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Aadhi raat ka waqt tha. Tej bijli ki gargarahat charo ore se sunai de rahi thi. Ek to amavasya ki raat upar se aasman me kale badal chhaye huye the. Bilkul kaali ghanghore andheri raat.


Ek kataar me khadi kayi street lamp post ki bulbs me se koi bulb raushni de rahi thi tou kayi bulb kharab pade the. Sadak par aati hui raushni kuchh jyada hi ajib dikh rahi thi. Charo ore ki sadken khali aur bilkul sunsaan sa mahol bana hua tha...


Ghanghore kaali raat ke iss prahar me teen dost sadak ke kinare, kataar lagaye halka ho rahe the.


"Tujhe kya lagta hai, kaam ho jayega Vyas"

"Shastri se hi puchh raha hai... Wo jabtak sure na hota, itna bada risk nahi leta"…


Teeno paint ki zip band kar ke jaise hi 2 kadam sadak ke ore badhe. Ek car unke pass aa'kar ruki. Car jaise hi ruki teeno hi 2 kadam pichhe huye. Ek dusre se najar milate, bilkul khamosh khade the.


Dur se street light ki dhimi raushni aa rahi thi. Uss jagah par halka andhrea tha aur bundabandi shuru thi. Khattt ki dhimi awaj aayi aur car ka darvaja khol kar ek ladki bahar aayi…. Car se jaise hi ek ladki ko utarte dekhe, 3 me se 2 ladkon ki aankhon me chamak saaf dekhi ja sakti thi....


Dono utsukta ke sath ek kadam aage aaye. Ek najar upar se niche uss ladki ko dekhe. Andheri raat me aati halki raushni me bhi uska chehra unhe kisi bulb ki tarah chamkta najar aa raha tha. Un dono ke chehre ki bhavna badli si najar aa rahi thi…..


"Aalambag road".. Ladki ne kuchh puchha aur pucchne ke baad dono ke ore khamoshi se dekhne lagi. Barshat ki iss kaali raat me wah ladki bilkul ghabrayi si nahi dikh rahi thi. Haan bus in dono ladkon ki khamoshi usse chidha rahi thi... Chidh'kar wo ek baar aur puchhi.… "Aalambag bus stand"..


Pichhe khada teesra ladka aage aaya.. hath ke ishare se... "Aage se left"


Ladki usse ek najar dekhi aur thanks kah'kar car ka darwaza jaise kholne lagi... "Suno itni raat ko kisi se pata puchhne se achha hai Google map dekh lo"…


Ladki car ka darwaza kholti hui ruki, pichhe palti... Jaise hi wo palti, jordar bijli kadki. Us ladka aur ladki ki najren ek pal ke liye uljhi aur...

Wo uski pahli jhalak aur wo ladka apne sine ke bayen hisse me hath rakh kar, achanak se badhi dhadkano ko kabu karne ki kosis kar raha tha. Chamakti bijli kab ki ek chhan ko chamak kar poorn andhera kar gayi lekin uss ladke ki aankhon me ab bhi chamak thi. Yun to wapas se andhera chha chuka tha, lekin uske palatne par jab bijli chamki aur uska chehra samne aaye... Lovely, cute, hot, adorable girl ki ultra HD wallpaper ladke ke dimag me download ho gayi, jo aankhon ke home screen par jaa kar save ho gayi thi.


Wah ladki palti thi kuchh javab dene lekin uss ladke ki haalat dekh kar wo bina kuch kahe wahan se nikal gayi... Car ja chuki thi, lekin wo ladka ab bhi apne sine par hath rakhe, wahin khada tha...


"Shastri beta tu to gaya. Waise sach kahun kamal ki ladki thi. Poore lucknow ke Nawabon ke ghar me dundh le fir bhi aisa kohinoor Hira nahi milegi. Main to soch liya hun, yahi tum dono ki bhabhi hogi"… Pahle aage aaye 2 me se pahla dilfek ladke ne bola.


"Madarchod, pahle kaam par dhya de harami. Tu duniya bhar ki ladkiyon ko humari bhabhi hi banana aur hum muth marte rahenge"… Uske sathi dusre ladke ne apne dilfek dost ko harkaya.


"Sala jalata hai harami. Waise bhi Navab Riaz Abdullah Khan ki kam se kam 8 Begum to hongi hi"… Pahle Dilfek dost ne kaha..


"Baap ko 10 hazar na dega to puncher ki dukan pe tujhse puncture lagwayega... Madarchod khud ko nawab kahta hai".. Wapas se dusre dost ne usse sacchai se avgat karvaya.


"Asif, Riaz, dono kya kar rahe ho? Chalo chalte hain"… Maun khada ladka apni chuppi todte huye kahne laga..


Teen pakke yaar, Pandit Vyas Prasad Shastri, Asif Zafar Shiekh aur Riaz Abdullah Khan. Yun to in teeno ke hi apni-apni alag duniya hai, aur alag-alag bada sa mitr mandli, lekin cricket khelte-khelte teeno khasam khas ho gaye aur ab teeno hi apne career banane me lage the...


Middle class jindgi ne jaise teeno ko jhulsaya tha aur teeno hi lagbhag haalaat ke maare the. Kuchh dur baat karte huye paidal chalne ke baad teeno ek ghar ke pass ruke. Riaz ne ghar ki bell bajayi. Aadhi raat se upar ka waqt tha shayad sab so rahe the. 10 minute me 5-6 baar ghanti bajane ke baad ek aurat jamhai leti hui darvaja kholi aur samne teen ladkon ko dekh'kar pahle to ghuri fir chidhte huye bell bajane ka karan puchne lagi.


Asif:- Khala, khaalu hai kya?


Wah aurat Asif ko kaccha chaba jane wali najron se ghurne lagi. Vyas usse picche karte... "Noor Mirza ko kahiye Vyas aaya hai. Sath me ye bhi kahiyega, kisi ko samay diye ho to samay ka khyal rakhe"


Karib 2 minute baad jamhai lete huye ek adher umr ka aadmi darwaje tak aaya aur teeno ko ander aa'kar baithne kaha. Mirja sahab apne panvatti se ek paan ka patta nikal kar uspar chuna aur kattha lagate huye... "Maaf karna dhyan hi nahi raha ki tumhe waqt diya hai. Tumhare walid kaise hain"


Vyas:- Raat ke waqt hum yahan punchayat nahi karne aaye hain Mirja sahab. Na to aap mere pitaji ko jante hain aur na hi humara koi gharelu sampark. Kaam ki baat kar len...


