Fantasy WARGOD

[Itachi_Uchiha]

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[Ss mujrim]

UPDATE NO - 3
(JADHAV FAMILY)​

Sohan andar se kaafi khus tha lekin wo bilkul bhi ye show nahi kar raha tha, bahar se to usne sirf ek sad sa face banaya hua tha.


Atharva " Brother aap hi hai jo humari family mein mujhe sabse jyada pyaar karte hai. Main kisi se shaadi nahi karna chahta, aap mere bhai ho to aap hi kyu nahi kar lete sadi. "


Sohan " Brother aisa nahi hai ki main tumhari help nahi karna chahta, lekin me adopted son hu. Main agar marriage ke liye haa bhi kardu to Father nahi maanenge. Ye arrangement sirf tumhare liye hai. "


Sohan ne ye baat helpless face ke sath kahi thi, lekin wo ander se bhut khus tha, kyuki agar Atharva marriage ke liye mana kar deta hai to wo hi replacement hoga.


Atharva " Agar aap haa karte ho to main aapse promise karta hu ki kal aap ki hi marriage JADHAV Family ki daughter se hogi. "


" Really ? "


Sohan ne kaafi khus hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Of course. "


Sohan " Hum dono Brothers hai, isliye is baar main tumhari help kar raha hu. "


Sohan ne baat aise boli jaise ki wo Atharva ke liye koi bhut bada favour kar raha ho, lekin andar se mann hi mann wo dance kar raha tha.


Atharva " Thank you brother, kal Main hall mein aap bilkul saant rahe aur pretend kare ki aapko kuch nahi pata. Let me handle this. "


Sohan " No problem, main kal ki saari jimmedari tumhe deta hu. "


Sohan ne Atharva ka shoulder thap thapaya au apne manison ki taraf nikal gaya. Sohan yahi soch raha tha ki uska useless brother kaise uski help karega. Lekin jaisa ki usne past mein dekha hai, usey pura yakeen tha ki Atharva kuch na kuch drama jaroor karega.


" Naaki mera status YADAV Family mein badhega balki JADHAV Family mein bhi badhega. Atharva kitna pagal hai marriage request ko thukrake ke mere ko replace karne ke liye bol raha hai. Lekin usne apni Life main pehli baar koi acha kaam kiya hai. Thode din baad jab mera status dono Family mein high ho jayega to main is Atharva ko khud jaan se maar dunga."


Sohan ne yaha se nikalte hi kud se ye sub kahte hue apne true colours dikha diye they.


Wahi doosri aur Mansion me mai Moon ki taraf ek evil smile ke sath dekh raha tha.


Atharva " Messing with me, you are going to die Brother...hahahaha. "



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NEXT MORNING


Next Morning kayi log pure mansion ko decorate karne mein lage huye they. Aaj hi wo din tha engagement ka dono Families ke liye. Fragrant Sky City ki puri history mein aisa kabhi nahi hua tha jab ye dono Families sath mein aayi ho, kyuki ye dono Families ek dusre ki rivals rahi hai centuries se.


" JADHAV Family ke Head aa chuke hai."


Tabhi Guards ki ek jordaar awaaz ke sath ek bhut hi powerful person gate se Main hall ke andar aaya.


Is person ki body bi Kamalnath jaisi hi thi, ye bhi apne forties mein tha aur face se cruel aur ek cunning fox lag raha tha. Usne ek colourful silk ka gown pehna tha aur kisi Tiger ki tarah andar aa rha tha.


JADHAV Family ke Head they Karamchand. Jo ki QI HAI Realm ke peak par they, jo kabhi bhi MORTAL CORE REALM mein BREAKTHROUGH kar sakte hai bilkul Kailashnath ki tarah.


" HAHA, Mere Mansion mein aapka Welcome hai Karamchand Brother. "
" Mujhe hope hai ki aap yaha pe aane ka pura anand lenge. "


Kailashnath ne ye baat dostana tarike se kahi aur wo Karamchand ki taraf badh gaye.


Karamchand " Meri khusi ka thikana nahi hai Mayor Kailashnath, kyuki aaj dono Families ek hone wali hai. "


Halanki, Karamchand face se bhut hi sareef insaan lag raha tha, lekin Atharva ko pehli najar mein wo kisi OLD Fox ke jaise nazar aa raha tha.


Atharva ne Karamchand ke piche dekha to usey koi bhi dikhai nahi diya, iska matlab wo akela aaya tha, lekin ye ek normal baat thi. Fragrant Sky City main ab tak jitne bhi event huye usme JADHAV Family se kabhi bhi Karamchand present nahi hua tha. Uska yaha akela aana uski puri Family ko represent kar raha tha.


Sabhi log chalte huye Main hall ke andar aa gaye, Karamchand aur Kailashnath ek dusre ke saamne apni-2 chair pe baith gaye they. Sohan aur Atharva apne Father ke piche khade ho gaye they.


Karamchand " Brother Kailashnath, main sidha mudde pe aata hu, mere aane ka maksad ye hai ki meri beti ki marriage aapki Family mein ho. Yaha hum aaj Marriage ki date fix karenge."


Kailashnath " Bahut badhiya, ek baar ye marriage ho jaaye to hamari Fragrant Sky City bhi last mein nahi rahegi. "


Kailashnath piche ki aur mudda aur Atharva ko dekhte huye bola.


Kailashnath " Atharva aage aao aur apne Father-in-law se milo. "


Karamchand "Great! Tumhara beta bhut acha hai."


Karamchand ne Atharva ko compliment dete huye kaha, lekin usey andar se pata tha ki wo khaali bakwas kar raha hai, kyuki puri Fragrant Sky City ko Atharva ki bad reputation ke baare main pata hai ki wo cultivation mein useless hai aur apna adha time prostitutes mein waste karta hai.


Lekin Karamchand ko is baat ki koi fikr nahi thi. Wo jaldi se jaldi Father-in-law banna chahta tha, kai baar personal needs se jada jaroori Family needs hoti hai aur aisa hi yaha bhi tha.


Atharva " Father, lagta hai aap galat samajh rahe hai. "
" Kya ye marriage Big Brother ke liye nahi hai ? "


Kailashnath aur Karamchand dono hi ye baat sunke surprise ho gaye they. Karamchand ne apna sir Sohan ki taraf ghumaya aur usko uper se leke niche tak observe karna suru kar diya.


" Isey kehte hai ek talanted young genius. Itni is age mein ye QI JING REALM ke 9th level pe pahuch gaya gaya hai. "


Kailashnath " Atharva bakwas karna band karo. "


Kailashnath ne gussa hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Father main stupid nahi hu, meri to qualifications bhi JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke layak nahi hai. Wahi mere Big Brother itni si Age mein QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe hai, puri Fragrant Sky City mein JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karne ke liye yahi layak hai. Main to abhi chota hu aur Big Brother abhi tak inki daughter se mille nahi hai lekin ye unse marriage karne mein interested hai. "


Atharva ne confidence ke sath speech dete huye apne Big Brother ki tareef ki. Atharva ke bagal mein khada Sohan lagbhag rona chahta tha ki uska little Brother usse kitna pyar karta hai, jo ki bhut rare hai.


Karamchand " HAHAHA, Mujhe kabhi bhi nahi pata tha Brother Kailashnath ki apka bada beta meri beti se pyar karta hai."


Kailashnath jor se has raha tha, haa ye marriage dono Family ke profit ke liye thi lekin usey Atharva aur Sohan mein choose karne ka mauka mille to wo Atharva ko choose kare itna pagal nahi hai.


Kailashnath " Sohan, Aao aur apne Father-in-law se millo."


Karamchand " Congratulations! Father-in-law. "


" Haso aur khus raho, kyuki tum baad mein rowoge. "


Atharva ne ye baat apne mann mein sochi aur fir apna gala thik karte huye bolne laga.


Atharva " Mister Karamchand, mere big brother ki ek aur wish hai. "


Karamchand " Ohhh, to bolo na mere aur brother Kailashnath ke rehte koi wish impossible nahi."


Sohan confused tha usey aisa kuch bhi yaad nahi aa raha tha, isliye wo kuch bolne ko hua usse pehle Atharva hi bol pada.


Atharva " Big Brother kaafi time se JADHAV Family ko praise karte hai, agar usnki marriage JADHAV Family se ho jaati hai to unhe apni Life mein aur kuch nahi chahiye."


Atharva ne apne face pe smile ke sath ye baat kahi thi. Atharva ne jo kaha tha usey sunke Sohan ka face kala padne laga tha.


Soha " Brother, tumne abhi kya kaha ? "


Sohan ne badi hi tez awaz mein pucha.


Atharva " Aapne hi to ye kaha tha mujhse. Oohh aap khud ye bolne mein shy feel kar rahe ho. Lekin aap Tension mat lo aapki wish jaroor puri hogi. Aap apne Little Brother pe sab chod dijiye. Aap kaafi time JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they. Ye sach hai na ? "


Sohan bilkul ghabra gaya tha, haa wo bilkul JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karna chahta tha. Lekin wo unki Family mein marriage nahi karna chahta tha. Agar wo aisa karta to usey Mayor Mansion chod ke JADHAV Family mein hi rehna padta aur JADHAV Family hi uski Family ho jaati aur uska YADAV FAMILY aur Mayor Mansion se saare rishte khatam ho jaate. Uske itne years ki mehnat khatam hoti huyi nazar aa rahi thi. Aur agar wo JADHAV Family mein chala bhi jata hai to usey koi importance nahi dega balki sab usko nicha hi dikhayenge. Agar aisa hua to uska Future hi kharab ho jaayega.


Atharva " kya ? "
" Mujhe ye mat bolna ki jo kal aap JADHAV Family ki tareef kar rahe they wo jhoot thi. Mujhe aap se yeh umeed nahi thi. "


Atharva ne Sohan ko bina mauka diye hi ye sab bol diya, ab Sohan fas chuka tha wo kisi bhi tarah se naa bolke dono Family ko offend nahi karna chahta tha. Ab Sohan ko realize ho raha tha ki Atharva uske sath kitna bada Game khel raha hai. Sohan ab is position se wapis nahi aa sakta tha. Usey itna gussa aa raha tha ki wo muskil se apna killing intent sambhal paa raha tha jo Atharva ki nazaro se nahi bacha tha. Sohan ko ek baat aur sata rahi thi ki ye Useless Atharva itna smart kaise ho gaya jo usey aisi situation mein trap kar diya.


Sohan ke badlte expression dekh ke Atharva ke face pe ek evil smile thi. Kyuki Sohan, Atharva ko marna chahta tha isliye ye to bas shuruat thi.


Karamchand " Mujhe pata nahi tha brother ki apka elder son meri daughter se itna pyar karta hai, aur ye to hamari Family se marriage bhi karna chahta hai. Isliye humey jaldi se arrangement karni chahiye. Iske Baad puri Fragrant Sky City mein humare samne koi nahi aa paayega. "


Kailashnath " KYA tum apne faisle se khus ho Sohan ? "


Kailashnath ko dukh to ho raha tha ki uska adopted son doosri Family mein jaana chahta hai, lekin usne ye show nahi kiya. YADAV FAMILY ke bhut se business they Fragrant Sky City mein jinme se aadha kaam Sohan dekhta tha agar wo chala jaayega to business ka kya hoga. Lekin usey Sohan ke decision ke decision ki bhi respect karni hogi, isliye wo chup they.


Atharva " Father, wo yahi chahte hai. Mujhe ache se pata hai mere big Brother kaise hai aur wo kya soch rahe hai. Inhe aur aapko to khus hona chahiye inki wish jo puri hone jaa rahi hai. UnCle Karamchand aapko bhi mere Big Brother ki dekhbhal karni hogi kahi koi unhe nicha na dikhaye. "


Sohan apna muh kholne hi wala tha ki Atharva ne usse pehle hi badi chalaki se jawab de diya.


