Fantasy WARGOD

[Itachi_Uchiha]

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[krish1152]

Nice update

 

[andyking302]

UPDATE NO - 04
( The Mighty Dragon Transformation Skill )​

Sohan is time bhut gusse mein tha, wo abhi ke abhi Atharva ko maarna chahta tha. Sohan, Kailashnath, Karamchand ko aaj Atharva ne bewkoof bana diya tha. Keval ek cheez Sohan ko samajh nahi aa rahi thi ki ye useless itna smart kaise ho gaya hai.


Lekin ab kuch bhi badlne ya karne mein bhut der ho chuki thi ab to Sohan bas ek hi umeed rakh sakta ki Jiya ek beautiful aur gentle ladki ho. Agar aisa hua to fir uska mood kuch hadd tak thik ho sakta hai.


Kuch time baad purple dress mein ek ladki andar chalte huye aayi, jiske piche 2 JADHAV Family ke Guards they. Jab Karamchand, Kailashnath aur Atharva ne us ladki ki taraf dekha jo unki taraf hi aa rahi thi to unki face ki smile chali gayi.


Bang!


Kailashnath jis glass se drink kar raha tha wo uske hath se chhut ke niche gir gaya. Jo usne dekha wo uske liye bhi shocking tha. Kailashnath jor se khaasne laga. Jo ladki uske saamne khadi thi wo 8 feet tall thi. Aur wo apne Father ki tarah hi bhut jada mascular thi. Aur itna hi nahi wo kisi strong Man ki tarah dikh rahi thi, jiska weight kam se kam 300 pound ho.


" Mascular body hona fir bhi chal jaata hai lekin isne apne hair ko sky ki taraf kyu baandh rakha hai. Aur ye face bilkul oily hai, aur iski skin bhi kitni moti aur rough hai, aur iske Lips bhi kitne mote aur bade hai. Yukkkk! "


Atharva apne dimag mein hi vomit kar raha tha. Wo beshak past life mein ek Greatest Saint tha aur usne almost sab kuch dekha tha, lekin itni ugly ladki usne Kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Haa ye Saint Origin ki sabse Ugly ladki thi, Atharva ke opinion mein aur iska naam Jiya tha, jo sabse bada joke tha.


Atharva ka face bilkul red chuka tha, usko apni hasi rokne mein kaafi dikkat ho rahi thi. Lekin apne mann hi mann mein wo bhut tez has raha tha.


" Sohan, This is karma. "


Atharva mann hi mann Karamchand ki tareef kar raha tha kaise usne apne saare genes apni beti ko de diye the aur uska naam bhi JIYA rakh diya tha aur jo uske body se bikul bhi match nahi ho raha tha.


Kailashnath " Jaldi se miss JIYA ko unki seat pe baithao. "


Kailashnath ne apne shocking expression ko dabate huye kaha. Jo Kailashnath abhi tak thoda dukhi tha wo ab khus tha ki sahi hua jo is ladki shaadi karne wala Atharva nahi hai aur ye bhi achi baat thi ki Sohan JADHAV Family mein marriage kar raha tha iski wajah se is ladki ko Mayor Mansion mein nahi rehna hoga. Mann hi mann Kailashnath, Atharva ko Thanks bol raha tha.


Karamchand " hahaha, JIYA jaldi idhar aao aur apne Future Husband se milo. "


JIYA jaldi se chalti huyi aayi aur Sohan ke saamne khadi ho gayi, Sohan ko dekhte hi JIYA ki aanke chamakne lagi kyuki Sohan Fragrant Sky City ke geniuses mein ek tha aur handsome to tha hi. JIYA ne jaldi se Sohan ke arm ko tightly pakad liya aur boli.


JIYA " Dear Husband, Main Mayor Mansion mein pehli baar aayi hu kya aap mujhe Mansion dikha denge. "


Atharva ke muh se almost blood nikalne ko ho gaya tha. Usey aisa lag raha tha ki uske internal organs bhi bahar aa jaayenge 'miss JIYA' ki soft awaz sunke jo kisi Animal ke dhadane jaisi thi. JIYA ki awaz sunke Atharva ko apni spine mein coldness feel hone lagi thi. Lekin wo bhut jada enjoy kar raha tha is moment ko.


" Kisey pata Sohan apne mann mein kya soch raha hoga, mere hisab se to wo bas soch raha hoga ki kisi bhi tarah se Death ho jaaye uski. "


Kailashnath " Jaao Sohan jaake JIYA ko Mansion dikha do. "


Sohan " Yes Father ! "


Sohan ki awaz is time kaamp rahi thi, Main hall mein majood har koi yeh dekh sakta uske face bilkul red ho chuka tha lekin QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe hone ke baad bhi JYA usey khichte huye Main hall se bahar le gayi.