Noor:- Dekho bina paise ke kaam to hone se raha. Ek ke 1 carore 10 lakh rupye lagenge. Wo bhi kewal tum teeno ke marks ke wajah se itne kam me seat offer kar raha hun, warna ek seat ke 2 carore tak mil rahe hain.


Asif:- Tum log yadi paise le'kar admission ka dhandha nahi karte to humara kabka medical me admission ho gaya rahta. Thuuu hai tum jaise logon par.


Noor:- To baithe kyon ho jao.. Shauk se jao aur aandolan karo. Bhrastachar mitao aur admission lo...


Vyas, Asif ko hath dikhate... "Asif, khamosh rah. Noor Mirza hum paise laye hain"


Noor:- Lao do paise...


Vyas ne ishara kiya, Riaz apne hath ki badi troli ko ludka diya. Noor uss troli ko pakda aur lita kar usse khola.... "Kitne hain"


Vyas:- Kitne maange the...


Noor:- Ye to kamal ho gaya, tum chindi logon ke pass 3 carore 30 lakh kahan se aa gaye...


Noor Mirja ne jaise hi apne muh ka shutter khola waise hi Vyas ne chaku ki nok itna tej uski gardan par rakha ki gardan se khun nikalne laga. Noor Mirja ki chinkh nikal gayi. Vyas usse shant rahne ka ishara kiya, lekin tab tak ander ke kamron ki light jal gayi. Darwaje se lage 15 by 12 fit ke hall me uske 3 bete aur 2 betiyan "kya hua abbu" kahte pahunche.


Hall ka najara dekh kar Noor ke bacche kuchh jawabi pratikriya dete uss se pahle hi Asif aur Riaz samne se desi katta tan diya….


Noor:- Tum teeno pagal ho kya? Ye mera ghar hai... Tum jante bhi ho iska anjaam..


Vyas:- Pahal tumne ki thi Noor. Humari koi galti nahi...


Vayas ne apni chaku hatayi. Wo dono bhi apna gun hataye. Noor ne apne bacchon ko wapas apne kamre me bhejne ke baad…. "Tum kya yahan taiyari ke sath aaye ho"


Asif:- Chacha kaam ki baat karo bus... Faltu ki baton me mahol kharab ho sakta hai. Humne puchha tha kya medical ki seat ki fees jahan 80 lakh hai, tum 1 carore 10 lakh kyon maang rahe… Waise hi tumhe bhi paise ke bare me nahi puchhna chahiye tha..


Noor:- Hmmmm !! Galti ho gayi..


Vyas:- Sun lo Noor… iss paise ke bare me hum char logon ko pata hai. Kisi panchve tak khabar pahunchi to jaise iss paise ke bare me 4 logon ko pata hai, thik waise hi tumhare gayab hone ki khabar sirf 3 logon ko pata hogi.. Chal ab jaldi kaam kar.


Kaam hote-hote subah ke 4 baj gaye the. Aankhen jab khuli to ek ladki aawaz de rahi thi. Ek ladki tray me chay liye teeno ko jagaa rahi thi.


Aisf aur Vyas ne chup chap cup utha liya, wahin Riaz ki ghoorti najar uss ladki par thehar gayi. Ladki thodi uncomfortable mehsus karne lagi. Gusse me tray wahin pass ke table par rakhne ke liye jaise hi jhuki, apne chhati ke ore ghurti najron ko dekh kar, 2-4 galiyan bad'badati hui nikal gayi...


Vyas ek thappd khinch kar diya. Shayad thappad ki gunj dusre kamre tak bhi sunai de raha ho. Hasne ki awaj aa rahi thi.… "Kisi ke ghar jao to salikhe se raha kar."


Riaz, apne gal par hath ferte... "Ab main to salikhe se hi tha, bc kutti najar galti se par gayi. Usse bhi to samjhna."..


Asif:- Bc aankh ki galti ko aankh nikal kar samjha dun. Mc kisi ke ghar me dobara aisi harkat ki na to... Vyas, Noor ko awaj laga kahan hai, kaam hua ki nahi...


Teeno baat kar hi rahe the, ussi waqt Noor bhi hall me pahuncha aur Vyas ke hath me 80 lakh ke 3 check dete huye.… "Admission ho gaya hai. Loan ke liye apply kar do bank me. College account me paise jama hote hi cash le jana. Security ke apne check rakho"…


Vyas:- Abhi jo ladki chay le'kar aayi thi, wo kaun thi...


Noor:- Meri chhoti beti, Zoya. Abhi 12th kar rahi hai..


Vyas:- Humare ladke ko ladki kabool hai. Tumhe ladka pasand ho to bolo..


"Bhag Bsdk"… Noor ke muh se pahli pratikriya nikli. Fir Noor apni badi najron se Vyas ko ghurne laga. Usse ghurte dekh Asif uske aankhon ke aage chutki bajate.… "Neet ke exam me kabhi 2 to kabhi 1 marks se rah gaya tha apna Riaz. Padha likha aur poora khandani ladka hai. Kam se kam tumhare khandan me kisi se bhi jyada talented hoga"…


Noor:- Dekho netaji ka phone aaya tha isliye chup hai warna... Raat ko dikha tha teeno ka talent. Chay khatm karo aur niklo yahan se...


Asif:- Hum sarif to hain Noor Mirza, lekin itne nahi ki koi hume chutiya bana'kar chala jaye... Hum shanti se jine wale wo launde hai jiski shanti bhang karne par utne hi ashant ho jate hai... Tum na samjhoge... Bhej dena nikaah kar ke kisi NRI ke sath... Khuda hafij... Chhod uske ghar ki bakwas chay ko, chal..


Vyas aur Riaz dono chay ke cup wahan rakh'kar hanste huye nikal gaya. Noor Mirja teeno ka chehra dekhte hi rah gaya.


Raat ke uss andhere me jo car inse pata puchh'kar aage badhi thi wo bataye raste par chalti hui ek road side bus stop par ruki. Wahan pahle se ek car khadi thi aur bus stop par ek admi uska intzar kar raha tha.


