Thanks BhiduZabardast update bhai Mai Haryana me engineering ke time thaa aur aaj aap ki wajah se yaad taza ho gayi kati. Swad aa Gaya kati.
Abhi kali ka game bacha hai dekhtau hai ki dar ke aage jeet hai.
Thanks bhaiFucking awesome update. No words for it literally. The best update in the story till now.
Thanks broIts awesome bhai aur ye wala to zabardast tha bta ni skte. Ek behtreeen action kmal ka.
Thanks bhiduPart 1 ka best sence thaa Deva bhai ka fighting sence aur is part ka best to best hain bhai gajab chaa gaye but ek baat hain jaisay cheetah apni max speed Pata hai magar uske liye usay bohat kuch compromise karna hota. Hai specially sab se week hota hai cat family me woh.
Theek usi tarah AP ka dimagh and power is time max pe hai ya yun kaho ki Max se bhi zada dekhna hoga ki iska khamiaza kia hota hain AP ko coz it is double edge sword.
Thanks bhaiAwesome bc Kya fight scene tha.
Maza aagaya superb update bhai
Thanks tahir bhaiBoht boht Zabardast update
great update bhai and now the flashback starts how AP became the beast has to know and what is the reaction to see of others and AP
waiting for next update
yours john
thanks bhiduOmg AP what a surprising update. With this action AP is really look like a witch.
Thanks Samrat bhaiBC ye tha kya sala itna khatarnak fight...
Bhai sach me maja aa gya ab aage dekhna ha ki ye kya kya krta ha waiting for next update
AP is great
Thanks Rakku broGajab action Bhai...itna to movie me v nahi milta jitna action es story m padne ko mila hai...1st part was awesome and second is the beast...
thanks bhaiSuperb update bro I'm
Thanks bhaiGreat action update bhai
thanks bhiduBeast on loose interesting updates
thanks Sharad bhaiAP bhai word nahi hai tarif karne ke fir bhi mind-blowing fantastic jabardast update
Ye AP sabki fod dega or romance bhi chalu ho jaye
Waiting next update
Thanks broSuper update
thanks Chintu bhaiMaa kasam gaand fod di,
Ab is jaanwar ko AP kaise control karega wapis?
Nahi kiya to bura bahut bura hone wala hai.
Thanks GuffyFuck yeh kya tha bhai kon sa AP zinda kar liya tune sala janwaar bhi iske samne chota lag raha hai abeer tak ki fat gayi hai maza aa gaya padh ke 2 baar padha hai maine yeh update Vertigo de kar toh gaya hai lekin itna bhayanak gift sala hosh uda gaye
Waiting Next Update sham ko de dena ek plzzzz
thanks Shyaam bhaiChhaa gaye chha gaye. Its awesome itna solid ki sara scene aankho k samne ghum gaya.. Supeb.
Keep writing..
Ye vertigo nahi hai sayad..ye kuch or hi hai jisse Ami or Chang dono related hai....
thanks AssiNow this is what I call " All hell broke loose "![]()
thanks bhiduFucking beast it is tereible...
Ye to innocent ko bhi nahi chhod raha...
Pat chale kahi phone se nikal ke apne konhina tapka de...
Band kr do isko jail mai waps...
Keep it up...
thanks NainaBrilliant update AP sir..... bahot khub.... Great going....
Happy Republic day AP sir
Thanks Raj bhaiMIND-BLOWING UPDATE BHAI
FULL ACTION DHAMAK
LAGTA HE AB CHANG KE ENTRY HOGI
"AP" ko control krne ke liye
Superb quality update
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thanks bhiduNice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha
thanks bhaiawesome update ....
