Fantasy Veer Singh Raghuwanshi (Restarted) (Completed)
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Mast update h bhai
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Yaar ye 15 shades of rick me ne pare he nhi hai to kaise complete kar do pehle ye to complete kar lo uske baad he kuch keh sakta ho ik sath do stories nhi likh sakta warna na wo pori ho ge or na.he ye
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Nice updateUpdate 27
SAKSHI SPECIAL
Mujhe kuch na hota daikh ke pori sena ne mujh par hamla shuru kar diya asmani bijli hawa pani fire har chez unno ne mujh par painki likin me phr b aram se un ke taraf bartha chala gaya or un ke qareeb ponch gaya
Veer…q bhai ye hamla kis khushi kar rahe ho mujh par
Tabhi ik senik ne talwar se mujh par hamla kiya likin mujhe lagte he toot gai sare senik peche ko howe
Jaise he wo peche howe ik wishal aag ka gola mere taraf bhara or jaha me khara tha waha a ke laga or ik wishal vispot howa
AB AGGE
Shield ke waja se mujhe to kuch nhi howa likin us visfot ke force se me bht door ja gira q k wo hamla achanak howa tha
Pore sena mujhe aise door girta daikh ke yahi samjhe ke mera kam tamam ho chuka hai or khush hone lage
Itne door girne ke baad me phr khara howa or apne kapre jarne laga ab fairy queen b waha a gai the or ye hamla usse ne kiya tha
Dowa hone ke waja se kisi ne mujhe kara hote nhi daikha or khush ho rahe the likin fairy queen us taraf he daikhe ja rahe the jaha me gira tha jab us ne mujhe utthte howe daikha to usse b herat howi ke me kaise kara ho gaya
Fairy queen ne dobara aag ka gola mujh par painka likin is bhar me tayar tha jab wo gola mere taraf bhara to mujhe gussa anne laga jab wo mere pas ayya to me ne ik hath se usse pakar liya
Us gole ke force se waha ka dowa haat gaya or sab pati howe ankhon se mukhe us gole ko pakre daikh rahe the
Me ne wo gola fairy sena pe paink diya q k yaha koi baat he nhi kar raha tha bas hamla he kiye ja raha tha ab me ne in se nipatne ka faisla kiya
Fairy queen jaldi se gole ke samne a gai or usse nasht kar diya ab wo b gusse me a gai the or ik ke baad ik hamla shuru kar diya kabhi lighting gira rahi the to kabhi pathar bharsa rahe the kabhi pani le gole to kabhi agg
Ab mere bardasht b khatam ho gai the or ik dam se me cilaya jis se pora pari loak hil gaya
Veer….aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh
Mere ankhain white ho gai or mere jism se lightning nikalne lagi or sath sath me hawa me urne lag gaya ab hawa me bawander banne lage
Fairy queen ye sab dikh ke apni sena ke waja se darne lagi wo ya to mujh se lar sakti thi ya phr apni sena ko bacha sakti thi
Ab bawander b kafi wishal ho gai the or me ab b hawa me kara tha gusse me hone ke bawajood me ne ab thak un pe hamla nhi kiya tha me fairy queen ka dar bakhubi pehchan sakta tha
Jab fairy queen ne ye daikha ke me hamla nhi kar raha to wo apni sena ke taraf murri
Queen…jitni dor yaha se ja sakte ho chale jao
Senik…nhi queen hum b ap ke sath lare ge
Queen…ye mera hukam hai chale jao yaha se me ya to us ka mokabla kar sakti ho ya tume bacha sakti ho agar tum yaha rahe to me sahi se us ka mokabla nhi kar pao ge
Senik un ke baat samjh gai or waha se ur kar dor janne lgea b srf me or fairy queen he bache the likin phr b me ne hamle me pehel nhi ke