Karamchand " hahaha…… "
" Chinta na karo mere hote mere son-in-law ko nicha dikhane ki himmat kon karega. "


Soha gusse mein ubal raha tha, usne apni fist ko kaafi tight close kiya hua tha apne gown ke ander, uske saare plans fail ho gaye they wo bilkul fas gaya tha, ab wo chah kar bhi naa nahi kar sakta tha.


Atharva " Congratulations Uncle! Aaj ka din kaafi khusi ka hai, ab aap jaldi se apni daughter ko bulaiye taki hum sab unhe dekh sake. "


Kailashnath " Haa tumne sahi kaha Atharva, inki daughter ko aaj tak kisi ne nahi dekha hai naa hi wo kisi public place mein aati hai. Lekin ab marriage ka decision ho hi gaya hai to hum bhi aapki daughter ko dekhna chahenge brother."


Karamchand " haha…. "
" Meri beti JIYA abhi raste mein hai, wo jald hi yaha pe hogi."


Karamchand ander hi ander khus ho raha tha jaisa uska koi aur hi motive ho yaha aane ka aur ye baat Atharva se chuppi nahi thi. Jaha baaki teeno khus they wahi Soham sirf natak kar rha tha khus hone ka.


Atharva " Apki daughter ke naam se hi pata lag raha hai ki wo kitni komal aur sundar hongi, sayad wo kisi angel jaisi dikhti hongi. "


Aise hi Atharva, JIYA ki tareef kiye jaa raha tha jisse wo kabhi nahi Mila tha. Ye dekha wo ye sab bas Sohan ko tease karne ke liye kar raha tha.


"Cough! Cough!"


Atharva ki tareef sunne ke baad Karamchand ko khaasi aa gayi, uske muh se tea bhi bahar aa gayi thi jaise hi Usne Jiya ke baare mein ( sundar, komal aur angel) jaise word sune.



TO BE CONTINUED....











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Haye pata nii Jiya kise Daktii ho gai
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[Ss mujrim]

UPDATE NO - 04
( The Mighty Dragon Transformation Skill )​

Sohan is time bhut gusse mein tha, wo abhi ke abhi Atharva ko maarna chahta tha. Sohan, Kailashnath, Karamchand ko aaj Atharva ne bewkoof bana diya tha. Keval ek cheez Sohan ko samajh nahi aa rahi thi ki ye useless itna smart kaise ho gaya hai.


Lekin ab kuch bhi badlne ya karne mein bhut der ho chuki thi ab to Sohan bas ek hi umeed rakh sakta ki Jiya ek beautiful aur gentle ladki ho. Agar aisa hua to fir uska mood kuch hadd tak thik ho sakta hai.


Kuch time baad purple dress mein ek ladki andar chalte huye aayi, jiske piche 2 JADHAV Family ke Guards they. Jab Karamchand, Kailashnath aur Atharva ne us ladki ki taraf dekha jo unki taraf hi aa rahi thi to unki face ki smile chali gayi.


Bang!


Kailashnath jis glass se drink kar raha tha wo uske hath se chhut ke niche gir gaya. Jo usne dekha wo uske liye bhi shocking tha. Kailashnath jor se khaasne laga. Jo ladki uske saamne khadi thi wo 8 feet tall thi. Aur wo apne Father ki tarah hi bhut jada mascular thi. Aur itna hi nahi wo kisi strong Man ki tarah dikh rahi thi, jiska weight kam se kam 300 pound ho.


" Mascular body hona fir bhi chal jaata hai lekin isne apne hair ko sky ki taraf kyu baandh rakha hai. Aur ye face bilkul oily hai, aur iski skin bhi kitni moti aur rough hai, aur iske Lips bhi kitne mote aur bade hai. Yukkkk! "


Atharva apne dimag mein hi vomit kar raha tha. Wo beshak past life mein ek Greatest Saint tha aur usne almost sab kuch dekha tha, lekin itni ugly ladki usne Kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Haa ye Saint Origin ki sabse Ugly ladki thi, Atharva ke opinion mein aur iska naam Jiya tha, jo sabse bada joke tha.


Atharva ka face bilkul red chuka tha, usko apni hasi rokne mein kaafi dikkat ho rahi thi. Lekin apne mann hi mann mein wo bhut tez has raha tha.


" Sohan, This is karma. "


Atharva mann hi mann Karamchand ki tareef kar raha tha kaise usne apne saare genes apni beti ko de diye the aur uska naam bhi JIYA rakh diya tha aur jo uske body se bikul bhi match nahi ho raha tha.


Kailashnath " Jaldi se miss JIYA ko unki seat pe baithao. "


Kailashnath ne apne shocking expression ko dabate huye kaha. Jo Kailashnath abhi tak thoda dukhi tha wo ab khus tha ki sahi hua jo is ladki shaadi karne wala Atharva nahi hai aur ye bhi achi baat thi ki Sohan JADHAV Family mein marriage kar raha tha iski wajah se is ladki ko Mayor Mansion mein nahi rehna hoga. Mann hi mann Kailashnath, Atharva ko Thanks bol raha tha.


Karamchand " hahaha, JIYA jaldi idhar aao aur apne Future Husband se milo. "


JIYA jaldi se chalti huyi aayi aur Sohan ke saamne khadi ho gayi, Sohan ko dekhte hi JIYA ki aanke chamakne lagi kyuki Sohan Fragrant Sky City ke geniuses mein ek tha aur handsome to tha hi. JIYA ne jaldi se Sohan ke arm ko tightly pakad liya aur boli.


JIYA " Dear Husband, Main Mayor Mansion mein pehli baar aayi hu kya aap mujhe Mansion dikha denge. "


Atharva ke muh se almost blood nikalne ko ho gaya tha. Usey aisa lag raha tha ki uske internal organs bhi bahar aa jaayenge 'miss JIYA' ki soft awaz sunke jo kisi Animal ke dhadane jaisi thi. JIYA ki awaz sunke Atharva ko apni spine mein coldness feel hone lagi thi. Lekin wo bhut jada enjoy kar raha tha is moment ko.


" Kisey pata Sohan apne mann mein kya soch raha hoga, mere hisab se to wo bas soch raha hoga ki kisi bhi tarah se Death ho jaaye uski. "


Kailashnath " Jaao Sohan jaake JIYA ko Mansion dikha do. "


Sohan " Yes Father ! "


Sohan ki awaz is time kaamp rahi thi, Main hall mein majood har koi yeh dekh sakta uske face bilkul red ho chuka tha lekin QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe hone ke baad bhi JYA usey khichte huye Main hall se bahar le gayi.


Atharva " Father, Uncle, mujhe lagta hai humey jaldi se marriage ki date fix kar leni chahiye. "


Karamchand " Thik hai kal ki Date main hum Marriage kar lenge. "


Sohan jo waha se abhi nikla hi tha ki ye sunne ke baad to uska Heart uske Muh se bahar nikalne ko ho gaya tha.


Atharva " Uncle aap sahi keh rahe hai aise khusi ke mauke ke liye jyada din rukna nahi chahiye. Chalo aap log baate kijiye main bhi chalta hu. "


Atharva ki back ko dekhte huye Kailashnath soch mein pad gya tha ki Atharva kyu Sohan ko Frame karna chahta hai.
Kailashnath itna to intelligent tha ki wo Atharva ki baato se matter samajh gaya tha lekin usey reason pata nahi tha iske piche ka. Kyuki Dono Brothers ke bich ka relationship abhi tak bhut acha tha. Aur sabse jyada chaukane wali baat ye thi ki Atharva usey bilkul different person lag raha tha.


Atharva Mansion se nikal ke sidha apne Mansion mein aa gaya tha. Atharva ko pata tha ki ye badla Sohan ke liye kaafi nahi hai wo to usey Jaan se maarna chahta tha aur past Life mein ek Greatest Saint hone ki wajah se Atharva apne kisi bhi enemy ko second Chance nahi deta tha. Jo uska enemy hai usey sirf Death hi milegi aur kuch nahi.


Lekin abhi jo sabse important kaam tha wo thi Training. Saint Origin mein jo Strong hai wo Great hai aap kahi bhi chale jaao , log aapko Admire karenge chaahe aap kaise bhi ho bas strong hone chahiye. Past Life mein Atharva ek Great Saint tha lekin abhi wo sirf ek weakling tha jo ki sirf QI JING REALM ke 8th level pe tha.


Atharva apne room mein pahuch ke apne bed pe leg cross karke baith gaya.


Cultivation ke path pe sabse jada jaroori cheez thi skill. Jitna Higher Level hoga Skill utna hi aapki achievement high hogi aapki.


Apni past Life mein ek Greatest Saint hone ki wajah se Atharva ke paas Filhal 1000 se bhi jyada skill thi aur sabhi ke sabhi high level ki thi, 30% skill to aisi thi jisey wo HEAVENLY CORE REALM mein BREAKTHROUGH karne ke baad bhi use nahi kar sakta tha. Agar Atharva apne paas se sabse low level ki skill bhi nikal ke dikha de to puri Fragrant Sky City ke people us skill ke liye mar mitenge.


Saint Origin Universe mein Skill Four categories mein divide hoti hai :- Mortal ,Earth, Heaven, Saint. Aur Atharva ke paas abhi 5 Skill thi Jo Saint Category ki thi. Yaha tak ki Divine Continent ke Big Ancient Clans ke pass bhi Aisi Skills nahi hongi.


Lekin Atharva ne decide kar liya tha ki wo in 5 mein se koi bhi Skill Cultivate nahi karega, apni past life mein bhi usne in 5 Skills ki taraf dekha bhi nahi tha.


Is cheez ka ek hi reason tha " The Dragon Transformation Skill. "


Atharva ko ye Skill apni past Life mein kisi Ancient ruins se milli thi. Ye Skill Ancient times se Belong karti hai aur almost 10000 years old hai.


Atharva ke hisaab se The Dragon Transformation Skill ka potential Saint Category se bhut upper hai.


Lekin is Skill ko use karne ki ek bhut hi badi condition hai. Wo ye hai ki is Skill ko beginning se Practice karna padta hai. Jab Atharva ko ye Skill past Life mein mill thi tab wo isko Practice nahi kar paaya tha kyuki is skill ko Practice karne ke liye usey apna Saint cultivation destroy karke QI JING REALM se start karna padta. Beshak Past Life mein AK ka Heart as a Saint kitna hi hard ho lekin apna cultivation destroy karne jitna bhi nahi tha. Uski past Life ka doosra sabse bada regret yahi tha ki wo is Skill ko Cultivate nahi kar paaya tha lekin ab baat kuch aur thi. Ab doobara reborn hone ki wajah se Uska current Realm QI JING tha aur wo is opportunity ko waste nahi hone dene wala tha.


Abhi tak Atharva ki QI Sea aur Mortal Core form nahi huye they to ye best time tha The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate karne ka.


Atharva ne Dragon Transformation Skill ki script ko yaad kiya aur uske single thought se saari script uske dimag mein chalne lag gayi.


The Dragon Transformation Skill bhut powerful thi. Script ke according is Skill ko practice karne ke baad aap Saint Origin ki kisi bloodline se merge ho sakte ho. Aur aisa nahi hai ki aap sirf ek bloodline se merge ho sakte ho app chahe to 10,000 bloodline se bhi merge ho sakte ho aur un bloodline ki ability bhi aapke sath merge ho jaayegi. aur bas itna soch ki Atharva ke face pe ek smile aa gayi thi.


Jo The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karte hai unki DANTIAN mein Dragon mark banne lagte hai. Ek dragon mark user ke punch ki strength 10,000 Pound tak badha deta hai. Dragon marks ka maximum number 108,000 hai, isse jada Dragon Marks aap form nahi kar sakte.


