Adultery The master (the beginning of life)

[Ayush2017]

Update 11


Ab tak

Aapne pda kaise priya ek bachche janam deti hai. Bachche ke janam ke sath thi ek akashwani hoti aur thik iske baad aghori us bachche ki aur chala jata pr priya ke pas pahuchne se pahle hi jyoti bachche ko le kar bhag jati sath hi aghori ko samohan mein dal jati hai, wahi aghori ka khash vyakti shambhu aa kar aghori se is sammohan se bahar nikalta hai. Usi ke sath aghori priya ke pas pahuch jor jyoti ke bare mein puchta pr use kuch pata nahi chalta jis karan wo priya ko jaan se merne aage bata hai tabhi wo pathar mein badal jata hai. Pathar mein badalne se pahle aghori priya ko ek sharf mein bandh jata hai. Wahi shambhu rakh mein badal jata hai.

Aab aage.

Jyoti us bachche ko le kar ek train mein baithkar us jagah se dur chali jati hai. Us ab dar tha agar thakuro is bare mein pata chala to wo mujhe marne ke baad us bachche maar denge. Aise hi train apne mnjali ki aur bad ne lagti hai ek din ke safar ke baad wo train ek jagah rukti hai, jyoti apne aur us bachche ke liye kuch khana kharidne ke liye train se niche utar jati hai. Wo ek dukan ke pr ja kar sabse pahle bachche ke liye doodh mangti hai pr dukandar jyoti se kahta hai ki doodh aapki station bahar mil jayega.
Jyoti us dukandar ki baat maankar station se bahar chali jati hai, aur station ke bahar hi ek chaywala chat bana raha tha. Jyoti us ke pas ja kar kahti hai.
Jyoti_ bhai ek glass doodh dena. Kitne ki hai
Chaaywala_ bahanji 5 rs ke hai.
Jyoti _ thik hai de dijiye.
Chaaywala_ ye lijiye bahan ji.
Jyoti_ ye lijiye apne paise

Phir jyoti bachche ko doodh pilane lagti hai. Doodh pilane ke baad jyoti chaaywale se bhaiya ye kaun si jagah hai.
Chaaywala _ bahan ji ye dharmpur hai. Lagta hai aap yaha nayi hai.
Jyoti _ ji haan mein yaha pr nayi hu.
Chaaywala _ bahan ji kaha jana hai aapko.
Jyoti _ meri ek door ki chachi rahti hai unhi ke pas jana hai.
Itna kahne ke baad jyoti us jagah se chal deti hai.phir jyoti Ek rikshewale se ek address deti hai aur kahti ha bhaiya mujhe is jagah pr jana hai.
Rikshawala_ thik hai baith jayiye.
Jyoti _ kitne paise hoge.
Rikshawala_ bahan ji 3 rupaye
Jyoti _ thik hai.
Phir wo rikshawal jyoti ko us address pr le jata hai. Wah ek hasti hoti hai. Jyoti utarte hue bhaiya kya aap ek mints ruk sakte hai. Ji jarur rikshaw wala kahta hai. Phir jyoti aage bad jati hai. Ek ghr ke aage ja kar darwaaja khatkhatti hai. Awaj sun kar ke mahila bahar aati hai.
Manila_ ji kahiye kise milna hai
Jyoti _ kya mujhe kaam yaha koi mil jayega.
Manila_ ji nahi
Jyoti_ kya aisi koi jagah hai jaha mujhe kaam mil sakti hai.
Manila_ ji mujhe nahi pata.
Jyoti_ aapka bahut bahut dhanybad aapne apna kimti wakt mujhe diya.

Phir jyoti us jagah se jaise aage badti hai
Manila_ ek mints sunana.
Jyoti _ ji kahiye.
Manila_ ek mints rukiye mein abhi aayi.
Phir wo manila ghar ke andar chali jati hai. Jab wo aati ha to uske hath mein ke kagaj ka tukada tha.mahliya kagaj ka tukda jyoti ki aur badte hue.
Manila_ ye rakhiye..aap is pate par chali jaaiye.aapko kaam.mil jayega.
Jyoti_ aap dhanybad aapne jo meri maddat ki.

