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Thriller WLHTA - The Serpent Of Underworld.

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खुद पर कॉन्फिडेंस होना अच्छी बात है लेकिन ज्यादा कॉन्फिडेंस होना कभी-कभार भारी भी पड़ जाता है और जगदीश साहब ओवर कॉन्फिडेंस के शिकार हो गए है।
इन साहब के लिए यह कहावत बिल्कुल सटीक बैठता है - " जब गीदड़ की मौत आती है तो वह शहर की तरफ भागता है "।
एक वेल ओरग्नाइज्ड गवर्नमेंट संगठन और सोने पे सुहागा द मर्चेंट आफ डेथ ' ए.पी ' से पंगे लेना जगदीश के लिए भारी पड़ना ही था।
बहुत खुबसूरती से जगदीश साहब से सम्बंधित इस पुरे प्रकरण को लिखा है आपने ए पी भाई।

इसके पहले वाला प्रसंग जो ए पी के ड्रग्स एडिक्शन पर आधारित था , भी गजब का लिखा था। इस प्रसंग को आपने तीन - चार अपडेट मे पुरा किया । यह फिर से यही दर्शाता है कि आप किसी भी सब्जेक्ट को हल्के मे नही लेते। ए पी का ड्रग्स की वजह से बीमार पड़ना , उसके शारीरिक-मानसिक अवस्था का वर्णन भयावह और डराने वाला था , रोंगटे खड़ा करने वाला था।

सभी अपडेट सुपर से भी ऊपर थे।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट्स ए पी भाई।
 
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Maine us dusari ladki ki details bheji Claire k pass jo Ashish ne uss din bheji thi mere pass thankfully woh humse next district ki rehne waali thi or uski family udhar he thi.. Jaise pehle mujhe PK or Jagdish ki phone call se pata chala tha ki Pk ne Sandhya or Pallavi ko Gurugram mein hide karwa diya tha..


Shruti - Ye Jagdish ki bhaanji kahaan se aai??


Main-Lambi kahaani hai baadmein bataaunga..


Shruti - Ye Jagdish pakka iske contact mein hoga??


Main-1000%.. Iske kehne par toh Jagdish ne raah chalte londey ko apne business ki core mein shaamil kar liya tha itana bada risk leraha hai toh obviously laadli hai..


Shruti - Yeah..


Idhar Chang Gurugram k liye nikala or Claire uss ladki k ghar k liye.. Kareeb 1 ghantey baad Claire uske ghar pohanch gayi thi ab claire thehri claire usne uss ladki ki maa k phone se ek recent called contacts nikaale and unmein se Pallavi kaa contact dhund liya tha or Unki exact location Chang k pass bhejdi thi jo 1-2 ghantey mein unki location takk pohanch jaaega.. Ab mujhe bus wait karna tha.. I am 1000% sure mujhe ye ladki Jagdish takk pohancha degi..


Mera wait pura hua dopehar k 3 baje jab Chang kaa call aaya mere pass..


Chang - Hogaya boss..


Main-Finally koi kaam aaya lawde tu..


Chang - Shut up.. So uss Sandhya k phone mein 3 he contacts they ek uski maa kaa and baaki 2 k 2 Jagdish k.. Unmein se ek number active hai abhi jisse Claire trace kar rahi hai..Or ye woh numbers nahi hain jisase woh Shruti ko call karta hai..


Main-Obviously personal numbers honge woh..


Chang - Yeah..


Main-Awesome.. Awesome..kaise liya number??


Chang - Flirt karke..


Main-Jaa be...


Chang-Arrey..Maa kasam boss..


Main-Tu bc flirt bhi karleta hai..


Chang - Fuck you.. Maine thodi derr najar milaai usase uski balcony mein thi woh fir niche aai toh main saamne aagaya and bola number do usne diya maine kahaa laao mera number add kardeta hun bus add karne mein baaki numbers nikaal liye..


Main-Shabbas.. Shabbas..


Chang - Claire jaise jaise location bataaegi main inform karta hun aapko..


Main-Yeah..


Call disconnected..


Shruti - What??