Wah ladki car se utar kar uske pass phunchi, aur apna hath aage badhati... "Hello Nirbhay ji"…


Wah aadmi Nirbhay, ek baar uss ladki ko ghurte huye dekha. Apna hath aage badha kar hath milate... "Hello Sia"


Sia:- Kya hua Nirbhay ji, aap ke chehre se lag raha hai mujhe dekh kar thode wired feel kar rahe ho...


Nirbhay:- Culture badal raha hai suna tha, itna badal jayega aaj dekh raha hun. Ajib to lagega na.


Sia:- Chalen kya??... Ab to apne desh laut aayi hun, culture bhi sikh jaungi, dhire-dhire...


Nirbhay apne driver ko car lane kaha aur khud Sia ke sath baith kar nikala. Dono kuchh dur aage badhe the...


"So Nirbhay ji, mere aane se aap ko padesani to nahi hogi. Yadi aisa ho to bata dena main arrangements dekh lungi"…


"Tum mujhe chacha, kaka, bade bhai kuch bhi kah sakti ho. Bahut sernior hun. Aise naam se pukara jana ajib lag raha hai"…


Ek chhote se vartalaap ke baad bilkul khamosi pasar gayi. Car duplex bunglow ke darwaje se ander ghusi. Charo ore halki raushni thi. Sia ek najar wahan ke charo ore ka lee. Lambi chaudi boundry thi. Boundary ke dono kinare se 3-4 cottage bane huye the aur bich me double storey building thi.

 

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Subah ka waqt Nirbhay ka zym se shuru hota tha. Jab wah niche ke zym area me pahuncha tab wahan par bikhre saman ko dekh kar chillane laga. Ek home survent champa bhagti hui wahan pahunchi.


"Kya hua malik"

"Champa yahan kaun aaya tha"

"Wahi mehmaan jo kal raat aayi hain"


Nirbhay ek pal khamosh raha. Pahle charo ore ka jayja liya fir ghadi dekha. Subah ke 8 baj rahe the…. "Kitne baje aayi thi"

"Pata nahi malik, lekin 5.30 baje wo zym se nikal rahi thi"

"Hmmm !! Zym ke baad apne kamre me gayi kya"…


Dono baat kar hi rahe the, unhe pooja ghar se ghanti ki awaj sunai dene lagi. Abhay thodi hairan tha…. "Champa, Sia ke liye kuchh paka do, lagta hai uske din ki shoorwaat subah 4 baje ya uss se pahle ho jati hai"… Champa haan me sar hilati hui nikli.


Takriban 10 baje Nirbhay breakfast ke table par aaya tab pata chal ki Sia khud ke liye breakfast bana chuki thi. Pooja karne ke baad wo kha kar nikal gayi.


Raat ke 9 baje Sia hall me baith kar news dekh rahi thi. Nirbhay kaam se wapas laut raha tha. Sia ke samne baitha... "So how was the day"


"Briten se lauti hun iska ye matlab nahi ki Britisher ho gayi chachu"..


Nirbhay thoda hairani se dekhne laga. Sia tv ke sound kam karti... "Itne hairan kyon ho rahe. Main sochi ki aap ko ek naam se hi to pookarna hai. Aap ke hisab se hi pookar leti hun."


"Tum vicitr ho Sia"


"Nahi vichitr bilkul bhi nahi hun. Kewal log andaza hi galat laga lete hain. Isliye mai kisi se milne ke baad koi rai nahi banati, jab tak ki wo samjh me na aa jaye"


"Apna poora anubhav mujh par hi aajma rahi ho"


"Chhodiye isse. Meri jigyasa to iss waqt ye hai ki aap mere yahan rahne ke liye raaji kaise ho gaye. Som se to aapki dushmani hai na"


"Mujhe chachu aur apne.…"


Sia bich me hi Nirbhay ko rokti... "Humare bich wah rishta nahi jo aap banane ja rahe. Chhod dijiye usse"


"Ab isme vichitr nahi kahun to kya kahun. Khair haan Purusom se dushmani hai lekin jaise tum mujhe abhi vichitr lag rahi ho thik waisa hi hum dono ke bich ka rishta bhi hai. Isliye chhodo tum bhi explore mat karo"


"Thik hai chhod diya. Waise usse Purusom pukar rahe, sun leta to muh tod deta."


"Waqt-waqt ki baat hai. Lucknow kaisa laga"


"Sahar pasand aaya. Chakachaundh sahrikaran ke sath apne itihas ko samete. Chachu aapko aapatti na ho to maine apne liye ek cottage chun liya hai. Main wahin rahungi"


"Thik hai, tum Naresh ko bol dena, wo saaf safai ke sath sara kaam dekh lega. Chalo abhi dinner karte hain"…


"Ek shart par, main paying guest ke taur par rahungi aur mujhe kiraye me kuchh discount bhi chahiye"…


"Ab ye kya hai?"


"Apne-apne ethics"


"Haan to kuch ethics mere bhi hain. Main paise to nahi le sakta badle me tumhe kuchh karna ho to kar lena"


"Thik hai ye bhi sahi hai, chaliye khana khate hain"…


Dono khane ke table par the. Nirbhay ke liye champa khana serve kar rahi thi. Sia apna khana khud le rahi thi, upar se dono ke dishes alag-alag.


"Sia ye tum Som ke khane ki dishes kyon kha rahi ho. Yahan coock hai. Tumhe ye bhigoye chane aur mungfali dinner me lene ki jaroorat nahi hai"…. Ek vichitr sa khana jisme kewal chana, mung, kuchh mungfali, pista aur bhi kayi sare grains, kuchh dry fruits, thoda green salad aur dudh. Dobara se yah khana dekh'kar Nirbhay bole bina rah nahi paya..


"Kya karen shayad dono ko hi aise Khane ki aadat hai jo shayad jane wali nahi".


"Hmmm !!! Dono ek dusre ki parchhayi hi lagte ho. Ek dum vichitr. Kahan hai wo aaj kal"..


"Mujh se jyada to aapko pata hona chahiye ki kahan hoga"…


Nirbhay kahin gum hote.… "Pata nahi kahan hoga"



Scotland of India, Shilong ka sudoor ilaka. Mansoon ke mausam me yahan aane wale sailaniyon ki koi kami nahi rahti hai. Yah sunder si saji dharti jaise dulhan ho aur barshat uska sringaar... Yahan ki prakritik saundrya ka varnan mahaj chand shabdon me hona muskil.


