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Update:-1. ( AK )


AK ne apna sir uthaya aur mehsoos Kiya ki wo ek andhere, tutey huye kamre mein hai. Us kamre ki har diwar mein cracks they aur gate bahar se band tha. Usey andaja ho chuka tha ki uska kidnap ho Gaya hai.


AK ne gate ke doosri taraf kisi ki Bahar baat karte huye sauna.


"Brother yong, wo mayor Ka eklauta beta hai. Mayor usse bahut pyar karta hai, bhale hi wo useless hai. Agar mayor ko is baare mein pata Chala to hum barbaad ho jayenge."


Is room ke Bahar 2 strong ladke khade they, ek face chinta se bhara hua tha. Yeh Fragrant Sky city mein ek sunsaan jagah thi. Aam Dino mein Yaha koi aata jaata nahi tha.


"Darne ki koi baat nahi hai iske baare mein kisiko pata nahi chalega, mayor Ko bhi nahi. Iske alawa, is AK Ka khoon pine ke baad hum turant hi Fragrant Sky City chod denge. Shuang mujhe pata hai tum apni baaki ki jindagi kisi looser ki Tarah nahi nikalana chahte."


Yong ne ye baat shuang Ko ek cruel face ke sath kahi.


Yong ki baat sunne ke baad Shuang ke face se chinta ke bhaaw chale gaye, aur ab Uske face pe bhi same cruelty aa gayi thi jo Yong ke face pe thi.


Shuang "jab se AK paida hua hai, tabse usey kayi Tarah ki achi pills di gayi hai, lekin wo abhi bhi QI JING Realm ke 1st stage pe hi hai. Lekin wo pills agar humey di gayi Hoti to hum abhi QI HAI Realm tak pahuch gaye hotey. Yaha tak ki MORTAL CORE Realm mein pahuchna bhi impossible nahi Hota."


Yong " wo pills uspar barbaad ho gayi hai, kyu na wo humey in Sab Ka Anand lene de. Chalo koi nahi 3 din aur wait karte hai. Jab CLEANSING PILL uski body ki sabhi Impurities ko saaf Kar dengi, Uske baad hum uska khoon piyenge aur apni strength badhayenge."


AK ne undono ki poori baat sun li thi aur ye Sab baate sunne ke baad AK ke face pe Uske pichle janam ki yaade samane aa gayi AUR Uske face pe bhi ek cruel smile aa gayi.


AK " Dreaming about drinking my blood :D "



AK ne apni yaadast pe jor Diya aur usne paya ki Bahar 2 log kon they! Ye dono hi mayor ke mansion ke Guards they. AUR dono hi usey nuksaan pahuchane aur uska khoon piney ke sapne dekh rahe they.


AK ke face darr aur chinta ke koi bhaaw nahi they, past mein ek Greatest SAINT hone ki wajah se usne countless dangerous battle ladi thi, iske alawa uski body ki impurities Ko dur karne ke liye jo pills Di gayi thi, Uske proper effective hone mein 3 din Ka time tha. 3 Din baad Uske pass ek opportunity hogi fight back karne ki.



Bahar ke dono Guards ko ignore karte huye AK ne apni body ko janchana Suru Kar Diya aur apni body ke apndar itni saari PILLS ki Dekh Kar wo excited ho Gaya.



AK" Is body Ka Father Apne bete Ko achi PILLS khilana janta haï lekin ye nahi janta ki Uske bete ki body itni saari PILLS ko absorb nahi Kar sakti.
Saari PILLS is body mein jama ho gayi hai, thode din baad ye body khatam ho jaati. Lekin mere liye ye body aur PILLS kamaal ki hai."



AK apni jagah pe uth ke baith Gaya. Wo apni past life mein ek Greatest SAINT tha, Uske liye in PILLS ko Absorb Karna baaye hath Ka khel tha.


AK" In dono Guards ne mujhe CLEANSING PILL bhi khilayi hai, lekin ye in high level PILLS par koi asar nahi karengi"


Thodi der usne apni past life ki memories check ki aur usey ek aisi skill Yaad aayi jo kisi bhi PILLS ki Puri strength ko absorb Kar sakti hai, aur usne wo skill use Karni Suru Kar di.


Jaise hi AK ne apni skill use Karni start Kari waise hi, Uske ander stored PILLS ki power uski body ke chaaro taraf ghumne lagi, aur uski body badi tezi se us power ko absorb karne lagi.


PILLS ne uski body, blood, skin, bones ko refine Karna Suru Kar diya, Sab Kuch refine ho Raha tha sath-2 CLEANSING PILL ne bhi apna kaam start Kar diya tha jiski wajah se AK ki body ki IMPURITIES bhi khatam hone lagi thi.



Pichle 10 Saal mein usne jitni bhi PILLS khayi thi, wo bahut hi strong thi. AK ki body kisi bhi Treasure se Kam nahi thi. Isme koi surprise nahi tha ki ye 2 Guards usey nuksaan pahuchana chahte hai.



AK ke face pe ek smile thi ye PILLS lagataar Uski body ko refine kiye jaa rahi thi, usey Strong Bana rahi thi.


Level Up! AK QI JING REALM ke 2nd stage pe pahuch Gaya tha. Keval ek ghante mein usne BREAKTHROUGH Kar liya tha.



QI JING REALM 3rd stage, 4th stage, 5th stage mein BREAKTHROUGH Kar liye tha AK ne sirf ek din mein.


Uski body mein bhut saari PILLS jama thi, bhale hi wo QI JING REALM ke 5th stage pe pahuch Gaya tha lekin abhi tak usne sirf half hi PILLS use ki thi.



Bahar ki taraf Yong AUR Shuang excited ho rahe they, aur badi hi besabri se 3 din pure hone ka intezaar kar rahe they.


Shuang " Brother Yong, Pura 1 din ho Gaya hai, kya humey usey abhi marke uska blood le lena Chahiye, aur Yaha se nikal jaana chahiye ?"


Yong "Nahi abhi uski body mein IMPURITIES hai Jo ki 3 din mein khatam hogi, tab tak humey wait karna hoga."


Room ke andar, AK abhi bhi meditation pose mein baitha tha aur Level Up hone pe enjoy Kar raha tha. SAINT ORIGIN UNIVERSE mein har koi Martial Arts practice karta tha, ek Baar koi human QI JING REALM KE 9th stage pe pahuch jaaye to wo apni DANTIAN mein QI HAI banane mein able ho jaate hai. QI HAI REALM pahuchne ke baad aate hai MORTAL CORE REALM, THE HEAVENLY CORE REALM, and THE DIVINE CORE REALM. Log inhe FOUNDATION 5 Levels bhi kehte hai.



QI JING REALM 5th stage pe pahuchne ke baad bhi AK nahi ruka, wo lagataar PILLS ko refine kiye jaa raha tha, halanki Level Up hone ki Speed ab kaafi slow ho gayi thi.


2 Din baad, AK ne Apne andar ki saari PILLS ko refine Kar liya tha aur 8th Level ke peak par pahuch Gaya tha. Keval ek step dur tha 9th Level ke.


AK " Maine 3 din mein 8th level ke peak tak BREAKTHROUGH Kar liya hai, Lagta hai is body ki yahi limit hai."



AK bilkul saant Sikh Raha tha, agar Yaha koi dusra person hota jisne 3 din mein 1st Level se 8th level tak BREAKTHROUGH Kiya ho, to uski khusi Ka koi thikana nahi hota. Lekin AK ke liye ek Sab normal tha usne apni past Life mein isse bhi Jada Kiya tha. Sach kahu to wo apni past life mein ek MONSTER ya DEVIL se Kam nahi tha.


" Haha, khoon pine Ka samay aa Gaya hai."


Jaise hi room Ka gate open hua waise hi usne dono Guards ko haste huye ye kehte huye suna, Jo Kuch hi moments mein AK ke saamne aa gaye they.



AK niche se utha aur bina ek bhi second gawaye usne apni QI ko dono Hatho mein flow karwaya AUR dono Guards ke pait mein punch had diye. Wo dono Kuch samajh paate isse pehle wo dono pich ki taraf udte huye gire.


Wo dono beshak Mayor ke Mansion ke Guards they lekin unka level abhi tak sirf 6th hi tha, isliye wo AK ke koi match nahi they.


AK apni back se dhool jhadte huye un dono Guards ki taraf chal pada, usey pata tha ki Uske punch mein kitni takat hai ab wo dono nahi uthenge. Yong aur Shuang dono niche pait pakadar pade they, unki aankho mein dar aur surprise ke mile Jule bhaaw they.



