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[Itachi_Uchiha]

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[parkas]

UPDATE NO - 05
Let's Calculate Our Debt​

Yaha tak ki Atharva ne bhi nahi soch tha ki The Dragon Transformation Skill itni strong hogi. Sirf 4 hours cultivate karne se hi wo QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe pahuch gaya tha.


Sath hi sath uski Yuan Energy badhne ki wajah se uski body bhi strong ho gayi thi aur isliye Atharva ki strength aur Defense mein kaafi fark pada tha.


The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karte time ek baar firse 2 whirlpool ek doosre ke opposite create ho gaye they. Dono whirlpool Atharva ki body mein flow hote huye uski DANTIAN mein enter kar gaye aur ek Red Colour ka Dragon Mark form karne lage.


Waise abhi jo Mark form hua tha wo abhi bhut fika tha ek dum bright Red hone se kaafi dur tha. Atharva ki single thought se Red Dragon Mark bhut jor se shake hone laga.


HAA!


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye hawa mein ek bhut fast punch maara, punch ka pressure itna tha ki Air mein bhi friction hone lagi thi aur fir ek dum se BOOM ke sound ke sath samne ki Wall crack ho gayi.


"Good, mere punch ki power abhi 5000 pound thi, halanki abhi first Red Dragon Mark half complete hua hai. Ek baar Red Dragon Mark complete ho jaaye to mere har punch ke pich 10,000 pound ka force hoga. QI JING REALM 9th Level ke ordinary cultivators ke punch mein 3000 pound force hota hai, aur Genius hote hai unke punch ke piche 4000 pound hota hai. Lekin The Dragon Transformation Skill se mein sirf Half Red Dragon Mark ke hote huye bhi 5000 pound ke punch throw kar sakta hu. Incredible!"



{ Writer Note:- jo bhi punches aur uske force ki baat huyi hai wo sirf ek mark ki jaise jaise mark badhte jaayenge force badhta hai jaayega.}



Ek lambi saans lete huye Atharva ne Cultivate karna rok Diya. Usey Cultivation ke baare mein is world mein sabse jyada Knowledge thi, aur usey ache se pata tha ki Foundatain ko Strong karna kitna Important hai. Usko sab kuch step by step karna hoga bina ek dum se aage badhe. Usne abhi The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate karna start ki hai aur usey half Red Dragon Mark mil gaya hai aur wo is result se abhi ke liye khus hai. Kyuki Fragrant Sky City kuch bhi nahi hai.

Aapko bata du ki :-

{ SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein 5 Continent hai.
1. Northern Continent.
2. Southern Continent.
3. Western Continent.
4. Easter Continent.
5. Divine Continent.

Jisme sabse strong Divine Continent hai jisme Pichli Life mein Atharva ek Saint tha aur wo issi Continent se tha. Sabse Weak Eastern Continent hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
Eastern Continent mein 30 provine hai jisme sabse Strong Martial Saint Dynasty hai Aur Sabse weak QI Province hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
QI Province ke baare mein aage detail mil jaayegi Proper.

QI Province ka outer part hai jaha QI Province ke Log bhi dhyan nahi dete waha pe 28 City hai. Isme sabse Strong hai Red City aur sabse Weak hai Fragrant Sky City jisme filhal Atharva hai. }


Ek warrior ko Cultivate karne ke Liye PILLS, POTIONS, ELIXIRS ki jaroorat padti hai. The Dragon Transformation Skill ko practice karne ki liye ko Sabse jada jaroorat padegi kyuki Ye skill kisi bhi Bloodline kisi bhi Soul ko Absorb kar sakti hai. World Mein bhut saare Demon Beast hai, jinme se kaafi kam Rare Bloodline ke hote hai aur kuch to Ancient Time ke Rare Beast bhi hote hai, agar kisi rare Bloodline ke Demon Beast ki Soul ko Absorb karta hai to The Dragon Transformation Skill ki Wajah se usey use Beast ki Ability bhi millegi.


"Main 100 years se Dead tha is time mein bhut kuch badal gaya hoga. Agar meri Memory sahi hai to Fragrant Sky City Sabse small City hai QI Province ki, pata nahi Divine Continent yaha se kitni dur hoga. Past life mein The GREATEST SAINT hone ki wajah se maine kabhi is Small Eastern Continent pe dhyan nahi diya tha kyuki Meri aankho mein ye kuch bhi nahi tha."


Atharva apne Mansion se Nikal ke apne Father ke Mansion mein aa gaya aur sidha unke Room mein bani Library mein ghus gaya. Yaha pe kisi ko aane ki izzazt nahi thi yaha tak ki Sohan bhi bina permission ke enter nahi kar sakta tha lekin Atharva ki baat alag thi wo Mayor ka eklauta beta tha to wo pure Mayor Mansion mein kabhi bhi kahi bhi jaa sakta tha.


Atharva ne waha pe rakhi Martial Arts Skill ki books ko dekha bhi nahi kyuki usey pata is universe ki sabse small city mein Trash hi millega. Isliye wo sidha ek book ki taraf badh gaya jiska naam tha "History of Saint Origin"


Is Book mein saare History events se they Pure Saint Origin ke aur saari geographical condition.
Atharva ne jaisa hi first Chapter khola uske Face pe smile aa gayi. kyuki jo first Chapter tha wo Ek Greatest Saint ke baare mein tha jisne Apni Big Sword ki Ek Strike mein Heaven ko kaatte huye Immortal Realm ke Gate khol diye they 100 years pehle. Unfortunately wo Greatest Saint us din usi SAINT CLIFF pe khatam ho gaya.


100 year pehle Atharva ne apni Saint Blood ki last drop ko Use karte huye Immortal Realm ke gate khol diye aur wo iske backlash se wahi khatam ho gaya tha. Uske baad kya hua usey kuch nahi pata. Usne aisa isliye kiya tha kyuki Saint Origin Universe mein koi bhi person Saint Realm ke aage Cultivate nahi kar paata lekin Atharva ko pata tha ki Saint Realm ke baad bhi Realm hai jo is Universe mein possible nahi hai, isliye usne apni saari strenght ko use karke doosre Universe ka Gate khol diya tha Jiska naam hai Immortal Origin Universe ya Immortal Realm jisme Immortals rehte hai.