Phir jyoti us rikshewale ke pas chali jati hai. Bhaiya kya aap mujhe is pate par lekar chal sakte hai jyoti kahti hai.
Rikashawala _ kyu nahi..bahan ji ek baat puchu aap waha pr kis liye ja rahi.
Jyoti _ bhaiya kaam.ki talash mein. Kya hua.
Rikashawala_ bahanji aap jis jaha pr ja rahi ha wo achha jagah nahi hai.
Jyoti _ aap kaise pata
Rikashawala_ kyu ki bahan ji main kai bar us jagah pr ja chuka hu logo ko chodne.
Jyoti _ aisa kya hai us jagah mein.
Rikashawala_ bahan ji wo ke randikhana hai jaha pr log aate jate hai.
Jyoti _ kya.
Rikashawala_ ji hana
Jyoti_ dhanywad bhaiya aapne mujhe us narak se bcha liya nahi to main barbad ho jati.
Rikashawala_ Vaise bahan ji aap to apni chachi se milne gyi thi na.
Jyoti _ ji haan
Rikashawala_ kya phir unhone aapko rakhne se mana kar diya.
Jyoti_ bhaiya baat aisi hai meri chachi ne wo ghar khali kar ke kahi chali gayi hai.
Rikashawala_ hmm to phir aapko iska pata kisne diya,
Jyoti_ us ghar mein rahne wali mahila ne.
Rikashawala_ ab aap kaha rahegi.
Jyoti_ bhaiya kya aap mujhe kahi room kiraye pr dilwa sakte hai.
Rikashawala_bahan ji main jahan rahta hu waha pr ek room.khali hai. Pr uska kiraya jada hai.
Jyoti_ bhaiya mere pas is wakt 60 rupaye hi hai.
Rikashawala_ thik hai aap mera kiraya bad mein de dena. Jaha tak mujhe lagta hai ki aapke pas khane ke liye paise nahi hai.
Jyoti_ ji

Phir uske baad rikashawala jyoti ko le kar ek colony aa jata hai. Is colony mein 40 kamare the.. Rikashawala apna rikashawala rokte hue.
Rikashawala_ bahan ji aayi mere sath
Phir jyoti us rikashewale ke sath chali jati hai. Rikashawala ek kamre ke pas ja kar darwaj khatkhatta hai. Thodi der mein ek mahila nikal kar aati hai.
Mahila_ haan re jitu itni raat ko darwaaja kyu pit raha hai.
Jitu_ maa ji mere bagal wala kamra is ladki ko mil sakta hai.
Mahila_ kaun hai ye.
Jitu_ maa ji majbur ladki hai.
Mahila_ kya tu is janta hai.
Jitu _ nahi maaji pr mujhe bhali lagi is liye yaha le aaya isko.
Mahila_ tujhe kaise pta ye bhali aur mabur ladki hai.

Phir jitu (rikashawala) us mahila ko jo aaj hua tha uske bare mein batata hai jise sunkar mahila ko bahut bura lagta hai.
Mahila_ kya naam hai tera.
Jyoti_ mera naam.jyoti sharma hai.
Mahila_ tere hath main ye bacha kiska hai.
Jyoti _ mera bachcha hai.
Mahila_ jhuth to nahi bol rahi hai na
Jyoti_ ji nahi
Mahila_ tera pati kaha.
Tabhi jitu bol padta hai.
Jitu_ maa ji iske pati ne dusri shadi kar li aur ise ghar se bahar nikal diya. Nahi iske saas sasur ne apne bete ko kuch bola. Unhone to is bichche ko bhi apana ne se bana kar diya.
Mahila_ thik hai ye le chabi pr dhyan rahe kiraya har mahine aa jaana chahiye.
Jitu_ thik hai maaji mil jayega.
Jyoti_ maaji kitna kiraya hai.
Mahila_ 250 rupeye
Jyoti_ maaji abhi mere ps bas 60 rupaye hai, is aap rakh lijiye.
Mahila_ rahne de abhi tujhe iski jarurat hai. Pr dhyan rahe kiraye paise samay pr mil jaye. Nahi to achcha nahi hoga tere liye.
Jyoti _ji maa

