RAJIV SHAW
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So bhai, maine apki first story padhi thi muze bahot pasand bhi ayi.
Apka story writing skill bahut Acha he entertainment bhi bahot Acha karte ho
Dialogues bhi bahut ache he
Full on dhammmaaaallllll
Apka story writing skill bahut Acha he entertainment bhi bahot Acha karte ho
Dialogues bhi bahut ache he
Full on dhammmaaaallllll
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Faduu update hai sare ke sare...
Ye sahi hai apni chud gayi to baki sabki chudayenge...
Jay ho...
Waiting for next...
Ye sahi hai apni chud gayi to baki sabki chudayenge...
Jay ho...
Waiting for next...
so congrats AP bhai total 300 updates of your story has completed and waiting for action bhai collage episodes are going long
and story is looking like staying at one point only
waiting for next updates
and story is looking like staying at one point only
waiting for next updates
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bhidulog for the support keep supporting
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Update-26 (No Plan..????)
Main-Chal andar chalke puchtey Hain ...
Humlog Jiya k cabin k andar aae ..
Main-Wassup J...
Jiya-Wasssup AP ...all good ..?
Main-yo..
Jiya- Ravi kya haal chaal..?
Ravi-bad day in college ...tum sunao..?
Jiya-Same bad day in office...bored AF..
Main-Kya be jhingurr idhar Kya Kar rela hai...
Ashish- Complaint Leke aae Hain ..
Main-kiski..?
Ashish- police waalon ki...
Main-what the fuck... police waalon ki complaint police waalon k pass ..shabbas..
Jiya- Dikkat ye hai ki yahaan Jo tumhaare president sahaab baithey Hain ye bata rahe Hain ki inko regularly college mein day patrolling k liye 3 pcrs caahiye ...
Main-wtf aisa Kya hua kitana toh shant hai college ...?
Lucky- security reasons aajkal ladaai jhagdey kaafi hotey Hain...
Main-Abe ganwaar tujhe maalum hai 3 pcrs kab chalti Hain jab koi area bahot jyaada sensitive ho ...college k liye pcrs nahi chalwaatey...
Lucky-agar kuch hua toh Kon jimmedaar hoga..
Main-tujhe maalum haina College k liye ek alag see police chowki hai college k back side ..?jahaan 1 biker or 3 constables +2 lady police humessa rehtey Hain...
Ashish-woh college k liye hai...?
Jiya- lol ...lo ji or yelog vice president Hain tumhaare...
Main-mereko Kya dekhrahi Maine vote naa Diya ...
Jiya-offocurse woh college k liye hai ...
Lucky-But woh Durr hai...?
Jiya- 110 meters Durr nahi hota ...or agar tumlog kehrahe ho toh 2 constables ko andar leletey Hain college k but dikkat ye rahegi ki fir tumlog president girri nahi chalaa paaoge wohlog Apne hissab se dekhenge thodi bahot dikkat hotey he wohlog arrest karlenge...
Lucky- no no woh bahaar he theek hain...
Jiya-ok anything else..?
Lucky-no thanks ...
jiya-ok thanks for wasting my time...
Main-lol Roasted...
Tabhi Anjali wahaan se nikal rahi thi Jo humein dekh andar aagayi jisse dekh Jiya apni seat se uthi...or salute kiya ..
Anjali-please sit ...
Main-lol ye Sab Bhi hota hai Kya..?
Anjali-yep off course after all In charge Hun ...by the way Kya haal chaal Hain tumlog k...
Main-L lage paddey Hain yaar aaj toh...
Anjali-koi aisa Dinn hota hai jissdin nahi lagtey..
Ravi-Sadly no...
Main-Ami kidhar hai...
Anjali-khaana khaarahi hai Pooja k sath...
Main-cool...
Jiya-you guyss can go now...
Anjali-yelog Tere college se haina...
Main-yep sadly ...but main nahi Leke aaya .
Sana-Actually one more thing madam...
Jiya-yess...
Sana-Actually College k just saamne or aas pass kaafi smoking shops Hain wohlog tambaakhu gutkaa wagairah Sab sell kartey Hain or students wahaan ikatha hoke cigarettes peetey Hain even bahaar k log wahaan khaddey hoke college girls ko Pareshan kartey Hain...toh kyaa aaplog unhe hatwaa nahi shaktey ..?
Anjali-sadly dukkan hum nahi hatwaa shaktey as unke pass license hai haan but tambaakhu gutkaa cigarettes wagairah hatwaadenge or wahaan par ikatha nahi hone denge students ko...Jiya Kal Ajay ko bhejdena woh shop owners ko samjhaa aaega....
Jiya-Ok madam...
Sana-Infact mam college k andar Bhi kuch log cigarettes peetey Hain...unkaa Bhi band karwaaiye...
Main-what the fuck...
Ravi-Shit...
Anjali-tum he hoge..
Main- apun nahi hai...
Anjali- bandh karwaadun fir ...
Main-pehle jagah to dhundo...
Ashish-woh main dhundlunga madam...
Main-tera munh fod dunga bhosdk ...
Anjali-language AP...
Main-hum dono kaa chalta rehta hai iska naam he bhosdk hai...
