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Guys as you all know main jald he waapsi karne waala hun story pe but i need some help from you guys, itane din baad likhna thoda complicated hota hai kyunki itane din loop se bahaar tha main so agar tumlog Mein se koi free hai toh mujhe iss part ka ek overview chaahiye like pehle update se 281 update takk ka keval is part ka. Karna keval ye hai ki harr 30 Updates ka ek overview banao ki 1 se 30 updates k bich ye ye hua mota mota jo main cheejein hui hain unke baare Mein likho and then 30 se 60 Mein ye hua or aage 281 takk(keval iss part k baaki stories k nahi chahiye mujhe) . Agar koi ye kar lega toh mujhe thodi aasaani hogi likhne mein and main jaldi likh paaunga. Agar koi ye karna chaahta hai toh mujhe message karo Personal and batao mujhe ASAP, yahaan story pe post nahi karna only in messages. Thanks in advance..
 

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Humlog ne Meerut k issue ko sort out kardiya tha or iss tarah sort out kiya tha ki agle election mein aadhi seats mere naam se he aajaane waali thi, inshort ektarafa hawa bana di thi UP mein maine totally ektarfa.. Ab humlog ko Meerut se nikalna tha ASAP kyunki wahaan city mein Riya ek problem mein thi, actually Riya ki best friend "Vaani" Drugs lene lag gayi thi or unke jaal mein buri tarah se fans gayi thi or Riya usko bachane ki koshish kar rahi thi or main sure tha ki Riya usko bachaane k liye kissi bhi hadd takk jaa shakti thi issliye mujhe Riya ko bachana tha.


Humlog Meerut se turant free hotey he shyaam 6:30 baje nikale CM ki dusari gaadi leke, 3 ghantey kaa raasta tha Jack Drive kar raha tha Vinny aage tha and main and Abeer piche..


Abeer- Bhai UP mein toh abki baar campaigning ki jarurat bhi nahi padegi bc.. Kya hype create ki hai tune..


Main - Yeah.. Mahool he badal diya maine..


Almost 3 ghantey kaa safar pura karke 9:30 baje humlog city pohanchey uske baad traffic se bachtey hue 10 baje haweli pohanchey gaadi park ki and andar aaye toh Bhai, Rishi, Mangal And Babhi bahaar lawn mein ghum rahe they, dinner k baad walk kar rahe they i guess..Humein dekhtey he wohlog humaare pass aaye..Humlog sabse galle mille..


Babhi-Tumlog subah aane waale they naa??


Main-Naah raatko kya kartey wahaan aagaye..


Babhi-Gadhe toh bataake aaya karo naa maine abhi bacha hua khaana guards quarters mein pohanchwa diya..


Jack - Babhi Main toh wahin khaa lunga fir..


Babhi - wahaan kya karega yahaan garam banaaungi main yahi khaa lena..


Jack - Even better Babhi..


Deva-Aao andar thakk gaye hoge..


Main room mein aaya fresh hua then niche aake dinner kiya uske baad sabne humaari tareefon k pull baandhe, uske baad babhi ne mujhe meri injury ko leke khari khoti sunaai then dinner karke main apne room mein aaya bhenchod bahot thakk gaya tha lekin nind aane waali thi nahi, uske liye dose caahiye thi kyunki Addicted main bhi tha ab uss pure cocaine kaa uske bina mera sareer switch off hone lagta tha, lekin main uske Uppar control karlunga because ahista-2 main uski doses kam karta jaa raha tha jo best tareeka hai.. Maine ab apne pouch se thodi c dose lee and then chain ki nind soya..Main alarm lagaake soya tha kyunki subah mujhe college jaana tha because Riya kaa dhyaan main yahaan baithtey - 2 nahi rakh shakta tha issliye subah main alarm se utha and fresh hoke naha dhoke niche aaya nahane mein mujhe bahot dikkat hui meri injury ki wajah se, mera pura kandha or galle ka thode sa hissa injured tha or kaafi pain hota tha usko cheddne par issliye usko bacha - 2 k nahaaya main and then ready hoke niche aaya.. Toh Niche Rishi, Mangal, Abeer, Bhai Sam and Ravi naasta kar rahe they..


Main-Sun Mangal kuch din or tu he sambhaal le meetings wagairaah.. Mujhe Drugs related ek lead follow karni hai.


Mangal-No problem..


Main-Koi bada issue ho toh main aajaaunga..


Deva-Yeah yeah woh karlega, tu ye drugs k game ko roukk yaad haina tune he kaha tha agar issko roka nahi gaya toh sab khatam hojaaega..