Phir mahila muskurate hue andar chali jati hai. Wahi jitu jyoti ko le kar upar chal deta hai. Apne kamare ke pas ja kar darwaj khatkhatta hai. Darwaja le mahila kholti hai.
Jitu_ komal inse milo ye hai jyoti
Komal_ namaste ji aandar aaye.
Jyoti_ namaste didi
Phir jyoti andar aa jati hai. Komal khana ban gya hai to khana laga do jab tak main hath muh dhokar aata hu.
Komal_ aap bhi hath muh dho lijiye jab tak aap is bachche ko mujhe de dijiye

Phi sabhi khana kahte hai khane ke baad komal bartan le kar andar chali jati hai. Jyoti bhi bachche ko pakda kar komal ki maddat kar chali jati hai. Bartan dhote hue jyoti komal aapas mein baat karne lagti hai is bich jyoti ne use sab kuch bataa diya pr sab kuch jhuth tha.
Bartan dhone ke baad done jitu ke pas aa jati hai.
Komal_ jyoti is kya naam hai Munne ka
Jyoti _ didi abhi iska naam karan nahi hua. Aap hi badta do kya naam rakhu.
Komlal_ achha hmm thik hai rudrapratap kaisa hai.
Jyoti _ bahut hi achha hai. Pyar se rudra kahege.

 

[Rocky2602]

Nice n fantastic update

 

[Ayush2017]

Update 12

Ab tak

Bartan dhone ke baad done jitu ke pas aa jati hai.
Komal_ jyoti is kya naam hai Munne ka
Jyoti _ didi abhi iska naam karan nahi hua. Aap hi badta do kya naam rakhu.
Komal_ achha hmm thik hai rudrapratap kaisa hai.
Jyoti _ bahut hi achha hai. Pyar se rudra kahege.


Ab aage

Aise hi dono batein karte hue bartan saf kar lete hai. Didi aap aaj raat yahi ruk jayiye kal se aap apne room mein sone chali jana komal jyoti se kahti hai.thik hai komal jyoti kahti hai.
Phir jyoti rudra ko lekar apne bistar pr so jati wahi komal apne pati ke sath sone chali jati hai.

Next day.

Jyoti jaldi uth jati hai aur ghar kaam karne lagti hai. Rudra abhi so raha tha isliye wo kaam ko jaldi jaldi kar rahi thi. Abhi jyoti ne gas pr chay ki kaitali hi rakhi thi ki rudra utha kar rone lagta hai. Jiski awaj sun kar komal uth jati hai, bhag kar apne room se rudra ke pas aati hai. Aur apne god mein utha leti hai.

Komal_ ale ale mera beta ro rah hai. Kya hua mere bete ko. Bhukh lagi hai mere bete ko.
Are jyoti kya kar rahi hai dekh tera lal ro raha hai,
Jyoti_ didi main chay bana rahi hu. Aap rudra ko sambhalo.
Komal _ are ise bhukh lagi hai tujhe chay ki padi hai.
Jyoti _ bas didi ho gya.

Phir jyoti teen cup chay aur ek doodh ki katory le kar aati hai. Jis dekh komal jyoti se kahti hai.

Komal_ ye doodh ki katori kiske liye.
Jyoti_ didi rudra ke liye.
Komal_ kya tera doodh nahi hota kya.
Jyoti _ nahi didi isi ka to rona hai. Ki main apne lal ko doodh nahi pila sakti
Komal _chal koi nahi. Chal pahle mere rudra ko doodh pila use uske baad tu kuch karna.
Jyoti _ nahi didi ise aap hi doodh pilao kyu ki mujhe khana bhi banana hai.
Komal_ chal thik hai pr ise pahle unko chal de kar aati hu. Jab tak tu apne lal ko doodh pila.


Phir jyoti rudra ko doodh pilane lagti hai. Wahi komal apne pati jitu ko chay dene chali jati hai. Komal apne pati ko utha kar chay deti hai aur kahti hai.

