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Guys as you all know main jald he waapsi karne waala hun story pe but i need some help from you guys, itane din baad likhna thoda complicated hota hai kyunki itane din loop se bahaar tha main so agar tumlog Mein se koi free hai toh mujhe iss part ka ek overview chaahiye like pehle update se 281 update takk ka keval is part ka. Karna keval ye hai ki harr 30 Updates ka ek overview banao ki 1 se 30 updates k bich ye ye hua mota mota jo main cheejein hui hain unke baare Mein likho and then 30 se 60 Mein ye hua or aage 281 takk(keval iss part k baaki stories k nahi chahiye mujhe) . Agar koi ye kar lega toh mujhe thodi aasaani hogi likhne mein and main jaldi likh paaunga. Agar koi ye karna chaahta hai toh mujhe message karo Personal and batao mujhe ASAP, yahaan story pe post nahi karna only in messages. Thanks in advance..
 

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Main nahaake fresh hua nasta kiya toh Claire ne ek recording bheji thi mere pass maine play ki toh Jagdish and Shruti he they.. 20 minutes pehle ki thi recording..


Jagdish - Merese related location par raids hogayi hon poori toh paise ki baat karein??


Shruti - Listen.. Woh bus raid aise he..


Jagdish - Arrey aise he kyun mujhe dhund rahe they ye bolo, ofcourse dhundoge he kaam hai tumhaara i dont mind.. Jo caahiye woh karo OPEN CHALLENGE.. Dhundana jaari rakho phone tap karo trace karo mere bando ko uthaao kuch bhi karo.. I don't mind bhai karoge kyun nahi tumhaare friends ko kidnap kiya hai maine, main Tumhaari jagah hota toh main bhi yahi karta issue woh nahi hai.. Lekin agar ye 2 jinda caahiye naa toh 2 he options hain tumhaare pass yaa toh agle 36 ghanto mein mere 20 crore rupaye dedo yaa agle 36 ghanto mein mujhe maardo.. Tisra koi option nahi hai.. Samjhi?? So jo mann kar raha hai woh karo main vaada karta hun 36 ghanto se pehle nahi maarunga inko caahe tum kuch bhi karo lekin kal shyaam 7 baje se pehle pehle mere paise mujhe nahi mile toh ye dono dead hain..1 second bhi uppar hui toh bhi.. Or fir uske baad main tumhaare harr agent ko maarunga or tabtak maarta rahunga jabtak main khud nahi marr jaata...


Shruti - Le. Lelkeiin Paise kahaan se laun main.


Jagdish - Hahaha.. Woh tum jaano.. Tumhaari marji option 2 he hain yaa paise yaa meri laash.. You are free to do whatever you want.. Dhund lo toh Yudh hoga ab yudh mein tum jeeti toh theek or agar main jeet gaya naa toh apna sab kuch kho dogi. Goodluck..


Call disconnected..


Bhenchod.. Kya he banda hai ye maadarchod.. Maanana padega attitude hai bandey mein.. Bhenchod kidnappers boltey hain police ko matt bulaana mujhe dhundana matt or ye maadarchod bol raha hai gand mein dum hai toh dhund lo.. Waah re lawde.. This makes it more interesting.. Banda smart hai.. Maja aaega.. Bahot maja..


Khair maine woh recording firse suni but iss baar koi surrounding sound nahi thi.. Udhar bhenchod ye Armaan ki family ne koi police complaint nahi ki i guess Shruti ne samjha diya unhe toh maine Jiya ko waapis bulaa liya.. Lunch time takk bhi Humlog khaali hath baithtey they bhenchod time nikalta jaa raha tha or lawda kuch mill nahi raha tha.. Issliye humlog wahin lunch k liye baithtey..


Abeer-Bhenchod gaya toh gaya kahaan??apne sehar mein nahi hua toh??


Main-Naaa.. Hai toh yahin i am 1000% sure..


Anjali - fir gaya kahaan??


Main- 5000 Square kilometre ka area hai 600000 ki population hai kahin bhi chipp gaya hoga.. Waise bhi..


