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Mai puri kosis karunga ki 1 Tarik Tak naya Update post kar du.
Ab naye update se story puri mere hisab se chlegi. To ab se week me ek hi update aaya karega. Kosis karunga ki Kam din me bhi update de du.
Aur sbs important baat is story me actual me sex nahi hai. To mi aap logo se puchna chta hu ki kya mi story me sex add Karu ya jise story chal Rahi hai waise chlne du.
nd ab se mujhe apne update par Kam se Kam 60 likes cahiye hi cahiye.
 
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Sohan andar se kaafi khus tha lekin wo bilkul bhi ye show nahi kar raha tha, bahar se to usne sirf ek sad sa face banaya hua tha.


Atharva " Brother aap hi hai jo humari family mein mujhe sabse jyada pyaar karte hai. Main kisi se shaadi nahi karna chahta, aap mere bhai ho to aap hi kyu nahi kar lete sadi. "


Sohan " Brother aisa nahi hai ki main tumhari help nahi karna chahta, lekin me adopted son hu. Main agar marriage ke liye haa bhi kardu to Father nahi maanenge. Ye arrangement sirf tumhare liye hai. "


Sohan ne ye baat helpless face ke sath kahi thi, lekin wo ander se bhut khus tha, kyuki agar Atharva marriage ke liye mana kar deta hai to wo hi replacement hoga.


Atharva " Agar aap haa karte ho to main aapse promise karta hu ki kal aap ki hi marriage JADHAV Family ki daughter se hogi. "


" Really ? "


Sohan ne kaafi khus hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Of course. "


Sohan " Hum dono Brothers hai, isliye is baar main tumhari help kar raha hu. "


Sohan ne baat aise boli jaise ki wo Atharva ke liye koi bhut bada favour kar raha ho, lekin andar se mann hi mann wo dance kar raha tha.


Atharva " Thank you brother, kal Main hall mein aap bilkul saant rahe aur pretend kare ki aapko kuch nahi pata. Let me handle this. "


Sohan " No problem, main kal ki saari jimmedari tumhe deta hu. "


Sohan ne Atharva ka shoulder thap thapaya au apne manison ki taraf nikal gaya. Sohan yahi soch raha tha ki uska useless brother kaise uski help karega. Lekin jaisa ki usne past mein dekha hai, usey pura yakeen tha ki Atharva kuch na kuch drama jaroor karega.


" Naaki mera status YADAV Family mein badhega balki JADHAV Family mein bhi badhega. Atharva kitna pagal hai marriage request ko thukrake ke mere ko replace karne ke liye bol raha hai. Lekin usne apni Life main pehli baar koi acha kaam kiya hai. Thode din baad jab mera status dono Family mein high ho jayega to main is Atharva ko khud jaan se maar dunga."


Sohan ne yaha se nikalte hi kud se ye sub kahte hue apne true colours dikha diye they.


Wahi doosri aur Mansion me mai Moon ki taraf ek evil smile ke sath dekh raha tha.


Atharva " Messing with me, you are going to die Brother...hahahaha. "



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NEXT MORNING


Next Morning kayi log pure mansion ko decorate karne mein lage huye they. Aaj hi wo din tha engagement ka dono Families ke liye. Fragrant Sky City ki puri history mein aisa kabhi nahi hua tha jab ye dono Families sath mein aayi ho, kyuki ye dono Families ek dusre ki rivals rahi hai centuries se.


" JADHAV Family ke Head aa chuke hai."


Tabhi Guards ki ek jordaar awaaz ke sath ek bhut hi powerful person gate se Main hall ke andar aaya.


Is person ki body bi Kamalnath jaisi hi thi, ye bhi apne forties mein tha aur face se cruel aur ek cunning fox lag raha tha. Usne ek colourful silk ka gown pehna tha aur kisi Tiger ki tarah andar aa rha tha.


JADHAV Family ke Head they Karamchand. Jo ki QI HAI Realm ke peak par they, jo kabhi bhi MORTAL CORE REALM mein BREAKTHROUGH kar sakte hai bilkul Kailashnath ki tarah.


" HAHA, Mere Mansion mein aapka Welcome hai Karamchand Brother. "
" Mujhe hope hai ki aap yaha pe aane ka pura anand lenge. "


Kailashnath ne ye baat dostana tarike se kahi aur wo Karamchand ki taraf badh gaye.


Karamchand " Meri khusi ka thikana nahi hai Mayor Kailashnath, kyuki aaj dono Families ek hone wali hai. "


Halanki, Karamchand face se bhut hi sareef insaan lag raha tha, lekin Atharva ko pehli najar mein wo kisi OLD Fox ke jaise nazar aa raha tha.


Atharva ne Karamchand ke piche dekha to usey koi bhi dikhai nahi diya, iska matlab wo akela aaya tha, lekin ye ek normal baat thi. Fragrant Sky City main ab tak jitne bhi event huye usme JADHAV Family se kabhi bhi Karamchand present nahi hua tha. Uska yaha akela aana uski puri Family ko represent kar raha tha.


Sabhi log chalte huye Main hall ke andar aa gaye, Karamchand aur Kailashnath ek dusre ke saamne apni-2 chair pe baith gaye they. Sohan aur Atharva apne Father ke piche khade ho gaye they.


Karamchand " Brother Kailashnath, main sidha mudde pe aata hu, mere aane ka maksad ye hai ki meri beti ki marriage aapki Family mein ho. Yaha hum aaj Marriage ki date fix karenge."


Kailashnath " Bahut badhiya, ek baar ye marriage ho jaaye to hamari Fragrant Sky City bhi last mein nahi rahegi. "


Kailashnath piche ki aur mudda aur Atharva ko dekhte huye bola.


Kailashnath " Atharva aage aao aur apne Father-in-law se milo. "


Karamchand "Great! Tumhara beta bhut acha hai."


Karamchand ne Atharva ko compliment dete huye kaha, lekin usey andar se pata tha ki wo khaali bakwas kar raha hai, kyuki puri Fragrant Sky City ko Atharva ki bad reputation ke baare main pata hai ki wo cultivation mein useless hai aur apna adha time prostitutes mein waste karta hai.


Lekin Karamchand ko is baat ki koi fikr nahi thi. Wo jaldi se jaldi Father-in-law banna chahta tha, kai baar personal needs se jada jaroori Family needs hoti hai aur aisa hi yaha bhi tha.


Atharva " Father, lagta hai aap galat samajh rahe hai. "
" Kya ye marriage Big Brother ke liye nahi hai ? "


Kailashnath aur Karamchand dono hi ye baat sunke surprise ho gaye they. Karamchand ne apna sir Sohan ki taraf ghumaya aur usko uper se leke niche tak observe karna suru kar diya.


" Isey kehte hai ek talanted young genius. Itni is age mein ye QI JING REALM ke 9th level pe pahuch gaya gaya hai. "


Kailashnath " Atharva bakwas karna band karo. "


Kailashnath ne gussa hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Father main stupid nahi hu, meri to qualifications bhi JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke layak nahi hai. Wahi mere Big Brother itni si Age mein QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe hai, puri Fragrant Sky City mein JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke liye yahi layak hai. Main to abhi chota hu aur Big Brother abhi tak inki daughter se mille nahi hai lekin ye unse marriage karne mein interested hai. "


Atharva ne confidence ke sath speech dete huye apne Big Brother ki tareef ki. Atharva ke bagal mein khada Sohan lagbhag rona chahta tha ki uska little Brother usse kitna pyar karta hai, jo ki bhut rare hai.


Karamchand " HAHAHA, Mujhe kabhi bhi nahi pata tha Brother Kailashnath ki apka bada beta meri beti se pyar karta hai."


Kailashnath jor se has raha tha, haa ye marriage dono Family ke profit ke liye thi lekin usey Atharva aur Sohan mein choose karne ka mauka mille to wo Atharva ko choose kare itna pagal nahi hai.


Kailashnath " Sohan, Aao aur apne Father-in-law se millo."


Karamchand " Congratulations! Father-in-law. "


" Haso aur khus raho, kyuki tum baad mein rowoge. "


Atharva ne ye baat apne mann mein sochi aur fir apna gala thik karte huye bolne laga.


Atharva " Mister Karamchand, mere big brother ki ek aur wish hai. "


Karamchand " Ohhh, to bolo na mere aur brother Kailashnath ke rehte koi wish impossible nahi."


Sohan confused tha usey aisa kuch bhi yaad nahi aa raha tha, isliye wo kuch bolne ko hua usse pehle Atharva hi bol pada.


Atharva " Big Brother kaafi time se JADHAV Family ko praise karte hai, agar usnki marriage JADHAV Family se ho jaati hai to unhe apni Life mein aur kuch nahi chahiye."


Atharva ne apne face pe smile ke sath ye baat kahi thi. Atharva ne jo kaha tha usey sunke Sohan ka face kala padne laga tha.


Soha " Brother, tumne abhi kya kaha ? "


Sohan ne badi hi tez awaz mein pucha.


Atharva " Aapne hi to ye kaha tha mujhse. Oohh aap khud ye bolne mein shy feel kar rahe ho. Lekin aap Tension mat lo aapki wish jaroor puri hogi. Aap apne Little Brother pe sab chod dijiye. Aap kaafi time JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they. Ye sach hai na ? "


Sohan bilkul ghabra gaya tha, haa wo bilkul JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karna chahta tha. Lekin wo unki Family mein marriage nahi karna chahta tha. Agar wo aisa karta to usey Mayor Mansion chod ke JADHAV Family mein hi rehna padta aur JADHAV Family hi uski Family ho jaati aur uska YADAV FAMILY aur Mayor Mansion se saare rishte khatam ho jaate. Uske itne years ki mehnat khatam hoti huyi nazar aa rahi thi. Aur agar wo JADHAV Family mein chala bhi jata hai to usey koi importance nahi dega balki sab usko nicha hi dikhayenge. Agar aisa hua to uska Future hi kharab ho jaayega.


