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Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

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UPDATE 42 ~
(TINKERBELL)



Level Up Tower
Tower Hotel ~ 6:47 AM



*Crunch-Munch*



Aarav soo raha tha ke tabhi wo kuch chabane ki awaaz sun ker uth gaya, Uss ne saamne daikha to bed ke side table per baithi Spirit ek plate se fruit uthate huwe kha rahi thi.



Aarav uth ker baith gaya aur time daikhne laga, Raat ko Aarav ne kuch aur test diye the Rank pata karne ke liye, Caroline ne Tower me he khaali kamra Aarav ko de dia kuch dino ke liye to Aarav wanha soo gaya.



Ek lambe samay ke baad Aarav kisi bistar per soya tha, Aarav ne Spirit ko uss ke pankhon se pakar ker utha lia, Spirit pehle to dar gayi ke ye kia huwa phir Aarav ko daikh ker gusse se laal hone lagi.



Spirit: Abhi me abhi mujhe neeche waapid rakho! Main ek Spirit hu, Tum aise treat nahi ker sakte mujhe.



Aarav(Grin): Haan, Ek spirit lekin meri personal servant spirit! Abhi tum mere liye rakhe fruits kha rahi thi, Master ke liye rakha khaana Servant kaise kha sakta hai?



Aarav ne ghoomate huwe Spirit Pillow per phaink dia, Spirit gusse se usse daikhne lagi, Aarav uth ker parde hatane laga.



Spirit(Embarrassed): Main kha nahi rahi thi......! Wo main Poison daikh rahi thi, Kia pata kal un larkiyo me se koi badla lene ke liye tumhe maarne ki koshis karti?



Aarav: Aisa kia? Phir to tum Check ker sakti ho.



Spirit(Glitter): Sachi?.....*Cough* Mera matlab agar tum keh rahe ho to zaroor! Lekin ye mat samajhna ke main lalach me ye ker rahi hu, we Spirits don't do shameless things like smelling, eating, or... *whispers* pooping, We're better than you humans, you know? We aren't held back by weaknesses like you are.



Aarav ne usse kuch bhi nahi kaha aur waapis aa ker baith gaya, Spirit bhi maze se Fruits khaane lagi, Aarav apni system window khol ker uss per aya notification daikhne laga.



[System Bazaar Quest]

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Kal un sab ke beech khare Aarav ko ye Quest mili thi, System Aarav se uss ke stats nahi cheen sakta tha to wo uss ki seal se Aarav ko force ker raha tha, Aarav bhi Tower ko andar se daikhna chahta tha to uss ne Quest puri karne ka socha aur un sab se puch lia.


Sabhi auraten uss ki baat se heraan huwi, Lekin Caroline bina kuch kahe he uss ki request maan li aur usse agle din Hannah ke saath tower me jaane ki permission de di.



Aarav ne apna Armor pehna aur Spirit ko le ker baahir aa gaya, Kal Aarav Island ko daikh nahi saka tha, Wanha sabhi log normal logo ki tarha he hans khel rahe the, Un sab ke liye wo sab kisi game ki tarha ka tha.



Un me se kuch log apne Armor ko customize karwa ker superhero costume banaye huwe the, Wanhi kuch kisi warrior ki tarha tayar huwe the.



Spirit(Munching): Humans hote huwe bhi tumhare log acha Barrier banaye hai! Shayad tumhare log utne useless nahi hai jitna Guardian unhe samajhta tha.


Spirit Aarav ke kandhe per baithi apne muh me bhare fruits ko khaate huwe boli, Aarav ne upar asmaan ki taraf daikha, Pura island ek tarha ke Barrier se cover tha.


Aarav: haan, Sach me kabhi kabhi log kamal ke ho sakte hai! Ye barrier sirf Player's ko bhaagne se rokne ke liye tha, Lekin Caroline ke kahe anusar samay ke saath Barrier ko upgrade kia gaya hai, Ab ye barrier sab ke liye un ke hisaab se ek different temprature ki tarha bhi kaam karta hai, Agar koi thande Area se hai to uss ke liye Temprature thanda ho ga aur garam Area walo ke liye garam ho ga, Lekin effect ke saath isse maintain karne ke liye bhi bohat Player's ki ability lagti hai



Samundar ke beech bhi Aarav ko thand nahi lag rahi thi, Ye Player's ke liye ek Jail ki tarha thi, Lekin yahan unhe azadi thi to mostly Player's khud he yahan se baahir nahi nikalna chahte the.


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Aarav chalte huwe Tower ke paas aa gaya, Tower ke saath he ek building bana di gayi thi Player's ke liye Aarav andar chala gaya, Wanha bane portal se Player's lagatar Tower ke andar aur baahir aa ja rahe the.



Wanhi kuch Player's reception ke paas khare apni baari ka wait ker rahe the, Sabhi kaamo ke liye wahan ek proper system bana dia gaya tha Association ki taraf se, Wo Player's ke beech kisi bhi tarha ki larayi nahi hone dena chahte the.


“Hey, Kiddo!”



Hannah ki unchi awaaz ne wahan lagbhag sabhi logo ka dhayan apni taraf kheench lia, Hannah wahan kuch logo ke saath khari huwi thi un ke beech he ek thi Mia uss ke sivaye Aarav ne kisi aur ko ab se pehle nahi daikha tha.



Sabhi Male Player to Hannah ko aise Aarav se friendly behave karte daikh ker he jalne lage, Aarav ne un per dhayan nahi dia aur Hannah ke paas chala gaya.



Hannah(Smile): Right on time! Zimedari ko ache se samajhte ho tum, Kuch time wait karo hum andar jaane he wale hai, Tum party members ke saath mil lo.



Aarav ne sabhi logo ki taraf daikha tha wo sabhi usse wahan daikh ker kuch khaas react nahi ker rahe the.


Hannah: Becky ya Caroline ko dhoond rahe ho kia? Wo hamare saath nahi jaye gi, Becky ko Island per sambhalna hota hai to wo shuru ke 1-2 floor se zada Tower ke andar nahi jaati aur Caroline abhi acting incharge hai to wo bhi hamare saath nahi ho gi, So basically *Side Hug* Tum mere saath phans gye ho yahan.



Aarav: Mujhe idea tha ke wo nahi aye gi! Main sirf party daikh raha tha ke kaise Members hai party me aur main kahan join ker sakta hu?



Hannah: Aisa hai to tum sab se mil lo! Main tab tak reception per inform ker ke ati hu.



Hannah wanha se chali gayi, Aarav ne party members ki taraf daikha to un me se kisi ne bhi Aarav per dhayan nahi dia, Aarav ne Mia ko daikha to wo sab se alag khamoosh baithi huwi thi, Usse daikh ker lag nahi raha tha ke wo kisi se baat karna chahti hai.



Spirit: Ye kal wali larki hai na? Ye bhi hume Join ker rahi hai kia?



Aarav: Lag to aisa he raha hai! Becky ka kehna hai ke ye uss ki Black Force ki best members me se ek hai, Shayad kuch khaas ho ga.



Spirit(Sigh): Tum ek pal ke liye bhi sach nahi bol sakte kia? Tumhe itna sa bhi farak nahi parta uss ki kabiliyat se?


