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Bhai abhi 16 update hi huye hai to story ka base bhi thik se nahi bana hai. Ek dum fast pace mein likhunga to kuch samajh nahi aayega tumhe. Ye Mu Family ka arc khatam hote hi puri speed mein chalegi story.
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Update please
Update please
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Ye kaise possible huva
Next Update Raat ko 9 baje tak aa jayega
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UPDATE 17:- (A Written Challenge)
AK undono ki taraf chala gaya aur unke saamne rakhi huyi Chair pe baith gaya bina kuch bole. AK ka aisa karne se wo Third Young Lord bilkul bhi offend nahi hua kyuki ek Master Alchemist jo 100% effectiveness wali pilll concoct kar sakta hai Uska Arrogant hona kisko bura lagega.
Third Lord "Main Red City ki Lee Family ka Third Young Lord hu. Main master alchemist ko apni respect pay karta hu."
"Lee Family? Red City?"
AK bhi ye sunke surprise ho gaya tha kyuki Lee Family ka status Red City mein aisa hai Jaise Jiang Family ka Fragrant Sky City mein. Lee Family number one power hai Red City ki lekin ye Family puri tarah se dominate nahi karti Red City ko. Red City mein ek aur Family hai jo equally powerful hai Lee Family ke wo hai Yan Family.
Halanki, AK ko koi idea nahi tha ki ye Third Young Lord is war mein Mu Family ki madad kar raha hai. Jaise ki Third Young Lord ko bhi nahi pata tha ki AK hi wo Alchemist hai jisey wo pana bhi chahta hai aur maarna bhi.
Third Lord "Master Alchemist, ye Small Fragrant Sky City aapke abilities ke kaabil nahi hai. Aap mere sath Red City chaliye aur main aapko Lee Family mein ek High Position dilwa dunga. Aapko pata hona chahiye ki ye Jiang Family meri Lee Family ka garbage uthane ke laayak bhi nahi hai. Aap jaise master alchemist ka yaha rukna bilkul waste hai."
Isi Speech ke sath AK ki feeling is Third Young Lord ke liye jo feeling thi wo neutral se disgusting pe chali gayi thi.
AK "Get Out. Niklo Yaha se."
AK ne bhut Cold Tone mein kaha bina koi respect dikhate huye.
Third Lord "kya kaha tumne?"
Third Young Lord ki smile ek dum se ruk gayi. Usne sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki uska naam aur status sunne ke baad saaamne wala aise behave karega.
AK "Get Out. Chang bahar nikal inko yaha se."
AK ne ek dum cold tone mein kaha aur waha se nikal gaya. Agar Mu Family aur Jiang Family ke bich War hoti to wo abhi is Young Lord ko jaan se maar deta.
Old Man "Young Master, aapne usey abhi ke abhi maar kyu nahi diya."
Third Lord "humph, ye kya socha hai ki ye talented hai to mere se aise baat kar sakta hai. Ruk jaao ek baar is Jiang Family ko khatam kar du fir dekhta hu kaha jaata hai ye."
Itna bolte hi dono ek evil smile ke sath Mayor mansion se nikal gaye.
---At Noon---
AK apne room mein baithke ke The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate kar raha tha. Suddenly usne apne darwaje pe knock suni.
"Come in."
Door khula aur Chang andar aaya.
"Young Master."
AK "Chang, agar tumne mujhe disturb karne ka koi better reason nahi diya to main tumhari taang tod dunga."
AK ko is baat se sabse jyada nafrat thi jab koi usey Cultivation ke time disturb kare.
Chang "Young Master, main aapko disturb nahi karna chahta. Mayor ne aapko bulaya hai Main Hall mein."
AK "main hall mein bulaya hai, kyu?"
Chang "Young Master, maine suna hai ki Mu Family ne ek Written Challenge bheja hai. Is waqt saare Guest aur Elders Main Hall mein present hai."
