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UPDATE 9:- Alchemist



AK “Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua?”



JAIN “aao andar chal ke baat karte hai.”



JAIN aur AK dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.





JAIN “AK tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai.”





{Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai.}



AK “Haa mujhe pata hai.”



AK ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo MU Family ho ya JIANG Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.





JAIN “Hamara Pill Concocting ka business MU Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai.”





JAIN ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.



AK “Father, exactly kya ho raha hai?”



JAIN “MU Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar MU Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega.”





AK ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin AK ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. AK apne past life ke experience ke sath easily MU Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.



AK “Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga.”



JAIN ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki AK Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai?





AK “Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai.”



AK ne ye bolte huye JAIN ko ek golden Paper de diya.



“Cultivation Skill”



JAIN ne surprise hote huye wo Paper AK ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.



“Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill”



Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt JAIN ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.





JAIN “AK tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki?”



JAIN bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.



Ye script AK ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein AK isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. JAIN ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.





AK “Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do.”





Agar JAIN abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.



Agar JAIN ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye AK ne JAIN ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.



JAIN bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.





AK “Father.”



AK ne jor se chillate huye JAIN ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. JAIN sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye JAIN ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.



JAIN “AK ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha.”





AK “Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho.”





JAIN “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha.”





JAIN ko yaha se bhejne ke baad AK firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar AK ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.





Next Morning, AK ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.





Pill Shop thi wo JIANG Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. AK 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.





“Aap aa gaye Young Master.”



“Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho.”





Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo AK ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo AK ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.





AK “Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna.”





Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye AK Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.





“All hail Young Master.”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha. Pill Shop JIANG Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.





Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Jain ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Jain ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.





“Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta.”



AK ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio AK ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.





Jai “Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai?”



Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein AK se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.





AK “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki Mu Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai.”



AK ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.



Jai “Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”





AK “don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada pill concoct kar sakta hai.”





Jai “ what? Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai,”



Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.



“kaha hai wo alchemist? Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge.”



Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.



AK “tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai.”



Apne fan ko fold karte huye AK khada ho gaya.



“what? Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho?”





Fat old man ne surprise hote huye AK se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.



AK “Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu.”



Hahhahahaha……





Jaise hi AK ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.





Jai ”Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho? Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein.”





AK “Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho’”





Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.



“agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo.”





AK “lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo.”



Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye AK aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne AK ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?





TO BE CONTINUED …….
 

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UPDATE 9:- Alchemist



AK “Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua?”



JAIN “aao andar chal ke baat karte hai.”



JAIN aur AK dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.





JAIN “AK tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai.”





{Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai.}



AK “Haa mujhe pata hai.”



AK ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo MU Family ho ya JIANG Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.





JAIN “Hamara Pill Concocting ka business MU Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai.”





JAIN ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.



AK “Father, exactly kya ho raha hai?”



JAIN “MU Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar MU Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega.”





AK ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin AK ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. AK apne past life ke experience ke sath easily MU Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.



AK “Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga.”



JAIN ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki AK Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai?





AK “Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai.”



AK ne ye bolte huye JAIN ko ek golden Paper de diya.



“Cultivation Skill”



JAIN ne surprise hote huye wo Paper AK ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.



“Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill”



Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt JAIN ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.





JAIN “AK tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki?”



JAIN bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.



Ye script AK ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein AK isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. JAIN ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.





AK “Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do.”





Agar JAIN abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.



Agar JAIN ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye AK ne JAIN ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.



JAIN bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.





AK “Father.”



AK ne jor se chillate huye JAIN ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. JAIN sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye JAIN ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.



JAIN “AK ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha.”





AK “Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho.”





JAIN “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha.”





JAIN ko yaha se bhejne ke baad AK firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar AK ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.





Next Morning, AK ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.





Pill Shop thi wo JIANG Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. AK 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.





“Aap aa gaye Young Master.”



“Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho.”





Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo AK ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo AK ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.





AK “Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna.”





Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye AK Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.





“All hail Young Master.”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha. Pill Shop JIANG Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.





Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Jain ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Jain ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.





“Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta.”



AK ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio AK ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.





Jai “Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai?”



Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein AK se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.





AK “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki Mu Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai.”



AK ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.



Jai “Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”





AK “don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada pill concoct kar sakta hai.”





Jai “ what? Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai,”



Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.



“kaha hai wo alchemist? Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge.”



Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.



AK “tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai.”



Apne fan ko fold karte huye AK khada ho gaya.



“what? Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho?”





Fat old man ne surprise hote huye AK se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.



AK “Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu.”



Hahhahahaha……





Jaise hi AK ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.





Jai ”Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho? Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein.”





AK “Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho’”





Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.



“agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo.”





AK “lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo.”



Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye AK aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne AK ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?





TO BE CONTINUED …….
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UPDATE 9:- Alchemist



AK “Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua?”



JAIN “aao andar chal ke baat karte hai.”



JAIN aur AK dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.





JAIN “AK tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai.”





{Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai.}



AK “Haa mujhe pata hai.”



AK ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo MU Family ho ya JIANG Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.





JAIN “Hamara Pill Concocting ka business MU Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai.”





JAIN ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.



AK “Father, exactly kya ho raha hai?”



JAIN “MU Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar MU Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega.”





AK ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin AK ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. AK apne past life ke experience ke sath easily MU Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.



AK “Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga.”



JAIN ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki AK Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai?





AK “Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai.”



AK ne ye bolte huye JAIN ko ek golden Paper de diya.



“Cultivation Skill”



JAIN ne surprise hote huye wo Paper AK ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.



“Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill”



Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt JAIN ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.





JAIN “AK tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki?”



JAIN bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.



Ye script AK ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein AK isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. JAIN ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.





AK “Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do.”





Agar JAIN abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.



Agar JAIN ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye AK ne JAIN ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.



JAIN bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.





AK “Father.”



AK ne jor se chillate huye JAIN ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. JAIN sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye JAIN ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.



JAIN “AK ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha.”





AK “Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho.”





JAIN “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha.”





JAIN ko yaha se bhejne ke baad AK firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar AK ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.





Next Morning, AK ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.





Pill Shop thi wo JIANG Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. AK 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.





“Aap aa gaye Young Master.”



“Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho.”





Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo AK ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo AK ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.





AK “Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna.”





Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye AK Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.





“All hail Young Master.”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha. Pill Shop JIANG Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.





Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Jain ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Jain ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.





“Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta.”



AK ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio AK ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.





Jai “Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai?”



Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein AK se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.





AK “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki Mu Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai.”



AK ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.



Jai “Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”





AK “don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada pill concoct kar sakta hai.”





Jai “ what? Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai,”



Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.



“kaha hai wo alchemist? Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge.”



Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.



AK “tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai.”



Apne fan ko fold karte huye AK khada ho gaya.



“what? Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho?”





Fat old man ne surprise hote huye AK se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.



AK “Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu.”



Hahhahahaha……





Jaise hi AK ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.





Jai ”Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho? Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein.”





AK “Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho’”





Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.



“agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo.”





AK “lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo.”



Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye AK aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne AK ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?





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AK “Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua?”



JAIN “aao andar chal ke baat karte hai.”



JAIN aur AK dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.





JAIN “AK tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai.”





{Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai.}



AK “Haa mujhe pata hai.”



AK ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo MU Family ho ya JIANG Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.





JAIN “Hamara Pill Concocting ka business MU Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai.”





JAIN ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.



AK “Father, exactly kya ho raha hai?”



JAIN “MU Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar MU Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega.”





AK ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin AK ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. AK apne past life ke experience ke sath easily MU Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.



AK “Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga.”



JAIN ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki AK Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai?





AK “Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai.”



AK ne ye bolte huye JAIN ko ek golden Paper de diya.



“Cultivation Skill”



JAIN ne surprise hote huye wo Paper AK ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.



“Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill”



Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt JAIN ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.





JAIN “AK tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki?”



JAIN bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.



Ye script AK ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein AK isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. JAIN ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.





AK “Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do.”





Agar JAIN abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.



Agar JAIN ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye AK ne JAIN ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.



JAIN bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.





AK “Father.”



AK ne jor se chillate huye JAIN ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. JAIN sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye JAIN ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.



JAIN “AK ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha.”





AK “Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho.”





JAIN “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha.”





JAIN ko yaha se bhejne ke baad AK firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar AK ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.





Next Morning, AK ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.





Pill Shop thi wo JIANG Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. AK 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.





“Aap aa gaye Young Master.”



“Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho.”





Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo AK ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo AK ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.





AK “Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna.”





Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye AK Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.





“All hail Young Master.”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha. Pill Shop JIANG Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.





Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Jain ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Jain ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.





“Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta.”



AK ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio AK ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.





Jai “Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai?”



Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein AK se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.





AK “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki Mu Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai.”



AK ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.



Jai “Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”





AK “don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada pill concoct kar sakta hai.”





Jai “ what? Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai,”



Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.



“kaha hai wo alchemist? Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge.”



Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.



AK “tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai.”



Apne fan ko fold karte huye AK khada ho gaya.



“what? Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho?”





Fat old man ne surprise hote huye AK se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.



AK “Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu.”



Hahhahahaha……





Jaise hi AK ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.





Jai ”Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho? Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein.”





AK “Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho’”





Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.



“agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo.”





AK “lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo.”



Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye AK aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne AK ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?