Aarav: Yeah, Lekin main bilkul uninterested bhi nahi hu! Sach kahu to Mia mujhe kisi ki yaad dilati hai, Ek purani Party member ki, Agar daikha jaye to dono ki Personality bohat similar hai.



Spirit(Tease): Ummm! Koi purani party member ya koi purani mehbooba?


Aarav(Smirk): Spirits ko dusro ki zindagi me kab se intrest hone laga?



Spirit ka muh ban gaya aur wo chup ker gayi, Mia bhi wahan se nikal ker Hannah ke paas chali gayi, Aarav bhi wanhi chalne laga aur sab kuch dhayan se daikhne laga.


Ye tower me jaane ke liye kisi station ki tarha ka tha, Yanhi Player's ke liye healer aur kuch weapons shop bhi thi, Alag Alag deshon ke log Aarav ko yahan daikhne ko mil rahe the.


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Un me se kuch Player's the to kuch Guide the un Player's ko guide karne ke liye-


*Rustle* *Rustle*


Chalte huwe Aarav ko ek indian larka dikhayi dia, Wo ek bag me samaan rakh raha tha, Wo saath khara tha to Aarav samajh gaya ke ye bhi Party member he hai.



Aarav: Check!




[Player Name: Tarun Sharma
Level: 12
Rank: (F)]



Aarav uss ke paas chala gaya, Tarun apne bag me Potions, Food aur Weapons rakh raha tha, Wo ek bara Bag tha aur uss me bohat kuch bhara huwa tha.



Aarav: Ye sab tum uthane wale ho kia?



Tarun(Scared): Shitttt....*Gasping* Sorry, Tum ne Achanak bola to main chaunk gaya!


Tarun apni saanse sambhalne laga, Uss ne bilkul Expect nahi kia tha ke koi uss se baat karne aye ga to wo apne kaam me laga huwa tha.


Spirit: [Itna lamba samay Insanon ke beech na rehne se ye he ho ga! Abhi pehle insanon ke saath rehna seekho]


Spirit ne Aarav ko baat sunane ka mauka haath se nahi jaane dia, Wo ye sab aise keh rahi thi jaise wo khud per bohat proud ho.



Aarav ne usse kuch bhi nahi kaha aur Tarun per dhayan dene laga, Tarun bhi apne haath me pakra samaan neeche rakhne laga.


Tarun(Smile): I'm Tarun Sharma!


Tarun ne apna haath aage badhate huwe kaha, Uss ke chehre per ek energetic aur excitement se bharpur muskurahat thi, Aarav ne bhi uss se haath mila lia.


Aarav: Aarav Arya! Aj ke mission me main bhi join ker raha hu, Waise tum ne bataya nahi ke ye itna sab tum utha ker le jaane wale ho kia?



Tarun: Ye sab mera nahi hai! Lekin, Yup, Ye sab main le jaane wala hu, Party ka ultimate supporter, Mera kaam sabhi ke Weapons aur samaan ko carry karna hai.


“Yahan kia baate karne aye ho tum?”


Aarav aur Tarun baat ker he rahe the ke ek Larki un ke paas aa gayi, Uss ke chehre per dono ko baate karte daikh chirh saaf dikh rahi thi.


*Check*



[Player Name: Malia Hale
Level: ???
Rank: ???]



Malia(Rudely): Ek F rank hote huwe bhi tumhe ek important mission ke liye saath le ja rahe hai! Tumhe nahi lagta ke tumhe tayari per dhayan dena chahiye? Tumhari bewakoofi ya laparwahi se hume kuch bhi huwa to tumhare liye acha nahi ho ga.



Malia ate he Tarun per barasne lagi, Aarav ko samajh aa gayi ke ye un superiority complex wale logo me se ek hai, Malia ne apna ek bag Tarun ko pakra dia.


Malia(Warning): Baate karne me samay barbad mat karo! Ye bag sambhal ker rakho, Agar kuch bhi rakhna bhoole to mujh se bura koi nahi ho ga.



Malia usse warning de ker Aarav ko ghoorte huwe wahan se chali gayi, Tarun bina kuch bole Malia ka samaan bhi apne bag me rakhne laga.



Tarun: Tum miss Malia ki baato ko serious mat lena! Wo sirf sabhi ko safely mission pura karwana chahti hai, Ye to waise bhi mera kaam hai.


Aarav: Hmm, Tumhe koi pareshani nahi hai to mujhe kiu ho gi?



Tarun: Haan, Lekin ye sab worth it hai! Tum khud socho, Mujhe F rank per hote huwe aisi opportunity kahan mil sakti thi? Miss Hannah ke saath un ka party member ban ker Tower me jaana? Ummmm *Excited* soch ker he kitna acha lag raha hai!


Tarun puri fan boying ker raha tha Hannah ke liye, Lekin sirf wo he nahi wahan lagbhag sabhi ke liye Hannah ek senior thi, Wanhi Hannah ki khubsurati bhi kuch kam nahi thi.


“Kiddo!”


Un ke baat karte huwe he Hannah bhi apna kaam ker ke aa gayi, Uss ke ate he Tarun seedha ho ker khara jo gaya jaisi soldier kisi Senior ke ane per seedha khara hota hai, Uss ka chehra laal hone laga jo Aarav daikh sakta tha.



Hannah: Hum sab ne Party join ker li hai! Tum bhi party invitation accept ker ke join ker lo.



Hannah ne apni system window per click karte huwe Aarav ko party invitation bhej dia, Yanha ab Player's ko ye option bhi ata tha ke wo apni Party bana sakte the.



Hannah: Tum Mia ki tarha mere saath raho gye! Yaad rakhna mere saath rehne ka matlab puri Party ki responsibility hum per hai.



Aarav: Hmm, Main soch raha tha ke mera first time hai to mujhe itna important role nahi lena! Kia main bhi ek supporter ban sakta hu?


Hannah ne Aarav ke saath khare Tarun ko daikha, Wo Hannah ki taraf daikh bhi nahi raha tha.



Hannah: Sure! Lekin yaad rakhna, When I'm gonna need you for real, you better bring your ass over to me.


Hannah ne hanste huwe ye keh ker Aarav ko dobara Invitation bhej dia, Aarav ne Invitation accept ker lia.


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Hannah: Tum Tarun ho, Right? Dhayan rakhna ye Idiot kuch garbad na ker de.



Hannah Tarun ke kandhe ko thapthapate huwe wanha se chali gayi, Uss ke jaate he Tarun neeche gir gaya aur lambi lambi saanse bharne laga.


Aarav: Dhayan se behosh mat ho jana! Hume abhi andar bhi jana hai.


Tarun(Glitter): M-Miss Hannah....Miss Hannah ko tum se zyada mujh per bharosa hai......! Ummm, Unhe main yaad tha mera naam.


Aarav(Stare):.......Tum to sach me kaam se ja chuke ho! Agar itna he Miss Hannah pasand hai to strong ban ker officially uss ki party kiu nahi join ker lete?



Aarav ki baat sun ker pehli baar ek pal ke liye Tarun ke chehre se uss ki muskurahat gayab huwi, Lekin wo waapis normal bhi ho gaya.