Main-Jagdish mill jaaega bahot jald.. Dont worry..


Shruti - Ok..


Kareeb 5 minutes baad Claire kaa call aaya mere pass..


Claire - Boss aapke pass Jagdish k coordinates bheje hain.. Lekin boss uska tracker jump kar raha hai time to time. Ek location nahi mill rahi..


Main-Rukk main check karta hun..


Maine coordinates check kiye..


Main-Pagal Signal nahi jump kar raha woh khud jump kar raha hai.. Matlab woh move kar raha hai koi vehicle mein hai woh.. Signal kabse ek he road k uppar jump karega bhalla.. Seedha jaaraha hai woh..


Claire - Yeah.. Shit.


Main-Ek kaam kar iski live location share kar mere sath..


Claire - Done..


Main-Kitana delay hai?


Claire - 5-6 seconds max..


Main-Chal good job..


Call disconnected..


Shruti - Kya hua??


Main-Let's go... Mill gaya..Tum or Nilesh tumlog mere sath aaoge baaki jo bhi hai undercover cars mein honge.. Weapons ready hone caahiye..


Shruti - Ok..


Humlog nikal he rahe they ki ek agent chilaaya..


"Mam Jagdish kaa phone hai"


Shruti-Kya bolun usse??


Main-Yahi ki tum dhund rahi ho apne agents mein ki kahaan leak ho shakti hai paise ki.. Lekin bolo ki tum bhi toh apne unn aadmiyo ko dhundo jo jinda bach nikale they wahaan se or kya pata paise woh he le gaye hon ye bhi toh possible hai.. Usko ussi k logon k khilaaf bhadkaao obviously ye bhi possible hai ki paise ussi kaa koi banda legaya ho..


Shruti - Yeah..


Main-Or ye matt bataana usse ki main hun tumhaare sath..


Shruti - Kyun??


Main-Kyunki usse agar pata chal gaya ki main yahaan hun toh woh apna open challenge bandh kardega kyunki usse pata hai main dhund lunga usse.. Woh tumhe he challenge de shakta hai kyunki usse pakka pata hai tumlog nahi dhund shaktey usse kyunki tumhaara kaam nahi hai ye.. Jaao jaldi ab.


Shruti ne phone uthaaya maine idhar headphones lagaaye..


Shruti - Hello..


Jagdish - Good Evening madam.. Kahaan takk pohanchey mere paise??


Shruti - Main dhund rahi hun, wahaan bahot saare agents they...


Jagdish - Yeah yeah i know..


Shruti - But please tell me kya tumne apne unn aadmiyo se interrogation kar lee jo wahaan se jinda bache they?? Ye bhi toh ho shakta hai woh lega ye hon paise??


Jagdish - Mere alaawa koi jinda bhi bacha tha??


Shruti - Yeah.. Sabse pehle 4-5 log bhaage they piche waali deewar se.. Uske alaawa workers nahi ho shaktey kyunki unko maine he nikaala tha wahaan se bahaar unke pass kuch nahi tha..


Jagdish - Itane paise leke bhaagna impossible hai.. Tum apni deadline dhyaan rakho..26 ghantey he bache hain..


Shruti - Main puri koshish kar rahi hun please believe me..


Jagdish - Oh i belive you for sure.. I know tumhe apne agents ki fikar hai.. But remember the clock is ticking..


Call disconnected..


Shruti - It didn't work.


Main-Oh it worked.. Suna nahi uski awaaj mein kya tension thi woh dikhaana nahi caahta tha but it worked..Don't worry.. Let's go..


Hum turant bahaar aaye meri Range rover mein Main Ami Shruti and Nilesh they uske alawa 3 gaadiyaan or thi jisme 10-12 agents orr they jinse Shruti connected thi walkie talkie se..


Main - Current location Camp Chowk k pass hai.. Rukka hua hai woh.. Kyunki call mei koi additional sound nahi aai..


Shruti - But apne Sath Piyush or Armaan ko gaadi mein leke sehar mein thodi ghum raha hoga woh.. Woh bhi sehar k sabse populated or patrolled area mein..