Atharva " kya ? "
" Mujhe ye mat bolna ki jo kal aap JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they wo jhoot thi. Mujhe aap se yeh umeed nahi thi. "


Atharva ne Sohan ko bina mauka diye hi ye sab bol diya, ab Sohan fas chuka tha wo kisi bhi tarah se naa bolke dono Family ko offend nahi karna chahta tha. Ab Sohan ko realize ho raha tha ki Atharva uske sath kitna bada Game khel raha hai. Sohan ab is position se wapis nahi aa sakta tha. Usey itna gussa aa raha tha ki wo muskil se apna killing intent sambhal paa raha tha jo Atharva ki nazaro se nahi bacha tha. Sohan ko ek baat aur sata rahi thi ki ye Useless Atharva itna smart kaise ho gaya jo usey aisi situation mein trap kar diya.


Sohan ke badlte expression dekh ke Atharva ke face pe ek evil smile thi. Kyuki Sohan, Atharva ko marna chahta tha isliye ye to bas shuruat thi.


Karamchand " Mujhe pata nahi tha brother ki apka elder son meri daughter se itna pyar karta hai, aur ye to hamari Family se marriage bhi karna chahta hai. Isliye humey jaldi se arrangement karni chahiye. Iske Baad puri Fragrant Sky City mein humare samne koi nahi aa paayega. "


Kailashnath " KYA tum apne faisle se khus ho Sohan ? "


Kailashnath ko dukh to ho raha tha ki uska adopted son doosri Family mein jaana chahta hai, lekin usne ye show nahi kiya. YADAV FAMILY ke bhut se business they Fragrant Sky City mein jinme se aadha kaam Sohan dekhta tha agar wo chala jaayega to business ka kya hoga. Lekin usey Sohan ke decision ke decision ki bhi respect karni hogi, isliye wo chup they.


Atharva " Father, wo yahi chahte hai. Mujhe ache se pata hai mere big Brother kaise hai aur wo kya soch rahe hai. Inhe aur aapko to khus hona chahiye inki wish jo puri hone jaa rahi hai. UnCle Karamchand aapko bhi mere Big Brother ki dekhbhal karni hogi kahi koi unhe nicha na dikhaye. "


Sohan apna muh kholne hi wala tha ki Atharva ne usse pehle hi badi chalaki se jawab de diya.


Karamchand " hahaha…… "
" Chinta na karo mere hote mere son-in-law ko nicha dikhane ki himmat kon karega. "


Soha gusse mein ubal raha tha, usne apni fist ko kaafi tight close kiya hua tha apne gown ke ander, uske saare plans fail ho gaye they wo bilkul fas gaya tha, ab wo chah kar bhi naa nahi kar sakta tha.


Atharva " Congratulations Uncle! Aaj ka din kaafi khusi ka hai, ab aap jaldi se apni daughter ko bulaiye taki hum sab unhe dekh sake. "


Kailashnath " Haa tumne sahi kaha Atharva, inki daughter ko aaj tak kisi ne nahi dekha hai naa hi wo kisi public place mein aati hai. Lekin ab marriage ka decision ho hi gaya hai to hum bhi aapki daughter ko dekhna chahenge brother."


Karamchand " haha…. "
" Meri beti JIYA abhi raste mein hai, wo jald hi yaha pe hogi."


Karamchand ander hi ander khus ho raha tha jaisa uska koi aur hi motive ho yaha aane ka aur ye baat Atharva se chuppi nahi thi. Jaha baaki teeno khus they wahi Soham sirf natak kar rha tha khus hone ka.


Atharva " Apki daughter ke naam se hi pata lag raha hai ki wo kitni komal aur sundar hongi, sayad wo kisi angel jaisi dikhti hongi. "


Aise hi Atharva, JIYA ki tareef kiye jaa raha tha jisse wo kabhi nahi Mila tha. Ye dekha wo ye sab bas Sohan ko tease karne ke liye kar raha tha.


"Cough! Cough!"


Atharva ki tareef sunne ke baad Karamchand ko khaasi aa gayi, uske muh se tea bhi bahar aa gayi thi jaise hi Usne Jiya ke baare mein ( sundar, komal aur angel) jaise word sune.



TO BE CONTINUED....











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Sohan andar se kaafi khus tha lekin wo bilkul bhi ye show nahi kar raha tha, bahar se to usne sirf ek sad sa face banaya hua tha.


Atharva " Brother aap hi hai jo humari family mein mujhe sabse jyada pyaar karte hai. Main kisi se shaadi nahi karna chahta, aap mere bhai ho to aap hi kyu nahi kar lete sadi. "


Sohan " Brother aisa nahi hai ki main tumhari help nahi karna chahta, lekin me adopted son hu. Main agar marriage ke liye haa bhi kardu to Father nahi maanenge. Ye arrangement sirf tumhare liye hai. "


Sohan ne ye baat helpless face ke sath kahi thi, lekin wo ander se bhut khus tha, kyuki agar Atharva marriage ke liye mana kar deta hai to wo hi replacement hoga.


Atharva " Agar aap haa karte ho to main aapse promise karta hu ki kal aap ki hi marriage JADHAV Family ki daughter se hogi. "


" Really ? "


Sohan ne kaafi khus hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Of course. "


Sohan " Hum dono Brothers hai, isliye is baar main tumhari help kar raha hu. "


Sohan ne baat aise boli jaise ki wo Atharva ke liye koi bhut bada favour kar raha ho, lekin andar se mann hi mann wo dance kar raha tha.


Atharva " Thank you brother, kal Main hall mein aap bilkul saant rahe aur pretend kare ki aapko kuch nahi pata. Let me handle this. "


Sohan " No problem, main kal ki saari jimmedari tumhe deta hu. "


Sohan ne Atharva ka shoulder thap thapaya au apne manison ki taraf nikal gaya. Sohan yahi soch raha tha ki uska useless brother kaise uski help karega. Lekin jaisa ki usne past mein dekha hai, usey pura yakeen tha ki Atharva kuch na kuch drama jaroor karega.


" Naaki mera status YADAV Family mein badhega balki JADHAV Family mein bhi badhega. Atharva kitna pagal hai marriage request ko thukrake ke mere ko replace karne ke liye bol raha hai. Lekin usne apni Life main pehli baar koi acha kaam kiya hai. Thode din baad jab mera status dono Family mein high ho jayega to main is Atharva ko khud jaan se maar dunga."


Sohan ne yaha se nikalte hi kud se ye sub kahte hue apne true colours dikha diye they.


Wahi doosri aur Mansion me mai Moon ki taraf ek evil smile ke sath dekh raha tha.


Atharva " Messing with me, you are going to die Brother...hahahaha. "




~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

NEXT MORNING


Next Morning kayi log pure mansion ko decorate karne mein lage huye they. Aaj hi wo din tha engagement ka dono Families ke liye. Fragrant Sky City ki puri history mein aisa kabhi nahi hua tha jab ye dono Families sath mein aayi ho, kyuki ye dono Families ek dusre ki rivals rahi hai centuries se.


" JADHAV Family ke Head aa chuke hai."


Tabhi Guards ki ek jordaar awaaz ke sath ek bhut hi powerful person gate se Main hall ke andar aaya.


Is person ki body bi Kamalnath jaisi hi thi, ye bhi apne forties mein tha aur face se cruel aur ek cunning fox lag raha tha. Usne ek colourful silk ka gown pehna tha aur kisi Tiger ki tarah andar aa rha tha.


JADHAV Family ke Head they Karamchand. Jo ki QI HAI Realm ke peak par they, jo kabhi bhi MORTAL CORE REALM mein BREAKTHROUGH kar sakte hai bilkul Kailashnath ki tarah.


" HAHA, Mere Mansion mein aapka Welcome hai Karamchand Brother. "
" Mujhe hope hai ki aap yaha pe aane ka pura anand lenge. "


Kailashnath ne ye baat dostana tarike se kahi aur wo Karamchand ki taraf badh gaye.


Karamchand " Meri khusi ka thikana nahi hai Mayor Kailashnath, kyuki aaj dono Families ek hone wali hai. "


Halanki, Karamchand face se bhut hi sareef insaan lag raha tha, lekin Atharva ko pehli najar mein wo kisi OLD Fox ke jaise nazar aa raha tha.


Atharva ne Karamchand ke piche dekha to usey koi bhi dikhai nahi diya, iska matlab wo akela aaya tha, lekin ye ek normal baat thi. Fragrant Sky City main ab tak jitne bhi event huye usme JADHAV Family se kabhi bhi Karamchand present nahi hua tha. Uska yaha akela aana uski puri Family ko represent kar raha tha.


Sabhi log chalte huye Main hall ke andar aa gaye, Karamchand aur Kailashnath ek dusre ke saamne apni-2 chair pe baith gaye they. Sohan aur Atharva apne Father ke piche khade ho gaye they.


Karamchand " Brother Kailashnath, main sidha mudde pe aata hu, mere aane ka maksad ye hai ki meri beti ki marriage aapki Family mein ho. Yaha hum aaj Marriage ki date fix karenge."


Kailashnath " Bahut badhiya, ek baar ye marriage ho jaaye to hamari Fragrant Sky City bhi last mein nahi rahegi. "


Kailashnath piche ki aur mudda aur Atharva ko dekhte huye bola.


Kailashnath " Atharva aage aao aur apne Father-in-law se milo. "


Karamchand "Great! Tumhara beta bhut acha hai."


Karamchand ne Atharva ko compliment dete huye kaha, lekin usey andar se pata tha ki wo khaali bakwas kar raha hai, kyuki puri Fragrant Sky City ko Atharva ki bad reputation ke baare main pata hai ki wo cultivation mein useless hai aur apna adha time prostitutes mein waste karta hai.


Lekin Karamchand ko is baat ki koi fikr nahi thi. Wo jaldi se jaldi Father-in-law banna chahta tha, kai baar personal needs se jada jaroori Family needs hoti hai aur aisa hi yaha bhi tha.


Atharva " Father, lagta hai aap galat samajh rahe hai. "
" Kya ye marriage Big Brother ke liye nahi hai ? "


Kailashnath aur Karamchand dono hi ye baat sunke surprise ho gaye they. Karamchand ne apna sir Sohan ki taraf ghumaya aur usko uper se leke niche tak observe karna suru kar diya.