Main aage bolta usase pehle mera phone baja jo Shruti kaa tha.. Maine sabko chup rehne kaa ishara Kiya and phone uthaaya..


Main-Ji madam..


Shruti - Tumne kaha tha koi bhi help caahiye ho toh tumhe bolun, majaak kar rahe they yaa serious they??


Main-Lo ji majaak kyun karunga i was damn serious..


Shruti - then i need your help..


Main-Arrey boliye boliye kya help caahiye..


Shruti - Humaare office aao lekin akele, koi bhi sath nahi hona chahiye tumhaare.. This is serious koi bhi nahi..


Main- Sorry mam ye toh possible nahi hai actually meri bodyguard hai Ami uske bina mere ghar waale mujhe gharke bahaar bhi nahi jaane detey toh woh toh aaegi he aaegi agar main aaunga toh.. But usko kuch atta patta nahi hai aadhi hindi toh samjh naa aati usse..


Shruti - Trustable hai??


Main-Mujhse bhi jyaada..


Shruti - Ok.. But keval woh uske alawa koi bhi nahi hona chahiye tumhaare sath or naa he kissi ko pata chalna caahiye..


Main-Done.. Aata hun..


Shruti - Ok..


Call disconnected..


Abeer - No way usne help maangi..


Main-But jaana akela hai..


Anjali - Haan suna, but this is huge dikkat he koi naa hai.. Humlog idhar lagtey hain tum unke sath lago better hai dono taraf se kaam horaha hai..


Main-Yeah.. Apne hissab se Sab chaalu rakho..Mere orders ka wait karneka.. Ami lets go..


Ami - Let's go..


Bhenchod finally lawdi ki ego ne jawaab de he diya, dena he tha Jagdish ne gand faad di thi unki, specially ye Open CHALLENGE dene k baad, ki kuch bhi karo..


Main or Ami nikale unka office city k middle mein tha toh humlog pohanchey wahan gaadi park ki and andar aaye aaj security check nahi kiya lawdon ne, ulta mujhe andar takk chhodke bhi aaye.. Andar hall se hotey hue humein ek bade se meeting room mein laaya gaya jahaan 9-10 officers mojjud they Shruti bhi wahin thi saamne ek board k uppar saari details likhi hui thi iss case ki..


Main-Good Afternoon madam.. Boliye how can i help you..??


Shruti - First of all few quick questions..


Main-Go ahead..


Shruti - Please reply seriously this is a big mission for us.. Tumlog Pk Ko Follow kar rahe they ussdin toh uske pass kya tha pata hai??


Main-Drugs yaa paise, bags they uske pass..


Shruti - Really??


Main-Oh yeah humne rakhte hue dekha tha gaadi mein..


Shruti - Ok.. Lekin gaadi mein toh humein koi bag nahi mile..


Main-Jagdish leke bhaag gaya hoga obviously ussi ko dene k liye toh PK wahaan gaya tha..


Shruti - Nahi Jagdish nahi leke gaya..


Main-Toh..? Or tumhe ye kaise pata??


Shruti - Main jo tumhe bataaane jaa rahi ho woh strictly confidential hai agar iss room k bahaar ye baat gayi toh it's over samjhe.. Main kabhi tumhe trust nahi karungi..


Main-Bindaas bolo..


Shruti - Unn bags mein Jagdish k 20 crore Rupaye they or woh paise gayab hogaye wahaan se, Jagdish nahi leke gaya woh or i am 1000% sure meri team ne bhi nahi liye woh bags. Toh ab Jagdish k liye woh paise bahot jyada important hain i dont know kiss liye but yeah bahot jyaada important hain toh usko laga ki woh paise humne haddap liye issliye usne mere 2 agents ko kidnap karliya hai or badle mein woh 20 crore rupaye maang raha hai..


Main - What the fuck..? Fucking hell.. This is bad..


Shruti - Yeah kyunki humaare pass paise nahi hain woh toh denge kahaan se? And no way NCB 20 Crore rupaye degi ek drug dealer ko..


Main-Obviously..


Shruti - So usne humein kal shyaam 7 baje takk kaa time diya hai paise dene kaa otherwise woh un Dono ko maardega and uske baad ek ek kar or agents ko bhi maarega..


