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Update:-38
Darasal Som dono hath me chay le kar Sia ko dekh raha tha. Itne me hi chay ki dukan par paise de kar ek ladka muda, jiska dhakka Som ko pichhe se laga. Uss dhakke ka natija yah hua ki samne se aa rahe Vyas ke upar chay gir gaya aur pratikriya me Vyas ne Som ko itna tej dhakka diya ki Som bench se takra kar poora aniyantrit ho kar niche jamin par ludhak gaya. Aur ye poori ghatna Sia ke najron ke samne ghat rahi thi...
Sia jaise hi mudi, ye poora najara pal bhar me uske samne se gujra. Sia, jor se Som chillati hui usse uthane bhagi aur idhar Vyas.… Chay garam thi aur jaise hi wo garam chay badan ke najuk hisse par giri, swath hi gusse ki pratikriya Vyas ne diya tha. Usse khud pata nahi tha ki usne chay girane ke karan kisi ko itna tej dhakka diya. Bus ye garam chay ke girne ki pratikriya me ho gaya.
Vyas ko bhi afsos sa ho raha tha. Wo iss se pahle ki Som ko uthane ke liye jata, Sia chillati hui pichhe se pahunch gayi. Sia ko dekh kar to Vyas aur dang. Ek to pahle se galti hui upar se wo Sia ke pahchan ka.
Som turant hi khad hua. Sia bhagti hui pahunchi... "Kahin chot to nahi lagi"…
Som:- Nahi main thik hun.
Sia, Vyas ko ghurti najron se dekhti hui, Som se kahne lagi... "Chal Som, mujhe in jahilon ki basti me tumhe lana hi nahi chahiye tha"..
Som:- It's ok, kyun panic ho rahi ho..
Sia:- It's not ok Som... Chal rahe ho ya main jaun.. .
Bahut kam aise mauke hote the, jab Sia public me apne gusse ko dikhati thi. Som, Sia ke sath jaise hi wahan se nikla ek ore se Riaz to dusre ore se Asif uske kandhe par latakte... "Chay teri teesri taang par giri thi kya?"
Vyas:- Haan bhai... Kuchh jyada hi tej dhakka lag gaya. Jab wo ludhkate padte gir raha tha tab ehsas hua...
Riaz:- Haan aur wo Sia ke pahchan ka bhi nikal gaya... Teri kismat jhand hai Shastri…
Asif:- Abe jali hi aisi jagah thi ki koi bhi aisa hi react karta… lekin gaur karne wali baat ye hai ki Sia yahan aayi kyon thi aur uske sath ye junior bhola baba kaun tha?..
Riaz, ki mahan samiksha yahan par aati hui... "Abe aur kaun, Bf tha. Sia yahan Vyas ko dikhane layi thi. Sia Dil jalane ke irade se aayi aur sath wale ne to mardangi par hi garam chay dal diya. Thik kiya Vyas tune..."
Vyas:- Sia kyun aayi thi wo to wahi jane, lekin baba kahte hain, anjaane me huye kisi kaam se dil me afsos hone lage to jaroor koi galti hui hai, kosis karo sudharne ki.
Asif aur Riaz:- Matlab..
Vyas:- Uska pata lagao ki wo akela kahan milega… Kam se kam apni baat bata to dun ki dhakka anjane me laga..
Khabar tea party wale gange me fail gayi. Huliya ke sath uska unique bike ke bare me bhi sab ko suchna mil gayi thi. Bahut jyada mehnat nahi karni padi teeno ko. 2-3 ghante baad, yahi koi raat ke 9 baje khabar mili ki, Vyas ke explain kiye huye huliye aur Kale rang ki ek sandhar bike wala aadmi Lucknow ke 5 sitara hotel ke samne chhote se kopche me hai...
Jis 5 sitara hotel ki baat ho rahi thi wo lagbhag 4-5 kilometre ki duri par thi. Thoda ekant ilaka tha aur Vyas ka iss ore aana lagbhag naa ke barabar hi hota tha. Wahin pass me hi Som baith kar chilam ke lamba kas khinch raha tha, jab Vyas aur uske dost pahunche...
Som ke chehre par to dhuyen ka badal tha lekin apne pass kisi ke baithne ki aahat mehsus kar Som ne apne hath ka chilam aage badha diya. Ganjeriyon ki ye aapsi bhai chara hoti hai... Koi pass baithe to apni kimti chilam badha hi dete hain...
Vyas:- Main ye nahi pita…
Som uski baat sun kar apna chilam Asif aur Riaz ke ore bhi badhaya. Un dono ne bhi manaa kar diya. Kuchh der sabhi khamosh rahe. Som apne hath ke ishare se unke aane ka karan puchhne laga...
Vyas:- Wo aaj sham ko maine hi tumhe dhakka diya tha... Darsal..