"Impossible, tum level one pe they, tum 3 din mein Level 8th pe kaise aa sakte ho?"


Yong chaunk Gaya tha, Mayor ke mansion ke Guard ke roop mein wo AK ko ache se janta tha, AK ek useless person tha Jo nature se bhi acha nahi tha, wo Apne Father ki power Ka galat istemaal karta tha, wo Apne Father ke bina Kuch nahi tha, lekin ab Ka haal Dekh ke dono Guards ko apni aankho pe vishwas nahi ho Raha tha. Unhe lag Raha tha Jaise unke saamne koi different person khada hai.



AK " Tum dono ki himmat kaise huyi Mera kidnap karne ki, mujhe batao tumhe aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha tha"



AK ne Yong ki aur ghoor ke Dekha, wo koi pagal nahi tha AK ko pata tha ye low level Guards Kabhi bhi usko harm nahi pahucha sakte, jab tak koi inse aisa karne ko na kahe.


Yong "nahi-2 humey aisa karne ke liye kisi ne nahi kaha, wo to hum dono hi they Jo apka blood Pina chahte they. "


AK "kyuki tum mujhe sach nahi batana chahte ho to, ab tumhe koi doosra mauka nahi milega."



AK ne itna bolke ek step aage liya aur apni QI ko Apne hath mein flow karwate huye Yong ke skull ke upper pure force se strike Kiya, jisse Yong ki skull explode ho Gayi aur uska blood kisi fountain ki tarah Bahar nikalne laga Jo ki AK ke upper bhi gir Raha tha.


AK "Main doosra mauka nahi deta."


AK aise behave Kar Raha tha Jaise Kuch hua hi na ho, usne apni past life mein isse bhi Jada bloody death Dekhi thi, isliye usey koi farak Nahi pad Raha tha.


Shuang ko Apne sir pe maut mandrati nazar aa rahi thi, wo koi brave person Nahi tha na hi usne aisa scene Kabhi Dekha tha. Uska chehra pila pad chuka tha aur wo dar ke maare kaamp Raha tha.



AK "ab tumhari baari, tum batao aisa karne ke liye kisne kaha tha?"


AK ne Shuang ki taraf mudte huye pucha.



Shuang " no-one Master, kisi ne bhi Nahi kaha, please meri jindagi baksh dijiye."


Shuang ko bhut dar lag Raha tha, Jo Uske saamne khada tha wo usey Kahi se bhi uska Young Master Nahi lag Raha tha. Jis Tarah se AK ne yang ko maara wo bhut cruel tha.


AK "Abhi bhi sach Nahi batana chahte ho, koi baat Nahi main tumhe Nahi maarunga. Mujhe ek technique pata hai jisse jab tak Heart stop na ho tab tak person ki death Nahi Hoti, main ye technique tumpe use karunga, fir tumhari dono aankhey, kidney, liver Bahar nikal lunga, tumhar dono hath kaat dunga AUR dono legs alag Kar dunga body se. Tab main tumhe tumhari body ke andar Ka ek ek part nikal ke dikhaunga, Uske baad main tumhar Heart nikalunga, agar tum strong huye to apna dhadakta hua Heart Dekh paaoge."


Itna kehne ke baad AK ke face pe evil smile aa Gayi AUR wo Shuang ki taraf badha hi tha ki.


Shuang "batata hu batata hu"


Shuang ke puri body se pasine nikalne lage they, usey AK ki aankho mein sirf death dikh rahi thi aur AK ek Devil.


AK "jaldi karo, mere patience Ka test mat lo"



Shuang "young Master ne humey ye Sab karne ke liye kaha tha aur unhone hi humey CLEANSING PILL Di thi."


"LONG"


AK ki memories mein ye naam familiar tha. Ye LONG AK ke Father Ka sautela beta tha. Kyuki AK bachpan se kamjor tha to Uske Father ne LoNG ko adopt Kar liye tha. Lekin AK ki memories mein LONG hamesa se AK ki Care karta tha chahe AK Kuch bhi Kare AUR wo hamesa se AK Ki har sahi galat kaam mein help karta tha.



AK "LONG Mujhe kyu maarna Chahta hai?"



Shuang " Mayor ne apko itni kimti PILLS khilayi hai, isliye LONG jealous hai aapse aur wo nafrat karta haï aapse. Agar aapko Kuch ho jaata hai to JIANG Family Ka ek-matr sakshm Leader ban Jayega wo. AUR sabse badi baat kal MU Family aur JIANG Family ke bich engagement day hai. Agar aap mar jaoge to wo MU Family ki beti se Shaadi Kar payega."


Shuang ne dar ke maare AK ko Sab Kuch bata Diya.


AK "to ye baat hai."


AK ke face ek gambhir smile thi. MU Family Fragrant Sky City ki ek powerful Family hai. Wo business industry mein to number one pe they. Yaha tak ki Mayor bhi unhe sidhe-2 provoke Nahi Kar sakte they. Aur agar JIANG FAMILY aur MU Family ek doosre ke Saath connection Bana rahe hai, to ye bahut badi beneficial baat thi dono Families ke liye.



LONG bhut hi tez aur cunning hai, agar wo AK se Bada hota to ab tak AK mar chuka hota. Lekin ab situation bilkul different hai, The GREATEST SAINT ab is body ke andar hai, LONG ko ab sirf DEATH hi milegi aur Kuch nahi.


Shuang "young Master ab to Maine aapko Sab Kuch bata Diya hai, ab to Mujhe maaf Kar dijiye"


Shuang AK ke pairo mein girke gidgidane laga.
AK ne usey niche se uthaya aur uski chest mein hath daalke uska Heart Bahar nikal liye jo abhi beat ho Raha tha, ye usne itni fast Kiya tha ki Shuang ki body ki feel tak Nahi hua, Lekin Kuch hi second mein uski body niche gir Gayi aur AK ne wo Heart wahi Gira Diya.


AK "Kar Diya maaf."






TO BE CONTINUED....
Jaberjast Start Ak bhai. 2nd update ka besabri se intjar rhega.
 
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AK bhai apse ek request h ki is story me koin koin se realm and cultivation stage hai usko ek post me front page me update de do.
jis prakar Jay sutar Bhai ne kiya hai. isse readers ko aasani hoga.
Waiting for next update
 
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AK bhai apse ek request h ki is story me koin koin se realm and cultivation stage hai usko ek post me front page me update de do.
jis prakar Jay sutar Bhai ne kiya hai. isse readers ko aasani hoga.
Waiting for next update
De to du lekin sab kuch pehle se bata ke maza nahi aayega. Sath sath batata rahunga to yaad bhi rahega sabko
 

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Update:- 2. (I won't do it, do it yourself)


Un do Guards ko maarne ke baad AK ne apna sir Aakash ki taraf uthaya aur mehsoos Kiya ki der ho chuki hai. Wo chalet huye compound se bahar aaya aur chaaro taraf nazar ghumayi jaha sirf dessert tha, aur ek ajeeb si smell pure area mein failli huyi thi.



Uski memories ke anusaar ye area Fragrant Sky City ka sabse durgam AUR sunsaan area tha. Aam Dino mein Yaha koi nahi aata jaata hai.



AK " Main Apni past life mein ek bahut strong person tha, isliye is life mein kisi weakling ki Tarah Nahi rahunga. Mera pichla janam bit Gaya, lekin Jo Gaya so gaya. Kyuki ab main is body main hu toh, ab se tum main hu AUR main tum. Tumhari family meri family, tumhare enemy mere enemy. Future mein hum Saath badhenge.


Aur AK itna kehke ek smile ke sath us dessert ki taraf badh Gaya.


Mayor ke mansion mein 3 din se koraham Macha hua tha jabse AK gayab tha. Halanki jo Purana AK tha wo aisi buri harkate karta rehta tha, lekin wo Kabhi bhi 3 din se jada gayab Nahi hua tha.


AK Mayor ka eklauta beta tha. Halanki ek bhi din aisa Nahi guzra tha jab Mayor usey daantte na ho, lekin wo ander se usey sabse jyada pyar karte they. Koi bhi ye baat asaani se bata Sakta haï ye Dekh ke, ki kitni saari mehngi PILLS unhone AK ko khilayi hai.



Mayor mansion ke sabhi guard 3 din se Apne Young Master ko dhund rahe they, unhone 3 din mein Puri city Ka ek ek Kona Dekh liya tha lekin AK Ka koi naamo nishaan Nahi tha. Aant mein Mayor ne sabhi Guards ko order de Diya tha ki, agar sunset se pehle AK Nahi Mila to kisi bhi Guard wapas lautne ki jarurat Nahi hai.