AK ne apne Kapde Change kiye aur sidha Main Hall ki taraf chala gaya. Usne ye bilkul accept nahi kiya tha ki Mu Family koi Written Challenge bhejegi, uske hisab se to ab tak Gyan ne attack kar dena chahiye uske temper ko dekhte huye. Aur agar bhejna tha to kal hi bhej dete aaj ek din baad kyu bheja.
Main Hall mein Jain center mein baitha tha aur uske bagal mein 10 QI HAI REALM ke Warriors baithe they jinme se Jai bhi ek tha. Aur Jain ke right hand mein ek scroll tha.
"Dad, everyone."
AK ne Hall mein aate hi sabko greet kiya. Wo ek dum kisi Noble Prince ke jaise lag raha tha ek Black Robe, Silver Long Hair, Black eyes aur ek Handsome Face. Sabhi Elders ne approval mein apne sir hillaye.
AK "Dad, maine suna hai Mu Family ne ek Written Challenge bheja hai. Kya hai isme."
Jain "Ye raha Challenge, khud hi dekhlo.
Jain ne wo scroll AK ki taraf fek diya. AK ne wo scroll pakda aur usko padhna suru kiya, usme likha tha :- Mu Family aur Jiang Family ke bich ke War ko khatam karne ke liye 3 din baad ek Fight hogi. Mu Family aur Jiang Family Fragrant Sky City ke Public Square pe apni taraf se ek ek Young Genius bhejgi Fight karne ke liye. Aur Bet bhi koi Choti nahi thi. Jo haarega uski Pill Shop Jeetne waale ki ho jaayegi.
AK "Hahahhaha, Bet ke liye Pill Shop Daav pe laga rahe hai."
AK ne hasna suru kar diya aur us Written Challenge ko fek diya. Puri City mein Sirf Do hi Pill Shop hai aur dono Family kisi bhi haal mein apni Pill Shop khona nahi Chahti. Aur Gyan Pill Shop ki Bet laga raha hai, lagta hai wo kaafi serious hai is baare mein.
Jain "AK, tumhe nahi lagta ki is Written Challenge mein koi problem hai."
AK "Problem to hai hi. Mu Family ke Number One Genius ko to maine pehle hi destroy kar diya. Mujhe yakeen hai unki Young Generation mein koi nahi jo mujhe hara sake, ya fir kisi Young Genius ne QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough kar liya ho. Agar aisa hai tabhi unme mujhe challenge karne ke liye itne Guts hai."
Jai "Young Master sahi keh rahe hai unke Young Genius ko to Master ne hara hi diya hai aur Gyan ko Young Master ki true Strength ka bhi pata hai. Lekin is sab ke bawjood bhi uski Written Challenge bhejne ki himmat ho gayi. Mujhe lagta hai wo kuch bada plan kar raha hai."
Jain "AK, Tumhe kya lagta hai? Humey ye Written Challenge accept karna chahiye ya nahi? Lekin ek baat Clear hai Gyan ka target sirf Tum hi ho."
AK "Hum is Challenge ko accept karenge. Agar mera guess sahi hai to ye Written Challenge puri Fragrant Sky City mein sabke paas jaa chuka hoga. Aur sablog 3 din ke baad wale event ka intezaar kar rahe honge. Agar hum challenge accept nahi karte hai to humari hi insult hogi aur Mu Family koi mauka nahi chodegi humey humiliate karne ka. Gyan ne bada soch ke Plan banaya hai agar hum accept kare ya na kare fayda Gyan ka hi hoga. Hahahaha. Aur agar Gyan khel khelna chahta hai to main bhi taiyar hu. Mujhe bhi dekhna hai ki wo kya chhupa raha hai humse."
AK ne iske Dad ke Face pe ek worried look dekha to fir se bolna start kiya.
AK "Dad, aap chinta mat kijiye mujhe pata hai ki main kya kar raha hu. Halanki is written challenge pe mera naam nahi likha lekin agar main fir bhi accept nahi karta to mera majak ban jaayega puri Fragrant Sky City mein."