Atharva " Father, Uncle, mujhe lagta hai humey jaldi se marriage ki date fix kar leni chahiye. "


Karamchand " Thik hai kal ki Date main hum Marriage kar lenge. "


Sohan jo waha se abhi nikla hi tha ki ye sunne ke baad to uska Heart uske Muh se bahar nikalne ko ho gaya tha.


Atharva " Uncle aap sahi keh rahe hai aise khusi ke mauke ke liye jyada din rukna nahi chahiye. Chalo aap log baate kijiye main bhi chalta hu. "


Atharva ki back ko dekhte huye Kailashnath soch mein pad gya tha ki Atharva kyu Sohan ko Frame karna chahta hai.
Kailashnath itna to intelligent tha ki wo Atharva ki baato se matter samajh gaya tha lekin usey reason pata nahi tha iske piche ka. Kyuki Dono Brothers ke bich ka relationship abhi tak bhut acha tha. Aur sabse jyada chaukane wali baat ye thi ki Atharva usey bilkul different person lag raha tha.


Atharva Mansion se nikal ke sidha apne Mansion mein aa gaya tha. Atharva ko pata tha ki ye badla Sohan ke liye kaafi nahi hai wo to usey Jaan se maarna chahta tha aur past Life mein ek Greatest Saint hone ki wajah se Atharva apne kisi bhi enemy ko second Chance nahi deta tha. Jo uska enemy hai usey sirf Death hi milegi aur kuch nahi.


Lekin abhi jo sabse important kaam tha wo thi Training. Saint Origin mein jo Strong hai wo Great hai aap kahi bhi chale jaao , log aapko Admire karenge chaahe aap kaise bhi ho bas strong hone chahiye. Past Life mein Atharva ek Great Saint tha lekin abhi wo sirf ek weakling tha jo ki sirf QI JING REALM ke 8th level pe tha.


Atharva apne room mein pahuch ke apne bed pe leg cross karke baith gaya.


Cultivation ke path pe sabse jada jaroori cheez thi skill. Jitna Higher Level hoga Skill utna hi aapki achievement high hogi aapki.


Apni past Life mein ek Greatest Saint hone ki wajah se Atharva ke paas Filhal 1000 se bhi jyada skill thi aur sabhi ke sabhi high level ki thi, 30% skill to aisi thi jisey wo HEAVENLY CORE REALM mein BREAKTHROUGH karne ke baad bhi use nahi kar sakta tha. Agar Atharva apne paas se sabse low level ki skill bhi nikal ke dikha de to puri Fragrant Sky City ke people us skill ke liye mar mitenge.


Saint Origin Universe mein Skill Four categories mein divide hoti hai :- Mortal ,Earth, Heaven, Saint. Aur Atharva ke paas abhi 5 Skill thi Jo Saint Category ki thi. Yaha tak ki Divine Continent ke Big Ancient Clans ke pass bhi Aisi Skills nahi hongi.


Lekin Atharva ne decide kar liya tha ki wo in 5 mein se koi bhi Skill Cultivate nahi karega, apni past life mein bhi usne in 5 Skills ki taraf dekha bhi nahi tha.


Is cheez ka ek hi reason tha " The Dragon Transformation Skill. "


Atharva ko ye Skill apni past Life mein kisi Ancient ruins se milli thi. Ye Skill Ancient times se Belong karti hai aur almost 10000 years old hai.


Atharva ke hisaab se The Dragon Transformation Skill ka potential Saint Category se bhut upper hai.


Lekin is Skill ko use karne ki ek bhut hi badi condition hai. Wo ye hai ki is Skill ko beginning se Practice karna padta hai. Jab Atharva ko ye Skill past Life mein mill thi tab wo isko Practice nahi kar paaya tha kyuki is skill ko Practice karne ke liye usey apna Saint cultivation destroy karke QI JING REALM se start karna padta. Beshak Past Life mein AK ka Heart as a Saint kitna hi hard ho lekin apna cultivation destroy karne jitna bhi nahi tha. Uski past Life ka doosra sabse bada regret yahi tha ki wo is Skill ko Cultivate nahi kar paaya tha lekin ab baat kuch aur thi. Ab doobara reborn hone ki wajah se Uska current Realm QI JING tha aur wo is opportunity ko waste nahi hone dene wala tha.


Abhi tak Atharva ki QI Sea aur Mortal Core form nahi huye they to ye best time tha The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate karne ka.


Atharva ne Dragon Transformation Skill ki script ko yaad kiya aur uske single thought se saari script uske dimag mein chalne lag gayi.


The Dragon Transformation Skill bhut powerful thi. Script ke according is Skill ko practice karne ke baad aap Saint Origin ki kisi bloodline se merge ho sakte ho. Aur aisa nahi hai ki aap sirf ek bloodline se merge ho sakte ho app chahe to 10,000 bloodline se bhi merge ho sakte ho aur un bloodline ki ability bhi aapke sath merge ho jaayegi. aur bas itna soch ki Atharva ke face pe ek smile aa gayi thi.


