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Update:-62
Kapendra Mishra ki najar pahle to bike par nahi gayi thi, lekin heavy dialoges ne Asif ye bhed khol chuka tha… "To tum Asif ho... Tumhara wo dost Riaz kidhar hai. Wo bhi kisi ladki ke sath yahan aane wala hai kya?"
"Aap log bhi yahan aane wale the. Pahle bata dete to sath chali aati. Aur ye Som ki servicing me gayi bike yahan kya kar rahi hai. Ye ladka bhi na apni ek chij sambhal kar nahi rakh sakta."…. Pichhe se Lata Mishra pahunchi Pranshu ke sath...
Kapendra:- Lata inse milo ye hai Asif aur ye Asif ki girlfriend aur beta Asif aap jis bike ko maang kar ghum rahe ho, wo mere hi bete ki hai...
Aqsa to Asif ke heavy dialoges par hi kab se tadap rahi thi usse tamacha maarne ke liye. Sidha jawab de kar nikal leta lekin nahi.. Hero ban'ne ka bhoot sawar tha. Asif bechara kabhi Aqsa ke gusse se laal chehra dekhta to kabhi samne khade in middle age logon ko jo pata na aaj grahan ban kar kahan se aa gaye...
Wahin jab Aqsa chillayi aur boundry ke darwaje se Kapendra Mishra aur Makhan Lal ko Vyas ne aate huye dekha... Teji se piller ke pichhe chhipte, Sia ko sawaliya najron se dekhte... "Kya tumhare pitaji ka bhi koi second set up hai. Makan Lal ke sath yahan pahunch gaye"…
Sia gusse me daant pisti... "Ye meri jagah hai. Aur pitaji ghar ka kaam dekhne aaye hinge. Thanks Shashtri, pahle to property aur ladki par comment ke liye aur mujhe iss situation me lane ke liye"…
Vyas upar aasman ke ko dekhte, dono hath se bhagwan ko sawaliya ishara dete... "Matlab koi dosti nahi. Poora maarne par tul gaye"…
Udhar Sia kya karegi uss se Vyas parehan, idhar Asif in logon me fasa.… "Sala ye Vyas ka baccha Sia ko le kar chhip gaya hai. Ruko abhi batata hun"… mann me khyal aur agle hi pal chillate huye.… "Vyas, Sia... Hume bula kar kahan reh gaye"…
Itni tej aawaj ki dono ke kaan me pad rahi thi... Sia, Vyas ko ghurti.… "Aur kuchh baki rah gaya hai aaj dikhane... Shashtri, abhi hum sab ke samne honge. Wahan chup hi rahna. Ek chu shabd bhi nikla na to samjh lena..."
Vyas bechara chhota sa muh banaye… "Solly"..
"Ye Huch wale PUG kutte ki tarah cute cry look ki jaroorat na hai. Shashtri tumhare facial expressions ne yadi fasaya na"..
"Bus karo kitne warning dogi... Chalo bhi ab... Tumhare maa pitaji bhi to chhod na rahe honge Asif ko. Ab bechara kya kare? Situation sambhalo abhi pahle. Jhagra baad me bhi kar sakte hain"…
Sia, Vyas ko kha jane wali najron se ghurti hui... "Piller ki aad me pichhe chalo... Kisi ko najar mat aana".. Dono pillar ke pichhe chhip kar kafi pichhe gaye, fir Sia khud ko jahir karti dur se hi hath hilati sabko pass bulane lagi... Bayen se Vyas bhi uske pass pahuncha.. aur Sia hath ka aisa ishara kar rahi thi mano ghar ke bare me samjha rahi ho…
Sabhi log unhi ke ore chal diye. Aqsa, Asif ka hath khinch kar pichhe karti…. "Dobara kisi ki maangi bike par mujhe bithaya na to samjh lena. Aur wo ladki kaun hai"…
Asif:- Sia…
Aqsa, Chaunkti hui... "Aur ye dono uske parent hai."…
Jaise hi Asif ne haan kaha, Aqsa idhar udhar dekhi aur khinch kar ek thappad laga di. Ungliyon ke nishan Asif ke gaal par chhape the. Sabhi pichhe mude... "Kuchh nahi macchar tha wahi maar raha tha"… Lata, Asif ke gaal par rakhe hath ko dekh kar hansti... "Haan machhar tha…"..