Komal_ aap chay pikar jaldi se taiyar ho jayiye jab tak main aapke liye khana banati hu.

Itna kah kar wo jyoti ke pas aa jati hai..jyoti komal ko dekhte hi rudra ko komal ko de deti hai. Lo pliao doodh apne rudra ko main.to.chali khana banane. Komal rudra ko katori mein se doodh pilane lagti hai. Wahi jyoti khana banane lag jati hai. 15 mints ke baad jab jitu apne kamre se bahar aata hai to dekhta hai ki komal rudra ko apne god mein lekar khila rahi hoti hai.

Jitu_ komal kya baat hai rudra ke sath khel rahi ho.
Komal_ haan main apne rudra ke sath khel rahi hu. Dekho na kaise dekh rah hai jaise main hi iski maa hu.
Jitu_ hmm pr komal rudra ke sath ghanishth mat ho jana kyu ki tumhein pata hai rudra apna beta hai hai. Wo jyoti ka beta hai.

Wahi jyoti jab is baat ko sunti ha to bahar aa kar lagti hai

Jyoti _ nahi didi ye mera beta nahi aapka beta hai. Bhale maine ise janam diya hai. Pr isko palna aapko hai yashoda bankar.
Komal_ pr kal ko ye bhi bada ho kar apni maa ke pas chala jayega. Jaise krishna bhagwan yashoda ko chhod kar devki ke pas chale gaye the.
Jyoti_ didi sayad aap bhul rahi ho aaj bhi bhagwan Shri krishna ji ko yashoda lalla kaha jata hai na ki devki lalla. Main vachan deti hu rudra ko aapse kabhi bhi alag nahi karungi.

Itna sunte hi komal rudra ko apne pati ke god mein dekr jyoti ke gale lag kar rone lagti hai. Jyoti bade pyar se komal ko chup karne lagti hai.
Jyoti_ aap chup ho jayiye nahi to rudra bhi rone lagega.
Komal_ hmm
Jyoti_ jija ji aap khana kha lijiye maine khana banaa diya hai.

Phir jyoti andar khana nikalne chali jati hai wahi komal rudra ko khilane lagti hai. Jyoti andar se ek plate mein khana nikal kar jitu ko deti hai. Jitu khana khane lagta hai. Wahi jyoti jitu se kahti hai.
Jyoti_ jiju aap mujhe kahi kaam pr lag dijiye taki main apne aur apne bete ki liye kuch kama saku.
Jitu_ dekho jyoti tumhein apne liye kamana hai to kama lo pr mere bete ke liye main hu.
Jyoti_ thik hai jiju.
Jitu_ main dekhta hu kahi tumhare liye kaam
Jyoti _ thik hai jiju.
Jitu_ kaha tak padi likhi ho.
Jyoti_ 8vi tak hi padhi hu.
Jitu_ thik hai. Phir to kaam ho jayega.

Phir jitu apna auto le kar chala jata hai wahi komal aur jyoti miljul kar ghar ka kaam.karti hai pr jyoti wale room ki bhi safai karti hai. Rudra doodh pikar sath hi khel kar thak gya tha. Is liye wo abhi tak so raha tha.

Ise hi din gujarne lagta hai. Ab jyoti bhi ek shop pr sale ka kaam karne lagti hai. Sabhi is chhote se pariwar main khush the, aise hi char saal bite jate hai. Aise hi ek din jyoti market mein.rudra kw liye kuch kapde le rahi hoti hai ki jyoti kisi se takara jati hai jab jyoti upar dekhti hai. To us sakas ko dekh kar dar jati hai sorry kahte hue jyoti market ghar chali jati hai. Wahi wo sakas use market mein dundhne lagta hai pr wo kahi nahi milti hai. Phir wo salad apne adamiyo ke sath apne ghar chala jata ha.