Script ke According agar ek baar Dragon Mark bann gaya to wo puri life mein kabhi gayab nahi hoga. Aur agar 108,000 marks ban gaye to user apne will se Dragon mein Transform ho sakta hai wo bhi Dragon ki puri ability ke sath.


Ek Dragon Mark 10,000 pound strength badhata hai agar 108,000 Dragon marks Complete ho jaate hai to aapki strength kitni hogi ye koi imagine bhi nahi kar sakta, yaha tak Saint Realm ke Warrior bhi aapke koi Match nahi honge. Ye sab soch ke hi Atharva ko apni body mein Cold mehsoos hone laga tha aur wo bhut jada excited ho gaya tha. Agar Atharva is Life mein is level pe pahuch jaata hai to wo Ek Strike mein Saint Origin Universe ko destroy kar sakta hai.


The Dragon Transformation Skill Body ko bhi bhut effective way mein refine karti hai aur end tak aate aate user ki body ki Dragon ki Body jitni Tough ho jaati hai. Atharva ki body mein beshak bhut saari PILLS thi lekin Un sabko refine karne ke baad bhi Atharva ki body abhi bhut jyada weak thi. Atharva abhi thoda unsure tha ki kahi uski body Dragon Transformation Skill ko sehen na kar paaye.


Lekin apni past Life mein ek Greatest Saint tha to uska will kisi mountain se bhi jada bada tha usne saare thoughts ko apne mind se nikala aur Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga. Jaise hi usne Cultivation start kiya waise hi usey apni body mein Yuan Power flow hoti huyi feel hone lagi.


Atharva ne control apne hath mein lete huye apni body ke ander 2 region create kare, first region mein usne Yuan Energy ko clockwise direction mein flow karwaya aur second region mein usne Yuan Energy ko anti- clockwise direction mein flow karwaya.


Uske aisa karte hi uski body kisi machine ki tarah kaam karne lagi ek frightening speed aur bina pause ke.


Pong!


Dono separate region full speed se ek dusre ke sath collide ho gaye, aur aisa hote hi dono different force ki wajah se ek Whirlpool create ho gaya aur wo Atharva ke poori body mein failne laga.


Ughh!


Is impact ki wajah se Atharva ke mouth se Blood nikalne laga, sath hi uski puri body mein pain hone laga jaise wo kisi hellfire mein baitha ho. Jo uske mouth se blood nikal raha tha uska colour black tha. Ye sab impurities thi uski body ke ander ki jo Dragon Transformation Skill ki wajah se ekdum se bahar aane lagi thi.


Atharva " Dragon Transformation Skill sach mein bhut powerful hai abhi to ye first step hi hai aur ye hi mujhe itna pain de raha hai. Lekin ye mujhe manjoor hai effect ko dekhte huye. Meri body ki saari impurities lagbhag bahar aa gayi hai. Let's continue. "


Apni past life mein Saint hone ki wajah se uska will bhut strong tha to usko ye pain sehen karne mein koi takleef nahi thi aur Saint hone ki wajah se uske paas Cultivation ka bhut jada expérience tha jo ab uske bhut kaam aa raha tha.


Dragon Transformation Skill Atharva ke mind mein flow ho rahi thi, aur Cultivation ki wajah se usey bhut pain ho raha tha jo uske liye kuch bhi nahi tha.


4 Hours Later!


Crack!


Ek clear Crack ki sound Atharva ki body se suni jaa sakti thi. Jo Whirlpool tha wo Atharva ki poori body mein Refine ho gaya tha aur Atharva QI JING REALM ke 9th Level mein Breakthrough kar gaya tha.




TO BE CONTINUED....




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UPDATE NO - 05
Let's Calculate Our Debt​

Yaha tak ki Atharva ne bhi nahi soch tha ki The Dragon Transformation Skill itni strong hogi. Sirf 4 hours cultivate karne se hi wo QI JING REALM ke 9th Level pe pahuch gaya tha.


Sath hi sath uski Yuan Energy badhne ki wajah se uski body bhi strong ho gayi thi aur isliye Atharva ki strength aur Defense mein kaafi fark pada tha.


The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karte time ek baar firse 2 whirlpool ek doosre ke opposite create ho gaye they. Dono whirlpool Atharva ki body mein flow hote huye uski DANTIAN mein enter kar gaye aur ek Red Colour ka Dragon Mark form karne lage.


Waise abhi jo Mark form hua tha wo abhi bhut fika tha ek dum bright Red hone se kaafi dur tha. Atharva ki single thought se Red Dragon Mark bhut jor se shake hone laga.


HAA!


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye hawa mein ek bhut fast punch maara, punch ka pressure itna tha ki Air mein bhi friction hone lagi thi aur fir ek dum se BOOM ke sound ke sath samne ki Wall crack ho gayi.


"Good, mere punch ki power abhi 5000 pound thi, halanki abhi first Red Dragon Mark half complete hua hai. Ek baar Red Dragon Mark complete ho jaaye to mere har punch ke pich 10,000 pound ka force hoga. QI JING REALM 9th Level ke ordinary cultivators ke punch mein 3000 pound force hota hai, aur Genius hote hai unke punch ke piche 4000 pound hota hai. Lekin The Dragon Transformation Skill se mein sirf Half Red Dragon Mark ke hote huye bhi 5000 pound ke punch throw kar sakta hu. Incredible!"



{ Writer Note:- jo bhi punches aur uske force ki baat huyi hai wo sirf ek mark ki jaise jaise mark badhte jaayenge force badhta hai jaayega.}



Ek lambi saans lete huye Atharva ne Cultivate karna rok Diya. Usey Cultivation ke baare mein is world mein sabse jyada Knowledge thi, aur usey ache se pata tha ki Foundatain ko Strong karna kitna Important hai. Usko sab kuch step by step karna hoga bina ek dum se aage badhe. Usne abhi The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate karna start ki hai aur usey half Red Dragon Mark mil gaya hai aur wo is result se abhi ke liye khus hai. Kyuki Fragrant Sky City kuch bhi nahi hai.

Aapko bata du ki :-

{ SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein 5 Continent hai.
1. Northern Continent.
2. Southern Continent.
3. Western Continent.
4. Easter Continent.
5. Divine Continent.

Jisme sabse strong Divine Continent hai jisme Pichli Life mein Atharva ek Saint tha aur wo issi Continent se tha. Sabse Weak Eastern Continent hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
Eastern Continent mein 30 provine hai jisme sabse Strong Martial Saint Dynasty hai Aur Sabse weak QI Province hai jisme Filhal Atharva hai.
QI Province ke baare mein aage detail mil jaayegi Proper.

QI Province ka outer part hai jaha QI Province ke Log bhi dhyan nahi dete waha pe 28 City hai. Isme sabse Strong hai Red City aur sabse Weak hai Fragrant Sky City jisme filhal Atharva hai. }


Ek warrior ko Cultivate karne ke Liye PILLS, POTIONS, ELIXIRS ki jaroorat padti hai. The Dragon Transformation Skill ko practice karne ki liye ko Sabse jada jaroorat padegi kyuki Ye skill kisi bhi Bloodline kisi bhi Soul ko Absorb kar sakti hai. World Mein bhut saare Demon Beast hai, jinme se kaafi kam Rare Bloodline ke hote hai aur kuch to Ancient Time ke Rare Beast bhi hote hai, agar kisi rare Bloodline ke Demon Beast ki Soul ko Absorb karta hai to The Dragon Transformation Skill ki Wajah se usey use Beast ki Ability bhi millegi.


"Main 100 years se Dead tha is time mein bhut kuch badal gaya hoga. Agar meri Memory sahi hai to Fragrant Sky City Sabse small City hai QI Province ki, pata nahi Divine Continent yaha se kitni dur hoga. Past life mein The GREATEST SAINT hone ki wajah se maine kabhi is Small Eastern Continent pe dhyan nahi diya tha kyuki Meri aankho mein ye kuch bhi nahi tha."


Atharva apne Mansion se Nikal ke apne Father ke Mansion mein aa gaya aur sidha unke Room mein bani Library mein ghus gaya. Yaha pe kisi ko aane ki izzazt nahi thi yaha tak ki Sohan bhi bina permission ke enter nahi kar sakta tha lekin Atharva ki baat alag thi wo Mayor ka eklauta beta tha to wo pure Mayor Mansion mein kabhi bhi kahi bhi jaa sakta tha.


Atharva ne waha pe rakhi Martial Arts Skill ki books ko dekha bhi nahi kyuki usey pata is universe ki sabse small city mein Trash hi millega. Isliye wo sidha ek book ki taraf badh gaya jiska naam tha "History of Saint Origin"


Is Book mein saare History events se they Pure Saint Origin ke aur saari geographical condition.
Atharva ne jaisa hi first Chapter khola uske Face pe smile aa gayi. kyuki jo first Chapter tha wo Ek Greatest Saint ke baare mein tha jisne Apni Big Sword ki Ek Strike mein Heaven ko kaatte huye Immortal Realm ke Gate khol diye they 100 years pehle. Unfortunately wo Greatest Saint us din usi SAINT CLIFF pe khatam ho gaya.


100 year pehle Atharva ne apni Saint Blood ki last drop ko Use karte huye Immortal Realm ke gate khol diye aur wo iske backlash se wahi khatam ho gaya tha. Uske baad kya hua usey kuch nahi pata. Usne aisa isliye kiya tha kyuki Saint Origin Universe mein koi bhi person Saint Realm ke aage Cultivate nahi kar paata lekin Atharva ko pata tha ki Saint Realm ke baad bhi Realm hai jo is Universe mein possible nahi hai, isliye usne apni saari strenght ko use karke doosre Universe ka Gate khol diya tha Jiska naam hai Immortal Origin Universe ya Immortal Realm jisme Immortals rehte hai.


History ke according us event ke baad bhut kuch badal gaya tha. Jab Atharva ne Immortal Realm ke Gate khole to Jo baaki ke Saint they jo Atharva ko aisa karte dekh rahe they wo Atharva ki Death ke baad Gate se Us Realm mein enter kar gaye. Aur aisa hone se is Universe mein ek bhi Saint nahi bacha aur Saints ki protection hatne ke baad is Universe mein. Monsters, Beasts, Devils, Demon har jagah badh gaye they. Aur jo Clan Saint ki protection aur management they unme War start ho gayi thi aur uski Wajah se kayi Ancient Clan completely Wipe Out ho gaye they Aur New Clan ban gaye they.


Ek Smile ke Sath Atharva ne Book band kar di Usey pata tha wo is life mein ek baar firse Divine Continent mein apne kadam rakhega aur Fir Apne past Records ko todte huye Immortal Realm mein chala jaayega aur aisa hone ke liye abhi bhut lamba time tha kyuki abhi wo ek weakling tha aur uski age bhi abhi 16 years hi thi, uske paas puri life thi suru se start karne mein. Atharva ki life ka sabse bada regret tha ki wo immortal Realm mein enter nahi kar paya.


Library se nikalne ke Time Raat ho chuki aur Atharva apne Mansion ki Opposite direction mein jaa raha tha kyuki usey kisi se milna tha.


Atharva ko pata tha ki Sohan na to Jiya se Shaadi karega aur na hi JADHAV Family mein. Atharva confident tha kyuki wo bhi ek Man tha Sohan ki tarah. Ye bhut simple tha Jiya se shaadi karne se acha Sohan suicide kar lega.


Kal Wedding Ceremony hai aur agar Atharva ka guess correct hai to Sohan aaj ki raat hi usko maarne aayega.