Jo The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karte hai unki DANTIAN mein Dragon mark banne lagte hai. Ek dragon mark user ke punch ki strength 10,000 Pound tak badha deta hai. Dragon marks ka maximum number 108,000 hai, isse jada Dragon Marks aap form nahi kar sakte.


Script ke According agar ek baar Dragon Mark bann gaya to wo puri life mein kabhi gayab nahi hoga. Aur agar 108,000 marks ban gaye to user apne will se Dragon mein Transform ho sakta hai wo bhi Dragon ki puri ability ke sath.


Ek Dragon Mark 10,000 pound strength badhata hai agar 108,000 Dragon marks Complete ho jaate hai to aapki strength kitni hogi ye koi imagine bhi nahi kar sakta, yaha tak Saint Realm ke Warrior bhi aapke koi Match nahi honge. Ye sab soch ke hi Atharva ko apni body mein Cold mehsoos hone laga tha aur wo bhut jada excited ho gaya tha. Agar Atharva is Life mein is level pe pahuch jaata hai to wo Ek Strike mein Saint Origin Universe ko destroy kar sakta hai.


The Dragon Transformation Skill Body ko bhi bhut effective way mein refine karti hai aur end tak aate aate user ki body ki Dragon ki Body jitni Tough ho jaati hai. Atharva ki body mein beshak bhut saari PILLS thi lekin Un sabko refine karne ke baad bhi Atharva ki body abhi bhut jyada weak thi. Atharva abhi thoda unsure tha ki kahi uski body Dragon Transformation Skill ko sehen na kar paaye.


Lekin apni past Life mein ek Greatest Saint tha to uska will kisi mountain se bhi jada bada tha usne saare thoughts ko apne mind se nikala aur Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga. Jaise hi usne Cultivation start kiya waise hi usey apni body mein Yuan Power flow hoti huyi feel hone lagi.


Atharva ne control apne hath mein lete huye apni body ke ander 2 region create kare, first region mein usne Yuan Energy ko clockwise direction mein flow karwaya aur second region mein usne Yuan Energy ko anti- clockwise direction mein flow karwaya.


Uske aisa karte hi uski body kisi machine ki tarah kaam karne lagi ek frightening speed aur bina pause ke.


Pong!


Dono separate region full speed se ek dusre ke sath collide ho gaye, aur aisa hote hi dono different force ki wajah se ek Whirlpool create ho gaya aur wo Atharva ke poori body mein failne laga.


Ughh!


Is impact ki wajah se Atharva ke mouth se Blood nikalne laga, sath hi uski puri body mein pain hone laga jaise wo kisi hellfire mein baitha ho. Jo uske mouth se blood nikal raha tha uska colour black tha. Ye sab impurities thi uski body ke ander ki jo Dragon Transformation Skill ki wajah se ekdum se bahar aane lagi thi.


Atharva " Dragon Transformation Skill sach mein bhut powerful hai abhi to ye first step hi hai aur ye hi mujhe itna pain de raha hai. Lekin ye mujhe manjoor hai effect ko dekhte huye. Meri body ki saari impurities lagbhag bahar aa gayi hai. Let's continue. "


Apni past life mein Saint hone ki wajah se uska will bhut strong tha to usko ye pain sehen karne mein koi takleef nahi thi aur Saint hone ki wajah se uske paas Cultivation ka bhut jada expérience tha jo ab uske bhut kaam aa raha tha.


Dragon Transformation Skill Atharva ke mind mein flow ho rahi thi, aur Cultivation ki wajah se usey bhut pain ho raha tha jo uske liye kuch bhi nahi tha.


4 Hours Later!


Crack!


Ek clear Crack ki sound Atharva ki body se suni jaa sakti thi. Jo Whirlpool tha wo Atharva ki poori body mein Refine ho gaya tha aur Atharva QI JING REALM ke 9th Level mein Breakthrough kar gaya tha.




TO BE CONTINUED....




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[Itachi_Uchiha]

UPDATE NO - 05
Let's Calculate Our Debt​

Yaha tak ki Atharva ne bhi nahi soch tha ki The Dragon Transformation Skill itni strong hogi. Sirf 4 hours cultivate karne se hi wo QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe pahuch gaya tha.


Sath hi sath uski Yuan Energy badhne ki wajah se uski body bhi strong ho gayi thi aur isliye Atharva ki strength aur Defense mein kaafi fark pada tha.


The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karte time ek baar firse 2 whirlpool ek doosre ke opposite create ho gaye they. Dono whirlpool Atharva ki body mein flow hote huye uski DANTIAN mein enter kar gaye aur ek Red Colour ka Dragon Mark form karne lage.


Waise abhi jo Mark form hua tha wo abhi bhut fika tha ek dum bright Red hone se kaafi dur tha. Atharva ki single thought se Red Dragon Mark bhut jor se shake hone laga.