 

[Râjčhàthâ]

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[Xabhi]

Sandar jabarjast superb update bhai

 

[Ayush2017]

Update 13

Ab tak

Ise hi din gujarne lagta hai. Ab jyoti bhi ek shop pr sale ka kaam karne lagti hai. Sabhi is chhote se pariwar main khush the, aise hi char saal bite jate hai. Aise hi ek din jyoti market mein.rudra kw liye kuch kapde le rahi hoti hai ki jyoti kisi se takara jati hai jab jyoti upar dekhti hai. To us sakas ko dekh kar dar jati hai sorry kahte hue jyoti market ghar chali jati hai. Wahi wo sakas use market mein dundhne lagta hai pr wo kahi nahi milti hai. Phir wo apne adamiyo ke sath apne ghar chala jata ha.

Ab aage

Idhar Jyoti ghar pahuch kar apne room ka darawaaj band kar deti hai. Use bahut hi jadaa dar gyi thi. Jyoti us saksha ke bare mein bas soch ne lagti hai. Agar us saksha ne mujhe pahchan liye to mere bete ki liye achha nahi hoga. Jyoti bas us saksha ke khyalo mein khoyi hui thi. Tabhi koi jyoti ke ghar ka darawaaja khatkhata hai. Khat khatane ki awaj sun kar jyoti bahut hi dar jati hai. Jyoti darwaaje ke bas jaati hai.
Jyoti _ kaun hai?
Komal_ didi main hu kamala. Darawaaja kholo.
Jyoti_ ek mint didi jara mein kapde pahn lu.
Komal _ thik hai didi.

Komal gate ke ps hi wait karne lagti hai wahi jyoti jaldi se apne aapko thik karti hai. Phir wo room ka gate khola to hai. Gate ki khulne ki awaj sun kar komal andar chali jati hai. Jahan ek taraf jyoti apne kuch kapde ko rakh almari mein rakh rahi thi. Komal bahut hi dhyan se jyoti ke haaw bhaw ko dekh rahi thi.

Komal_ kya baat hai didi ? Aap kuch parisan lag rahi ho.
Jyoti _ kuch nahi kamala bas thodi se meri tabiyat kharab hai. Sayad is liye.
Komal _ didi aapne medicine li ki nahi.
Jyoti_ haan le li hai. Thode der mein main thik ho jaungi.
Komal_ achha kiya aapne jo medicine le liya nahi to raat bhar parasaan hona pdta.
Jyoti_ didi kya hua rudra ke school ka.
Komal _ didi sab kuch thik rha. School bhi bahut achha hai. Bas kal se apna Rudra school jayega.
Jyoti_ vaise rudra hai kaha.
Komal_ didi wo unke sath khel raha hai.
Jyoti_ achha jada tang to nahi kiya naa aapko.
Komal_ nahi didi. Rudra bahut hi samjh dar hai.
Jyoti_ didi school ke admission mein kitne paise lage. Aur monthly fees kitni hai.
Komal_ didi admission mein 50 hazar aur monthly 2 hazar hai.
Jyoti _ thik hai didi. Achha books aur dress kya karna hai.
Komal_ wo ho gya hai.

Phir jyoti apne almari ko khol kar kapde rakhne lagti hai. Kapde rakhne ke baad us alamari se ek lifafa nikalti hai aur komal ke hath mein rakh deti hai. Jise dekh kar komal puch hi baithti hai.

Komal_ didi ye kya hai.
Jyoti_ didi ye 2 Lakh rupe hai.
Komal_ pr kis liye.
Jyoti_ Rudra ke school ke liye.
Komal_ rote hue didi aaj aapne hame paraya kar diya in paiso ko de kar.
Jyoti_ kaisi baat karti ho didi. Main ne kab aapko paraya kiya.
Komal_ phir ye paise kyo diye.
Jyoti_ didi ye paise apne pas rakhiye taki rudra ko kisi bhi chij ki kami na ho.
Komal_ main uski maa hu ki nahi.
Jyoti_ haan, tum uski maa ho.
Komal _ bas ho gaya. Phir dekho didi rudra ko in paise koi jarurat nahi hai. Ye paise aap apne pas hi rakhiye.
Jyoti_ thik hai main in paiso ko rakh leti hu. Pr kal tum in paiso ko le jana hai. Aur ek bank account k open kar ke use jama kar dena,
Komal _ par account kiske naam se open Karna hai
Jyoti_ Rudra ke naam se.
Komal_ thik hai didi kal jab rudra ko school drop karne ke baad bank chali jaungi.
Jyoti _ thik hai didi. Chalo chalte hai khana banane.

