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Update:-27​

Sia ghar lautne ke karm me raste me hi thi, jab usse dur se hi Vyas, Asif aur Riaz, society ki sadak par ulluon ki tarah chalte huye najar aa gaye. Chal sadak par rahe the aur najren har ghar ki khidki par. Kisi bewakoofon ki tarah taaka-jhaanki karte huye ja rahe the…


Sia apni cycle sab se pichhe kahde Riaz ke pass rokti… "Kisi friend ke yahan aaye ho"


Riaz ek najar Sia ko dekhte... "Tum car se college nahi jati"


Sia bina kuchh bole hi wahan se aage badh gayi. Tabhi pichhe se Riaz daurte… "Kya hua bina bole ja rahi"


Sia:- Aise sadak par daud-dhup aur cycle mat pakdo Riaz, mujhe achha nahi lagta. Main bakayda cycle rok kar puchhi thi..


Riaz:- Wo hum tumhara hi ghar dhundh rahe the.


Sia, ek najar charo ore daurayi... "Riaz sab ko le kar ander aao. Aaram se baith kar baat karte hain".. Sia apni baat kah kar kuchh dur aage gayi. Darwaje par watchman tha, Sia uss wathchman ko samjha kar ander aayi.


Riaz teji se aage badha... "Sale ulluon, aise chhanbin karoge. Chidiya abhi-abhi ghosle me gayi aur tum dono gadhe ki tarah aasman me dekhte raho."


Vyas aur Asif dono ek sath usse ghurne lage. Vyas chidhte huye... "Tu tab nahi bata sakta tha jab wo ja rahi thi"


Riaz:- Look dena band kar teeno ko ander bulayi hai...


Riaz dono ko bungalow ke samne le gaya. Teeno ne aage ka board dekha... "Ye wo Nirbhay to nahi hai"…


Vyas:- Hoga bhi to…. Sia ne bulaya hai na bus.


Asif:- Bawre, Jinda rahega to pyar karega na...


Vyas:- Fattu sale... Naam dekh kar hi bhag ja. Kya poore Lucknow me ek hi Nirbhay Singh hoga.


Teeno jaise hi gate par pahunche, watchman ne teeno ko sidha bunglow me jane ke liye bol diya. Teeno aas-pass ka najara lete huye chal diye.


"Vyas tere sausral wale bahut amir hai".. Asif ne kaha..


Vyas:- Thanks Asif..


Asif aur Riaz ek dusre ko hairani se dekhe fir Riaz… "Lagta hai aaj hi shadi ki baat bhi tay kar lega"…


Vyas:- Uffff dil me gudgudane wala khyal hai. Maa, baba ko bula lun kya..


Baat karte huye teeno bunglow ke samne khade the. Ek bada sa darwaja khula hua tha. Sia wahin hall me baithi hui thi. Usne bhi teeno ko dekha aur hath ke ishare se bulane lagi.


Teeno hall me aa kar bilkul sarifon ki tarah sidhe tan kar baithe. Sia teeno ko ghurti... "Ye behuda harkat kiske dimag ki upaj hai"…


Riaz aur Asif ke ungli ka point Vyas ki ore. Vyas thoda harbadate..."Wo main.. pata na ab kya solid jhuti kahani bana dun jo lage ki haan tumhara ghar dhundhna jayaj tha. Dimag hi kaam nahi kar raha. Bus laga ki milna chahiye isliye chala aaya.


Sia:- Had hai Vyas. Sidha wahin chay ki dukan par adress puchh lete. Aise paglon ki tarah teeno poori society me taak jhaank kar rahe the...


Vyas:- Sorry... Ab se sidha puchh lunga..


Sia:- Haan ye sahi hai. Chay pina chahoge ya coffee...


Asif:- Ek madad…


Riaz aur Vyas dono Asif ko mud kar dekhe. Asif... "Kya?"


Vyas aur Riaz ek sath... "Kuchh nahi sir, aap problem bataeye"


Sia:- Haan haan bolo na Asif... Ek minute pahle main coffee ke liye bol dun..


Sia jaise hi wahan se uth kar gayi, Vyas aur Riaz sidha Aisf ka gala gont'te... "Tujhe yahan aa kar kaun si madad ki yaad aa gayi"..