" Isey kehte hai ek talanted young genius. Itni is age mein ye QI JING REALM ke 9th level pe pahuch gaya gaya hai. "


Kailashnath " Atharva bakwas karna band karo. "


Kailashnath ne gussa hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Father main stupid nahi hu, meri to qualifications bhi JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke layak nahi hai. Wahi mere Big Brother itni si Age mein QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe hai, puri Fragrant Sky City mein JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke liye yahi layak hai. Main to abhi chota hu aur Big Brother abhi tak inki daughter se mille nahi hai lekin ye unse marriage karne mein interested hai. "


Atharva ne confidence ke sath speech dete huye apne Big Brother ki tareef ki. Atharva ke bagal mein khada Sohan lagbhag rona chahta tha ki uska little Brother usse kitna pyar karta hai, jo ki bhut rare hai.


Karamchand " HAHAHA, Mujhe kabhi bhi nahi pata tha Brother Kailashnath ki apka bada beta meri beti se pyar karta hai."


Kailashnath jor se has raha tha, haa ye marriage dono Family ke profit ke liye thi lekin usey Atharva aur Sohan mein choose karne ka mauka mille to wo Atharva ko choose kare itna pagal nahi hai.


Kailashnath " Sohan, Aao aur apne Father-in-law se millo."


Karamchand " Congratulations! Father-in-law. "


" Haso aur khus raho, kyuki tum baad mein rowoge. "


Atharva ne ye baat apne mann mein sochi aur fir apna gala thik karte huye bolne laga.


Atharva " Mister Karamchand, mere big brother ki ek aur wish hai. "


Karamchand " Ohhh, to bolo na mere aur brother Kailashnath ke rehte koi wish impossible nahi."


Sohan confused tha usey aisa kuch bhi yaad nahi aa raha tha, isliye wo kuch bolne ko hua usse pehle Atharva hi bol pada.


Atharva " Big Brother kaafi time se JADHAV Family ko praise karte hai, agar usnki marriage JADHAV Family se ho jaati hai to unhe apni Life mein aur kuch nahi chahiye."


Atharva ne apne face pe smile ke sath ye baat kahi thi. Atharva ne jo kaha tha usey sunke Sohan ka face kala padne laga tha.


Soha " Brother, tumne abhi kya kaha ? "


Sohan ne badi hi tez awaz mein pucha.


Atharva " Aapne hi to ye kaha tha mujhse. Oohh aap khud ye bolne mein shy feel kar rahe ho. Lekin aap Tension mat lo aapki wish jaroor puri hogi. Aap apne Little Brother pe sab chod dijiye. Aap kaafi time JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they. Ye sach hai na ? "


Sohan bilkul ghabra gaya tha, haa wo bilkul JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karna chahta tha. Lekin wo unki Family mein marriage nahi karna chahta tha. Agar wo aisa karta to usey Mayor Mansion chod ke JADHAV Family mein hi rehna padta aur JADHAV Family hi uski Family ho jaati aur uska YADAV FAMILY aur Mayor Mansion se saare rishte khatam ho jaate. Uske itne years ki mehnat khatam hoti huyi nazar aa rahi thi. Aur agar wo JADHAV Family mein chala bhi jata hai to usey koi importance nahi dega balki sab usko nicha hi dikhayenge. Agar aisa hua to uska Future hi kharab ho jaayega.


Atharva " kya ? "
" Mujhe ye mat bolna ki jo kal aap JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they wo jhoot thi. Mujhe aap se yeh umeed nahi thi. "


Atharva ne Sohan ko bina mauka diye hi ye sab bol diya, ab Sohan fas chuka tha wo kisi bhi tarah se naa bolke dono Family ko offend nahi karna chahta tha. Ab Sohan ko realize ho raha tha ki Atharva uske sath kitna bada Game khel raha hai. Sohan ab is position se wapis nahi aa sakta tha. Usey itna gussa aa raha tha ki wo muskil se apna killing intent sambhal paa raha tha jo Atharva ki nazaro se nahi bacha tha. Sohan ko ek baat aur sata rahi thi ki ye Useless Atharva itna smart kaise ho gaya jo usey aisi situation mein trap kar diya.


Sohan ke badlte expression dekh ke Atharva ke face pe ek evil smile thi. Kyuki Sohan, Atharva ko marna chahta tha isliye ye to bas shuruat thi.


Karamchand " Mujhe pata nahi tha brother ki apka elder son meri daughter se itna pyar karta hai, aur ye to hamari Family se marriage bhi karna chahta hai. Isliye humey jaldi se arrangement karni chahiye. Iske Baad puri Fragrant Sky City mein humare samne koi nahi aa paayega. "


Kailashnath " KYA tum apne faisle se khus ho Sohan ? "


Kailashnath ko dukh to ho raha tha ki uska adopted son doosri Family mein jaana chahta hai, lekin usne ye show nahi kiya. YADAV FAMILY ke bhut se business they Fragrant Sky City mein jinme se aadha kaam Sohan dekhta tha agar wo chala jaayega to business ka kya hoga. Lekin usey Sohan ke decision ke decision ki bhi respect karni hogi, isliye wo chup they.


Atharva " Father, wo yahi chahte hai. Mujhe ache se pata hai mere big Brother kaise hai aur wo kya soch rahe hai. Inhe aur aapko to khus hona chahiye inki wish jo puri hone jaa rahi hai. UnCle Karamchand aapko bhi mere Big Brother ki dekhbhal karni hogi kahi koi unhe nicha na dikhaye. "


Sohan apna muh kholne hi wala tha ki Atharva ne usse pehle hi badi chalaki se jawab de diya.


Karamchand " hahaha…… "
" Chinta na karo mere hote mere son-in-law ko nicha dikhane ki himmat kon karega. "


Soha gusse mein ubal raha tha, usne apni fist ko kaafi tight close kiya hua tha apne gown ke ander, uske saare plans fail ho gaye they wo bilkul fas gaya tha, ab wo chah kar bhi naa nahi kar sakta tha.


Atharva " Congratulations Uncle! Aaj ka din kaafi khusi ka hai, ab aap jaldi se apni daughter ko bulaiye taki hum sab unhe dekh sake. "


Kailashnath " Haa tumne sahi kaha Atharva, inki daughter ko aaj tak kisi ne nahi dekha hai naa hi wo kisi public place mein aati hai. Lekin ab marriage ka decision ho hi gaya hai to hum bhi aapki daughter ko dekhna chahenge brother."


Karamchand " haha…. "
" Meri beti JIYA abhi raste mein hai, wo jald hi yaha pe hogi."


Karamchand ander hi ander khus ho raha tha jaisa uska koi aur hi motive ho yaha aane ka aur ye baat Atharva se chuppi nahi thi. Jaha baaki teeno khus they wahi Soham sirf natak kar rha tha khus hone ka.


Atharva " Apki daughter ke naam se hi pata lag raha hai ki wo kitni komal aur sundar hongi, sayad wo kisi angel jaisi dikhti hongi. "


Aise hi Atharva, JIYA ki tareef kiye jaa raha tha jisse wo kabhi nahi Mila tha. Ye dekha wo ye sab bas Sohan ko tease karne ke liye kar raha tha.



"Cough! Cough!"


Atharva ki tareef sunne ke baad Karamchand ko khaasi aa gayi, uske muh se tea bhi bahar aa gayi thi jaise hi Usne Jiya ke baare mein ( sundar, komal aur angel) jaise word sune.



TO BE CONTINUED....











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Sohan andar se kaafi khus tha lekin wo bilkul bhi ye show nahi kar raha tha, bahar se to usne sirf ek sad sa face banaya hua tha.


Atharva " Brother aap hi hai jo humari family mein mujhe sabse jyada pyaar karte hai. Main kisi se shaadi nahi karna chahta, aap mere bhai ho to aap hi kyu nahi kar lete sadi. "


Sohan " Brother aisa nahi hai ki main tumhari help nahi karna chahta, lekin me adopted son hu. Main agar marriage ke liye haa bhi kardu to Father nahi maanenge. Ye arrangement sirf tumhare liye hai. "


Sohan ne ye baat helpless face ke sath kahi thi, lekin wo ander se bhut khus tha, kyuki agar Atharva marriage ke liye mana kar deta hai to wo hi replacement hoga.


Atharva " Agar aap haa karte ho to main aapse promise karta hu ki kal aap ki hi marriage JADHAV Family ki daughter se hogi. "


" Really ? "


Sohan ne kaafi khus hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Of course. "


Sohan " Hum dono Brothers hai, isliye is baar main tumhari help kar raha hu. "


Sohan ne baat aise boli jaise ki wo Atharva ke liye koi bhut bada favour kar raha ho, lekin andar se mann hi mann wo dance kar raha tha.


Atharva " Thank you brother, kal Main hall mein aap bilkul saant rahe aur pretend kare ki aapko kuch nahi pata. Let me handle this. "


Sohan " No problem, main kal ki saari jimmedari tumhe deta hu. "


Sohan ne Atharva ka shoulder thap thapaya au apne manison ki taraf nikal gaya. Sohan yahi soch raha tha ki uska useless brother kaise uski help karega. Lekin jaisa ki usne past mein dekha hai, usey pura yakeen tha ki Atharva kuch na kuch drama jaroor karega.


" Naaki mera status YADAV Family mein badhega balki JADHAV Family mein bhi badhega. Atharva kitna pagal hai marriage request ko thukrake ke mere ko replace karne ke liye bol raha hai. Lekin usne apni Life main pehli baar koi acha kaam kiya hai. Thode din baad jab mera status dono Family mein high ho jayega to main is Atharva ko khud jaan se maar dunga."


Sohan ne yaha se nikalte hi kud se ye sub kahte hue apne true colours dikha diye they.


Wahi doosri aur Mansion me mai Moon ki taraf ek evil smile ke sath dekh raha tha.


Atharva " Messing with me, you are going to die Brother...hahahaha. "




~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

NEXT MORNING


Next Morning kayi log pure mansion ko decorate karne mein lage huye they. Aaj hi wo din tha engagement ka dono Families ke liye. Fragrant Sky City ki puri history mein aisa kabhi nahi hua tha jab ye dono Families sath mein aayi ho, kyuki ye dono Families ek dusre ki rivals rahi hai centuries se.


" JADHAV Family ke Head aa chuke hai."


Tabhi Guards ki ek jordaar awaaz ke sath ek bhut hi powerful person gate se Main hall ke andar aaya.


