Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

Great update. Interaction between Spirit (now Tinkerbell) was interesting and hilarious.

Is update me 'Level Up Tower' ke baare me kafi detail me bataya gaya hai. Uska system kya hai, Aarav ne bhi support ka role choose kiya hai kyon ki weh bhi is system ko acche se jaan lena chahta tha. Lekin bada hi bureaucratic system laga.

System ko samjhane me abhi bhi thora aage Peeche ho raha hu main, Lekin hope ke none Manhwa reader ko bhi jald he samajh aa jaye to iss liye mostly simple rakh raha hu.

Hannah ka character bahut sweet laga, wahin Zoe aur Malia arrogant spoilt brat lagi.

Zoe

Lagta hai Aarav ke Harem me jaldi hi kuch aane wali hain.

Just wait! Harem related story shuru karne he wala hu, Abhi ye sab se nikalne do Aarav ko, Ap ko sab kuch daikhne ko mile ga Lekin fex me expectations utni high mat rakhna usse normal he likh sakta hu main

Hannah to Aarav ko bacche ki hi tarah se treat kar rahi hai,

Hannah....Mommy Material hai

Lekin abhi to Aarav apne saare emotions ko maar kar bilkul saant bana hua hai

Ek Emotion hai jo itni easily nahi marta

Story interesting hoti ja rahi hai. Jab yeh sab character apas me interact karenge, aur jab Aarav apne purane group se milega, maza ayega

Soon...

Ohhh... I missed Aarav's name. Kya Aarav ne Guardian beast ko hara kar Malia ko ghayl kar diya hai. Ya phir kisi ne Aarav ka roop le kar Aarav ko phasane ke liye kara hai. lekin Trolls ke pass to yeh powers nahi hain. Great suspense....

Correction... Yeh to Skeletons ka area hai. Lagta hai ki Malia aur Guardian Aarav ko next level (31-40) per jane se rok rahi hogi, jo ki Green Difficulty ke aagr ka hai. aur Aarav ko jana hai apni Quest puri kerne ke liye. Lekin Hannah aur baki sab kahan hain.

Wohi main daikh raha tha ke kehna kia chahte ho Lekin dobara parhne se bohat se questions ke answer mil jayenge

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bhai

Kal update nhi de sackte hai kya,.....intejar nhi hota hai ab
Waiting for next update

Update likhne ka Schedule Allow nahi ker raha tha, Try kia tha lekin possible he nahi tha

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Ha Bhai ye to sahi bat hai..second arc ko padhane se Aisa lag raha hai ki nayi story padh rahe hai..aarya ko chod kar sabhi new charecter dekhane ko mile hai..

Shuruaat me aisa he hone wala tha, Like sirf purane character he rakhta to ek point per wo bhi irritate karne wale the, Beech me introduce karwata to ye sab character se wo Connection nahi hona tha, Iss liye ye 6 Update aise likhe hai.

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Yes, I also think so. Pehle arc me Tutorial Tower me ja kar players kaise bante hain, aur kaise apni powers badhate hain, dikhaya tha. Ab is arc me itne saare players kasie aur kyon ban gaye, aur Level Up Tower me ja kar ek controlled tarike se apna lavel badhate hain, dikhaya hai.

Yup! Lekin ye tower ab jaye ga to baad me shayad kuch Arc's ke baad aye ga, Ye Arc jaisa soch rahe ho uss se alag hone wala hai

Lekin yeh baat to sahi hai ki keval Aarav ko chhod kar saare characters badal gaye, pichle walon se koi connection nahi abhi dikh raha hai. Lekin revenge story hai, weh sab bhi ayenge hi

Exactly!

Ek suggestion hai, agar arcs ke naam likh dein, to aur idea lag jayega.

Agar Ready hote to zaroor deta, Aisa nahi hai ke story nahi hai lekin Arc's abhi bhi + aur - ho rahe hai, For Example, Abhi yahan Level Up Tower ka Arc ane wala tha, Lekin ye Readers ke liye aur Ofcourse mere liye boring hone wala tha, Uss break period me main ne 30 Update ke Arc ko 6 Update me convert ker ke ek Arc hata dia hai, Abhi aage kitne hate ga decided nahi hai, Ek baar mujhe wo sab Align karne do phir Arc's ke naam update ker du ga

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bahut likhe the by mistake bahan ho gaya sorry ha

Mujhe laga ke Readers ko kuch keh rahe the

Bhai bahan se readers bas stories pad ke nikal jate hai like nhi karte esliye time lag raha hai app disappointment huwa hoga I know but hm log hai

Likes ki dikkat nahi hai bhayia ji! Lekin mostly readers review nahi dete to un ki presence ka ehsaas nahi hota hai, Like se ye pata lagta rehta hai ke kitne log parh rahe hai story ko, Lekin agar Target nahi bhi hota to story chalti rahe gi

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bhai sabhi se request hai ki story padhte ho apko anonymous rahna hai achi bat hai but like to kar skte hai na bhut log ye soch ke I'd nhi bnate hai ki unki mail I'd chali jaegi aesa kuch nhi hoga ap mail I'd ko unsubscribe bhi kr skte ho phir apko mail nhi jaega
Apki like or story ka review writer ko motivate krti hai kyuki yahan kisi writer ko payment to milta nhi hai Jo milta hai to like ke roop main pyar or review ke roop main advice
To meri ap sabhi se gujarish hai ki like kijiye isse motivation milta hai

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Very Nice Update bhai

Very nice update

Bro shandar lajab mast update bro

Bhai arav kyu Marr rha h usko

Dil khus kar diya bhai

nice update

Nice update

Nice update

Very nice update.

Nice and fantastic update

Fabulous update dia hai bhai...maza aa gaya...

Bhai update bahut badhiya hai lekin fir se suspence aa gaya

Shandar update bro

Super awesome update

Mind blowing

Nice update

Bht mazay ki update hy bs ab jaldi 24 ajye new update ka wait nhi ho raha

Amazing update

Waiting

Good update n story Bhai ... Waiting for your update

Sashi baat hai bhai...sabse gujarish hai ki story padhkar like to kar dijiye...

and Stay Tuned!

 

[realfriend]

Waiting dude....

 

[prem pujari]

28 tarikh agayi hai abhi update de sakte ho kya Salty~Otaku

 

[drx prince]

Wating for next update bhai