Asif:- Abe maar dalega kya, gala chhod harami.. main to bhabhi ko engage kar raha hun...


Tup se Vyas ki aakhen phail gayi. Kaan bilkul khade... "Ek baar aur bol"


Asif:- Pandit ji tere liye bhabhi ko engage kar raha tha...


Vyas:- Ek baar aur...


Asif:- Shahstri, bhabhi jyada se jyada tere sath rahe isliye main engage kar raha tha..


Vyas:- Ek baar aur please…


Riaz:- Ye sala gaali kha kar hi manega... Bsdk chhod de wo aati hogi...


Kadmon ki jaise hi aahat hui, teeno fir se tan kar baithe... Sia kitchen se wapas laut'ti... "Haan Asif kya madad kar sakti hun"


Asif:- Meri ek lover hai. Riaz ke pass bhi ek hai. Lekin bhai Vyas apna teacher thehra.


Sia bich me hi rokti... "Vyas kahan padhate ho"


Vyas:- Apne ghar par. Baba tutition diya karte the..


Sia:- Karte the... Abhi nahi padhate hain kya?


Vyas:- Kuchh karan the isliye unhone tution padhana chhod diya. Abhi sirf school me hi padhate hain..


Sia:- Tumhare papa teacher hain?


Asif:- Pandit Ram Swaroop Shastri naam hi kafi hai. Fir Lucknow me koi bolega kya? Unke chahne wale students ki kami nahi hai. Sir ki izzat to poora Lucknow karta hai..


Sia:- Main bhi sir se ek baar milna chahungi. Sorry Asif bich me hi rok di. Tum kya kah rahe the…


Asif:- Main ye kah raha tha, mere aur Riaz ke pass partner hai lekin Vyas ka khali samay doston me aur poora samay ghar par. Aaj tak bechare ko koi mili hi nahi. Medical College me admission hua tha aur hum jindgi me aaj tak kabhi pub nahi gaye... To main ye soch raha tha yadi tum favour karo to...


Sia:- No...


Asif:- Please..


Sia:- Vyas ke liye ek partner hi chahiye na, tum dono apne girlfriend se bol do kisi friend ko le aayegi.. mujhe night out pasand nahi...


Riaz:- Aur uss raat jo mili thi..


Sia:- Really uss raat night out tha. Mujhe lagta hai tumhe fir se sochna chahiye Riaz. Main shift ho rahi thi Lucknow. Night out aur majboori me safar karna anter hota hai.. Kya main kisi problem me hui aur raat ko tum sab ko call karun to wo night out kahoge ya need...


Riaz:- Sorry…


Vyas:- Ab kya iske liye bhi convience karun..


Sia:- Ok.. So Mr. Vyas mujhe night out ke liye convience karenge... Thik hai kijiye Shashtri ji..


Vyas:- Nahi karta... Jab tumhari ikchha hogi to chalogi. Isme convience karne jaisa kya hai. Poore umr convience kar ke hi baat manvate rahen kya log...


Sia:- Nice approch.. promise jis din night out ki ikchha hui Vyas ke sath hi jaungi...


Kuchh aupcharik baten aur teeno dost Sia se vida lekar bahar nikal aaye. Kuchh dur tak paidal chalte rahe. Jaise hi uss society se bahar aaye, Vyas bari-bari se dono ke gale lagte... "Woooo hooo.. pyar ka pahla promise mil gaya... Yeahhhh !!"..


Vyas ki khushi dekhne layak thi. Riaz aur Asif dono chidhte huye Vyas ko dekhte... "Shahstri pagal ho gaya kya."… ..


Riaz:- Oye Shashtri... Abe jhandu usne sirf in future ki baat ki hai...


Vyas:- Haan to, abhi uske future me aa gaya na.. ab present me aana hai…


Asif:- Kaise...


Vyas:- Jo purane aashiq karte aa rahe hai... Har jagah usse main hi main dikhunga...


Aisf, Riaz ko dekhte… "Kuchh jyada hi ummid lagaye hai. Ye bhi na dekh raha ye ladki apni range ke bahar ki hai".