Is person ki body bi Kamalnath jaisi hi thi, ye bhi apne forties mein tha aur face se cruel aur ek cunning fox lag raha tha. Usne ek colourful silk ka gown pehna tha aur kisi Tiger ki tarah andar aa rha tha.


JADHAV Family ke Head they Karamchand. Jo ki QI HAI Realm ke peak par they, jo kabhi bhi MORTAL CORE REALM mein BREAKTHROUGH kar sakte hai bilkul Kailashnath ki tarah.


" HAHA, Mere Mansion mein aapka Welcome hai Karamchand Brother. "
" Mujhe hope hai ki aap yaha pe aane ka pura anand lenge. "


Kailashnath ne ye baat dostana tarike se kahi aur wo Karamchand ki taraf badh gaye.


Karamchand " Meri khusi ka thikana nahi hai Mayor Kailashnath, kyuki aaj dono Families ek hone wali hai. "


Halanki, Karamchand face se bhut hi sareef insaan lag raha tha, lekin Atharva ko pehli najar mein wo kisi OLD Fox ke jaise nazar aa raha tha.


Atharva ne Karamchand ke piche dekha to usey koi bhi dikhai nahi diya, iska matlab wo akela aaya tha, lekin ye ek normal baat thi. Fragrant Sky City main ab tak jitne bhi event huye usme JADHAV Family se kabhi bhi Karamchand present nahi hua tha. Uska yaha akela aana uski puri Family ko represent kar raha tha.


Sabhi log chalte huye Main hall ke andar aa gaye, Karamchand aur Kailashnath ek dusre ke saamne apni-2 chair pe baith gaye they. Sohan aur Atharva apne Father ke piche khade ho gaye they.


Karamchand " Brother Kailashnath, main sidha mudde pe aata hu, mere aane ka maksad ye hai ki meri beti ki marriage aapki Family mein ho. Yaha hum aaj Marriage ki date fix karenge."


Kailashnath " Bahut badhiya, ek baar ye marriage ho jaaye to hamari Fragrant Sky City bhi last mein nahi rahegi. "


Kailashnath piche ki aur mudda aur Atharva ko dekhte huye bola.


Kailashnath " Atharva aage aao aur apne Father-in-law se milo. "


Karamchand "Great! Tumhara beta bhut acha hai."


Karamchand ne Atharva ko compliment dete huye kaha, lekin usey andar se pata tha ki wo khaali bakwas kar raha hai, kyuki puri Fragrant Sky City ko Atharva ki bad reputation ke baare main pata hai ki wo cultivation mein useless hai aur apna adha time prostitutes mein waste karta hai.


Lekin Karamchand ko is baat ki koi fikr nahi thi. Wo jaldi se jaldi Father-in-law banna chahta tha, kai baar personal needs se jada jaroori Family needs hoti hai aur aisa hi yaha bhi tha.


Atharva " Father, lagta hai aap galat samajh rahe hai. "
" Kya ye marriage Big Brother ke liye nahi hai ? "


Kailashnath aur Karamchand dono hi ye baat sunke surprise ho gaye they. Karamchand ne apna sir Sohan ki taraf ghumaya aur usko uper se leke niche tak observe karna suru kar diya.


" Isey kehte hai ek talanted young genius. Itni is age mein ye QI JING REALM ke 9th level pe pahuch gaya gaya hai. "


Kailashnath " Atharva bakwas karna band karo. "


Kailashnath ne gussa hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Father main stupid nahi hu, meri to qualifications bhi JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke layak nahi hai. Wahi mere Big Brother itni si Age mein QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe hai, puri Fragrant Sky City mein JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke liye yahi layak hai. Main to abhi chota hu aur Big Brother abhi tak inki daughter se mille nahi hai lekin ye unse marriage karne mein interested hai. "


Atharva ne confidence ke sath speech dete huye apne Big Brother ki tareef ki. Atharva ke bagal mein khada Sohan lagbhag rona chahta tha ki uska little Brother usse kitna pyar karta hai, jo ki bhut rare hai.


Karamchand " HAHAHA, Mujhe kabhi bhi nahi pata tha Brother Kailashnath ki apka bada beta meri beti se pyar karta hai."


Kailashnath jor se has raha tha, haa ye marriage dono Family ke profit ke liye thi lekin usey Atharva aur Sohan mein choose karne ka mauka mille to wo Atharva ko choose kare itna pagal nahi hai.


Kailashnath " Sohan, Aao aur apne Father-in-law se millo."


Karamchand " Congratulations! Father-in-law. "


" Haso aur khus raho, kyuki tum baad mein rowoge. "


Atharva ne ye baat apne mann mein sochi aur fir apna gala thik karte huye bolne laga.


Atharva " Mister Karamchand, mere big brother ki ek aur wish hai. "


Karamchand " Ohhh, to bolo na mere aur brother Kailashnath ke rehte koi wish impossible nahi."


Sohan confused tha usey aisa kuch bhi yaad nahi aa raha tha, isliye wo kuch bolne ko hua usse pehle Atharva hi bol pada.


Atharva " Big Brother kaafi time se JADHAV Family ko praise karte hai, agar usnki marriage JADHAV Family se ho jaati hai to unhe apni Life mein aur kuch nahi chahiye."


Atharva ne apne face pe smile ke sath ye baat kahi thi. Atharva ne jo kaha tha usey sunke Sohan ka face kala padne laga tha.


Soha " Brother, tumne abhi kya kaha ? "


Sohan ne badi hi tez awaz mein pucha.


Atharva " Aapne hi to ye kaha tha mujhse. Oohh aap khud ye bolne mein shy feel kar rahe ho. Lekin aap Tension mat lo aapki wish jaroor puri hogi. Aap apne Little Brother pe sab chod dijiye. Aap kaafi time JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they. Ye sach hai na ? "


Sohan bilkul ghabra gaya tha, haa wo bilkul JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karna chahta tha. Lekin wo unki Family mein marriage nahi karna chahta tha. Agar wo aisa karta to usey Mayor Mansion chod ke JADHAV Family mein hi rehna padta aur JADHAV Family hi uski Family ho jaati aur uska YADAV FAMILY aur Mayor Mansion se saare rishte khatam ho jaate. Uske itne years ki mehnat khatam hoti huyi nazar aa rahi thi. Aur agar wo JADHAV Family mein chala bhi jata hai to usey koi importance nahi dega balki sab usko nicha hi dikhayenge. Agar aisa hua to uska Future hi kharab ho jaayega.


Atharva " kya ? "
" Mujhe ye mat bolna ki jo kal aap JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they wo jhoot thi. Mujhe aap se yeh umeed nahi thi. "


Atharva ne Sohan ko bina mauka diye hi ye sab bol diya, ab Sohan fas chuka tha wo kisi bhi tarah se naa bolke dono Family ko offend nahi karna chahta tha. Ab Sohan ko realize ho raha tha ki Atharva uske sath kitna bada Game khel raha hai. Sohan ab is position se wapis nahi aa sakta tha. Usey itna gussa aa raha tha ki wo muskil se apna killing intent sambhal paa raha tha jo Atharva ki nazaro se nahi bacha tha. Sohan ko ek baat aur sata rahi thi ki ye Useless Atharva itna smart kaise ho gaya jo usey aisi situation mein trap kar diya.


Sohan ke badlte expression dekh ke Atharva ke face pe ek evil smile thi. Kyuki Sohan, Atharva ko marna chahta tha isliye ye to bas shuruat thi.


Karamchand " Mujhe pata nahi tha brother ki apka elder son meri daughter se itna pyar karta hai, aur ye to hamari Family se marriage bhi karna chahta hai. Isliye humey jaldi se arrangement karni chahiye. Iske Baad puri Fragrant Sky City mein humare samne koi nahi aa paayega. "


Kailashnath " KYA tum apne faisle se khus ho Sohan ? "


Kailashnath ko dukh to ho raha tha ki uska adopted son doosri Family mein jaana chahta hai, lekin usne ye show nahi kiya. YADAV FAMILY ke bhut se business they Fragrant Sky City mein jinme se aadha kaam Sohan dekhta tha agar wo chala jaayega to business ka kya hoga. Lekin usey Sohan ke decision ke decision ki bhi respect karni hogi, isliye wo chup they.


Atharva " Father, wo yahi chahte hai. Mujhe ache se pata hai mere big Brother kaise hai aur wo kya soch rahe hai. Inhe aur aapko to khus hona chahiye inki wish jo puri hone jaa rahi hai. UnCle Karamchand aapko bhi mere Big Brother ki dekhbhal karni hogi kahi koi unhe nicha na dikhaye. "


Sohan apna muh kholne hi wala tha ki Atharva ne usse pehle hi badi chalaki se jawab de diya.


Karamchand " hahaha…… "
" Chinta na karo mere hote mere son-in-law ko nicha dikhane ki himmat kon karega. "


Soha gusse mein ubal raha tha, usne apni fist ko kaafi tight close kiya hua tha apne gown ke ander, uske saare plans fail ho gaye they wo bilkul fas gaya tha, ab wo chah kar bhi naa nahi kar sakta tha.


Atharva " Congratulations Uncle! Aaj ka din kaafi khusi ka hai, ab aap jaldi se apni daughter ko bulaiye taki hum sab unhe dekh sake. "


Kailashnath " Haa tumne sahi kaha Atharva, inki daughter ko aaj tak kisi ne nahi dekha hai naa hi wo kisi public place mein aati hai. Lekin ab marriage ka decision ho hi gaya hai to hum bhi aapki daughter ko dekhna chahenge brother."


Karamchand " haha…. "
" Meri beti JIYA abhi raste mein hai, wo jald hi yaha pe hogi."


Karamchand ander hi ander khus ho raha tha jaisa uska koi aur hi motive ho yaha aane ka aur ye baat Atharva se chuppi nahi thi. Jaha baaki teeno khus they wahi Soham sirf natak kar rha tha khus hone ka.


Atharva " Apki daughter ke naam se hi pata lag raha hai ki wo kitni komal aur sundar hongi, sayad wo kisi angel jaisi dikhti hongi. "


Aise hi Atharva, JIYA ki tareef kiye jaa raha tha jisse wo kabhi nahi Mila tha. Ye dekha wo ye sab bas Sohan ko tease karne ke liye kar raha tha.



"Cough! Cough!"