History ke according us event ke baad bhut kuch badal gaya tha. Jab Atharva ne Immortal Realm ke Gate khole to Jo baaki ke Saint they jo Atharva ko aisa karte dekh rahe they wo Atharva ki Death ke baad Gate se Us Realm mein enter kar gaye. Aur aisa hone se is Universe mein ek bhi Saint nahi bacha aur Saints ki protection hatne ke baad is Universe mein. Monsters, Beasts, Devils, Demon har jagah badh gaye they. Aur jo Clan Saint ki protection aur management they unme War start ho gayi thi aur uski Wajah se kayi Ancient Clan completely Wipe Out ho gaye they Aur New Clan ban gaye they.


Ek Smile ke Sath Atharva ne Book band kar di Usey pata tha wo is life mein ek baar firse Divine Continent mein apne kadam rakhega aur Fir Apne past Records ko todte huye Immortal Realm mein chala jaayega aur aisa hone ke liye abhi bhut lamba time tha kyuki abhi wo ek weakling tha aur uski age bhi abhi 16 years hi thi, uske paas puri life thi suru se start karne mein. Atharva ki life ka sabse bada regret tha ki wo immortal Realm mein enter nahi kar paya.


Library se nikalne ke Time Raat ho chuki aur Atharva apne Mansion ki Opposite direction mein jaa raha tha kyuki usey kisi se milna tha.


Atharva ko pata tha ki Sohan na to Jiya se Shaadi karega aur na hi JADHAV Family mein. Atharva confident tha kyuki wo bhi ek Man tha Sohan ki tarah. Ye bhut simple tha Jiya se shaadi karne se acha Sohan suicide kar lega.


Kal Wedding Ceremony hai aur agar Atharva ka guess correct hai to Sohan aaj ki raat hi usko maarne aayega.


Sohan ke jaisa person jiska Hard Work destroy ho gaya ho wo itni asaani se jaane nahi dega. Wo Atharva se nafrat karta tha, sirf Atharva se hi nahi balki Mayor Mansion ke har member se Nafrat karta tha. Uske Talent ko dekhke wo Is City ko Chod bhi dega to wo ek achi life ji sakta tha.


Lekin Atharva apne kisi bhi enemy ko bhaagne ka, surrender ka aur maaf karne ka mauka nahi deta. Kyuki usey pata hai baad wo hi enemy strength gain karke wapis Revenge lene aa sakta hai. Aur jis Path pe Atharva jaane wala hai uspe uske Countless enemy honge aur wo ek ko bhi jinda chodne ka risk nahi lega.


Sohan ne is time ek black outfit pehna hua tha aur moon ki taraf dekh raha tha uski eyes bilkul snake jaisi lag rahi thi jo strike karne ke liye kabhi bhi taiyar ho.


"Atharva tumne mere saare plan waste kar diye, aaj tumhe maarke yaha se nikal jaaunga aur strong hone ke baad is Mayor ko bhi maar dunga aur JADHAV FAMILY ko bhi destroy kar dunga."


Sohan ne apni fist ko tight karte huye ye baat sochi. Lekin koi aur tha jo usey itni asani se nahi jaane dega.


Atharva " Hey Brother, apne aisi dress kyu pehen rakhi hai jaise aap kahi bahar jaane wale ho. Kal aapki wedding Ceremony hai aapko rest lena chahiye. "


Jaise hi Sohan ki nazar Atharva pe padi wo ek dum gusse mein aa gaya uska killing intent bhi nikalne laga tha uski body se.


Sohan " Atharva tumne aaj mujhe kyu fasaya. "


Sohan ne ye baat ghuraate huye boli. Yard ke bahar ek aur Aadmi tha jo in dono ki baate sun raha tha. Wo aur koi nahi balki Kailashnath tha jo Sohan se baat karne aaya tha lekin inki baate sunke wahi ruk gaya aur apni presence hide kar li.


Atharva " Aapko kyu fasaunga main? Mujhe to laga JADHAV Family mein shaadi karna aapka sapna tha. Jiya ki body to dekho mujhe pata hai future mein aapko kamane ki jaroorat nahi padegi. Aapko to mujhe Thanks kehna chahiye. "


Sohan " Enough, us ladki ka mere samne naam mat lo, tumne kal bas mujhe replace hone ke liye kaha tha JADHAV FAMILY mein marriage ki baat kaha se aa gayi thi. Atharva maine tumse abhi tak pyaar hi kiya hai agar tum mujhe bhagana chahte ho to saaf saaf bata do ye gande method use karna chod do."


Sohan ki aankho mein Atharva ke liye Hatred chupaye nahi chup rahi thi.


Atharva " Mujhse pyaar karte ho, chalo tumhe expose karte aur apna score settle karte hai. "


Atharva ne apne Father ko pehle hi sense kar liya tha bahar jo ki Sohan nahi kar paaya tha kyuki uski sense Atharva se bhut weak hai ya ye kahu Atharva ki senses kaafi jada strong hai. Atharva ne apna attitude badalte huye Sohan ko expose karne ki sochi taaki wo yaha se bhaag na paaye aur usko opportunity bhi mil jaaye Sohan ko maarne ki.


Atharva " Mujhe ye batao tumne hi Yuan aur Shuang ko mujhe deserted area mein le jaane ke liye aur mujhe maarke mera blood pine ke liye kaha tha ?
Mere marne ke baad tum hi ho jo legally YADAV Family ko Heir ban jaoge. Isi liye tum mujhse pyaar se paish aate they? Kya maine kuch galat kaha My Dear Brother. "


Atharva ne ek Cruel look ke sath Sohan ko dekhte huye ye baat kahi. Wahi Kailashnath shock ho gaye they to jo Atharva ne kaha usey sunkar lekin wo fir bhi bahar hi khade rahe kyuki wo aur Sunna chahte they...





TO BE CONTINUED....


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[Rohit1988]

UPDATE NO - 05
Let's Calculate Our Debt​

Yaha tak ki Atharva ne bhi nahi soch tha ki The Dragon Transformation Skill itni strong hogi. Sirf 4 hours cultivate karne se hi wo QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe pahuch gaya tha.