Sohan ke jaisa person jiska Hard Work destroy ho gaya ho wo itni asaani se jaane nahi dega. Wo Atharva se nafrat karta tha, sirf Atharva se hi nahi balki Mayor Mansion ke har member se Nafrat karta tha. Uske Talent ko dekhke wo Is City ko Chod bhi dega to wo ek achi life ji sakta tha.


Lekin Atharva apne kisi bhi enemy ko bhaagne ka, surrender ka aur maaf karne ka mauka nahi deta. Kyuki usey pata hai baad wo hi enemy strength gain karke wapis Revenge lene aa sakta hai. Aur jis Path pe Atharva jaane wala hai uspe uske Countless enemy honge aur wo ek ko bhi jinda chodne ka risk nahi lega.


Sohan ne is time ek black outfit pehna hua tha aur moon ki taraf dekh raha tha uski eyes bilkul snake jaisi lag rahi thi jo strike karne ke liye kabhi bhi taiyar ho.


"Atharva tumne mere saare plan waste kar diye, aaj tumhe maarke yaha se nikal jaaunga aur strong hone ke baad is Mayor ko bhi maar dunga aur JADHAV FAMILY ko bhi destroy kar dunga."


Sohan ne apni fist ko tight karte huye ye baat sochi. Lekin koi aur tha jo usey itni asani se nahi jaane dega.


Atharva " Hey Brother, apne aisi dress kyu pehen rakhi hai jaise aap kahi bahar jaane wale ho. Kal aapki wedding Ceremony hai aapko rest lena chahiye. "


Jaise hi Sohan ki nazar Atharva pe padi wo ek dum gusse mein aa gaya uska killing intent bhi nikalne laga tha uski body se.


Sohan " Atharva tumne aaj mujhe kyu fasaya. "


Sohan ne ye baat ghuraate huye boli. Yard ke bahar ek aur Aadmi tha jo in dono ki baate sun raha tha. Wo aur koi nahi balki Kailashnath tha jo Sohan se baat karne aaya tha lekin inki baate sunke wahi ruk gaya aur apni presence hide kar li.


Atharva " Aapko kyu fasaunga main? Mujhe to laga JADHAV Family mein shaadi karna aapka sapna tha. Jiya ki body to dekho mujhe pata hai future mein aapko kamane ki jaroorat nahi padegi. Aapko to mujhe Thanks kehna chahiye. "


Sohan " Enough, us ladki ka mere samne naam mat lo, tumne kal bas mujhe replace hone ke liye kaha tha JADHAV FAMILY mein marriage ki baat kaha se aa gayi thi. Atharva maine tumse abhi tak pyaar hi kiya hai agar tum mujhe bhagana chahte ho to saaf saaf bata do ye gande method use karna chod do."


Sohan ki aankho mein Atharva ke liye Hatred chupaye nahi chup rahi thi.


Atharva " Mujhse pyaar karte ho, chalo tumhe expose karte aur apna score settle karte hai. "


Atharva ne apne Father ko pehle hi sense kar liya tha bahar jo ki Sohan nahi kar paaya tha kyuki uski sense Atharva se bhut weak hai ya ye kahu Atharva ki senses kaafi jada strong hai. Atharva ne apna attitude badalte huye Sohan ko expose karne ki sochi taaki wo yaha se bhaag na paaye aur usko opportunity bhi mil jaaye Sohan ko maarne ki.


Atharva " Mujhe ye batao tumne hi Yuan aur Shuang ko mujhe deserted area mein le jaane ke liye aur mujhe maarke mera blood pine ke liye kaha tha ?
Mere marne ke baad tum hi ho jo legally YADAV Family ko Heir ban jaoge. Isi liye tum mujhse pyaar se paish aate they? Kya maine kuch galat kaha My Dear Brother. "


Atharva ne ek Cruel look ke sath Sohan ko dekhte huye ye baat kahi. Wahi Kailashnath shock ho gaye they to jo Atharva ne kaha usey sunkar lekin wo fir bhi bahar hi khade rahe kyuki wo aur Sunna chahte they...





TO BE CONTINUED....


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UPDATE NO - 06
INSULTING​

Sohan ab puri baat samajh gaya tha ki Atharva usey kyu fasana chahta hai, lekin usey ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye useless fool itna Clever kaise ho gaya hai.


Atharva " Yong aur Shuang dono hamari Family ke servent they unme itni himmat nahi thi ki wo akele hi Mayor ke son ko kidnap kar sake aur poor hone ki wajah se wo kahi se bhi CLEANSING PILL nahi la sakte they. "
" Sohan kyuki tum JADHAV Family ki daughter se marriage karna chahte they to main to wo hi karwa raha hu, lekin Jiya ko dekhke to mujhe bhi ab tumhare liye khusi ho rahi hai. Agar tum chup-chap JADHAV Family mein Marriage kar lete ho to main kisi ko ye nahi bataunga ki tumne mujhe maarne ki kosis ki hai. Tumhari ye halat dekhna tumhe maarne se jyada behtar hai. Lekin kitni buri baat hai ki tum yaha se bhagna chahte ho jo main hone nahi dunga. "


Sirf Sohan ne hi Atharva ke andar ye change mehsoos nahi kiye they bahar khade Kailashnath ko bhi surprise ho raha tha, usey aisa lag raha tha jaise wo pehli baar Atharva se mil raha ho. Kailashnath ne apne sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki Atharva itna Smart hoga aur aise plan bhi bana sakega.

Hahahaha…..

Sohan haste hue " Atharva mujhe tumhe aise dekhke sach mein surprise hua hu, maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum itne smart hoge, lekin tumne fir bhi ek stupid mistake kar di. "


Sohan ne apna apna killing intent release karte huye bola.


Atharva " Stupid mistake, kaisi stupid mistake ? "


Atharva apne kandhe hillate huye bola.


Sohan " Tum sach mein stupid ho, tumhe pata tha main aaj yaha se bhagne wala hu lekin fir bhi tum yaha akele aa gaye. Tum QI JING REALM ke 1st level pe hone ke baad bhut jaldi marna chahte ho. Ab main yaha se jaa hi raha hu to tumhe maarke hi jaaunga aur uske baad QI Province ke kisi big Sect ko join karne ke baad waapis aake us Old Man ko bhi maar dunga."


Sohan ne Atharva ko nicha dikhate huye kaha. Uske dimag mein Atharva kisi Ant se kam nahi tha jisey wo kabhi masal sakta hai.


Kailashnath " Shit. "


Kailashnath ne Apne mann mein ye bolte huye abhi andar enter karne ki sochi lekin wo Atharva ke word sun ke wahi ruk gaya.


Atharva " Tum mujhe nahi maar sakte. "


Sohan " Really, tum mere yard mein khade ho aur sirf QI JING REALM ke 1st level pe ho, Agar Kailashnath bhi yaha hota to wo bhi tumhe nahi bacha sakta. "


Sohan ne jor se haste huye ye baat kahi, usey Atharva ko maarne mein pura confidence tha.


Atharva " I am sorry, lekin mein QI JING Realm ke 1st nahi 9th level pe hu. "


Atharva ne ye bolte huye apni QI release kar di. Uski Body se itni jyada Force se Yuan Power release huyi ki usne Sohan ko bhi 3 step piche hone pe majboor kar diya.


" What "


Sohan kaafi shock ho gaya tha, wo Atharva ko aise dekh raha tha jaise wo koi ghost ho. Usne kabhi apne dream mein bhi ye nahi socha tha.


Bahar khada Kailashnath bhi kaafi shock ho gaya tha Atharva ki is transformation ko dekhke, lekin ek Father hone ki wajah se wo bhut jayda khus bhi they.


" Thank God, mera beta koi useless scumbag nahi hai. Lekin Damm it ye meri naak ke niche ye sab chuppa kaise raha tha ? "


Kailashnath ne khus hote huye khud se hi bola. Useless uske heart mein ek bhut bada wound tha. Lekin ab Atharva ne bilkul opposite QI JING REALM ke 9th level mein Breakthrough karke wo bhi sirf 16 ki Age mein ye proof de diya tha ki wo ek Genius hai, aisa abhi tak Fragrant Sky City mein kisi ne nahi kiya tha. Sohan bhi is level pe 16 ki Age mein pahucha tha. Aur Atharva jis tarah se wo Sohan ko handle kar raha hai aise koi bhi 16 ki Age ka ladka nahi kar sakta.


Sohan " Impossible, aisa nahi ho sakta, tum 3 din pehle sirf 1st Level pe they. Ye mat kehna ki tum abhi tak apni true strength hide karke rakhe huye they. Agar aisa hai bhi to 9th level ka person itni jyada yuan power nahi rakhta. "


Atharva " Is world mein aisi bhut si things hai jinhe tum bilkul nahi samajh sakte. Sohan tumhara ek bhut acha future ho sakta tha lekin tumne sab barbaad kar diya. Let's end this. "


Itna bolte hi Atharva lighting speed se move hua aur ek dum se Sohan ke samne aa gaya, wo bilkul bhi risk nahi lena chahta tha kyuki usne abhi tak ek bhi Combat Skill practice nahi ki thi. Atharva ne Sohan ke saamne aate hi lighting speed se apne right hand mein apni Yuan Energy mein flow karwake usey kisi sword ki tarah sharp kar diya aur usi speed se right hand kisi sword ki tarah Sohan ki neck ki taraf move ho gaya. Atharva ki speed itni fast tak thi ki Sohan ko ek finger move karne ka bhi time nahi tha.


" Stop. "


Kailashnath jor se chillate huye door ko tod ke andar enter ho gaya.


Snap!


Unfortunately, wo bhi Atharva ki movements se slow tha jab tak wo Atharva ko rokta tab tak Atharva ke right hand ne kisi sword ki tarah Sohan ka head uski bodi se alag kar diya tha. Sohan ki aankhe marne ke baad bhi shock mein thi aur uski body bhi kuch second tak wahi khadi rahi aur fir ekdum se nich gir gayi. Blood kisi fountain ki Tarah nikal raha tha.


Kailashnath " Atharva tumne usey kyu maar diya ? "


Dead body ko dekhte huye Kailashnath shock mein tha, Atharva ne same level pe hone ke bawjood Sohan ko ek strike mein khatam kar diya tha wo bhi bina kisi skill ko use kiye.


Atharva " Father kya aap iske marne se khus nahi ho. Agar main abhi isey nahi maarta to ye baad mein badi threat banke revenge lene aa jaata. Main apne enemy ko koi chance nahi deta. "


Kailashnath " Maine isko adopt karke galti kardi. Isne tumhe maarne ki kosis ki to of course tum usey maar sakte ho. Lekin ab ye mar gaya hai to JADHAV Family mein Marriage kon karega. Hamari families ke relations pehle hi kharab they ab aur ho jaayenge. "


Atharva " Father aap itne bhi pagal mat bano aap ko bhi pata hai ek Mountain mein 2 tiger nahi reh sakte.
Aisa koi raasta nahi hai jisse hamari Family aur JADHAV Family ek sath reh sake aur wo JADHAV Family ka chief humey kabhi bhi khud ke barabar nahi samjhega. Usne aaj hamari din mein insult ki hai. Hum unke sath acha kyu kare ? "


" Insult ki hai ? "


Kailashnath ne confuse hote huye kaha.


Atharva " Father aap us Karamchand ke innocent face se pagal mat bano wo real mein old fox hai. Yaha tak ki aaj Jiya ka aana bhi aaj hamari insult hai. "
" Hamari Family is City ki sabse Strong Family hai aur agar humne us Jiya se Marriage kar li to hum sabke samne laughing stock ban jaayenge. Humari family ki reputation bhi kam ho jaayegi aur agar Sohan, JADHAV Family mein marriage kar leta to aur bhi bura hota."


Atharva ne bolna jaari raka.