Jis sunsaan jagah pe AK ko kaid Karke rakha tha waha Guards Ka group aaya tha saari City dhundhne ke baad.


Guard 1 "young Master humey Kabhi bhi chain se jinne Nahi dete, wo Kahi na Kahi kisi jagah enjoy Kar rahe honge aur suffer humey Karna pad Raha hai. Maine pure din se Kuch Nahi khaya hai."


Guard 2 " shikayat Karna band karo, Young Master Mayor ke eklaute bete hai. Kal MU Family ke sath engagement ki date hai aur tab tak humne unhe nahi dhundha to humare sath acha Nahi hoga."


Guard 1 "Young Master kabhi bhi aisi sunsaan jagah pe nahi aayenge, hum apna time kharab kar rahe hai. Ruko aage koi hai."


Guard 1 ne unki taraf safed kapdo mein ek person ko aate dekha.


"Young Master"


Guard 1 aankho mein shocking expression lete huye chillaya. Usne apni aankhe malli aur firse us person ki taraf dekha jo ki unka Young Master hi tha. Saare Guards bhut jada khus ho gaye jaise unke saamne unka young Master nahi balki un sabka baap hi khada ho.


Kuch guard AK ki taraf daud pade, bhale hi wo ye nahi jaante they ki unka young Master yaha kya kar raha hai, unhe bas ek baat se fark padta tha ki unka Young Master ek dum sahi salamat hai.



AK " Chang, tum sab yaha kyu ho ?"


Guard 1 ka naam Chang tha, jisey sayad AK janta tha.


Chang "Young Master, akhirkar humne aap ko dhundh hi liya, agar aap nahi milte to Mayor humey jaan se maar dete."


AK ke face pe thode shocking expression they, lekin wo sab kuch samajh gya tha ki, uske 3 din se laapata hone pe ye sab ho raha hai. Aur ye log thik se soye bhi nahi hai.


Apne Father ke baare mein sochte huye, jinse abhi usey milna tha, usey thodi khusi mehsoos ho rahi thi. Beshak wo apne pichle jiwan mein ek Saint tha lekin uska na koi Friend tha, aur na hi koi Family, isliye ye sab AK ke liye ye sab naya tha aur isiliye wo khus tha.



AK "dekho main bilkul sahi hu aur tumhe bhi ab marna nahi padega, isliye jaldi mansion chalo"



Chang "Young Master, jaldi se is horse pe baith jaiye"


Chang jaldi se apna horse AK ke paas le gaya.


AK " mujhe iski jaroorat nahi hai. Main khud hi chala jaunga. Tum sabne khoob mehnat ki hai isliye Mansion pahuchte hi tum sab treasury se 10 Gold coins collect kar sakte ho."



What 10 Gold coins? AK ne ye baat aise kahi thi jaise ye kuch bhi na ho, lekin sabhi guard uski ye baat sunke sakhte mein chale gaye they. 10 Gold Coins... Unki Monthly salary sirf 10 Silver Coins thi. Aise main unka ye reaction lazmi tha.


AK ek Greatest Saint tha aur usko money ki parwah nahi thi nahi koi chinta thi, uske liye money pairo ki dhool tha. Lekin Guards ke liye to jaise unka Future hi Bright ho gaya ho.


"Young Master ko kya hua? Yeh unka style bilkul bhi nahi hai. Young Master kabse itne Generous ho gaye? Wo Horse pe ride bhi nahi kar rahe hai? Air jab se mile tab se unhe ek baar bhi nahi daanta hai, jo ki wo humesa karte hai. 3 din gayab hone se Young Master ek different person mein change ho gaye hai."



Ye saare question sabhi Guards ke mann mein they lekin puchne ki himmat kisi ki bhi nahi thi.


Chang " Chalo chale, jaldi karo aur Young Master ko follow karo"


Chang is surprise se ubharne wala pehla person tha, baki sab bhi uski baat sunke AK ko follow karne lage. Wo sab bhi Walk hi kar rahe they, jab unka Young Master hi Walk kar raha ho to unme itni himmat kaha ki wo Horse pe baith sake.


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Mayor Mansion ke Main hall mein ek adhed umar ka takatwar aadmi chinta mein idhar - idhar tehel raha tha, usne ek Golden colour ka silk robe pehen rakha tha aur wo bhut hi mascular tha uski hieght bhi 7 feet thi, ye aur koi nahi balki Fragrant Sky City ka Mayor JAIN tha.



"Father aap tension na le, guards jald hi AK ko dhundh lenge"



Mayor ke bagal mein ek handsome sa ladka khada tha white robe pehne, jiski age 18 hogi. Ek hi nazar mein koi bhi ye bata sakta hai ki ye koi ordinary ladka nahi hai. Uske face pe dukh saaf dekha jaa sakta tha, lekin ander se wo bhut khus tha.



JAIN "ye bigdail ladka mujhe kabhi bhi shaanti se nahi rehne dega, agar uske paas tumhari ability ka half hissa bhi hota to main khusi mein nahi samata."


"Young Master is back"


Ek Guard ne bhaagte huye ek news pure mansion mein faila di.


"What"


LONG lagbhag jor se chillaya, uske face ke expression pure change ho gaye they.



JAIN ne ispe koi dhyan nahi diya, wo andar se relieve mehsoos kar raha tha, lekin wo zor se chillaya.


JAIN "Usey jaldi se yaha pe aane ke liye kaho"



Guard ne yeh sense kar liya tha ki Mayor apna temper kabhi bhi kho dega, isliye usne araam se kaha.


Guard "Mayor, Young Master ne kaha hai ki wo bhut thak gaye hai, isliye wo apne room mein rest karenge aur aapse kal milenge."



JAIN "What the hell! Is ladke ke manners kaha hai?"



JAIN ne us Guard ko ghurte huye kaha.


LONG "Dad, lagta hai AK sach mein thaka hua hai, aur waise bhi kal MU Family ke sath engagement ka din hai to usey aap rest karne de."



JAIN " LONG, humesa uski side mat liya karo wo nalayak bahut bigad raha hai."



LONG "Dad aap gussa mat kijiye, main usse baat kar lunga."


JAIN "Ye thik rahega, tum uspe nazar rakhoge ki wo kahi aur na nikal jaaye, kal tak wo apne yard se bahar nahi jaana chahiye. Main nahi chahta kal ke din kuch bhi bura ho."



JAIN ye bolte hi Main hall se bahar nikal gaya.


Mayor ka Mansion bhut hi bade area mein failla hua tha, isliye AK aur LONG ke pass khud ke chote-2 Mansion they. Apne dono hath apne back side pe bandhe AK moon ko nihar raha tha, waha khada hoke wo kisi ka intezaar kar raha tha jo usey pata ki wo aayega.



Mansion ke Gate se AK ko LONG andar aata hua dikhayi diyo, jo AK ko sahi salamat dekh ke bhut jyada gussa tha lekin ye wo bilkul bhi show nahi kar raha tha.



"Useless peasants, unhone is bastard ko jinda kaise aane diya."


Ye baat LONG apne mann mein soch raha tha, kuch hi second mein wo AK ke paas aa gaya aur uske face expression aisa they jaise wo AK se bhut pyar karta ho.



LONG "Brother tum 3 din se kaha they? Tumhe pata hai main kitna worried tha?"


"Brother"


Aur itna kehte hi AK ne LONG ke upper jump laga di aur uske gale lag gaya aur uski aankho se aansu behne lage jo LONG ke kandhe pe gir rahe they.



LONG "Brother kya hua? Tumhare sath kuch karne ki kisne sochi, mujhe batao main tumhara badla jaroor lunga"



AK "Wo 2 Guards Yong aur Shuang mujhe maarna chahte they."


AK ne ye baat banawati gusse se boli aur LONG se alag ho gaya. LONG bhi ye do naam sunke chauk gaya lekin fir gusse mein aake bola..


LONG "Unki tumhare sath aisa karne ki himmat kaise huyi? Unhe main jaan se maar dunga."



AK "Brother, wo ab mar chuke hai."


AK usse baate karte huye uske expression ko dekh raha tha, wo uske true colour dekhna chahta tha. Lekin LONG apni feeling aur expression ko bhut ache dhange se chupa raha tha. Agar pehle wala AK hota to wo fas jaata lekin Ab wale AK ki aankhe bhut tez thi wo har cheez saaf dekh paa raha tha ki LONG ke mann mein kya chal raha hai.


LONG "wo dono mar mar gaye? Tumne unhe kaisa maara wo dono QI JING Realm ke 6th Level pe they?"