Tarun: Actually....Mera battle experience kuch khaas acha nahi raha hai! Nahi.....Meri Ability battle ke liye suitable nahi hai, Mujhe Party join ker ke he apna experience barha ker Level Up karna ho ga, Lekin ek baar main enough strong ho gaya to khud mehnat ker ke Rank Up ker lu ga, Phir main seedhe Miss Hannah ke paas ja ker un ki partyyyy *Excited*



Aarav usse uss ke khayalo mer chorte huwe uss ke bag me se kuch samaan nikalte huwe apne bag me daalne laga, Tarun ka bag bhi halka ho gaya.


Hannah: Okay Guys! Ab hamari baari hai, Yaad rahe hamara ek he mission hai, Phanse huwe Player's ko safely baahir laane ka, Hume kisi aur cheez per time waste nahi karna hai, Ab mujh se kuch team motivation ke liye Speech expect mat karna, Ab sab jaane ke liye tayar ho jao.



Hannah ne koi speech nahi di thi, Lekin uss ki baato se sabhi Members active ho gye the, Hannah un sab ko le ker Gate ke paas aa gayi.



Wanha un ko mili permission check karne ke baad un sab ko andar jaane de dia gaya, Sabhi log tower ke andar first floor per chale gye.



Aarav kal yanhi sabhi se mila tha, Tower khud he rebuild ho jaata tha, Kal ka sabhi damage bhi rebuild ho ker sahi ho gaya tha.


****

Level Up Tower
Player Association Building ~ 9:13 AM



*Knock* *Knock*



Caroline ke office ke darwaze per dastak huwi to uss ne apne haath me pakre papers neeche rakh diye, Darwaza kholte huwe Becky andar aa gayi.



Becky(Reporting): Wo sabhi tower me chale gye hai! Aarav ne khud se supporter ke role ke liye volunteer karte huwe ek supporter ban ker saath gaya hai.



Caroline: Hmm, Uss me kuch pareshani nahi hai! Agar kuch khaas huwa to Hannah aur Mia sambhal le gi usse.



Becky: Lekin ap ko nahi lagta ke Aarav per itni jaldi trust karna galat hai? Abhi tak hume uss ka kuch pata bhi nahi laga hai, Wanhi ap ki Mind Reading ability bhi uss per kaam nahi ki.


Becky ki baat sun ker Caroline khari ho gayi aur chalte huwe apne office ki window ke paas chali gayi, Jaise wo apne thoughts ko clear ker rahi ho.


Caroline: Aisa nahi hai ke main uss ka mind read nahi ker sakti! Lekin uss ke mind me read karne ke liye kuch hai he nahi, Na kisi ke liye koi nafrat na he kisi ke liye pyaar.



Becky: Per ye kaise possible ho sakta hai?



Caroline(Smile): Ye mujhe bhi nahi pata ke ye kaise possible hai! Lekin wanha sab kuch alag tha, Main jitna uss ko andar se daikhna chah rahi thi main utna he uss me doob rahi thi, Main feel ker sakti thi ke uss ke andar Emotions hai, Lekin wo kanhi bhi aisi jagha nahi the jahan main unhe daikh sakti.



Caroline ki baat sun ker Becky bhi heraan ho gayi, Caroline ki Ability khud me he alag thi, Lekin wo bhi Aarav ko samajhne me asafal rahi thi.


Caroline: Uss ka Mind to main read nahi ker saki! Lekin uss ko samajhne ke liye uss ka Mind Read karna zaroori nahi hai, Main wanha baithe huwe he mehsoos ker sakti thi aur shayad tum ne bhi kia ho, Kal wo yanha tumhare dar se nahi aya tha, Wo yanha hum sab ghira huwa tha, Lekin hum usse nahi wo hume Test ker raha tha.



Caroline ne seeshe se nazre hata ker becky ki taraf daikhte huwe kaha, Becky bhi uss ki baat per kuch nahi keh saki, Uss ne kal khud Aarav ki power feel ki thi, Lekin wo uss ki full power nahi thi.



Caroline: Aj ke mission me usse hum ne nahi bheja! Wo khud gaya hai, Lekin mujhe vishwas hai ke wo abhi hamare liye danger nahi hai, Main usse rok nahi sakti thi, 10 saal beetne ke baad bhi ab tak hum ye nayi duniya ko control me nahi la paye hai, Aise me agar hum Aarav jaise kisi se lare to sab kuch barbad ho jaye ga, Hum abhi ke liye usse kuch nahi keh sakte hai.



Becky(Concern): Lekin hum kaise ye decide ker sakte hai? Seniors ke waapis ane per wo shayad Aarav ko samajh nahi sake gye, Tab kia kare gye hum?



Caroline: Uss ke liye he main ne Aarav se raat ko baat ker ke ek fake Background banwa dia hai! Aarav ke background me ab wo ek orphanage me bara huwa bacha hai, Uss ki awakening ka pata lagne per Hannah usse tower me le ker ayi hai.




Becky ka ye pehli baar tha ke wo Caroline ko aise Association ke khilaf jate daikh rahi thi, Caroline kabhi bhi Rules per dheel nahi karti thi, Lekin Aarav ki wajha se wo Association aur Aarav ke beech khari huwi thi.



Becky: Jaisa ap ko sahi lage! Main ap ke har decision me ap ke saath hu.



Caroline ne Becky ke jawab per usse ek halki muskurahat pass ker di, Caroline bhi thori kashmkash me thi apne faisle ke upar, Lekin kisi ke saath hone se wo kashmkash bhi khatam ho gayi thi.


Caroline(Sigh): Huh, Aarav Arya! Main umeed karti hu mujhe kabhi apne faisale per Pachtawa nahi karwao gye.


****

Level Up Tower
8th Floor ~ 1:52 PM




*Bammm*



Malia ne apne haath me pakre huwe ek bare Hammer se saamne se aa rahi Hoblins ko maarna shuru ker dia, Uss ke saath he Mia apni sword ke saath Hoblins ko maar rahi thi.


Dono he Party ki Direct Damage Dealer thi, Un ke saath Party ko Lead karte huwe Vanguard per Hannah thi, Esper Ability se Hannah kisi bhi Hoblins ko Party ke kareeb nahi ane de rahi thi, Baki sabhi log abhi ke liye contribute nahi ker rahe the aur sirf saath chal rahe the.


Aarav: Tum keh rahe ho ke tum 3 saal pehle Player bane ho? Lekin Player's to 10 saal pehle awake huwe the na?



Sab se peeche Aarav aur Tarun bag uthaye chal rahe the, Aarav larayi per dhayan nahi de raha tha aur Tower ki Information lene ki koshis ker raha tha, Tarun ka Level kam tha lekin uss ki Tower knowledge achi thi.



Tarun: Haan, 10 Saal pehle Player's Awake huwe the! Lekin tab sirf ek bare Numbers me Player Awake huwe the, Abhi bhi har saal kuch Player's Awake hote hai, Association ne uss ke liye he Tower ke baahir bhi apne log bheje huwe hai, Jaise he koi Naya Player aye to usse safely Tower me le aya jata hai.



Aarav ko ab situation kuch had tak samajh ane lagi thi, Tutorial Tower me Akhri Party Aarav ki he gayi thi, Uss ke baad ek mass Player Awakening shuru ho gayi thi, Lekin baad wale sabhi Player's Tutorial Tower Player ki tarha ke nahi the.