Aqsa fusfusati.… "Ek ladki ke maa pitaji ko kya khub najare dikhaye ho. Uski beti kisi ladke ke sath hai aur bina koi khyal laaye tum ne jor se chilla diya... Asif aaj ke baad apni kukurmutte si shakl dikhayi na to jis se bhi pahle nikaah ka paratav aayega uss se nikaah kar lungi. Aur halke me mat lena meri baat ko"…
Sabhi under construction makan ke niche the... Sia ab bhi Vyas ko Makan me kaun chij kahan hogi samjha rahi thi.… "Maa, Pitaji aap sab kyun aa gaye"..
Lata:- Kyun nahi aana tha kya? Ya fir yahan hum jaise logon ka aana allowed nahi hai...
Lata ki baton se gusse ki bu aa rahi thi. Sia samjh gayi ki maa ko bura lag raha hai. Sia muskurati... Aur afsos se bhada chehra bana kar Lata ke kandhe se latakti… "Main to bus yahan ka kaam jald se jald finish karwa kar aap sab ko surprise karna chahti thi, isliye nahi chahti thi makan complete hone se pahle aap aao. Aaj Sunday poora free thi to sabhi doston ko bula kar issi par baat karne wali thi.."
Lata:- Contractor kya ghar me sone ke paise le raha hai...
Kapendra:- Lata Sia ko bolne bhi dogi. Tum to darane par tuli ho. Sia maa ki baat ka jawab do...
Vyas:- Ye kya jawab degi uncle ye to bewakoof hai...
Sia Vyas ko aankh dikhati… "Chup ho jao"..
Lata:- Siaaaa…
Sia:- Maaaa..
Lata:- Sia bilkul aawaj nahi aani chahiye. Tum bolo Vyas…
Vyas:- Ye jagah Zerul Imam ne capture kar liya hai. Maine Asif ko bhi isliye bulaya taki Sia ko samjha sake...
Jaise hi Vyas ne Zurul Imam aur capture ka naam liya, Sia swaliya najron se Vyas aur Asif ko dekhne lagi. Vyas aur Asif ne aankhon ke ishare se hi jata diya ki usse yahan ke bare me sab pata hai. Issi bich Lata Mishra, Vyas ke jawab ko bhi aade hath leti...
Lata:- Uski girlfriend ke sath discuss karne ek disputed site par khade ho ... Kamal hai ye to...
Vyas:- Sunday hai, ek din to chutti ka milta hai. Ek pant 2 kaaj ho gaye, bura kya hai? Dekhiye bechare masoom ko, 4 sal se to ye ladka iske ghar ke samne chay ki dukan par chay pita tha aur Aqsa khidki par aati thi. Dono bus aise hi najron se pyar jatate the.
Kapendra:- To kya wo nukkad ki chay ki dukan par tumhare pitaji apne doston ke sath baith'te hain...
Asif roni shoorat banate.… "Kyun pichhe pade ho. Gristhi toot jayegi. Hum sach me ek dusre ko chahte hain. Abhi iske Abba haan kah de to abhi nikaah kar lun. Fir to koi samasya nahi hogi...
Lata:- Tab samasya nahi hogi lekin wo hua to nahi na. Bina shadi ke hi liye ghum rahe.
Vyas:- Aap log ka aashirwad raha to wo bhi ho hi jayega. Haan lekin aaj jo main yahan aaya tha aur Asif ko bulaya tha, uss par baat kar le. Achha hua aap sab aa gaye, warna ye Sia to ulte kaam karne wali thi.
