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Should I add sex in this story


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Itachi_Uchiha

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Mai puri kosis karunga ki 1 Tarik Tak naya Update post kar du.
Ab naye update se story puri mere hisab se chlegi. To ab se week me ek hi update aaya karega. Kosis karunga ki Kam din me bhi update de du.
Aur sbs important baat is story me actual me sex nahi hai. To mi aap logo se puchna chta hu ki kya mi story me sex add Karu ya jise story chal Rahi hai waise chlne du.
nd ab se mujhe apne update par Kam se Kam 60 likes cahiye hi cahiye.
 
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Itachi_Uchiha

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UPDATE NO - 23
(Killing Sword)




Saare mercenaries excited ho rahe they aur imagine kar rahe they jaldi hi unke hath mein Mortal Restoration Pills aane wali hai. Lekin unme se kisi ne Notice nahi kiya tha ki us Old man ka Face tense hota jaa raha hai.


Lekin Atharva ki senses bhut tez thi isliye wo Divine Sense use kar sakta tha QI HAI Realm mein hi. Usne sense kar liya tha ki jitna wo Red City ke karib pahuch rahe hai utna hi wo Old man tension mein aa raha hai. Aur Shukla Family ke 2 Member bhi ab Nervous nazar aa rahe they.


Atharva ne Apni Divine Sense se us Carriage mein dekha to usme kuch bhi nahi tha wo ek dum khali tha.


Old Man " Sab log Sawdhan raho. "


Lekin kisi ne uski baat pe jyada dhyan nahi diya kyuki wo Red City ke nazdeek hi pahuch gaye they.


Atharva " Brother Wang, ye Shukla Family aur Parjapati Family ke relations kaise hai ? "


Wang " Ye to obvious si baat hai 2 Tiger ek Mountain mein nahi reh sakte. Parjapati Family aur Shukla Family ek doosre ke Life and Death enemy hai. "


Atharva " Tumhe pata hai is Carriage mein kya hai ? "


Wang " Mujhe nahi pata. Ye Old man na hame batana chahta hai aur na hi hum puch sakte hai. Agar mera guess sahi hai to ye Shukla Family ki Young Lady se related hai. "


Atharva " Shukla Family ki young Lady ? "


Wang " Brother, Tum pehli baar Red City aaye ho isliye tumhe nahi pata ki Shukla Family ke Chief ki Sirf ek hi Beti hai. Wo puri Shukla Family ki jaan hai lekin wo Paida hi bahut weak body ke sath hui hai isliye wo hamesha Bimar rehti hai. Shukla Family ne kayi Doctor aur Alchemist ko Hire kiya lekin koi kuch nahi kar paya. Lekin wo sab ek baat pe aa gaye ki Young Lady 18 saal ki Age ke baad mar jaayegi. Abhi 18 ki hone mein 4 months baaki hai aur mujhe lagta hai is Carriage mein unse related hi koi saman hai. "


Atharva " ye to bhut buri baat hai. "
" Tumhe pata hai kya unhe konsi bimari hai ? "


Wang " Nahi ye nahi pata mujhe. Lekin log kehte hai ki jab wo jyada bimar hoti hai wo bhut Cold ho jaati hai aur unke aaspass sab kuch Ice mein badal jata hai."


Iske baad Atharv aage kuch nahi bola aur wo log aage badhne lage Atharva ne notice kiya ki Shukla Family ke teeno member ke expression pehle se bhi Kharab ho gaye they.


Atharva ne apni Divine Sense use ki to paaya ki unke saamne Kamse kam 12 se jyada powerful log chuppe huye hai killing intent ke sath. Atharva ne Moon ki taraf dekha aur smile kiya. Ek andheri raat Bloodshed ke liye kaafi sahi hai.