Raat ka waqt aur sudoor jungle ka ilaaka tha. Barshat lagaatar ho rahi thi. Pass me hi bade se waterfall me pani girne ki awaj wahan ke khamosh vatavaran me gunj rahi thi. 4-5 rangers upar plastic baandh'kar badi si chhat banaye huye the. Niche aag jal rahi thi.


Thand badhi hui thi. Sabhi apne garam over coat me aag ke karib baithe huye the. Us jagah par bahut sare hi-fi aur kafi paise wale log bhi dikh rahe the. Charo ore poori raushni aur aag ka intazam kiya gaya tha.


Sabhi hi-fi log Mumbai ke kuchh businessman the. Underworld mafia wala look. Black overcoat, hat, sacaff, tim-tam aur duniya jahan ke tarah-tarah ke sajjo saman se kisi rutva wala hasti dikhane ki kosis kar rahe the. Aise har rutve wale log ki gode me ya pass me ek hot si ladki ya aurat thi. Unke chair ke thik pichhe, 2-3 trained ladke, apne full bodyguard look aur dress me mustaidi se khade the.


Un unche collor wale logon me se ek sabse uncha collar wala aadmi tha Sethi. Wahan ke sabhi rutve wale ussi ko sun rahe the aur sari baten ussi ke hisab se ho rahi thi. Uske gode me baith'kar ek kamsin ladki, uss adher se lagbhag 50-52 varshiya aadmi ko ek hath se mota cigaar to dusre hath se jaam pila rahi thi. Bich-bich me apne najuk honth ke sahad bhi chakha deti...


Uss aadmi ke dono hath itne sust the ki baar-baar niche chair ke hand rest par chale jate. Uske pados me ek sexy aurat baithi thi jiske chehre par hi likha tha... "Aaahhhh !!! Kab nichodoge"… Thand me apni bhadakte arman ko aur bhadkane ke liye, uss sabse unche collar wale aadmi ke sust hath ko utha'kar baar-baar apne aur use kamsin ladki ke sine par rakh'kar, uske hath ke upar apna hath dale dono ke stano ko dabva rahi thi...


Swag hote hain in bade-bade high-collor wale logon ke. Inko khud kuchh nahi karna padta hai. Khair, wo sabse high collor wala aadmi ne wahan baithe sarkari adhikariyon ke ore dekhte.… "Sogarappam kahan hai tumhara fighter. Usse sab bata to diya hai na"


Sograpaam un rangers ka boss, chilam ka ek lamba kas khinch bhi raha tha aur galfaron ke kinare se halka-halka dhuwan bhi nikal raha tha. Ek poora kas khincha. Aankhen uski laag aur madhosh si dikh rahi thi. Chehra thoda khincha sa lekin utna hi sukoon bhi...


Sogarappam:- Sethi ji apna fighter ayega lekin aap kise ladane wale ho, usse to bualao. Wo raat ke thik 12.30 baje pahunch jayega...


Sethi:- Usse call lagao...


Sograppam:- Sorry Sethi ji wo apne pass koi phone nahi rakhta. Kahta hai phone hack ho jata hai. Uski detail sabke pass hogi...


Sethi, thoda jigasavash.… "Karta kya hai tumhara ye fighter"….


Sogarappam:- Som naam hai uska sir. Usse Lancer kahte hain hum sab. Thoda mental hai aur kuch nahi karta hai Sethi ji.. Bus aaj yahan hai kal kahan ho kise pata...


Sethi:- Fir tumhe uske bare me kaise pata…


Sograppam:- Mansoon me dikh jata hai. Humare sath baithak lagata hai. Jab tak rahta hai apna bankar rahta hai aur jab gayab hota hai fir pata nahi pichhe chhodta... Na hi humne kabhi dhundha hai..


Sethi:- Kamal ka introduction hai, mere liye kaam karega kya???


Sograppam:- Freelancer hai, kaam samjh me aana chahiye kar dega.

Dono baat kar hi rahe the issi bich halki si aahat se ranger sachet huye aur turant apne weapons le'kar aahat ki disha me tainat. Sograppam apne sabhi sathi ko relax kahte huye Sethi ko ghadi dekhne kaha...


Thik 12.30 baje andheron se nikal kar uss raushni me uska chehra najar aaya... Som

Jataon wali baal, jiski kuchh ladiyan wahan ke shrad hawaon me lahra rahe the. Shant sa chehra aur bilkul nashili aankhen. Dekh kar hi mehsus ho jaye ki iska chehra kuchh kahta hai. Aakarshak chehra jo najar khinch le...


Som ko dekh kar wahan ka mahol kuchh palon ke liye khamosh ho gaya. Uski najar wahan ke poore mahol ka jayja le rahi thi. Aa'kar wo Sograppam ke karib baitha aur uske hath ka chilam le'kar poora dum bhadne laga...


Aankhen munde bilkul kho kar chilam khinchne me laga hua tha. Som jab chilam khinchna shuru kiya tab ruka hi nahi. Sethi ke sath baki sab apni aankhen badi kiye huye the…. "Khinch ye raha hai, dum mera ghutne laga"… Sethi apni ukhdi shwans se kaha.. Shayad Sethi kuchh jayad hi feel kar gaya tha khinchna.


Lekin Som yahan bhi kahan rukne wala tha. Wo to khinchta hi chala gaya. Jab usne chilam Sograppam ke ore badhayi, uske chehre ke upar charo ore dhuwan hi dhuwan tha. Ussi dhuwen ke bich se gambhir aur robdar aawaj aayi... "Sograppam kafi lambi party ko bitha rakha hai. Batao kis kaam ke liye sandesh chhoda tha"


Sograppam:- Ek fight karni hai...


Som hathon ke ishare se maal ke bare me puchhne laga. Sograppam ishare samjhte… "Dono fighters Sethi ji ke hi honge. Tum dono ko ladna hai, aur uss se haarna hai"… Som ne ek baar fir ishare me maal ke bare me puchha.…. Sograppam, Sethi ke ore dekhne laga.… "1 lakh rupya"


Sethi kee baat sun'kar Som wahan se uth gaya. Sograppam uska hath pakar kar niche bithya.… "Lencer kya hua deal pasand nahi aaya kya???"