Kapendra aur Lata, Sia ko ghurte... "Kaisa ulta kaam"…
Vyas, Asif ek dusre ko dekhne lage... Ab bol to diya lekin kahe kya… "Wo Sia 2 din me makan complete karwana chahti thi, jiske liye usse 200 majdoor ko ek sath kaam par lagana tha. Jabki kabje ke iss site par Zerul Imam khun kharabe ko bhi taiyar hai. Makhan chacha bhi ye baat jante hain.. Ab Sia ko kaun samjhaye… kahti hai 1,2 din me kaam khatm kar ke jaldi se grih prawes kar lenge..."
Asif:- Yahan ka jab kaam shuru hua tab aap sab me se koi Lucknow me nahi tha. Sia se puchho construction ka theka lene wala pahla thekedar kyun kaam chhoda?
Sia:- Wo Zerul Imam ka us par kafi dawab tha, lekin fir bhi wo kaam karta raha. Anth jab baat uski family par aa gayi fir usne kaam chhod diya..
Asif:- Tumhe to bus itna hi pata hai, poori sachai main batata hun. Aur haan hum ladke tumhare iss site se dur rahe iski ek warning Makhan chacha bhi hume bade pyar se de kar gaye the..
Vyas:- Asif rahne de... Inhe kuchh nahi pata...
Asif chillate huye.… "Nahi pata to pata hona chahiye. Sia ko pata hona chahiye... Unke gardian ko pata hona chahiye ki jitna wo iss jagah ke bare me nahi jante uss se kahin jyada hum jante hai..."
"Iska pahla contractor humare mohalle ka hi tha. Thik mere ghar ke samne unka makan hai... Nurul hassan... Uss bechare ko 2 carore ka ghata hua iss site se hua... Lekin juban ke khatir wo nuksan karwa kar bhi yahan kaam karwata raha. Takriban 300 ladke hum hafte 10 din me yahan aa kar khade hote the tab Zerul ke aadmi ne fatkna band kiya tha..."
"Lekin bechare ki bacchi ka accident me poora ek paun chala gaya. Uske baad Zerul Imam ka call aaya tha ki site ka kaam nahi chhoda to abhi uske 2 bacche aur hain. Kaam ke bich jab parivar aa gaya tab hum sab bhi haar gaye."
"Nange log hain sir, aur humari apni ek limit. Hum sabhi padhne likhne wale aur rojgar wale log hain. Bahut jyada se jyada unka sar phod sakte hain. Fir ye hai ki wo saaf kahte hain tumhara matter nahi hai to bich me kyun kud rahe. Tumhare gharon par to najar nahi dali na. 8 sal ki badi pyari bacchi hai, ab chal nahi sakti..."
Chatakkk, thappad ki ek kadada awaj … Lata Mishra khinch kar Sia ko ek thappad maarti... "Lafda koi kar raha hai ye suchna hume kyun nahi? Ek bacchi ka paun chala gaya tumhari chuppi ke karan, lauta sakti ho uske paun kya?"
Sia:- Maa mujhe itni baaten nahi pata thi... Mujhe nahi bataya gaya. Bus itna pata tha ki koi local gundey hain aur Hassan ji kahte the koi issue nahi hai bus gundon ki wajah se kaam me thoda delay ho raha hai...
Sia apni baat kah bhi rahi thi aur Som ko ek emergency msg dalne ke baad uss se connect bhi ho chuki thi...
Kapendra:- Bahut galat ho gaya idhar. Mujhe abhi Zerul Imam yahan chahiye... Abhi matlab abhi... Lata Kripa Shankar ko phone lagao aur kaho apne sath uss Zerul Imam ko baandh kar laye...
Sia:- Pitaji shant ho jao... Som aa raha hai. Maa kisi ko call mat lagao...
Lata:- Nahi lagati... Lekin badle me Zerul Imam ka paun chahiye. Hoga ki nahi hoga. Mere kaleje me aag lagi hai..
Sia, Harbara kar Lata ke paas pahunchti... "Hoga, sab hoga. Yahin aap ke aankho ke samne hoga...
Kapendra:- Naah itne se mera kaleja shant nahi hoga. Sia tum jao yahan se... Aaj iss Imam ke jamin capture ka bhoot utarta hun...