AK "majak mat karo brother, main ek useless cultivatior hu, muskil Level 1st pe aaya hu, bhala main unhe kaise mar sakta hu? Wo to kisi Master ne mujhe kidnap dekh liya aur unhone un dono ke maar ke mujhe aazad kar diya, main jo shaksh iske piche hai uska naam janana chahta tha lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi, main to unhe reward dena chahta tha, lekin unhone mana kar diya aur gayab ho gaye waha se."



LONG "Fuck! Kya kismat hai iski?"


LONG ne apne mann chillate huye ye kaha, usey is baat pe yakeen ho gaya tha ki AK sach bol raha hai, jaroor kisi ne help ki warna AK to useless hai wo khud se kuch nahi kar sakta. LONG ko bhi rahat mehsoos huyi kyuki uska naam saamne nahi aaya tha. Aage chal ke bhut se mauke aayenge AK ko maarne ke isliye wo shaant ho gaya.


LONG "yeh to achi baat hai ki wo dono mar gaye, aur tum bina kisi nuksaan ke laut aaye, agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mujhe jindagi bhar afsos rehta ki main tumhe protect nahi kar paaya."



LONG ke face pe aisa concerned look dekh ke AK ko vomit karne ka mann kar raha tha.


AK "My brother is best."



AK ne bhi aisa dikhaya ki jaise uske jaisa bhai puri duniya main koi nahi hai.



LONG "aisa mat kaho, hum dono brothers hai. Kal MU Family ke sath marriage engagement ka din hai. Tumhe tyar hona padega, ye puri life time opportunity hai. Agar tum MU Family ki daughter se shaadi karte ho to ye hamari Family ke liye achi baat hogi."



LONG ne AK ke kandhe pe apna hath rakhte huye ye baat kahi.



AK "Unki beti se shaadi karu, Count me out!"


LONG "Brother ye decision tumpe nahi hai, Father ne bhut kuch arrange kiya hai kal ke liye, tum aisa nahi kar sakte."



AK "main bilkul serious hu mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata MU Family ki daughter dikhti kaisi hai. Ye kisi joke se kam nahi hai. Aur main abhi bhi Young hu. Agar koi best candidate hai marriage ke liye to wo aap hai. Aap bhi Mayor ke son hai aur mujhe bade bhi hai, main aapse pehle shaadi nahi kar sakta. 'I won't do it, do it yourself'."


AK apne decison pe bilkul khara tha. AK ki explanation ko sunne ke baad LONG ko pehli baar aisa laga jaise uske useless brother ne koi Usefull kaam kar diya ho. Halanki AK ko maarne ka ek ye bhi kaaran tha ki wo MU Family ki daughter se Shaadi karle to fir uska dono Family mein status high ho jayega.




TO BE CONTINUED....
 
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Un do Guards ko maarne ke baad AK ne apna sir Aakash ki taraf uthaya aur mehsoos Kiya ki der ho chuki hai. Wo chalet huye compound se bahar aaya aur chaaro taraf nazar ghumayi jaha sirf dessert tha, aur ek ajeeb si smell pure area mein failli huyi thi.



Uski memories ke anusaar ye area Fragrant Sky City ka sabse durgam AUR sunsaan area tha. Aam Dino mein Yaha koi nahi aata jaata hai.



AK " Main Apni past life mein ek bahut strong person tha, isliye is life mein kisi weakling ki Tarah Nahi rahunga. Mera pichla janam bit Gaya, lekin Jo Gaya so gaya. Kyuki ab main is body main hu toh, ab se tum main hu AUR main tum. Tumhari family meri family, tumhare enemy mere enemy. Future mein hum Saath badhenge.


Aur AK itna kehke ek smile ke sath us dessert ki taraf badh Gaya.


Mayor ke mansion mein 3 din se koraham Macha hua tha jabse AK gayab tha. Halanki jo Purana AK tha wo aisi buri harkate karta rehta tha, lekin wo Kabhi bhi 3 din se jada gayab Nahi hua tha.


AK Mayor ka eklauta beta tha. Halanki ek bhi din aisa Nahi guzra tha jab Mayor usey daantte na ho, lekin wo ander se usey sabse jyada pyar karte they. Koi bhi ye baat asaani se bata Sakta haï ye Dekh ke, ki kitni saari mehngi PILLS unhone AK ko khilayi hai.



Mayor mansion ke sabhi guard 3 din se Apne Young Master ko dhund rahe they, unhone 3 din mein Puri city Ka ek ek Kona Dekh liya tha lekin AK Ka koi naamo nishaan Nahi tha. Aant mein Mayor ne sabhi Guards ko order de Diya tha ki, agar sunset se pehle AK Nahi Mila to kisi bhi Guard wapas lautne ki jarurat Nahi hai.



Jis sunsaan jagah pe AK ko kaid Karke rakha tha waha Guards Ka group aaya tha saari City dhundhne ke baad.


Guard 1 "young Master humey Kabhi bhi chain se jinne Nahi dete, wo Kahi na Kahi kisi jagah enjoy Kar rahe honge aur suffer humey Karna pad Raha hai. Maine pure din se Kuch Nahi khaya hai."


Guard 2 " shikayat Karna band karo, Young Master Mayor ke eklaute bete hai. Kal MU Family ke sath engagement ki date hai aur tab tak humne unhe nahi dhundha to humare sath acha Nahi hoga."


Guard 1 "Young Master kabhi bhi aisi sunsaan jagah pe nahi aayenge, hum apna time kharab kar rahe hai. Ruko aage koi hai."


Guard 1 ne unki taraf safed kapdo mein ek person ko aate dekha.


"Young Master"


Guard 1 aankho mein shocking expression lete huye chillaya. Usne apni aankhe malli aur firse us person ki taraf dekha jo ki unka Young Master hi tha. Saare Guards bhut jada khus ho gaye jaise unke saamne unka young Master nahi balki un sabka baap hi khada ho.


Kuch guard AK ki taraf daud pade, bhale hi wo ye nahi jaante they ki unka young Master yaha kya kar raha hai, unhe bas ek baat se fark padta tha ki unka Young Master ek dum sahi salamat hai.



AK " Chang, tum sab yaha kyu ho ?"


Guard 1 ka naam Chang tha, jisey sayad AK janta tha.


Chang "Young Master, akhirkar humne aap ko dhundh hi liya, agar aap nahi milte to Mayor humey jaan se maar dete."


AK ke face pe thode shocking expression they, lekin wo sab kuch samajh gya tha ki, uske 3 din se laapata hone pe ye sab ho raha hai. Aur ye log thik se soye bhi nahi hai.


Apne Father ke baare mein sochte huye, jinse abhi usey milna tha, usey thodi khusi mehsoos ho rahi thi. Beshak wo apne pichle jiwan mein ek Saint tha lekin uska na koi Friend tha, aur na hi koi Family, isliye ye sab AK ke liye ye sab naya tha aur isiliye wo khus tha.



AK "dekho main bilkul sahi hu aur tumhe bhi ab marna nahi padega, isliye jaldi mansion chalo"



Chang "Young Master, jaldi se is horse pe baith jaiye"


Chang jaldi se apna horse AK ke paas le gaya.


AK " mujhe iski jaroorat nahi hai. Main khud hi chala jaunga. Tum sabne khoob mehnat ki hai isliye Mansion pahuchte hi tum sab treasury se 10 Gold coins collect kar sakte ho."



What 10 Gold coins? AK ne ye baat aise kahi thi jaise ye kuch bhi na ho, lekin sabhi guard uski ye baat sunke sakhte mein chale gaye they. 10 Gold Coins... Unki Monthly salary sirf 10 Silver Coins thi. Aise main unka ye reaction lazmi tha.


AK ek Greatest Saint tha aur usko money ki parwah nahi thi nahi koi chinta thi, uske liye money pairo ki dhool tha. Lekin Guards ke liye to jaise unka Future hi Bright ho gaya ho.


"Young Master ko kya hua? Yeh unka style bilkul bhi nahi hai. Young Master kabse itne Generous ho gaye? Wo Horse pe ride bhi nahi kar rahe hai? Air jab se mile tab se unhe ek baar bhi nahi daanta hai, jo ki wo humesa karte hai. 3 din gayab hone se Young Master ek different person mein change ho gaye hai."



Ye saare question sabhi Guards ke mann mein they lekin puchne ki himmat kisi ki bhi nahi thi.


Chang " Chalo chale, jaldi karo aur Young Master ko follow karo"


Chang is surprise se ubharne wala pehla person tha, baki sab bhi uski baat sunke AK ko follow karne lage. Wo sab bhi Walk hi kar rahe they, jab unka Young Master hi Walk kar raha ho to unme itni himmat kaha ki wo Horse pe baith sake.