Sath hi sath uski Yuan Energy badhne ki wajah se uski body bhi strong ho gayi thi aur isliye Atharva ki strength aur Defense mein kaafi fark pada tha.


The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karte time ek baar firse 2 whirlpool ek doosre ke opposite create ho gaye they. Dono whirlpool Atharva ki body mein flow hote huye uski DANTIAN mein enter kar gaye aur ek Red Colour ka Dragon Mark form karne lage.


Waise abhi jo Mark form hua tha wo abhi bhut fika tha ek dum bright Red hone se kaafi dur tha. Atharva ki single thought se Red Dragon Mark bhut jor se shake hone laga.


HAA!


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye hawa mein ek bhut fast punch maara, punch ka pressure itna tha ki Air mein bhi friction hone lagi thi aur fir ek dum se BOOM ke sound ke sath samne ki Wall crack ho gayi.


"Good, mere punch ki power abhi 5000 pound thi, halanki abhi first Red Dragon Mark half complete hua hai. Ek baar Red Dragon Mark complete ho jaaye to mere har punch ke pich 10,000 pound ka force hoga. QI JING REALM 9th Level ke ordinary cultivators ke punch mein 3000 pound force hota hai, aur Genius hote hai unke punch ke piche 4000 pound hota hai. Lekin The Dragon Transformation Skill se mein sirf Half Red Dragon Mark ke hote huye bhi 5000 pound ke punch throw kar sakta hu. Incredible!"



{ Writer Note:- jo bhi punches aur uske force ki baat huyi hai wo sirf ek mark ki jaise jaise mark badhte jaayenge force badhta hai jaayega.}



Ek lambi saans lete huye Atharva ne Cultivate karna rok Diya. Usey Cultivation ke baare mein is world mein sabse jyada Knowledge thi, aur usey ache se pata tha ki Foundatain ko Strong karna kitna Important hai. Usko sab kuch step by step karna hoga bina ek dum se aage badhe. Usne abhi The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate karna start ki hai aur usey half Red Dragon Mark mil gaya hai aur wo is result se abhi ke liye khus hai. Kyuki Fragrant Sky City kuch bhi nahi hai.

Aapko bata du ki :-

{ SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein 5 Continent hai.
1. Northern Continent.
2. Southern Continent.
3. Western Continent.
4. Easter Continent.
5. Divine Continent.

Jisme sabse strong Divine Continent hai jisme Pichli Life mein Atharva ek Saint tha aur wo issi Continent se tha. Sabse Weak Eastern Continent hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
Eastern Continent mein 30 provine hai jisme sabse Strong Martial Saint Dynasty hai Aur Sabse weak QI Province hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
QI Province ke baare mein aage detail mil jaayegi Proper.

QI Province ka outer part hai jaha QI Province ke Log bhi dhyan nahi dete waha pe 28 City hai. Isme sabse Strong hai Red City aur sabse Weak hai Fragrant Sky City jisme filhal Atharva hai. }


Ek warrior ko Cultivate karne ke Liye PILLS, POTIONS, ELIXIRS ki jaroorat padti hai. The Dragon Transformation Skill ko practice karne ki liye ko Sabse jada jaroorat padegi kyuki Ye skill kisi bhi Bloodline kisi bhi Soul ko Absorb kar sakti hai. World Mein bhut saare Demon Beast hai, jinme se kaafi kam Rare Bloodline ke hote hai aur kuch to Ancient Time ke Rare Beast bhi hote hai, agar kisi rare Bloodline ke Demon Beast ki Soul ko Absorb karta hai to The Dragon Transformation Skill ki Wajah se usey use Beast ki Ability bhi millegi.


"Main 100 years se Dead tha is time mein bhut kuch badal gaya hoga. Agar meri Memory sahi hai to Fragrant Sky City Sabse small City hai QI Province ki, pata nahi Divine Continent yaha se kitni dur hoga. Past life mein The GREATEST SAINT hone ki wajah se maine kabhi is Small Eastern Continent pe dhyan nahi diya tha kyuki Meri aankho mein ye kuch bhi nahi tha."


Atharva apne Mansion se Nikal ke apne Father ke Mansion mein aa gaya aur sidha unke Room mein bani Library mein ghus gaya. Yaha pe kisi ko aane ki izzazt nahi thi yaha tak ki Sohan bhi bina permission ke enter nahi kar sakta tha lekin Atharva ki baat alag thi wo Mayor ka eklauta beta tha to wo pure Mayor Mansion mein kabhi bhi kahi bhi jaa sakta tha.


Atharva ne waha pe rakhi Martial Arts Skill ki books ko dekha bhi nahi kyuki usey pata is universe ki sabse small city mein Trash hi millega. Isliye wo sidha ek book ki taraf badh gaya jiska naam tha "History of Saint Origin"


Is Book mein saare History events se they Pure Saint Origin ke aur saari geographical condition.
Atharva ne jaisa hi first Chapter khola uske Face pe smile aa gayi. kyuki jo first Chapter tha wo Ek Greatest Saint ke baare mein tha jisne Apni Big Sword ki Ek Strike mein Heaven ko kaatte huye Immortal Realm ke Gate khol diye they 100 years pehle. Unfortunately wo Greatest Saint us din usi SAINT CLIFF pe khatam ho gaya.


100 year pehle Atharva ne apni Saint Blood ki last drop ko Use karte huye Immortal Realm ke gate khol diye aur wo iske backlash se wahi khatam ho gaya tha. Uske baad kya hua usey kuch nahi pata. Usne aisa isliye kiya tha kyuki Saint Origin Universe mein koi bhi person Saint Realm ke aage Cultivate nahi kar paata lekin Atharva ko pata tha ki Saint Realm ke baad bhi Realm hai jo is Universe mein possible nahi hai, isliye usne apni saari strenght ko use karke doosre Universe ka Gate khol diya tha Jiska naam hai Immortal Origin Universe ya Immortal Realm jisme Immortals rehte hai.