Som, bich me hi usse rokte.… "Tumhara niche jyada jala to nahi na."..
Vyas:- Nahi bus uss waqt thoda dimag kharab ho gaya tha... Aur maine kuchh jyada hi tej dhakka de diya ..
Som, apni aankhen khol kar teeno ko bade dhyan se dekhte... "Yahan tak sirf yahi baat kahne aaye the"..
Vyas:- Haan... Dil me afsos ho raha tha ..
Som:- Aao mere sath, aur wo bag apne pass rakho...
Som isharon me apna bag uthane ke liye kaha. Iske purv Som, Sia ko chhod kar iss 5 sitara hotel me pahuncha tha. Ek elligal fight ke irade se to pahuncha tha lekin organisers ne saaf hath khade kar diye ki... "Yahan kisi fighter ko payment nahi milti. Log paisa lagate hain aur apne fighter le kar aate hain. Fir wo fighter aur paisa lagane wale ke bich ki deal hai"…
Som ka dimag hi ghum gaya. Shilong ki fight huye lagbhag 1 mahine ho gaye the. Bina maar khaye badan uska bhi toot raha tha. Som ke account me 20 lakh to the, lekin duniya idhar ki udhar ho jaye, apne iss emergency balance se wo paise nahi nikal sakta tha aur 20 lakh ke alawa matr 20 hazar the uske account me.
Som, Diksha ko call milaya aur 1 din ke liye 25 lakh maang liya. 25 lakh ka naam sun kar Diksha thodi hairan ho gayi. Jab usse paise maangne ke pichhe ka karan pata chala, jo hi wo Som par bhadki. Lambi si bahasbaji. Ek dusre par ulahana ki bauchhar aur anth me Diksha bol di...
"25 lakh maange, main de rahi hun. Ye mujhe tab wapas chahiye jab tu finally apne iss fight ko alvida kah dega. Jo karna hai kar lekin dobara mere kaan me ye teri fighting ki baat aayi na to dekh lena"…
Bhar pet Diksha se jhagda karne aur uske bheje poora cash nikalne ke baad Som chal diya 5 sitara hotel ke basement. Chakachak raushni se bhade iss mahal numa nirman ke niche andhere section me khun-kharabe ke khel ka aayojan har hafte, 10 din par hota tha. Som ja to raha tha lekin ander se awaj aa rahi thi ki...
"Fight to lakh, 2 lakh ke liye karne aaya tha. Wo rahega fight me aur betting ke 25 lakh le kar koi bhag gaya to usse pata bhi nahi chalega. Fir wo kisi don ka hi paisa kyun na ho. Ek baar paisa gaya to badi muskil se kuchh hissa wapas aaye to aaye, warna paison ke liye haddi todna, aur jaan lena chalte rahta hai par paisa recover karna muskil. Kaun itni tension pale... " Bus unhi sab khyalaton ke sath Som aadhe raste laut aaya aur chilam khinch raha tha, tabhi ye teeno pahunch gaye...
Som ke liye wo connecting sa moment ho gaya jab Vyas ki bhavna uske kano tak pahunchi… "Usse dhakka dene ka afsos hai aur kewal yahi baat kahne aaya tha"… Bilkul positive vibes jaise nikle ho. Yahan Som thoda tulnatmak bhi tha jab Diksha ki shadi me kuchh chhote ladkon ne usse pita aur Som ke lambe clarifications ke baad unhe ehsas hua ki unse koi galti hui hai...
Idhar ye teeno ek anumanit pratikriya ki ummid se aaye the. Khuli sadak par kayi logon ke bich dhakka dena, uss hisab ye ye log Som ke reaction ka soch aaye the. Kintu Som ne sidha apne pichhe aane bola. Ye kuchh jyada hi ajib tha.
Vyas, Asif aur Riaz ko kuchh bhi samjh me nahi aaya lekin fir bhi teeno Som ke pichhe chal diye. Teeno jaise hi basment me pahunche aur wahan ke fighting arena ko dekhe, teeno kafi jyada hairan ho gaye. Riaz to isharon me hi kahane laga.… "Ab ye ring me ek-ek kar ke hum teeno ko dhakka marega. Sale ye apni jagah par le aaya"..
Vyas:- Bhai tum hume yahan kyon laye ho. Mere dhakka dene ke badle kahin ring me le ja kar fight to nahi karne wale...
Riaz:- Bhai apna bacchan ke fan hai, angry young man, kewal aankhon se jawab dete hain.
"Tum mujhe Som pukar sakte ho. Screen name pheonix hai. Tumhe jo bag diya hun usme 25 lakh hain. Wahan apne left me dekho, sidhiyan first floor par jati hain... Wahan ja kar mujh par paise lagao"…
Vyas:- Kya 25 lakh???