" Hahaha, Old Man main yaha pe tumhara hi intezaar kar raha tha. "


Is awaz ke sath saamne se kayi log nikal ke aaye jinhone ek dum Black Dress pehen rakhi thi. Unki sabki aankho mein ek killing intent tha. Aur unhone un sabko puri tarah se gher liya tha.


Atharva ne dekha unke samane 12 log they Jisme 2 Late QI HAI Realm mein they aur 4 Mid QI HAI Realm mein aur baaki sab Early QI HAI Realm mein they. Enemy ki strength aur number se koi fark nahi padta tha Kyuki Atharva ka Group dono hi Cheez mein piche tha.


Old man ke expression bilkul badal gaye they baaki sab Mercenaries bhi serious ho gaye they. Apne aap ko gaaliya de rahe they wo log unka mission khatam hone hi wala tha lekin end mein jaake ye sab ho gaya.


" Old Man, Pure-yang Fruit mujhe de do. "


Old Man " Fuck Your Mother, ye Pure-yang Fruit humari Young Lady ke liye hai iske liye to main mar bhi jaaunga. "


" Agar ye baat hai to tum sab log maroge. Kill them all. "


Clang !!


Un sabhi logo ne apne Weapons nikal liye. Unko dekh ke lag raha tha ki wo kisi ko jinda nahi jaane denge yaha se. Sabhi Mercenary Nervous they unhe apni duty pata thi unhe ye bhi pata tha agar unhe yaha se Jinda bachna hai to ladna to padega.


Wang " Atharva, tum yaha se bhaag jaao. Tum abhi Young ho aur ye tumhara pehla chance hai. Apne aap ko yaha marwa mat lena. "


Atharva ne kuch nahi bola bas smile kar diya. Wang ek acha insaan tha wo aise time mein bhi Atharva ke baare mein soch raha tha. Atharva ne decide kar liya tha ki wo Wang ko to nahi marne dega aaj aur waise bhi saamne waale Parjapati Family ke Members they jo uski enemy thi.


Bang !!


Isi ke saath ek dum se Dono group mein Fight start ho gayi 20 QI HAI Warrior aapas mein lad rahe they.


Ahhhh !!


Abhi Fight start hi huyi thi ki mercenary mein se ek aadmi pura ghayal ho chuka tha uske Right Hand pe ek Sword ka Slash tha jaha se blood bhut tez beh raha tha. Wo Old man 2 Late QI HAI Warrior ke sath Fight kar raha tha aur usey pata tha wo jyada der tak un dono ko hold nahi kar payega.


Black Suit mein ek Man ne apni Sword Atharva ki taraf ghumayi, jaise hi wo Sword Atharva ki neck ke paas pahuchne wali thi waise hi Atharva ne apni Neck thodi se hilayi aur Apni Right Hand mein apni QI se ek Illusionary Sword banake aur samne wale ke dono hath kaat diye. Jaise hi saamne wale ki sword uske hatho ke sath niche girne lagi waise hi Atharva ne wo Sword pakad li aur ek dum Tezi se ghumayi aur samne wale ka sir uski body se alag kar diya.


Puri process smooth Aur fast thi samne wale ko mauka tak nahi mila chillane ka. Baaki log Apni Fight mein busy they isliye kisi ne dhyan nahi diya ispar.


Wang 2 logo se ek sath fight kar raha tha lekin wo kaafi injured ho chuka tha. Uski chest pe ek Sword Cut tha jaha se blood nikal raha tha. Wang ne apna last attempt karte huye apni Sword se ek ki taraf strike to usne wo strike rok li lekin doosre ne tabhi Wang ke upper attack kar diya. Usey pata tha wo do logo ko ek sath nahi hara sakta uski aankho mein death saaf dikh rahi thi.


Slash !!


Jaise hi us admi ka attack Wang ke paas pahuchne wala tha tabhi piche se ek long Sword ne uska gala kaat diya aur wo wahi niche gir gaya. Wang ne us girte hue aadmi ke piche Atharva ko dekha usey bilkul bhi believe nahi ho raha tha. Us doosre aadmi ne apni partner ko marte huye dekha to wo Atharva ki taraf badh Gaya.