Anjali-Language ..
Main-ok sorry... dekho andar kuch naa peeta koi bahaar waalon ko hatwaado ...
Anjali-Ajay ko boldiyo tu...
Main- tu boldiyo main kyun bolun Mera koi role nahi hai..I dont give a fuck...
Anjali-Language AP...
Main-haa haa maalum hai.... tumlog jaao re yaa Abhi pcr Leke he jaaoge ...
Ajit-abe waise tu yahaan Kya Kar raha hai ...?
Main-meri girlfriend se milne aaya Hun ..?
Ajit-kon..?
Main-Ye Anjali...
Anjali-what the fuck shut up..munh Todd dungi Tera..
Main-joking Meri bike chori hogayi uski complaint ki thi 2 din pehle or yelog Hain ki dhund k naa derahe aaj inki waat lagaane aaya Hun...
Woh log uthey he they jaane k liye ki Abeer or Mangal Bhi whaaan aagaye bc saara bhaaanda fodd doge I mean I know ki sabko maalum hai humlog police k sath Hain and all but bc khud prove karne ki Kya jarrurat hai..
Abeer-kya hua re kaaeko bulaaya..?
Main-Arey ye log Meri bike naa derahe dhund k..?
Abeer-kaaeki bike ...?
Mangal-konsi..?
Main-Abe Jo chori Hui thi jiski fir likhwaai thi Maine...
Abeer-kab bc ...?
Mangal-ohh! Achaa -2 woh black waali...
Main-Haan bc ye samjhgaya...
Ashish-Abeer Bhai Kaise ho..?
Abeer-badhiya chotu tu kaisa hai...
Ashish-badhiya Bhai...
Abeer-Anup ka beta Hai naa tu...
Ashish-ji Bhai...
Abeer-badhiya badhiya ..papa theek Haina ..?
Ashish-Ji ekdum fit...
Main-chalo re nikalo ab dusraon kaa Bhi no. Aanedo...
Uske baad Ashish and gang wahaan see nikal gayi ....
Mangal-kya hua kaaeko bulaaya..?
Anjali- commissioner sir aarahe Hain wahi jaane..
Main-cool....
Anjali-seriously yaar college mein cigarettes peetey ho tumlog...
Main-college mein nahi cateen mein woh Bhi cave mein kissi ko maalum takk naa hai kabhi Hawa banaane ko bandh naa karwaadena principal ko maalum Chala toh Laxman ki job jaaegi....
Anjali-nahi karwaarahi bhadak Matt...
Main-J yelog aage kabhi aaein naa toh mereko bataana Kya kaam aae they personal ho yaa college based...
Jiya- cool...
Anjali-aise information leak nahi kartey humlog ...
Main- Mera dimag aaj already firra hua hai Orr Matt ghumma...
Anjali-hahaha jab tu gussa hota Haina tab Teri firki lene mein or jyaada majja aata hai...
Main-shut the fuck up...teko maalum hai aaj meko Nicki mam ne class se bahaar nikaal Diya...
Anjali-seriously Nicki ne ...?
Main-yep apni Nicki ne ...
Mangal-thats fucked up bro...
Anjali-that sucks...
Main-yep it does... isiliye dimag ghumela hai...
Thodi derr baad commissioner uncle Bhi aagaye or Hum Sab Meeting room mein aae...Wahaan Main ,Ravi ,Abeer ,Mangal ,AMi ,Anjali ,Jiya ,Pooja ,Deepak ,Ajay , Commissioner uncle Or Rajat they
Yogesh-Bhai first of all meeting suru karney see pehle ...
Main-Ji uncle...
Yogesh-First point tumhaari Aunty tumse kaafi naaraj hai or Jab bhi millne jaaega dhulaai pakki hai...
Aunty-Lol...
Main-Aunty ko to Yun manaalunga main ...Yun chutkiyon mein...
Yogesh-itane saalon mein main naa seekh paaya tum mujhse Jaldi seekh Gaye...
Main-because I am fast...
Yogesh-ok everyone jokes apart sabko pata hai main yahaan kyun hun AP redjohn k lite Kya defense hai..?
Main-Frankly speaking uncle koi defense nahi hai filhaal...
Ye sun Sab solid chownkey...
Sab-what.....?
Main-sadly Yess...because abhi usne haryana mein khass kuch kiya hai nahi or woh Harr jagah par ek pattern banaake Sab kaam karta hai or humaare usko pakadne kaa ekmaatar chance hai ki hum us pattern ko samjhein iske alaawa koi Chance hai he nahi or pattern tab banega jab woh kuch harkat karega ...no harkat no pattern and no pattern no chance of catching red John...
Anjali-Toh it means ki hum wait karenge ki kab woh kissi ko maare...?Matlab hum balli denge loggon ki..
Main- actually yes and no at same time....dekho jaruri nahi hai redjohn keval loggon ko maarke he pattern banaae woh humaare sath khelne k liye pattern kaa hint pehle Bhi de shakta hai because he is too smart and fast also he loves playing with people...
Anjali-lekin agar usne ye nahi Kiya toh..?
Main-Sadly kuch loggon ko marrna padega..
Sab-what the hell...?
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