Riaz:- Som bhai tum kya yahan fight karoge?
Asif:- Hume betting ka koi anubhav nahi hai...
Som:- Jao betting karo... Jaise mann ho waise karo... Yahan ke sare fighters ko main dekh chuka hun isliye kuchh bhi ring me kyun na najar aaye paise kewal mujh par lagana.
Teeno jaise hi upar jane lage, Som unhe rokte huye… "Kuch bhi gadbad lage to bag me licence wali 2 pistol rakhi hai... 2 aadmi sab ko gun point par le lena… aur koi ek bus sise par khade ho kar hath thok dena"?
Vyas:- Koi gair kanooni kaam hai kya ladna?
Som:- 2 log marji se lad rahe, log marji se paise laga rahe hain. Haan lekin kabhi-kabhi logon ke mann me baimani aa jata hai fir unke liye kya kare… kah de ki kar lo baimani... Baat ko samjho.. aur haan ek baat aur, lage ki mamla bhadi hai to gun mat nikalna balki chup chap unhe paise de kar nikal lena... Jaan bachna pahla dhram hota hai... Kya samjhe?
Teeno ek sath sar hilate... "Haan samjh gaye" aur Som ka bag le kar upar ke ore nikal gaye.
Riaz, ne jaise hi suna ander pistol hai, hanth ander dal kar check karne lagaa. Wakai me ander gun rakhi hui thi. Gun ke sath ander rakha mobile bhi mil gaya. Riaz utsukta se Som ka mobile nikal kar screen on kiya... "Teri harkaten shuru hai... Rakh de uska mobile"..
Riaz:- Abe iske mobile screen dekh...
Jaise hi sab ne screen dekha, aankhen badi... "Sia, Som ke gaal chum rahi thi aur Som hanste huye selfi le raha tha"…
Asif:- Sala competitor nikla.… Iski gun kahan hai.. nikal aur goli maar kar 25 lakh ujhal aayenge thane. Mamla settle...
Vyas:- Abe bus bhi kar... Kyun khun jala raha hai. Tasveer dekh kar dil me to mere bhi chubh raha hai par kya kar sakte hain, ab Sia ko wahi pasand hai to wahi sahi... Achha admi maloom padta hai. Ab Sia usse pasand karti hai isme uski kya galti...
Riaz:- To hum kya bure log hain... Khair ladki ke liye violence thik nahi...
Teeno baat kar hi rahe the itne me ek aadmi pahunch gaya. Unke yahan aane ka karan puchhne laga. Vyas ne apna fighter dikhaya aur apne fighter par betting ki ikchha jahir kar diya. Amount 25 laakh sun kar in logon ne bhi apna ek fighter utara...
Som aur wo fighter jab aamne samne huye tab aisa lag raha tha ki Khali ke samne Rey Mysterio ko ladne utar diya ho. Haan bus Som ki hight lagbhag barabar thi. Dono ke shape me itna anter tha ki Som ko uss fighter ke pichhe khada kar do tab pata hi na chale pichhe koi khada bhi hai...
1 ka 2 rate open hua pahle… yani Som jita to 1 rupye ke badle 2 rupya milega… teeno kuchh vichar karne ke baad 2 lakh rupya laga diya aur token le'kar apni jagah par baith gaye. Managment ko 25 lakh ki betting dikh rahi thi lekin ladkon ne matr 2 lakh rupya lagaya tha. Betting management ne ek ati kamuk ladki ko teeno ke table par bhej diya drink serve karne...
Ati kamuk dress. Tight ghere wali chhoti si frock thi jisme chikne taang ka poora najara mil raha tha. Upar poora kandha khula. Gala itna bada tha ki satn ki poori gahrai dikh rahi thi. Ab jab itna sab kuchh koi dikha raha ho fir chehre par najar kiski jaye...
Teeno ne ek sath ye sexy najara dekha. Ati kamuk libas me ek mahila hath me tray liye hui thi. Tray ke upar ek poori bottol aur aur teen kaanch ki glass… Unke pass pahunch kar uss mahila ne tray table par rakhi aur table par dono hath tika kar poora jhuk gayi...
Stan ke kinaron se khule ubhar, bich ki poori clavase dikhta.. stan kuchh dikh rahe the aur bache biye hissa itna tight kapdon ke pichhe tha ki kabootar jaise pinjra todne ko taiyar baithe ho. Teeno ki ek jhalak dekhte aur fir najren chura lete…
Wah mahila inke haav-bhaav se teeno ko pakad lee. Sidha jakar Asif ki gode me baith'ti... "Aap ke liye drink serve kar dun"… Asif miyan ki haalat patli. Chehra thik uske bade bhadi stan ke karib tha aur najre baar-baar stano par…
Vyas uss mahila ke aankhon me jhankte... "Humare liye red wine le kar aao. Aur suno tum mat aana. Kisi launde ko bhejo..."