Main-Lekin Jagdish khud bhi toh milega.. Usase toh fir uggalwa he lenge..


Shruti - True..


Jagdish ki location kai derr takk wahin rahi or tabtak humlog pohanch gaye wahaan ab camp chowk sehar kaa middle point hai toh wahaan traffic bahot jyaada tha, ab obviously woh road par toh khadda ho nahi shakta tha itani derr, location exact nahi thi 60-70 meters kaa circle tha toh humne gaadi ek baar seedhi nikaali wahaan se but side mein parked gaadiyon mein kuch na dikha humein..Wahaan se main galiyon mein jaake fir waapis modke chowk se gujara lekin still kuch nahi dikha mujhe..


Shruti - Ye location sahi hai pakka??


Main-Yeah.. Refresh bhi kar chuka still same hai location..


Shruti - But mujhe koi gaadi nahi dikhi suspicious..


Main-Yeah dikhi toh mmuu.. Oh fucking hell..


Shruti - What??


Main-Woh truck dekho.. Driver baitha hai usme.. Passenger bhi hain 2.. Kapdon se kahaan truck driver lag rahe hain woh.. Ye truck suru se khadda hai yahaan naa he yelog kuch kar rahe hain.. Or piche container hai yaani Jagdish Piyush Armaan sab yahin hain..


Shruti - Shit..What now?.


Main-Now it's on you.. Risk lena hai yaa nahi??


Shruti - Dusara kya option hai.. 20 crore kahaan se dungi..


Main- Cool.. 10-15 log honge.. Apne logon ko bolo humaare piche rahein humein backup rahe or goli tab he chalaaein jab clear shot ho agar kissi civilian ko goli lag gayi toh main ulta goli maardunga unhe..


Shruti - Our team is well trained.. Don't worry..


Main-Ok then.. Lets move..


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Shruti ne apni team ko order diya target bataaya unhe ki ye truck hai target. Unka kaam tha bus humein backup dena...


Main-Humlog gaadi truck k piche rokenge.. Nilesh tum driver passenger par focus karoge and humlog back.. Bahaar se open hojaaega ye container so humein kissi dusare ki jarurat nahi hai.. Khulte he jaayja lenge pehle seedha andar nahi ghussna warna saamne se goli lagegi.. Ready??


Shruti - Yeah..


Hum uske piche gaadi roukkane he waale they ki woh truck start hua or aage badha..


Main-Fuckkk..


Shruti - Usse pata chal gaya.


Main-Naa.. Pata chal gaya hota toh yun aahista - 2 aage nahi badhta..


Nilesh - Ab??


Main-Ab rukkwaana padega isko..Chaltey hue iska kuch bigaad nahi shaktey.. Or jaldi rukkwaana padega otherwise unhe pata chal he jaaega ki humlog follow kar rahe hain..


Nilesh - Lekin kaise rukkwaaaein??


Main-Main karta hun bhai parbandh tu baitha reh..


Maine truck ko overtake kiya and full speed next chownk par pohancha and wahaan mojjud traffic and normal police waalon k bilkul side mein gaadi roukki..


Police 1-Arrey maarega k kaka, aandha ho.. Hoo.. Hhoo..Panaam Bhai..


Maine seesha uttara toh meri shakal dekhtey he woh baat andar he gatak gaya, or mere pair chuwe..


Main-Ye sab baadmein... Ye right side ki light red kar..


Police 1-Kyun bhai??


Main-Abhi k abhi..


Police 1-Ji ji ji.. Oye Rambir jaa batti badaldey..


Ye sunke traffic waala turant bhaaga or niche se light red kardi.. Or idhar Ab Shruti ghurre mujhe..


Main-Aise kya dekh rahi ho.. Itani toh chalti hai..


Shruti - Yeah yeah pata hai.. Humein roukane k liye pure sehar ka traffic rukkwa diya tha tumne, ye toh ek he light hai..


Main-Yeah.. Uttaro ab..


Main apni deagles nikaali and niche uttara, and mere sath baaki sab uttare..


Police1-Bhai banduk?? Sab theek toh hai??


Main-Woh truck dikha.. Usme kuch criminals hain unko, unko you know..