Waitingfor
update bro
thanks bhaiZabardast,gajab,a1 update tha dost kya AP ko double personality disorder ha kya
Thanks naik bhaiSuperb mind blowing fantastic update
Janwer bhi schta raha hoga marne se pehle ki yeh kia ho gaya yeh tow mujh se bhi bada janwer ban gaya and off course he is the big animal great Ap
Keep posting brother
THANK YOU
ThanksYour r gr8 and AP is gr8
Thanks bhainice nice
Thanks broSuperb update
thanks bhaiBro 1st part and 2nd part
Ye update hats off
1st and 2nd dono part pde h
It's my first comment on this story
Superb bro
thanks VaibhavYe kya tha bhaisahab. Just amzing aisa kuch kabhi nahi padha aj tak mtlb i dont have any word to say about it.
Thanks bhiduAwesome dude I think vertigo is back fabulous update waiting for next
Thanks bhiduNice update
Thanks bhaiAP bhai kya scene hai yar. Just wow.2 bar parh chuka hn update. Bht hi lajawab update.maza aa gya.hats off bro
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Thanks bhiduJhakaash ekdum Super-duper faddu update AP bhai
thanks bhaiSuper update hai bhai
Thanks bhiduBrother I m a new member here and reading this amazing story. Awesome brother. Keep going. We support you
And update regularly
Thanks bhai
thanks bhaifabulous writing brother
aapki story addiction h
gajab update![]()
thanks bhidu
Finaly muze apki story vapas mil gayi
AP bhai I'm big fan of your writing skills
Mene first part ko to jane kitni baar padh
Chuka hu
Thanks broBoht e dhamake dar update ab beast ko kese control.kre ga AP ye dekhna baqi hai
Thanks broAvengers End Game ka bhi itna besabri se intezar nahi kia tha jitna aap ke next update ka hai!!!!
Waiting for next update.
Thanks bhiduBhai is update ki jitni tareef Karo utni Kam hai
Mai bas yahi kahunga ki 2nd part ka ab tak ka sabse best update yahi hai
Bahut hi zyada maza aaya is update ko read kar ke
Thnx bhai
Waiting for the next update
I m still waiting
Thanks bhaiVertigo vapas ahi Gaya yar ab Ap ka jalva dhikhana hai
BHAI 1 DIN LATE UPDATE DO
BUT SUSPENCE PURA KHTM KRO
SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME
thanks broBhai kya update diya hai maja aa gaye ap ne is beast ko kontrol nehi kiye to bhaut bari problem ho jaye
jabardast update maja aagaye parke
thanks for the wonderful review Mathur bhai
yes yes yes yyyeeeeessss
i knew it i fucking knew it
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BC kab se wait kiya maine damn man damnit ab tak ka best update tha yeh aur bhai i am damn sure aapne kitna effort daala hai iss particular point par and i love you seriously man i just love you #nohomoyour thinking, story ka plot sab kuch mind blowing hai and i love that
mujhe pta tha ki 1.5 years chutiyapa na kiya hai AP vo BC BEAST ban gya hai a fucking beast who doesn't give a damn about anything just fuck the shit which is in your way or in front of you just fuck it BC just fuck it
AP kaafi kamjor tha jiske chalte uski alter ego bahar aa gyi kyunki AP usse control na kar skta tha aise time par jab uske sath aisa torture ho rha ho aur still usse apne sabse bade darr ko kaid karke rakhna ho it was just impossible for him to hold both of the things jiski vajah se by god juada gaand phati hai AP ki
i literally can't believe it ki aise hogi uski alter ego of course AP jitna powerful hai uss se kahin jyada uski alter ego hai as VERTIGO ke saare chutad effect jhailen hai usne aur VERTIGO ne bhi jyada kaam uski alter ego par kiya jo bahut hi khatarnaak hai
believe me bhai bahut dukh hua AP ke blackout hone par just bahut bura kyunki AP sirf 1 second se bhi kam time ke liye blackout hua tha but still BEAST ke liye itna time bahut tha bahar aane ko that's just insane man