Main-Yeah yeah main roukk lunga bhai don't worry..


Deva-I know..


Humlog breakfast k baad college k liye nikale classes mein time tha abhi lekin Riya time se pehle he college aati hai and then yaa toh Abhi gang k sath yaa fir Vaani or uski ek do or friends k sath canteen mein yaa fir college Lawn mein baith jaati hai, ye jaankari maine Apne chele Shubam se nikalwaai thi, Shubam yaad haina college senior Rohit kaa kind of right hand or mera khaas chela...


Ab issliye humlog time se pehle college aaye, Riya ne mujhe call kiya tha lekin woh kuch bol nahi paai, i know usse help caahiye thi lekin she was too embarrassed to ask me for help..


Subham humein college parking mein he milla Rohit bhi aagaya tha unhe maine situation samjhaa di thi..


Shubam-Bhai Riya Canteen mein hai Abhi gang k sath baithi hai, uski woh friend aai nahi hai..


Ravi-Kahin nasha maarke paddi hogi aaegi kaise...


Main-Ye Vaani kaa address hai?? Kahaan rehti hai ye??


Shubam-Yahaan just piche bhai..


Main-Yahaan?? Washrooms mein bhenchod??


Rohit - Dafukkkk???


Shubam-Areey nahi bhai Girls hostel mein college k piche..


Main-Toh bawligand aise bol na, yahaan just piche se kya matlab hai.. Toh ek kaam kar jaa dekh k aa wahaan hai bhi yaa nahi.. Or hai toh kya kar rahi hai...


Shubam-Kya baat kar rahe ho bhai, gand tudwa doge kya, girls hostel mein kaise ghussunga..


Main-Haan bc ye bhi hai.. Koi ladki hogi naa be teri contact bhenchod tu toh Ranbir Kapoor hai jab bhi dekho ladkiyon k bich mein hota hai..


Shubam-Heheheh.. Woh toh bus yun he bhai..


Main-Bhosdk blush kya kar raha hai tareef nahi kar raha bawligand, kaam karwa kissi ladki se ye..


Shubam-Done samjho bhai..


Main-Or haan mera naam nahi aana caahiye kahin bhi..


Shubam-Chance he nahi hai bhai, hogaya samjho..


Main-Good..


Humlog canteen aaye toh Riya wahin baithi thi Abhi gang bhi thi wahaan, Anaa bhi wahin thi bhenchod in dono k bich mein he piss jaaunga main.. Waise toh main Anaa k sath apni relationship ko sudhaarne mein laga hua tha lekin filhaal Riya ko meri jyaada jarurat thi, i know humaara breakup hua tha and all blah blah, lekin still main kissi ko bhi yun desperate times mein akela nahi chhodta, i stand by my friends.. Because that's who i am, or ab kuch bhi hojaae main Riya ko kuch bhi nahi hone dunga..


Continued..
 

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Update Posted bhidulog, and i am really sorry for the delay.
Also mujhe pata hai itane din baad ek update kaafi nahi hai but still bahot time baad likhna suru kiya hai maine toh itana he likh paaya but agle kuch din mein main updates kaa quota pura kardunga kyunki May month k baad main firse gayab hone waala hun kuch din k liye as mere exams aarahe hain issliye usase pehle main ye pichle waala quota pura kardunga then exams mein busy ho jaaunga uske baad fir waapis aake exams ka quota bhi pura kardunga.
Issliye Keep supporting as always.. :thanx:
 

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Update-61(Riya)

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Humlog ne Meerut k issue ko sort out kardiya tha or iss tarah sort out kiya tha ki agle election mein aadhi seats mere naam se he aajaane waali thi, inshort ektarafa hawa bana di thi UP mein maine totally ektarfa.. Ab humlog ko Meerut se nikalna tha ASAP kyunki wahaan city mein Riya ek problem mein thi, actually Riya ki best friend "Vaani" Drugs lene lag gayi thi or unke jaal mein buri tarah se fans gayi thi or Riya usko bachane ki koshish kar rahi thi or main sure tha ki Riya usko bachaane k liye kissi bhi hadd takk jaa shakti thi issliye mujhe Riya ko bachana tha.


Humlog Meerut se turant free hotey he shyaam 6:30 baje nikale CM ki dusari gaadi leke, 3 ghantey kaa raasta tha Jack Drive kar raha tha Vinny aage tha and main and Abeer piche..