HAA!


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye hawa mein ek bhut fast punch maara, punch ka pressure itna tha ki Air mein bhi friction hone lagi thi aur fir ek dum se BOOM ke sound ke sath samne ki Wall crack ho gayi.


"Good, mere punch ki power abhi 5000 pound thi, halanki abhi first Red Dragon Mark half complete hua hai. Ek baar Red Dragon Mark complete ho jaaye to mere har punch ke pich 10,000 pound ka force hoga. QI JING REALM 9th Level ke ordinary cultivators ke punch mein 3000 pound force hota hai, aur Genius hote hai unke punch ke piche 4000 pound hota hai. Lekin The Dragon Transformation Skill se mein sirf Half Red Dragon Mark ke hote huye bhi 5000 pound ke punch throw kar sakta hu. Incredible!"



{ Writer Note:- jo bhi punches aur uske force ki baat huyi hai wo sirf ek mark ki jaise jaise mark badhte jaayenge force badhta hai jaayega.}



Ek lambi saans lete huye Atharva ne Cultivate karna rok Diya. Usey Cultivation ke baare mein is world mein sabse jyada Knowledge thi, aur usey ache se pata tha ki Foundatain ko Strong karna kitna Important hai. Usko sab kuch step by step karna hoga bina ek dum se aage badhe. Usne abhi The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate karna start ki hai aur usey half Red Dragon Mark mil gaya hai aur wo is result se abhi ke liye khus hai. Kyuki Fragrant Sky City kuch bhi nahi hai.

Aapko bata du ki :-

{ SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein 5 Continent hai.
1. Northern Continent.
2. Southern Continent.
3. Western Continent.
4. Easter Continent.
5. Divine Continent.

Jisme sabse strong Divine Continent hai jisme Pichli Life mein Atharva ek Saint tha aur wo issi Continent se tha. Sabse Weak Eastern Continent hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
Eastern Continent mein 30 provine hai jisme sabse Strong Martial Saint Dynasty hai Aur Sabse weak QI Province hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
QI Province ke baare mein aage detail mil jaayegi Proper.

QI Province ka outer part hai jaha QI Province ke Log bhi dhyan nahi dete waha pe 28 City hai. Isme sabse Strong hai Red City aur sabse Weak hai Fragrant Sky City jisme filhal Atharva hai. }


Ek warrior ko Cultivate karne ke Liye PILLS, POTIONS, ELIXIRS ki jaroorat padti hai. The Dragon Transformation Skill ko practice karne ki liye ko Sabse jada jaroorat padegi kyuki Ye skill kisi bhi Bloodline kisi bhi Soul ko Absorb kar sakti hai. World Mein bhut saare Demon Beast hai, jinme se kaafi kam Rare Bloodline ke hote hai aur kuch to Ancient Time ke Rare Beast bhi hote hai, agar kisi rare Bloodline ke Demon Beast ki Soul ko Absorb karta hai to The Dragon Transformation Skill ki Wajah se usey use Beast ki Ability bhi millegi.


"Main 100 years se Dead tha is time mein bhut kuch badal gaya hoga. Agar meri Memory sahi hai to Fragrant Sky City Sabse small City hai QI Province ki, pata nahi Divine Continent yaha se kitni dur hoga. Past life mein The GREATEST SAINT hone ki wajah se maine kabhi is Small Eastern Continent pe dhyan nahi diya tha kyuki Meri aankho mein ye kuch bhi nahi tha."


Atharva apne Mansion se Nikal ke apne Father ke Mansion mein aa gaya aur sidha unke Room mein bani Library mein ghus gaya. Yaha pe kisi ko aane ki izzazt nahi thi yaha tak ki Sohan bhi bina permission ke enter nahi kar sakta tha lekin Atharva ki baat alag thi wo Mayor ka eklauta beta tha to wo pure Mayor Mansion mein kabhi bhi kahi bhi jaa sakta tha.


Atharva ne waha pe rakhi Martial Arts Skill ki books ko dekha bhi nahi kyuki usey pata is universe ki sabse small city mein Trash hi millega. Isliye wo sidha ek book ki taraf badh gaya jiska naam tha "History of Saint Origin"


Is Book mein saare History events se they Pure Saint Origin ke aur saari geographical condition.
Atharva ne jaisa hi first Chapter khola uske Face pe smile aa gayi. kyuki jo first Chapter tha wo Ek Greatest Saint ke baare mein tha jisne Apni Big Sword ki Ek Strike mein Heaven ko kaatte huye Immortal Realm ke Gate khol diye they 100 years pehle. Unfortunately wo Greatest Saint us din usi SAINT CLIFF pe khatam ho gaya.