Uske baad jyoti aur komal waha se nikal kar dusare room mein chali jato hai jahan par Rudra Jitu ke sath khel raha hota hai. Jab wo dono waha pahuchati hai yo dekhti hai ki Rudra ek banduk ke sath khel raha hota hai.
Jitu_ aa gayi jyoti. Kaisa raha aaj ka din.
Jyoti_ thik tha bhaiya. Bhaiya aap auto le kar nahi gaye.
Jitu_ ji nahi. Aaj man nahi kiya is liye nahi gaya.
Jyoti_ koi nahi aap rudra ke satha khelo jab tak hum dono khana bana lete hai
Rudra_ mamma aap mele liye kya laai.
Jyoti_ chocolate aur nayae kapde.
Rudra_ mamma mela chocolte kaha hai.
Jyoti_ ye raha mere bete ka chocolate. Ye lo
Rudra_ thanku mamma.

Phir jyoti aur komal khana banane chale jate hai. Wahi rudra chocolate khane lagta hai. Jab ki jitu saufe pr baith kar aram karne lagta hai.

Wahi dusari aur wo sakksh shidhe apne ghar chala jata hai. Ghar pahuch ghar sidhe ek room mein jata hai. Jahan pr ek admi ek jawan ko chaud raha hota hai. Wo ladki hai dhakke ke sath chikh rahi thi. Wahi wo admi puri takkat ke sath dhakke lag raha tha. Room bas siskariyo aur chudai ki awaj hi gunj rahi thi. Us sakksh ke gate ke kholte hue.

Sakksh_ bhaiyaaaa aap yaha maje le raha ho.
Adami_ kyu chilla raha hai Dev kya hua.
Dev thakur_ bhaiya aaj market mein main ne jyoti ko dekh hai.
Dhanraj thakur_ kaun si jyoti, main to kisi bhi jyoti nahi janta
Dev thakur_ wahi jyoti jise aaj se kuch saal pahle aghori ke pas chhoda tha.
Dhanraj thakur_ wo yaha kya karegi. Sayad tumhein dhokha hua hai.
Dev thakur_ kyu naa bhaiya ek bar aghori se mil kar aate hai. Vaise bhi apki shaktiya sahi se kaam nahi kar rahi hai.
Dhanraj thakur_ thik hai kal chalte hai bhi is kutiya ke maje lene de.
Dev thakur_ thik hai bhaiya apke baad main bhi hu.
Dhanraj thakur_ chal thik hai ab bahar ja jara mujhe achhi tarah iski bajane de. Bahut ho kadk maal hai.

Uske baad dev thakur waha se chala jata hai wahi dhanraj thakur us ladki ko 30 minutes tak bahut hi buri tarah chaudta hai apna maal us ladki ki chut ke andar chhod deta hai.

 

[Ayush2017]

Sandar jabarjast superb update bhai

Thank bro

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Update posted bro

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[Xabhi]

Superb bhai

 

[Ayush2017]

Update 14

Ab tak

Uske baad dev thakur waha se chala jata hai wahi dhanraj thakur us ladki ko 30 minutes tak bahut hi buri tarah chaudta hai apna maal us ladki ki chut ke andar chhod deta hai.

Ab aage

Dhanraj thakur us ladki ko chodane ke baad kamre se bahar nikal jata hai. Pr jane se pahle us ladki ko dev ke pas jane ke liye kah deta hai. Wo ladki kisi tarah bistar se khadi hoti hai. Phir kapde pahn kar dev thakur ke pas chali jati hai.

Dev thakur bhi us ladki lo 45 minute tak chodta hai uske baad us ldki ko jane ke liye kahta hai. Sathi kal use phir se aane ke liye kahta hai. Jis par wo ldki haan mein apni gardan utha deti hi.