Riaz:- Range ki ho ki na ho hum range me le aayenge… dost kis baat ke liye hote hai..


Asif, Riaz ko dekh kar bus apni chehre ki pratikriya hi de paya... Kahna to chahta tha ki abhi tujh me samjhdari ki bahut kami hai, lekin kah nahi paya..


Subah Sia ke college jane ka samay. Sia apni cycle se kisi chaurahe ko cross karti purav ki disha chal di to Vyas bhi cycle par sawar aankhon me chasma lagaye paschim se cross karte najar aata. College se laut'te waqt bhi yahi hua. Sham ko chay ke adde par Sia, Vyas se puchhi bhi subah ke bare me. Vyas aise taala mano usse kuchh pata hi na ho. Upar se reaction aise the... "Tumhe mujhe rokna aur tokna to chahiye tha na"… Sia kya bolti... Wo bhi baat taalti... "Subah college jane ki jaldi hoti hai"… bus itna hi kah payi…


Agle din Sia ke liye thoda ascharya tha, kyonki kuchh ladke jo uske sath aage picche ho kar kuchh dur tak geet gungunate sath jaya karte the, wo aaj nahi the.


Ek jhalak aate aur jate Vyas roj ussi chaurahe par mil raha tha. Aur roj hi chay ke adde par aise anjaan ban raha tha jaise wo sadak par ho to raste ke alawa kahin dekhta hi nahi tha. 4 din ho gaye in sab ko dekhte. 5th day Sia college ke samay se aadhe ghante pahle nikli. Aaj Nirbhay ki car se nikli thi aur uss chaurahe ke aage ja kar car kinare khadi kar di...


Sia aaram se car me baith kar poora observe kar rahi thi. 10 minute bhi nahi huye honge, inke kaarname dekh kar Sia chakit ho gayi. Teeno sadak ke kinare khade ho gaye. Durbin nikale aur Sia jis ore se aati thi, uss ore dekhne lage.


Gandhi ji ke teen bandaron ke koi pratayksh aur satika example honge to inse behtar koi na hota...


Riaz:- Bc wo dekh, wo dekh…


Asif:- Bsdk kahan dekhne kah raha hai..


Riaz:- Abe wo left side wala building ke chhat par dekh... Kaise wo aunty football latkaye samne ki chhat wale launde ko dekh kar hansti hui exercise kar rahi...


Aisif:- Durbin hata chutiye, pahle ungli se bata kidhar...


Riaz:- Abe wo left side me unchi building.. sale aankhon me motiya hua hai kya..


Vyas:- Abe chup raho yaar, Sia aane wali hai. O Teri.. Asif...


Asif:- Kya ho gaya Vyas..


Vyas:- Abe sadkon par dekh, jidhar se Sia aati hai. Abe Asqa udhar se aa rahi hai...


Asif bilkul sidha khade hokar... "Kahan kahan"


Vyas:- Samne jahan se Sia aati hai..


Riaz:- Aaj to beta gaya, maar legi iski...


Asif, harbada kar dekhte.…. "Kamino wo iss road par kab se aane lagi. Sharm na aati darate huye… dhadkane badh gayi thi"...


Riaz:- Hat sale, aapas me bakchodi karte raho, main to subah ke mausam ka najara leta hun..


Sia:- Ek binocular mere pass hota to main bhi subah ka najara le leti...


Riaz mud kar ek baar kinare dekha aur Durbin badhate huye… "Haan-haan kyon nahi. Lo tum bhi dekho Sia"…


Riaz Durbin badha kar fir se samne dekha... Fir jhatke se apne kinare… dhime se laat Asif ke paun par maarte... "Kya hai be"…. "Mere kinare dekh"….. "Kya dikha raha hai Chu"… Asif, chutiya kahte-kahte ruka aur Vyas ko thuski lagate... "Shshtri… Shastri"…. "Ruk na aati hi hogi"…. "Aa gayi"….. "Kya"… "Riaz ke baju me dekh Sia yahin khadi hai"…


Vyas, kinare dekha.. hath se Durbin gayi chhut... "Wooooooo !! Sia tum kab aayi"..


Sia:- Kuchh football ki baat ho rahi thi.. coffee pite huye baat kare...