Sia, Chillati hui... "Dono ko boli na shant ho jao. Kha-m-kha bp badha rahe ho. Som ko emergency msg bheja hai. Wo pahunch raha hoga. Vyas tum in sab ko le kar niklo..
Vyas:- Bus kya Sia, naam ke dost kya? Rahenge hum bhi... Kyon Asif... Haan Aqsa ko bhej de...
Aqsa:- Sare dost jamin ke matter me jama huye the na... Jo hoga dekhenge...
Sia:- Hmmm !!! Jaise Tumhari marji lekin apna khyal rakhna...
Makhan Lal:- Bhaiji, yahan logon ki jaroorat hogi... Main unhe le kar aata hun..
Kapenda:- Haan aur tujh jaise dogle neta ki yahan jaroorat na hai... Nikal le chup chap kahin tera naam aaya isme to tu bhi jayega… chal bhag..
Vyas:- Abe ye hai kaun… Makhan Lal ko uske muh par...
Asif:- Wo chhod gate par dekh… ye to poori tarah se taiyar ho kar aaye hain...
Vyas:- Sia sab ko le kar ek kinare ho jao... Main baat karta hun...
Samne se Zerul Imam ka beta takriban 8-10 bandook dhari aur 30-35 lathait ke sath ghusa. Jaise hi wo boundry ke ander ghusa, Sniper, Som se..
"Boss tumhare family wale yahan panchayat karte rah gaye aur wo log aa gaye. 2 nali ke sath hai"…
Som:- 2 nali hai na, unhe najdik pahunchne do, moving target mat lena. 1 fit ki duri se 2 nali se target nahi kar sakte. Hum dur se unka rasta kate to ho sakta hai wo cover le aur apne logon par firing shuru kar de... Jaise hi wo settle ho aur sab ki najar meri family par, bina soche sab ko gira do"…
"Aap kahan ho boss"…
Som:- Najar utha kar dekho.. aur dhyan udhar lagao"….
Idhar Istak kafi teji ke sath unke karib pahunch kar sabko ghurte... "Yahan ka har neta humari baat maanega. Kya re nawa doctors, padhne ke badle yahan kya kar raha hai. Kahin jamin bachane ke badle iski beti ko to nahi maang liya"..
Kapendra Mishra poore aawesh me aa kar ek jhannatedar thappad Istak ke gaal par chipka diye.… Apne logon ke jod par ahankar me chur, Istak, ne thappad ke jawab me, Kapendra Mishra ka collor pakad kar dhakka de diya.
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Hahaha ....biwi aur sali ke bich kitchen me fas gaye the apne prince... Itni virta ke bagair na to sali maanti aur na hi biwi... Khair bacha liya Som ne warna pata na 2-4 kathal aur katwa leti
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Jayad der ka suspence na hai... Jald hi reveal ho jani hai... Fir actually me aap Sia ke sadme ka aaklan kar sakte hain ... Waise Sadma lagne se pahle uss Faisal ki aisi ki taisi to Sia ne kar hi dali thi
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Diksha kafi sensitive hai in mamlon me... Som ek baat samjh bhi jaye lekin Diksha ke liye koi marmik baat.samjhane se pahle boundry banani hoti hai...
Khair dekhiye iske natije aur iss ghatna ke baad Sia vs Faisal & Kasif Sehnavaj ke kisse me kya mod leta hai ...
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majedar update ..sia ka urgent message aa gaya som ko jab wo usko hi call karnewala tha ,lagta hai kuch gadbad type ho gaya hai waha
.vyas sia ko lekar ek jagah gaya aur shayad wo sia ke ghar ki jameen hi hai ,,sia ghar se nikalte hi darr gayi thi ki kahi koi dekh naa le
..dono ke pyar bhare mahaul me gadbad ho gayi aur phir jhagde pe aa gayi baat ..
asif bhi aqsa ko lekar wahi pahuch gaya aur jagah book hai aisa kehne par aqsa aisa bhadki ki asif ki bolti band kara di
..aur usike bich gajendra aur makhan lal bhi waha aa gaye .
gajendr ji ke inquiry type sawalo par asif ne to lamba chauda bhashan suna diya gajendr ji ko
..lagta hai dhire dhire sab wahi ikattha honewale hai
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toh suru karte hum review...
par kare kaha se...........