Baad wale Player's me potential kam thi Tutorial Tower wale Player's ke mukable, Ek tarha se jab duniya me Gates khulne shuru huwe to wo sabhi assist karne ke liye the Tutorial Tower wale Player's ko, Ab lagbhag sabhi Tutorial Tower wale Player's S Rank ban chuke the.



Abhi bhi Duniya me Gates khul rahe the, Lekin Player's ki tarha he Gates ka number bhi kam ho chuka tha, Newly Awake Player ko seedhe Level Up tower le aya jata hai ke wo yahan apna Level Up ker sake.


Uss ke baad agar Association unhe Allow kare to Tower Island se baahir ja sakte the, Association puri koshis ker rahi thi ke Player's aur Gates ko Normal logo se secret rakh sake.


Lekin ye santulan aise he nahi ban sakta, Association ke liye bhi ye sab kuch mushkil tha, Earth per ab lagbhag 0.5% Population System Awake ker ke Player ban chuki thi.



Hannah: Hum Gate per aa gye hai! Loot lene ki zaroorat nahi hai, Hamare liye abhi Mana Stones zaroori nahi hai, Hume Mission per dhayan dena hai.



Hannah ki baat maante huwe kisi ne bhi Hoblins ki bodies se Stone nahi uthaye, Un ke saamne Pedon ke beech me ek Gate khula huwa tha.


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Aise he Gate har floor per the, Ye gate floors shift karne ka raasta tha, Agle floor per jaane ke liye gate dhoond ker uss me jaana hota hai, Prison ki tarah yahan sabhi Monster's ko maarna zaroori nahi tha.


Hannah ke saath sabhi Uss gate me chale gye, Aarav aur Tarun sab se akhir me andar gye aur dusri taraf 9th floor per baahir aye.



*Grooowwwwrrrrr*


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Aarav ke nikalte he usse apne saamne ek bara samp dikhayi dia, Samp ek bare pathar ke upar baitha huwa tha, Uss ka Aura Strong tha, Aarav ne apne Sword ki taraf haath barhaya to Tarun ne usse rok dia.



Tarun: Ghabrao mat! Ye ek Guardian Beast hai, Ye Association head ka Tame beast hai, Hume koi khatra nahi hai ye hamari safety ke liye yahan hai.



Aarav ne dobara daikha to uss samp ke paas log araam se chal rahe the, Lekin wo Aarav ki taraf ajeeb tarha se daikh raha tha.



Spirit: [Ye ek White Dragon hai! Main ne pehle bhi in ko daikha hai, Ye ek Friendly monster hai, Ye kisi ko hurt nahi karte]



Aarav: [Lekin mujhe nahi lagta ke ye mujhe yahan daikh ker khush hai]



Spirit: [Obviously! Tum ek Dragon Slayer ho, Ye exactly dragon nahi lekin un se related hai, Wo tum se larne ki nahi bachne ki soch raha hai]



Hexarion ko maarne ke baad Aarav ko ye title mila tha, Aarav ko Prison me bhi Dragon se acha response nahi milta tha, Lekin wo sabhi Dragon shaktishali the aur Aarav se darte nahi the.


Aarav: Association Head apne Tame beast ko yahan kiu rakhe huwe hai? Agar ye beast baahir un ke saath hota to un ke liye zada acha nahi hota kia?



Tarun: Yup, Lekin ye Player's ki safety ke liye hai! Actually, Ek baar Boss monster gate se baahir aa gaya tha, Player's ke liye mushkil ho gaya Boss monster se larna, Association head ne har Boss Floor ke pehle ek Guardian Beast rakha huwa hai, Wo floor Player's ke liye ek safe Zone ki tarha bhi kaam karta hai.


Tarun Aarav ko thora aage le ker aya, Wo unchai per the, Aarav ko neeche ek Village dikhayi di, Wanha kuch Player's ghoom rahe the.



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Tarun: har 10 floor ke baad Boss monster ata hai! Player's Guardian Beast ki protection me boss monster se larne se pehle rest ker sakte hai.


Aarav ne Dragon ki taraf daikha to wo shaant ho chuka tha, Aarav ne bhi usse kuch nahi kaha aur Tarun ke saath neeche Village me aa gaya.



Un ki party kuch samay wanha rukne wali thi, Ye ek border bhi tha, F Rank ke Player's sirf yanhi tak akele aa sakte the, Unhe Boss monster se larne ki permission nahi thi.


Tarun: Tum to sach me kuch nahi jaante! Agar main nahi rokta tum ab tak Guardian Beast se lar ker marne wale hote, Mujhe kuch karna ho ga.



Tarun ne apna bag neeche rakha aur uss me kuch dhoondne laga, Tarun ne ek book dhoond ker baahir nikali aur Aarav ko pakra di.


Tarun: Ye ek Guide hai! Main ne Senior Player's se aage ke floor ki thori thori information le ker iss me likh di hai, Ye perfect nahi hai lekin tumhare kaam aye gi, Parh ker mujhe waapis ker dena.


Aarav(Checking): Thanks!



Tarun(Proudly): Ab itna to main ker sakta hu! Miss Hannah ne tumhari zimedari mujhe di hai, Kuch bhi madad chahiye ho mujhe batana.


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Aarav wanhi ek hotel me tarun ke saath baith gaya, Wanha Player's daru pee rahe the aur kuch apni baato me lage huwe the, Aarav wo Guide khol ker usse parhne laga.



Tarun ne alag alag point likhe huwe the, Tarun Usse important points samjhane bhi laga ke un ka kia matlab hai.



•Monster's ke rank me bhi Level hote hai, Jaise Goblins hai, Sabhi Goblins F Rank hote hai, Lekin un ke level bhi alag alag hote hai, Level 1 se le ker Level 7 tak sabhi Goblins F Rank hai lekin sab ka power Level alag alag hota hai, Aage ke Ranks aur monster ke liye bhi aisa he hai.



•Level Up Tower me 10 floors ka set tha, Matlab agar 1-10 floor me sabhi per sirf Goblins he the, Lekin un ka level aur Numbers barhte rehte hai, har 9 Floor ke baad 10th floor per boss monster hota hai.


•Har floor ko ek Color dia gaya tha, Un Colors ke hisaab se sabhi Floor ki difficulty ko describe kia jata tha, Green, Yellow, Orange, Red, Purple aur last me Black, Floor color se decide hota tha ke konsi Party kanha tak ja sakti hai.



•Boss Rooms me Player ko 2 option milte hai Boss ko harane ke baad, Wo waapis Tower se baahir ja sakte hai ya wo aage barh sakte hai, Lekin agar wo aage jaate hai to unhen agle Boss ko harana ho ga waapis jaane ke liye, Un ke paas bina boss ko haraye waapis jaane ka koi raasta nahi ho ga.


•Ek Player ya Party ko permission me bataya jata hai ke wo kanha tak ja sakte hai, Agar wo uss se aage gye to wo Rule Violation ker rahe ho gye.


•Guardian Beast ko harm karna Allowed nahi hai, Sabhi Guardian Beast boss room se pehle association ki taraf se wahan rakhe gye hai, Player's Guardian Beast ke paas Safely rest ker sakte hai.


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Aarav: [Machar! Ye trolls kaise Monster's hai? Mujhe nahi lagta ke main ne koi Troll Prison me daikha ho?]