Swash !!


Atharva ne kisi Lighting Strike ki tarah apni sword ghumayi aur us aadmi ka Sir bhi katkeHawa me uchal gaya jisse blood tapak raha tha. Wang pura hil gaya tha kyuki ye bhut fast tha wo Atharva ke paas khada tha lekin usey bilkul nahi pata Atharva ne usey kaise maara.


Atharva apni Sword aise hi use karta tha. Wo koi Sword Technic aur fancy cheeze nahi karta tha. Uski Sword Style bahut simple thi Speed, speed, speed, lighting se bhi tez speed. Isliye uski Sword hamesa se hi killing Sword rahi hai.


Atharva ne Wang ko ek Smile di aur apni Jagah se gayab ho gaya aur uske baad jo hua uske baad Wang hi nahi pure Mercenary Shock ho gaye.


Slash !!

Slash !!
Slash !!


Un sabne dekha ki Atharva kisi Ghost ki tarah un Black suit wale logo ke bich mein Move kar raha tha aur apni Sword ko Lighting Speed ke sath ghuma raha tha. Aur jab jab uski Sword ghum rahi thi waise waise hi ek ek karke saamne walo ke Sir Hawa mein ud rahe they.


Sab log sirf ek Strike mein maare gaye they. Atharva ne kabhi bhi same Bande pe do baar Strike nahi ki. Gaur karne wali baat ye thi ki sab ko Atharva ne maara unke paase Chikhne ka time tak nahi tha.


1 minute ke andar Parjapati Family ke sabhi log bina sir ke niche pade they aur un sabke sir bhi unki bodies ke bagal mein pade they. Aur Atharva kisi WarGod ki tarah un Dead Bodies mein khada tha itne logo ko marne ke baad bhi Uska Face ek dum Calm tha uski Body pe khoon ka ek dhaba tak nahi tha. Sab log Is Young Ma
n ko Dekh rahe they, Jiske White Hair Hawa se ud rahe they aur Usne Ek Black Robe pehen rakha tha.














TO BE CONTINUED.....
 

Itachi_Uchiha

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UPDATE NO - 23
(Killing Sword)




Saare mercenaries excited ho rahe they aur imagine kar rahe they jaldi hi unke hath mein Mortal Restoration Pills aane wali hai. Lekin unme se kisi ne Notice nahi kiya tha ki us Old man ka Face tense hota jaa raha hai.


Lekin Atharva ki senses bhut tez thi isliye wo Divine Sense use kar sakta tha QI HAI Realm mein hi. Usne sense kar liya tha ki jitna wo Red City ke karib pahuch rahe hai utna hi wo Old man tension mein aa raha hai. Aur Shukla Family ke 2 Member bhi ab Nervous nazar aa rahe they.


Atharva ne Apni Divine Sense se us Carriage mein dekha to usme kuch bhi nahi tha wo ek dum khali tha.


Old Man " Sab log Sawdhan raho. "


Lekin kisi ne uski baat pe jyada dhyan nahi diya kyuki wo Red City ke nazdeek hi pahuch gaye they.


Atharva " Brother Wang, ye Shukla Family aur Parjapati Family ke relations kaise hai ? "


Wang " Ye to obvious si baat hai 2 Tiger ek Mountain mein nahi reh sakte. Parjapati Family aur Shukla Family ek doosre ke Life and Death enemy hai. "


Atharva " Tumhe pata hai is Carriage mein kya hai ? "


Wang " Mujhe nahi pata. Ye Old man na hame batana chahta hai aur na hi hum puch sakte hai. Agar mera guess sahi hai to ye Shukla Family ki Young Lady se related hai. "


Atharva " Shukla Family ki young Lady ? "