Main-That's dangerous..


Shruti - Hum try kar chuke usko dhundane ki but humein nahi milla woh.. Since tum local ho and ye sab pehle bhi kar chuke ho countless times jabki humaari job ye nahi hai issliye maine tumhe bulaaya...We need your help..


Main-Sure sure.. I'll help you..


Shruti - Jagdish ne bola hai humlog kal shyaam takk jo caahe woh kar shaktey hain usse dhundane ki try kar shaktey hain usse maarne ki try kar shaktey hain lekin keval kal shyaam 7 baje takk uske baad agar usse paise nahi mille toh woh maardega dono ko..


Main-Great.. Lets do it then.


Shruti - Or dhyaan rahe tum isme kissi dusare ko involve nahi kar shaktey specially police waalon ko i know woh Tumhaari team hai but i dont trust anyone apart from you..


Main-Copy..


Shruti - So kya karna caahiye..??


Main-Obviously bachaana caahiye unhe pehle toh.. So plan of action 1000% Jagdish yahin hai issi city mein, obviously uski known locations par tumlog already raids maar chuke hoge toh question hai woh kahaan hai.. Calls kar raha hai toh obviously uske sath koi hacker wagairaah hoga jo usko track trace tap hone se bacha raha hoga then koi local middlemen hoga jisne uske liye weapons wagairaah sabkuch arrange karwaaya hoga..Locations time to time change kar raha hai woh 1000% kyunki ek jagah rehne kaa risk le nahi shakta woh.. So pehle toh apne officers ko pure city mein failaa do specially un areas mein jahaan police patrolling kam hai jahaan rukne kaa risk le shakta hai woh..


Shruti - Ok.. Nilesh..


Nilesh - Karta hun mam..


Fir Shruti mujhe samjhaane lagi ki Jagdish ne phone par kya kya bola jo already pata tha mujhe.. Then unhe kahaan se kidnap kiya gaya wagairaah wagairaah useless information..


Main-Dono ko ek sath uthaaya??


Shruti - Yeah dono sath they as Armaan Mama ka ladka hai Piyush kaa..


Main-I see.. Ek second.. Ek second.. Mama..


Shruti - What??


Main-I got a plan.. Brilliant plan..


Bhenchod iska maine pehle kyun nahi socha.. Maine turant Chang ko call kiya..


Shruti - Maine bola tha naa kissi ko involve nahi karna..


Main-Tumne bola police ko involve nahi karna issliye just trust me jin jin ko main involve karunga woh police k opposite honge.. Or unhe koi matlab nahi hoga woh kaam kar kyun rahe hain woh bus kardenge bina puche..


Chang - Haan boss.. Still no clue..


Main-Woh sab chhod tu, 2 Ladkiyaan hain woh jinhone chaaku maara tha mujhe.. Dono ki details bhej raha hun unmein se ek toh Jagdish ki bhaanji hai lekin dusari common ladki hai uski family waalon k through pakkad usko most probably gurugram k kissi illegal safe house mein chippi hongi woh lekin wahaan dono ko jaane ki jarurat nahi hai uss dusari ladki k ghar se uska number nikalwa obviously ghar toh baat kar he rahi hogi then Claire ko bolke trace kar and then Gurugram jaa or uss Jagdish ki bhaanji kaa number nikalwa .. Jagdish ki laadli hai uski bhaanji uske contact mein rahe bina nahi reh shakta woh.. Bhaanji kaa naam hai Sandhya or dusari Pallavi..


Chang - Got you. Claire ko uski family k pass bhejta hun main gurugram jaata hun...


Main-Exactly..


Call disconnected..


Bhen k lawde jaaega kahaan..


Continued..
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Maine us dusari ladki ki details bheji Claire k pass jo Ashish ne uss din bheji thi mere pass thankfully woh humse next district ki rehne waali thi or uski family udhar he thi.. Jaise pehle mujhe PK or Jagdish ki phone call se pata chala tha ki Pk ne Sandhya or Pallavi ko Gurugram mein hide karwa diya tha..


Shruti - Ye Jagdish ki bhaanji kahaan se aai??