Spirit: [Tum ne iss liye nahi daikha kiu ke Trolls khud se utne strong nahi hai! Trolls Ugly bare se Monster's hai. Euh, Lekin wo khatarnak hote hai kiu ke un ka birth rate bohat zyada hai, Number me zada hone se wo bina dare hamesha aage barhte rehte hai, Un ki.....Wait....*Furious* Tum ne dobara mujhe Machar kaha? Main nahi kuch batane wali jab tak mujhe koi naam nahi dete ab]



Spirit gusse me muh phula ker ghoom gayi-



Aarav: [Fine! Abhi deta hu tumhe naam]



Spirit(Sparkling): [Sachi? Tum ne koi Naam socha huwa hai kia?]



Aarav: Hmm, Tarun! Tumhe agar lagbhag 13 Centimeter ki larki jis ke pankh bhi ho aur wo urti ho usse naam dena huwa to kia do gye?



Tarun(Cough): Ye sawal kahan se aa gaya? Guide me kuch aisa bhi likha hai kia?


Aarav: Nahi! Lekin aise he agar tumhe dena Huwa to tum kia naam do gye?


Tarun: Let me think! 13 Centimeter ki pankhon wali Larki, Ye to ek fairy lag rahi hai, Jaise Peter Pan me Tinkerbell thi.



[Spirit Servant Name (Tinkerbell) Confirmation received]


[Tinkerbell's loyalty level increased. She is now more devoted to you]


[Tinkerbell's stats and abilities have been unlocked]


[Tinkerbell is growing stronger. Her power level has increased]



Ek pal me Aarav ka Mana bohat kam ho gaya, Tinkerbell aur bhi zada glow karne lagi aur uss ki Pankhon ki khubsurati barh gayi.



Tinkerbell(Furious): [Ek naam bhi khud se nahi soch sakte kia? Akhir Guardian se larte samay ki intelligence kahan gayi?]



Aarav: [Itni mehnat ab kon he kare? Kiu naam pasand nahi aya kia?]



Tinkerbell(Sigh): [Huh, Sach me ajeeb ho tum! Lekin.......Naam utna bura bhi nahi hai, Kaam chala lu gi main]


*Smack*


Aarav abhi Tinkerbell se baat he ker raha tha ke Tarun ka chehra seedhe Table per aa laga, Aarav ne saamne daikha to Malia aur uss ke saath Carlos aur Alvaro khare huwe the, Alvaro Tarun ka sar Table per lagaye huwa tha.



Malia(Rudely): Yahan tumhe kaam ke liye laya gaya hai! Aur tum yahan apni masti me lage huwe ho? Kis se puch ker tum yahan aye ho?



Tarun(Groans): Sorry!


Tarun ne dard se karahte huwe kaha to Alvaro ne uss ka sar chhor dia, Tarun seedha huwa tha uss ke sar se khoon behne laga tha.


Malia: Aage se ye galti na ho tum se! Ab utho aur mera samaan apne bag me se nikaal ker do.


Tarun utha aur Malia ka kaha huwa samaan nikalne laga, Aarav shaanti se baitha sab kuch daikh raha tha, Wanha koi bhi un per dhayan nahi de raha tha ya wo beech me shamil he nahi hona chahte the.


Malia ki nazar Aarav per gayi aur wo usse daikh ker uss ki taraf ane lagi, Uss ka agla target Aarav tha, Lekin Aarav usse apni taraf ata daikh ker bhi shaanti se baitha raha.


“Kia ho raha hai yahan?”



Malia Aarav ke paas ayi he thi ke Aarav ke peeche Hannah aur Mia aa ker khari ho gayi, Malia apne saamne Hannah ko daikh ker chaunk gayi.


Malia(Frowns): Kuch nahi! Wo main sirf apna kuch samaan lene ayi thi.



Hannah: Agar le lia ho to tayar ho jao! Hum bus nikalne wale hai yahan se.



Hannah ki baat sun ker Malia ne Tarun se uss ka samaan lia aur Aarav ko ghoorte huwe apne saath aye dono members ko le ker wahan se baahir chali gayi, Hannah ne aage barh ker Tarun ke paas chali gayi.


Tarun: I'm sorry! Mujhe ap se puch ker yahan ana chahiye tha.


Hannah: Main Party leader hu tumhari owner nahi! Tum rest ker sakte ho jab tak uss se Party ko kuch harm na ho, Mia! Tarun ko Kyle ke paas le jao aur usse Tarun ko heal karne ka keh dena.


Hannah ke order milte he Mia aur Tarun wahan se Kyle ke paas jaane ke liye nikal gye, Hannah aa ker Aarav ke saath baith gayi.



Aarav ne dobara nazre ghooma ker daikha to lagbhag sabhi log wahan se uth ket chale gye the, Hannah sach me ek well-known player thi, Wahan ruk ker koi bhi usse offend nahi karna chahta tha.


Hannah(Smile): Kaisa chal raha hai Tower me tumhara pehla Experience?


Aarav: Hmm, Acha chal raha hai! Waise tum kaafi ache se lead ker rahi ho team ko, Ek shield aur warrior dono ka kaam tum akeli ker sakti ho.


Hannah (Sigh): Senior hone ke ye he nuksan hai! Sab kuchh khud he sambhalna hota hai, Lekin tum agar mere saath hote to mujhe thora relief milta, Lekin tum ne peeche bhi ek acha dost bana lia, Kaisa laga Tarun tumhe?



Aarav: Acha larka hai! Tumhara deewana hai, Khud per usse thora confidence kam hai, Lekin agar mehnat kare ga to ek acha Player ban sakta hai.



Hannah(Smile): Good, Tumhare saath rahe ga to acha Player ban jaye ga! Huh, Lekin un teeno se thora distance bana ker rakhna, Malia aur Alcaraz Brothers teeno he ek Guild ke members he hai, Un ka Guild Master bhi hamesha se Khud ko superior maanta aya hai aur uss ke Guild member bhi waise he hai, Lekin wo teeno kaam ke Player's the aur abhi ke liye ye he Available the, Mere paas koi aur choice nahi thi inhe laane ke sivaye.



Aarav: Dhayan rakhu ga!



Hannah: Chalo ab chalte hai! Hamare paas samay kam hai, Steve ki behan ko kuch bhi huwa to wo pagla jaye ga, Na-Jaane kiu aise Sister Lover's ko itni zada power mil gayi hai, Uss ke liye uss ki behan ek Princess hai, Usse kuch hone per wo apne Rank aur reputation ko bhi bhool jaye ga.



Hannah khare ho ker Aarav ko kheenchte huwe utha ker apne saath le ker baahir aa gayi, Tarun bhi Heal ho ker waapis aa gaya tha aur baki sab bhi wahan aa gye the.


Hannah: Let's go guys!



Hannah ke kehte he wo sab 10th Floor ke gate se andar chale gye.


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Level Up Tower
38th Floor ~ 9:13 PM



*Ugh*


Ek bari chattan se neeche daikhte huwe larki dar se kaanpne lagi, Uss Chattan ke paas he bohat se Trolls khare huwe upar uss ko daikh rahe the.


Larki wahan se peeche ho gayi, Uss ke peeche he 2 aur Larkiye aur ek Larka baitha huwa tha, Larki gusse se apni Peeche baithi Dusri Larki ke paas hote huwe uss ke baal pakar ker usse wanhi upar gira deti hai.



