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Thriller WLHTA - The Serpent Of Underworld.

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Guys as you all know main jald he waapsi karne waala hun story pe but i need some help from you guys, itane din baad likhna thoda complicated hota hai kyunki itane din loop se bahaar tha main so agar tumlog Mein se koi free hai toh mujhe iss part ka ek overview chaahiye like pehle update se 281 update takk ka keval is part ka. Karna keval ye hai ki harr 30 Updates ka ek overview banao ki 1 se 30 updates k bich ye ye hua mota mota jo main cheejein hui hain unke baare Mein likho and then 30 se 60 Mein ye hua or aage 281 takk(keval iss part k baaki stories k nahi chahiye mujhe) . Agar koi ye kar lega toh mujhe thodi aasaani hogi likhne mein and main jaldi likh paaunga. Agar koi ye karna chaahta hai toh mujhe message karo Personal and batao mujhe ASAP, yahaan story pe post nahi karna only in messages. Thanks in advance..
 

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Bhai Update bhot Choty Hn Wo he Late aa Rhy hn
Ply waly Sa bhot Choty hn Yaar kuch To bara update Do
Oper sa ab 2 3 din bad aa rha ha hn to Kuch To bary hony Chy wait ka kuch to Faida ho na
 
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Bhai Update bhot Choty Hn Wo he Late aa Rhy hn
Ply waly Sa bhot Choty hn Yaar kuch To bara update Do
Oper sa ab 2 3 din bad aa rha ha hn to Kuch To bary hony Chy wait ka kuch to Faida ho na
Bhai tum konsi duniya mey hey
Yaha par Apna AP 316 bhai daily update de raha hey ...
 

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Bhai Update bhot Choty Hn Wo he Late aa Rhy hn
Ply waly Sa bhot Choty hn Yaar kuch To bara update Do
Oper sa ab 2 3 din bad aa rha ha hn to Kuch To bary hony Chy wait ka kuch to Faida ho na
Bandar ki tatti sungh ke nashe kiye they kya?
Daily updates aarahe hai fir bhi 2-3 din baad bol raha hai?
 

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Bro scene thora zyada lamba horaha hai i think i mean tow time he read and dodge AP 2.0
it need to be done quickly
 
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Mady-AP usse jinda chhod shaktey they tum...

Main-Maybe. But when i am fighting someone main jyaada aage ki nahi sochta, issi wajah se fights haarte hain log..

Mady-Yeah i guess. But he escaped again.. Cehra dekha uska??

Main-No.. Not really.. Mask tha uske chehre pe or maine jaise he uske hath se sniper durr ki uske sathi aagaye they kuch he seconds ki fight hui meri then woh turant nikal gaya..

Mady-Shit.. Good job by the way.. Tumne riots hone se roukk diye..

Main-Yeah i guess but ye MP k iraade he galat hain so better hoga iski previous party ko hint dedo ki ye kya caah raha hai taaki ye doobara kuch try kare usase pehle unke pass koi solution ready ho.

Mady-I'll do that myself..

Main-Let's go now.. Mujhe nikalna hoga media is about to show up..

Mady - Yeah.. I'll take care of it..

Humlog seedhiyon se niche aaye..

Mady-Kaisa tha woh??

Main-Matlab??

Mady-Fight hui naa usase?? Kaisa tha woh..

Main - Insanely good.. Mere munh pe paddey punch ko dekh k samjh he shakti ho.. Aise bahot kam log hain iss duniya mein jo ye kar shaktey hain...

Mady - Oh yeah.. Issliye mana kar rahi thi main akele matt jaana tum lucky ho bahot..

Main - I don't believe in luck i belive in myself..

Mady-Good for you.. Again good job.. You did good today.. We will find him don't worry..

Main-Hope so..Goodbye..