Atharva " Wo ugly Girl sirf hamari insult karne ke liye hi laayi gayi thi, mujhe to yakeen hai wo GYAN ki daughter bhi nahi hai. JADHAV Family ek reputed Family hai hamari tarah agar GYAN ki koi Ugly daughter hoti to ab tak puri City mein baat fail gayi hoti. Is baat se fark nahi padta ko Jiya marriage karke yaha aaye ya Sohan marriage karke JADHAV Family mein jaaye, insult to hamari hi hoti. "


Ab Kailashnath ko bhi sab kuch samajh mein aa raha tha, wo to bas dono Families ke relations ko thik karna chahta tha, lekin kam Knowledge hone ke wajah se wo khud ki hi Insult karwa leta.


Ek Mountain pe 2 Tiger kabhi bhi ek sath rule nahi kar sakte isi tarah YADAV Family aur JADHAV Family bhi ek sath nahi reh sakti.


Kailashnath " Atharva beta tum itna Clever kab se ho gaye ? "


Atharva " Father mein kabhi stupid nahi tha. "


Kailashnath " Aur tum ne suddenly 9th Level mein Breakthrough kaise kar liya ? "


Kailashnath ne shock hote huye pucha, is baat pe Atharva ko bhi Smile aa Gayi usey pata tha ye Question to uthega isliye usne pehle se hi answer ready Kar rakha tha.


Atharva " Father jab un dono Guards ne 3 din pehle mujhe maarne ki kosis ki thi tab waha se guzarte huye ek Great Warrior ne mujhe bacha liya. Usne undono ko maar diya aur unhone meri help karte huye meri body ke andar ki PILLS ko refine kiya aur mujhe Breakthrough karne mein bhi madad ki. "


Kailashnath " kon tha wo Warrior ? "
" Lekin dukh ki baat hai main unse mil nahi paaya. "


Kailashnath jor jor se hasne laga, uske liye isse badi khusi ki baat kya hogi ki Uska Beta ek Genius hai.


Atharva " Father humey JADHAV Family ke sath relationship ache karne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai, Mere opinion mein, City mein ek power hi reh sakti hai. Agar Karamchand khelna chahta hai to hum bhi khelenge. "


Atharva ne ek evil smile ke sath kaha.


Kailashnath " Tumne thik kaha humey unke sath War start kar deni Chahiye nahi to City ke People sochenge ki main dar gaya. Lekin kal ki wedding Ceremony ke baare mein kya kare ? "


Atharva " Jab se JIYA publicaly humare Mansion mein aayi hai to humari reputation affect ho chuki hai. Agar wo ye chahte hai to hum Unki reputation bilkul hi khatam kar denge Fragrant Sky City mein. "


Kailashnath " Tumhara plan kya hai beta ? "


Atharva " Simple kal wo Sohan ko lene aayenge marriage ke liye hum unhe Sohan hi denge lekin ek Casket mein. "


AK ke liye Friend Friend tha aur enemy enemy. Wo kabhi bhi apni enemies ke sath reh nahi paaya tha, jo uska enemy bana unme se ek ka bhi end acha nahi hua tha. Is life mein Sohan first tha aur JADHAV Family second. JADHAV Family ko jad se khatam karke Fragrant Sky City mein wo bas apni Family ko Top mein dekhna chahta tha taaki uske yaha se jaane ke baad yaha uski Family ko koi dikkat na ho.



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NEXT DAY


Aaj ka din kal ke din se bhi jyada lively tha, aaj to JADHAV Family se leke YADAV Family ke Mansion tak ka road Decorate kara gaya tha. Atharva aur Kailashnath ko chodke kisi ko nahi pata tha ki Sohan ab mar chuka hai.


Fragrant Sky City ki street pe mascular Karamchand horse pe ride karte huye aa raha tha uske piche JADHAV Family ke kayi Young Men they jinke Face pe ek alag hi arrogant look tha, ek parade unke piche aa rahi thi jiske End mein ek sedan Chair thi jisey 8 men carry kar rahe they. Yeh parade sidha Mayor Mansion ki taraf badh rahi thi raaste mein har ek person ko attract karte huye.


" Oh my god, ye koi woman hai ya God ke taraf se koi majak. "


" Uggg, mujhe vomit karne do, ye women sky ko bhi rok sakti hai aur ghost ko bhi dara sakti hai apne ugly face se. Maine suna hai Mayor ka elder son ek handsome aur genius man hai. Kya wo is marriage ke Baad jinda reh paayega. "


" Mayor apne adopted son ko ek fire pit mein daal rahe hai. "


City ke sabhi person aapas mein baate kar rahe they aur joke bana rahe they. Jaisa ki Atharva ne socha tha JADHAV Family puri City ke saamne Mayor ki insult karna Chahti hai. Itni lambi parade dekh ke sab ko pata lag gaya tha ko JADHAV Family ek Ugly Girl ko YADAV Family mein marriage karwa rahi hai aur ye baat kaafi thi Mayor ka laughing Stock banne ke liye.



TO BE CONTINUED….




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UPDATE NO - 07
Pay Me For The Casket​

Mayor Mansion ke bahar bhut jada bhid jama ho gayi thi. Mayor Mansion ke bahar Atharva aur Kailashnath khade hoke unki aur aati huyi lambi parade ko dekh rahe they, aisa dekhte huye un dono ke face pe ek cruel smile aa gayi.


Atharva " Aapne dekha Father, Karamchand itni simple si wedding ke liye itni lambi parade leke aa raha hai, Karamchand sirf hamari insult hi nahi humey dabana bhi chahta hai. "


Kailashnath " Hahaha, dekhte hai last mein kon laughing stock banta hai. "


Karamchand " Hahaha, Brother Kailashnath, main Sohan ko lene aaya hu kya wo taiyar hai ? "


Karamchand ne jor se chillate huye kaha taaki puri Crowd ko ke ye baat sun jaaye.


Kailashnath " Of course, mera beta ready hai, Atharva jao aur apne elder brother ko leke aao. "


Kailashnath ne ek smile ke sath jawab diya.
Karamchand ne ek silk Red Robe pehen rakha tha wahi Jiya ne ek phoenix cronot naam ki dress pehen rakhi thi aur wo bhut jada sharma rahi thi. Jadatar log to uske face ko dekh ke Vomit karne lage they aur dubara dekhne ki to himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi.


" Step Aside. "


Kuch moments ke baad ek loud shout sunayi di jo ki Atharva ki thi aur apne shoulder pe bada sa Casket leke aa raha tha.


Bang!


Atharva ne wo Casket aise hi Door se bahar fek diya jaise usme kuch bhi special na ho. Casket ka front Parade ki taraf tha aur uspe likha tha.


" Death. "


Puri crowd Casket ko hi dekh rahi thi aur bilkul silent ho gayi thi.


' ye log kya kar rahe hai ?'
' Wedding mein Casket laana ek buri baat hai, Mayor kya soch rahe hai ? '


Karamchand ke expression ek dum se change ho gaye aur Kailashnath se pucha.


Karamchand " Brother Kailashnath iska kya matlab hai. "


Atharva " I am sorry, mere elder brother kal ek bimari ke chalte maare gaye ab miss Jiya mere brother ki corpse se ho marriage kar sakti hai. Ye yaha pe present ho isliye maine ye mehnga Casket banwaya hai aur tension ki baat nahi hai isne Casket mein wedding dress hi pehen rakhi hai. "


Atharva ne apni voice mein QI energy mix karte huye bola taki Atharva har ek person ko ye baat suna sake.


Crowd mein ek dum se jor jor se baate hone lagi thi unhone pehle kabhi bhi aisa nahi dekha tha. Jadhav Family yaha pe ladke ko lene aayi thi lekin unka welcome uski Dead Body ke sath hua tha. Isse koi fark nahi padta ko Sohan jinda hai ya mar gaya, kyuki ye act sidha sidha Jadhav Family ki insult kar raha tha. Specially jab Jadhav Family itni badi parade ke sath aayi ho aur unhe mila sirf ek Casket, unki reputation ek dum se niche gir gayi thi.


Karamchand " Kailashnath, ye kya tum koi majak kar rahe ho ? "


Karamchand se ab apna gussa control nahi ho raha tha


Atharva " Uncle Karamchand tumhe ye kyu lag raha hai ki hum majak kar rahe hai ? "
" Tum yaha ladke ko lene aaye, aapne ye to bataya hi nahi ki Jinda chahiye ya mara hua. "


Paas mein khade logo ko lag raha tha jaise abhi unke mouth se blood bahar aa jaayega, ye kis type ki explanation thi.


Karamchand " Kailashnath tum aur tumhara beta bakwas mat karo. Sohan QI JING REALM ke 9th level ka warrior hai aur wo kal alive aur ek dum thik tha. Aise kaise mar gya ? "


Atharva " Agar tumhe vishwas nahi hai to khud hi ye Casket khol ke dekh lo. After all wo tumhare hi Family ka member hai ab. "


Atharva ne Friendly tone mein Karamchand se kaha. Kailashnath Atharva ke bagal mein silent khada tha aur sab kuch Atharvako handle karne de raha tha. Kailashnath Atharva se kaafi khus tha kyuki wo Karamchand jaise person se ek dum Normal aur Calm tone mein baat kar raha tha aur usse Argue bhi kar raha tha jo koi Normal 16 saal ka ladka Nahi kar sakta. Atharva ko pata tha ki Karamchand uspe attack nahi kar sakta kyuki Kailashnath aur Karamchand dono hi QI HAI Realm ke peak par they aur dono ki strength same thi.


" Fuck, hum yaha pe ladka lene aaye they aur Mayor humey ek Casket de raha hai, ye Jadhav Family ki insult hai. "


Jadhav Family ke ek Young man ne jor chillate huye kaha.


Atharva " hahhaaha, bilkul sahi kaha mere Friend, Lekin Jadhav Family thi jisne pehle humari insult ki hai. Sab log dhyan se dekho is Jiya ke Face ko, kyu Jadhav Family aise Sincerity dikhati hai humari Family ko? Main yaha sabhi men se puchta hu agar mein tumhe chance du is Jiya se Marriage karne ka wo bhi free mein to kya tum log insulted nahi howoge. Aur jo isse marriage karna chahte hai wo aage aaye."


Atharvane pehle jor se hasa fir ye baat boli aur Crowd ke saamne puri situation clear kar di uske paas koi reason nahi tha apne enemies ko respect dene ka.


Ye baat sunne ke baad waha khade har aadmi ka face green ho gaya tha.


' Shit, main khud suicide kar lunga is ladki se marriage karne se pehle. Jadhav Family itni badi Family hai aur unhone itni ugly Girl select ki hai marriage ke liye. Ye clearly ek insult thi Mayor Family ke liye. '


Ye baat kisi ne Crowd mein boli.


Atharva " Aur mujhe to doubt hai ki ye Ugly Girl tumhari daughter hai bhi ya nahi ? "


Atharva ne ek Cruel smile ke sath kaha.


Karamchand " Aaj se Jadhav Family aur YADAV Family enemies hai. "


Karamchand ek dum gusse se ubal raha tha wo ek dum differently Atharva ko dekh raha tha. Karamchand ek smart person tha to usey ab samajh aa raha tha ki suru se hi wo Atharva ke plan mein fas chuka tha Atharva ne Sohan ka use karke usey yaha parade laane pe majboor kar diya taaki wo inki insult kar sake.


Atharva " Good, mujhe koi fark nahi padta hum enemy hai ya nahi bas is Casket aur mere brother ko apne sath le jaana. Aur mujhe is Casket ka price dena mat bhulna ye bhut mehnga hai. "


JIANG Family ke sabhi member apne Young Master ki performance dekh ke ek dum surprise they. Unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise ye koi stranger ho. Jis useless Atharva ko wo jaante they usme kabhi itne guts nahi they ki wo Karamchand ke saamne aise baat kar sake. Waise Master Sohan kaise marr gaye? Lekin is baat se koi fark nahi padta kyuki Mayor waise bhi Atharva ko hi Pyar karta hai.