Fairy queen ne jab daikha ke us ke sena ab mehfo hai to us ke chehre ka daar ab gaib ho gaya or mujh se larne ke liye tayar ho gai or apni shakti se pani agg darti wayu or bijli ka ik gola banane lagi jo kafi shakti shali tha or us se mujh pe hamla kar diya
Tabhi me ne apne samne ik wishal bawander banaya or wo gola sedha us me sama ke asman ke taraf chala gaya or blast ho gaya
Ye blast pore fairy world me daikha gaya door mehal me baithe ik larki jo kisi ke yado me koi howe the wo b is blast se hosh me a gai or asman ke taraf daikha is blast ko
Tabhi us ne kisi ko awaz lagai
Seweka…g rajkumari
Rajkumari…pata lagao ye sab kya ho raha hai
Seweka…g raj kumari
Or chali gai
Yaha queen apne war ko khali jata daikh ke or gussa ho gai or veer par war karne lagi likin koi war mujh thak na poncu paya
Veer…bas bht howa khel
Or veer ne ik lightning ka gola bana ke queen ke taraf chor diya
Queen ne bht zyada shakti zaya kar le the wo khud ko nhi bacha pa rahe the wo gola queen ko lagta tabji 5 log yudh bumi me khude or wo gola blast ho gaya likin queen safe the
Us ke agge 5 log kare the jinno ne khud ko or queen ko shield kar liya tha jis se blast ka un pe koi asar na howa
Queen…tum q aye yaha par tum pancho ko me ne rajkumari ke raksha ke liye kaha tha
Pancho un ke samne gutno par bait gai
Senapati…maaf kijye ga queen rajkumari ke adesh pe hum yaha pata karne aye the ke kya ho raha hai or ap ko musibat me daikh ke hum khud ko rok nhi pai
Ye panch fairy queen ke sab se shaktishali yudha the
Senapati…ab ap tora aram kar le queen hum isse daikhte hai
Or pancho us ke gird daire me kare ho jate hai or kuch bolne lagte hai or apne hath upar utha lete hai jis se ik red roshni nikalti hai or gol gol gomne lagti hai or mere barabar a kar choti hone lagti hai or akhir me mujhe wo kaid kar leti hai
Me uss se chutne ke khoshish karta ho likin me jitne taqat laga raha tha wo utni zyada kasti ja rahe the
Me ne un panchok o daikha to unne b pasina ayya howa tha jaise bht mushkil se usse kaid kar rakha hai
Senapati…queen ye bht shaktishali hai hum zyada dair isse qaid nhi rakh pai ge ap chali jai yaha se
Queen…asambhav hum yudhbomi se nhi jai ge bas kuch pal ke liye isea ise he rokhe rako
Or queen apni chari age karti hai kuch bolne lag jati hai
Jo us ke pas shakti bachi the wo sari apni is attack me daal daite hai or phr se pancho tatwo ka gola banati hai or mere taraf chor daite hai
Un pancho ne apni sari shakti laga de mujhe kaid karne me likin chora nhi or wo gola sedha a ke mujhe laga or ik bayanak vispot howa queen or wo pancho usse ke sath behosh ho gai
Me b qaid se azaad ho gaya maha danav ke de hove mani ke waja se jo sheild mujhe mili the me us ke waja se bach gaya
Veer…kya afat ke purya hai yaar is ne to mujhe marne me koi kasar na chore agar ye sheild na hote me to aj he
Or age bhar ke pehle un pancho ko ik ik kar ke utaya phr rani ko baho me utha ke side me letta diya
Abbi rani ko rakha he tha ke mere dil se phr roshni nikalne lage or rani ke gale ka haar chamakne laga me ne ghor se us har ko daikha
Veer…wah isse kehte hai sone pe suhaga
Wo har kuch or nhi balke mani the jaise he me ne usse rani ke gale se nikala wo plate mere dil se nikli or wo mani us me samma gai
Jaise he wo samaye ik roshni se pora paro loak chamak utha roshni itne zyada the ke pori pari loak ne apni ankain band kar le
Wo plate tez tez gomne lagi phr a kar mere dil me samma gai or jo roshni howe the wo khatam ho gai or isse ke sath ik or roshni ne mere jism ko apni gere me le liya
