Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

[Monkey D. Dragon]

Fabulous updates bro
Like a 6 six in a row
Everything is going smoothly
CBI chiesf is a bit rough hope it will be polished later
I think AP's romantic + spicy day will come soon
But bro I found a little bit bump
Cause in the 1st part all characters conversation style was different+ individual
But in this part sometimes it's look like all characters are taking like AP or in his language (although I know literally all this conversation style is created by you)
If it's intentionally then ok(it's your story after all)
If not can you make things right it will be more fun like part one
Don't mind bro I just told what I feel
Keep it up
Waiting for next

 

[janu2016]

superb bro

 

[AP 316]

Fabulous updates bro
Like a 6 six in a row
Everything is going smoothly
CBI chiesf is a bit rough hope it will be polished later
I think AP's romantic + spicy day will come soon
But bro I found a little bit bump
Cause in the 1st part all characters conversation style was different+ individual
But in this part sometimes it's look like all characters are taking like AP or in his language (although I know literally all this conversation style is created by you)
If it's intentionally then ok(it's your story after all)
If not can you make things right it will be more fun like part one
Don't mind bro I just told what I feel
Keep it up
Waiting for next

I agree with you but at the same time I don't agree with you...
Kyunki ye sach hai ki kaafi characters ki talking sense same Hai but unki talking sense AP jaisi nahi hai like koi bhi gaali deke baat suru nahi karta yaa koi bhi harr kissi ko dhamki nahi deta AP ki tarah yaa AP ko tarah koi dialogue baaji nahi karta or Agar aap baat Kar rahe ho normal hi hello waali chat ki toh woh sabki same he hogi usme alag alag likh ke time waste he hona hai...
Or rahi baat talking sense same hone ki toh woh maine alag se harr person k nature k anusaar kar rakhi hai jaise police waalon ki talking sense almost same Hai Politicians ki talking sense bhi same hau college students ki bhi jyaada alag alag nahi hai kyunki alag alag likhunga toh character bahot saare in hain or update likhne mein kaafi time lagega isliye thodi bahot similarities hain kuch characters mein... Ye baat sahi hai Tumhaari...

By the way thanks for pointing that out let's see kya kiya jaa shakta Hai... Keep supporting as always bhidu..

 

[Ronnr]

Waitinh bhai

 

[AP 316]

Waitinh bhai

Next update aaj raat takk bhai keep supporting

 

[Last benchers]

Next update aaj raat takk bhai keep supporting

Okk bhai

 

[Iron Man]

Next update aaj raat takk bhai keep supporting

Ok Ap bhai
Intzar rhega update ka

 

[King]

waiting

 

[NOVA SHARMA]

Bhai mene inn tin din mein tumhari puri story padh li basically you are too good mere pass shabd hi nahi hai you are fucking awesome bro

 

[AP 316]

Bhai mene inn tin din mein tumhari puri story padh li basically you are too good mere pass shabd hi nahi hai you are fucking awesome bro

Thanks bhidu for such kind words... Welcome to this thread... Keep supporting like this...

Thanks