Atharva ki tareef sunne ke baad Karamchand ko khaasi aa gayi, uske muh se tea bhi bahar aa gayi thi jaise hi Usne Jiya ke baare mein ( sundar, komal aur angel) jaise word sune.



TO BE CONTINUED....











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Hope nothing serious.
Update is good.
Keep it up man
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UPDATE NO - 3
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Sohan andar se kaafi khus tha lekin wo bilkul bhi ye show nahi kar raha tha, bahar se to usne sirf ek sad sa face banaya hua tha.


Atharva " Brother aap hi hai jo humari family mein mujhe sabse jyada pyaar karte hai. Main kisi se shaadi nahi karna chahta, aap mere bhai ho to aap hi kyu nahi kar lete sadi. "


Sohan " Brother aisa nahi hai ki main tumhari help nahi karna chahta, lekin me adopted son hu. Main agar marriage ke liye haa bhi kardu to Father nahi maanenge. Ye arrangement sirf tumhare liye hai. "


Sohan ne ye baat helpless face ke sath kahi thi, lekin wo ander se bhut khus tha, kyuki agar Atharva marriage ke liye mana kar deta hai to wo hi replacement hoga.


Atharva " Agar aap haa karte ho to main aapse promise karta hu ki kal aap ki hi marriage JADHAV Family ki daughter se hogi. "


" Really ? "


Sohan ne kaafi khus hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Of course. "


Sohan " Hum dono Brothers hai, isliye is baar main tumhari help kar raha hu. "


Sohan ne baat aise boli jaise ki wo Atharva ke liye koi bhut bada favour kar raha ho, lekin andar se mann hi mann wo dance kar raha tha.


Atharva " Thank you brother, kal Main hall mein aap bilkul saant rahe aur pretend kare ki aapko kuch nahi pata. Let me handle this. "


Sohan " No problem, main kal ki saari jimmedari tumhe deta hu. "


Sohan ne Atharva ka shoulder thap thapaya au apne manison ki taraf nikal gaya. Sohan yahi soch raha tha ki uska useless brother kaise uski help karega. Lekin jaisa ki usne past mein dekha hai, usey pura yakeen tha ki Atharva kuch na kuch drama jaroor karega.


" Naaki mera status YADAV Family mein badhega balki JADHAV Family mein bhi badhega. Atharva kitna pagal hai marriage request ko thukrake ke mere ko replace karne ke liye bol raha hai. Lekin usne apni Life main pehli baar koi acha kaam kiya hai. Thode din baad jab mera status dono Family mein high ho jayega to main is Atharva ko khud jaan se maar dunga."


Sohan ne yaha se nikalte hi kud se ye sub kahte hue apne true colours dikha diye they.


Wahi doosri aur Mansion me mai Moon ki taraf ek evil smile ke sath dekh raha tha.


Atharva " Messing with me, you are going to die Brother...hahahaha. "




~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

NEXT MORNING


Next Morning kayi log pure mansion ko decorate karne mein lage huye they. Aaj hi wo din tha engagement ka dono Families ke liye. Fragrant Sky City ki puri history mein aisa kabhi nahi hua tha jab ye dono Families sath mein aayi ho, kyuki ye dono Families ek dusre ki rivals rahi hai centuries se.


" JADHAV Family ke Head aa chuke hai."


Tabhi Guards ki ek jordaar awaaz ke sath ek bhut hi powerful person gate se Main hall ke andar aaya.


Is person ki body bi Kamalnath jaisi hi thi, ye bhi apne forties mein tha aur face se cruel aur ek cunning fox lag raha tha. Usne ek colourful silk ka gown pehna tha aur kisi Tiger ki tarah andar aa rha tha.


JADHAV Family ke Head they Karamchand. Jo ki QI HAI Realm ke peak par they, jo kabhi bhi MORTAL CORE REALM mein BREAKTHROUGH kar sakte hai bilkul Kailashnath ki tarah.


" HAHA, Mere Mansion mein aapka Welcome hai Karamchand Brother. "
" Mujhe hope hai ki aap yaha pe aane ka pura anand lenge. "


Kailashnath ne ye baat dostana tarike se kahi aur wo Karamchand ki taraf badh gaye.


Karamchand " Meri khusi ka thikana nahi hai Mayor Kailashnath, kyuki aaj dono Families ek hone wali hai. "


Halanki, Karamchand face se bhut hi sareef insaan lag raha tha, lekin Atharva ko pehli najar mein wo kisi OLD Fox ke jaise nazar aa raha tha.


Atharva ne Karamchand ke piche dekha to usey koi bhi dikhai nahi diya, iska matlab wo akela aaya tha, lekin ye ek normal baat thi. Fragrant Sky City main ab tak jitne bhi event huye usme JADHAV Family se kabhi bhi Karamchand present nahi hua tha. Uska yaha akela aana uski puri Family ko represent kar raha tha.


Sabhi log chalte huye Main hall ke andar aa gaye, Karamchand aur Kailashnath ek dusre ke saamne apni-2 chair pe baith gaye they. Sohan aur Atharva apne Father ke piche khade ho gaye they.


Karamchand " Brother Kailashnath, main sidha mudde pe aata hu, mere aane ka maksad ye hai ki meri beti ki marriage aapki Family mein ho. Yaha hum aaj Marriage ki date fix karenge."


Kailashnath " Bahut badhiya, ek baar ye marriage ho jaaye to hamari Fragrant Sky City bhi last mein nahi rahegi. "


Kailashnath piche ki aur mudda aur Atharva ko dekhte huye bola.


Kailashnath " Atharva aage aao aur apne Father-in-law se milo. "


Karamchand "Great! Tumhara beta bhut acha hai."


Karamchand ne Atharva ko compliment dete huye kaha, lekin usey andar se pata tha ki wo khaali bakwas kar raha hai, kyuki puri Fragrant Sky City ko Atharva ki bad reputation ke baare main pata hai ki wo cultivation mein useless hai aur apna adha time prostitutes mein waste karta hai.


Lekin Karamchand ko is baat ki koi fikr nahi thi. Wo jaldi se jaldi Father-in-law banna chahta tha, kai baar personal needs se jada jaroori Family needs hoti hai aur aisa hi yaha bhi tha.


Atharva " Father, lagta hai aap galat samajh rahe hai. "
" Kya ye marriage Big Brother ke liye nahi hai ? "


Kailashnath aur Karamchand dono hi ye baat sunke surprise ho gaye they. Karamchand ne apna sir Sohan ki taraf ghumaya aur usko uper se leke niche tak observe karna suru kar diya.


" Isey kehte hai ek talanted young genius. Itni is age mein ye QI JING REALM ke 9th level pe pahuch gaya gaya hai. "


Kailashnath " Atharva bakwas karna band karo. "


Kailashnath ne gussa hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Father main stupid nahi hu, meri to qualifications bhi JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke layak nahi hai. Wahi mere Big Brother itni si Age mein QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe hai, puri Fragrant Sky City mein JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke liye yahi layak hai. Main to abhi chota hu aur Big Brother abhi tak inki daughter se mille nahi hai lekin ye unse marriage karne mein interested hai. "


Atharva ne confidence ke sath speech dete huye apne Big Brother ki tareef ki. Atharva ke bagal mein khada Sohan lagbhag rona chahta tha ki uska little Brother usse kitna pyar karta hai, jo ki bhut rare hai.


Karamchand " HAHAHA, Mujhe kabhi bhi nahi pata tha Brother Kailashnath ki apka bada beta meri beti se pyar karta hai."


Kailashnath jor se has raha tha, haa ye marriage dono Family ke profit ke liye thi lekin usey Atharva aur Sohan mein choose karne ka mauka mille to wo Atharva ko choose kare itna pagal nahi hai.


Kailashnath " Sohan, Aao aur apne Father-in-law se millo."


Karamchand " Congratulations! Father-in-law. "


" Haso aur khus raho, kyuki tum baad mein rowoge. "


Atharva ne ye baat apne mann mein sochi aur fir apna gala thik karte huye bolne laga.


Atharva " Mister Karamchand, mere big brother ki ek aur wish hai. "


Karamchand " Ohhh, to bolo na mere aur brother Kailashnath ke rehte koi wish impossible nahi."


Sohan confused tha usey aisa kuch bhi yaad nahi aa raha tha, isliye wo kuch bolne ko hua usse pehle Atharva hi bol pada.


Atharva " Big Brother kaafi time se JADHAV Family ko praise karte hai, agar usnki marriage JADHAV Family se ho jaati hai to unhe apni Life mein aur kuch nahi chahiye."


Atharva ne apne face pe smile ke sath ye baat kahi thi. Atharva ne jo kaha tha usey sunke Sohan ka face kala padne laga tha.


Soha " Brother, tumne abhi kya kaha ? "


Sohan ne badi hi tez awaz mein pucha.


Atharva " Aapne hi to ye kaha tha mujhse. Oohh aap khud ye bolne mein shy feel kar rahe ho. Lekin aap Tension mat lo aapki wish jaroor puri hogi. Aap apne Little Brother pe sab chod dijiye. Aap kaafi time JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they. Ye sach hai na ? "


Sohan bilkul ghabra gaya tha, haa wo bilkul JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karna chahta tha. Lekin wo unki Family mein marriage nahi karna chahta tha. Agar wo aisa karta to usey Mayor Mansion chod ke JADHAV Family mein hi rehna padta aur JADHAV Family hi uski Family ho jaati aur uska YADAV FAMILY aur Mayor Mansion se saare rishte khatam ho jaate. Uske itne years ki mehnat khatam hoti huyi nazar aa rahi thi. Aur agar wo JADHAV Family mein chala bhi jata hai to usey koi importance nahi dega balki sab usko nicha hi dikhayenge. Agar aisa hua to uska Future hi kharab ho jaayega.


Atharva " kya ? "
" Mujhe ye mat bolna ki jo kal aap JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they wo jhoot thi. Mujhe aap se yeh umeed nahi thi. "


Atharva ne Sohan ko bina mauka diye hi ye sab bol diya, ab Sohan fas chuka tha wo kisi bhi tarah se naa bolke dono Family ko offend nahi karna chahta tha. Ab Sohan ko realize ho raha tha ki Atharva uske sath kitna bada Game khel raha hai. Sohan ab is position se wapis nahi aa sakta tha. Usey itna gussa aa raha tha ki wo muskil se apna killing intent sambhal paa raha tha jo Atharva ki nazaro se nahi bacha tha. Sohan ko ek baat aur sata rahi thi ki ye Useless Atharva itna smart kaise ho gaya jo usey aisi situation mein trap kar diya.