Agle din Dhanraj thakur apne bhaiyo ke sath aghori ki gufa ki aur nikal jata hai. Jab wo sab waha pahuchat hai to dekhte hai ki gufa ke aspas koi nahi hai.

Dev thakur_ bhaiya ya to koi bhi nahi dikh raha hai.
Dhanraj thakur_ haan dev lagta hai koi gadbad hai.
Dev thakur _ main to kal hi kah raha tha. Jab Main ne jyoti ko market mein dekha tha. Bhaiya chalo andar chal kar dekhte hai.
Dhanraj thakur_ tum thik kah rahe ho dev.

Uske baad dhanraj thakur apne bhaiyo ke sath aghori ke gufa ke taraf chale jate hai. Jab sabhi gufa ke pas pahuchate hai to dekhte hai ki makdi ke jaal puri gufa ke muh ko dhaka hua hai. Jis dekh kar dev apni ek naukar se jaal ko hatane ke liye kahta hai. Aur jaise hi naukar us jaal ko chhuta hai. Wo naukar dur ja kar girta hai. Naukar ke girte hi sabhi bhai hairan ho jate hai. Wo naukar wahi dum tod deta hai.
Dev thakur _ bhai main dekhta hu.
Dhanraj thakur_ dev tum kuch nahi karoge.
Dev thakur_ kyu bhai.
Dhanraj thakur_ kyuki is gufa ke dwura ko mantro se band kiya gya hai. Jo sirf main hi khol sakta hu.
Dev thakur_ parntu bhaiya ise to apki sari shaktiya nasht ho jayegi.
Dhranraj thakur_ mujhe pata hai. Par sayad tumhein ye nahi pata hoga. Dheere dheere meri shaktiya bhi khatm ho rahi hai. Ab tum sab piche hat jaao.

Phir sabhi bhai piche hat jaate hai. Sath hi unke naukar bhi. Wahi Dhanraj thakur apni aankhen band karta hai. Aur apni sari shaktiyon ko apni hatho mein ekagrit karne lagta hai. Jaise jaise uski shaktiya ekagrit hoti hai vaise vaise Dhanraj thakur aspas ka ek ghera banane lagta hai. Dhanraj apni sari shaktiya ekagrit karte hi un shaktiyon ko gufa ke dwura ke taraf kar deta hai. Wo shaktiya ek gole ki rup mein gufa ke dwura ke taraf badhne lagti hai. Jaise hi wo gola gufa ke dwura se takraata hai. Ek jor ka dhamaka hota hai. Prantu shaktiyon ke na rahne par dhanraj kamjor ho jata hai. Jis wajah se dhanraj thoda dur ja girta hai, jab dhamka hota hai.

Jaha dhanraj gira hota hai. Wah aspas dhul hi dhul ho gaya tha dhamake ki wajah se. Jab dhul hati hai to sabhi bhai dekhte hai ki Dhanraj thakur niche gira hua hai. Dev thakur jaldi se bhag kar apne bhai dhanraj thakur ko uthta hai.
Dev thakur_ bhai aap thik to hai na.
Dhanraj thakur _ main thik pr shaktiyon ke naa rahne ki wajah se kamjor ho gaya hu. Mujhe uthao.
Dev thakur_ thik hai bhaiya.

Phir dev thakur apne bhai dhanraj thakur ko khada karta hai. Phir sabhi bhai apne chale jate hai. Sabhi bhai aghori ke puja sthal ke pas pahuhte hai to dekhte hai ki waha pr sirf do murti hai. Ek murti aghori ki aur dusari aghori jiski puja karta tha. Jab thoda dhyan se dekhte hai to Priya bhi ek pijade mein kaid hoti hai. Wahi pas mein.

Dhanraj thakur aghori ke statue ke pas chala jata hai. Baba ye sab kaise ho gaya. Dhanraj rote hue kahta hai. Tabhi aghori ke putale mein se awaj aane lagti hai.

