Fantasy TUSHAR EK YODHA 《Incest, Thrill, Magical》

[Sona]

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[The Devil666]

First of all congratulations for 100kviews and 100P,
pehle baat karunga apne story ko bahut safai se likha hai. apne jda rang birnga nahi likha story ko ek apne theme select ki or usse pe sarri story run ki yeah muj achalag,,
story k charactrs. sare characters ke role apni apni jagha sahi chal rahe hai. Annika. yeah ladki puri story mein meri fav rahi hai. or shyd baki readers k bhi hai. iska chulbnapan dil ko bhaa jta hai. Arushi. yeah bhi ik mastihor character hai. Tania. iska role kahani mein kuch khas samaj nahi a rha, maybe jab tak past mein kya hua pta nhi chl jata tab tak toh samaj nhi ayega. Tushar. acha hai starting mein thora kamjor tha ab bhi hai lakin kahani k hisab se thora sahi ho chuka hai hero hero hai nahi lakin iske pas power hai Agents nam ki. Agents mein se Shivan ik mysterious banda rha hai. shant rehna wala lakin muh se iske actions damdar hai. mom dad ka role pe shyd ap khas dyan nahi de rahe bas muje assa lag rha hai. story apki bahut achi chal rahi bhai bich bich mein muje laga ki yaha pe apki story down hona shuru ho chuka hai lakin agle hi update mein apne story ko wapis utha liya.. acha likh rahe ho app writing skills kafi damdar hai apki. or shero-shyari bhi mast karte ho. apki story best story mein se ik hogi assa muje lagta hai agar ap issi tarh update dete rahe toh.
waitng f next

 

[Asif khan]

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[Akil]

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[QUASAR]

Superb fantastic update

Thanks Sunilgupta bhai for Reading keep Supporting...

 

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Congrets bro for 100 p.

Shukriya Hellohoney bhai keep Supporting...

 

[QUASAR]

Nice update waiting for next update

Thanks K S Lover bhai for Reading keep Supporting...

 

[QUASAR]

Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai..
Sach a nice update Bhai .
Gunde bhai to Sala khush ho gya...
Torcher wali chair PR gunde ko behoos KR Diya. Gya hosh aane ke bad dekhte hai kiy hota hai gunde Bhai ke sath..
Aage dono tarf lagi hau ..Reders ko malum cl gya Harishka apne hero Tusar ke pyar Mai PR gai .. Harshika ko khud SE conversation padhne Mai mjaa aagya
Annika ko charcter JB v padhta hu Sala face PR automatic smile aajtai .bahht hi pyari BT krti hai. . Bas Bhai Annika ko charcter badlna Mt aise hi rakhna...
Tania bahut hi suspense charcter hai iske bare Mai khul KR khuch nhi bol skta ..

Ab saja de hi chuki ho to uska haal na poochhana,
Agar vo begunaah nikala to tumhe afasos bahut hoga.. ~

Beautiful lines Bhai ..

Last benchers bhai Toh finally ap or apka review a hi gaya..
Shukriya apke sath ka bhai, apka review muje kafi himmat deta hai,
Annika ka character asse hi rahe bhai, balki or bhi nikharta jayega..
Keep Supporting bhai...

 

[QUASAR]

Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai
Torcher ke bare Mai khuch jayda nhi likhunga ..mot to Baki bhayank Hui hai. BT reaction PTA nhi cla QuaSar and party ka kiy tha .clo finally mar gya ..kuch jayda hi ji liya tha.
Tusar gahr wapas aagay .
Arushi ne direct tusar ko parpose KR diya .Tusar ek time Arushi SE pyar krta tha Avi v (krta hai) but dono ka rishta kuch or hai ..
Tusar ke past Mai ek larki thi. Ishita
Wo chor ke cli gai .hmm aage PTA cl Jaye Ishita Kon hai kiw chor KR gai.bjai JB v Ishita or tusar ka past dikho get plzz jayda lamba Mt khichna 2 3 scene Mai khtm KR Dena .
Anyway Wait rahega next update ka

Dhanywad Bhai...

 

[QUASAR]

Congratulations Bhai
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