Abeer- Bhai UP mein toh abki baar campaigning ki jarurat bhi nahi padegi bc.. Kya hype create ki hai tune..


Main - Yeah.. Mahool he badal diya maine..


Almost 3 ghantey kaa safar pura karke 9:30 baje humlog city pohanchey uske baad traffic se bachtey hue 10 baje haweli pohanchey gaadi park ki and andar aaye toh Bhai, Rishi, Mangal And Babhi bahaar lawn mein ghum rahe they, dinner k baad walk kar rahe they i guess..Humein dekhtey he wohlog humaare pass aaye..Humlog sabse galle mille..


Babhi-Tumlog subah aane waale they naa??


Main-Naah raatko kya kartey wahaan aagaye..


Babhi-Gadhe toh bataake aaya karo naa maine abhi bacha hua khaana guards quarters mein pohanchwa diya..


Jack - Babhi Main toh wahin khaa lunga fir..


Babhi - wahaan kya karega yahaan garam banaaungi main yahi khaa lena..


Jack - Even better Babhi..


Deva-Aao andar thakk gaye hoge..


Main room mein aaya fresh hua then niche aake dinner kiya uske baad sabne humaari tareefon k pull baandhe, uske baad babhi ne mujhe meri injury ko leke khari khoti sunaai then dinner karke main apne room mein aaya bhenchod bahot thakk gaya tha lekin nind aane waali thi nahi, uske liye dose caahiye thi kyunki Addicted main bhi tha ab uss pure cocaine kaa uske bina mera sareer switch off hone lagta tha, lekin main uske Uppar control karlunga because ahista-2 main uski doses kam karta jaa raha tha jo best tareeka hai.. Maine ab apne pouch se thodi c dose lee and then chain ki nind soya..Main alarm lagaake soya tha kyunki subah mujhe college jaana tha because Riya kaa dhyaan main yahaan baithtey - 2 nahi rakh shakta tha issliye subah main alarm se utha and fresh hoke naha dhoke niche aaya nahane mein mujhe bahot dikkat hui meri injury ki wajah se, mera pura kandha or galle ka thode sa hissa injured tha or kaafi pain hota tha usko cheddne par issliye usko bacha - 2 k nahaaya main and then ready hoke niche aaya.. Toh Niche Rishi, Mangal, Abeer, Bhai Sam and Ravi naasta kar rahe they..


Main-Sun Mangal kuch din or tu he sambhaal le meetings wagairaah.. Mujhe Drugs related ek lead follow karni hai.


Mangal-No problem..


Main-Koi bada issue ho toh main aajaaunga..


Deva-Yeah yeah woh karlega, tu ye drugs k game ko roukk yaad haina tune he kaha tha agar issko roka nahi gaya toh sab khatam hojaaega..


Main-Yeah yeah main roukk lunga bhai don't worry..


Deva-I know..


Humlog breakfast k baad college k liye nikale classes mein time tha abhi lekin Riya time se pehle he college aati hai and then yaa toh Abhi gang k sath yaa fir Vaani or uski ek do or friends k sath canteen mein yaa fir college Lawn mein baith jaati hai, ye jaankari maine Apne chele Shubam se nikalwaai thi, Shubam yaad haina college senior Rohit kaa kind of right hand or mera khaas chela...


Ab issliye humlog time se pehle college aaye, Riya ne mujhe call kiya tha lekin woh kuch bol nahi paai, i know usse help caahiye thi lekin she was too embarrassed to ask me for help..


Subham humein college parking mein he milla Rohit bhi aagaya tha unhe maine situation samjhaa di thi..


Shubam-Bhai Riya Canteen mein hai Abhi gang k sath baithi hai, uski woh friend aai nahi hai..


Ravi-Kahin nasha maarke paddi hogi aaegi kaise...


Main-Ye Vaani kaa address hai?? Kahaan rehti hai ye??


Shubam-Yahaan just piche bhai..


Main-Yahaan?? Washrooms mein bhenchod??


Rohit - Dafukkkk???


Shubam-Areey nahi bhai Girls hostel mein college k piche..


Main-Toh bawligand aise bol na, yahaan just piche se kya matlab hai.. Toh ek kaam kar jaa dekh k aa wahaan hai bhi yaa nahi.. Or hai toh kya kar rahi hai...


Shubam-Kya baat kar rahe ho bhai, gand tudwa doge kya, girls hostel mein kaise ghussunga..


Main-Haan bc ye bhi hai.. Koi ladki hogi naa be teri contact bhenchod tu toh Ranbir Kapoor hai jab bhi dekho ladkiyon k bich mein hota hai..