Mahila:- Kyon tumhe ladke pasand hai kya?
Riaz:- Katto rani tumhara sexy badan dekh kar mann hara bhara ho gaya hai… lekin kya hai na abhi mamla paise ka hai... Badkau badan to porn me bhi dekh lenge isliye launde ko bhej aur dhyan hume fight par lagane de..
Mahila:- Jaise aap chaho sir... Main yahin hun. Milna ho to kah dena sharmili se milna hai...
Asif:- Mohtrama aap itni jyada sharmili hai ki hum bharkile ho rahe hain. Tasreef uthao apna...
Uske jate hi teeno ek sath gahri shwans khinche... Riaz thoda chidhte... "Ab sala koi poora aise bhadkila badan le kar chala aaye to jante ho kitna muskil hota hai usse nahi dekhna..
Vyas:- Fight shuru ho gayi... Counter par najar diye rah...
Niche ring me jaise hi vissel baja, uske agle hi pal Som ko uske pratidwandi ne utha kar patak diya.… Teeno ke muh se ek sath... "Aaooo bechara..." Nikal gaya...
Jaise hi Som niche gira uska pratidwandi sidha ja kar pith par baith gaya aur dhapa-dhap mukke barshane laga. Teeno Som ko dekh kar... "Abe ye bhaisa na bhi maare to bhi uske wajan se papad ho jayega Som bhai. Abe uth ja bhainse"…
Tabhi board par rate change hua. Som ke upar 1 ka 2.5 bhaw aa gaya. Asif ja kar 2 lakh aur laga aaya. Fight jaise-jaise aage badh rahi thi, Som ka pratidwandi uski ek-ek haddiyan chatka raha tha. Sabse aakhri 1 ka 7 rate aaya. Teeno ke pass uss waqt 5 lakh bache the. Poora dav khel gaye. Betting par poore paise lagane ke baad teeno aankhen fade bus iss intzar me thi ki kab Som hare aur wo iss jagah se nikle, kyunki jis hisab se match tha Som kahin se bhi jit nahi raha tha...
Tension aisi thi ki teeno 3 large peg pi gaye the. Tabhi aisa laga jaise teeno ne chamatkaar dekh liya ho... Som jo jamin par leta maar kha raha tha. Usne opponent fighter ko jhatka aur teji se khada hua. Opponent ke hath ke humle ko apne forearm se rok kar turant hi ek jhannatedar punch kaan ke niche right se diya aur agle hi pal dusra punch left kanpatti par.
15 second ka wo kashn tha, jab Som khada hua samne wale ke punch ko rok kar ek punch right aur dusra punch left side kanpatti me rakh kar diya. Dono punch padte hi wo bail sarir wala niche jamin par gir chuka tha. Kuchh der tak uthane ki kosis hoti rahi aur jab wo nahi utha tan rafree ne Som ka hath utha kar vijayi ghoshit kar diya...
Jaise hi vipakhi party haari, wahan upar ka betting mahol hi badal gaya... Vyas, Asif aur Riaz ko 10 log gher chuke the. 9 logon ke hath me koi hathiyar nahi tha lekin ek ke pass pistol thi jo teeno ke samne tani thi aur 9 log bhid ki takat dikha rahe the. Gun pakda aadmi ne sidhe bol diya... "Paisa bhool ja aur nikal yahan se"..
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Hahaha nahi ye bilkul nahi hai.. bus jo IAS hain apne aas pass dekh kar soch lenge... Humare hi samaj ke log hain... Aakhir koi na koi to IAS hota hi hai so mere kirdar bhi utne talented hain
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Thankoo so much King bro
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जल्दी करिए महोदय,
हम मज़ा उस मज़े के लिए बेकरार हैं जो अगले भाग में मिलने वाला है।।
De diya update
update kidhar h
Chhap diya
Hahaha ... Thankooo sooo much ... Aur haan I am waiting kab ladai jhagda shuru hota hai
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Awesome update bhai
Sach batau to bollywood meeting expect ki thi do milenge jagda hoga and so on so on... Per bhai ne aesa mod diya scene me ki maja aa gaya ..ab agla update jara jaldi se do samay nikal ker
उम्दा update था nain11ster भाई, पैसो का ही तो लफड़ा है और पैसे भी सोम के अब तो शास्त्री जी को हथियार उठाना ही पड़गा।
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superbb update bro
ye bechare aaye the maafi mangne
or som ko mil gye betting lagane ke liye partner
wese mamla hath se nikal gyaa h
batao londo ko hi gher liya
ye bechare aaye the maafi mangne
or som ko mil gye betting lagane ke liye partner
wese mamla hath se nikal gyaa h
batao londo ko hi gher liya