Larki(Furious): Ye sab teri wajha se ho raha hai! Hum yahan tere bharose aye the, Lekin tu kisi kaam ki nahi nikli, Teri wajha se Hamare sabhi saathi mar gye hai.



Larki 3: Emily! Anna ki koi galti bhi nahi hai, Tum thi jo hume yahan le ker ayi thi jab ke hume sirf 30 Floor tak ki permission thi.



Emily: Zoe, Tum bhi ye kaho gi ab? Main ne 30th Floor ke baad aage barhne ke liye sirf iss Anna per trust ker ke kaha tha, Mujhe laga tha ke iss ki Spatial Ability se hum Portal khol ker yahan se nikal sakte hai.


Zoe: Anna ne aisa kuch nahi kaha tha! Tum ne khud se ye soch lia tha, Anna Portal bana sakti hai, Lekin Anna ka Mana utna zada nahi hai, Anna ek din me sirf ek Portal khol sakti hai aur dono portal ek dusre se zyada distance per nahi khul sakte, Ye pata hote bhi tum thi jo hum sab ko yahan le ayi ho.


Zoe ne aage barhte huwe Anna ko thaam lia, Uss ka sharir thanda ho raha tha, Uss ka Mana khatam ho gaya tha to wo kuch behoshi ki halat me thi.


Emily Party leader thi aur uss ke kehne per wo sab 30th Floor se waapis jaane ki jagha aage aa gye the, Lekin unhe jald he ehsaas ho gaya tha ke un logo ne kitni bari galti ker di hai.


Trolls ne jab jhund me un per Attack kia to un ke paas bhaagne ke sivaye koi raasta nahi tha, Zoe ne sab ko 39th Floor tak jaane ke liye kaha ke wahan ke Guardian Beast unhe protect ker le gye.



Lekin raaste me he Trolls ne unhe gher lia, Anna ne Portal bana ker un ke liye raasta bana dia, Lekin wo sirf ek baar he portal khol sakti thi.


Wahan se bhaag ker wo sabhi nikle, Lekin un ke sabhi combat Player's raaste me he phans gye, Emily ke force karne per Anna ne ek aur portal banaya lekin wo banate he uss ki halat kharab ho gayi.



Ab wahan se bach ker nikle ye chaaro yahan chattan kd upar phans chuke the, Emily ko Zoe ki aise uss se Rudely baat karna bura to laga tha, Lekin Zoe he ek combat player bachi thi uss ke paas, Wo usse abhi apne khilaaf nahi ker sakti thi.


Emily(Frustrated): Fine, Meri galti thi! Lekin hume abhi yahan se nikalne ke baare me sochna ho ga, Sab se pehle Dan kia tum iss Anna ke Mana ka apni Healing se kuch nahi ker sakte?



Dan: Nahi, Meri healing kisi ka Mana recover nahi ker sakti! Ek aur baat 31st Floor se main bhi bohat Mana Use ker chuka hu, Mujhe bhi mera Mana recover karne ke liye 12 Ghante aur chahiye.



Emily ki aankho ke saamne se uss ki sabhi umeede khatam ho rahi thi, Ab agar Anna ka Mana recover hota bhi hai to wo sirf ek portal khol sakti hai, Lekin uss ka scout bhi Trolls me phans gaya tha.


Unhe agle Gate ki location bhi nahi pata thi, Wo yahan se nikal ker bhi bach sakte ya nahi unhe nahi pata tha, Un ke paas wahan intezar karne ke sivaye koi aur raasta nahi tha.



Zoe: Hume wait karna chahiye! Main ne communication Stone se madad ke liye message bhej dia huwa hai, Agar Stone ne sahi kaam kia hai to madad ane wali he ho gi.



Zoe ne apne haatho se Anna ki Skin ko ghisna shuru ker dia ke uss ko thand se bacha sake, Emily unhe aur kuch nahi boli aur madad ki umeed karte huwe wanhi baith gayi.




Emily(Mumble): Yahan se nikalne ke baad tum sab ko daikh lu gi! Mujhe nahi farak parta kon kis ka kia lagta hai, Lekin main kisi ko maaf nahi karu gi.


Emily ne khud se he kaha aur un sab muh phair ker wanhi lait ker sone ki koshish karne lagi, Zoe ne bhi usse kuch kehna sahi nahi samjha aur Dan ko Guard duty ka keh ker Anna ke saath lag ker lait gayi.


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Level Up Tower
Floor 29th ~ 9:59 PM



Level Up Tower me bhi raat ka samay ho raha tha, Pure Floor per Chaand ki roshni bichi huwi thi, Wanha ka Asmaan raat ke samay aur bhi dilkash lag raha tha.



Uss khubsurat raat ki chandni me Malia giri huwi thi, Uss ka chehra upar ki taraf tha aur usse apne saamne chaand dikhayi de raha tha.


*Groans*


Malia ke muh se taklif bhari karah nikal ayi, Uss ka pura chehra ansoo aur khoon se bhara huwa tha, Wanhi uss ke kapre jagha jagha se phate huwe the aur shareer per bhi ghav bane huwe the.


Malia ke paas he 29th Floor ka Guardian Beast gira huwa tha, Malia ki halat aisi thi ke wo hil bhi nahi sakti aur sirf dard kaanp rahi thi, Malia ne khud ko itna bebas aj tak kabhi mehsoos nahi kia tha.



Lagatar khoon behne se Malia ki nazar dhundhli honi shuru ho gayi thi, Malia ko ab apne saamne kuch dikh rahi thi to wo thi 2 laal khofnaak Aankhe jo usse he daikh rahi thi.



Un Aankhon ko daikh ker Malia ki Aankho se dobara Ansoo girne lage, Dard se karahte huwe uss ne apna muh khola aur mushkil se kuch bolne ki koshish ki.


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Malia(Whimpering): P-Plea.....Please Mujhe mat maaro *hiccup* Kia bigara hai....Kia bigara hai main ne tumhara? *Sob* Please mujhe jaane do, Aarav!
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Bhai story mein aajkl Maja nhi aarha hai..wo energy nhi dekne ko mil rhi phle ki trh....
 
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Bhai story mein aajkl Maja nhi aarha hai..wo energy nhi dekne ko mil rhi phle ki trh....
Kiu ke Sabhi Character ap ke liye New hai aur ap ko idea nahi hai ke story kisi taraf ja rahi hai, Ye 6 Update pure hone do sabhi thoughts clear ho jaye gye aur wo Energy waapis aa jaye gi.
 

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UPDATE 1 ~
[THE TUTORIAL TOWER]

Manali
Evening ~ 04:14


*Thud*

"Ye ho gya akhri Sofa" Single Sofe ko neeche rakhte huwe 1 admi ne bola phir usi sofe per baith ker saanse drust karne laga.

"Itne me thak gye Parth? abhi to aur bhi samaan nikalna hai Truck me se" Dusre Adhik umar ke Admi ne table ko rakhte huwe hans ker kaha.


Parth: (sigh) Pata hai pata hai! Ab saans lene to ruk he sakta hu.

"Arey Manohar bhai sahib! Aram se ker lo ap kaam koi baat nahi, Ap ki bhabhi ne chaye banayi hai ye pee lo phir ker lena baki kaam" Ek aur Admi ne haath me chaye pakre kamre ke andar ate huwe kaha.