Main-Lambi kahaani hai baadmein bataaunga..


Shruti - Ye Jagdish pakka iske contact mein hoga??


Main-1000%.. Iske kehne par toh Jagdish ne raah chalte londey ko apne business ki core mein shaamil kar liya tha itana bada risk leraha hai toh obviously laadli hai..


Shruti - Yeah..


Idhar Chang Gurugram k liye nikala or Claire uss ladki k ghar k liye.. Kareeb 1 ghantey baad Claire uske ghar pohanch gayi thi ab claire thehri claire usne uss ladki ki maa k phone se ek recent called contacts nikaale and unmein se Pallavi kaa contact dhund liya tha or Unki exact location Chang k pass bhejdi thi jo 1-2 ghantey mein unki location takk pohanch jaaega.. Ab mujhe bus wait karna tha.. I am 1000% sure mujhe ye ladki Jagdish takk pohancha degi..


Mera wait pura hua dopehar k 3 baje jab Chang kaa call aaya mere pass..


Chang - Hogaya boss..


Main-Finally koi kaam aaya lawde tu..


Chang - Shut up.. So uss Sandhya k phone mein 3 he contacts they ek uski maa kaa and baaki 2 k 2 Jagdish k.. Unmein se ek number active hai abhi jisse Claire trace kar rahi hai..Or ye woh numbers nahi hain jisase woh Shruti ko call karta hai..


Main-Obviously personal numbers honge woh..


Chang - Yeah..


Main-Awesome.. Awesome..kaise liya number??


Chang - Flirt karke..


Main-Jaa be...


Chang-Arrey..Maa kasam boss..


Main-Tu bc flirt bhi karleta hai..


Chang - Fuck you.. Maine thodi derr najar milaai usase uski balcony mein thi woh fir niche aai toh main saamne aagaya and bola number do usne diya maine kahaa laao mera number add kardeta hun bus add karne mein baaki numbers nikaal liye..


Main-Shabbas.. Shabbas..


Chang - Claire jaise jaise location bataaegi main inform karta hun aapko..


Main-Yeah..


Call disconnected..


Shruti - What??


Main-Jagdish mill jaaega bahot jald.. Dont worry..


Shruti - Ok..


Kareeb 5 minutes baad Claire kaa call aaya mere pass..


Claire - Boss aapke pass Jagdish k coordinates bheje hain.. Lekin boss uska tracker jump kar raha hai time to time. Ek location nahi mill rahi..


Main-Rukk main check karta hun..


Maine coordinates check kiye..


Main-Pagal Signal nahi jump kar raha woh khud jump kar raha hai.. Matlab woh move kar raha hai koi vehicle mein hai woh.. Signal kabse ek he road k uppar jump karega bhalla.. Seedha jaaraha hai woh..


Claire - Yeah.. Shit.


Main-Ek kaam kar iski live location share kar mere sath..


Claire - Done..


Main-Kitana delay hai?


Claire - 5-6 seconds max..


Main-Chal good job..


Call disconnected..


Shruti - Kya hua??


Main-Let's go... Mill gaya..Tum or Nilesh tumlog mere sath aaoge baaki jo bhi hai undercover cars mein honge.. Weapons ready hone caahiye..


Shruti - Ok..


Humlog nikal he rahe they ki ek agent chilaaya..


"Mam Jagdish kaa phone hai"


Shruti-Kya bolun usse??


Main-Yahi ki tum dhund rahi ho apne agents mein ki kahaan leak ho shakti hai paise ki.. Lekin bolo ki tum bhi toh apne unn aadmiyo ko dhundo jo jinda bach nikale they wahaan se or kya pata paise woh he le gaye hon ye bhi toh possible hai.. Usko ussi k logon k khilaaf bhadkaao obviously ye bhi possible hai ki paise ussi kaa koi banda legaya ho..


Shruti - Yeah..


Main-Or ye matt bataana usse ki main hun tumhaare sath..


Shruti - Kyun??


Main-Kyunki usse agar pata chal gaya ki main yahaan hun toh woh apna open challenge bandh kardega kyunki usse pata hai main dhund lunga usse.. Woh tumhe he challenge de shakta hai kyunki usse pakka pata hai tumlog nahi dhund shaktey usse kyunki tumhaara kaam nahi hai ye.. Jaao jaldi ab.