Update ke suruwat mein jaise Faisal kisi sher ki tarah dahar raha tha, interval hote hote kisi memne ki mi miya ne laga..... aur lo students se panga... aur sabse badi baat.. saamne wala ya wali ki aukat aur power kya hai, kitni hai... ye jaankari rakhe bina hi yun aise abuse karne chala aaya tha... ye bas murkhta ki atirikt aur kuch nahi....
Sia jis family se belong karti hai, wahan se kisiko aane jarurat hi nahi hai.... bas ye khabar pahunch jaani chahiye Som ke kaano tak.... phir Faisal ke sath sath uske dad ka bhi bajud hi mit jaaye puri tarah....
Par yahan ek twist hai, jiske chalte na sirf Sia ne Faisal ko bina kuch bole ya kiye jaane di ya yun kahi jaaye kasif uska dad hai ye sunte hi ushe waha se baizaat jaane diya ...
usko to chhod di bina kuch kiye par shayad kaafi bada Sadma laga hai ye baat jaan ke... ki kasif ka beta Faisal hai , jis Faisal ne abhi abhi ushe itni ghinoni baatein kahi thi.....
lekin Sia bichari bhi kya kare, wo bhi majboor... isliye Vyas, meera & party se baad mein milne ki baat keh ke waha se nikal gayi....
ab Sia ko jo hua tha us topic ko lekar Vyas & party ne kayi baatein ki, baatein kahi aur se kahin aur hi pahunch gayi......
Par in baaton se Vyas, Asif aur Riaz ne Sia se related kayi baatein jaan gaye... kayi baatein clear bhi ho gayi, wohi dusri taraf meera aur neero bhi ye jaan gaye ki kasif Mishra family se belong karte hai..
Ki gayi bejjati ka badla na le paane ki majboori se satayi Sia ghar pahunchte hi dil mein uth rahe dard ko chupake hanshti muskurahati ghul mil gayi....
waha ghar par bhi ajib hi drama chaling... Khair baaton baaton mein Sia ne mann mein uth rahe ek sawal bhi puch liya Diksha aur Som se.... I think,, aaj jo hua college mein shayad isse kuch atit mein ghati ghatanao ki bhanak lagi ho Sia ko... jo uske bina jaankari ke ghati thi.... shayad Sia jo UK chali gayi thi, ye UK jaana aur ghatana aapach mein connected ho... isliye wo sawal puch rahi thi....
chaliye aate hai hum masoom reader naina ki point of view se chuni gayi kuch aham baaton par vichar kar lete hai...
Dono update mein pasandida kirdaar?
are ye bhi puchne wali baat hai kya... are shat pratishat Vyas hi favorite raha hai aur aage bhi rahega
lekin I'm extremely sorry Vyas
Coz aaj teri aisi ki taisi karne wali hoon main....
Meera pe kya soch ke hath uthaya.... tere hath indino kuch zyada hi nahi chal rahe.... teri kamayi pe pal rahi kya wo... kamine... mana ki uske gharwale khaskar uski khudki mom ushe neglect karti hai... Wo saal dar daal wo karwi baatein, wo nazar andaz karna sakti aa rahi hai aur saamna karti aa rahi hai... par iska hargiz ye matlab na hua ki tu ushe baar baar thappad maare aur wo hanshti rahe, just because ab ushe apno se hi ruswayi ki adad ho gayi hai.
dost ho na to meera ke liye kuch aisa karo ki uske dil mein jo dard hai wo thoda kam ho jaaye... kuch aisa karo ki kuch pal ke liye saare gamo ko bhool dil se hanshne muskurane lag jaaye.... Dost ho na to dosti nibhao.... Hath kahe utha rahe ho uspe
next time hath uthaya meera pe to main bhi bhool jaungi shayad ki tu mere favorite characters ki list mein hai... phir to writer sahab bhi bacha na paaye teko....