Som ne koi jawab nahi diya. Sograppam ne ek baar fir Sethi ke ore dekha.… "2 lakh". Sethi ne bhav dugna kiya idhar se Som ki awaj aayi 25 lakh.


Sethi:- Pagal hai kya 25 lakh. Itne me to John Cena aur Roman Reigns haar jaye.


Som, uski baat sunkar kuchh nahi bola. Chup chap aaram se baitha. Pados se ek khali thali khiskaya. Apne pichhe tange bag se chilam nikal kar, plate me masala daal kar chilam banane laga...


Sethi ke baki sathi pak se gaye the… Kuchh kuchh aawajen unke aapas ke baat karne ki aane lagi. Fight to karwani hi thi, bus fighter badal diya gaya tha. Darasal Sethi ko apne bete ke profile ke liye ek fight organise karni thi…


Underground fighting, jiska promo Sethi ka beta kar aaya tha. Sethi ka ladka Amardeep Sethi urf "The Royal Sethi" yahan sirf aur sirf underground fighting ki live video banane aaya tha. 2 lakh wala bahar ka fighter nakki nahi hua. Sethi ne anth me apne hi bodyguard ko taiyar kiya. Pahle apne dono item ko side me aaram se bithaya baad me Royal Sethi ko bulava bheja...


Royal Sethi kale rang ka overcoat pahane huye tha. Hathon me patli pattiyan sarikhe ujla kapda lapete huye. Jaise hi wahan ke chhote se maidan me pahuncha, charo ore se heat blower ki badi-badi machine lag gayi aur bich me aa kar khada ho gaya Royal Sethi. Royal Sethi ke wahan khade hote hi Sograppam ko ishara mil gaya ki ab yahan sab live hone wala hai.


Sograppam aur uske sathi kuchh dur pichhe hat kar andhere me pahunche. Som wahin baitha apne chilam me masala bhad chuka tha. Idhar Som apna sutta khinchna shuru kiya aur udhar "Royal Sethi" ne apna overcoat utar diya.

 

[u.sir.name]

Update:-1 ​

Aadhi raat ka waqt tha. Tej bijli ki gargarahat charo ore se sunai de rahi thi. Ek to amavasya ki raat upar se aasman me kale badal chhaye huye the. Bilkul kaali ghanghore andheri raat.


Ek kataar me khadi kayi street lamp post ki bulbs me se koi bulb raushni de rahi thi tou kayi bulb kharab pade the. Sadak par aati hui raushni kuchh jyada hi ajib dikh rahi thi. Charo ore ki sadken khali aur bilkul sunsaan sa mahol bana hua tha...


Ghanghore kaali raat ke iss prahar me teen dost sadak ke kinare, kataar lagaye halka ho rahe the.


"Tujhe kya lagta hai, kaam ho jayega Vyas"

"Shastri se hi puchh raha hai... Wo jabtak sure na hota, itna bada risk nahi leta"…


Teeno paint ki zip band kar ke jaise hi 2 kadam sadak ke ore badhe. Ek car unke pass aa'kar ruki. Car jaise hi ruki teeno hi 2 kadam pichhe huye. Ek dusre se najar milate, bilkul khamosh khade the.


Dur se street light ki dhimi raushni aa rahi thi. Uss jagah par halka andhrea tha aur bundabandi shuru thi. Khattt ki dhimi awaj aayi aur car ka darvaja khol kar ek ladki bahar aayi…. Car se jaise hi ek ladki ko utarte dekhe, 3 me se 2 ladkon ki aankhon me chamak saaf dekhi ja sakti thi....


Dono utsukta ke sath ek kadam aage aaye. Ek najar upar se niche uss ladki ko dekhe. Andheri raat me aati halki raushni me bhi uska chehra unhe kisi bulb ki tarah chamkta najar aa raha tha. Un dono ke chehre ki bhavna badli si najar aa rahi thi…..


"Aalambag road".. Ladki ne kuchh puchha aur pucchne ke baad dono ke ore khamoshi se dekhne lagi. Barshat ki iss kaali raat me wah ladki bilkul ghabrayi si nahi dikh rahi thi. Haan bus in dono ladkon ki khamoshi usse chidha rahi thi... Chidh'kar wo ek baar aur puchhi.… "Aalambag bus stand"..


Pichhe khada teesra ladka aage aaya.. hath ke ishare se... "Aage se left"


Ladki usse ek najar dekhi aur thanks kah'kar car ka darwaza jaise kholne lagi... "Suno itni raat ko kisi se pata puchhne se achha hai Google map dekh lo"…


Ladki car ka darwaza kholti hui ruki, pichhe palti... Jaise hi wo palti, jordar bijli kadki. Us ladka aur ladki ki najren ek pal ke liye uljhi aur...

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Wo uski pahli jhalak aur wo ladka apne sine ke bayen hisse me hath rakh kar, achanak se badhi dhadkano ko kabu karne ki kosis kar raha tha. Chamakti bijli kab ki ek chhan ko chamak kar poorn andhera kar gayi lekin uss ladke ki aankhon me ab bhi chamak thi. Yun to wapas se andhera chha chuka tha, lekin uske palatne par jab bijli chamki aur uska chehra samne aaye... Lovely, cute, hot, adorable girl ki ultra HD wallpaper ladke ke dimag me download ho gayi, jo aankhon ke home screen par jaa kar save ho gayi thi.


Wah ladki palti thi kuchh javab dene lekin uss ladke ki haalat dekh kar wo bina kuch kahe wahan se nikal gayi... Car ja chuki thi, lekin wo ladka ab bhi apne sine par hath rakhe, wahin khada tha...


"Shastri beta tu to gaya. Waise sach kahun kamal ki ladki thi. Poore lucknow ke Nawabon ke ghar me dundh le fir bhi aisa kohinoor Hira nahi milegi. Main to soch liya hun, yahi tum dono ki bhabhi hogi"… Pahle aage aaye 2 me se pahla dilfek ladke ne bola.


"Madarchod, pahle kaam par dhya de harami. Tu duniya bhar ki ladkiyon ko humari bhabhi hi banana aur hum muth marte rahenge"… Uske sathi dusre ladke ne apne dilfek dost ko harkaya.


"Sala jalata hai harami. Waise bhi Navab Riaz Abdullah Khan ki kam se kam 8 Begum to hongi hi"… Pahle Dilfek dost ne kaha..