100 year pehle Atharva ne apni Saint Blood ki last drop ko Use karte huye Immortal Realm ke gate khol diye aur wo iske backlash se wahi khatam ho gaya tha. Uske baad kya hua usey kuch nahi pata. Usne aisa isliye kiya tha kyuki Saint Origin Universe mein koi bhi person Saint Realm ke aage Cultivate nahi kar paata lekin Atharva ko pata tha ki Saint Realm ke baad bhi Realm hai jo is Universe mein possible nahi hai, isliye usne apni saari strenght ko use karke doosre Universe ka Gate khol diya tha Jiska naam hai Immortal Origin Universe ya Immortal Realm jisme Immortals rehte hai.


History ke according us event ke baad bhut kuch badal gaya tha. Jab Atharva ne Immortal Realm ke Gate khole to Jo baaki ke Saint they jo Atharva ko aisa karte dekh rahe they wo Atharva ki Death ke baad Gate se Us Realm mein enter kar gaye. Aur aisa hone se is Universe mein ek bhi Saint nahi bacha aur Saints ki protection hatne ke baad is Universe mein. Monsters, Beasts, Devils, Demon har jagah badh gaye they. Aur jo Clan Saint ki protection aur management they unme War start ho gayi thi aur uski Wajah se kayi Ancient Clan completely Wipe Out ho gaye they Aur New Clan ban gaye they.


Ek Smile ke Sath Atharva ne Book band kar di Usey pata tha wo is life mein ek baar firse Divine Continent mein apne kadam rakhega aur Fir Apne past Records ko todte huye Immortal Realm mein chala jaayega aur aisa hone ke liye abhi bhut lamba time tha kyuki abhi wo ek weakling tha aur uski age bhi abhi 16 years hi thi, uske paas puri life thi suru se start karne mein. Atharva ki life ka sabse bada regret tha ki wo immortal Realm mein enter nahi kar paya.


Library se nikalne ke Time Raat ho chuki aur Atharva apne Mansion ki Opposite direction mein jaa raha tha kyuki usey kisi se milna tha.


Atharva ko pata tha ki Sohan na to Jiya se Shaadi karega aur na hi JADHAV Family mein. Atharva confident tha kyuki wo bhi ek Man tha Sohan ki tarah. Ye bhut simple tha Jiya se shaadi karne se acha Sohan suicide kar lega.


Kal Wedding Ceremony hai aur agar Atharva ka guess correct hai to Sohan aaj ki raat hi usko maarne aayega.


Sohan ke jaisa person jiska Hard Work destroy ho gaya ho wo itni asaani se jaane nahi dega. Wo Atharva se nafrat karta tha, sirf Atharva se hi nahi balki Mayor Mansion ke har member se Nafrat karta tha. Uske Talent ko dekhke wo Is City ko Chod bhi dega to wo ek achi life ji sakta tha.


Lekin Atharva apne kisi bhi enemy ko bhaagne ka, surrender ka aur maaf karne ka mauka nahi deta. Kyuki usey pata hai baad wo hi enemy strength gain karke wapis Revenge lene aa sakta hai. Aur jis Path pe Atharva jaane wala hai uspe uske Countless enemy honge aur wo ek ko bhi jinda chodne ka risk nahi lega.


Sohan ne is time ek black outfit pehna hua tha aur moon ki taraf dekh raha tha uski eyes bilkul snake jaisi lag rahi thi jo strike karne ke liye kabhi bhi taiyar ho.


"Atharva tumne mere saare plan waste kar diye, aaj tumhe maarke yaha se nikal jaaunga aur strong hone ke baad is Mayor ko bhi maar dunga aur JADHAV FAMILY ko bhi destroy kar dunga."


Sohan ne apni fist ko tight karte huye ye baat sochi. Lekin koi aur tha jo usey itni asani se nahi jaane dega.


Atharva " Hey Brother, apne aisi dress kyu pehen rakhi hai jaise aap kahi bahar jaane wale ho. Kal aapki wedding Ceremony hai aapko rest lena chahiye. "


Jaise hi Sohan ki nazar Atharva pe padi wo ek dum gusse mein aa gaya uska killing intent bhi nikalne laga tha uski body se.


Sohan " Atharva tumne aaj mujhe kyu fasaya. "


Sohan ne ye baat ghuraate huye boli. Yard ke bahar ek aur Aadmi tha jo in dono ki baate sun raha tha. Wo aur koi nahi balki Kailashnath tha jo Sohan se baat karne aaya tha lekin inki baate sunke wahi ruk gaya aur apni presence hide kar li.


Atharva " Aapko kyu fasaunga main? Mujhe to laga JADHAV Family mein shaadi karna aapka sapna tha. Jiya ki body to dekho mujhe pata hai future mein aapko kamane ki jaroorat nahi padegi. Aapko to mujhe Thanks kehna chahiye. "


Sohan " Enough, us ladki ka mere samne naam mat lo, tumne kal bas mujhe replace hone ke liye kaha tha JADHAV FAMILY mein marriage ki baat kaha se aa gayi thi. Atharva maine tumse abhi tak pyaar hi kiya hai agar tum mujhe bhagana chahte ho to saaf saaf bata do ye gande method use karna chod do."