Police - Samjh gaya bhai.. Koi help caahiye toh bolo bhai..


Main-.. Tu tension naa le andar bhaag jaa jab shooting bandh hojaae traffic kholdena jyaada jam matt lagne dena..


Police - Jo hukkum bhai..


Main-Nilesh.. Driver and passengers teri duty hai..


Ab traffic rukka udhar se truck aaya woh bhi rukka, or humlog uske side se uski taraf badhe truck k pass aatey he Nilesh uske saamne aagaya or driver par bandukk taan di..


Nilesh-Niche uttar.. Abhi..


Ye sunke woh driver ne gear daalna caaha or idhar Nilesh chilaata raha even driver ne truck aage bhi badha diya usne or ye lawda chilaata raha toh maine maari side waali window se uski khopdi mein goli and truck turant jhatka khaake bandh hogaya.. Ye dekh ek passenger ne bandukk nikaali and dusara driver seat par aaya passenger ko Ami ne goli maari front windshield se and driver ko fir Maine goli maari saale ki kaan par goli lagi...


Passenger k pass koi assault rifle thi ab humaara time yahaan waste hua toh itani derr mein piche waala gate khulla and usme se bahot saare log uttare.. Unmein se 10+ toh piche ki side bhaag gaye and kuch wahin rukk k humaare uppar firing karne lage.. Unke pass assault rifles thi 2 k pass toh MP5 SMG thi and 1 k pass M4 thi and ek shayad pistol he use kar raha tha.. Ab humein unse bachne k liye cover lena padda..


Main-Bhosdk dekh kya raha tha unko?? Marwa di na ab...


Maine Shruti or Nilesh ko dekha toh bhenchod un dono ko mujhe ghurrtey hue paaya..


Main-What???


Shruti - Unhe surrender kaa moka toh detey..


Main-What?? Surrender?? What the fuck do you mean surrender..


Shruti - We.. We don't work like that..


Main-Arrrrreyyy..


Maine unko samjhaane ki koshish ki lekin fir socha kya samjhaaunga bhenchod udhar woh bhaag jaaenge..


Main-For fucks shake..Ami niche se jaa main uppar se jaata hun.. 4 hain.. Left waale dono ko sambhaal lena please..


Ami-Got you..


Ami Truck k niche ghuss gayi or main front se uppar chaddha and container k uppar se hota hua aage badha and edge par aaya or jhaank k niche dekha toh 2 left 2 right mein they.. Right mein SMG waale they.. Maine Ami kaa wait kiya or jaise he Ami ne pehla fire kiya maine uppar se right waale dono ko goli maari ek ko toh bhenchod sirr mein he lagi literally uppar.. Dusare ko ek shoulder mein lagi and niche girrtey he dusari pith mein.. Main latak k niche uttara and unke piche bhaaga jo bhaage they.. uppar se bhaagne waalon kaa clear view aagaya tha mujhe, wohlog 12-13 log they and 2 groups mein bhaag rahe they woh, 5-7 aage they woh bus bhaag rahe they and utane he piche they lekin unke sath 2 bandey they hostages humaare, jinke chehre dhakke hue they wohlog unko khinchtey hue bhaag rahe they toh wohlog slow they issliye main jab unke close pohanchne laga toh ek rukk gaya or mere uppar firing karne he waala tha ki right side se Ami ne uski chaati mein goli maari and maine bhaagna continue kiya.. Lekin main thakk gaya tha bhenchod ye bhi dikkat hai main abhi half bhi recover nahi hua tha, issliye maine Ami ko lead karne kaa ishaara kiya waise wohlog jyaada tej nahi they lekin main thakk gaya tha, ek idhar bheed bhenchod gaadiyaan aise chalaa rahi thi ki footpath par mere andar thokne ko horahe they.. Ami aage thi toh mere side se Shruti or Nilesh bhi merese aage nikal gaye ab ye dekh Jagdish k bando ne khela MasterPlan unmein se ek banda ek hostage k sath rukk gaya or uski khopdi par pistol taan di usne and baaki log ne bhaagna jaari rakha.. Humlog uske pass aaye toh woh Chilaaya..