Or mujhe mera picha janam sara mere ankhon ke samne nazar anne laga ke me khon tha kyo tha kya karta tha mere patnian khon the or me mara kaise
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Phr wo gera khatam howa or me zameen pe khara ho gaya
Veer…bahir a jao dosto kab thak mujh me samao ge
Mera itna kehna tha sab bahir a gai
Veer…maaf karna dosto ab ja ke sab yaad aya hai
Drogon…nhi malik hum to ap ke sewak hai ap ke raksha humara farz
White Tiger…or ap ke dushman ka sarvnash hamara kaam
Black Tiger…or un dusmano ka aisa ant dena ke dobara wo janm na le sake
Unicorn…or mera kaam hai ke pal bhar me ap ko waha poncha do jaha ap ne chaha
Veer…are are bas karo yaar itna gussa acha nhi haia b batao kaise ho tum sab
Sab…thek hai malik
Veer…ab tumare malkino ko aktha karna hai or dusht shaktion ko dobara batana hai ke un ka baapa gaya hai is bar me un ke koi chal kamyab nhi hone do ga aise moot do ga ke yamraaj b kamp jai ga
Mere gussa hote he mere charo sathiyon ka akhar or un ke ankhon ka rang change ho gaya
Me phr shant ho gaya
Veer…chalo in ko yahe rehne do koi a ke le jai ga pehle zara ghoom phr liya jai baad ke baad me daikhe ge
Ye kehte he charo mujh me sama gai or me apna bais badal ke teleport ho ke us darwaze ke pass ponch gaya us darwaze ko cross karte he bazar shuru ho jata hai jaha kafi ronaak the
Parian or parizad har taraf ghoom rahe the har kaam magic se hota tha me b bazar me har tarf daikhta ghom raha tha
Chale dosto veer ko gomne daite hai or chale hai queen or un pancho ke pass
Kafi dair baad queen ko hosh aya sath me un pancho ko b
Queen…wo kaha hai
Senapati…nazar nhi a raha shaid ap ke war se rakh me tabdeel ho gaya ho ga
Queen…nhi senapati wo itna kamzor nhi tha ke rakh me tabdeel ho jata or waise hum yaha kaise ponche
Akri baat sunte he sab chownk gai or herat se khud ko daikhne lage
Senapati…mtlb wo zinda hai or pariloak me hai maharani hum usse jald he dond le ge or maharani ap ka locket kidar gaya
Senapati ke is baat pe usse ik 440 watt ka current laga pehle hath se apna gala tatola or phr idar udar daikne lagi jaldi he usse har mil gaya likin mani us me se gaib the
Ye daik ke us ka bura haal ho gaya
Maha rani…nhi ye nhi ho sakta senapati pore pariloak ke sena ko us ke peche laga do wo jaha kahe b ho wo mujhe zinda chahye
Senapati…g maharani
Or wo pancho waha se chale jate hai or maharani wahi sar pakar kar bait jati hai tori dair baad wo utthe hai or mahel chali jati hai jaha rajkumari pareshani me tehal rahe the
Rajkumari…maa ap a gai kuch dair pehle kya howa tha kya ap ko pata hai
Maharani…haan beti ik ghuspatiya hamari duniya me ghus gaya hai
Rajkumari…hamari duniya me likin ye to mumkin nhi hai maa us kavach ke waja se
Maharani…haa beti janti ho me b is baat se pareshan ho ke ye sab kaise howa wo kafi shaktishali hai meri taqat b us ke samne kam par gai
Rajkumari…us ne ap ko kuch kiya to nhi
Maharani…nhi beti mujhe kuch nhi kiya likin us ne mere behosh hone ke baad mani chura le
Rajkumari…kkyyyyyaaaaa maa ye to bht bura howa us mani me to kafi shakti hai ab hum kya kare
Maharani…tum fikar mat karo beti me ne pori sena ko us ke pata lagane bajh diya hai
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Me bazar me he ghoom raha tha pata nhi q likin jab se pari loak me gussa ho tab se he mera dil kafi khus tha jis ke waja mujhe b pata nhi thi