Ye bolke main seedha parking mein aaya Randy ko message kiya ki nikal gaya woh and main nikala hotel k liye, main bahot gussa tha currently bahot jyada.. Aamtorr par aisa hota hai nahi ki koi mujhse 2 baar bachke nikal jaaye.. I know main drugs and then pills ki wajah se kamjor tha, main puri tarag 2.0 nahi tha maybe 1.5 something and main apna best nahi de paa raha tha even best se kaafi niche tha main but still main itana kamjor nahi ho shakta no way.. Mujhe koi itana easily defeat nahi kar shakta fir caahe main apne 50% pe he kyun naa tha.. Iska matlab woh bahot badhiya tha but kaise i dont know.. But jo bhi tha meri khopdi bahot jyaada ghum gayi thi bahot jyaada.. Main hotel pohancha and wait karne laga baaki kaa... Sabse pehle Randy and Chang aaye..

Randy - What happened boss?? Kya hua wahaan??

Ye sunte he maine diya Randy k pait mein bhayanak punch or punch lagtey he woh apne ghutno par girra and turant he main palta Chang ki taraf, Chang samjh gaya tha issliye woh piche hattne laga i know woh tej tha but mujhse tej nahi mera punch laga uske pait mein and woh bhi girra khaanste hue apne ghutano pe... Randy ko jyada laga tha toh woh toh niche late he gaya tha..

Main-So tell me..

Main aage kuch bolta usase pehle gate fir khulla or Claire and Snow dono andar enter hue.. Claire thodi aage thi toh woh seedha mere saamne aai or usko bhi laga punch pait k andar same speed same power, main koi bhedbhav nahi karta Ladka ladki mein, Claire wahin niche girr gayi .. Ab Snow ye dekh ulte pair waapis jaane lagi lekin maine maari kick again uske pait mein or kick k force se woh room k bahaar he jaake girri..

And then main chair lagaake baitha wahaan..

Main-Main wahaan gand pe hath rakh k khudko bacha raha tha. So tell me..Tumlog Kahaan gand marwa rahe they ?

Randy - Mm.. Manmaain.. Main south mein thaaaa buildingsss k cctv footages check kar raha tha..Fuck boss.. It hurts..

Main-Chang..

Chang - Bb. B. Osss..

Main-Jorr se bol bhosdk..

Chang-Main North mein tha boss... Binoculars se pura area search k.. Kaarrr.. Raha tha..

Main-Claire..

Claire deewar kaa sahara leke khaddi hui...

Claire-Boss main.. Maa. A. Main...Stage k aas pass... Thi... Kahin koi Mele weapons se yaa Poison wagairaah se naa attack kardddd.d.ey...

Main-Snow..

Snow still bahaar he paddi thi..

Main-Snow i give you 5 seconds you better get the fuck back inside.. I'll break your fucking legs otherwise..

Snow rengti hui andar aai..

Snow -.. B. B. Bosss.. I was the.. Getaway driver in case bhaagna.. Ho.. Yaa.. Pichaaa.. Karna ho...

Main-So tumlog kaam kar rahe they but still tumlog se jyaada useless koi tha nahi.. Nice.. I was getting shot..Goli chal rahi thi mere uppar still tumlog mein se kissi ko koi idea nahi tha main kahaan hun yaa kya horaha hai.. Bhenchod ISS waali Mady tumlogon se jyaada useful thi.. Main dekh raha hun main toh chalo slow hua he hun thanks to the fucking drugs and medicines lekin tumlog, befaltu mein lazy hogaye hogaye ho... 0 intent.. 0 planning.. What the fuck are you guys even doing?? Uss din River k uppar 2 agents tumlogon se bachke bhaag gaye.. 2 agents?? Tumlog literally Asian underworld ki best team ho and tumlogon se 2 agents na sambhle.. Fucking pathetic.. Aaj wahi 2 agents mere uppar goliyaan chala rahe they.. Agar tumlog ne theek se kaam kiya hota toh aaj main uss MOD ki khopdi udaa deta.. Lekin nahi woh bachke bhaag Gaya.. Twice.. Mujhse.. Main kon hun Pata hai?? Tell me.. Kon hun main..

Main chilaaya..

Snow-Y. Y.. You are the Merchant Of Death Boss..

Main-Exactly.. I am the Fucking Merchant Of The Fucking Death. No one gets away from me no one.. Twice?? That's impossible.. He beat me twice.. How is that even possible?? That shouldn't happen.. Never...

Randy - S. S. Sorrry Boss..