*******



Mayor Mansion ke Main hall mein ek adhed umar ka takatwar aadmi chinta mein idhar - idhar tehel raha tha, usne ek Golden colour ka silk robe pehen rakha tha aur wo bhut hi mascular tha uski hieght bhi 7 feet thi, ye aur koi nahi balki Fragrant Sky City ka Mayor JAIN tha.



"Father aap tension na le, guards jald hi AK ko dhundh lenge"



Mayor ke bagal mein ek handsome sa ladka khada tha white robe pehne, jiski age 18 hogi. Ek hi nazar mein koi bhi ye bata sakta hai ki ye koi ordinary ladka nahi hai. Uske face pe dukh saaf dekha jaa sakta tha, lekin ander se wo bhut khus tha.



JAIN "ye bigdail ladka mujhe kabhi bhi shaanti se nahi rehne dega, agar uske paas tumhari ability ka half hissa bhi hota to main khusi mein nahi samata."


"Young Master is back"


Ek Guard ne bhaagte huye ek news pure mansion mein faila di.


"What"


LONG lagbhag jor se chillaya, uske face ke expression pure change ho gaye they.



JAIN ne ispe koi dhyan nahi diya, wo andar se relieve mehsoos kar raha tha, lekin wo zor se chillaya.


JAIN "Usey jaldi se yaha pe aane ke liye kaho"



Guard ne yeh sense kar liya tha ki Mayor apna temper kabhi bhi kho dega, isliye usne araam se kaha.


Guard "Mayor, Young Master ne kaha hai ki wo bhut thak gaye hai, isliye wo apne room mein rest karenge aur aapse kal milenge."



JAIN "What the hell! Is ladke ke manners kaha hai?"



JAIN ne us Guard ko ghurte huye kaha.


LONG "Dad, lagta hai AK sach mein thaka hua hai, aur waise bhi kal MU Family ke sath engagement ka din hai to usey aap rest karne de."



JAIN " LONG, humesa uski side mat liya karo wo nalayak bahut bigad raha hai."



LONG "Dad aap gussa mat kijiye, main usse baat kar lunga."


JAIN "Ye thik rahega, tum uspe nazar rakhoge ki wo kahi aur na nikal jaaye, kal tak wo apne yard se bahar nahi jaana chahiye. Main nahi chahta kal ke din kuch bhi bura ho."



JAIN ye bolte hi Main hall se bahar nikal gaya.


Mayor ka Mansion bhut hi bade area mein failla hua tha, isliye AK aur LONG ke pass khud ke chote-2 Mansion they. Apne dono hath apne back side pe bandhe AK moon ko nihar raha tha, waha khada hoke wo kisi ka intezaar kar raha tha jo usey pata ki wo aayega.



Mansion ke Gate se AK ko LONG andar aata hua dikhayi diyo, jo AK ko sahi salamat dekh ke bhut jyada gussa tha lekin ye wo bilkul bhi show nahi kar raha tha.



"Useless peasants, unhone is bastard ko jinda kaise aane diya."


Ye baat LONG apne mann mein soch raha tha, kuch hi second mein wo AK ke paas aa gaya aur uske face expression aisa they jaise wo AK se bhut pyar karta ho.



LONG "Brother tum 3 din se kaha they? Tumhe pata hai main kitna worried tha?"


"Brother"


Aur itna kehte hi AK ne LONG ke upper jump laga di aur uske gale lag gaya aur uski aankho se aansu behne lage jo LONG ke kandhe pe gir rahe they.



LONG "Brother kya hua? Tumhare sath kuch karne ki kisne sochi, mujhe batao main tumhara badla jaroor lunga"



AK "Wo 2 Guards Yong aur Shuang mujhe maarna chahte they."


AK ne ye baat banawati gusse se boli aur LONG se alag ho gaya. LONG bhi ye do naam sunke chauk gaya lekin fir gusse mein aake bola..


LONG "Unki tumhare sath aisa karne ki himmat kaise huyi? Unhe main jaan se maar dunga."



AK "Brother, wo ab mar chuke hai."


AK usse baate karte huye uske expression ko dekh raha tha, wo uske true colour dekhna chahta tha. Lekin LONG apni feeling aur expression ko bhut ache dhange se chupa raha tha. Agar pehle wala AK hota to wo fas jaata lekin Ab wale AK ki aankhe bhut tez thi wo har cheez saaf dekh paa raha tha ki LONG ke mann mein kya chal raha hai.


LONG "wo dono mar mar gaye? Tumne unhe kaisa maara wo dono QI JING Realm ke 6th Level pe they?"


AK "majak mat karo brother, main ek useless cultivatior hu, muskil Level 1st pe aaya hu, bhala main unhe kaise mar sakta hu? Wo to kisi Master ne mujhe kidnap dekh liya aur unhone un dono ke maar ke mujhe aazad kar diya, main jo shaksh iske piche hai uska naam janana chahta tha lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi, main to unhe reward dena chahta tha, lekin unhone mana kar diya aur gayab ho gaye waha se."



LONG "Fuck! Kya kismat hai iski?"


LONG ne apne mann chillate huye ye kaha, usey is baat pe yakeen ho gaya tha ki AK sach bol raha hai, jaroor kisi ne help ki warna AK to useless hai wo khud se kuch nahi kar sakta. LONG ko bhi rahat mehsoos huyi kyuki uska naam saamne nahi aaya tha. Aage chal ke bhut se mauke aayenge AK ko maarne ke isliye wo shaant ho gaya.


LONG "yeh to achi baat hai ki wo dono mar gaye, aur tum bina kisi nuksaan ke laut aaye, agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mujhe jindagi bhar afsos rehta ki main tumhe protect nahi kar paaya."



LONG ke face pe aisa concerned look dekh ke AK ko vomit karne ka mann kar raha tha.


AK "My brother is best."



AK ne bhi aisa dikhaya ki jaise uske jaisa bhai puri duniya main koi nahi hai.



LONG "aisa mat kaho, hum dono brothers hai. Kal MU Family ke sath marriage engagement ka din hai. Tumhe tyar hona padega, ye puri life time opportunity hai. Agar tum MU Family ki daughter se shaadi karte ho to ye hamari Family ke liye achi baat hogi."



LONG ne AK ke kandhe pe apna hath rakhte huye ye baat kahi.



AK "Unki beti se shaadi karu, Count me out!"


LONG "Brother ye decision tumpe nahi hai, Father ne bhut kuch arrange kiya hai kal ke liye, tum aisa nahi kar sakte."



AK "main bilkul serious hu mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata MU Family ki daughter dikhti kaisi hai. Ye kisi joke se kam nahi hai. Aur main abhi bhi Young hu. Agar koi best candidate hai marriage ke liye to wo aap hai. Aap bhi Mayor ke son hai aur mujhe bade bhi hai, main aapse pehle shaadi nahi kar sakta. 'I won't do it, do it yourself'."


AK apne decison pe bilkul khara tha. AK ki explanation ko sunne ke baad LONG ko pehli baar aisa laga jaise uske useless brother ne koi Usefull kaam kar diya ho. Halanki AK ko maarne ka ek ye bhi kaaran tha ki wo MU Family ki daughter se Shaadi karle to fir uska dono Family mein status high ho jayega.




TO BE CONTINUED....
Long ne apne expression chhupana acche se sikha hua hai isliye Lagbhag sabhi log dhokha kha jate hai pr yha vo Purana AK nhi hai ye vala AK acchhi tarah janta hai kab kya karna hai... Ye MU family ka kya chakkr hai Kon hai vo ladki jiske sath AK ki ring ceremony hone vali hai kya AK nhi janta us ladki ko ya kisi or khubsurat bala ke sath gana gayega "chal chhaiy chhaiy chhaiya chhaiya..." :D Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
 

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Un do Guards ko maarne ke baad AK ne apna sir Aakash ki taraf uthaya aur mehsoos Kiya ki der ho chuki hai. Wo chalet huye compound se bahar aaya aur chaaro taraf nazar ghumayi jaha sirf dessert tha, aur ek ajeeb si smell pure area mein failli huyi thi.



Uski memories ke anusaar ye area Fragrant Sky City ka sabse durgam AUR sunsaan area tha. Aam Dino mein Yaha koi nahi aata jaata hai.



AK " Main Apni past life mein ek bahut strong person tha, isliye is life mein kisi weakling ki Tarah Nahi rahunga. Mera pichla janam bit Gaya, lekin Jo Gaya so gaya. Kyuki ab main is body main hu toh, ab se tum main hu AUR main tum. Tumhari family meri family, tumhare enemy mere enemy. Future mein hum Saath badhenge.