Sohan ke badlte expression dekh ke Atharva ke face pe ek evil smile thi. Kyuki Sohan, Atharva ko marna chahta tha isliye ye to bas shuruat thi.


Karamchand " Mujhe pata nahi tha brother ki apka elder son meri daughter se itna pyar karta hai, aur ye to hamari Family se marriage bhi karna chahta hai. Isliye humey jaldi se arrangement karni chahiye. Iske Baad puri Fragrant Sky City mein humare samne koi nahi aa paayega. "


Kailashnath " KYA tum apne faisle se khus ho Sohan ? "


Kailashnath ko dukh to ho raha tha ki uska adopted son doosri Family mein jaana chahta hai, lekin usne ye show nahi kiya. YADAV FAMILY ke bhut se business they Fragrant Sky City mein jinme se aadha kaam Sohan dekhta tha agar wo chala jaayega to business ka kya hoga. Lekin usey Sohan ke decision ke decision ki bhi respect karni hogi, isliye wo chup they.


Atharva " Father, wo yahi chahte hai. Mujhe ache se pata hai mere big Brother kaise hai aur wo kya soch rahe hai. Inhe aur aapko to khus hona chahiye inki wish jo puri hone jaa rahi hai. UnCle Karamchand aapko bhi mere Big Brother ki dekhbhal karni hogi kahi koi unhe nicha na dikhaye. "


Sohan apna muh kholne hi wala tha ki Atharva ne usse pehle hi badi chalaki se jawab de diya.


Karamchand " hahaha…… "
" Chinta na karo mere hote mere son-in-law ko nicha dikhane ki himmat kon karega. "


Soha gusse mein ubal raha tha, usne apni fist ko kaafi tight close kiya hua tha apne gown ke ander, uske saare plans fail ho gaye they wo bilkul fas gaya tha, ab wo chah kar bhi naa nahi kar sakta tha.


Atharva " Congratulations Uncle! Aaj ka din kaafi khusi ka hai, ab aap jaldi se apni daughter ko bulaiye taki hum sab unhe dekh sake. "


Kailashnath " Haa tumne sahi kaha Atharva, inki daughter ko aaj tak kisi ne nahi dekha hai naa hi wo kisi public place mein aati hai. Lekin ab marriage ka decision ho hi gaya hai to hum bhi aapki daughter ko dekhna chahenge brother."


Karamchand " haha…. "
" Meri beti JIYA abhi raste mein hai, wo jald hi yaha pe hogi."


Karamchand ander hi ander khus ho raha tha jaisa uska koi aur hi motive ho yaha aane ka aur ye baat Atharva se chuppi nahi thi. Jaha baaki teeno khus they wahi Soham sirf natak kar rha tha khus hone ka.


Atharva " Apki daughter ke naam se hi pata lag raha hai ki wo kitni komal aur sundar hongi, sayad wo kisi angel jaisi dikhti hongi. "


Aise hi Atharva, JIYA ki tareef kiye jaa raha tha jisse wo kabhi nahi Mila tha. Ye dekha wo ye sab bas Sohan ko tease karne ke liye kar raha tha.



"Cough! Cough!"


Atharva ki tareef sunne ke baad Karamchand ko khaasi aa gayi, uske muh se tea bhi bahar aa gayi thi jaise hi Usne Jiya ke baare mein ( sundar, komal aur angel) jaise word sune.



TO BE CONTINUED....











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Sohan andar se kaafi khus tha lekin wo bilkul bhi ye show nahi kar raha tha, bahar se to usne sirf ek sad sa face banaya hua tha.


Atharva " Brother aap hi hai jo humari family mein mujhe sabse jyada pyaar karte hai. Main kisi se shaadi nahi karna chahta, aap mere bhai ho to aap hi kyu nahi kar lete sadi. "


Sohan " Brother aisa nahi hai ki main tumhari help nahi karna chahta, lekin me adopted son hu. Main agar marriage ke liye haa bhi kardu to Father nahi maanenge. Ye arrangement sirf tumhare liye hai. "


Sohan ne ye baat helpless face ke sath kahi thi, lekin wo ander se bhut khus tha, kyuki agar Atharva marriage ke liye mana kar deta hai to wo hi replacement hoga.


Atharva " Agar aap haa karte ho to main aapse promise karta hu ki kal aap ki hi marriage JADHAV Family ki daughter se hogi. "


" Really ? "


Sohan ne kaafi khus hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Of course. "


Sohan " Hum dono Brothers hai, isliye is baar main tumhari help kar raha hu. "


Sohan ne baat aise boli jaise ki wo Atharva ke liye koi bhut bada favour kar raha ho, lekin andar se mann hi mann wo dance kar raha tha.


Atharva " Thank you brother, kal Main hall mein aap bilkul saant rahe aur pretend kare ki aapko kuch nahi pata. Let me handle this. "


Sohan " No problem, main kal ki saari jimmedari tumhe deta hu. "


Sohan ne Atharva ka shoulder thap thapaya au apne manison ki taraf nikal gaya. Sohan yahi soch raha tha ki uska useless brother kaise uski help karega. Lekin jaisa ki usne past mein dekha hai, usey pura yakeen tha ki Atharva kuch na kuch drama jaroor karega.


" Naaki mera status YADAV Family mein badhega balki JADHAV Family mein bhi badhega. Atharva kitna pagal hai marriage request ko thukrake ke mere ko replace karne ke liye bol raha hai. Lekin usne apni Life main pehli baar koi acha kaam kiya hai. Thode din baad jab mera status dono Family mein high ho jayega to main is Atharva ko khud jaan se maar dunga."


Sohan ne yaha se nikalte hi kud se ye sub kahte hue apne true colours dikha diye they.


Wahi doosri aur Mansion me mai Moon ki taraf ek evil smile ke sath dekh raha tha.


Atharva " Messing with me, you are going to die Brother...hahahaha. "




~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

NEXT MORNING


Next Morning kayi log pure mansion ko decorate karne mein lage huye they. Aaj hi wo din tha engagement ka dono Families ke liye. Fragrant Sky City ki puri history mein aisa kabhi nahi hua tha jab ye dono Families sath mein aayi ho, kyuki ye dono Families ek dusre ki rivals rahi hai centuries se.


" JADHAV Family ke Head aa chuke hai."


Tabhi Guards ki ek jordaar awaaz ke sath ek bhut hi powerful person gate se Main hall ke andar aaya.


Is person ki body bi Kamalnath jaisi hi thi, ye bhi apne forties mein tha aur face se cruel aur ek cunning fox lag raha tha. Usne ek colourful silk ka gown pehna tha aur kisi Tiger ki tarah andar aa rha tha.


JADHAV Family ke Head they Karamchand. Jo ki QI HAI Realm ke peak par they, jo kabhi bhi MORTAL CORE REALM mein BREAKTHROUGH kar sakte hai bilkul Kailashnath ki tarah.


" HAHA, Mere Mansion mein aapka Welcome hai Karamchand Brother. "
" Mujhe hope hai ki aap yaha pe aane ka pura anand lenge. "


Kailashnath ne ye baat dostana tarike se kahi aur wo Karamchand ki taraf badh gaye.


Karamchand " Meri khusi ka thikana nahi hai Mayor Kailashnath, kyuki aaj dono Families ek hone wali hai. "


Halanki, Karamchand face se bhut hi sareef insaan lag raha tha, lekin Atharva ko pehli najar mein wo kisi OLD Fox ke jaise nazar aa raha tha.


Atharva ne Karamchand ke piche dekha to usey koi bhi dikhai nahi diya, iska matlab wo akela aaya tha, lekin ye ek normal baat thi. Fragrant Sky City main ab tak jitne bhi event huye usme JADHAV Family se kabhi bhi Karamchand present nahi hua tha. Uska yaha akela aana uski puri Family ko represent kar raha tha.


Sabhi log chalte huye Main hall ke andar aa gaye, Karamchand aur Kailashnath ek dusre ke saamne apni-2 chair pe baith gaye they. Sohan aur Atharva apne Father ke piche khade ho gaye they.


Karamchand " Brother Kailashnath, main sidha mudde pe aata hu, mere aane ka maksad ye hai ki meri beti ki marriage aapki Family mein ho. Yaha hum aaj Marriage ki date fix karenge."


Kailashnath " Bahut badhiya, ek baar ye marriage ho jaaye to hamari Fragrant Sky City bhi last mein nahi rahegi. "


Kailashnath piche ki aur mudda aur Atharva ko dekhte huye bola.


Kailashnath " Atharva aage aao aur apne Father-in-law se milo. "


Karamchand "Great! Tumhara beta bhut acha hai."


Karamchand ne Atharva ko compliment dete huye kaha, lekin usey andar se pata tha ki wo khaali bakwas kar raha hai, kyuki puri Fragrant Sky City ko Atharva ki bad reputation ke baare main pata hai ki wo cultivation mein useless hai aur apna adha time prostitutes mein waste karta hai.


Lekin Karamchand ko is baat ki koi fikr nahi thi. Wo jaldi se jaldi Father-in-law banna chahta tha, kai baar personal needs se jada jaroori Family needs hoti hai aur aisa hi yaha bhi tha.


Atharva " Father, lagta hai aap galat samajh rahe hai. "
" Kya ye marriage Big Brother ke liye nahi hai ? "


Kailashnath aur Karamchand dono hi ye baat sunke surprise ho gaye they. Karamchand ne apna sir Sohan ki taraf ghumaya aur usko uper se leke niche tak observe karna suru kar diya.


" Isey kehte hai ek talanted young genius. Itni is age mein ye QI JING REALM ke 9th level pe pahuch gaya gaya hai. "


Kailashnath " Atharva bakwas karna band karo. "


Kailashnath ne gussa hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Father main stupid nahi hu, meri to qualifications bhi JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke layak nahi hai. Wahi mere Big Brother itni si Age mein QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe hai, puri Fragrant Sky City mein JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke liye yahi layak hai. Main to abhi chota hu aur Big Brother abhi tak inki daughter se mille nahi hai lekin ye unse marriage karne mein interested hai. "


Atharva ne confidence ke sath speech dete huye apne Big Brother ki tareef ki. Atharva ke bagal mein khada Sohan lagbhag rona chahta tha ki uska little Brother usse kitna pyar karta hai, jo ki bhut rare hai.