Main-Yeah right.. Mere pass limited time hai idhar main ek ek second save kar raha hun taaki main mission k bichmein naa chala jaaun, otherwise main usko dhund k thok deta..Lekin agar main chala gaya toh fir?? Fir kya karoge?? Kaise haraoge usko?? Let me tell you, tumlog nahi harra shaktey usko.. Because tumlog baithtey baithtey weak hogaye ho.. Ye Randy Snow pura din headquarters ki kursi pe gand tika k baithtey rehtey hain.. Practice kiya karo.. Arena mein participate kiya karo.. Lekin nahi tumlog toh bhenchod VIP hogaye ho Arena mein fight karne se tumhari beijati hojaaegi.. Fucking loosers..

Chang - We will find him again boss..

Main-No you won't..Ab usse main dhundunga Main.. I'll find that bitch myself.. And I'll kill anyone that comes in between me and him.. MOD hun main.. Mujhe koi nahi harra shakta..

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Guys guys guys, kya noob types suggestions derahe ho main almost 8-9 saal se likh raha hun ye sab toh kya mujhe nahi pata story slow hai :sigh: jo permanent readers hain unhe pata hai meri story mein ek word bhi bina kissi reason k nahi hota toh story slow apne aap se toh hogi nahi so jo naye log suggestions derahe hain ki slow hai thoda thand rakho and trust me yahaan pe sab kuch kissi naa kissi reason se hota hai and relax padho review do and gayab. Simple.
 

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Mady-AP usse jinda chhod shaktey they tum...

Main-Maybe. But when i am fighting someone main jyaada aage ki nahi sochta, issi wajah se fights haarte hain log..

Mady-Yeah i guess. But he escaped again.. Cehra dekha uska??

Main-No.. Not really.. Mask tha uske chehre pe or maine jaise he uske hath se sniper durr ki uske sathi aagaye they kuch he seconds ki fight hui meri then woh turant nikal gaya..

Mady-Shit.. Good job by the way.. Tumne riots hone se roukk diye..

Main-Yeah i guess but ye MP k iraade he galat hain so better hoga iski previous party ko hint dedo ki ye kya caah raha hai taaki ye doobara kuch try kare usase pehle unke pass koi solution ready ho.

Mady-I'll do that myself..

Main-Let's go now.. Mujhe nikalna hoga media is about to show up..

Mady - Yeah.. I'll take care of it..

Humlog seedhiyon se niche aaye..

Mady-Kaisa tha woh??

Main-Matlab??

Mady-Fight hui naa usase?? Kaisa tha woh..

Main - Insanely good.. Mere munh pe paddey punch ko dekh k samjh he shakti ho.. Aise bahot kam log hain iss duniya mein jo ye kar shaktey hain...

Mady - Oh yeah.. Issliye mana kar rahi thi main akele matt jaana tum lucky ho bahot..

Main - I don't believe in luck i belive in myself..

Mady-Good for you.. Again good job.. You did good today.. We will find him don't worry..

Main-Hope so..Goodbye..

Ye bolke main seedha parking mein aaya Randy ko message kiya ki nikal gaya woh and main nikala hotel k liye, main bahot gussa tha currently bahot jyada.. Aamtorr par aisa hota hai nahi ki koi mujhse 2 baar bachke nikal jaaye.. I know main drugs and then pills ki wajah se kamjor tha, main puri tarag 2.0 nahi tha maybe 1.5 something and main apna best nahi de paa raha tha even best se kaafi niche tha main but still main itana kamjor nahi ho shakta no way.. Mujhe koi itana easily defeat nahi kar shakta fir caahe main apne 50% pe he kyun naa tha.. Iska matlab woh bahot badhiya tha but kaise i dont know.. But jo bhi tha meri khopdi bahot jyaada ghum gayi thi bahot jyaada.. Main hotel pohancha and wait karne laga baaki kaa... Sabse pehle Randy and Chang aaye..

Randy - What happened boss?? Kya hua wahaan??

Ye sunte he maine diya Randy k pait mein bhayanak punch or punch lagtey he woh apne ghutno par girra and turant he main palta Chang ki taraf, Chang samjh gaya tha issliye woh piche hattne laga i know woh tej tha but mujhse tej nahi mera punch laga uske pait mein and woh bhi girra khaanste hue apne ghutano pe... Randy ko jyada laga tha toh woh toh niche late he gaya tha..