Aur AK itna kehke ek smile ke sath us dessert ki taraf badh Gaya.


Mayor ke mansion mein 3 din se koraham Macha hua tha jabse AK gayab tha. Halanki jo Purana AK tha wo aisi buri harkate karta rehta tha, lekin wo Kabhi bhi 3 din se jada gayab Nahi hua tha.


AK Mayor ka eklauta beta tha. Halanki ek bhi din aisa Nahi guzra tha jab Mayor usey daantte na ho, lekin wo ander se usey sabse jyada pyar karte they. Koi bhi ye baat asaani se bata Sakta haï ye Dekh ke, ki kitni saari mehngi PILLS unhone AK ko khilayi hai.



Mayor mansion ke sabhi guard 3 din se Apne Young Master ko dhund rahe they, unhone 3 din mein Puri city Ka ek ek Kona Dekh liya tha lekin AK Ka koi naamo nishaan Nahi tha. Aant mein Mayor ne sabhi Guards ko order de Diya tha ki, agar sunset se pehle AK Nahi Mila to kisi bhi Guard wapas lautne ki jarurat Nahi hai.



Jis sunsaan jagah pe AK ko kaid Karke rakha tha waha Guards Ka group aaya tha saari City dhundhne ke baad.


Guard 1 "young Master humey Kabhi bhi chain se jinne Nahi dete, wo Kahi na Kahi kisi jagah enjoy Kar rahe honge aur suffer humey Karna pad Raha hai. Maine pure din se Kuch Nahi khaya hai."


Guard 2 " shikayat Karna band karo, Young Master Mayor ke eklaute bete hai. Kal MU Family ke sath engagement ki date hai aur tab tak humne unhe nahi dhundha to humare sath acha Nahi hoga."


Guard 1 "Young Master kabhi bhi aisi sunsaan jagah pe nahi aayenge, hum apna time kharab kar rahe hai. Ruko aage koi hai."


Guard 1 ne unki taraf safed kapdo mein ek person ko aate dekha.


"Young Master"


Guard 1 aankho mein shocking expression lete huye chillaya. Usne apni aankhe malli aur firse us person ki taraf dekha jo ki unka Young Master hi tha. Saare Guards bhut jada khus ho gaye jaise unke saamne unka young Master nahi balki un sabka baap hi khada ho.


Kuch guard AK ki taraf daud pade, bhale hi wo ye nahi jaante they ki unka young Master yaha kya kar raha hai, unhe bas ek baat se fark padta tha ki unka Young Master ek dum sahi salamat hai.



AK " Chang, tum sab yaha kyu ho ?"


Guard 1 ka naam Chang tha, jisey sayad AK janta tha.


Chang "Young Master, akhirkar humne aap ko dhundh hi liya, agar aap nahi milte to Mayor humey jaan se maar dete."


AK ke face pe thode shocking expression they, lekin wo sab kuch samajh gya tha ki, uske 3 din se laapata hone pe ye sab ho raha hai. Aur ye log thik se soye bhi nahi hai.


Apne Father ke baare mein sochte huye, jinse abhi usey milna tha, usey thodi khusi mehsoos ho rahi thi. Beshak wo apne pichle jiwan mein ek Saint tha lekin uska na koi Friend tha, aur na hi koi Family, isliye ye sab AK ke liye ye sab naya tha aur isiliye wo khus tha.



AK "dekho main bilkul sahi hu aur tumhe bhi ab marna nahi padega, isliye jaldi mansion chalo"



Chang "Young Master, jaldi se is horse pe baith jaiye"


Chang jaldi se apna horse AK ke paas le gaya.


AK " mujhe iski jaroorat nahi hai. Main khud hi chala jaunga. Tum sabne khoob mehnat ki hai isliye Mansion pahuchte hi tum sab treasury se 10 Gold coins collect kar sakte ho."



What 10 Gold coins? AK ne ye baat aise kahi thi jaise ye kuch bhi na ho, lekin sabhi guard uski ye baat sunke sakhte mein chale gaye they. 10 Gold Coins... Unki Monthly salary sirf 10 Silver Coins thi. Aise main unka ye reaction lazmi tha.


AK ek Greatest Saint tha aur usko money ki parwah nahi thi nahi koi chinta thi, uske liye money pairo ki dhool tha. Lekin Guards ke liye to jaise unka Future hi Bright ho gaya ho.


"Young Master ko kya hua? Yeh unka style bilkul bhi nahi hai. Young Master kabse itne Generous ho gaye? Wo Horse pe ride bhi nahi kar rahe hai? Air jab se mile tab se unhe ek baar bhi nahi daanta hai, jo ki wo humesa karte hai. 3 din gayab hone se Young Master ek different person mein change ho gaye hai."



Ye saare question sabhi Guards ke mann mein they lekin puchne ki himmat kisi ki bhi nahi thi.


Chang " Chalo chale, jaldi karo aur Young Master ko follow karo"


Chang is surprise se ubharne wala pehla person tha, baki sab bhi uski baat sunke AK ko follow karne lage. Wo sab bhi Walk hi kar rahe they, jab unka Young Master hi Walk kar raha ho to unme itni himmat kaha ki wo Horse pe baith sake.


*******



Mayor Mansion ke Main hall mein ek adhed umar ka takatwar aadmi chinta mein idhar - idhar tehel raha tha, usne ek Golden colour ka silk robe pehen rakha tha aur wo bhut hi mascular tha uski hieght bhi 7 feet thi, ye aur koi nahi balki Fragrant Sky City ka Mayor JAIN tha.



"Father aap tension na le, guards jald hi AK ko dhundh lenge"



Mayor ke bagal mein ek handsome sa ladka khada tha white robe pehne, jiski age 18 hogi. Ek hi nazar mein koi bhi ye bata sakta hai ki ye koi ordinary ladka nahi hai. Uske face pe dukh saaf dekha jaa sakta tha, lekin ander se wo bhut khus tha.



JAIN "ye bigdail ladka mujhe kabhi bhi shaanti se nahi rehne dega, agar uske paas tumhari ability ka half hissa bhi hota to main khusi mein nahi samata."


"Young Master is back"


Ek Guard ne bhaagte huye ek news pure mansion mein faila di.


"What"


LONG lagbhag jor se chillaya, uske face ke expression pure change ho gaye they.



JAIN ne ispe koi dhyan nahi diya, wo andar se relieve mehsoos kar raha tha, lekin wo zor se chillaya.


JAIN "Usey jaldi se yaha pe aane ke liye kaho"



Guard ne yeh sense kar liya tha ki Mayor apna temper kabhi bhi kho dega, isliye usne araam se kaha.


Guard "Mayor, Young Master ne kaha hai ki wo bhut thak gaye hai, isliye wo apne room mein rest karenge aur aapse kal milenge."



JAIN "What the hell! Is ladke ke manners kaha hai?"



JAIN ne us Guard ko ghurte huye kaha.


LONG "Dad, lagta hai AK sach mein thaka hua hai, aur waise bhi kal MU Family ke sath engagement ka din hai to usey aap rest karne de."



JAIN " LONG, humesa uski side mat liya karo wo nalayak bahut bigad raha hai."



LONG "Dad aap gussa mat kijiye, main usse baat kar lunga."


JAIN "Ye thik rahega, tum uspe nazar rakhoge ki wo kahi aur na nikal jaaye, kal tak wo apne yard se bahar nahi jaana chahiye. Main nahi chahta kal ke din kuch bhi bura ho."



JAIN ye bolte hi Main hall se bahar nikal gaya.


Mayor ka Mansion bhut hi bade area mein failla hua tha, isliye AK aur LONG ke pass khud ke chote-2 Mansion they. Apne dono hath apne back side pe bandhe AK moon ko nihar raha tha, waha khada hoke wo kisi ka intezaar kar raha tha jo usey pata ki wo aayega.



Mansion ke Gate se AK ko LONG andar aata hua dikhayi diyo, jo AK ko sahi salamat dekh ke bhut jyada gussa tha lekin ye wo bilkul bhi show nahi kar raha tha.



"Useless peasants, unhone is bastard ko jinda kaise aane diya."


Ye baat LONG apne mann mein soch raha tha, kuch hi second mein wo AK ke paas aa gaya aur uske face expression aisa they jaise wo AK se bhut pyar karta ho.



LONG "Brother tum 3 din se kaha they? Tumhe pata hai main kitna worried tha?"


"Brother"


Aur itna kehte hi AK ne LONG ke upper jump laga di aur uske gale lag gaya aur uski aankho se aansu behne lage jo LONG ke kandhe pe gir rahe they.