History ke according us event ke baad bhut kuch badal gaya tha. Jab Atharva ne Immortal Realm ke Gate khole to Jo baaki ke Saint they jo Atharva ko aisa karte dekh rahe they wo Atharva ki Death ke baad Gate se Us Realm mein enter kar gaye. Aur aisa hone se is Universe mein ek bhi Saint nahi bacha aur Saints ki protection hatne ke baad is Universe mein. Monsters, Beasts, Devils, Demon har jagah badh gaye they. Aur jo Clan Saint ki protection aur management they unme War start ho gayi thi aur uski Wajah se kayi Ancient Clan completely Wipe Out ho gaye they Aur New Clan ban gaye they.


Ek Smile ke Sath Atharva ne Book band kar di Usey pata tha wo is life mein ek baar firse Divine Continent mein apne kadam rakhega aur Fir Apne past Records ko todte huye Immortal Realm mein chala jaayega aur aisa hone ke liye abhi bhut lamba time tha kyuki abhi wo ek weakling tha aur uski age bhi abhi 16 years hi thi, uske paas puri life thi suru se start karne mein. Atharva ki life ka sabse bada regret tha ki wo immortal Realm mein enter nahi kar paya.


Library se nikalne ke Time Raat ho chuki aur Atharva apne Mansion ki Opposite direction mein jaa raha tha kyuki usey kisi se milna tha.


Atharva ko pata tha ki Sohan na to Jiya se Shaadi karega aur na hi JADHAV Family mein. Atharva confident tha kyuki wo bhi ek Man tha Sohan ki tarah. Ye bhut simple tha Jiya se shaadi karne se acha Sohan suicide kar lega.


Kal Wedding Ceremony hai aur agar Atharva ka guess correct hai to Sohan aaj ki raat hi usko maarne aayega.


Sohan ke jaisa person jiska Hard Work destroy ho gaya ho wo itni asaani se jaane nahi dega. Wo Atharva se nafrat karta tha, sirf Atharva se hi nahi balki Mayor Mansion ke har member se Nafrat karta tha. Uske Talent ko dekhke wo Is City ko Chod bhi dega to wo ek achi life ji sakta tha.


Lekin Atharva apne kisi bhi enemy ko bhaagne ka, surrender ka aur maaf karne ka mauka nahi deta. Kyuki usey pata hai baad wo hi enemy strength gain karke wapis Revenge lene aa sakta hai. Aur jis Path pe Atharva jaane wala hai uspe uske Countless enemy honge aur wo ek ko bhi jinda chodne ka risk nahi lega.


Sohan ne is time ek black outfit pehna hua tha aur moon ki taraf dekh raha tha uski eyes bilkul snake jaisi lag rahi thi jo strike karne ke liye kabhi bhi taiyar ho.


"Atharva tumne mere saare plan waste kar diye, aaj tumhe maarke yaha se nikal jaaunga aur strong hone ke baad is Mayor ko bhi maar dunga aur JADHAV FAMILY ko bhi destroy kar dunga."


Sohan ne apni fist ko tight karte huye ye baat sochi. Lekin koi aur tha jo usey itni asani se nahi jaane dega.


Atharva " Hey Brother, apne aisi dress kyu pehen rakhi hai jaise aap kahi bahar jaane wale ho. Kal aapki wedding Ceremony hai aapko rest lena chahiye. "


Jaise hi Sohan ki nazar Atharva pe padi wo ek dum gusse mein aa gaya uska killing intent bhi nikalne laga tha uski body se.


Sohan " Atharva tumne aaj mujhe kyu fasaya. "


Sohan ne ye baat ghuraate huye boli. Yard ke bahar ek aur Aadmi tha jo in dono ki baate sun raha tha. Wo aur koi nahi balki Kailashnath tha jo Sohan se baat karne aaya tha lekin inki baate sunke wahi ruk gaya aur apni presence hide kar li.


Atharva " Aapko kyu fasaunga main? Mujhe to laga JADHAV Family mein shaadi karna aapka sapna tha. Jiya ki body to dekho mujhe pata hai future mein aapko kamane ki jaroorat nahi padegi. Aapko to mujhe Thanks kehna chahiye. "


Sohan " Enough, us ladki ka mere samne naam mat lo, tumne kal bas mujhe replace hone ke liye kaha tha JADHAV FAMILY mein marriage ki baat kaha se aa gayi thi. Atharva maine tumse abhi tak pyaar hi kiya hai agar tum mujhe bhagana chahte ho to saaf saaf bata do ye gande method use karna chod do."


Sohan ki aankho mein Atharva ke liye Hatred chupaye nahi chup rahi thi.


Atharva " Mujhse pyaar karte ho, chalo tumhe expose karte aur apna score settle karte hai. "


Atharva ne apne Father ko pehle hi sense kar liya tha bahar jo ki Sohan nahi kar paaya tha kyuki uski sense Atharva se bhut weak hai ya ye kahu Atharva ki senses kaafi jada strong hai. Atharva ne apna attitude badalte huye Sohan ko expose karne ki sochi taaki wo yaha se bhaag na paaye aur usko opportunity bhi mil jaaye Sohan ko maarne ki.


Atharva " Mujhe ye batao tumne hi Yuan aur Shuang ko mujhe deserted area mein le jaane ke liye aur mujhe maarke mera blood pine ke liye kaha tha ?
Mere marne ke baad tum hi ho jo legally YADAV Family ko Heir ban jaoge. Isi liye tum mujhse pyaar se paish aate they? Kya maine kuch galat kaha My Dear Brother. "


Atharva ne ek Cruel look ke sath Sohan ko dekhte huye ye baat kahi. Wahi Kailashnath shock ho gaye they to jo Atharva ne kaha usey sunkar lekin wo fir bhi bahar hi khade rahe kyuki wo aur Sunna chahte they...





TO BE CONTINUED....


Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!

Fantastic update bro

 

[Bhupinder Singh]

UPDATE NO - 05
Let's Calculate Our Debt​

Yaha tak ki Atharva ne bhi nahi soch tha ki The Dragon Transformation Skill itni strong hogi. Sirf 4 hours cultivate karne se hi wo QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe pahuch gaya tha.


Sath hi sath uski Yuan Energy badhne ki wajah se uski body bhi strong ho gayi thi aur isliye Atharva ki strength aur Defense mein kaafi fark pada tha.