'Shameless, despicable, talented'


YADAV Family ke young Master ne Jadhav Family ki reputation ko mitti mein mila diya tha. Jo lambi Parade Jadhav Family leke aayi thi wohi abhi sabse bada laughing stock thi puri Fragrant Sky City ki.


Karamchand " Good, Very Good, Kailashnath tum aur tumhara beta thoda sa wait karo thode hi time tum dono is City mein ruk nahi paaoge. Let's go. "


Karamchand abhi bhut gusse mein tha, wo ek wise man hai aur aaj ek 16 saal ke bache ne uski réputation kharab kar di thi. Baat sirf réputation ki hi nahi thi uski insult bhi huyi thi puri City ke saamne.


Horse ko kick karte huye Karamchand waha se nikal gaya ab wo yaha ek minute bhi rukna nahi chahta tha.


" Atharva ek true man kabhi bhi aise method use nahi karta. Agar tumme himmat hai akele fight karne ki to main Suraj tumhe itna pitunga ki tumhare Father bhi tmhe nahi pehchan paayenge. "


Ek young ladke ne apne horse se niche utarte huye Atharva se kaha. Suraj Jadhav Family ka ek talented young man tha, halanki Karamchand yaha se chala gaya tha lekin wo Atharva ko itni asani se jaane nahi dena chahta tha. Unke paas khone ko kuch bacha hi nahi tha agar wo ab fight karke Atharva ko hara deta hai to kam se kam kuch to honor wapas aayega ye dikhake ki Jadhav Family ke Geniuses YADAV Family ke Geniuses se better hai.


"That's right, Atharva kya tumhare andar himmat hai challenge accept karne ki ? "


Jadhav Family ke doosre young man ne chillake kaha uske face pe arrogance saaf dikh rahi thi. Sabki nazaro mein Atharva ek useless Fool tha, beshak usne Jadhav Family ki insult ki ho lekin Jadhav Family ka koi bhi Genius asani se hara sakta tha aur maar bhi sakta tha.


Atharva " All right, tum mujhe fight karna chahte ho to main tumhara challenge accept kar lunga. Lekin main bina kisi Bet ke fight nahi karne wala. "


Atharva ne smile karte huye kaha. Yaha tak ki Kailashnath bhi jor se has raha tha, uske alawa kisi ko bhi Atharvaki real strength nahi pata thi. Sohan jo ki 9th level pe tha wo bhi Atharva ka koi match nahi tha. Aur Suraj to sirf 8th Level pe hi tha.


Suraj " Thik hai batao tum kya Bet lagana chahte ho ? "


Suraj ek dum khus ho gaya tha ye sunke ki Atharva uska Challenge accept kar raha hai.


Atharva " Hum log is Casket pe Bet lagayenge. Agar main harta hu to ye Casket Mayor Mansion ke front door pe 3 din tak latka rahega. Aur agar tum haare to tum is Casket ko us Sedan Chair pe rakh ke le jaaoge aur apne Front door pe 3 din ke liye latka doge. Agar aisa nahi kiya to Jadhav Family ke sabhi members bastard hai. "


Atharva ne jaanbujh kar jor se chilla ke kaha taaki sab sun sake. Ab Suraj fas chuka tha aur wo Bet ko cancel bhi nahi kar sakta tha kyuki Puri City ne sun liya tha. Agar wo haarke Casket leke jaate hai to wo aur bhi jada laughing stock ban jaayenge aur agar Bet accept nahi karte hai to aur insult hogi inki aur wo bastard kehlayenge. Fark nahi padta result kya ho insult Jadhav Family ki honi thi.


Suraj " Deal "


Suraj ne bina hesitation ke answer de diya jaise Atharva uske saamne koi Ant ho aur wo ye Bet jeet hi jaayega. Isliye usey Bet se koi matlab nahi tha.


Is event ko dekhte huye Crowd mein ek baar firse shor hone laga tha. Unhe laga tha Karamchand ke jaate hi maamla khatam ho jaayega lekin yaha dono Families ke young man aapas mein Fight karne ko ready they aur inki Bet inki Family ki reputation thi. Lekin logo ki attention Atharva pe thi ki ye Useless Fool Suraj joki 8th level pe hai usse kaise Fight karega.




TO BE CONTINUED….

Aey haye maza aa gya kia jawab deya ha Atharva Na dill jeet lea bachy na

 

[Shanu]

Fabulous update Bhai

 

[Ss mujrim]

UPDATE NO - 08
The Six Solar Finger​

Ek evil smile ke sath Suraj Atharva ke saamne aake khada hogya.


Atharva " Kya tum taiyar ho Suraj ? "
" Agar nahi to tumhe ek aur mauka deta hu main. "


Suraj " Tum majak kar rahe ho kya? "
" Tum jaise ke sath fight karne ke liye mujhe prepare hone ki jaroorat nahi. "


SLAP!


Jaise hi Suraj ne bolna band kiya waise sabhi ko ek loud sound sunayi diya. Crowd ne bas Atharva ko apni jagah se disappear hote dekha aur fir Suraj ko slap karte huye. Ek slap se hi Suraj niche gir gaya.


Silence!
Ek dum Silence!
Crowd ne pehle Suraj ko dekha jisse khada nahi hoya jaa raha tha aur fir unhone shocking expression se Atharva ko dekha.


" Fuck ! Kisne kaha tha ye ki Young Master QI JING Realm ke 1st level ka useless fool hai. "
" Young Master ke single slap se hi ye Suraj niche gir gaya jisse khada bhi nahi hoya jaa raha. "
" Kon kehta hai Young Master useless hai ? "


" Awesome….., kya Atharva abhi tak apni true strength hide karke rakhe huye tha ? "


" Kya ye hamare Young Master hai ? "
" Ye ek dum different person lag rahe hai. "


Puri Crowd aur YADAV Family ke Guards mein is tarah ki baaate hone lagi thi.


Suraj " Impossible, aise nahi ho sakta? Tumne mujhe kaise haraya ? "


Jisey sabse jyada shock laga tha wo Suraj tha, jo abhi bhi ground pe leta hua tha aur sir bhaari ho raha tha. Atharva ke ek Slap ne usey weak bana diya tha uske body ke andar ki Yuan Power ek dum mess ban chuki thi. Uske paas hilne tak ki strength nahi thi.


2 Young man jaldi se aaye aur unhone Suraj ko sahara deke uthaya, in dono ke hi face pe dare huye expression they.


Bet ko yaad karke to Suraj ko marne ka mann kar raha tha agar wo bina Bet ke ladta to uski reputation down hoti lekin Bet ki wajah se puri Family ki insult ho jaayegi.


Atharva " Chang "


Chang piche se bhaagta hua aaya aur Atharva ke saamne sir jhuka ke bola.


Chang " young Master aapki kya wish hai ? "


Jabse Atharva ne Chang ko 10 Gold coins diye hai tabse Chang ko lagta hai ki Atharva bhut kind hearted hai.


Atharva " Tum is Casket ko JADHAV Family ki Sedan Chair pe rakhne mein meri madad karo. Fir inka picha karke dekho ki ye Casket leke jaate hai ya nahi agar nahi leke jaate to aaj se JADHAV Family ke members bastards ke naam se jaane jaayenge. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye kaha.


Blergh!


Suraj ko to ye sunte hi khun ki Vomit ho gayi aur wahi behosh ho gaya. Suraj is time badi dikkat mein tha agar wo Casket leke wapis jaata hai to Karamchand uski body se uski Skin alag kar dega. Aur agar nahi leke jaata hai to City ke sabhi log JADHAV Family ko bastard kahenge. Chahe wo kuch bhi kare lekin Karamchand usko Jinda nahi chodega.


Chang " Yes, Young Master. "


Chang ko fark nahi padta tha kisi se bhi usko to bas apne Young Master ko khus karna tha. Usne soch liya tha aaj ke baad wo Atharva ka har ek order follow karega bina refuse kiye.


Haaa!


Ek loud shout ke sath Chang ne wo bhaari Casket apne Shoulder pe rakh liya. QI JING Realm ke 6th level pe hone se ek Bhaari Casket uthana uske liye easy tha.


Bina kuch kahe aur sune Chang ne wo Casket Jiya jaha baithi thi uske bagal mein rakh diya. Jiya jor se ro rahi thi Apne husband ka Casket dekh ke jo usey aur bhi jyada ugly bana raha tha.


Atharva " Suraj tum log jis kaam ke liye aaye they ab wo pura hua, isliye jaldi se yaha se niklo aur wedding Ceremony ko aage badhao. Aaj se YADAV Family ki kisi bhi Property pe JADHAV Family ka koi bhi member welcome nahi hai. Aur tum jo mujhse haar gaye ho, aaj ke baad mujhe apna face mat dikhana, agar kabhi dikha to tumhe wahi pitna suru kardunga aur itna pitunga ki tumhari Mother bhi tumhara Face nahi pehchaan paayegi. Now, Get Lost ! "


Finally, JADHAV Family ki parade jaha se aayi thi usi taraf wapis Chali gayi wo bhi sirf ek Casket ke sath. Jitni khusi se ye log aaye they. Usse jyada dukh mein ye log wapis jaa rahe they.


Rumors aur discussion puri Fragrant Sky City mein suney jaa sakte they. Jo do Families ke bich mein Conflict tha ab wo another level pe pahuch chuka tha. Sabko pata tha ab Fragrant Sky City ke peaceful din jaane waale hai aur ye jab tak waapis nahi aayenge jab tak ek Family jeet nahi jaati.


Jabse YADAV Family aur JADHAV Family ke relationship kharab huye they us din se hi Kailashnath ek dum busy ho gaya tha. Kailashnath Family ke paas bahut saari properties thi jinme Mansions, Elixir shop, Commerce Chamber aur bhut si chize aati thi. Aur inme se jyadatar properties ko Sohan sambhalta tha. Ab Sohan to mar chuka tha isliye sab kuch Kailashnath ko akele hi sambhalna pad Raha tha.


Atharva us incident ke baad apne Mansion se bahar na aane ka faisla kiya tha. Atharva dusre logo se jyada aage ki sochta tha, uske paas ek simple tarika tha apne enemies ko harane ka aur wo thi Strength. Ye aisa world hai jaha pe Jo Strong hai uski sab respect karenge aur sabse jyada Strong hai usko log follow karenge chahe wo galat ho ya sahi.


Har ek single Warrior ke liye Cultivation talent aur Combat talent bhut jaroori hai. Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna start Kar diya tha jo usko doosro se jyada strength deti thi. Lekin Cultivation Skill sirf Foundation hoti hai aur ek Great Warrior banne ke liye usko Bahut achi Combat Skills ki jarurat padegi.


Saint Origin Universe mein Cultivation Skills ke jaise hi Combat Skills bhi Four part mein divide hai
1. Mortal
2. Earth
3. Heaven
4. Saint
Aur ye each level bhi 3 levels mein divide hai Low, Medium, High.


QI JING Realm sirf ek Foundation realm hai ek person QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne ke baad hi Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hai. Lekin Atharva doosro se different tha uske paas several Combat Skill ko practice karne ka experience tha. Aur The Dragon Transformation Skill usko normal person se jyada Yuan Energy provide karti thi, isliye filhal QI HAI Realm ke early stage ke Warrior Atharva ka koi match nahi they.


QI JING Realm ke Warrior isliye Combat Skills practice nahi kar paate they kyuki unke paas enough Yuan Power nahi hoti thi Skill ko support karne ki. Lekin Atharva ki story different thi.