LONG "Brother kya hua? Tumhare sath kuch karne ki kisne sochi, mujhe batao main tumhara badla jaroor lunga"



AK "Wo 2 Guards Yong aur Shuang mujhe maarna chahte they."


AK ne ye baat banawati gusse se boli aur LONG se alag ho gaya. LONG bhi ye do naam sunke chauk gaya lekin fir gusse mein aake bola..


LONG "Unki tumhare sath aisa karne ki himmat kaise huyi? Unhe main jaan se maar dunga."



AK "Brother, wo ab mar chuke hai."


AK usse baate karte huye uske expression ko dekh raha tha, wo uske true colour dekhna chahta tha. Lekin LONG apni feeling aur expression ko bhut ache dhange se chupa raha tha. Agar pehle wala AK hota to wo fas jaata lekin Ab wale AK ki aankhe bhut tez thi wo har cheez saaf dekh paa raha tha ki LONG ke mann mein kya chal raha hai.


LONG "wo dono mar mar gaye? Tumne unhe kaisa maara wo dono QI JING Realm ke 6th Level pe they?"


AK "majak mat karo brother, main ek useless cultivatior hu, muskil Level 1st pe aaya hu, bhala main unhe kaise mar sakta hu? Wo to kisi Master ne mujhe kidnap dekh liya aur unhone un dono ke maar ke mujhe aazad kar diya, main jo shaksh iske piche hai uska naam janana chahta tha lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi, main to unhe reward dena chahta tha, lekin unhone mana kar diya aur gayab ho gaye waha se."



LONG "Fuck! Kya kismat hai iski?"


LONG ne apne mann chillate huye ye kaha, usey is baat pe yakeen ho gaya tha ki AK sach bol raha hai, jaroor kisi ne help ki warna AK to useless hai wo khud se kuch nahi kar sakta. LONG ko bhi rahat mehsoos huyi kyuki uska naam saamne nahi aaya tha. Aage chal ke bhut se mauke aayenge AK ko maarne ke isliye wo shaant ho gaya.


LONG "yeh to achi baat hai ki wo dono mar gaye, aur tum bina kisi nuksaan ke laut aaye, agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mujhe jindagi bhar afsos rehta ki main tumhe protect nahi kar paaya."



LONG ke face pe aisa concerned look dekh ke AK ko vomit karne ka mann kar raha tha.


AK "My brother is best."



AK ne bhi aisa dikhaya ki jaise uske jaisa bhai puri duniya main koi nahi hai.



LONG "aisa mat kaho, hum dono brothers hai. Kal MU Family ke sath marriage engagement ka din hai. Tumhe tyar hona padega, ye puri life time opportunity hai. Agar tum MU Family ki daughter se shaadi karte ho to ye hamari Family ke liye achi baat hogi."



LONG ne AK ke kandhe pe apna hath rakhte huye ye baat kahi.



AK "Unki beti se shaadi karu, Count me out!"


LONG "Brother ye decision tumpe nahi hai, Father ne bhut kuch arrange kiya hai kal ke liye, tum aisa nahi kar sakte."



AK "main bilkul serious hu mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata MU Family ki daughter dikhti kaisi hai. Ye kisi joke se kam nahi hai. Aur main abhi bhi Young hu. Agar koi best candidate hai marriage ke liye to wo aap hai. Aap bhi Mayor ke son hai aur mujhe bade bhi hai, main aapse pehle shaadi nahi kar sakta. 'I won't do it, do it yourself'."


AK apne decison pe bilkul khara tha. AK ki explanation ko sunne ke baad LONG ko pehli baar aisa laga jaise uske useless brother ne koi Usefull kaam kar diya ho. Halanki AK ko maarne ka ek ye bhi kaaran tha ki wo MU Family ki daughter se Shaadi karle to fir uska dono Family mein status high ho jayega.




TO BE CONTINUED....
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Update:- 2. (I won't do it, do it yourself)


Un do Guards ko maarne ke baad AK ne apna sir Aakash ki taraf uthaya aur mehsoos Kiya ki der ho chuki hai. Wo chalet huye compound se bahar aaya aur chaaro taraf nazar ghumayi jaha sirf dessert tha, aur ek ajeeb si smell pure area mein failli huyi thi.



Uski memories ke anusaar ye area Fragrant Sky City ka sabse durgam AUR sunsaan area tha. Aam Dino mein Yaha koi nahi aata jaata hai.



AK " Main Apni past life mein ek bahut strong person tha, isliye is life mein kisi weakling ki Tarah Nahi rahunga. Mera pichla janam bit Gaya, lekin Jo Gaya so gaya. Kyuki ab main is body main hu toh, ab se tum main hu AUR main tum. Tumhari family meri family, tumhare enemy mere enemy. Future mein hum Saath badhenge.


Aur AK itna kehke ek smile ke sath us dessert ki taraf badh Gaya.


Mayor ke mansion mein 3 din se koraham Macha hua tha jabse AK gayab tha. Halanki jo Purana AK tha wo aisi buri harkate karta rehta tha, lekin wo Kabhi bhi 3 din se jada gayab Nahi hua tha.


AK Mayor ka eklauta beta tha. Halanki ek bhi din aisa Nahi guzra tha jab Mayor usey daantte na ho, lekin wo ander se usey sabse jyada pyar karte they. Koi bhi ye baat asaani se bata Sakta haï ye Dekh ke, ki kitni saari mehngi PILLS unhone AK ko khilayi hai.



Mayor mansion ke sabhi guard 3 din se Apne Young Master ko dhund rahe they, unhone 3 din mein Puri city Ka ek ek Kona Dekh liya tha lekin AK Ka koi naamo nishaan Nahi tha. Aant mein Mayor ne sabhi Guards ko order de Diya tha ki, agar sunset se pehle AK Nahi Mila to kisi bhi Guard wapas lautne ki jarurat Nahi hai.



Jis sunsaan jagah pe AK ko kaid Karke rakha tha waha Guards Ka group aaya tha saari City dhundhne ke baad.


Guard 1 "young Master humey Kabhi bhi chain se jinne Nahi dete, wo Kahi na Kahi kisi jagah enjoy Kar rahe honge aur suffer humey Karna pad Raha hai. Maine pure din se Kuch Nahi khaya hai."


Guard 2 " shikayat Karna band karo, Young Master Mayor ke eklaute bete hai. Kal MU Family ke sath engagement ki date hai aur tab tak humne unhe nahi dhundha to humare sath acha Nahi hoga."


Guard 1 "Young Master kabhi bhi aisi sunsaan jagah pe nahi aayenge, hum apna time kharab kar rahe hai. Ruko aage koi hai."


Guard 1 ne unki taraf safed kapdo mein ek person ko aate dekha.


"Young Master"


Guard 1 aankho mein shocking expression lete huye chillaya. Usne apni aankhe malli aur firse us person ki taraf dekha jo ki unka Young Master hi tha. Saare Guards bhut jada khus ho gaye jaise unke saamne unka young Master nahi balki un sabka baap hi khada ho.


Kuch guard AK ki taraf daud pade, bhale hi wo ye nahi jaante they ki unka young Master yaha kya kar raha hai, unhe bas ek baat se fark padta tha ki unka Young Master ek dum sahi salamat hai.



AK " Chang, tum sab yaha kyu ho ?"


Guard 1 ka naam Chang tha, jisey sayad AK janta tha.


Chang "Young Master, akhirkar humne aap ko dhundh hi liya, agar aap nahi milte to Mayor humey jaan se maar dete."


AK ke face pe thode shocking expression they, lekin wo sab kuch samajh gya tha ki, uske 3 din se laapata hone pe ye sab ho raha hai. Aur ye log thik se soye bhi nahi hai.


Apne Father ke baare mein sochte huye, jinse abhi usey milna tha, usey thodi khusi mehsoos ho rahi thi. Beshak wo apne pichle jiwan mein ek Saint tha lekin uska na koi Friend tha, aur na hi koi Family, isliye ye sab AK ke liye ye sab naya tha aur isiliye wo khus tha.



AK "dekho main bilkul sahi hu aur tumhe bhi ab marna nahi padega, isliye jaldi mansion chalo"



Chang "Young Master, jaldi se is horse pe baith jaiye"


Chang jaldi se apna horse AK ke paas le gaya.


AK " mujhe iski jaroorat nahi hai. Main khud hi chala jaunga. Tum sabne khoob mehnat ki hai isliye Mansion pahuchte hi tum sab treasury se 10 Gold coins collect kar sakte ho."