The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karte time ek baar firse 2 whirlpool ek doosre ke opposite create ho gaye they. Dono whirlpool Atharva ki body mein flow hote huye uski DANTIAN mein enter kar gaye aur ek Red Colour ka Dragon Mark form karne lage.


Waise abhi jo Mark form hua tha wo abhi bhut fika tha ek dum bright Red hone se kaafi dur tha. Atharva ki single thought se Red Dragon Mark bhut jor se shake hone laga.


HAA!


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye hawa mein ek bhut fast punch maara, punch ka pressure itna tha ki Air mein bhi friction hone lagi thi aur fir ek dum se BOOM ke sound ke sath samne ki Wall crack ho gayi.


"Good, mere punch ki power abhi 5000 pound thi, halanki abhi first Red Dragon Mark half complete hua hai. Ek baar Red Dragon Mark complete ho jaaye to mere har punch ke pich 10,000 pound ka force hoga. QI JING REALM 9th Level ke ordinary cultivators ke punch mein 3000 pound force hota hai, aur Genius hote hai unke punch ke piche 4000 pound hota hai. Lekin The Dragon Transformation Skill se mein sirf Half Red Dragon Mark ke hote huye bhi 5000 pound ke punch throw kar sakta hu. Incredible!"



{ Writer Note:- jo bhi punches aur uske force ki baat huyi hai wo sirf ek mark ki jaise jaise mark badhte jaayenge force badhta hai jaayega.}



Ek lambi saans lete huye Atharva ne Cultivate karna rok Diya. Usey Cultivation ke baare mein is world mein sabse jyada Knowledge thi, aur usey ache se pata tha ki Foundatain ko Strong karna kitna Important hai. Usko sab kuch step by step karna hoga bina ek dum se aage badhe. Usne abhi The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate karna start ki hai aur usey half Red Dragon Mark mil gaya hai aur wo is result se abhi ke liye khus hai. Kyuki Fragrant Sky City kuch bhi nahi hai.

Aapko bata du ki :-

{ SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein 5 Continent hai.
1. Northern Continent.
2. Southern Continent.
3. Western Continent.
4. Easter Continent.
5. Divine Continent.

Jisme sabse strong Divine Continent hai jisme Pichli Life mein Atharva ek Saint tha aur wo issi Continent se tha. Sabse Weak Eastern Continent hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
Eastern Continent mein 30 provine hai jisme sabse Strong Martial Saint Dynasty hai Aur Sabse weak QI Province hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
QI Province ke baare mein aage detail mil jaayegi Proper.

QI Province ka outer part hai jaha QI Province ke Log bhi dhyan nahi dete waha pe 28 City hai. Isme sabse Strong hai Red City aur sabse Weak hai Fragrant Sky City jisme filhal Atharva hai. }


Ek warrior ko Cultivate karne ke Liye PILLS, POTIONS, ELIXIRS ki jaroorat padti hai. The Dragon Transformation Skill ko practice karne ki liye ko Sabse jada jaroorat padegi kyuki Ye skill kisi bhi Bloodline kisi bhi Soul ko Absorb kar sakti hai. World Mein bhut saare Demon Beast hai, jinme se kaafi kam Rare Bloodline ke hote hai aur kuch to Ancient Time ke Rare Beast bhi hote hai, agar kisi rare Bloodline ke Demon Beast ki Soul ko Absorb karta hai to The Dragon Transformation Skill ki Wajah se usey use Beast ki Ability bhi millegi.


"Main 100 years se Dead tha is time mein bhut kuch badal gaya hoga. Agar meri Memory sahi hai to Fragrant Sky City Sabse small City hai QI Province ki, pata nahi Divine Continent yaha se kitni dur hoga. Past life mein The GREATEST SAINT hone ki wajah se maine kabhi is Small Eastern Continent pe dhyan nahi diya tha kyuki Meri aankho mein ye kuch bhi nahi tha."


Atharva apne Mansion se Nikal ke apne Father ke Mansion mein aa gaya aur sidha unke Room mein bani Library mein ghus gaya. Yaha pe kisi ko aane ki izzazt nahi thi yaha tak ki Sohan bhi bina permission ke enter nahi kar sakta tha lekin Atharva ki baat alag thi wo Mayor ka eklauta beta tha to wo pure Mayor Mansion mein kabhi bhi kahi bhi jaa sakta tha.


Atharva ne waha pe rakhi Martial Arts Skill ki books ko dekha bhi nahi kyuki usey pata is universe ki sabse small city mein Trash hi millega. Isliye wo sidha ek book ki taraf badh gaya jiska naam tha "History of Saint Origin"


Is Book mein saare History events se they Pure Saint Origin ke aur saari geographical condition.
Atharva ne jaisa hi first Chapter khola uske Face pe smile aa gayi. kyuki jo first Chapter tha wo Ek Greatest Saint ke baare mein tha jisne Apni Big Sword ki Ek Strike mein Heaven ko kaatte huye Immortal Realm ke Gate khol diye they 100 years pehle. Unfortunately wo Greatest Saint us din usi SAINT CLIFF pe khatam ho gaya.


100 year pehle Atharva ne apni Saint Blood ki last drop ko Use karte huye Immortal Realm ke gate khol diye aur wo iske backlash se wahi khatam ho gaya tha. Uske baad kya hua usey kuch nahi pata. Usne aisa isliye kiya tha kyuki Saint Origin Universe mein koi bhi person Saint Realm ke aage Cultivate nahi kar paata lekin Atharva ko pata tha ki Saint Realm ke baad bhi Realm hai jo is Universe mein possible nahi hai, isliye usne apni saari strenght ko use karke doosre Universe ka Gate khol diya tha Jiska naam hai Immortal Origin Universe ya Immortal Realm jisme Immortals rehte hai.


History ke according us event ke baad bhut kuch badal gaya tha. Jab Atharva ne Immortal Realm ke Gate khole to Jo baaki ke Saint they jo Atharva ko aisa karte dekh rahe they wo Atharva ki Death ke baad Gate se Us Realm mein enter kar gaye. Aur aisa hone se is Universe mein ek bhi Saint nahi bacha aur Saints ki protection hatne ke baad is Universe mein. Monsters, Beasts, Devils, Demon har jagah badh gaye they. Aur jo Clan Saint ki protection aur management they unme War start ho gayi thi aur uski Wajah se kayi Ancient Clan completely Wipe Out ho gaye they Aur New Clan ban gaye they.