"Baap ko 10 hazar na dega to puncher ki dukan pe tujhse puncture lagwayega... Madarchod khud ko nawab kahta hai".. Wapas se dusre dost ne usse sacchai se avgat karvaya.


"Asif, Riaz, dono kya kar rahe ho? Chalo chalte hain"… Maun khada ladka apni chuppi todte huye kahne laga..


Teen pakke yaar, Pandit Vyas Prasad Shastri, Asif Zafar Shiekh aur Riaz Abdullah Khan. Yun to in teeno ke hi apni-apni alag duniya hai, aur alag-alag bada sa mitr mandli, lekin cricket khelte-khelte teeno khasam khas ho gaye aur ab teeno hi apne career banane me lage the...


Middle class jindgi ne jaise teeno ko jhulsaya tha aur teeno hi lagbhag haalaat ke maare the. Kuchh dur baat karte huye paidal chalne ke baad teeno ek ghar ke pass ruke. Riaz ne ghar ki bell bajayi. Aadhi raat se upar ka waqt tha shayad sab so rahe the. 10 minute me 5-6 baar ghanti bajane ke baad ek aurat jamhai leti hui darvaja kholi aur samne teen ladkon ko dekh'kar pahle to ghuri fir chidhte huye bell bajane ka karan puchne lagi.


Asif:- Khala, khaalu hai kya?


Wah aurat Asif ko kaccha chaba jane wali najron se ghurne lagi. Vyas usse picche karte... "Noor Mirza ko kahiye Vyas aaya hai. Sath me ye bhi kahiyega, kisi ko samay diye ho to samay ka khyal rakhe"


Karib 2 minute baad jamhai lete huye ek adher umr ka aadmi darwaje tak aaya aur teeno ko ander aa'kar baithne kaha. Mirja sahab apne panvatti se ek paan ka patta nikal kar uspar chuna aur kattha lagate huye... "Maaf karna dhyan hi nahi raha ki tumhe waqt diya hai. Tumhare walid kaise hain"


Vyas:- Raat ke waqt hum yahan punchayat nahi karne aaye hain Mirja sahab. Na to aap mere pitaji ko jante hain aur na hi humara koi gharelu sampark. Kaam ki baat kar len...


Noor:- Dekho bina paise ke kaam to hone se raha. Ek ke 1 carore 10 lakh rupye lagenge. Wo bhi kewal tum teeno ke marks ke wajah se itne kam me seat offer kar raha hun, warna ek seat ke 2 carore tak mil rahe hain.


Asif:- Tum log yadi paise le'kar admission ka dhandha nahi karte to humara kabka medical me admission ho gaya rahta. Thuuu hai tum jaise logon par.


Noor:- To baithe kyon ho jao.. Shauk se jao aur aandolan karo. Bhrastachar mitao aur admission lo...


Vyas, Asif ko hath dikhate... "Asif, khamosh rah. Noor Mirza hum paise laye hain"


Noor:- Lao do paise...


Vyas ne ishara kiya, Riaz apne hath ki badi troli ko ludka diya. Noor uss troli ko pakda aur lita kar usse khola.... "Kitne hain"


Vyas:- Kitne maange the...


Noor:- Ye to kamal ho gaya, tum chindi logon ke pass 3 carore 30 lakh kahan se aa gaye...


Noor Mirja ne jaise hi apne muh ka shutter khola waise hi Vyas ne chaku ki nok itna tej uski gardan par rakha ki gardan se khun nikalne laga. Noor Mirja ki chinkh nikal gayi. Vyas usse shant rahne ka ishara kiya, lekin tab tak ander ke kamron ki light jal gayi. Darwaje se lage 15 by 12 fit ke hall me uske 3 bete aur 2 betiyan "kya hua abbu" kahte pahunche.


Hall ka najara dekh kar Noor ke bacche kuchh jawabi pratikriya dete uss se pahle hi Asif aur Riaz samne se desi katta tan diya….


Noor:- Tum teeno pagal ho kya? Ye mera ghar hai... Tum jante bhi ho iska anjaam..


Vyas:- Pahal tumne ki thi Noor. Humari koi galti nahi...


Vayas ne apni chaku hatayi. Wo dono bhi apna gun hataye. Noor ne apne bacchon ko wapas apne kamre me bhejne ke baad…. "Tum kya yahan taiyari ke sath aaye ho"


Asif:- Chacha kaam ki baat karo bus... Faltu ki baton me mahol kharab ho sakta hai. Humne puchha tha kya medical ki seat ki fees jahan 80 lakh hai, tum 1 carore 10 lakh kyon maang rahe… Waise hi tumhe bhi paise ke bare me nahi puchhna chahiye tha..


Noor:- Hmmmm !! Galti ho gayi..


Vyas:- Sun lo Noor… iss paise ke bare me hum char logon ko pata hai. Kisi panchve tak khabar pahunchi to jaise iss paise ke bare me 4 logon ko pata hai, thik waise hi tumhare gayab hone ki khabar sirf 3 logon ko pata hogi.. Chal ab jaldi kaam kar.


Kaam hote-hote subah ke 4 baj gaye the. Aankhen jab khuli to ek ladki aawaz de rahi thi. Ek ladki tray me chay liye teeno ko jagaa rahi thi.


Aisf aur Vyas ne chup chap cup utha liya, wahin Riaz ki ghoorti najar uss ladki par thehar gayi. Ladki thodi uncomfortable mehsus karne lagi. Gusse me tray wahin pass ke table par rakhne ke liye jaise hi jhuki, apne chhati ke ore ghurti najron ko dekh kar, 2-4 galiyan bad'badati hui nikal gayi...


Vyas ek thappd khinch kar diya. Shayad thappad ki gunj dusre kamre tak bhi sunai de raha ho. Hasne ki awaj aa rahi thi.… "Kisi ke ghar jao to salikhe se raha kar."


Riaz, apne gal par hath ferte... "Ab main to salikhe se hi tha, bc kutti najar galti se par gayi. Usse bhi to samjhna."..


Asif:- Bc aankh ki galti ko aankh nikal kar samjha dun. Mc kisi ke ghar me dobara aisi harkat ki na to... Vyas, Noor ko awaj laga kahan hai, kaam hua ki nahi...