"Aage nahi aana a.. Rukkjaa bhadwe..A ladki rukk"


Humlog uske saamne aake rukk gaye..Tab dikha mujhe saamne Jagdish bhaagta hua .. Itana close toh main Rajasthan mein bhi nahi tha usase.. Usne muddke mujhe wave kiya.. Bhenchod..


Main-Tumlog isko dekho main unke piche jaata hun..


Main uske side se jaane laga toh bhenchod usne mujhe dekh liya or fir chilaaya...


"A A kahaan jaaraha hai wahin rukkja unke piche koi nahi jaaega warna iski khopdi kholdunga.."


Main rukk gaya.. Bhenchod.. Mera bada mood tha ki ma chudaaye mujhe Jagdish caahiye woh mere saamne hai gand mein ghuss gaya NCB kaa agent bhenchod Jagdish jinda bach gaya toh orr logon ko maarega.. Lekin maine bade he mushkil se khudko samjhaaya ki ye Shruti or iske baaplog gand maarlenge meri agar iss agent ko kuch hua toh or main rukk gaya or uske saamne aaya..Bhenchod ye bawligand ne Jagdish bhagwa diya iski maa chod dunga main..


Main-Haan tu bol bhai kya caahiye bol..?


"ek gaadi caahiye mujhe or koi mere piche nahi aaega aage chalke isko chhod dunga main"


Main- Acha?? Mere maathe par chutiya likha hai kya?? Gaadi mill jaaegi lekin isko yahin chhodke jaana padega..


"Nahi fir tum gaadi mein baithtey he goli maardoge mujhe.. Isko sath lejaaunga main.."


Main-Nope..


"Fir isko goli maardunga main"


Main-Acha?? Fir tere kya hoga?? Itani goli maardunga bhosdk ki gharwaalo ko laash bhi pehchaan mein nahi aaegi..Ek maatar option hai tere pass gaadi le isko chhod and gayab hojaa.. Aise bheed mein thodi goli chalaaenge tere uppar.. Chutiye nahi hain hum teri tarah..


"Theek hai Gaadi laao".


Ye baat mujhe bhi pata thi or usse bhi pata thi ki main usko thokdunga gaadi mein baithtey he lekin fir bhi usne gaadi maangi and fir piche muddke dekha toh uske dost almost gayab hochuke they toh main samjh gaya ki isko gaadi nahi caahiye ye bus time buy kar raha hai unke liye.. Khud marrne ki himmat nahi thi uski toh hostage ko maarega nahi woh.. Gaadi mein baithtey he isko goli lagni he thi toh woh risk bhi nahi lega ye.. Bacha aakhiri option yaani Surrender.. Ye wahi karega.. Bheed thi toh surrender karne k baad main isko thok bhi nahi shakta tha or isko thokna he thokna tha mujhe bhenchod iski wajah se Jagdish gaya tha toh frustration bhi issi par nikalni thi.


Main-Ok ok.. Ye gaadi kaisi rahegi.. Ye dekh CRETA hai tau ne nayi he lee hogi.. Ye lega?? Tau ko utaarun niche..


"Mujhe gaadi nahi caahiye.."


Ye sun usne fir jhat se piche muddke dekha..


"Main isko chhod raha hu main sss..."


Main-Ek second ek second.. Pehle cehra dikha ye humaara he banda haina.. Kapda hatta pehle fir he aage kuch karna..


Ye sunke woh hataane laga kapda ek hath se ye tha Piyush maine photo dekhi thi iski..


Main-Ye toh humaara banda nahi hai ye kon hai bhenchod??


"Chutiye tumhaara he hai.. Piyush.. NCB.."


Main-Shakal dekh iski.. Ye humaara nahi hai.. Ye..


Ye sun woh ek second k liye uske piche se hatta or ussi ek second mein maine goli chalaadi inches k faansle se woh goli lagi uske maathe k uppar or woh girra piche jaake or idhar Shruti mujhe dhakka maartey hue bhaagi apne agent ki taraf..


Main-Maadarchod main karwaata hun tera surrender..


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