Ek Smile ke Sath Atharva ne Book band kar di Usey pata tha wo is life mein ek baar firse Divine Continent mein apne kadam rakhega aur Fir Apne past Records ko todte huye Immortal Realm mein chala jaayega aur aisa hone ke liye abhi bhut lamba time tha kyuki abhi wo ek weakling tha aur uski age bhi abhi 16 years hi thi, uske paas puri life thi suru se start karne mein. Atharva ki life ka sabse bada regret tha ki wo immortal Realm mein enter nahi kar paya.


Library se nikalne ke Time Raat ho chuki aur Atharva apne Mansion ki Opposite direction mein jaa raha tha kyuki usey kisi se milna tha.


Atharva ko pata tha ki Sohan na to Jiya se Shaadi karega aur na hi JADHAV Family mein. Atharva confident tha kyuki wo bhi ek Man tha Sohan ki tarah. Ye bhut simple tha Jiya se shaadi karne se acha Sohan suicide kar lega.


Kal Wedding Ceremony hai aur agar Atharva ka guess correct hai to Sohan aaj ki raat hi usko maarne aayega.


Sohan ke jaisa person jiska Hard Work destroy ho gaya ho wo itni asaani se jaane nahi dega. Wo Atharva se nafrat karta tha, sirf Atharva se hi nahi balki Mayor Mansion ke har member se Nafrat karta tha. Uske Talent ko dekhke wo Is City ko Chod bhi dega to wo ek achi life ji sakta tha.


Lekin Atharva apne kisi bhi enemy ko bhaagne ka, surrender ka aur maaf karne ka mauka nahi deta. Kyuki usey pata hai baad wo hi enemy strength gain karke wapis Revenge lene aa sakta hai. Aur jis Path pe Atharva jaane wala hai uspe uske Countless enemy honge aur wo ek ko bhi jinda chodne ka risk nahi lega.


Sohan ne is time ek black outfit pehna hua tha aur moon ki taraf dekh raha tha uski eyes bilkul snake jaisi lag rahi thi jo strike karne ke liye kabhi bhi taiyar ho.


"Atharva tumne mere saare plan waste kar diye, aaj tumhe maarke yaha se nikal jaaunga aur strong hone ke baad is Mayor ko bhi maar dunga aur JADHAV FAMILY ko bhi destroy kar dunga."


Sohan ne apni fist ko tight karte huye ye baat sochi. Lekin koi aur tha jo usey itni asani se nahi jaane dega.


Atharva " Hey Brother, apne aisi dress kyu pehen rakhi hai jaise aap kahi bahar jaane wale ho. Kal aapki wedding Ceremony hai aapko rest lena chahiye. "


Jaise hi Sohan ki nazar Atharva pe padi wo ek dum gusse mein aa gaya uska killing intent bhi nikalne laga tha uski body se.


Sohan " Atharva tumne aaj mujhe kyu fasaya. "


Sohan ne ye baat ghuraate huye boli. Yard ke bahar ek aur Aadmi tha jo in dono ki baate sun raha tha. Wo aur koi nahi balki Kailashnath tha jo Sohan se baat karne aaya tha lekin inki baate sunke wahi ruk gaya aur apni presence hide kar li.


Atharva " Aapko kyu fasaunga main? Mujhe to laga JADHAV Family mein shaadi karna aapka sapna tha. Jiya ki body to dekho mujhe pata hai future mein aapko kamane ki jaroorat nahi padegi. Aapko to mujhe Thanks kehna chahiye. "


Sohan " Enough, us ladki ka mere samne naam mat lo, tumne kal bas mujhe replace hone ke liye kaha tha JADHAV FAMILY mein marriage ki baat kaha se aa gayi thi. Atharva maine tumse abhi tak pyaar hi kiya hai agar tum mujhe bhagana chahte ho to saaf saaf bata do ye gande method use karna chod do."


Sohan ki aankho mein Atharva ke liye Hatred chupaye nahi chup rahi thi.


Atharva " Mujhse pyaar karte ho, chalo tumhe expose karte aur apna score settle karte hai. "


Atharva ne apne Father ko pehle hi sense kar liya tha bahar jo ki Sohan nahi kar paaya tha kyuki uski sense Atharva se bhut weak hai ya ye kahu Atharva ki senses kaafi jada strong hai. Atharva ne apna attitude badalte huye Sohan ko expose karne ki sochi taaki wo yaha se bhaag na paaye aur usko opportunity bhi mil jaaye Sohan ko maarne ki.


Atharva " Mujhe ye batao tumne hi Yuan aur Shuang ko mujhe deserted area mein le jaane ke liye aur mujhe maarke mera blood pine ke liye kaha tha ?
Mere marne ke baad tum hi ho jo legally YADAV Family ko Heir ban jaoge. Isi liye tum mujhse pyaar se paish aate they? Kya maine kuch galat kaha My Dear Brother. "


Atharva ne ek Cruel look ke sath Sohan ko dekhte huye ye baat kahi. Wahi Kailashnath shock ho gaye they to jo Atharva ne kaha usey sunkar lekin wo fir bhi bahar hi khade rahe kyuki wo aur Sunna chahte they...





TO BE CONTINUED....


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[Itachi_Uchiha]

UPDATE NO - 06
INSULTING​

Sohan ab puri baat samajh gaya tha ki Atharva usey kyu fasana chahta hai, lekin usey ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye useless fool itna Clever kaise ho gaya hai.