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AK “Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua?”



JAIN “aao andar chal ke baat karte hai.”



JAIN aur AK dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.





JAIN “AK tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai.”





{Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai.}



AK “Haa mujhe pata hai.”



AK ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo MU Family ho ya JIANG Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.





JAIN “Hamara Pill Concocting ka business MU Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai.”





JAIN ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.



AK “Father, exactly kya ho raha hai?”



JAIN “MU Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar MU Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega.”





AK ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin AK ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. AK apne past life ke experience ke sath easily MU Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.



AK “Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga.”



JAIN ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki AK Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai?





AK “Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai.”



AK ne ye bolte huye JAIN ko ek golden Paper de diya.



“Cultivation Skill”



JAIN ne surprise hote huye wo Paper AK ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.



“Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill”



Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt JAIN ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.





JAIN “AK tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki?”



JAIN bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.



Ye script AK ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein AK isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. JAIN ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.





AK “Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do.”





Agar JAIN abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.



Agar JAIN ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye AK ne JAIN ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.



JAIN bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.





AK “Father.”



AK ne jor se chillate huye JAIN ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. JAIN sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye JAIN ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.



JAIN “AK ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha.”





AK “Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho.”





JAIN “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha.”





JAIN ko yaha se bhejne ke baad AK firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar AK ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.





Next Morning, AK ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.





Pill Shop thi wo JIANG Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. AK 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.





“Aap aa gaye Young Master.”



“Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho.”





Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo AK ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo AK ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.





AK “Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna.”





Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye AK Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.





“All hail Young Master.”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha. Pill Shop JIANG Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.





Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Jain ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Jain ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.





“Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta.”



AK ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio AK ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.





Jai “Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai?”



Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein AK se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.





AK “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki Mu Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai.”



AK ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.



Jai “Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”





AK “don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada pill concoct kar sakta hai.”





Jai “ what? Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai,”



Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.



“kaha hai wo alchemist? Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge.”



Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.



AK “tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai.”



Apne fan ko fold karte huye AK khada ho gaya.



“what? Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho?”





Fat old man ne surprise hote huye AK se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.



AK “Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu.”



Hahhahahaha……





Jaise hi AK ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.





Jai ”Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho? Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein.”





AK “Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho’”





Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.



“agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo.”





AK “lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo.”



Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye AK aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne AK ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?





TO BE CONTINUED …….
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AK “Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua?”



JAIN “aao andar chal ke baat karte hai.”



JAIN aur AK dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.





JAIN “AK tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai.”





{Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai.}



AK “Haa mujhe pata hai.”



AK ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo MU Family ho ya JIANG Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.





JAIN “Hamara Pill Concocting ka business MU Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai.”





JAIN ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.



AK “Father, exactly kya ho raha hai?”



JAIN “MU Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar MU Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega.”





AK ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin AK ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. AK apne past life ke experience ke sath easily MU Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.



AK “Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga.”



JAIN ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki AK Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai?





AK “Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai.”



AK ne ye bolte huye JAIN ko ek golden Paper de diya.



“Cultivation Skill”



JAIN ne surprise hote huye wo Paper AK ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.



“Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill”



Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt JAIN ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.





JAIN “AK tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki?”



JAIN bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.



Ye script AK ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein AK isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. JAIN ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.





AK “Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do.”





Agar JAIN abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.



Agar JAIN ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye AK ne JAIN ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.



JAIN bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.





AK “Father.”



AK ne jor se chillate huye JAIN ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. JAIN sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye JAIN ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.



JAIN “AK ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha.”





AK “Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho.”





JAIN “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha.”





JAIN ko yaha se bhejne ke baad AK firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar AK ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.





Next Morning, AK ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.





Pill Shop thi wo JIANG Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. AK 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.





“Aap aa gaye Young Master.”



“Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho.”





Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo AK ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo AK ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.





AK “Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna.”





Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye AK Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.





“All hail Young Master.”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha. Pill Shop JIANG Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.





Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Jain ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Jain ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.





“Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta.”



AK ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio AK ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.





Jai “Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai?”



Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein AK se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.





AK “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki Mu Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai.”



AK ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.



Jai “Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”





AK “don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada pill concoct kar sakta hai.”





Jai “ what? Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai,”



Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.



“kaha hai wo alchemist? Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge.”



Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.



AK “tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai.”



Apne fan ko fold karte huye AK khada ho gaya.



“what? Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho?”





Fat old man ne surprise hote huye AK se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.



AK “Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu.”



Hahhahahaha……





Jaise hi AK ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.





Jai ”Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho? Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein.”





AK “Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho’”





Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.



“agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo.”





AK “lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo.”



Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye AK aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne AK ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?





TO BE CONTINUED …….
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