Shubam-Heheheh.. Woh toh bus yun he bhai..


Main-Bhosdk blush kya kar raha hai tareef nahi kar raha bawligand, kaam karwa kissi ladki se ye..


Shubam-Done samjho bhai..


Main-Or haan mera naam nahi aana caahiye kahin bhi..


Shubam-Chance he nahi hai bhai, hogaya samjho..


Main-Good..


Humlog canteen aaye toh Riya wahin baithi thi Abhi gang bhi thi wahaan, Anaa bhi wahin thi bhenchod in dono k bich mein he piss jaaunga main.. Waise toh main Anaa k sath apni relationship ko sudhaarne mein laga hua tha lekin filhaal Riya ko meri jyaada jarurat thi, i know humaara breakup hua tha and all blah blah, lekin still main kissi ko bhi yun desperate times mein akela nahi chhodta, i stand by my friends.. Because that's who i am, or ab kuch bhi hojaae main Riya ko kuch bhi nahi hone dunga..


Continued..
 

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Update Posted bhidulog, and i am really sorry for the delay.
Also mujhe pata hai itane din baad ek update kaafi nahi hai but still bahot time baad likhna suru kiya hai maine toh itana he likh paaya but agle kuch din mein main updates kaa quota pura kardunga kyunki May month k baad main firse gayab hone waala hun kuch din k liye as mere exams aarahe hain issliye usase pehle main ye pichle waala quota pura kardunga then exams mein busy ho jaaunga uske baad fir waapis aake exams ka quota bhi pura kardunga.
Issliye Keep supporting as always.. :thanx:
Koi baat nahi Bhai bas aap apne exam par dhyan do uske baad updates toh waise bhi updates aa hi jayenge dekhte hai Vani kitni buri tareeke se fasi hai
 
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Humlog ne Meerut k issue ko sort out kardiya tha or iss tarah sort out kiya tha ki agle election mein aadhi seats mere naam se he aajaane waali thi, inshort ektarafa hawa bana di thi UP mein maine totally ektarfa.. Ab humlog ko Meerut se nikalna tha ASAP kyunki wahaan city mein Riya ek problem mein thi, actually Riya ki best friend "Vaani" Drugs lene lag gayi thi or unke jaal mein buri tarah se fans gayi thi or Riya usko bachane ki koshish kar rahi thi or main sure tha ki Riya usko bachaane k liye kissi bhi hadd takk jaa shakti thi issliye mujhe Riya ko bachana tha.


Humlog Meerut se turant free hotey he shyaam 6:30 baje nikale CM ki dusari gaadi leke, 3 ghantey kaa raasta tha Jack Drive kar raha tha Vinny aage tha and main and Abeer piche..


Abeer- Bhai UP mein toh abki baar campaigning ki jarurat bhi nahi padegi bc.. Kya hype create ki hai tune..


Main - Yeah.. Mahool he badal diya maine..


Almost 3 ghantey kaa safar pura karke 9:30 baje humlog city pohanchey uske baad traffic se bachtey hue 10 baje haweli pohanchey gaadi park ki and andar aaye toh Bhai, Rishi, Mangal And Babhi bahaar lawn mein ghum rahe they, dinner k baad walk kar rahe they i guess..Humein dekhtey he wohlog humaare pass aaye..Humlog sabse galle mille..


Babhi-Tumlog subah aane waale they naa??


Main-Naah raatko kya kartey wahaan aagaye..


Babhi-Gadhe toh bataake aaya karo naa maine abhi bacha hua khaana guards quarters mein pohanchwa diya..


Jack - Babhi Main toh wahin khaa lunga fir..


Babhi - wahaan kya karega yahaan garam banaaungi main yahi khaa lena..


Jack - Even better Babhi..


Deva-Aao andar thakk gaye hoge..


Main room mein aaya fresh hua then niche aake dinner kiya uske baad sabne humaari tareefon k pull baandhe, uske baad babhi ne mujhe meri injury ko leke khari khoti sunaai then dinner karke main apne room mein aaya bhenchod bahot thakk gaya tha lekin nind aane waali thi nahi, uske liye dose caahiye thi kyunki Addicted main bhi tha ab uss pure cocaine kaa uske bina mera sareer switch off hone lagta tha, lekin main uske Uppar control karlunga because ahista-2 main uski doses kam karta jaa raha tha jo best tareeka hai.. Maine ab apne pouch se thodi c dose lee and then chain ki nind soya..Main alarm lagaake soya tha kyunki subah mujhe college jaana tha because Riya kaa dhyaan main yahaan baithtey - 2 nahi rakh shakta tha issliye subah main alarm se utha and fresh hoke naha dhoke niche aaya nahane mein mujhe bahot dikkat hui meri injury ki wajah se, mera pura kandha or galle ka thode sa hissa injured tha or kaafi pain hota tha usko cheddne par issliye usko bacha - 2 k nahaaya main and then ready hoke niche aaya.. Toh Niche Rishi, Mangal, Abeer, Bhai Sam and Ravi naasta kar rahe they..