Wang " Brother, Tum pehli baar Red City aaye ho isliye tumhe nahi pata ki Shukla Family ke Chief ki Sirf ek hi Beti hai. Wo puri Shukla Family ki jaan hai lekin wo Paida hi bahut weak body ke sath hui hai isliye wo hamesha Bimar rehti hai. Shukla Family ne kayi Doctor aur Alchemist ko Hire kiya lekin koi kuch nahi kar paya. Lekin wo sab ek baat pe aa gaye ki Young Lady 18 saal ki Age ke baad mar jaayegi. Abhi 18 ki hone mein 4 months baaki hai aur mujhe lagta hai is Carriage mein unse related hi koi saman hai. "


Atharva " ye to bhut buri baat hai. "
" Tumhe pata hai kya unhe konsi bimari hai ? "


Wang " Nahi ye nahi pata mujhe. Lekin log kehte hai ki jab wo jyada bimar hoti hai wo bhut Cold ho jaati hai aur unke aaspass sab kuch Ice mein badal jata hai."


Iske baad Atharv aage kuch nahi bola aur wo log aage badhne lage Atharva ne notice kiya ki Shukla Family ke teeno member ke expression pehle se bhi Kharab ho gaye they.


Atharva ne apni Divine Sense use ki to paaya ki unke saamne Kamse kam 12 se jyada powerful log chuppe huye hai killing intent ke sath. Atharva ne Moon ki taraf dekha aur smile kiya. Ek andheri raat Bloodshed ke liye kaafi sahi hai.


" Hahaha, Old Man main yaha pe tumhara hi intezaar kar raha tha. "


Is awaz ke sath saamne se kayi log nikal ke aaye jinhone ek dum Black Dress pehen rakhi thi. Unki sabki aankho mein ek killing intent tha. Aur unhone un sabko puri tarah se gher liya tha.


Atharva ne dekha unke samane 12 log they Jisme 2 Late QI HAI Realm mein they aur 4 Mid QI HAI Realm mein aur baaki sab Early QI HAI Realm mein they. Enemy ki strength aur number se koi fark nahi padta tha Kyuki Atharva ka Group dono hi Cheez mein piche tha.


Old man ke expression bilkul badal gaye they baaki sab Mercenaries bhi serious ho gaye they. Apne aap ko gaaliya de rahe they wo log unka mission khatam hone hi wala tha lekin end mein jaake ye sab ho gaya.


" Old Man, Pure-yang Fruit mujhe de do. "


Old Man " Fuck Your Mother, ye Pure-yang Fruit humari Young Lady ke liye hai iske liye to main mar bhi jaaunga. "


" Agar ye baat hai to tum sab log maroge. Kill them all. "



Clang !!


Un sabhi logo ne apne Weapons nikal liye. Unko dekh ke lag raha tha ki wo kisi ko jinda nahi jaane denge yaha se. Sabhi Mercenary Nervous they unhe apni duty pata thi unhe ye bhi pata tha agar unhe yaha se Jinda bachna hai to ladna to padega.


Wang " Atharva, tum yaha se bhaag jaao. Tum abhi Young ho aur ye tumhara pehla chance hai. Apne aap ko yaha marwa mat lena. "


Atharva ne kuch nahi bola bas smile kar diya. Wang ek acha insaan tha wo aise time mein bhi Atharva ke baare mein soch raha tha. Atharva ne decide kar liya tha ki wo Wang ko to nahi marne dega aaj aur waise bhi saamne waale Parjapati Family ke Members they jo uski enemy thi.



Bang !!


Isi ke saath ek dum se Dono group mein Fight start ho gayi 20 QI HAI Warrior aapas mein lad rahe they.


Ahhhh !!


Abhi Fight start hi huyi thi ki mercenary mein se ek aadmi pura ghayal ho chuka tha uske Right Hand pe ek Sword ka Slash tha jaha se blood bhut tez beh raha tha. Wo Old man 2 Late QI HAI Warrior ke sath Fight kar raha tha aur usey pata tha wo jyada der tak un dono ko hold nahi kar payega.