Teeno baat kar hi rahe the, ussi waqt Noor bhi hall me pahuncha aur Vyas ke hath me 80 lakh ke 3 check dete huye.… "Admission ho gaya hai. Loan ke liye apply kar do bank me. College account me paise jama hote hi cash le jana. Security ke apne check rakho"…


Vyas:- Abhi jo ladki chay le'kar aayi thi, wo kaun thi...


Noor:- Meri chhoti beti, Zoya. Abhi 12th kar rahi hai..


Vyas:- Humare ladke ko ladki kabool hai. Tumhe ladka pasand ho to bolo..


"Bhag Bsdk"… Noor ke muh se pahli pratikriya nikli. Fir Noor apni badi najron se Vyas ko ghurne laga. Usse ghurte dekh Asif uske aankhon ke aage chutki bajate.… "Neet ke exam me kabhi 2 to kabhi 1 marks se rah gaya tha apna Riaz. Padha likha aur poora khandani ladka hai. Kam se kam tumhare khandan me kisi se bhi jyada talented hoga"…


Noor:- Dekho netaji ka phone aaya tha isliye chup hai warna... Raat ko dikha tha teeno ka talent. Chay khatm karo aur niklo yahan se...


Asif:- Hum sarif to hain Noor Mirza, lekin itne nahi ki koi hume chutiya bana'kar chala jaye... Hum shanti se jine wale wo launde hai jiski shanti bhang karne par utne hi ashant ho jate hai... Tum na samjhoge... Bhej dena nikaah kar ke kisi NRI ke sath... Khuda hafij... Chhod uske ghar ki bakwas chay ko, chal..


Vyas aur Riaz dono chay ke cup wahan rakh'kar hanste huye nikal gaya. Noor Mirja teeno ka chehra dekhte hi rah gaya.


Raat ke uss andhere me jo car inse pata puchh'kar aage badhi thi wo bataye raste par chalti hui ek road side bus stop par ruki. Wahan pahle se ek car khadi thi aur bus stop par ek admi uska intzar kar raha tha.


Wah ladki car se utar kar uske pass phunchi, aur apna hath aage badhati... "Hello Nirbhay ji"…


Wah aadmi Nirbhay, ek baar uss ladki ko ghurte huye dekha. Apna hath aage badha kar hath milate... "Hello Sia"


Sia:- Kya hua Nirbhay ji, aap ke chehre se lag raha hai mujhe dekh kar thode wired feel kar rahe ho...


Nirbhay:- Culture badal raha hai suna tha, itna badal jayega aaj dekh raha hun. Ajib to lagega na.


Sia:- Chalen kya??... Ab to apne desh laut aayi hun, culture bhi sikh jaungi, dhire-dhire...


Nirbhay apne driver ko car lane kaha aur khud Sia ke sath baith kar nikala. Dono kuchh dur aage badhe the...


"So Nirbhay ji, mere aane se aap ko padesani to nahi hogi. Yadi aisa ho to bata dena main arrangements dekh lungi"…


"Tum mujhe chacha, kaka, bade bhai kuch bhi kah sakti ho. Bahut sernior hun. Aise naam se pukara jana ajib lag raha hai"…


Ek chhote se vartalaap ke baad bilkul khamosi pasar gayi. Car duplex bunglow ke darwaje se ander ghusi. Charo ore halki raushni thi. Sia ek najar wahan ke charo ore ka lee. Lambi chaudi boundry thi. Boundary ke dono kinare se 3-4 cottage bane huye the aur bich me double storey building thi.

Behtareen shuruaat
to yeh teeno ladke medical students hai... Lagta hai Neet mein margin se reh gaye haI... Seat confirm karwane aaye hai apni Noor k paas... Lagta agent hai yeh private medical colleges ka... 1 crore rs dene pad rahe hai ek jane k... Phir to lagta teeno hi padhayi mein badhiya nhi hai... par aap kahi Inka admission lucknow k Era mein to nhi karwa rahe...
Choro apno ko kyaaa...
par hai teeno hi harami... Bass shastri thoda kam lagaa...
Bc noor ki gaand marli teeno ne raat ko halak pe chaku tika diya aur subh ussi ki beti ko taad rahe the... Phir upar se ussi se uski beti ka haath bhi mang rahe the...
To uss car wali ladki ka naam siya hai... Vilayat se aayi hai aur kafi amirr hai... Nirbhay chacha hai uska...
Shastri aur siya lagta hai yhi mukhya patra hai...
Baki update bilkul badhiya tha ek no....
bss aapne yeh neet wali dukhti ragg cher di...
brilliant opening
keep writing ...
keep posting...
stay safe...
stay fit....

 

[Mr. Nobody]

Amazing update.... Both of em

 

[aalu]

Ghanghore kaali raat ke iss prahar me teen dost sadak ke kinare, kataar lagaye halka ho rahe the...... aah param aanand....

Teeno paint ki zip band kar ke jaise hi 2 kadam sadak ke ore badhe. Ek car unke pass aa'kar ruki. Car jaise hi ruki teeno hi 2 kadam pichhe huye. Ek dusre se najar milate, bilkul khamosh khade the.... maine bola tha na road pe mat mut... dekha aa gayee na... aajkal kee laundiya bari fast hain...

Barshat ki iss kaali raat me wah ladki bilkul ghabrayi si nahi dikh rahi thi.... launda uthane waali lagti hain jaldi se cheeenk de bhaag jayegi...

"Shastri beta tu to gaya. Waise sach kahun kamal ki ladki thi. Poore lucknow ke Nawabon ke ghar me dundh le fir bhi aisa kohinoor Hira nahi milegi. Main to soch liya hun, yahi tum dono ki bhabhi hogi"… Pahle aage aaye 2 me se pahla dilfek ladke ne bola.... lo yeh log alag hi competition shuru kar diye aur idhar 11 ster fan alag se meri maal ka halla machaye hue hain.... laundiya dekhi nahin kee shuru ho gaye larne kuchh class hain kee nahin...

Hall ka najara dekh kar Noor ke bacche kuchh jawabi pratikriya dete uss se pahle hi Asif aur Riaz samne se desi katta tan diya…. ai sabbash mirzapur part-3 kee kahani idhar se hi shuru hogi.... noor miyan andolan andolan kar rahe the... bhrastachar mitao... lekin idhar bhrastachari ko hi mitao shuru ho gaya hain...


