Thriller The Hypnotizer

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Adharma

Namaste

 

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Idea shi me acha hai
M2f f2m bhi try karna bro

Hmm...abhi time hai story likhne me ....ye nayi wali story thodi slow paced hogi matlab usme Sex scenes to honge par kuchh update ke baad ... mainly focus uska entertainment or enjoyment hoga Naa ki sex ...me ye nahi keh rha sex hoga hi nahi but story ka main motive sex nahi hoga....

Story thodi serious hogi or sahi me excitement se aap sabko behosh kar dunga me ...achha or ek or baat thi mujhe ye poochhna tha ki Asura ko The Hypnotizer me rakhu ke nahi ?
...kuchh readers ko shayd achha nahi lge Asura ka story me hona...mene use sirf comedy purpose ke liye add Kiya tha..

Aap readers btaiye agar aapko asura se problem hai to me use hta dunga

 

[ketan Chauhan]

Mere according hero ko thoda humourous dikha skte ho ap
Thoda sarcastic hero sahi rahega asura ki jagah
Baki readers k opinion mujhse differ kr skti hai

 

[Peace RP]

Hmm...abhi time hai story likhne me ....ye nayi wali story thodi slow paced hogi matlab usme Sex scenes to honge par kuchh update ke baad ... mainly focus uska entertainment or enjoyment hoga Naa ki sex ...me ye nahi keh rha sex hoga hi nahi but story ka main motive sex nahi hoga....

Story thodi serious hogi or sahi me excitement se aap sabko behosh kar dunga me ...achha or ek or baat thi mujhe ye poochhna tha ki Asura ko The Hypnotizer me rakhu ke nahi ?
...kuchh readers ko shayd achha nahi lge Asura ka story me hona...mene use sirf comedy purpose ke liye add Kiya tha..

Aap readers btaiye agar aapko asura se problem hai to me use hta dunga

Nahi mujhe asura se koi problem nahi hai actually uski presence rahni chahiye taaki beech me thoda fiction jaisa lage varna story padhte samay puraa deep chale jaate hai

 

[Peace RP]

Achha samjh gya me...level wale zombies....achha isme type wale zombies bhi add ho sakte hai jese koi Power type zombie..koi speed type zombie...hmm achha transformation matlab yeh tha mene to gender change karne wala samjh liya tha ....ye bhi implement ho sakta hai story me ...thank you for your suggestion (⁠◠⁠‿⁠◕⁠)

Sorry apko disappoint karne ke liye par aaj ke liye sirf do hi update likhe the ... principal office wala update likhne me bohot time lg gya tha isliye ...night me possible to nahi hai par me try karta hu...aap maan ke chalo ki nahi hi aayega ...shayd hi aaye kyuki update ka content or size bhi matter karta hai na ..me try karta hu

Koi baat nahi bro aaram se likho bs regularly updates dete raho

 

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Index

Update 7

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Asura - Peace RP ye tumhare liye writer se zabardasti likhwaya hai

Jesa ki aapne padha ki kese avi Nikita aur nilochana dono ke sath threesome karke ...nilochana ko ant mein 5 minute kiss karke... uske sath romance karke..avi apni class mein aane lagta hai...

Tabhi use raaste mein dance teacher dikhti hai jiska Naam hota hai - Amrita....uff husn ki Bala hai Amrita.. rang safed ..kamar Tak aate Bal ..badi badi gol Aankhen... halki si gol matol kad Kathi.. aur 5 foot 5 inch ki height.. Lal rasile honth ...aur khas karke uski patni kamar Uff ! Kya hi kaha jaye ...

Asura - patali kamariya tohri aaye Haye Achha vese vo hoti hai na arabian dancers ..ek dum Aladdin ki yamine jesi (or reference ke liye Google par search kar le)..uske jesi hai Amrita....

Avi ko sex kare hue sirf abhi 10 minute hi hue The.. par amrita Ko dekh kar uski hawas fir se badhne lagti hai ...vo apne L ki taraf hath ferta hai or use sehlata hai ...aur Fir vo Amrita ke pichhe jaane lagta hai... Amrita apni dance class mein ja rahi Hoti hai... chupke se Avi uske piche piche jata hai... bina awaaz Kare...class mein Jaise hi Amrita dakhil hoti hai... avi jaldi se class me aata hai or jaldi se gate band kar deta Hai dance class ka..

Avi Apne man mein hi anguthi se kehta hai ki Amrita ko meri gulam banaa do ....Aaj se main uska Maalik hun ...main uske sath jo bhi Karun vo mujhe karne degi ...aur mujhse hamesha pyar karegi ..

Itna keh kar hi Avi Amrita ko uski taraf mudne ke liye kehta hai ...Amrita ki aankhon mein avi ke liye bohot pyaar nazar aata hai ...Avi use kiss karne lagta hai ....

Amrita bhi uska sath dene lagti hai Fir avi dheere dheere uske kapde utaarta hai ...Amrita bhi avi ke kapde utarane lagti hai...

Avi fir dance class mein ek kursi dhundhta hai ...aur use par jakar baith jata hai ...gate to Avi pehle hi lock kar chuka tha ...Fir vo Amrita se kehta hai dance karne ke liye.... Amrita matak matak kar uske liye dance karne lgti hai...avi bhi uski matakti kamar ke saath apna L uski ga*nd par maarta rehta hai matak matak kar...