Main-Sun Mangal kuch din or tu he sambhaal le meetings wagairaah.. Mujhe Drugs related ek lead follow karni hai.


Mangal-No problem..


Main-Koi bada issue ho toh main aajaaunga..


Deva-Yeah yeah woh karlega, tu ye drugs k game ko roukk yaad haina tune he kaha tha agar issko roka nahi gaya toh sab khatam hojaaega..


Main-Yeah yeah main roukk lunga bhai don't worry..


Deva-I know..


Humlog breakfast k baad college k liye nikale classes mein time tha abhi lekin Riya time se pehle he college aati hai and then yaa toh Abhi gang k sath yaa fir Vaani or uski ek do or friends k sath canteen mein yaa fir college Lawn mein baith jaati hai, ye jaankari maine Apne chele Shubam se nikalwaai thi, Shubam yaad haina college senior Rohit kaa kind of right hand or mera khaas chela...


Ab issliye humlog time se pehle college aaye, Riya ne mujhe call kiya tha lekin woh kuch bol nahi paai, i know usse help caahiye thi lekin she was too embarrassed to ask me for help..


Subham humein college parking mein he milla Rohit bhi aagaya tha unhe maine situation samjhaa di thi..


Shubam-Bhai Riya Canteen mein hai Abhi gang k sath baithi hai, uski woh friend aai nahi hai..


Ravi-Kahin nasha maarke paddi hogi aaegi kaise...


Main-Ye Vaani kaa address hai?? Kahaan rehti hai ye??


Shubam-Yahaan just piche bhai..


Main-Yahaan?? Washrooms mein bhenchod??


Rohit - Dafukkkk???


Shubam-Areey nahi bhai Girls hostel mein college k piche..


Main-Toh bawligand aise bol na, yahaan just piche se kya matlab hai.. Toh ek kaam kar jaa dekh k aa wahaan hai bhi yaa nahi.. Or hai toh kya kar rahi hai...


Shubam-Kya baat kar rahe ho bhai, gand tudwa doge kya, girls hostel mein kaise ghussunga..


Main-Haan bc ye bhi hai.. Koi ladki hogi naa be teri contact bhenchod tu toh Ranbir Kapoor hai jab bhi dekho ladkiyon k bich mein hota hai..


Shubam-Heheheh.. Woh toh bus yun he bhai..


Main-Bhosdk blush kya kar raha hai tareef nahi kar raha bawligand, kaam karwa kissi ladki se ye..


Shubam-Done samjho bhai..


Main-Or haan mera naam nahi aana caahiye kahin bhi..


Shubam-Chance he nahi hai bhai, hogaya samjho..


Main-Good..


Humlog canteen aaye toh Riya wahin baithi thi Abhi gang bhi thi wahaan, Anaa bhi wahin thi bhenchod in dono k bich mein he piss jaaunga main.. Waise toh main Anaa k sath apni relationship ko sudhaarne mein laga hua tha lekin filhaal Riya ko meri jyaada jarurat thi, i know humaara breakup hua tha and all blah blah, lekin still main kissi ko bhi yun desperate times mein akela nahi chhodta, i stand by my friends.. Because that's who i am, or ab kuch bhi hojaae main Riya ko kuch bhi nahi hone dunga..


Continued..
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Update Posted bhidulog, and i am really sorry for the delay.
Also mujhe pata hai itane din baad ek update kaafi nahi hai but still bahot time baad likhna suru kiya hai maine toh itana he likh paaya but agle kuch din mein main updates kaa quota pura kardunga kyunki May month k baad main firse gayab hone waala hun kuch din k liye as mere exams aarahe hain issliye usase pehle main ye pichle waala quota pura kardunga then exams mein busy ho jaaunga uske baad fir waapis aake exams ka quota bhi pura kardunga.
Issliye Keep supporting as always.. :thanx:
Bhai Kitne exam ap k rhty Kya prh rhy ho
 
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