Sohan ki aankho mein Atharva ke liye Hatred chupaye nahi chup rahi thi.


Atharva " Mujhse pyaar karte ho, chalo tumhe expose karte aur apna score settle karte hai. "


Atharva ne apne Father ko pehle hi sense kar liya tha bahar jo ki Sohan nahi kar paaya tha kyuki uski sense Atharva se bhut weak hai ya ye kahu Atharva ki senses kaafi jada strong hai. Atharva ne apna attitude badalte huye Sohan ko expose karne ki sochi taaki wo yaha se bhaag na paaye aur usko opportunity bhi mil jaaye Sohan ko maarne ki.


Atharva " Mujhe ye batao tumne hi Yuan aur Shuang ko mujhe deserted area mein le jaane ke liye aur mujhe maarke mera blood pine ke liye kaha tha ?
Mere marne ke baad tum hi ho jo legally YADAV Family ko Heir ban jaoge. Isi liye tum mujhse pyaar se paish aate they? Kya maine kuch galat kaha My Dear Brother. "


Atharva ne ek Cruel look ke sath Sohan ko dekhte huye ye baat kahi. Wahi Kailashnath shock ho gaye they to jo Atharva ne kaha usey sunkar lekin wo fir bhi bahar hi khade rahe kyuki wo aur Sunna chahte they...





TO BE CONTINUED....


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[Itachi_Uchiha]

UPDATE NO - 05 post kar diya hai dosto.
Enjoy it.

 

[Smart killer]

Waiting next part

 

[Smart killer]

Amazing story parh to howa hai pahly lakin ap k apny style ma likny sy i love it

 

[Smart killer]

Solo leveling ki baat hi alag hai or ab ya story shuro ki i know ya bhi utna hi maza de gi

 

[piredeep singh Meena]

Nice

 

[Sanki Rajput]

Gajab launde gajab likh raha hai bhai gajab sach kahu to teri skill iss series me jaan daal rahi hai ek alag hi swag ban raha hai ab to story ki gajab lage rah bhai mast likh rela hai aur khaskar ye ju ki lekhni se aur bhi bawal lag reli hai padhne me . Keep it up mere bhai and keep going in as like this or better you can do this !!

 

[Ramesh628]

UPDATE NO - 05
Let's Calculate Our Debt​

Yaha tak ki Atharva ne bhi nahi soch tha ki The Dragon Transformation Skill itni strong hogi. Sirf 4 hours cultivate karne se hi wo QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe pahuch gaya tha.


Sath hi sath uski Yuan Energy badhne ki wajah se uski body bhi strong ho gayi thi aur isliye Atharva ki strength aur Defense mein kaafi fark pada tha.


The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karte time ek baar firse 2 whirlpool ek doosre ke opposite create ho gaye they. Dono whirlpool Atharva ki body mein flow hote huye uski DANTIAN mein enter kar gaye aur ek Red Colour ka Dragon Mark form karne lage.


Waise abhi jo Mark form hua tha wo abhi bhut fika tha ek dum bright Red hone se kaafi dur tha. Atharva ki single thought se Red Dragon Mark bhut jor se shake hone laga.


HAA!


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye hawa mein ek bhut fast punch maara, punch ka pressure itna tha ki Air mein bhi friction hone lagi thi aur fir ek dum se BOOM ke sound ke sath samne ki Wall crack ho gayi.


"Good, mere punch ki power abhi 5000 pound thi, halanki abhi first Red Dragon Mark half complete hua hai. Ek baar Red Dragon Mark complete ho jaaye to mere har punch ke pich 10,000 pound ka force hoga. QI JING REALM 9th Level ke ordinary cultivators ke punch mein 3000 pound force hota hai, aur Genius hote hai unke punch ke piche 4000 pound hota hai. Lekin The Dragon Transformation Skill se mein sirf Half Red Dragon Mark ke hote huye bhi 5000 pound ke punch throw kar sakta hu. Incredible!"



{ Writer Note:- jo bhi punches aur uske force ki baat huyi hai wo sirf ek mark ki jaise jaise mark badhte jaayenge force badhta hai jaayega.}



Ek lambi saans lete huye Atharva ne Cultivate karna rok Diya. Usey Cultivation ke baare mein is world mein sabse jyada Knowledge thi, aur usey ache se pata tha ki Foundatain ko Strong karna kitna Important hai. Usko sab kuch step by step karna hoga bina ek dum se aage badhe. Usne abhi The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate karna start ki hai aur usey half Red Dragon Mark mil gaya hai aur wo is result se abhi ke liye khus hai. Kyuki Fragrant Sky City kuch bhi nahi hai.