Aghori _ dhanraj rona band karo.
Dhanraj thakur_ baba aap jinda hai.
Aghori_ haan mein abhi jinda hu. Par main ek putlaa ban gaya hu.
Dhanraj thakur _ baba ye kaise hua.
Aghori_ dhanraj ye sab chhodo aur meri baat dhyan se suno.
Dhanraj thakur_ ji baba
Aghori_ dhanraj ye gufa bas kuch pal ke liye hi khula hua hai. To sab se pahle tum meri baat dhyan se suno.
Dhanraj thakur_ thik hai. Baba.
Aghori_ ab tum apne pariwar ke sath ye jagah chhod kar kahi aur chale jaao.
Dhanraj thakur_ par kab tak baba.
Aghori _ pure 25 salo tak tum mein se yaha koi nahi aayega.
Dhanraj thakur_ thik hai baba.
Aghori_ dhanraj samne ek thali mein sindur dikh raha hai.
Dhanraj thakur_ haan baba.
Aghori_ us utha ke mere pas laao.

Phir dhanraj thakur us sindur ke thali ko utha kar aghori ke putale ke pas le aata hai. Dhanraj kahta hai.

Dhanraj thakur_ baba main le aaya.
Aghori_ thik hai dhanraj. Ab tum thali le kar Priya ke pas chale jaao. Aur sindur ko apne hath le kar jaise jaise main kahunga vaise tum kahna.
Dhanraj thakur_ thik hai baba.

Uske baad dhanraj thakur sindur ke thali ke kar priya ke pas chala jata hai. Jaisa aghori ne kaha tha vaisa hi karta hai.

Aghori_ dhanraj ab main jis matra ka uncharan karta hu. Use teen bar bologe sindur ko apne hath mein le kar.
Dhanraj thakur_ thik hai baba
Aghori_ to suno dhyan se. Om Aim Hreem Kleem Chamundaye Viche swahaa. Ab is mantr ko tum ucharan karo.

Phir Dhanraj thakur is mantr ko teen bar uchcharan karta hai uske baad wo sindur jo uski hath mein hota hai. Use priya ki aur faik deta ha. Aur jaise hi sindur us peejade par pdti hai. Pijada gayab ho jata hai.

Phir dhanraj thakur priya ko pakad kar aghori ke pulte ke pas le aata hai. Aur kahta hai.

Dhanraj thakur _ baba ab kya karna hai.
Aghori_ Dhanraj ise apne sath le jaao, par dhyan rahein iske sath sambhog galti se bhi mat kar dena.
Dhanraj thakur _ thik hai.
Aghori_ tum chalo to is ek gulam ki tarah rakh sakte ho. Ab tum apne bhaiyo aur priya ko lekar yaha se nikalo. Ye gufa band hone wala hai.

Phir sabhi waha se nikal jate hai. Ghar pahuch kar Dhanraj thakur Priya ko ek room band karne ke liye kahta hai. Aur apne bhaiyo se Mumbai sift hone ke liye taiyari karne ke liye kahta hai.

Jis par dev thakur apne bhai Dhanraj thakur se kahta hai.
Dev thakur_ Bhaiya yah ka kaam kaun dekhega.
Dhanraj thakur_ dev tum yaha ki chinta mat karo. Yaha ka sab kaam Baldev dekh lenga.
Dev thakur_ ye to thik hai. Par jyoti ka kya karna hai.
Dhanraj thakur _ dev tum sabse pahle us jyoti ko dhundo. Jab mila jaye to use sab kuch pata karna. Waha kya kya hua tha. Jab wo bataa de. To use jaan se mar dena.
Dev thakur _ thik hai.
Dhanraj thakur_ jab tak tum use dhund nahi lete tab tak tum mere pas mat aana,
Dev thakur _ thik hai bhaiya.

Is dauran do bhaiyo ne kuch bhi nahi kaha tha apne bhai dhanraj thakur se. Raat ko sabhi bhai khana kha kar aapne apne kamre mein sone chale jate hai. Wahi dev thakur us kamre ki aur bd jata hai. Jaha par Priya ko rakha gaya tha. Jab dev thakur use kamare ke andar