Past Life mein Atharva ne Jo Combat Skill Practice ki thi wo thi ' Nine Solar Energy ' jo ki ek Saint level ki thi aur is Skill ko Atharva ne khud hi banaya tha apne liye. Ye bahut hi powerful Skill thi jo surroundings mein se energy collect karke User ko Great benefit provide karwati thi.


Is Combat Skill ko practice karne ke liye Ek strong body aur huge amount of QI energy chahiye. Joki bhut difficult hai achieve karna.


Past Life mein Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ki jagah Xuan Yuan naam ki skill Cultivate ki thi jo body ko bhut jyada Vital energy QI deti hai. Lekin iske baad bhi wo apni past life mein Nine Solar Energies Combat Skill ke Full potential ko use nahi kar paya tha.


Lekin is Life mein Atharva The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate kar raha tha, jo Xuan Yuan Skill se powerful hai. Har ek Red Dragon Mark ke sath uske bhut jyada amount mein Vital energy QI milegi aur iske sath wo is life mein Nine Solar Energies ko full potential ke sath use kar paayega.


Atharva " Too bad, main sirf QI JING REALM mein hu aur Nine Solar Energies is World ki sabse Strong Combat Skill hai. Even Divine Core Realm ke Warrior bhi is Skill ko practice nahi kar sakte. "


{ 5 Foundational Realm
1. QI JING REALM (9 Level hai)
2. QI HAI REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
3. MORTAL CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
4. HEAVENLY CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
5. DIVINE CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)

ISKE BAAD AATE HAI MAIN REALM JO UPPER 5 HAI WO SIRF FOUNDATION HAI.

6. COMBAT SOUL REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
7. COMBAT KING REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
8. COMBAT EMPEROR REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
9. SAINT REALM (Minor, Great ) }


" Main abhi ke liye Nine Solar Energies ko practice nahi kar sakta. Lekin mein Six Solar Fingers Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hu jo ki Nine Solar Energies Skill ka hi ek part hai. Six Solar Fingers Nine Solar Energies ka Foundation hai aur Six Solar Finger ko ek High Earth Level ki skill kaha jaa sakta hai. "


Atharva ne apne face pe ek smile liye ye socha. Puri Fragrant Sky City mein ek bhi Earth Level ki Combat Skills nahi thi, isliye yaha pe koi bhi Six Solar Fingers ko halke mein nahi le sakta tha.


Six Solar Finger mein Six Style they. Har ek Finger ki power alag Level pe thi jaha First Finger kisi bhi Stone ko bilkul Crush kar sakti thi wahi Sixth Finger kisi Mountain ko bilkul wipe kar sakti thi.


Next 3 din Atharva Six Solar Fingers ko practice karta raha bina apne Mansion se bahar nikle. Aur Kailashnath bhi bhut jyada busy ho gaya tha business manage karne mein ki uske paas Atharva ko disturb karne ka time nahi tha.


In 3 dino mein Atharva ne saara time The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur Six Solar Fingers ko practice karne mein lagaya. Is combination se uski Vital Energy QI se bharne lagi thi.


In 3 dino mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke ek dum peak pe pahuch gaya tha. Bas ek step dur tha QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne se. Jo ek Red Dragon Mark form hua tha wo bhi bas Complete hone hi wala tha. Uske punch ki strength 5000 pound se 8000 pound ki ho gayi thi jo kisi bhi Early QI HAI REALM ke warrior ki nahi hoti.


Haaa!


Garden mein Atharva ek black Robe pehene khada tha aur usne jor se chillate huye apni Finger se ek Golden Ray release ki jo lightning speed se uske Finger tips se nikli thi.


Bam!


Wo Golden Ray waha pe rakhe ek bade se stone ko cut karte karte huye nikal gayi. Jaha se Golden Ray ne Stone ko Cut kiya tha waha pe smoke nikalne laga tha. Agar Fragrant Sky City mein koi is Attack ko dekh leta to pagal ho jaata.


" Main abhi sirf ek Finger hi use kar sakta hu Six Solar Fingers mein se aur abhi bhi ye First Finger ka full potential nahi tha. Aur is Attack mein meri body ki saari Yuan Energy khatam ho gayi. "


Atharva abhi paseeno mein bheeg raha tha aur weak feel kar raha tha attack karne ke baad aur jo attack tha wo bhi First Finger ke real potential ka half tha. Halanki ye powerful dikh raha tha lekin full power se bhut dur tha pura potentiel use karne ke liye aur practice ki jarurat padegi.


Ye bhi badi baat thi ki Atharva First Finger use kar paa raha tha. Kyuki SiX Solar Fingers ek High Earth Level ki Combat Skill thi ek QI JING aur QI HAI Realm ke Warrior itna bhi nahi kar sakte they.


Atharva ne Apne bag se Ek Restoration Pill nikal aur usko apne muh mein daal liya jisse uski Yuan Energy waapis pehle ke Level pe aa gayi. Restoration Pill ek aisi Pill thi jiski jarurat har ek warrior ko padti thi chahe wo koi se bhi realm mein ho. Fragrant Sky City mein Restoration Pill ki kimat 100 Silver Coins thi.


" Is Restoration Pill ki effectiveness sirf 60% hai baaki 40% impurities hai. Rubbish! "


Atharva ne khud se sochte huye apna sir hillaya. Mayor Mansion mein jo Restoration Pill thi wo sabse low Quality ki thi. Uske liye 60% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill kisi garbage se kam nahi thi.


Knock! Knock! Knock!


Atharva ko pehle se hi pata tha ye Kailashnath hi hai, isliye usne apna Door khola to usey Kailashnath ka worried face dikha.


Kailashnath " Atharva tumne fir improvement ki hai. "



Atharva ki QI sense karke Kailashnath ke worried face pe thodi si smile aa gayi thi. Sirf 3 din mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke 9th Level se ek dum peak pe aa gaya tha jaha wo kabhi bhi Breakthrough kar sakta tha QI HAI Realm ke Early stage mein.





TO BE CONTINUED....

Ya bacha To Sub sa ghzaab Dhaa Rha ha bhot kam time.ma bhot agy PonCh Gya ha

 

[Ss mujrim]

UPDATE NO - 09
ALCHEMIST​

Atharva “ Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua ? ”


Kamalnath “ Aao andar chal ke baat karte hai. ”


Kamalnath aur Atharva dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai. ”


{ Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai. }


Atharva “ Haa mujhe pata hai. ”


Atharva ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo JADHAV Family ho ya YADHAV Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.


Kamalnath “ Hamara Pill Concocting ka business JADHAV Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hua hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai. ”


Kamalnath ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.


Atharva “ Father, exactly kya ho raha hai ? ”


Kamalnath “ JADHAV Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar JADHAV Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega. ”


Atharva ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin Atharva ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. Atharva apne past life ke experience ke sath easily JADHAV Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.


Atharva “ Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga. ”


Kamalnath ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki Atharva Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai ?


Atharva “ Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai kya ? ”


Atharva ne ye bolte huye Kamalnath ko ek golden Paper de diya.


“ Cultivation Skill ! ”


Kamalnath ne surprise hote huye wo Paper Atharva ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.


“ Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill. ”


Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt Kamalnath ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki ? ”


Kamalnath bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.


Ye script Atharva ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein Atharva isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Kamalnath ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.


Atharva “ Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do. ”


Agar Kamalnath abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.


Agar Kamalnath ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye Atharva ne Kamalnath ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.


Kamalnath bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal pa raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.


Atharva “ Father. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye Kamalnath ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. Kamalnath sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye Kamalnath ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.


Kamalnath “ Atharva ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha. "


Atharva “ Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho. ”


Kamalnath “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha. ”


Kamalnath ko yaha se bhejne ke baad Atharva firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar Atharva ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.


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NEXT MORNING
PILL SHOP


Next Morning, Atharva ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.


Pill Shop hi, wo YADHAV Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. Atharva 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.


“ Aap aa gaye Young Master. ”


“ Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho. ”


Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo Atharva ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo Atharva ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.


Atharva “ Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna. ”


Fir Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye Atharva Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.


“ Apki jai ho Young Master. ”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha.
Pill Shop YADHAV Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.


Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Kamalnath ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Kamalnath ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.


“ Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta. ”


Atharva ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio Atharva ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.


Jai “ Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai ? ”


Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein Atharva se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.



Atharva “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki JADHAV Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Atharva ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.


Jai “ Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”


Atharva “ don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada effectiveness wala pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Jai “ What ? "
" Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai. ”


Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.


“ kaha hai wo alchemist ? "
" Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge. ”


Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.


Atharva “ Tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai. ”


Apne fan ko fold karte huye Atharva khada ho gaya.


“ What ? "
" Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho ? ”


Fat old man ne surprise hote huye Atharva se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.


Atharva “ Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu. ”


Hahhahahaha……


Jaise hi Atharva ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.


Jai ” Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho ? "
" Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein. "


Atharva “ Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho. ’”


Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.


“ agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo. ”


Atharva “ Lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo. ”


Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye Atharva aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne Atharva ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?









TO BE CONTINUED …….

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Mast update dia hai bhai...sooo nice

 

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UPDATE NO - 10
PEERLESS GENIUS​

“ Bhut saari Pills khaane se Alchemist ban jaana....Impossible. "


Trio ko abhi bhi believe nahi tha Atharva pe, halanki Atharva unhe kaafi serious lag raha raha tha.


Jai “ Thik hai, chalo Young Master ki Alchemist Skill bhi dekh lete ha i”


Jai ne haste huye kaha aur Atharva ko Furnace room ki taraf le jaane laga. Un sab ke paas Young Master ko accompany karne ka kafi time tha, kyuki Pill Business to abhi band hi tha unka. Furnace room pass mein hi tha aur bilkul Pill Shop ke middle mein bhi. Furnace room ki walls thick, heavy stones se bani huyi thi. Alchemists ke alawa is room mein kisi ko bhi andar jaane ki permission nahi thi.


Jai “ young Master, Furnace aur fire ready hai aur 3 Restoration Pill banane ke ingredients bhi ready hai. ”


Jai ne ek smile ke sath kaha.


Atharva “ Okay, tum log bahar hi wait karo, main akele hi Pill Concoct karunga. ”


Atharva apni baat khatam karte hi Furnace room mein enter kar gaya aur apne piche usne heavy stone door bhi band kar diya.


“ Sir aapko yakeen hai kya Young Master sach mein Pill Concot karna jaante hai ? ”


Skiny old man ne pucha.


Jai “ Kya tumhe main koi fool lagta hu ? "
" Ek Alchemist banne mein Soul ki Strength sabse important cheez hoti hai. Young Master kaafi change ho gaye, ek useless fool se ek Genius mein. Lekin agar tum mujhse kaho ki wo apne Soul ki strength ko badha sakte hai, to main Bet laga sakta hu ki ye Imossible hai. ”


Ek Soul ko na dekha jaa sakta hai na hi touch kiya jaa sakta hai, lekin ye body ka sabse important part hai aur Soul hi source hai jaha se Alchemy ki jaa sakti hai.


Sabke paas Soul hoti hai aur ek Alchemist banne ke liye person ko apne Soul ki Strength ko badhana padta hai. Jisey na dekha jaa sakta hai aur naa hi touch kiya jaa sakta hai uski strength ko unleash karna bhut difficult hai. Aur yahi reason hai Saint Origin Universe mein countable Alchemist hi hai.


Atharva apni Past life mein ek excellent Alchemist tha. Halanki wo 100 years pehle mar gaya tha aur isliye uski Soul ko kaafi damage huya tha, lekin usne usi time ek secret Skill ko use karke apni Soul ko 100 years future mein ek ladke ki Soul ke sath merge kar diya tha. Aur isiliye wo ab bhi jo similar level ke person hai unse jyada Soul ki strength ko unleash kar sakta tha.