matlab kya bolun kuch samjh nhi aa rha hai AP ka yun helpless dikhna jra sa bhi pasand na aaya mujhe but still yeh hua kyunki vo khud ko face kar rha tha and i am damn sure ki AMI ab AP ko behosh nhi Karpayegi i am damn sure about it itna assan na hai yeh BC tum BEAST ko sulana chah rhe ho bache ko nhi
BC 12 bje start kiya tha padhna sala 2 baj gye 2 baar padha hai update ko BC
MAA chud gyi dimag ki BC seriously itna sab likh chuka hoon still aisa lag rha hai ki kuch miss kar rha hoon BC this makes me mad really mad BC
AMI, ABEER, CHANG aur na jaane kin kin ko sath mai aana padega ab AP ko control karne ke liye well hope for the best aur bhai 3rd part ka jo link hai usse shayad samjh gya hoon guarantee nhi hai as abhi dimag ki maa chud gyi hai update padh kar issliye apna point confirn karne ke liye 2 baar aur padhunga BC
sorry for late review
KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING
YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR
keep supporting as always Thanks clasher bhaiSaare update padh liye sirf 3 dino mai
You have n amazing writing skills
Story padhate hue pura scene imagine
Ho raha tha kese koi film chal rahi ho
And last update padhke to literally goosebumps aa gaye the
FIA valo ka role aaya hai matlab red jhon ke saath koi scene aane vala hai??
Just guess I'M not sure as AP
Waiting for next update
thanks bhidu..Osm bro
i can understand bhai app shayad
well bhai log vaise mamla shant hai yeh aur shant rahe toh jyada acha hai but kuch points jo main add karna chahta hoon simple hain
well purana part no doubt awesome tha hai rahega as usme school life thi AP ki aur sabschool life hi miss karte hain toh story mai humne khud ko AP ki jagah imagine kiya awesome
aur Rbcl.007 bhai shayad voh time miss kar rhe hain jab AP pehli baar deeply love mai pada tha aur vo scene BC kya romantic tha aur vahan jo bhi enemies they like RIYA ke DAD vagarh vo sab dur na they known they aur DEVA bhai se darte they toh hipe thi hi story ki aur AP hamesha uljha hua tha har kissi ke sath as vo enjoy kar rha tha tab toh usse jhant bhar ki tention na thi koi
but ab vo college mai hai aur uska level badh gya hai aur AP 316 bhai ne apni writing se bta diya hai ki yeh story ka level na high hua hai balki hum readers ka bhi level high hua hai toh aap sab samjh skte hain ki ab purani jaisi baat kyun na hai as hum readers ka bhi level high hua hai aur ab sabhi main characters well known hai aur hum unki capacity jante hain naye characters aur AP ko chor kar
main bus yehi kehna chahta hoon ki writer bhai hume apno writing se all in one feel karana chahte hain first part mai humne love, pain, bakchodi, family love bahut feel kiya aur ab humare dimag ki bhi gand tod kasrat honi hai issliye bas change ke hissab se dhal jana shi hai aur bhai i am damn sure ki koi bhi regular reader writer bhai se disappoint na hoga chahen vo koi bhi matter ho as vo itni awesome story likh rhe hain
kehna simple hai ki mujhe bhi bich mai story thodi odd lagi but ab time big picture ka hai toh aise mai kissi aur chis par dhyaan ja nhi skta believe me recent update phadne ke baad sala mai sapne mai soch rha tha ki ab AP kya karega???kaise vapas aayega??? kaise AMI yan baaki log usse handle karenge??? kya time aa gya hai 1.5 saal ke back ko batane ka???
well yeh sab issliye kaha maine kyunki ab story apne main plot par hai jo pichli bar bhi crime par tha aur ab bhi so i just can't wait BC ki aage kya hoga
well maine aise kuch toh nhi kaha jiss se koi offend ho but still agar mai kissi ki baat ko galat samjh bhetha hoon toh mujhe correct karen
YOUR FRIEND
...MATHUR