Manohar: Arrey! Ashwin main ne kab kaha aram ne kare? per Aram karne jitna kaam bhi to kare na pehle akhir paise kis kaam ke leta hai?

Ashwin: Chale koi baat nahi bacha hai abhi wo, kaam to ho jaye ga chaye pee le pehle warna ap ki bhabhi Gussa kare gi.

Ashwin ne chaye ko table per rakhi aur Manohar ko Sofe per baitha dia, Manohar ne bhi aage kuch na kaha aur chup chap chaye peene laga.

Manohar ki umar 35 saal thi uss ka apna Furniture ka kaam tha aur iss waqt wo Furniture Deliver karne aya huwa, Wiase to manohar dukan me kaam karne wale larko ko bhej deta tha lekin ye furniture us ke purane dost Ashwin ke ghar ana tha iss liye wo khud bhi saath aya tha.

Us ke saath us ki dukan me kaam karne wala larka baitha tha Parth, Kaam to karta tha per nakhre bhi bohat the aksar Manohar se us ko daant bhi sun'ni parti thi

Ashwin: Bhai sahib Aarav ko bhi andar ane ko keh dete! Bechara kab se laga huwa hai wo bhi kuch der baith jaye, us ki halat bhi mujhe kuch sahi nahi lag rahi.

Ashwin ne khirki se bahir ek Jawan larke ko October ki thand me kaam karte daikhte huwe kaha

Manohar: (Sigh) Ap ko kia lagta hai? agar use bula sakta to main kiu na bulata? use agar kahe gye bhi to wo nahi aye ga, Yahan se uss ko jaldi kaam pura ker ke dusre kaam per nikalna hai, Iss liye yahan ka kaam wo jaldi niptana chahta hai.

Manohar ne chaya ka khali cup wapis Table per rakhte huwe kaha, Us ki ankho me Mayooshi jhalakne lagi thi maano wo bebas ho is mamle me.

Ashwin: (Frowns) Per iss halat me dusra kaam? Aise agar wo kaam karta raha to wo khud ko koi bara nuksaan pohancha baithe ga.


Manohar: kia kahu Ashwin! Bechare Bache ko kis muh se kahu ke wo aram ker le Maa Bachpan me dono behan bhai aur baap ko chorr gayi, Upar se jo baap tha wo zimedariyo ko nibhane ke kabil he nahi tha, aur akhir main 2 saal pehle wo bhi duniya se chala gaya bache ke sar per 18 saal ki umar me kanwari behan ki zimedari aa gayi iss liye School chorr ker kaam per lag gaya Zindagi itna sab us bache se le ker bhi khush na huwi ke kuch arsa pehle us ki behan ki medical report me Cancer dikh gaya, Sirf stage 2 hone ki wajha se cancer curable to hai lekin paise to us me bhi lagte hai na? ab ye bacha 18 ghante lagatar alag alag jagha per kaam ker ke paise ikathe ker raha hai apni behan ke liye.


Manohar ki baat sun Ashwin ki ankho me Aarav ke liye hamdardi jhalakne lagi, wo daikhne laga kis tarha bina kisi bhi cheez ki parwah kiye 1 jawan larka mehnat ker raha hai

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Wanhi bahir Aarav ek ek ker ke sab cheeze truck se bahir rakhne me laga huwa tha, Aarav 20 saal ka ek jawan larka tha us ke kapre purane the use daikh ker he pata lag sakta tha ke wo theek se khana nahi khata us ki ankho ke neeche dark circle ban rahe the der raat tak kaam karne ki wajha se.

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Sab cheeze bahir rakh ker Aarav Truck se neeche utarne ke liye truck ke kinare per aa gya, Aarav neechhe utarne he laga tha jab achanak us ka paon phisal gaya us ne khud ko bachane ke liye truck ki side ko pakar lia per wahan ek ek keel nikli huwi thi jo seedhi Aarav ke haath per lagi aur us ki hatheli cheer di.


Aarav neeche girte girte bacha lekin us ke haath se khoon behne laga tha, Us ne jaldi se apne haath ki muthi band ker li aur apne dusre haath se apni jeb me rakha romal nikalne laga,Romal nikal ker Aarav ne apne haath per lapait lia.

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Aarav ne dobara haath ki muthi bana li aur upar asman ki taraf daikhte huwe dard ko bardasht karne laga, October ka maheena tha aur Aarav ko mehsoos ho raha tha ke Snowfall hone wali hai.

*ring* *ring*


Abhi Aarav ko khare kuch der he huwi thi ke us ke phone per Call ane lagi Aarav ne apna keypad wala phone nikala jis ko type laga ker apas me jora huwa tha, Aarav ne screen daikhi aur thook nighal ker call attend ker li.


Aarav: Hello!


Caller: Kahan Reh gye larke? yahan hotel me customer ane shuru ho gye aur tumhara kuch pata he nahi hai, 1 ghante me mujhe tum yahan chahiye ho, warna kanhi aur daikh lena kaam.

Saamne se caller ne chilate huwe kaha jo us hotel ka malik tha jahan Aarav ne iss ke baad jana tha, Kaam se nikaalne ka sun ker Aarav ke chehre per pareshani ke bhav aa gye.

Aarav: Sorry! Main aa raha.


Caller ne jawab sun ker Call band ker di, Aarav ne ek lamba saans bhara aur dobara Chair ko uthane laga.


"Aarav" Ghar se bahir nikalte huwe Manohar ne Aarav ko awaz lagayi, Aarav ne saamne daikha to Manohar, Ashwin aur Parth teeno chalte huwe aa rahe the.


Manohar: (Frowns) Aarav ye tumhare haath per kia huwa hai?


Manohar ne aage barh Aarav ka haath pakra aur romal khol ker daikhne laga, Aarav ke haath se khoon lagatar beh raha tha Manohar ne gusse Aarav ki taraf daikha to Aarav ne apna sar jhuka lia.


Parth: Aarav Chal mere saath yanhi paas Clinic hai wahan se Dressing karwa ate hai.


Aarav: Us ki zaroorat nah....!

iss se pehle Aarav apni baat puri karta manohar ne use ghoor ke daikha to Aarav chup ker gaya, Aarav ko pata tha Manohar kabhi kisi per aise gussa nahi hota, Aarav ki use fikar thi wo Aarav ko apne bete ki tarha samajhta tha, iss liye wo Aarav per gussa ker jata tha jis ka Aarav ne bhi kabhi bura nahi mana, Waise bhi Manohar ne Aarav ki bohat madad bhi ki thi mushkil waqt me.


Manohar: Parth isse le ker ja! Aur tu fikar mat ker ye samaan hum rakh le gye Tere paise bhi nahi katu ga. Aur Aarav tere bhi nahi katu ga waise bhi tujhe jitna bhi rok lu to hotel me to jaye ga he? behtar ye he hai teri maram pati hone ke baad aram ker ke jaye

Aarav ko acha to nahi lagta tha aise Manohar se ehsaan lena per Manohar bhi apni jagha sahi tha, Parth ko saath iss liye bheja tha Manohar ne kiu ke agar akele Aarav ko bhejta to wo bina Clinic gye seedha hotel chala jata.