Karamchand " HAHAHA, Mujhe kabhi bhi nahi pata tha Brother Kailashnath ki apka bada beta meri beti se pyar karta hai."


Kailashnath jor se has raha tha, haa ye marriage dono Family ke profit ke liye thi lekin usey Atharva aur Sohan mein choose karne ka mauka mille to wo Atharva ko choose kare itna pagal nahi hai.


Kailashnath " Sohan, Aao aur apne Father-in-law se millo."


Karamchand " Congratulations! Father-in-law. "


" Haso aur khus raho, kyuki tum baad mein rowoge. "


Atharva ne ye baat apne mann mein sochi aur fir apna gala thik karte huye bolne laga.


Atharva " Mister Karamchand, mere big brother ki ek aur wish hai. "


Karamchand " Ohhh, to bolo na mere aur brother Kailashnath ke rehte koi wish impossible nahi."


Sohan confused tha usey aisa kuch bhi yaad nahi aa raha tha, isliye wo kuch bolne ko hua usse pehle Atharva hi bol pada.


Atharva " Big Brother kaafi time se JADHAV Family ko praise karte hai, agar usnki marriage JADHAV Family se ho jaati hai to unhe apni Life mein aur kuch nahi chahiye."


Atharva ne apne face pe smile ke sath ye baat kahi thi. Atharva ne jo kaha tha usey sunke Sohan ka face kala padne laga tha.


Soha " Brother, tumne abhi kya kaha ? "


Sohan ne badi hi tez awaz mein pucha.


Atharva " Aapne hi to ye kaha tha mujhse. Oohh aap khud ye bolne mein shy feel kar rahe ho. Lekin aap Tension mat lo aapki wish jaroor puri hogi. Aap apne Little Brother pe sab chod dijiye. Aap kaafi time JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they. Ye sach hai na ? "


Sohan bilkul ghabra gaya tha, haa wo bilkul JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karna chahta tha. Lekin wo unki Family mein marriage nahi karna chahta tha. Agar wo aisa karta to usey Mayor Mansion chod ke JADHAV Family mein hi rehna padta aur JADHAV Family hi uski Family ho jaati aur uska YADAV FAMILY aur Mayor Mansion se saare rishte khatam ho jaate. Uske itne years ki mehnat khatam hoti huyi nazar aa rahi thi. Aur agar wo JADHAV Family mein chala bhi jata hai to usey koi importance nahi dega balki sab usko nicha hi dikhayenge. Agar aisa hua to uska Future hi kharab ho jaayega.


Atharva " kya ? "
" Mujhe ye mat bolna ki jo kal aap JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they wo jhoot thi. Mujhe aap se yeh umeed nahi thi. "


Atharva ne Sohan ko bina mauka diye hi ye sab bol diya, ab Sohan fas chuka tha wo kisi bhi tarah se naa bolke dono Family ko offend nahi karna chahta tha. Ab Sohan ko realize ho raha tha ki Atharva uske sath kitna bada Game khel raha hai. Sohan ab is position se wapis nahi aa sakta tha. Usey itna gussa aa raha tha ki wo muskil se apna killing intent sambhal paa raha tha jo Atharva ki nazaro se nahi bacha tha. Sohan ko ek baat aur sata rahi thi ki ye Useless Atharva itna smart kaise ho gaya jo usey aisi situation mein trap kar diya.


Sohan ke badlte expression dekh ke Atharva ke face pe ek evil smile thi. Kyuki Sohan, Atharva ko marna chahta tha isliye ye to bas shuruat thi.


Karamchand " Mujhe pata nahi tha brother ki apka elder son meri daughter se itna pyar karta hai, aur ye to hamari Family se marriage bhi karna chahta hai. Isliye humey jaldi se arrangement karni chahiye. Iske Baad puri Fragrant Sky City mein humare samne koi nahi aa paayega. "


Kailashnath " KYA tum apne faisle se khus ho Sohan ? "


Kailashnath ko dukh to ho raha tha ki uska adopted son doosri Family mein jaana chahta hai, lekin usne ye show nahi kiya. YADAV FAMILY ke bhut se business they Fragrant Sky City mein jinme se aadha kaam Sohan dekhta tha agar wo chala jaayega to business ka kya hoga. Lekin usey Sohan ke decision ke decision ki bhi respect karni hogi, isliye wo chup they.


Atharva " Father, wo yahi chahte hai. Mujhe ache se pata hai mere big Brother kaise hai aur wo kya soch rahe hai. Inhe aur aapko to khus hona chahiye inki wish jo puri hone jaa rahi hai. UnCle Karamchand aapko bhi mere Big Brother ki dekhbhal karni hogi kahi koi unhe nicha na dikhaye. "


Sohan apna muh kholne hi wala tha ki Atharva ne usse pehle hi badi chalaki se jawab de diya.


Karamchand " hahaha…… "
" Chinta na karo mere hote mere son-in-law ko nicha dikhane ki himmat kon karega. "


Soha gusse mein ubal raha tha, usne apni fist ko kaafi tight close kiya hua tha apne gown ke ander, uske saare plans fail ho gaye they wo bilkul fas gaya tha, ab wo chah kar bhi naa nahi kar sakta tha.


Atharva " Congratulations Uncle! Aaj ka din kaafi khusi ka hai, ab aap jaldi se apni daughter ko bulaiye taki hum sab unhe dekh sake. "


Kailashnath " Haa tumne sahi kaha Atharva, inki daughter ko aaj tak kisi ne nahi dekha hai naa hi wo kisi public place mein aati hai. Lekin ab marriage ka decision ho hi gaya hai to hum bhi aapki daughter ko dekhna chahenge brother."


Karamchand " haha…. "
" Meri beti JIYA abhi raste mein hai, wo jald hi yaha pe hogi."


Karamchand ander hi ander khus ho raha tha jaisa uska koi aur hi motive ho yaha aane ka aur ye baat Atharva se chuppi nahi thi. Jaha baaki teeno khus they wahi Soham sirf natak kar rha tha khus hone ka.


Atharva " Apki daughter ke naam se hi pata lag raha hai ki wo kitni komal aur sundar hongi, sayad wo kisi angel jaisi dikhti hongi. "


Aise hi Atharva, JIYA ki tareef kiye jaa raha tha jisse wo kabhi nahi Mila tha. Ye dekha wo ye sab bas Sohan ko tease karne ke liye kar raha tha.



"Cough! Cough!"


Atharva ki tareef sunne ke baad Karamchand ko khaasi aa gayi, uske muh se tea bhi bahar aa gayi thi jaise hi Usne Jiya ke baare mein ( sundar, komal aur angel) jaise word sune.



TO BE CONTINUED....











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Sohan andar se kaafi khus tha lekin wo bilkul bhi ye show nahi kar raha tha, bahar se to usne sirf ek sad sa face banaya hua tha.


Atharva " Brother aap hi hai jo humari family mein mujhe sabse jyada pyaar karte hai. Main kisi se shaadi nahi karna chahta, aap mere bhai ho to aap hi kyu nahi kar lete sadi. "


Sohan " Brother aisa nahi hai ki main tumhari help nahi karna chahta, lekin me adopted son hu. Main agar marriage ke liye haa bhi kardu to Father nahi maanenge. Ye arrangement sirf tumhare liye hai. "


Sohan ne ye baat helpless face ke sath kahi thi, lekin wo ander se bhut khus tha, kyuki agar Atharva marriage ke liye mana kar deta hai to wo hi replacement hoga.


Atharva " Agar aap haa karte ho to main aapse promise karta hu ki kal aap ki hi marriage JADHAV Family ki daughter se hogi. "


" Really ? "


Sohan ne kaafi khus hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Of course. "


Sohan " Hum dono Brothers hai, isliye is baar main tumhari help kar raha hu. "


Sohan ne baat aise boli jaise ki wo Atharva ke liye koi bhut bada favour kar raha ho, lekin andar se mann hi mann wo dance kar raha tha.


Atharva " Thank you brother, kal Main hall mein aap bilkul saant rahe aur pretend kare ki aapko kuch nahi pata. Let me handle this. "


Sohan " No problem, main kal ki saari jimmedari tumhe deta hu. "


Sohan ne Atharva ka shoulder thap thapaya au apne manison ki taraf nikal gaya. Sohan yahi soch raha tha ki uska useless brother kaise uski help karega. Lekin jaisa ki usne past mein dekha hai, usey pura yakeen tha ki Atharva kuch na kuch drama jaroor karega.


" Naaki mera status YADAV Family mein badhega balki JADHAV Family mein bhi badhega. Atharva kitna pagal hai marriage request ko thukrake ke mere ko replace karne ke liye bol raha hai. Lekin usne apni Life main pehli baar koi acha kaam kiya hai. Thode din baad jab mera status dono Family mein high ho jayega to main is Atharva ko khud jaan se maar dunga."


Sohan ne yaha se nikalte hi kud se ye sub kahte hue apne true colours dikha diye they.


Wahi doosri aur Mansion me mai Moon ki taraf ek evil smile ke sath dekh raha tha.


Atharva " Messing with me, you are going to die Brother...hahahaha. "




~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

NEXT MORNING


Next Morning kayi log pure mansion ko decorate karne mein lage huye they. Aaj hi wo din tha engagement ka dono Families ke liye. Fragrant Sky City ki puri history mein aisa kabhi nahi hua tha jab ye dono Families sath mein aayi ho, kyuki ye dono Families ek dusre ki rivals rahi hai centuries se.


" JADHAV Family ke Head aa chuke hai."


Tabhi Guards ki ek jordaar awaaz ke sath ek bhut hi powerful person gate se Main hall ke andar aaya.


Is person ki body bi Kamalnath jaisi hi thi, ye bhi apne forties mein tha aur face se cruel aur ek cunning fox lag raha tha. Usne ek colourful silk ka gown pehna tha aur kisi Tiger ki tarah andar aa rha tha.