Dono update ki khoobi?
Pehli baat to kabhi kabhi insaan ko aise situations ka samna kar jana padta hai, jaha insaan chaah kar kuch kar nahi paate, waise aise situations kayi tarah ke kayi prakar ke hote hai... jaise ye situation jo Sia saamna kar rahi thi....... wo chaahkar bhi kuch nahi kar saki, just because Faisal kasif ka beta hai....
........ well is baat zyada nahi kinchti, chaliye point to point baat pe hi aati hun...... Sach mein Sia jab se entry li har baari kuch aisa kar jaati hai ki ye bachhi mujhe hi hairangi mein daal deti hai.... waise haalhi mein jo hua hai ushe dekh ke ye baat clear hai ki jab Sia kisi se dil se rishta jodti hai to puri tarah wafadar, nischal aur niswarth tarike se nibhati hai... na keval jise apna mana usse balki unse bhi jo un apno se jude ho....
ishi niswarth, nischal aur wafa wale guno ke chalte bina kuch haani pahunche Faisal saaf saaf bach nikla, warna jo rodra roop dhari thi Sia ne I thought ki ye Faisal aur uska dad to giyo aaj se....
Kya kahani ke kirdaar ek dusre ki ahmiyat samjhte hai.. .?
Haan... of course... Kyunki maine aise kayi kahaniya padhi hai jaha sakaratmak soch hote huye bhi kayi kirdaar aapach mein hi bair rakhte the.. haalaki ye galatfamiyo ke chalte zyada hota hai.. jo apne paas hai unki hi ahmiyat nahi samajhte... aur jab tak samajh paate hai wo itne door chale jaate hai ki chaah kar bhi unko pa nahi sakte.... chaahe romantic story ke way mein hi sahi lekin aapach mein kaise mil jhul ke, ek understanding ke sath rahna chaahiye is baat darshane ki koshish ki lekhak ne.. .. Khair.... aate hai situation aur kirdaar pe.... Sia..... rishto ki kya ahmiyat hai, ye koi usse sikhe.... Warna college mein aaj jo hua agar koi aur hoti to ab tak dono baap bete ki reli nikal deti pure shahar mein.... lekin apno se hi jude logo ke sath bura ho iss baat se aitraaz hai Sia ko, chaahe gaaliya wo khud sun le, chaahe beijjati khud seh le lekin mazal hai kiski ki jo uske apno par ya unse jude log par ungli bhi uthaye.... is mamle Sia sach mein respect ki kabil hai.
KUCH SAKARATMAK MAMLO MEIN aaj uski jagah aur uchi ho gayi meri nazar mein...
vastavikta?...
agar Vyas, Riaz, Asif aur thodi bahot meera ki taraf turn lu to haan ye kirdaar, background, family aur unki bhumika bahot had tak realistic lage... lekin wohi dusri taraf Som /Sia /Diksha & party ko dekh lage ki fantasy story read kar rahi hun.... kyunki inki achievements, kuch dialogues, inki kuch aadatein, inki kuch ajibo garib bhumika dekh lage ki kalpnao jagat rahne wale kuch insaano ki activities ko padh rahi hu.....
e. g. Sia ko hi pakadti hun example ke liye
Meera jo bata rahi thi manager banager, apni hi company pe job, tankha, aur baaki sab bla bla.....
ushe padh ye lage ki shayad Sia koi supergirl hai...... kaalpanik paatr jo kuch bhi kar sakti hai, abhi dekhiyo kaise 2 saal mein hi complete kar legi mbbs......
Khair..... Mujhe Kya.....