Tabhi kafi senik bazar me guse or kuch dondne lage me samjh gaya ke ye mujhe he dond rahe hai
B.Tiger…malik hukam kare inne yahi zameen me zinda ghar do ga
Veer…shant shant mere dost ye mujhe pehchan nhi pai ge hum q apna mood kharab kare karne do unne jo wo karna chahte hai
Wo senik hum se agge nikal gai
Veer…q na kuch or masti kare dosto
Sab…jaise ap ke icha malik
Us ke baad me mahal ke taraf bhara or khud ko adreshya kar liya is liye koi b mujhe daikh nhi paya or me sedha ja ke sighasn par baith gaya or samne a gaya likin is waqt shaba me koi nhi tha
Veer…a jao dono bahir
Tabhi dono tiger bahir a gai or dhare or singhasn ke ajo bajo bait bait gai
Dragon…me b bahir ao malik
Veer…are pagla gya hai kya agar to bahira gaya to kisi or ke liye yaha jaga nhi bache ge
Tabhi senik ke dorne ke awaz aye or shaba ke har darwaje se senik dakhil ho gai apne hatho me hathyar liye likin mere ajo bajo mere tigers ko daikh ke rukh gai
Tabhi waha maharani b a gai or us ke sath wo panchob jis ke sath yudh howa tha
Veer…ao ao maharani anamika kaise ho
Senapati…kustakh maharani ko naam se bulate ho
Veer…are naam me kya rakha hai hum to is singhasan par b baith gai hai or kisi me itne himat nhi hai ke hume yaha se utha sake
Tabhi senapati ne ishara kiya or sare sainiko ne mujh par jado se hamla kiya or mere honto pe muskurahat pail gai
Q k ab paristan ke mani mere pass the to in ke shaktian b mere ghulam the wo hamla mujh thak ponch pata us se pehle he me ne chutki bajai or sare sanikok a hamla hawa me he khatam ho gaya
Likin un ke hamle ke waja se mere dono tiger kare ho gai or dhar kar un ke taraf bare
Veer…nhi dosto ruk jao
Wo wapis a kar baith gai
Veer…kitne burbhak ho senapati mere sath mukabla karne ke bawajood b aise harkat ke tawaqo nhi the tum se
Maharani…kya chahte ho tum paristan me anne ka maqsad kya hai tumara
Veer…are are anamika aram se aj b utne he gusel ho tora b nhi badli aj b gussa naak par baitha rehta hai me to apni chez lene aya tha
Maharani…kis chez ke baat kar rahe ho
Veer…jo tumare gale me tha
Maharani(gusse se)…kaha hai mani wapis karo mani ko
Veer…sorry ab wo meri hai
Tabhi peche se awaza aye MAA
Sab ne us awaz ke taraf daikha mere nazar b us taraf chali gai or mere honto pe ab thak jo muskurahat the wo gaib ho gai us ke nazar b mujh par phar gai the wo udar he statue ban gai
Usse daikh ke meri ankhon me ansoo a gai yahi hai us ka b tha wo b beyaqeni se mujhe daikh rahi the
Me sighasan se khara ho gaya or age bharne laga mere dono tigers b mere sath agge bare jaise jaise me agge bhara sare senik side pe hote gai ahista ahista me us ke pas poncha wo b aise he ankhon me anso liye khari the
Ik dam hum ne ik dusre ko baho me bhar liya or ankhon se ansoo lagatar jari the
Veer…me to samjha tha ke me ne tume hamesha ke liye kho diya hai SAKSHI
G haan rajkumari koi or nhi sakshi the
Sakshi…me kab se tumara intizar kar rahe thi veer me janti thi tum zaroor meri pukar suno ge or mujhe lene ao ge
Hum dono ik dusre ke bahoo me kho gai apne irdgird se bekhabhar
Tabhi senapati ka sabar jawab de gaya or kisi ko bataye bagair he mujh par hamla kar diya
Mere dono dost is ke liye tayar the or agle pal us ka wo hath jis se wo mujh par hamla kar raha tha wo us ke jism se alehda tha or black tiger ke mou me or white tiger mere samne dewar ke tarah kara ho gaya