Paarth aur Aarav clinic ke liye nikalne lage jab achanak kale badalo ne pure Asman ko dhak lia, Tez hawa chalne lagi jo sab ke rongte khare ker rahi thi, Sab ne apne paas rakhi cheezo pakar lia.


Sab taraf shor sharaba mach gaya hawa se baraf urne lagi aur Paas ki cheeze dikhni bhi band ho gayi.


Ashwin: (Shouts) Sab ghar ki taraf chalo!


Ashwin ne chilate huwe kaha to sab ghar ki taraf bhaage, Hawaye sab ko peeche ki taraf push ker rahi thi, Sab apne gharo ki taraf bhaagna chah rahe the lekin hawa ki wajha se chalna bhi mushkil ho raha tha.


"Uncle!!!" Manohar ko peeche Aarav ki Awaz ayi


Manohar ne peeche ghoom ker daikha to Aarav ek jagha khara huwa tha, us ke gird ek circle bana huwa tha jis me peele rang ki roshni jagmagah rahi thi, sab kuch dhoondla tha per Aarav ke gird maano halki si hawa tak bhi nahi thi dheeme dheeme wo roshni aag lapto me badalne lagi.


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Aarav: (Scared) Uncle me hil nahi pa raha apni jagha se!

Aarav ne chilaya Manohar bina kuch soche us ki taraf bhag gaya per jaise he wo Aarav ke kareeb gaya, Un lapto ne mano Manohar ko dhaka de ker peeche gira dia ho, Tabhi Aarav ke saamne hawa me kuch likha aa gaya.



[The tutorial tower can only be entered by certain player]


Lapte Aarav ke gird lipatne lagi, Per wo Aarav ko jala nahi rahi thi, Lekin Aarav tab bhi dar raha tha kiu ke wo bilkul bhi hil nahi pa raha tha, Aarav ki ankho me ansoo aa gye.


Aarav: (Crying) Uncle! main marna nahi chahta, Uncle please mujhe nikal lo yahan se, Please!!!!!!!


Aarav ke ye akhri Lafaz the jab wo aag ek dum se bharki aur khatam ho gayi wahan bachi to tooti huwi zameen, Wahan zameen thar tharane lagi, Manohar bhaag ker wahan gaya jahan Aarav tha lekin Wahan ab kuch nahi tha.


Manohar wanhi zameen per toote pathro ke idhar udhar phenkne laaga maano wahan un pathro ke beech Aarav ko dhoond raha ho, Abhi kuch pal pehle un ke saamne Aarav khara tha Lekin ab wahan us ka namu nishan nahi tha, zameen aur zor se thar tharane lagi to Parth ne aage barh manohar ko pakar ke uthaya to Manohar us se chutne ki koshis karne laga,


Parth: Uncle! khud ko sambhaliye, hume yahan se nikalna ho ga,


Manohar: Kahan jaye! Hum Aarav ko chorr ker kanhi nahi ja rahe, Aarav meri awaz sun raha hai na tu? kahan hai tu?


Manohar ki ankhe bheeg gayi us ki awaz rondhaya gayi, Parth bhi shock me tha lekin wahan ke halat daikh ker use apne emotions side per rakh ker soch samajh ker faisle lene parne the.


Parth Manohar ko kheenchte huwe ghar ke andar le gaya, Aur darwaza lock ker dia, Manohar us se chutne ki koshis karta raha, Aur cheekhte huwe Aarav ko pukarta raha.


Manohar: Aarav!!! Aarav!!!

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Charo taraf gehra andhera tha kuch nazar nahi aa raha tha, un lapto me se Aarav seedha iss andhere me aa dooba tha, us ke mann me ek he sawal tha?

"Kia Main Mar Gaya Hu?"

Ye soch ker he Aarav ko khud per gussa ata ja raha tha, use ye bhi nahi pata tha ke wo kaise mara hai? wo aag na to jala rahi thi na garam thi phir wo kaise mar gaya?Aarav ye sab soch he raha tha jab uss ke saamne dobara kuch likha aa gaya



[Welcome, Player]


Aarav: [Frowns] Player ye kia hai? Aur kahan Welcome?


[You must survive in this tower while trying to go back to your world]


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[Name- Aarav Arya
Level- 1
Rank- F
Title- None

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HP- 27
MP- 13
Strength- 22
Agility- 22
Endurance- 23
Stamina- 19
Intelligence- 17

(Stats Points: 0)

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Skill- 2
[Will to live] ~ [Slash (E)]

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[Weapon- None]



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New Quest Available]

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[Quest: To complete the quest, you have to kill the orc king, The location of orc king will be given below


(Rewards)
(1) Orc king's Blood Axe
(2) 20 stats point (every party member)
(3) MVP will get Additonal 20 Stats Point
(4) You can go back to home

Time Limit: 7 Days
Quest Failure Penalty:
(Death) ☠️]


[You are now entering the Tutorial Tower]


[Good luck]
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[To ye tha pehla update, Start hamesha mushkil hota hai iss liye iss per bohat waqt laga, Umeed hai ap logo ka pyaar is update per daikhne ko mile ga, Saath bane rahiye ga, Aur like ker ke maze ke Reviews dena mat bhuliye ga, Next Update Wednesday ki shaam ko aa jaye ga tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
Amazing update
 
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sorbobhuk

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Kiu ke Sabhi Character ap ke liye New hai aur ap ko idea nahi hai ke story kisi taraf ja rahi hai, Ye 6 Update pure hone do sabhi thoughts clear ho jaye gye aur wo Energy waapis aa jaye gi.
Kal update nhi de sackte hai kya,.....intejar nhi hota hai ab
Waiting for next update
 

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Kiu ke Sabhi Character ap ke liye New hai aur ap ko idea nahi hai ke story kisi taraf ja rahi hai, Ye 6 Update pure hone do sabhi thoughts clear ho jaye gye aur wo Energy waapis aa jaye gi.
Ha Bhai ye to sahi bat hai..second arc ko padhane se Aisa lag raha hai ki nayi story padh rahe hai..aarya ko chod kar sabhi new charecter dekhane ko mile hai..
 

Emre

Update time se de diya kro...bs aur Kuch nhi kehna
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Kiu ke Sabhi Character ap ke liye New hai aur ap ko idea nahi hai ke story kisi taraf ja rahi hai, Ye 6 Update pure hone do sabhi thoughts clear ho jaye gye aur wo Energy waapis aa jaye gi.
Thanks for Clarification...
 

dododo

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Kiu ke Sabhi Character ap ke liye New hai aur ap ko idea nahi hai ke story kisi taraf ja rahi hai, Ye 6 Update pure hone do sabhi thoughts clear ho jaye gye aur wo Energy waapis aa jaye gi.
Yes, I also think so. Pehle arc me Tutorial Tower me ja kar players kaise bante hain, aur kaise apni powers badhate hain, dikhaya tha. Ab is arc me itne saare players kasie aur kyon ban gaye, aur Level Up Tower me ja kar ek controlled tarike se apna lavel badhate hain, dikhaya hai. Lekin yeh baat to sahi hai ki keval Aarav ko chhod kar saare characters badal gaye, pichle walon se koi connection nahi abhi dikh raha hai. Lekin revenge story hai, weh sab bhi ayenge hi. Ek suggestion hai, agar arcs ke naam likh dein, to aur idea lag jayega.
 
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