Thrill, suspense, Romance, action, brutality, emotions ka level ..?
action writer ne hone nahi diya...thrill aur brutality bhi add hone nahi diya
agar Sia, fasal ko maut ke ghaat utar deti detikhaufnaak aur dardnaak tarike se wohi, ushi waqt to padhke dil ko bhi ek thandak mil jaani thi...
ki chalo maut ka silsila to suru hua
waise aapke purane readers mein se ek main hu abhi yahan pe so aapki is reader ki kaleje ko thandak mile uske liye kuch murder mystery bhi add kijiye
agar Sia nahi jaanti kaise murder mystery create ki jaaye to ushe nain11ster saheb ki Story series ishq risk pe bhej dijiye... nischal aur nandu sikha denge
phir dekhiye kaise sab okay okay ho jaane hai....
Baaki is do update mein romance ki kami rahi....
Coz jo ghatana ghati uske baad akshar insaan kise apne ke kandho ki jarurat hoti hai, unse baatein kar apne dil ko halka karne ki jarurat hoti hai..
us ghatana ke baad I thought ki Vyas hi wo insaan hai jiske agosh mein jaake Sia apne dil mein reh, reh kar uth rahe dard ko halka karne ki koshish karegi, lekin wo to gam chupaye family ke sath ghul mil gayi... par us dard ka kya jo kisi sui ki tarah dil ko chubh rahi ho...
emotions...... Sia jis dard se gujar rahi ushe dekh khud emotional ho jau...
Update mein jo bhavnatmak roop se Sia tut gayi thi ushe padh lage ki kuch aise bhi dukh dard bhi hote jo khud se hi jhelni hoti hai... abhi ye jis kaaran dil mein ek tees si uth rahi thi iske baare mein Som ya apno ko bata deti to shayad mamla hi out of control ho jata... isliye dard chupaye muskuharti rahi...
Suspense.... Update ke last mein jo sawal Sia ne som aur Diksha puch rahi thi... usse kuch suspense create ho rahi hai... uske alawa to suspense ki baatein na dikhi mujhe.... waise UK achhi study ke liye ki koi aur hi kaaran hai, Btw jo bhi kaaran ho lekin itna to jarur hai ki sia ki bhalayi ke liye hi UK bhej di hogi.
kya kirdaar aur kahani ne a aapko abhi tak kahani ke sath jude rehne ko majboor kiya...?
shat pratishat.... aur shayad aage bhi kayi baar padhu is kahani ko... readers ke yahi bolu ki ek baar aap jarur padhiye is kahani ko.... aap log jitni baar padhenge is kahani ko... utni aapke dil ke karib hoti jayegi ye kahani....
Story related Kuch mann ki baatein ....
Well Kayi kahaniyo mein bahot saare update hote hai, to kayi kahaniyo mein hazar ke upor tak update hote hai, lekin mujhe wo kayi hazar update nahi chahiye, mujhe bas wo chuninda update wali kahani chaahiye jisse padh mann ko tassali aur khushi mile... (jin update se Vyas, Riaz, Asif & family & unki simplicity judi hai, haan kuch ek update mein Sia aur meera bhi best performance di hai )
kirdaaro se, unki paristithi se, unki haalat aise jud jau ki lage ki haan main unke sath kadhi hun us situation mein, un paristithiyo ka samne karne ke liye....
is kahani ke har wo update un chunida update mein se hai, Jo ye ehsaas dilane sampurn roop se saksam rahe .. Pehlu, mod aise ki hazar baar kahani aur update se jude kirdaaro se dil se judne ko jee kare.... abhi haalhi ke do update mein jo situations create huye the .. Uske sath itna kuch ho jaane ke baad bhi wo chup rahi... wajah simple hai yaar... wo kabhi nahi chaahegi uski wajah se kisi apne ko dil mein dukh na pahunche .. waise romance king nain11ster ki story pe dono update mein romance ki bhaari kami rahi... par upcoming update mein writer sahab kut kut romance bhar de kirdaaro ke jariye .. wo kehte hai na ki picture abhi baaki hai mere dost....
ant mein dono hi update dilchasp aur dilkash the aur sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi.... Kash kar Sia.... bahot behtareen tarike se role nibha rahi thi.... ..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
( Aur haan meko sakaratmak counter reply chaahiye is revo ke badle.... warna
Aapne bahut sari tatha bahut lambi baten ki hai.. shukriya itne vistrit aur pyare se revoo ka... Situation ko aapne kafi pyara realise kiya hai...