Shruti ne phone uthaaya maine idhar headphones lagaaye..


Shruti - Hello..


Jagdish - Good Evening madam.. Kahaan takk pohanchey mere paise??


Shruti - Main dhund rahi hun, wahaan bahot saare agents they...


Jagdish - Yeah yeah i know..


Shruti - But please tell me kya tumne apne unn aadmiyo se interrogation kar lee jo wahaan se jinda bache they?? Ye bhi toh ho shakta hai woh lega ye hon paise??


Jagdish - Mere alaawa koi jinda bhi bacha tha??


Shruti - Yeah.. Sabse pehle 4-5 log bhaage they piche waali deewar se.. Uske alaawa workers nahi ho shaktey kyunki unko maine he nikaala tha wahaan se bahaar unke pass kuch nahi tha..


Jagdish - Itane paise leke bhaagna impossible hai.. Tum apni deadline dhyaan rakho..26 ghantey he bache hain..


Shruti - Main puri koshish kar rahi hun please believe me..


Jagdish - Oh i belive you for sure.. I know tumhe apne agents ki fikar hai.. But remember the clock is ticking..


Call disconnected..


Shruti - It didn't work.


Main-Oh it worked.. Suna nahi uski awaaj mein kya tension thi woh dikhaana nahi caahta tha but it worked..Don't worry.. Let's go..


Hum turant bahaar aaye meri Range rover mein Main Ami Shruti and Nilesh they uske alawa 3 gaadiyaan or thi jisme 10-12 agents orr they jinse Shruti connected thi walkie talkie se..


Main - Current location Camp Chowk k pass hai.. Rukka hua hai woh.. Kyunki call mei koi additional sound nahi aai..


Shruti - But apne Sath Piyush or Armaan ko gaadi mein leke sehar mein thodi ghum raha hoga woh.. Woh bhi sehar k sabse populated or patrolled area mein..


Main-Lekin Jagdish khud bhi toh milega.. Usase toh fir uggalwa he lenge..


Shruti - True..


Jagdish ki location kai derr takk wahin rahi or tabtak humlog pohanch gaye wahaan ab camp chowk sehar kaa middle point hai toh wahaan traffic bahot jyaada tha, ab obviously woh road par toh khadda ho nahi shakta tha itani derr, location exact nahi thi 60-70 meters kaa circle tha toh humne gaadi ek baar seedhi nikaali wahaan se but side mein parked gaadiyon mein kuch na dikha humein..Wahaan se main galiyon mein jaake fir waapis modke chowk se gujara lekin still kuch nahi dikha mujhe..


Shruti - Ye location sahi hai pakka??


Main-Yeah.. Refresh bhi kar chuka still same hai location..


Shruti - But mujhe koi gaadi nahi dikhi suspicious..


Main-Yeah dikhi toh mmuu.. Oh fucking hell..


Shruti - What??


Main-Woh truck dekho.. Driver baitha hai usme.. Passenger bhi hain 2.. Kapdon se kahaan truck driver lag rahe hain woh.. Ye truck suru se khadda hai yahaan naa he yelog kuch kar rahe hain.. Or piche container hai yaani Jagdish Piyush Armaan sab yahin hain..


Shruti - Shit..What now?.


Main-Now it's on you.. Risk lena hai yaa nahi??


Shruti - Dusara kya option hai.. 20 crore kahaan se dungi..


Main- Cool.. 10-15 log honge.. Apne logon ko bolo humaare piche rahein humein backup rahe or goli tab he chalaaein jab clear shot ho agar kissi civilian ko goli lag gayi toh main ulta goli maardunga unhe..


Shruti - Our team is well trained.. Don't worry..


Main-Ok then.. Lets move..


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Thanks for the support bhidulog keep supporting as always update Posted read and give reviews same deal on hai apni.
Main usually ye time update deta nahi hun but this update is dedicated to one of my closest and oldest readers Guffy as a birthday gift.
Happy Birthday Guffy
 
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