Senapati ke cheikho se hum dono hosh me a gai or me ne peche mur ke daikha to wo zameen pe para chiekh raha tha
Veer…tum kutte ke dum ho jo khabhi seddi nhi hoti samjhaya b tha likin nhi
Maharani…ab thak hum ne bht sabar kar liya ab or nhi
Veer…anamika ab mujhe gussa a raha hai
Mere ankhon ka rang change hone laga or zameen hilne lagi
Veer…hum dono ko akela chor do is se pehle ke me pore paristan ko he tabah kar do
Maharani…bht aye tere jaise paristan ka koi kuch nhi bigar sakta
Tabhi meri peth pe aag lag gai or dragon darhta howa mahal ko ke chat ko pharta howa bahir ayya
Veer…me ne tume moka diya tha anamika likin tum me ab gamand bht zyadaa gaya hai is liye tumara zinda rehna paristan ke liye khatra ho sakta hai
Tabhi ARMOUR OF GOD mere jism par a gaya
maharani ke sath sath pore sena mere samne gutnu par baith gai
Maharani ko ab pasina anne laga k jane anjane me us ne us shaks se panga le liya jis ne paristan ke rachna ke or jinno ne paristan ke bhag dhor us ke hath me tamai the
Me talwar le kar maharani ke taraf bhara ke sakshi mere samne a gai or na me sar hilane lagi
Sakshi ko daikh ke mera dil pighal gaya or me ne armour of god ko chor diya
Veer…chalo sakshi wapis chalte hai apne ghar
Sakshi…pehle maa se ijazat to le lo
Veer…ab tum meri ho or kisi me itni himmat nhi ke mujhe inkar kar de tum chaho to poch sakti ho wo roke ge nhi
Sakshi…maa kya me veer ke sath jao
Maharani…haan beti q nhi
Tabhi dono sher or dragon wapis mujh me sama gai or Me ne muskura kar sakshi ko daikha us ne mera hath pakra or hum paristan ke sair ko nikal gai sab herat se rajkumari ko daikh rahe the ke aj wo kaise mehal se nikal aye
Likin wo rajkumari the kisi ko kuch pochne ke himmat nhi the
Phr hum waha se ur gai hatho me hath dale me b mani ke power se ik parizad ban gaya sab se shaktishali
or ik jarne ko daikh ke waha utar gai waha baith ke sakshi ne mere kandhe pe sar rakha
Veer…sakshi tum yaha kaise ponche
Sakshi…har atma ke ik antim iksha hoti hai jab thak wo pori nhi ho jati wo batakti rehte hai mere sath b aisa tha par mujhe zyada intizar nhi karna para tum ne un dono ko mar kar mujhe mukht kar diya tha phr waha rehne ka mere pas koi waja na rahe tabhi kuch parion ne meri atma ko kaid kar liya or mujhe yaha le aye yaha ke rajkumari ko ik aise bimari lag gai jis me shareer ko nhi atma ko taqleef hoti hai wo na to mar sakti the na jee sakti the is ka ik he hal tha koi dusri atma ko un ke shareer me daal ke rajkumari ke atma ko mukht karna
Tabhi maharani ne apni shaktion se pata chala ke aise ik he atma hai or wo me the me is rajkumari ke jism me a gai or wo us bemari se b mukht ho gai or is jaha se b
Tabhi se me yaha ho or tumara intizar kar rahe ho waise tum kya ho or wo sab jo mahel me howa wo sab kya tha
Veer…bht lambhi kahani hai waise to tume bht kuch pata ho ga q k tum he ne mujh se un dono ko marwaya tha is liye mere devil roop tum waqif ho ge ab wo alehda ho gaya hai or devil world ko sambhal raha hai waha ka king hai wo us ke waja se yaha aya tha or mujhe apne bare me pata chalne laga ke me wo nhi jo ho balke kuch or he ho
Sakshi…wahi to poch rahi ho