What 10 Gold coins? AK ne ye baat aise kahi thi jaise ye kuch bhi na ho, lekin sabhi guard uski ye baat sunke sakhte mein chale gaye they. 10 Gold Coins... Unki Monthly salary sirf 10 Silver Coins thi. Aise main unka ye reaction lazmi tha.


AK ek Greatest Saint tha aur usko money ki parwah nahi thi nahi koi chinta thi, uske liye money pairo ki dhool tha. Lekin Guards ke liye to jaise unka Future hi Bright ho gaya ho.


"Young Master ko kya hua? Yeh unka style bilkul bhi nahi hai. Young Master kabse itne Generous ho gaye? Wo Horse pe ride bhi nahi kar rahe hai? Air jab se mile tab se unhe ek baar bhi nahi daanta hai, jo ki wo humesa karte hai. 3 din gayab hone se Young Master ek different person mein change ho gaye hai."



Ye saare question sabhi Guards ke mann mein they lekin puchne ki himmat kisi ki bhi nahi thi.


Chang " Chalo chale, jaldi karo aur Young Master ko follow karo"


Chang is surprise se ubharne wala pehla person tha, baki sab bhi uski baat sunke AK ko follow karne lage. Wo sab bhi Walk hi kar rahe they, jab unka Young Master hi Walk kar raha ho to unme itni himmat kaha ki wo Horse pe baith sake.


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Mayor Mansion ke Main hall mein ek adhed umar ka takatwar aadmi chinta mein idhar - idhar tehel raha tha, usne ek Golden colour ka silk robe pehen rakha tha aur wo bhut hi mascular tha uski hieght bhi 7 feet thi, ye aur koi nahi balki Fragrant Sky City ka Mayor JAIN tha.



"Father aap tension na le, guards jald hi AK ko dhundh lenge"



Mayor ke bagal mein ek handsome sa ladka khada tha white robe pehne, jiski age 18 hogi. Ek hi nazar mein koi bhi ye bata sakta hai ki ye koi ordinary ladka nahi hai. Uske face pe dukh saaf dekha jaa sakta tha, lekin ander se wo bhut khus tha.



JAIN "ye bigdail ladka mujhe kabhi bhi shaanti se nahi rehne dega, agar uske paas tumhari ability ka half hissa bhi hota to main khusi mein nahi samata."


"Young Master is back"


Ek Guard ne bhaagte huye ek news pure mansion mein faila di.


"What"


LONG lagbhag jor se chillaya, uske face ke expression pure change ho gaye they.



JAIN ne ispe koi dhyan nahi diya, wo andar se relieve mehsoos kar raha tha, lekin wo zor se chillaya.


JAIN "Usey jaldi se yaha pe aane ke liye kaho"



Guard ne yeh sense kar liya tha ki Mayor apna temper kabhi bhi kho dega, isliye usne araam se kaha.


Guard "Mayor, Young Master ne kaha hai ki wo bhut thak gaye hai, isliye wo apne room mein rest karenge aur aapse kal milenge."



JAIN "What the hell! Is ladke ke manners kaha hai?"



JAIN ne us Guard ko ghurte huye kaha.


LONG "Dad, lagta hai AK sach mein thaka hua hai, aur waise bhi kal MU Family ke sath engagement ka din hai to usey aap rest karne de."



JAIN " LONG, humesa uski side mat liya karo wo nalayak bahut bigad raha hai."



LONG "Dad aap gussa mat kijiye, main usse baat kar lunga."


JAIN "Ye thik rahega, tum uspe nazar rakhoge ki wo kahi aur na nikal jaaye, kal tak wo apne yard se bahar nahi jaana chahiye. Main nahi chahta kal ke din kuch bhi bura ho."



JAIN ye bolte hi Main hall se bahar nikal gaya.


Mayor ka Mansion bhut hi bade area mein failla hua tha, isliye AK aur LONG ke pass khud ke chote-2 Mansion they. Apne dono hath apne back side pe bandhe AK moon ko nihar raha tha, waha khada hoke wo kisi ka intezaar kar raha tha jo usey pata ki wo aayega.



Mansion ke Gate se AK ko LONG andar aata hua dikhayi diyo, jo AK ko sahi salamat dekh ke bhut jyada gussa tha lekin ye wo bilkul bhi show nahi kar raha tha.



"Useless peasants, unhone is bastard ko jinda kaise aane diya."


Ye baat LONG apne mann mein soch raha tha, kuch hi second mein wo AK ke paas aa gaya aur uske face expression aisa they jaise wo AK se bhut pyar karta ho.



LONG "Brother tum 3 din se kaha they? Tumhe pata hai main kitna worried tha?"


"Brother"


Aur itna kehte hi AK ne LONG ke upper jump laga di aur uske gale lag gaya aur uski aankho se aansu behne lage jo LONG ke kandhe pe gir rahe they.



LONG "Brother kya hua? Tumhare sath kuch karne ki kisne sochi, mujhe batao main tumhara badla jaroor lunga"



AK "Wo 2 Guards Yong aur Shuang mujhe maarna chahte they."


AK ne ye baat banawati gusse se boli aur LONG se alag ho gaya. LONG bhi ye do naam sunke chauk gaya lekin fir gusse mein aake bola..


LONG "Unki tumhare sath aisa karne ki himmat kaise huyi? Unhe main jaan se maar dunga."



AK "Brother, wo ab mar chuke hai."


AK usse baate karte huye uske expression ko dekh raha tha, wo uske true colour dekhna chahta tha. Lekin LONG apni feeling aur expression ko bhut ache dhange se chupa raha tha. Agar pehle wala AK hota to wo fas jaata lekin Ab wale AK ki aankhe bhut tez thi wo har cheez saaf dekh paa raha tha ki LONG ke mann mein kya chal raha hai.


LONG "wo dono mar mar gaye? Tumne unhe kaisa maara wo dono QI JING Realm ke 6th Level pe they?"


AK "majak mat karo brother, main ek useless cultivatior hu, muskil Level 1st pe aaya hu, bhala main unhe kaise mar sakta hu? Wo to kisi Master ne mujhe kidnap dekh liya aur unhone un dono ke maar ke mujhe aazad kar diya, main jo shaksh iske piche hai uska naam janana chahta tha lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi, main to unhe reward dena chahta tha, lekin unhone mana kar diya aur gayab ho gaye waha se."



LONG "Fuck! Kya kismat hai iski?"


LONG ne apne mann chillate huye ye kaha, usey is baat pe yakeen ho gaya tha ki AK sach bol raha hai, jaroor kisi ne help ki warna AK to useless hai wo khud se kuch nahi kar sakta. LONG ko bhi rahat mehsoos huyi kyuki uska naam saamne nahi aaya tha. Aage chal ke bhut se mauke aayenge AK ko maarne ke isliye wo shaant ho gaya.


LONG "yeh to achi baat hai ki wo dono mar gaye, aur tum bina kisi nuksaan ke laut aaye, agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mujhe jindagi bhar afsos rehta ki main tumhe protect nahi kar paaya."



LONG ke face pe aisa concerned look dekh ke AK ko vomit karne ka mann kar raha tha.


AK "My brother is best."



AK ne bhi aisa dikhaya ki jaise uske jaisa bhai puri duniya main koi nahi hai.



LONG "aisa mat kaho, hum dono brothers hai. Kal MU Family ke sath marriage engagement ka din hai. Tumhe tyar hona padega, ye puri life time opportunity hai. Agar tum MU Family ki daughter se shaadi karte ho to ye hamari Family ke liye achi baat hogi."



LONG ne AK ke kandhe pe apna hath rakhte huye ye baat kahi.



AK "Unki beti se shaadi karu, Count me out!"


LONG "Brother ye decision tumpe nahi hai, Father ne bhut kuch arrange kiya hai kal ke liye, tum aisa nahi kar sakte."



AK "main bilkul serious hu mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata MU Family ki daughter dikhti kaisi hai. Ye kisi joke se kam nahi hai. Aur main abhi bhi Young hu. Agar koi best candidate hai marriage ke liye to wo aap hai. Aap bhi Mayor ke son hai aur mujhe bade bhi hai, main aapse pehle shaadi nahi kar sakta. 'I won't do it, do it yourself'."


AK apne decison pe bilkul khara tha. AK ki explanation ko sunne ke baad LONG ko pehli baar aisa laga jaise uske useless brother ne koi Usefull kaam kar diya ho. Halanki AK ko maarne ka ek ye bhi kaaran tha ki wo MU Family ki daughter se Shaadi karle to fir uska dono Family mein status high ho jayega.




TO BE CONTINUED....
nice update bhai
 
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