Main ek chhota sa clue de deta hun... Sia ki jo achievement hai aur company ko le kar jo bhi Meera ne bataya wo jhoot bhi to ho sakta hai...
Agar iss baat par gaur karengi to payengi... Upar jab Nanda se baat hui thi ... Tab usse laga tha ki Sia abhi UK me hai... Jabki Meera business rivelary ki ghatna bata rahi thi... Ho sakta hai ki ye fanstasy creat ki gayi ho kyonki Meera ko sun'ne ke baad Neerav bhi thank God kar raha tha aur Meera se kah raha tha haan sahi kee...
Soooo kahani me bahut sare hint hai... Har anpach chij ho sakta hai ek clue liye ho isliye aise likha gaya ho...
Khair aap ne itna pyara likha tha to maine bhi iss baat ko open kar diya...
Sari baten uss sadme ke ird gird hi hain aur aap ko jaisa ki pata hai main iss kahani me suspence continue karne me viswas nahi rakhta isliye turant hi pata bhi chal gaya hoga ki wo Sadma kyun hua...
Baharhaal aap ki samiksha aur aap ki najariya dono hi pyare rahe... Lekin kuchh jyada nahi suna gayi Vyas ko.... Matha hi to thoka tha... Aise dost to karte rahte hain ... Aisa bhi kya bair ki ek pyare bhavna ko aapne chid phad kar rakh diya ..
Baharhaal atulniya tha ye comment pahle panne par added...
Thankooo sooo much
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Bilkul satika guess jai king bhai
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Tabhi to tight aur tough situation banegi na leon bhai... Drame bhi to khub honge... Action ka maza bhi to fir utna hi aane wala hai...majedar update ..sia ka urgent message aa gaya som ko jab wo usko hi call karnewala tha ,lagta hai kuch gadbad type ho gaya hai waha
vyas sia ko lekar ek jagah gaya aur shayad wo sia ke ghar ki jameen hi hai ,,sia ghar se nikalte hi darr gayi thi ki kahi koi dekh naa le
dono ke pyar bhare mahaul me gadbad ho gayi aur phir jhagde pe aa gayi baat ..
asif bhi aqsa ko lekar wahi pahuch gaya aur jagah book hai aisa kehne par aqsa aisa bhadki ki asif ki bolti band kara di
aur usike bich gajendra aur makhan lal bhi waha aa gaye .
gajendr ji ke inquiry type sawalo par asif ne to lamba chauda bhashan suna diya gajendr ji ko
lagta hai dhire dhire sab wahi ikattha honewale hai
Aage abhi shayad 2 update aur hain... Ummid hai wo dono me aap ke hansi ruke hi na ...n
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nandini ~ are ab bol bhi do
Main ~are aise kaise bol du phir writer sahab ulta pulta kehne lag jayenge...
Nischal ~ Ju kab se darne lagi... bol yaar
main~ no, nahi never....
Nandini ~ agar hum dono ju ki favorite kirdaar hai to ju ko wo comment post karni hogi aakhir itni badi baat hath lagi hai :hint ju ko hum dono ki kasam bol bhi do ab...
Main~ okay, okay fine....
hatho mein hath liye, dono ke chehre itne Karib ke ek duje ki Saanson ko mehsoos kar paaye,
Saans me Riaz ki saans mili toh Sia ko saans aayi
Sia ko saans aayi....
Dono itne Karib ke.....
Rooh ne chhu li jism ki khushboo Sia jo uske paas aayi .....
Sia jo uske paas aayi..
aankho mein aankh daale ye Riaz aur Sia kya kar rahe the nain11ster saheb
lagta hai daal mein kuch Kala hai, ya puri daal hi kali hai
Nothing personal haan...just is uljhan ko suljha dijiye
Sale kamine aur kamini ... Milo dono "The Glaxian" me ... Fir chamri udherne me koi kasar na rahegi... Bahut kasme de rahe na idhar ... Batata hun