AK apni past Life mein ek Great Saint tha aur usey Challenge se kabhi dar nahi laga, uske hisab se jitna bada challenge hoga utna jyada hi wo khud improve hoga. AK ne apni aankhe band kari aur Confidence ke sath khada hoke waha se nikal gaya. Uski Ability ke hisab se kisi Early QI HAI Realm ke warrior ko maarna badi baat nahi thi, yaha tak ki Mid QI HAI Realm Warrior ke sath wo equally Fight kar lega. Usko ye bhi dar nahi tha ki Mu Family koi dirty tricks na play kare. AK ko dar tha agar wo aise Challenge nahi bhejte to koi maja nahi aata usey Mu Family ko khatam karne mein.
Jain "Alright, hum ye Written Challenge accept karte hai."
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Jaisa ki AK ne expect kiya tha waise hi ye News pehle se hi puri City mein faill chuki thi. Sablog bas Written Challenge ko leke hi discuss kar rahe they. Sab log is baat se surprise they ki Gyan kya sochke ke Jiang Family ko Challenge kar raha hai, kyuki Mu Family mein koi aisa Young Genius nahi tha jo AK ko hara sake. Sabko yahi lag raha tha ki Gyan kuch chhupa raha hai.
"Tumhe kya lagta hai Jiang Family accept karegi Challenge ko?"
"Wo to karegi hi, AK ke temper ko dekhte huye to pakka karegi. Aur unhe karna bhi padega kyuki sabko ko pata hai challenge ke baare mein aur agar wo accept nahi karte hai to wo laughing stock ban jaayenge puri City ke."
"Tumhe kuch nahi pata AK ne pehle hi challenge accept kar liya hai. Ab ek good show dekhne ko milega."
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3 din bhut jaldi beet gaye. Aaj ke hi din Fragrant Sky City ke Public Square pe bhut kuch hone wala tha. Squar ke chaaro taraf Crowd ikhata hone lag gayi thi. Mu Family ke Member bhi jaldi hi Pahuch gaye Square ke ek side pe Bich mein Gyan khada tha aur uske piche Mu Family ke 20 member khade they.
Gyan bhut hi relax aur refresh lag raha tha jaise usey pata ho ki wo ho jeetega aaj. Uske bagal mein ek White Robe pehle huye Third Young Lord khada tha. Kayi log usey hi dekh rahe they kyuki unhone isey Kabhi nahi dekha tha aur wo jaldi se pata lagana chahte they ki wo kon hai.
Gyan "humph, abhi tak Jiang Family kyu nahi aayi hai yaha? Lagta hai wo yaha se dar rahe hai. Hahahhaa."
"Dekho Jiang Family bhi aa gayi hai."
"Jisne Black Robe pehna hai wo to Young Master AK hai. Inke imposing appearance aur Handsome face ko dekho. Ye sach mein ek talented man hai.
Sabhi Jiang Family ke Members bhi aa chuke they aur Mu Family ke opposite side khade ho gaye they. Dono Group ko dekh ke koi bhi sakta tha ki dono Group ki strength equal hai.
Gyan "Jain, tumhari Family ko is fight mein kon represent karega."
Jain "Sabko pata hai, mera beta hi karega."
Jain ne cold tone mein kaha. AK ko nazar bhi us Third Young Lord pe jaa chuki thi aur usko dekh ke hi usey Mu Family ki puri kahani samajh aa gayi thi.
Jain "Aur Mu Family ko kon represent karega. Kyuki tumhari Family mein to koi bhi capable nahi hai aur jo tha usko to mere bete ne kahi ka nahi chhoda. Hahahaha."
Gyan ke expression ek dum se cold ho gaye kyuki Jain ka har ek word kisi knife ki tarah uske heart mein ghus rahe they.
Gyan "humph, tumhe uski chinta karne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Hai koi jo hamari Mu Family koi represent karega."
Jaise hi usne bolna band kiya, wo Third Young Lord apni Early QI HAI Realm ki QI release karte huye Fighting stage pe aa gaya. Usne AK ki taraf ek disgusting look se dekha aur bola.