Aapko bata du ki :-

{ SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein 5 Continent hai.
1. Northern Continent.
2. Southern Continent.
3. Western Continent.
4. Easter Continent.
5. Divine Continent.

Jisme sabse strong Divine Continent hai jisme Pichli Life mein Atharva ek Saint tha aur wo issi Continent se tha. Sabse Weak Eastern Continent hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
Eastern Continent mein 30 provine hai jisme sabse Strong Martial Saint Dynasty hai Aur Sabse weak QI Province hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
QI Province ke baare mein aage detail mil jaayegi Proper.

QI Province ka outer part hai jaha QI Province ke Log bhi dhyan nahi dete waha pe 28 City hai. Isme sabse Strong hai Red City aur sabse Weak hai Fragrant Sky City jisme filhal Atharva hai. }


Ek warrior ko Cultivate karne ke Liye PILLS, POTIONS, ELIXIRS ki jaroorat padti hai. The Dragon Transformation Skill ko practice karne ki liye ko Sabse jada jaroorat padegi kyuki Ye skill kisi bhi Bloodline kisi bhi Soul ko Absorb kar sakti hai. World Mein bhut saare Demon Beast hai, jinme se kaafi kam Rare Bloodline ke hote hai aur kuch to Ancient Time ke Rare Beast bhi hote hai, agar kisi rare Bloodline ke Demon Beast ki Soul ko Absorb karta hai to The Dragon Transformation Skill ki Wajah se usey use Beast ki Ability bhi millegi.


"Main 100 years se Dead tha is time mein bhut kuch badal gaya hoga. Agar meri Memory sahi hai to Fragrant Sky City Sabse small City hai QI Province ki, pata nahi Divine Continent yaha se kitni dur hoga. Past life mein The GREATEST SAINT hone ki wajah se maine kabhi is Small Eastern Continent pe dhyan nahi diya tha kyuki Meri aankho mein ye kuch bhi nahi tha."


Atharva apne Mansion se Nikal ke apne Father ke Mansion mein aa gaya aur sidha unke Room mein bani Library mein ghus gaya. Yaha pe kisi ko aane ki izzazt nahi thi yaha tak ki Sohan bhi bina permission ke enter nahi kar sakta tha lekin Atharva ki baat alag thi wo Mayor ka eklauta beta tha to wo pure Mayor Mansion mein kabhi bhi kahi bhi jaa sakta tha.


Atharva ne waha pe rakhi Martial Arts Skill ki books ko dekha bhi nahi kyuki usey pata is universe ki sabse small city mein Trash hi millega. Isliye wo sidha ek book ki taraf badh gaya jiska naam tha "History of Saint Origin"


Is Book mein saare History events se they Pure Saint Origin ke aur saari geographical condition.
Atharva ne jaisa hi first Chapter khola uske Face pe smile aa gayi. kyuki jo first Chapter tha wo Ek Greatest Saint ke baare mein tha jisne Apni Big Sword ki Ek Strike mein Heaven ko kaatte huye Immortal Realm ke Gate khol diye they 100 years pehle. Unfortunately wo Greatest Saint us din usi SAINT CLIFF pe khatam ho gaya.


100 year pehle Atharva ne apni Saint Blood ki last drop ko Use karte huye Immortal Realm ke gate khol diye aur wo iske backlash se wahi khatam ho gaya tha. Uske baad kya hua usey kuch nahi pata. Usne aisa isliye kiya tha kyuki Saint Origin Universe mein koi bhi person Saint Realm ke aage Cultivate nahi kar paata lekin Atharva ko pata tha ki Saint Realm ke baad bhi Realm hai jo is Universe mein possible nahi hai, isliye usne apni saari strenght ko use karke doosre Universe ka Gate khol diya tha Jiska naam hai Immortal Origin Universe ya Immortal Realm jisme Immortals rehte hai.


History ke according us event ke baad bhut kuch badal gaya tha. Jab Atharva ne Immortal Realm ke Gate khole to Jo baaki ke Saint they jo Atharva ko aisa karte dekh rahe they wo Atharva ki Death ke baad Gate se Us Realm mein enter kar gaye. Aur aisa hone se is Universe mein ek bhi Saint nahi bacha aur Saints ki protection hatne ke baad is Universe mein. Monsters, Beasts, Devils, Demon har jagah badh gaye they. Aur jo Clan Saint ki protection aur management they unme War start ho gayi thi aur uski Wajah se kayi Ancient Clan completely Wipe Out ho gaye they Aur New Clan ban gaye they.


Ek Smile ke Sath Atharva ne Book band kar di Usey pata tha wo is life mein ek baar firse Divine Continent mein apne kadam rakhega aur Fir Apne past Records ko todte huye Immortal Realm mein chala jaayega aur aisa hone ke liye abhi bhut lamba time tha kyuki abhi wo ek weakling tha aur uski age bhi abhi 16 years hi thi, uske paas puri life thi suru se start karne mein. Atharva ki life ka sabse bada regret tha ki wo immortal Realm mein enter nahi kar paya.