JADHAV Family ke Head they Karamchand. Jo ki QI HAI Realm ke peak par they, jo kabhi bhi MORTAL CORE REALM mein BREAKTHROUGH kar sakte hai bilkul Kailashnath ki tarah.


" HAHA, Mere Mansion mein aapka Welcome hai Karamchand Brother. "
" Mujhe hope hai ki aap yaha pe aane ka pura anand lenge. "


Kailashnath ne ye baat dostana tarike se kahi aur wo Karamchand ki taraf badh gaye.


Karamchand " Meri khusi ka thikana nahi hai Mayor Kailashnath, kyuki aaj dono Families ek hone wali hai. "


Halanki, Karamchand face se bhut hi sareef insaan lag raha tha, lekin Atharva ko pehli najar mein wo kisi OLD Fox ke jaise nazar aa raha tha.


Atharva ne Karamchand ke piche dekha to usey koi bhi dikhai nahi diya, iska matlab wo akela aaya tha, lekin ye ek normal baat thi. Fragrant Sky City main ab tak jitne bhi event huye usme JADHAV Family se kabhi bhi Karamchand present nahi hua tha. Uska yaha akela aana uski puri Family ko represent kar raha tha.


Sabhi log chalte huye Main hall ke andar aa gaye, Karamchand aur Kailashnath ek dusre ke saamne apni-2 chair pe baith gaye they. Sohan aur Atharva apne Father ke piche khade ho gaye they.


Karamchand " Brother Kailashnath, main sidha mudde pe aata hu, mere aane ka maksad ye hai ki meri beti ki marriage aapki Family mein ho. Yaha hum aaj Marriage ki date fix karenge."


Kailashnath " Bahut badhiya, ek baar ye marriage ho jaaye to hamari Fragrant Sky City bhi last mein nahi rahegi. "


Kailashnath piche ki aur mudda aur Atharva ko dekhte huye bola.


Kailashnath " Atharva aage aao aur apne Father-in-law se milo. "


Karamchand "Great! Tumhara beta bhut acha hai."


Karamchand ne Atharva ko compliment dete huye kaha, lekin usey andar se pata tha ki wo khaali bakwas kar raha hai, kyuki puri Fragrant Sky City ko Atharva ki bad reputation ke baare main pata hai ki wo cultivation mein useless hai aur apna adha time prostitutes mein waste karta hai.


Lekin Karamchand ko is baat ki koi fikr nahi thi. Wo jaldi se jaldi Father-in-law banna chahta tha, kai baar personal needs se jada jaroori Family needs hoti hai aur aisa hi yaha bhi tha.


Atharva " Father, lagta hai aap galat samajh rahe hai. "
" Kya ye marriage Big Brother ke liye nahi hai ? "


Kailashnath aur Karamchand dono hi ye baat sunke surprise ho gaye they. Karamchand ne apna sir Sohan ki taraf ghumaya aur usko uper se leke niche tak observe karna suru kar diya.


" Isey kehte hai ek talanted young genius. Itni is age mein ye QI JING REALM ke 9th level pe pahuch gaya gaya hai. "


Kailashnath " Atharva bakwas karna band karo. "


Kailashnath ne gussa hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Father main stupid nahi hu, meri to qualifications bhi JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke layak nahi hai. Wahi mere Big Brother itni si Age mein QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe hai, puri Fragrant Sky City mein JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke liye yahi layak hai. Main to abhi chota hu aur Big Brother abhi tak inki daughter se mille nahi hai lekin ye unse marriage karne mein interested hai. "


Atharva ne confidence ke sath speech dete huye apne Big Brother ki tareef ki. Atharva ke bagal mein khada Sohan lagbhag rona chahta tha ki uska little Brother usse kitna pyar karta hai, jo ki bhut rare hai.


Karamchand " HAHAHA, Mujhe kabhi bhi nahi pata tha Brother Kailashnath ki apka bada beta meri beti se pyar karta hai."


Kailashnath jor se has raha tha, haa ye marriage dono Family ke profit ke liye thi lekin usey Atharva aur Sohan mein choose karne ka mauka mille to wo Atharva ko choose kare itna pagal nahi hai.


Kailashnath " Sohan, Aao aur apne Father-in-law se millo."


Karamchand " Congratulations! Father-in-law. "


" Haso aur khus raho, kyuki tum baad mein rowoge. "


Atharva ne ye baat apne mann mein sochi aur fir apna gala thik karte huye bolne laga.


Atharva " Mister Karamchand, mere big brother ki ek aur wish hai. "


Karamchand " Ohhh, to bolo na mere aur brother Kailashnath ke rehte koi wish impossible nahi."


Sohan confused tha usey aisa kuch bhi yaad nahi aa raha tha, isliye wo kuch bolne ko hua usse pehle Atharva hi bol pada.


Atharva " Big Brother kaafi time se JADHAV Family ko praise karte hai, agar usnki marriage JADHAV Family se ho jaati hai to unhe apni Life mein aur kuch nahi chahiye."


Atharva ne apne face pe smile ke sath ye baat kahi thi. Atharva ne jo kaha tha usey sunke Sohan ka face kala padne laga tha.


Soha " Brother, tumne abhi kya kaha ? "


Sohan ne badi hi tez awaz mein pucha.


Atharva " Aapne hi to ye kaha tha mujhse. Oohh aap khud ye bolne mein shy feel kar rahe ho. Lekin aap Tension mat lo aapki wish jaroor puri hogi. Aap apne Little Brother pe sab chod dijiye. Aap kaafi time JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they. Ye sach hai na ? "


Sohan bilkul ghabra gaya tha, haa wo bilkul JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karna chahta tha. Lekin wo unki Family mein marriage nahi karna chahta tha. Agar wo aisa karta to usey Mayor Mansion chod ke JADHAV Family mein hi rehna padta aur JADHAV Family hi uski Family ho jaati aur uska YADAV FAMILY aur Mayor Mansion se saare rishte khatam ho jaate. Uske itne years ki mehnat khatam hoti huyi nazar aa rahi thi. Aur agar wo JADHAV Family mein chala bhi jata hai to usey koi importance nahi dega balki sab usko nicha hi dikhayenge. Agar aisa hua to uska Future hi kharab ho jaayega.


Atharva " kya ? "
" Mujhe ye mat bolna ki jo kal aap JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they wo jhoot thi. Mujhe aap se yeh umeed nahi thi. "


Atharva ne Sohan ko bina mauka diye hi ye sab bol diya, ab Sohan fas chuka tha wo kisi bhi tarah se naa bolke dono Family ko offend nahi karna chahta tha. Ab Sohan ko realize ho raha tha ki Atharva uske sath kitna bada Game khel raha hai. Sohan ab is position se wapis nahi aa sakta tha. Usey itna gussa aa raha tha ki wo muskil se apna killing intent sambhal paa raha tha jo Atharva ki nazaro se nahi bacha tha. Sohan ko ek baat aur sata rahi thi ki ye Useless Atharva itna smart kaise ho gaya jo usey aisi situation mein trap kar diya.


Sohan ke badlte expression dekh ke Atharva ke face pe ek evil smile thi. Kyuki Sohan, Atharva ko marna chahta tha isliye ye to bas shuruat thi.


Karamchand " Mujhe pata nahi tha brother ki apka elder son meri daughter se itna pyar karta hai, aur ye to hamari Family se marriage bhi karna chahta hai. Isliye humey jaldi se arrangement karni chahiye. Iske Baad puri Fragrant Sky City mein humare samne koi nahi aa paayega. "


Kailashnath " KYA tum apne faisle se khus ho Sohan ? "


Kailashnath ko dukh to ho raha tha ki uska adopted son doosri Family mein jaana chahta hai, lekin usne ye show nahi kiya. YADAV FAMILY ke bhut se business they Fragrant Sky City mein jinme se aadha kaam Sohan dekhta tha agar wo chala jaayega to business ka kya hoga. Lekin usey Sohan ke decision ke decision ki bhi respect karni hogi, isliye wo chup they.


Atharva " Father, wo yahi chahte hai. Mujhe ache se pata hai mere big Brother kaise hai aur wo kya soch rahe hai. Inhe aur aapko to khus hona chahiye inki wish jo puri hone jaa rahi hai. UnCle Karamchand aapko bhi mere Big Brother ki dekhbhal karni hogi kahi koi unhe nicha na dikhaye. "


Sohan apna muh kholne hi wala tha ki Atharva ne usse pehle hi badi chalaki se jawab de diya.


Karamchand " hahaha…… "
" Chinta na karo mere hote mere son-in-law ko nicha dikhane ki himmat kon karega. "


Soha gusse mein ubal raha tha, usne apni fist ko kaafi tight close kiya hua tha apne gown ke ander, uske saare plans fail ho gaye they wo bilkul fas gaya tha, ab wo chah kar bhi naa nahi kar sakta tha.


Atharva " Congratulations Uncle! Aaj ka din kaafi khusi ka hai, ab aap jaldi se apni daughter ko bulaiye taki hum sab unhe dekh sake. "


Kailashnath " Haa tumne sahi kaha Atharva, inki daughter ko aaj tak kisi ne nahi dekha hai naa hi wo kisi public place mein aati hai. Lekin ab marriage ka decision ho hi gaya hai to hum bhi aapki daughter ko dekhna chahenge brother."


Karamchand " haha…. "
" Meri beti JIYA abhi raste mein hai, wo jald hi yaha pe hogi."


Karamchand ander hi ander khus ho raha tha jaisa uska koi aur hi motive ho yaha aane ka aur ye baat Atharva se chuppi nahi thi. Jaha baaki teeno khus they wahi Soham sirf natak kar rha tha khus hone ka.


Atharva " Apki daughter ke naam se hi pata lag raha hai ki wo kitni komal aur sundar hongi, sayad wo kisi angel jaisi dikhti hongi. "


Aise hi Atharva, JIYA ki tareef kiye jaa raha tha jisse wo kabhi nahi Mila tha. Ye dekha wo ye sab bas Sohan ko tease karne ke liye kar raha tha.



"Cough! Cough!"


Atharva ki tareef sunne ke baad Karamchand ko khaasi aa gayi, uske muh se tea bhi bahar aa gayi thi jaise hi Usne Jiya ke baare mein ( sundar, komal aur angel) jaise word sune.



TO BE CONTINUED....











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