Asura - harami saaleya ek dum hi tharak Chad gyi hai is baklol ko ...agar 5 min or dance chla na to ye amrita "mujh ko rana ji maaf karna ..galti mhaare se ho gyi" ka dance karegi or ye tharki maaf to door ki baat hai maaf ka m bhi nahi karega ...ulta or tezi se ise ch*ne lgega...are writer sahab aage to likho

Nahi nahi tum pehle karlo ye sab ...vese bhi tumhe story se hatane ki baat chal hi rhi hai ...

Asura - Kya ! Keh do ye jhooth hai..sabne kahani par mara m**th hai ...achha readers maaf karna mujhe me to halka sa chhota sa character hu bas aapke entertainment ke liye...I'm sorry ...chaliye Kahani suniye

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Avi or amrita dheere dheere dance karte hai..aur vo dono aapas mein milne lgte Hain... ek dusre ko gale lagate Hain... avi uske gal par chumta hai ..aur Amrita uske Mathe par chumti hai..Fir avi apni jeeb nikaal kar amrita ki gardan se lekar niche uski nabhi per chumta or chaat ta hai.. Fir avi use apne L choosne ke diye kehta hai....

Amrita avi ka L choosne lgti hai...2 min choosne ke baad avi use rokta hai or ghodi banne ke liye kehta hai...Amrita ko fir vo ghodi bana ke pelta hai...

10 min ki ch*dai ki baad to Amrita ko peeth ke bal zameen par lita deta hai ...or uske pet ki upar hi ejaculate kar deta hai..

Avi ka garam garam cum Amrita ke upar hota hai ...avi use vo kha jaane ke liye kehta hai...Amrita apni ungli se avi ke cum ki ek ek boond chaat chaat kar pi jaati hai or ek vesh hi (ran*di wali)smile deti hai...

Avi use kapde pehnne ke liye kehta hai or fir khud bhi kapde pehn leta hai...

Avi Fir Amrita se kehta hai ki jab hum akele me ho tab main tumhara master hun aur tum meri slave ....Par class se bahar ya hamare saath koi or insaan ho tab hum ek teacher aur student hai...

sab normal rahega hmaare liye ..Amrita haa me sir hila deti hai... uske bad Avi dance class chhodkar apni class mein jaane ke liye nikalne lagta hai....

Avi ab apni class mein pahunch jata hai vahan use apni bench par Bittu betha dikhai deta hai ...darasal Bittu aur avi dono hi jigari dost the(esa sirf Bittu Manta tha) ...Bittu avi ko apna best friend Manta tha... vo bhi avi ki tarah ek ajooba hi tha... yahan avi haklata tha to Bittu vahan totlata tha
.. jaise hi usne abhi Ko dekha usne abhi se kaha...

Bittu - ale Bhai tum aa dye..! Kaha gye the tum ?..me tab se tumhala intedaar kal lha hu ...

Avi - are kuchh nahi Bittu..vo principal mam ne thoda apna bhashan dene ke liye rok liya tha...

Bittu - ale Bhai uski maiyya ka saiyaan malu ...thaali budhhi laand hai laand...thol us landi to...ol bta tesa hai?..

Avi - badhiya hu...

Fir bittu or avi yha vha ki baate karne lg jaate hai...

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Asura - aaj ke liye bas itna hi baaki fir kabhi or..are ha me ek achha bachha hu... to writer ko mujhe story se nikaalne se bachalo readers !! .....hum bros hai BROS...haina ?bachalo Bhaiyo meri Naiya doob jayegi warna



Asura -

Kahani yha tak padhne ke liye dhanyavad...

Namaste

 

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Mere according hero ko thoda humourous dikha skte ho ap
Thoda sarcastic hero sahi rahega asura ki jagah
Baki readers k opinion mujhse differ kr skti hai

Asura - avi or sarcastic

Ho sakta hai vo... sarcastic

Asura - --

Thank you for your suggestion

Asura - ketan bro

 

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Koi baat nahi bro aaram se likho bs regularly updates dete raho

Aagya update..halka sa chhota hai ..jo ki kal bhi isi size ka rehta ..kyuki kuchh khaas tha nahi isme.. par bittu ki entry important thi (⁠◠⁠‿⁠◕⁠)

 

[ketan Chauhan]

Asura - avi or sarcastic

Ho sakta hai vo... sarcastic

Asura - --

Thank you for your suggestion

Asura - ketan bro

Arey yr asura ab bss ro mat Dena ladkiyo ki tarah
Rho yrr story me hume koi problem nahi

 

[ketan Chauhan]

Nice update

 

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Arey yr asura ab bss ro mat Dena ladkiyo ki tarah
Rho yrr story me hume koi problem nahi

Asura - je baat ketan bro Yo bro Yo !mujhe lga tha ye ajoobe bittu ki vajah se comedy ho rhi hai to mera to role hi nahi rha ... Bacha liya aapne warna eee sasura writerwa to hmkaa update 8 me se nikal hi Diya tha...hmra saara dialogue hta diye the inhone

Fir chaalu