Main-So tell me..

Main aage kuch bolta usase pehle gate fir khulla or Claire and Snow dono andar enter hue.. Claire thodi aage thi toh woh seedha mere saamne aai or usko bhi laga punch pait k andar same speed same power, main koi bhedbhav nahi karta Ladka ladki mein, Claire wahin niche girr gayi .. Ab Snow ye dekh ulte pair waapis jaane lagi lekin maine maari kick again uske pait mein or kick k force se woh room k bahaar he jaake girri..

And then main chair lagaake baitha wahaan..

Main-Main wahaan gand pe hath rakh k khudko bacha raha tha. So tell me..Tumlog Kahaan gand marwa rahe they ?

Randy - Mm.. Manmaain.. Main south mein thaaaa buildingsss k cctv footages check kar raha tha..Fuck boss.. It hurts..

Main-Chang..

Chang - Bb. B. Osss..

Main-Jorr se bol bhosdk..

Chang-Main North mein tha boss... Binoculars se pura area search k.. Kaarrr.. Raha tha..

Main-Claire..

Claire deewar kaa sahara leke khaddi hui...

Claire-Boss main.. Maa. A. Main...Stage k aas pass... Thi... Kahin koi Mele weapons se yaa Poison wagairaah se naa attack kardddd.d.ey...

Main-Snow..

Snow still bahaar he paddi thi..

Main-Snow i give you 5 seconds you better get the fuck back inside.. I'll break your fucking legs otherwise..

Snow rengti hui andar aai..

Snow -.. B. B. Bosss.. I was the.. Getaway driver in case bhaagna.. Ho.. Yaa.. Pichaaa.. Karna ho...

Main-So tumlog kaam kar rahe they but still tumlog se jyaada useless koi tha nahi.. Nice.. I was getting shot..Goli chal rahi thi mere uppar still tumlog mein se kissi ko koi idea nahi tha main kahaan hun yaa kya horaha hai.. Bhenchod ISS waali Mady tumlogon se jyaada useful thi.. Main dekh raha hun main toh chalo slow hua he hun thanks to the fucking drugs and medicines lekin tumlog, befaltu mein lazy hogaye hogaye ho... 0 intent.. 0 planning.. What the fuck are you guys even doing?? Uss din River k uppar 2 agents tumlogon se bachke bhaag gaye.. 2 agents?? Tumlog literally Asian underworld ki best team ho and tumlogon se 2 agents na sambhle.. Fucking pathetic.. Aaj wahi 2 agents mere uppar goliyaan chala rahe they.. Agar tumlog ne theek se kaam kiya hota toh aaj main uss MOD ki khopdi udaa deta.. Lekin nahi woh bachke bhaag Gaya.. Twice.. Mujhse.. Main kon hun Pata hai?? Tell me.. Kon hun main..

Main chilaaya..

Snow-Y. Y.. You are the Merchant Of Death Boss..

Main-Exactly.. I am the Fucking Merchant Of The Fucking Death. No one gets away from me no one.. Twice?? That's impossible.. He beat me twice.. How is that even possible?? That shouldn't happen.. Never...

Randy - S. S. Sorrry Boss..

Main-Yeah right.. Mere pass limited time hai idhar main ek ek second save kar raha hun taaki main mission k bichmein naa chala jaaun, otherwise main usko dhund k thok deta..Lekin agar main chala gaya toh fir?? Fir kya karoge?? Kaise haraoge usko?? Let me tell you, tumlog nahi harra shaktey usko.. Because tumlog baithtey baithtey weak hogaye ho.. Ye Randy Snow pura din headquarters ki kursi pe gand tika k baithtey rehtey hain.. Practice kiya karo.. Arena mein participate kiya karo.. Lekin nahi tumlog toh bhenchod VIP hogaye ho Arena mein fight karne se tumhari beijati hojaaegi.. Fucking loosers..

Chang - We will find him again boss..

Main-No you won't..Ab usse main dhundunga Main.. I'll find that bitch myself.. And I'll kill anyone that comes in between me and him.. MOD hun main.. Mujhe koi nahi harra shakta..

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Ab AP khud dhundega aur use pakad lega us saste MOD ko
 
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