tha itani ashaani se nahi marrega tu , or tereko hospital jaana jaruri tha tere ye dost k liye toh 2 kilometers k area mein 3 hospital hain toh humlog 3no hospitals mein pohanch gaye or tera badluck tu mujhe mill gaya..Unfortunately tujhe main nahi maar shakta but boss aarahe hain don't worry lekin tere is dost ko iske dard se jarur ilaaj kar shakta hun main.. "


"Max Pehele boss ko inform kardey "


Uska dusara sathi bola usko, toh iss maadarchod kaa naam Max tha, good to know..


Main uss ambulance ka sahaara leke badi he muskill se khadda hua..


Max- A guard jindagi pyaari hai toh usko wahin chhodke bhaag jaao"


Usne un guards ko dhamki di jo Jack ko uthane mein busy they..


Guard1-Ye kon hain pata hai tujhe?? Saale maar dey humein inke liye marr jaaenge..


Guard2- Haan.. Bhai ko yun nahi chhodne waale hum..


Main-Sssshhhh!isko leke andar jaao.. Police ko phone karo unhe bolo Anjali se abhi connect karwaae or usko batao main yahaan hun 5-6 minutes mein yahaan aajaaenge wohlog tabtak main dekhlunga inko..Goooo.. Iske pass time nahi hai..


Ye sunte he wohlog Jack ko uthaake andar lejaane lage un 4on ne aage aana caaha but unhe pata tha main hun still wahaan beshak injured hun lekin main hun wahaan..


Unmein se ek aage aaya jabki woh Max phone karne laga..


Woh banda mere saamne aaya hansa or apna bada saa chaaku mere saamne kiya or jhapta mere uppar.. Mere andar itani energy nahi thi main usko maar paaun like koi chance he nahi tha, mujhe bus time nikaalna tha 6-7 minutes or woh bahot bhaari hone waala tha.. Main usase bachne laga..Lekin main dhirre dhirre behonsh horaha tha meri aankhein bandh horahi thi apne aap.. Minutes durr mere liye seconds muskill horahi thi..


Max- Oye rukk jaa..


Woh unka boss Max bola toh woh rukk gaya woh phone pe baat kar raha tha still.. Shayad Manaar se.. Idhar main khudse ladd raha tha honsh mein rehne k liye jo impossible hota jaa raha tha and main finally wahin girr padda or fir nahi uth paaya, maine koshish ki lekin mere sareer kaa koi hissa meri baat sunaney ko taiyaar nahi tha meri aankhein bandh thi jinhe main caah kar bhi nahi khol paa raha tha, main sun paa raha tha bus..


Max - Bhai moka hai aisa moka kabhi bhi kissi ko bhi nahi milega.. Aap North India k king ban jaaoge.. Boss iske sathi aatey honge.. Behosh hogaya.. Boss.. OK.. OK.Haan aap aajaao tabtak. Haan jinda rahega toh aapka otherwise seedha nikal jaana.. Behonsh padda hai.. Haan.. ." Hahahaha..


"Kya hua Max"


Max-Boss ne bola hai maardo isko isase badhiya moka kabhi nahi millega..


Ye sun sab hans paddey..


Max-Bus iska sir kaatke leke jaana hai.. Logon ko thodi pata chalega humne maara hai, iski khopdi boss dikha denge duniya ko.. Hatt be mujhe maarne dey.. Mujhe still belive nahi horaha main isko maarne waala hun tujhe pata hai Underworld ki duniya mein kya naam hoga mera.. Sanjay boss khud mujhe apna khaas banaenge. Bhagwan Kehte hain log isko..Oye uth..


Ye bolke usne mujhe laat maari..ek k baad ek kai laat.. But main caahke bhi nahi uth paaya..


Usne fir mujhe laat maari lekin nahi main nahi uth paaya, uthna durr main meri aankehin takk nahi khol paaya, main maano paralysed tha.. Woh Max mere pass baitha usne apna chaaku uthaya..


Max-Tu soch bhi nahi shakta tujhe maarke main kya ban jaaunga.. Mera khouff Pure India mein bolega.. Bhagwan ko maardunga main.. Hahahaha...


No... Kya ye mera end tha? AP the great ka end?? Moutt k itana kareeb aake main nahi haar shakta.. No way..


Max-Dont worry kuch he seconds mein khatam hojaaega sab.. Jyaada dard nahi dunga main.. Good Bye Bhagwan..


Ab usne chaaku uthaya, mere or moutt k bichmein sirf 1 feet ka fansla tha..


Max-Here we go...


Is this the end?? Maine khudse pucha and agle he second maine uss bandey ka hath pakkad liya usne chaaku chala diya tha mere heart k uppar seedha lekin maine uska hath pakkad liya chaaku mujhse 5 inches durr tha ek second mein or game over hojaata mera literally ek second mein.. But question ye tha maine toh uska hath dekha takk nahi toh fir maine uska hath kaise pakkad liya..


Maine ghumke usko laat maari jisase woh piche hatta and main jump maarke khadda hua toh mere saamne 4 bandey khaddey they hathon mein chaku liye jisme se ek toh mere bilkul close tha and 3 bandey thoda piche they.. Maine chaaron taraf dekha toh khudko kissi hospital k saamne paaya mere shoulder mein taaja ghaav tha chaaku ka i think.. Maine chaaron taraf dekha ye samajhne k liye ki ho kya raha hai but mujhe kuch yaad nahi aaya..


Main-Who are you?? Orr Mujhe itani shardi kyun lag rahi hai bhenchod...


Max-T. T. T. Tu.. Tu... Uth kaise gaya..


Main-Hmmm.. Uth gaya?? Ohh Haan, Main kai din baad he uthata hun, koi particular reason nahi hota but most probably mere uthane ka sabse bada reason gussa yaa fir drugs he hain but kuch drugs not all drugs.. And also jab ye chutiye ki jaan khatre mein hoti hai tab uthata hun main.. Ohh haan yaad aaya issiliye toh utha hun abhi main.. Jaan khatre mein thi chaaku tha. Tune maara tha kya be?? Bhenchod...


Woh mere saamne confused khadda tha..


Max-Tt. T. Tu behonsh hogaya tha na..


Main-Yeah.. Iske Behonsh hone k baad he main aata hun..


Max-Tttt.eri aankhon ko kya hua...


Main-Ye inbuilt feature hai.. Cool haina??


Max-Ttuuu...tu..tu..


Main-Oh I'm so sorry, so rude of me, introductions first.. Myself 2.0.. Or bhi bahot naam hain mere but teri aukaat yahi sunaney ki hai.. And also just to add main jaan se maardunga tumhe, tum sabko.. I will kill all of you..

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Yeh saale manaar ke bande hospital tak bhi pahoch gaye chale achcha yeh huwa ki Jack ka ilaj shuru ho gaya hoga
Or yaha 2.0 bhai sahab ki entry ho gayi or bahot sahi time per huwi nahi aaj Bhagwan khud Bhagwan ko piyare ho jaane wale the
Baherhal ab aayega Maza jab inko katega achche se 2.0
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