Atharva " Yong aur Shuang dono hamari Family ke servent they unme itni himmat nahi thi ki wo akele hi Mayor ke son ko kidnap kar sake aur poor hone ki wajah se wo kahi se bhi CLEANSING PILL nahi la sakte they. "
" Sohan kyuki tum JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karna chahte they to main to wo hi karwa raha hu, lekin Jiya ko dekhke to mujhe bhi ab tumhare liye khusi ho rahi hai. Agar tum chup-chap JADHAV Family mein Marriage kar lete ho to main kisi ko ye nahi bataunga ki tumne mujhe maarne ki kosis ki hai. Tumhari ye halat dekhna tumhe maarne se jyada behtar hai. Lekin kitni buri baat hai ki tum yaha se bhagna chahte ho jo main hone nahi dunga. "


Sirf Sohan ne hi Atharva ke andar ye change mehsoos nahi kiye they bahar khade Kailashnath ko bhi surprise ho raha tha, usey aisa lag raha tha jaise wo pehli baar Atharva se mil raha ho. Kailashnath ne apne sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki Atharva itna Smart hoga aur aise plan bhi bana sakega.

Hahahaha…..

Sohan haste hue " Atharva mujhe tumhe aise dekhke sach mein surprise hua hu, maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum itne smart hoge, lekin tumne fir bhi ek stupid mistake kar di. "


Sohan ne apna apna killing intent release karte huye bola.


Atharva " Stupid mistake, kaisi stupid mistake ? "


Atharva apne kandhe hillate huye bola.


Sohan " Tum sach mein stupid ho, tumhe pata tha main aaj yaha se bhagne wala hu lekin fir bhi tum yaha akele aa gaye. Tum QI JING REALM ke 1st level pe hone ke baad bhut jaldi marna chahte ho. Ab main yaha se jaa hi raha hu to tumhe maarke hi jaaunga aur uske baad QI Province ke kisi big Sect ko join karne ke baad waapis aake us Old Man ko bhi maar dunga."


Sohan ne Atharva ko nicha dikhate huye kaha. Uske dimag mein Atharva kisi Ant se kam nahi tha jisey wo kabhi masal sakta hai.


Kailashnath " Shit. "


Kailashnath ne Apne mann mein ye bolte huye abhi andar enter karne ki sochi lekin wo Atharva ke word sun ke wahi ruk gaya.


Atharva " Tum mujhe nahi maar sakte. "


Sohan " Really, tum mere yard mein khade ho aur sirf QI JING REALM ke 1st level pe ho, Agar Kailashnath bhi yaha hota to wo bhi tumhe nahi bacha sakta. "


Sohan ne jor se haste huye ye baat kahi, usey Atharva ko maarne mein pura confidence tha.


Atharva " I am sorry, lekin mein QI JING Realm ke 1st nahi 9th level pe hu. "


Atharva ne ye bolte huye apni QI release kar di. Uski Body se itni jyada Force se Yuan Power release huyi ki usne Sohan ko bhi 3 step piche hone pe majboor kar diya.


" What "


Sohan kaafi shock ho gaya tha, wo Atharva ko aise dekh raha tha jaise wo koi ghost ho. Usne kabhi apne dream mein bhi ye nahi socha tha.


Bahar khada Kailashnath bhi kaafi shock ho gaya tha Atharva ki is transformation ko dekhke, lekin ek Father hone ki wajah se wo bhut jayda khus bhi they.


" Thank God, mera beta koi useless scumbag nahi hai. Lekin Damm it ye meri naak ke niche ye sab chuppa kaise raha tha ? "


Kailashnath ne khus hote huye khud se hi bola. Useless uske heart mein ek bhut bada wound tha. Lekin ab Atharva ne bilkul opposite QI JING REALM ke 9th level mein Breakthrough karke wo bhi sirf 16 ki Age mein ye proof de diya tha ki wo ek Genius hai, aisa abhi tak Fragrant Sky City mein kisi ne nahi kiya tha. Sohan bhi is level pe 16 ki Age mein pahucha tha. Aur Atharva jis tarah se wo Sohan ko handle kar raha hai aise koi bhi 16 ki Age ka ladka nahi kar sakta.


Sohan " Impossible, aisa nahi ho sakta, tum 3 din pehle sirf 1st Level pe they. Ye mat kehna ki tum abhi tak apni true strength hide karke rakhe huye they. Agar aisa hai bhi to 9th level ka person itni jyada yuan power nahi rakhta. "


Atharva " Is world mein aisi bhut si things hai jinhe tum bilkul nahi samajh sakte. Sohan tumhara ek bhut acha future ho sakta tha lekin tumne sab barbaad kar diya. Let's end this. "


Itna bolte hi Atharva lighting speed se move hua aur ek dum se Sohan ke samne aa gaya, wo bilkul bhi risk nahi lena chahta tha kyuki usne abhi tak ek bhi Combat Skill practice nahi ki thi. Atharva ne Sohan ke saamne aate hi lighting speed se apne right hand mein apni Yuan Energy mein flow karwake usey kisi sword ki tarah sharp kar diya aur usi speed se right hand kisi sword ki tarah Sohan ki neck ki taraf move ho gaya. Atharva ki speed itni fast tak thi ki Sohan ko ek finger move karne ka bhi time nahi tha.


" Stop. "


Kailashnath jor se chillate huye door ko tod ke andar enter ho gaya.


Snap!


Unfortunately, wo bhi Atharva ki movements se slow tha jab tak wo Atharva ko rokta tab tak Atharva ke right hand ne kisi sword ki tarah Sohan ka head uski bodi se alag kar diya tha. Sohan ki aankhe marne ke baad bhi shock mein thi aur uski body bhi kuch second tak wahi khadi rahi aur fir ekdum se nich gir gayi. Blood kisi fountain ki Tarah nikal raha tha.


Kailashnath " Atharva tumne usey kyu maar diya ? "


Dead body ko dekhte huye Kailashnath shock mein tha, Atharva ne same level pe hone ke bawjood Sohan ko ek strike mein khatam kar diya tha wo bhi bina kisi skill ko use kiye.