"AK jaldi se stage pe aao aur apni Death accept karo."
AK ki aankhe ek dum Red ho gayi ye sunke kyuki Wo past Life mein ek Greatest Saint tha aur is baat ka pride uski bones, uski soul se nikal ke aata tha. Past life mein wo aise pure Divine Continent ko usne Dominate kiya tha aur aaj Eastern Continent ki sabse Weak Province ke Sabse weak City ka ladka usse aisa baat kar raha hai. Agar ye past life mein hua hota to wo ek strike mein pure Eastern Continent ko World Map se mita deta lekin ab baat alag thi lekin Gussa to pehle wala hi tha. Usey fark nahi padta kon enemy hai uska status kya hai. Agar wo Beshak Red City ki Famous Family ke Young Lord bhi hai to bhi wo usey jinda nahi chodega uski insult karne ke liye. Agar koi usey offend karta hai to wo uska enemy hai aur wo koi mercy show nahi karega apne enemy ke saamne.
AK ne jump liya aur Third Young Lord ke saamne khada ho gaya. Ek ki aankh ek dum cold thi jaise wo abhi saamne wale ko faad ke rakh dega.
Gyan "Main ek baat clear kar dena chahta hu. Aaj ka duel ek deathmatch hoga. Do person Stage pe gaye hai lekin ek hi wapis utrega. Aur jo Family haaregi wo apni Pill Shop bina koi Hesitation ke handover kar degiutrega
Kayi log ye sunne ke baad AK ke liye pity feel karne lage they, unko lag raha tha AK haar hi jaayega aur is Death Match ki baat ne to sabki hila diya tha. Ye sab Gyan ka trap tha aur ab Jiang Family piche bhi nahi hat sakti thi.
AK "Jo Gyan ne kaha hai wo sahi hai aaj is Stage se sirf ek hi person utrega aur doosra yahi khatam ho jaayega aur agar koi is Duel ke bich mein aata hai to wo aaj se mujhe Grandfather kehke bulayega. Hahahaha."
Third Lord "kitne innocent ho tum. Tumhe maarna kisi ant ko maarne jaisa hoga."
Third young lord hasne laga jor se, wo itna over confident tha ki wo apne opponent ko kuch samjh hi nahi raha tha.
AK "Tum ek disgusting poser ho. You really piss me off."
AK ne ek cold tone mein kaha aur apni Body se ek murderous aura relase kar diya.
TO BE CONTINUED.....
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Dekho mijhe pata hai aapko kahani Slow lag rahi hogi thodi. Dekho abhi Ye Fragrant Sky City ka Arc khatam hone ke baad kahani ache se chalegi aur maja bhi aayega. Abhi tak to bas story ka base hi ban raha. Story chodo Abhi to Main character "AK" ka development hi ho raha hai, abhi to heroine ki entry huyi na Villain ki aur na hi baaki ke Characters ko jo story mein end tak jaayenge. Abhi tak jitne bhi Character introduce huye hai aur aane wale 4-5 update mein jo honge inka Story mein koi jyada Role nahi hai. Real Character tab aayenge jab apna main character Main QI Province mein kadam rakh dega. So disappoint na hoye ki story slow lag rahi hai ye soch ke.
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Dekho mijhe pata hai aapko kahani Slow lag rahi hogi thodi. Dekho abhi Ye Fragrant Sky City ka Arc khatam hone ke baad kahani ache se chalegi aur maja bhi aayega. Abhi tak to bas story ka base hi ban raha. Story chodo Abhi to Main character "AK" ka development hi ho raha hai, abhi to heroine ki entry huyi na Villain ki aur na hi baaki ke Characters ko jo story mein end tak jaayenge. Abhi tak jitne bhi Character introduce huye hai aur aane wale 4-5 update mein jo honge inka Story mein koi jyada Role nahi hai. Real Character tab aayenge jab apna main character Main QI Province mein kadam rakh dega. So disappoint na hoye ki story slow lag rahi hai ye soch ke.
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