Black Suit mein ek Man ne apni Sword Atharva ki taraf ghumayi, jaise hi wo Sword Atharva ki neck ke paas pahuchne wali thi waise hi Atharva ne apni Neck thodi se hilayi aur Apni Right Hand mein apni QI se ek Illusionary Sword banake aur samne wale ke dono hath kaat diye. Jaise hi saamne wale ki sword uske hatho ke sath niche girne lagi waise hi Atharva ne wo Sword pakad li aur ek dum Tezi se ghumayi aur samne wale ka sir uski body se alag kar diya.


Puri process smooth Aur fast thi samne wale ko mauka tak nahi mila chillane ka. Baaki log Apni Fight mein busy they isliye kisi ne dhyan nahi diya ispar.


Wang 2 logo se ek sath fight kar raha tha lekin wo kaafi injured ho chuka tha. Uski chest pe ek Sword Cut tha jaha se blood nikal raha tha. Wang ne apna last attempt karte huye apni Sword se ek ki taraf strike to usne wo strike rok li lekin doosre ne tabhi Wang ke upper attack kar diya. Usey pata tha wo do logo ko ek sath nahi hara sakta uski aankho mein death saaf dikh rahi thi.



Slash !!


Jaise hi us admi ka attack Wang ke paas pahuchne wala tha tabhi piche se ek long Sword ne uska gala kaat diya aur wo wahi niche gir gaya. Wang ne us girte hue aadmi ke piche Atharva ko dekha usey bilkul bhi believe nahi ho raha tha. Us doosre aadmi ne apni partner ko marte huye dekha to wo Atharva ki taraf badh Gaya.


Swash !!


Atharva ne kisi Lighting Strike ki tarah apni sword ghumayi aur us aadmi ka Sir bhi katkeHawa me uchal gaya jisse blood tapak raha tha. Wang pura hil gaya tha kyuki ye bhut fast tha wo Atharva ke paas khada tha lekin usey bilkul nahi pata Atharva ne usey kaise maara.


Atharva apni Sword aise hi use karta tha. Wo koi Sword Technic aur fancy cheeze nahi karta tha. Uski Sword Style bahut simple thi Speed, speed, speed, lighting se bhi tez speed. Isliye uski Sword hamesa se hi killing Sword rahi hai.


Atharva ne Wang ko ek Smile di aur apni Jagah se gayab ho gaya aur uske baad jo hua uske baad Wang hi nahi pure Mercenary Shock ho gaye.



Slash !!

Slash !!
Slash !!


Un sabne dekha ki Atharva kisi Ghost ki tarah un Black suit wale logo ke bich mein Move kar raha tha aur apni Sword ko Lighting Speed ke sath ghuma raha tha. Aur jab jab uski Sword ghum rahi thi waise waise hi ek ek karke saamne walo ke Sir Hawa mein ud rahe they.


Sab log sirf ek Strike mein maare gaye they. Atharva ne kabhi bhi same Bande pe do baar Strike nahi ki. Gaur karne wali baat ye thi ki sab ko Atharva ne maara unke paase Chikhne ka time tak nahi tha.


1 minute ke andar Parjapati Family ke sabhi log bina sir ke niche pade they aur un sabke sir bhi unki bodies ke bagal mein pade they. Aur Atharva kisi WarGod ki tarah un Dead Bodies mein khada tha itne logo ko marne ke baad bhi Uska Face ek dum Calm tha uski Body pe khoon ka ek dhaba tak nahi tha. Sab log Is Young Ma
n ko Dekh rahe they, Jiske White Hair Hawa se ud rahe they aur Usne Ek Black Robe pehen rakha tha.















TO BE CONTINUED.....
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Itachi_Uchiha bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....
 
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