Vyas:- Sun lo Noor… iss paise ke bare me hum char logon ko pata hai. Kisi panchve tak khabar pahunchi to jaise iss paise ke bare me 4 logon ko pata hai, thik waise hi tumhare gayab hone ki khabar sirf 3 logon ko pata hogi.. Chal ab jaldi kaam kar..... yeh sasure vidyarthi hee hain na... katta,, chaku le ke ghum rahe hain... yaahe aage jaa ke desh ke izzatdar neta banenge...

khali fokat mein riaz kee izzat utar dee... bechara chakshu chodan hi toh kar raha tha.... ab kya kare tharkee najro ka... fisal jaati hain waise bhi barish ka mausam hain...


Vyas:- Humare ladke ko ladki kabool hai. Tumhe ladka pasand ho to bolo.. "Bhag Bsdk"… Noor ke muh se pahli pratikriya nikli... bhai lagta hain launde ka suhaagrat idhar hi manwa ke bhejoge....

nirbhay chicha ko lakarbhagga lag gaya jab sia aunty ne bhaiya na bola... pehla launda dekha jo larki ne bhai na bola toh udaas hain.... sala idhar toh shakal dekhte hain hi bhiya bol deti hain kamini....

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

romanchak starting ...3 dost raste se jaa rahe the aur mausam ka aisa varnan kiya ki kuch bada honewal hai aisa lag raha tha .. teeno kuch kaam se jaa rahe the tabhi ek car aati hai aur usme se ek ladki utarti hai jo pata puchhti hai ,,,ladko ko dekhkar bhi jo dari nahi usme kuch to baat hogi hi ..

vyas ke dost thode tharki type hai par teeno me khas dosti hai ..

noor ke ghar jana aur usko itne paise dena sirf medical seat ke liye .. gun aur chaku saath rakhna teeno ka par unke paas gaadi nahi hai ye kamal ki baat hai ..
itne paise laaye kaha se wo log ..

noor ke ghar jakar usse deal ki aur subah uske hi ladki ko taadne lage aur rishte ke liye baat bhi ki ..

aur wo car wali ladki briten se aayi hai jiska naam sia hai aur wo yaha nirbhay ke saath rehnewali hai ..

ab sia ka rishta kya hai nirbhay yaa som ke saath abhi pata nahi chal paaya .. aur nirbhay aur som ka kya rishta hai ..

aur ye sia to jaldi jagti hai puja bhi karti hai jo nirbhay ne socha bhi nahi hoga ... par ye sia ka khana itna ajeeb kyu hai ..

som ek fighter hai aisa lagta hai jo paiso ke liye fight karta hai ,,usko haarna yaa jeetne se koi matlab nahi ..

sethi apne bete ke liye ye fight organise kar raha hai par kya royal sethi fight karega som se ...

aur ye bhi pata nahi chala ki som ko kitne paise dega sethi ,,som 25 lakh maang raha tha par sethi ne mana kar diya tha ..

 

[Naina]

1) teen middle class ghar ke teen ladke jo ki khasam khas dost bane cricket khel ke jariye... ab ye teeno medical seats ke liye kisi noor mirza ko paisa deta hai taaki unhe bhi seats mil jaye.. Noor mirza koun hai?
2) do twists hai yahan pe... ek) ye log hai to middle class wale jo ab mbbs study continue karne wale hai, lekin lage ki swabhav se gunde bhi hai...
Do) inme se ek ne yaani Vyas ne sach mein dil de baitha us mendak jaisi aankhon wali ko, jiska naam Sia hai...
3) yahi se ek link mile dusre kirdaaro ki....
Sia, som, nirbhay, sethi etc

Sia bahar desh se bharat aayi hai... kis liye ye wohi jaane, maybe apne aashiq som se milne....
4) ab kahani ke dusre pehlu bhi samne aate jaa rahe hai naye kirdaaro ke sath.. ek to Sia ab yaha par pehle pahal Nirbhay naam ke shaksh ke ghar ruki, Nirbhay wo jiski dusmani som se hai phir bhi Sia ko apne ghar pe rehne diya.. ajib hai..
5) ajib to Sia bhi hai... waise hogi kyun nahi.. first of all uski aankhein jo mendak jaisi hai..
Khair.... Mujhe kya...
So ab kisi kaaran vash ab Sia cottage pe rehne wali hai...
6) ab entry liya story pe ek aur lead character som... baba ji jaisa look... jo apni mann marzi se jeeta, apne mann mutabik aata jaata gayab rahta, ya phir gayab bhi ho jata tha... yun ki sethi, Sograppam aur som ki baaton se lage ki som ek achha fighter hai.. par aaj haarne ke liye paiso ki bargaining ho rahi hai..
So finally shayad royal sethi som se fight karne wala hai..

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Kayi kirdaaro ke bich link hai to kayi kirdaar ek dusre se anjaan....
Sia kyun nirbhay ke ghar? Nirbhay kyun madad kar raha hai ushe?
wo teeno yani ki Vyas, Asif aur riaz... ye teeno itne paise laye kaha se?
Baba ji som ka kya chakkar hai mendak jaisi aankhon wali Sia se? kyunki Sia ab tak desh se bahar rah rahi thi to pehchaan kaise huyi ya Mulaaqaat ya pyar?

Khair....I think kahani romantic na hoke thriller zyada hai...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

Som, Sia, Vyas, Meera

Vyas aur meera ko lead mein rakhiye

 

[nain11ster]

Khair....I think kahani romantic na hoke thriller zyada hai...

Meri kahaniyan to waise bhi thrill na hoti hai... Sweet aur simple sa kahani hote hai jisme sabhi kirdar najron ke samne ... Don't worry it's romantic drama ... Rahi baat lead ki to yahan sabhi lead hai aur koi bhi nahi... Unhe chatecters name chahiye the so maine de diye... Baki lead kaun hai wo reader logos judge karte rahe...

 

[Naina]

Meri kahaniyan to waise bhi thrill na hoti hai... Sweet aur simple sa kahani hote hai jisme sabhi kirdar najron ke samne ... Don't worry it's romantic drama ... Rahi baat lead ki to yahan sabhi lead hai aur koi bhi nahi... Unhe chatecters name chahiye the so maine de diye... Baki lead kaun hai wo reader logos judge karte rahe...

to phir lead characters nischal aur Hella ko bana dijiye.. dono ju ko dua mein yaad rakhenge