Atharva " Father kya aap iske marne se khus nahi ho. Agar main abhi isey nahi maarta to ye baad mein badi threat banke revenge lene aa jaata. Main apne enemy ko koi chance nahi deta. "


Kailashnath " Maine isko adopt karke galti kardi. Isne tumhe maarne ki kosis ki to of course tum usey maar sakte ho. Lekin ab ye mar gaya hai to JADHAV Family mein Marriage kon karega. Hamari families ke relations pehle hi kharab they ab aur ho jaayenge. "


Atharva " Father aap itne bhi pagal mat bano aap ko bhi pata hai ek Mountain mein 2 tiger nahi reh sakte.
Aisa koi raasta nahi hai jisse hamari Family aur JADHAV Family ek sath reh sake aur wo JADHAV Family ka chief humey kabhi bhi khud ke barabar nahi samjhega. Usne aaj hamari din mein insult ki hai. Hum unke sath acha kyu kare ? "


" Insult ki hai ? "


Kailashnath ne confuse hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Father aap us Karamchand ke innocent face se pagal mat bano wo real mein old fox hai. Yaha tak ki aaj Jiya ka aana bhi aaj hamari insult hai. "
" Hamari Family is City ki sabse Strong Family hai aur agar humne us Jiya se Marriage kar li to hum sabke samne laughing stock ban jaayenge. Humari family ki reputation bhi kam ho jaayegi aur agar Sohan, JADHAV Family mein marriage kar leta to aur bhi bura hota."


Atharva ne bolna jaari raka.


Atharva " Wo ugly Girl sirf hamari insult karne ke liye hi laayi gayi thi, mujhe to yakeen hai wo GYAN ki daughter bhi nahi hai. JADHAV Family ek reputed Family hai hamari tarah agar GYAN ki koi Ugly daughter hoti to ab tak puri City mein baat fail gayi hoti. Is baat se fark nahi padta ko Jiya marriage karke yaha aaye ya Sohan marriage karke JADHAV Family mein jaaye, insult to hamari hi hoti. "


Ab Kailashnath ko bhi sab kuch samajh mein aa raha tha, wo to bas dono Families ke relations ko thik karna chahta tha, lekin kam Knowledge hone ke wajah se wo khud ki hi Insult karwa leta.


Ek Mountain pe 2 Tiger kabhi bhi ek sath rule nahi kar sakte isi tarah YADAV Family aur JADHAV Family bhi ek sath nahi reh sakti.


Kailashnath " Atharva beta tum itna Clever kab se ho gaye ? "


Atharva " Father mein kabhi stupid nahi tha. "


Kailashnath " Aur tum ne suddenly 9th Level mein Breakthrough kaise kar liya ? "


Kailashnath ne shock hote huye pucha, is baat pe Atharva ko bhi Smile aa Gayi usey pata tha ye Question to uthega isliye usne pehle se hi answer ready Kar rakha tha.


Atharva " Father jab un dono Guards ne 3 din pehle mujhe maarne ki kosis ki thi tab waha se guzarte huye ek Great Warrior ne mujhe bacha liya. Usne undono ko maar diya aur unhone meri help karte huye meri body ke andar ki PILLS ko refine kiya aur mujhe Breakthrough karne mein bhi madad ki. "


Kailashnath " kon tha wo Warrior ? "
" Lekin dukh ki baat hai main unse mil nahi paaya. "


Kailashnath jor jor se hasne laga, uske liye isse badi khusi ki baat kya hogi ki Uska Beta ek Genius hai.


Atharva " Father humey JADHAV Family ke sath relationship ache karne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai, Mere opinion mein, City mein ek power hi reh sakti hai. Agar Karamchand khelna chahta hai to hum bhi khelenge. "


Atharva ne ek evil smile ke sath kaha.


Kailashnath " Tumne thik kaha humey unke sath War start kar deni Chahiye nahi to City ke People sochenge ki main dar gaya. Lekin kal ki wedding Ceremony ke baare mein kya kare ? "


Atharva " Jab se JIYA publicaly humare Mansion mein aayi hai to humari reputation affect ho chuki hai. Agar wo ye chahte hai to hum Unki reputation bilkul hi khatam kar denge Fragrant Sky City mein. "


Kailashnath " Tumhara plan kya hai beta ? "


Atharva " Simple kal wo Sohan ko lene aayenge marriage ke liye hum unhe Sohan hi denge lekin ek Casket mein. "


AK ke liye Friend Friend tha aur enemy enemy. Wo kabhi bhi apni enemies ke sath reh nahi paaya tha, jo uska enemy bana unme se ek ka bhi end acha nahi hua tha. Is life mein Sohan first tha aur JADHAV Family second. JADHAV Family ko jad se khatam karke Fragrant Sky City mein wo bas apni Family ko Top mein dekhna chahta tha taaki uske yaha se jaane ke baad yaha uski Family ko koi dikkat na ho.



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NEXT DAY


Aaj ka din kal ke din se bhi jyada lively tha, aaj to JADHAV Family se leke YADAV Family ke Mansion tak ka road Decorate kara gaya tha. Atharva aur Kailashnath ko chodke kisi ko nahi pata tha ki Sohan ab mar chuka hai.


Fragrant Sky City ki street pe mascular Karamchand horse pe ride karte huye aa raha tha uske piche JADHAV Family ke kayi Young Men they jinke Face pe ek alag hi arrogant look tha, ek parade unke piche aa rahi thi jiske End mein ek sedan Chair thi jisey 8 men carry kar rahe they. Yeh parade sidha Mayor Mansion ki taraf badh rahi thi raaste mein har ek person ko attract karte huye.


" Oh my god, ye koi woman hai ya God ke taraf se koi majak. "


" Uggg, mujhe vomit karne do, ye women sky ko bhi rok sakti hai aur ghost ko bhi dara sakti hai apne ugly face se. Maine suna hai Mayor ka elder son ek handsome aur genius man hai. Kya wo is marriage ke Baad jinda reh paayega. "


" Mayor apne adopted son ko ek fire pit mein daal rahe hai. "


City ke sabhi person aapas mein baate kar rahe they aur joke bana rahe they. Jaisa ki Atharva ne socha tha JADHAV Family puri City ke saamne Mayor ki insult karna Chahti hai. Itni lambi parade dekh ke sab ko pata lag gaya tha ko JADHAV Family ek Ugly Girl ko YADAV Family mein marriage karwa rahi hai aur ye baat kaafi thi Mayor ka laughing Stock banne ke liye.



TO BE CONTINUED….




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UPDATE - 06 post kar diya hai dosto.
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[Smart killer]

boht hi khub update atharave dhakty hain kyakrta hai kasy us family ko khtam krta hai or apni family ko is city ma top pe lata hai or us k bad us ka next plan kya ho ga lets see waiting for next

 

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