Veer…to suno me ho DRONA bagwan shiv ka ansh un ka rudra rup ho me jis ke agge devta ho ya kali shakti ke rakwale sab jukte hai likin jo b janam leta hai us ka ant hota hai mera b howa tha likin doke se shetan ke pore samrajye ko me ne khatam kar diya tha shetan or mere bhej ik antim larai ho rahe the hum dono he ik dosre pe bhari phar rahe the likin wo shetan hai pata nhi kaise likin me us ke beti ko mehsoos na kar saka or us ne peche se ik talwar se mujh par war kiya wo koi aam talwar na the agar ye pancho mani us waqt mere pass hote to danav mani auto shield on ka daite or wo talwar mujhe chu b na pati likin vidhi ke vidan ko khon tal sakta hai likin is bar aisa nhi hi ga is bar us shetan ka ant nischint hai
Sakshi…ab kya karna hai
Veer…karna kya hai apni 8 patnion se phr shadi karni hai
Sakshi…kkyyyyyaaaaa 8 patnian
Veer…haan jin me ik tum ho
Sakshi…or baki 7
Veer…wo tume pata chal jai ga
Sakshi…nhi mujhe abbi janna hai sab kuch
Veer…waqt se pehle pata chal jai to takleef zyada hoti hai is liye is bat ko waqt pe chor do
Sakshi…ab kaha janna hai
Veer…ab apni swords lene jana hai jo mujhe pata hai kaha hai
Sakshi…to phr chalo chalte hai
Veer…nhi tum kahi nhi ja rahi ik bhar tume kho chuka ho dobara khona nhi chahta is pe age koi baat nhi tume meri kasam
Sakshi…ab me kuch bol b nhi sakti tum ne apni kasam jo de de hai
Veer…chalo tume mahel chor deta ho phr mujhe nikalna b hai
Phr hum wapis mahel a gai waha shaba lagi the jaise he me daikhil howa sare shaba kare ho gai maharani b or sab mere samne gutno par baith gai
Veer…kare ho jao
Sab kare ho gai likin sab ke sar jukhe howe the
Veer…haan to anamika g kaise hai ap
Sakshi…veer
Veer…are yaar poch raha ho srf
Sakshi…wo mere maa hai or tum aise bat karo ge un se dobara mujh se baat mat karna
Or andar jane lagi
Veer…are sakshi meri baat to suno
Or us ke peche chala gaya sare shaba ne chain ke sans le khas kar maharani anamika ne
Maharani…bal bal bache
Mantri…g maharani rajkumari ke waja se bach gai
Maharani…sahi kaha mantri g
Sakshi apne kaksh me gus gai or darwaza band kar diya
Veer…sakshi darwaza kolo mujhe tum se baat karni hai
Sakshi…bilkul nhi ab tum meri maa se aise baat karo ge
Veer…yaar me to mazak kar raha tha
Sakshi…mujhe aisa mazak pasand nhi hai
Veer…acha darwaza to khol do
Sakshi…bilkul nhi
Veer…thek hai phr me he kholta ho
Sakshi…nhi nhi ruko me kapre change kar rahi ho
Veer…are ye pehle q nhi bataya
Or portal se us ke kamre me a gaya is ke peche us ka mou darwaze ke taraf tha
Sakshi…daiko veer abbi andar bilkul b mat anna me change kar lo phr darwaza kolti ho
Wo is waqt bilkul nangi the me ne peche se isse hug kiya wo ik dum chonki or mur gai or mujhe dakka diya or chari gumaye or us ke jism pe kapre a gai
Sakshi…kitne besharm ho tum veer koi aisa b karta hai kya
Veer…tum to aise sharma rahi ho jaise pehle dafa tume nanga daika ho
Sakshi…tab baat alag the
Veer…acha choro abbi ik good bye kiss do
Sakshi…bilkul nhi
Veer…daiko agar tum nhi do ge to phr me kiss b lo ga or b bht kuch karo ga
Sakshi…nhi nhi ruko daite ho pehle apni ankain band karo
Mn e apni ankhain band kar le or sakshi ne mujhr gaal pr kiss kiya me ne jhat se apni apni ankhain kholi
Veer…yr kya tha
Sakshi…tum ne kiss mangi the de de
Veer…ye cheating hai
Sakshi…everything is fair in love and war and this is love my dear
Veer…koi baat nhi aj tumara din hai daikh lo ga tume
Sakshi…apna kyal rakna
Veer…fikar mat karo tume lene zaroor ao ga bye t.c
Or me ne portal kola or us me ik anjane planet pe chala gaya
AJ KE LIYE ITNA HE DOSTO
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