Vyas:- Wo Riaz ke abbu ka piles ka opration hai, baad me aate hain..


Sia:- Kamal ka piles hai. Dard se tum uchhal rahe Vyas… Chalo hospital hi chal dete hain….. Chale Riaz sir..


Riaz:- Mujhe ek kaam yaad aa gaya.. main baad me milta hun...


Asif:- Tere uss kaam me to mera kaam bhi padega na.... Main bhi aaya...


Sia:- Teeno matlab teeno... Abhi coffee par ek chhoti si charcha karenge... Kya samjhe..


Vyas:- Haan samjh gaya... Chalo...


Sia:- Cycle yahin rahne do...


Charo car me sawar. Shayad zindgi me pahli baar chup the ye teeno yaar. Yun to teeno lukkhe kabhi kisi se dare nahi, lekin abhi teeno ki haalat bilkul gaanv ki naveli dulhan jaise thi, jo apne saas ka action wala chehra dekh kar hi alag level par sahmi rahti hai. Je teeno bhai bhi bilkul ussi prakar se dare-sahme bilkul samne dekh kar chupchap ja rahe the.


Kuchh minute baad hi car medical wale canteen ke samne ruki. Subah sab ki class hoti hai isliye canteen poora khali aur teeno nayi naveli dulhan, round table par baithe huye. Samne Sia chup-chap khamosh aur idhar ye teeno bhi khamosh, uske bolne ke intzar me…

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Tu zaroori, zaroori sa hai
Mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
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[nain11ster]

ye kya bas ek hi update

Sorry maine kal hi bataya tha kahin 40 se 50 update delete kar chuka hun isliye killat hai abhi khud mere pass... Iss sat, Sunday ko kuchh stock hoga...

Ek update abhi chahiye

Little bit helpless

Sugandha and Som’s love story kaise huyi - as per your status

Som ko Milfs pasand hai kya kyunki uski age to 50 batayi hai nain11ster ne.

Wo bus fun around ke liye post tha... Uss se jyada nahi... Kahani sidhi aur simple hai CG

Are CG sir ji..... Actually Som baar baar lagatar bol raha tha Sugandha ko ki ushe ladkiyan pasand nahi khas kar usse kam umar ki ladkiyan... abhi do update pehle hi to usne kaha ki sugandha ki beti usse 8 saal chhoti hai isliye shaadi nahi kar sakta.. So I thought ki shayad ushe badi umar ki aurat pasand ho... waise abhi wada kiya hai usne to shayad aage chalke Sugandha ki beti Meera se shaadi kare

Ooooo aisi samikha kiya kya aapne... ... By the way 8 sal junior kaha tha maine ... 8 sal chhota kar diya aapne to

Mujhe asw ka mtlb btayega koi

Main bhi nahi janta...

Vo usi ke niche hai kuchh jyada hi back ho gya tha

Hahahaha ... Mujhe nahi dikha lekin

 

[nain11ster]

ek baat to hai... Sia aur un dono ke dad ko bhi jana chahiye tha Diksha ki shaadi mein.. I mean to say... jaan pehchaan itni purani aur unke bich sambandh bhi apno jaisa hi to hai...

Itne sare update gujar diye sambandh dikhane me fir bhi aap likh di apni jaisa hai... It's not true at all... Wo apne hi hain... Like in a family... 3 child grew up together ... Jahan Som 8 sal se nahi mila tha lekin Diksha aur Sia milte rahte the... Kabhi diksha in UK to kabhi Sia in mumbai... Ab baccha bahar padhne jata hai bikul wake situation hi tha inka UK jana aur Sia ka UK se aana..

Come to the point jaana chahiye tha... Ek aur point aati hai jo barabar repeat hua hai... Diksha ye bhi nahi chahti thi ki Som aaye...

Isse reserv rakhiye... 40 update tak ye sab bhi clear ho jayega...

 

[nain11ster]

sabse hatke hai isliye to dono unique hai...
par haan aise baar baar complaints to Sainy bhi nahi karti thi...I think us cafe ki coffee jab tak best coffee bana nahi deta cafe wala tab tak Sia haar na maan'ne wali..