Furnace room mein Atharva ne apne saamne rakhi Bronze Furnace ko dekhte huye sir hillaya.


Atharva “ Kitni Poor aur low quality ki Furnace hai. Mujhe khud hi Ground Fire ko control karna hoga. Ye kitna troublesome hai. ”


Furnace Room ki banawat aur Furnace ki placement ek dum sahi jagah aur sahi tarike se hone chahiye. Example ke liye jo uske saamne Bronze Furnace thi wo aisi jagah located thi jaha se ground fire ko control karne me asani ho. Halanki jo uske saamne Bronze Furnace thi wo sirf Ground fire ko hi use kar sakti thi, jiski quality bhut jyada kam thi. Ground fire sirf ek step upper hoti hai Normal fire se, yaha tak ki beast flame bhi isse better quality ki hoti hai.


Soul aur Fire ki strength Alchemist ke liye bhut important hoti hai. Ek bronze Furnace aur ground fire ka use sirf low level alchemist hi karte hai. Apni past life mein ek three types ki fire ko control kar sakta tha aur kisi Furnace ki jaroorat bhi nahi padti thi Pill Concoct karne mein.


Lekin ab koi past nahi tha, abhi uski current strength ke according usko bhi Furnace use karni padegi.


Furnace ke paas mein hi 3 Restoration Pill Concoct karne ke liye efficient ingredient they. Atharva ne estimate laga liya tha ki wo itne ingredients mein araam se 10 Pill Concoct kar dega.


Usne apna hath hillaya aur ek invisible yuan Power ne ek ingredient ka portion pakda aur Furnace mein daal diya.


Impurities ko hatana pehla step hota jab aap Pill Concoct kar rahe ho. Agar bahar jo trio unhone agar dekh liya hota jo Atharva abhi kar raha hai to unke jabde nikal ke ground pe gir jaate. Pill Concoct karne mein jo pehla step hota hai wo sabse hardest step hota hai, isiliye hi kayi saari Pills apne full potential tak nahi pahuch paati. Impurities ko hatane ke liye person ko slowly-2 time spend karna chahiye, agar aap ek sath saare ingredients ko ek sath Furnace mein daalke unki impurities hatate ho to aapke paas precise control hona chahiye.


Atharva ne apni Soul Power ka ek strong force sidhe Furnace mein bheja aur continue apne dono hatho se sign banane laga. Uske continue hand sign se ground fire bhi ek dum Soul Force ki tarah Furnace mein enter kar gayi. Ye sab itna smoothly ho raha tha jaise Atharva ne ye sab thousand baar pehle bhi kiya ho. Kuch hi minutes mein jo ingredients mein jo impurities thi wo jaa chuki thi, sirf ingredients ke essence hi bach tha.


Next step tha wo in essence ko merge karke Pill form karne ka, ye Atharva ke liye sabse easy job thi kyuki RestorationPill Sirf Mortal level ki thi aur wo inhe aankh bandh karke bhi merge kar sakta tha.


Kuch minutes baad usne sabhi Pills ko form kar liya aur fir ek loud shout ke sath usne apni Yuan power ko Furnace ke andar bhejke Pills ko bahar nikal liya aur apne hath mein pakad liya. Jo Restoration pill Atharva ke hath mein thi smooth aur perfectly Round thi aur glow bhi kar rahi thi. Puri Pill me impurities hone ka koi hint tak nahi tha aur ye proof tha ki ye 100% effectiveness wali Restoration pills hai.


Ingredient ke itne se portion se hi 10 Pills concoct kar li thi, Atharva is outcome se kaafi satisfied tha. 100% effectiveness RestorationPills wo bhi sirf 20 minutes mein wo bhi 100% success rate ke sath, agar Fragrant Sky City mein ye baat koi sunle to wo wahi shock ki wajah se mar jaayega.


“ 100% effectiveness Pill wo bhi first try mein wo log shock se hi na mar jaaye, mujhe cover ke liye kuch damaged Pills bhi concoct kar leni chahiye. ”


Smile karte huye usne apna hath hillaya aur ingredients ka doosra portion bhi furnace mein bhej diya.


Kuch minutes baad,


Boom!

Ek explosion sound hua jisey sunke pehle to Jai aur dono alchemist shock huye aur fir jor se hasne lag gaye.


“ Furnace explode ho gayi. ”


“ ye to normal hai. Jab maine Alchemy start ki thi to maine hundred se bhi jyada Furnace explode ki thi. ”


“ Chalo andar jaake check karte hai. ”


Trio ne gate ko dhakka dete huye khola aur dekha ki Atharva Furnace ke paas depressed khada hai.


“ Young Master, depressed mat hoiye. Furnace ka explode ho jaana normal hai, lekin mere opinion mein aapko Pills Concoct karne mein apne energy aur time waste nahi karna chahiye. ”


Fat old man ne Atharva ko comfort karte huye kaha.


“ Young Master, humey pata hai aap Pill Shop ke liye worried ho, lekin Pill Concot karna itna asaan kaam nahi hai. "


Jai ne bhi Atharva ka shoulder thapthapte huye kaha.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, halanki Furnace explode ho gayi, lekin maine kuch Restoration pill produce ki hai. ”


“ Young Master aap majak kar rahe hai na. ek baar Furnace explode ho jaaye to uske andar ke saare ingredients khatam ho jaate hai. Explosion mein Pills produce karna impossible hai. ”


Skinny old man ne Atharva ko chedte huye kaha. Atharva ne bina kuch kahe apni mutthi ko khola to uske palm mein 3 white Pills jo ke marble ke size ki thi wo dikhi.


Trio ek dum se stunned ho chuke they unke face ki smile ek dum se froze ho gayi. Unke jitna koi bhi experienced ho to wo aram se bata sakta hai ki jo Pills Atharva ke Palm pe rakhi hai wo recently produce ki gayi hai. Pills thi wo ek warm feeling de rahi thi jo sign tha ki ye abhi Furnace se bahar nikli hai.


“ No way, furnace explode hone pe bhi tumne Pills produce kar di. ”


Trio ki aankhe ek dum chaudi ho gayi thi. Un teeno ne ek ek Pill li aur carefully examine karne lage. Restoration pills ek energy Pill hai jo warrior ko Cultivate karte time chahiye hoti hai. Restoration pills jo Atharva ne concoct ki thi wo smooth aur round thi, in Pills mein bilkul thodi se impurities thi jo prove kar rahi thi ki effectiveness low nahi hai.


“ ye… ye to 70% effectiveness Pill hai. ”


Fat old man chillaya.


“ Ye sach mein 70% effectiveness wali Pills hai, jo Pills hum produce karte they uske ek grade high hai. Lekin ye kaise possible hai. ”


Skinny old man ke face pe disbelief wala look tha. Jo wo dekh raha tha usey wo bilkul bhi accept nahi kar paa raha tha.


“ Young Master, ye Pills kya aapne khudse ye Pills produce ki hai ? ”


Jai ko bhi believe nahi ho raha tha.


Atharva “ Haan maine hi ki hai. ”


“ Young master kya aapne pehle kabhi koi Pill concoct ki hai ? ”


Atharva “ Nahi kabhi nahi. ”


“ Young Master, kya ye sach mein aapka first time tha ? ”


Atharva “ Haan! ”


“ Young Master, kya main puch sakta hu ki aapka current level kya hai ? ”


Atharva “ QI JING Realm 9th Level. ”


Trio ka blood almost unke muh se bahar aane ko ho gaya tha. Atharva ko dekhte huye har bitte time ke sath unki aankhe chaudi hoti jaa rahi thi. Unki aankho se aansoo niklne ko ho gaye they, unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise unhone apni entire life waste kar di ho.


Soul ki power bhut important hoti hai Pill Concoct karne mein, lekin ek person ka Cultivation level bhi utna hi important hota hai. Jo Pill Concoct karne ki process hoti hai wo bhut jaldi person ki Yuan energy khatam kar deti hai. QI HAI level se pehle ek Alchemist banna almost impossible hai kyuki isse low level ke person ke paas enough Yuan power nahi hoti puri Process complete karne ke liye. Wahi Atharva ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration pill concoct kar di thi wo first attempt mein.


“ Young Master, main janna chahta hu ki aapne ye kaise kiya ? ”


Jai ne ye sawal pucha aur baaki dono old man bhi bade utawle ho rahe they answer sunne ke liye.


Atharva “ Maine bataya to tha jab aap bhut saari Pills khaate ho to naturally aapko pata laga jata hai Pill Concoct kaise karni hai. ”


Atharva ne apne kandhe hillate huye kaha. Wo kisi ko bhi nahi bata sakta ki uska rebirth hua hai aur bata bhi dega to koi believe nahi karega balki uspe hasenge aur. Sabko pata hai ki usne bhut Pills consume kar rakhi hai to abhi ke liye ye good reason tha.


“ What the fuck ! ”


Trio ke mouth se almost blood bahar aane ko ho gaya tha.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, mujhe abhi bhut acha feel ho raha hai. Main ek baar aur Pill Concoct karne ke liye ready hu. Abhi jo explosion hua usse mujhe kuch insights mile hai. Mujhe feel ho raha hai ki main is baar easily 100% effectiveness wali Pill Concoct kar dunga. ”


Ye baat bolte huye Atharva ne bina kuch suney un teeno ko Furnace room se bahar nikal diya.


Furnace room ke bahar trio ke face pe mix emotions they. Unhe pehle laga tha ki Atharva sirf fun ke liye yaha aaya hai, unhe bilkul andaja nahi tha ki Atharva pehli baar mein 70% effectiveness wali Pill Concoct kar lega.


“ Sir, main pehle kehta tha ki is world mein koi Genius nahi hai. Main galat tha. ”


Skinny old man ne kaha.


“ Impossible, fark nahi padta Young master kitne bhi bade Genius ho, lekin 100% effectiveness Pills majak hai. ”


Jai aur Fat old man ne ek sath bola aur fir sir hillane lage.


Saint Origin Universe mein different levels ke Alchemists hai :- Mortal, Earth, Heaven, Saint Level. Ek Alchemist ka level uske Pills ki qualities se pata nahi lagta hta balki uski Soul ki strength aur Cultivation Level se ek Alchemist ki level ka pata lagta tha. Ek Earth Level Alchemist ke liye bhi 100% effectiveness Pills produce karna kaafi difficult hota hai.


Half hour Furnace room mein spend karne ke baad Atharva ne heavy stone door ko open kiya aur bahar aa gaya.


“ Young Master, Pill produce ho gayi kya ? ”


Jai ne curiously pucha.


Atharva “ Yes, main ek Genius hu jiske paas god given talent hai jo doosro ko nahi milta. Maine apne second attempt mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills produce ki hai. ”


Atharva ne itna bolte hi trio ki taraf 3 Pills trow kar di. Trio ne bhi jaldi se Pills Catch ki aur Carefully examine karne lage aur fir ek doosre ki taraf shock hoke dekhne lage.


“ 100% effectiveness Pills, oh my god. Ye color ye Pill ki strength, ye sach mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill hai. ”


Fat Old man ne chillate huye kaha, wahi skinny old man ki aankhe gol gol ghumne lagi usko khada hone mein dikkat ho rahi thi, wo kabhi ground pe gir sakta tha. Wo bilkul bhi ye accept kar paa rahe they kyuki ye bilkul unbelievable tha.


“ Young Master koi Genius nahi hai. Wo ek Peerless Genius hai jo thousand years mein ek baar paida hota hai. Aise talent ko koi word describe nahi kar sakte. ”










TO BE CONTINUED……..

Kamal damal Super update.