Library se nikalne ke Time Raat ho chuki aur Atharva apne Mansion ki Opposite direction mein jaa raha tha kyuki usey kisi se milna tha.


Atharva ko pata tha ki Sohan na to Jiya se Shaadi karega aur na hi JADHAV Family mein. Atharva confident tha kyuki wo bhi ek Man tha Sohan ki tarah. Ye bhut simple tha Jiya se shaadi karne se acha Sohan suicide kar lega.


Kal Wedding Ceremony hai aur agar Atharva ka guess correct hai to Sohan aaj ki raat hi usko maarne aayega.


Sohan ke jaisa person jiska Hard Work destroy ho gaya ho wo itni asaani se jaane nahi dega. Wo Atharva se nafrat karta tha, sirf Atharva se hi nahi balki Mayor Mansion ke har member se Nafrat karta tha. Uske Talent ko dekhke wo Is City ko Chod bhi dega to wo ek achi life ji sakta tha.


Lekin Atharva apne kisi bhi enemy ko bhaagne ka, surrender ka aur maaf karne ka mauka nahi deta. Kyuki usey pata hai baad wo hi enemy strength gain karke wapis Revenge lene aa sakta hai. Aur jis Path pe Atharva jaane wala hai uspe uske Countless enemy honge aur wo ek ko bhi jinda chodne ka risk nahi lega.


Sohan ne is time ek black outfit pehna hua tha aur moon ki taraf dekh raha tha uski eyes bilkul snake jaisi lag rahi thi jo strike karne ke liye kabhi bhi taiyar ho.


"Atharva tumne mere saare plan waste kar diye, aaj tumhe maarke yaha se nikal jaaunga aur strong hone ke baad is Mayor ko bhi maar dunga aur JADHAV FAMILY ko bhi destroy kar dunga."


Sohan ne apni fist ko tight karte huye ye baat sochi. Lekin koi aur tha jo usey itni asani se nahi jaane dega.


Atharva " Hey Brother, apne aisi dress kyu pehen rakhi hai jaise aap kahi bahar jaane wale ho. Kal aapki wedding Ceremony hai aapko rest lena chahiye. "


Jaise hi Sohan ki nazar Atharva pe padi wo ek dum gusse mein aa gaya uska killing intent bhi nikalne laga tha uski body se.


Sohan " Atharva tumne aaj mujhe kyu fasaya. "


Sohan ne ye baat ghuraate huye boli. Yard ke bahar ek aur Aadmi tha jo in dono ki baate sun raha tha. Wo aur koi nahi balki Kailashnath tha jo Sohan se baat karne aaya tha lekin inki baate sunke wahi ruk gaya aur apni presence hide kar li.


Atharva " Aapko kyu fasaunga main? Mujhe to laga JADHAV Family mein shaadi karna aapka sapna tha. Jiya ki body to dekho mujhe pata hai future mein aapko kamane ki jaroorat nahi padegi. Aapko to mujhe Thanks kehna chahiye. "


Sohan " Enough, us ladki ka mere samne naam mat lo, tumne kal bas mujhe replace hone ke liye kaha tha JADHAV FAMILY mein marriage ki baat kaha se aa gayi thi. Atharva maine tumse abhi tak pyaar hi kiya hai agar tum mujhe bhagana chahte ho to saaf saaf bata do ye gande method use karna chod do."


Sohan ki aankho mein Atharva ke liye Hatred chupaye nahi chup rahi thi.


Atharva " Mujhse pyaar karte ho, chalo tumhe expose karte aur apna score settle karte hai. "


Atharva ne apne Father ko pehle hi sense kar liya tha bahar jo ki Sohan nahi kar paaya tha kyuki uski sense Atharva se bhut weak hai ya ye kahu Atharva ki senses kaafi jada strong hai. Atharva ne apna attitude badalte huye Sohan ko expose karne ki sochi taaki wo yaha se bhaag na paaye aur usko opportunity bhi mil jaaye Sohan ko maarne ki.


Atharva " Mujhe ye batao tumne hi Yuan aur Shuang ko mujhe deserted area mein le jaane ke liye aur mujhe maarke mera blood pine ke liye kaha tha ?
Mere marne ke baad tum hi ho jo legally YADAV Family ko Heir ban jaoge. Isi liye tum mujhse pyaar se paish aate they? Kya maine kuch galat kaha My Dear Brother. "


Atharva ne ek Cruel look ke sath Sohan ko dekhte huye ye baat kahi. Wahi Kailashnath shock ho gaye they to jo Atharva ne kaha usey sunkar lekin wo fir bhi bahar hi khade rahe kyuki wo aur Sunna chahte they...





TO BE CONTINUED....


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