Wahan sainy ki story nahi thi na ....isliye kya pata uske complete story me aise situation aaye the ki nahi aaye the... Haan...

Nahi Sia ne cafeteria hi chhor diya na... Ab wahan ke coffee me cocroch hi kyun na ho kise parwaah

 

[Naina]

Itne sare update gujar diye sambandh dikhane me fir bhi aap likh di apni jaisa hai... It's not true at all... Wo apne hi hain... Like in a family... 3 child grew up together ... Jahan Som 8 sal se nahi mila tha lekin Diksha aur Sia milte rahte the... Kabhi diksha in UK to kabhi Sia in mumbai... Ab baccha bahar padhne jata hai bikul wake situation hi tha inka UK jana aur Sia ka UK se aana..

Come to the point jaana chahiye tha... Ek aur point aati hai jo barabar repeat hua hai... Diksha ye bhi nahi chahti thi ki Som aaye...

Isse reserv rakhiye... 40 update tak ye sab bhi clear ho jayega...

Achha achha thik hai..
Great Meera purohit kab entry legi
Itna to koi megastar bhi wait nahi karwate jitni ye kirdaar karwa rahi hai....

 

[Xabhi]

Aisa kuchh nhi hai ki apke aane pr hi mera comment Aata hai it's only a coincidence bhaya

 

[Naina]

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Hahaha ... Sia ... Abhi hai bahut kuchh kahne ke liye ... Jitni baar ab dekhenge ... Jiya dhadak dharak jaye re feeling aayegi .. baharhaal Archna Sahay sath kaam karne wali ek kramchari hai jiske naam par apne dad ko chhed rahi thi Sia.
. Aise 8-10 naam hai...

Thankoo sooo much for your lovely words.. aap se ek sawal kiya tha ki ab tak kahani kaisi rahi uss par ek chhota vichar postive negative ke sath dijiye... Taki correction ki ummid rahe

मेरी नजर में यहां कुछ ही गिने-चुने लोग हैं जो सही मायने में राइटर्स का दर्जा पाने लायक है । वैसे मेहनत तो बहुत लोग कर रहे हैं पर एक गाॅड गिफ्टेड भी चीज होती है जो रेयर ही दिखने को मिलती है । और आप भी गाॅड गिफ्टेड हैं ।
मैंने जितनी नोबेल पढ़ी है उसका शायद किसी ने आधा भी नहीं पढ़ा होगा । सतर के दशक से लेकर अभी तक के करीब करीब सभी राइटर्स को पढ़ा है और उनके लिखने की स्टाइल को भी बहुत अच्छी तरह से पहचाना है ।
जहां अपनी कहानियों में गलती होने की बात है वहां राइटर्स को खुद ही अहसास हो जाता है कि मुझसे कहां और क्या गलती हो गई है ।
इस फोरम में अधिकांशतः रीडर्स के च्वाइस पर राइटर्स कहानियां लिखना पसंद करते हैं पर मेरा मानना है कि राइटर्स को खुद की मर्जी और खुद के सेटिस्फेक्शन के लिए कहानी लिखना चाहिए । कहानी के स्क्रिप्ट के साथ बिल्कुल भी छेड़छाड़ नहीं करना चाहिए ।

 

[Nevil singh]

Hahaha ... Shayad prayavarn premi ho isliye fans gayi prayavarn vibhag me... Baki lagta hai Sia moh le gayi aap ko... Aisa mera niji vichar hai...

Thanks for your beautiful revoooo

Kirdaaro ko thoda thoda samjhne se ish parkar ke udgaar phut padte hai aur thoda hansh lete hai gaa lete hai

Hai hontt ushke kitabo me likhi tahriro jaishe
Ungli rakho to aage padhne ka jee karta hai

 

[Anky@123]

Ab Loveria ho gaya to ho hi gaya na kam k bache na kaj ke .harkate to badi tucchi lagti h magar saalo bad yad ker ke smile bhi 2 inch bad hi jati h ... Kher yaha mamla toda teda h sia ladki thodi alag h , upbringing hi alag hui h bus apne laudo ne nirbhay Singh ke sath kya kand kiya wo samaz nahi aa rha ...