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Fantasy The great warrior

ANUJ KUMAR

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Update. 11.2
Location............ Magic school

Me chalte chalte fight ground me phuch gya wha bhut
student the pr sb ke sb mughse badi class
me the kuch log apas me ladh rhe the mene dekha ki Priya mam
kisi ladki ko kuch bta rhi thi tbhi kisi
ki najar mugh pr pr gyi

S . Student......
bcche tum yha kya kr rhe ho jao nhi to khi chot na lag jaye
kuch bcche uski baat sunkar hasne lge

Ab mughe gussa to bhut aya but me kuch kr nhai skta
tha

Me.....
Apko dekhne ka bada mn kr rha tha to chla aya mene suna tha ki
app bhut sktisali hi app ka Chitra bhi Top 100 students
of tha school me hi

but app ko dekhne se to esa khi se bhi nhai lagta
meri bat sun kr wo bhut gusse me a gya

S. Student ......
Tum jante nhi mughe meri rank school great fighter list
me 987 number pr hi
yha meri bhut ejjat hi aur tum mughe apmanit
kr rhe ho

Me.....
kya hahahaha hahha is school me 987 rank pr hoke apko itna
abhiman hi bol ese rhe ho jese ki 1 rank pr ho
Abi mera standard itna gira hua b nhi hi ki me tum jeso
se tamiz se bat karta phiru

ab isse phle ki tum kuch aur bekar bate bolo mughe
ye btao ki yha 1 rank pr kon hi

Meri baat sun kr wo aur uske sathi to bhut gussa hue
but jb mene 1 st rank wale ke bare me pucha
to sb ke sb gane lage ( ab mughe nhi pta kyo dant dikha rhe the
)

USke pass kadhe uske kuch friends bi the

friend 1 ......
Dekho ye bccha Godess Tha great Princess of Surya nagar student of Guru Vera
ke bare me puch rha hi bcche wo kisi se bat vi nhi karti hi

MEne socha ki ab lagta hi koi takkar ka mila hi chlo dekhte hi

Me.....
Beta jamana kharab hi to bcche apne bap ko beta bolne lgte
hi ye mene suna tha but ajj dekh bhi lia
Lekin beta tum ye bhi gye ki Bap Bap hota hi beta beta
hota hi aur apni maa ki ijjat karte ho bap ki

nhi duniya kya khegi kuch dyan deker bat kia kro
Thik hi beta ab me chlta hu tumhari maa ke pas

good bye

pr jb me piche ki trafh guma to phli bar ajj meri phat ke char hui
thi ( App log imagine kro kya huwa hoga night tk
kr lia to thik nhi to night wale update me dekh lena tb tk
liye bye )

Aur ha ek baat aur btayega ki ye wali writing skill kisi hi

. Ok friends bye






Nice update
 

Vickey1211

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Update ............ 20 ( Pichle update me app ne dekha ki Raj 4 ne Badshah e jin ko hrake jinlok ka Raja bn gya ab age -)

Raj -4 ......... Ab mujhe le chalo apne jin lok

Badshah jin ...... Jo agya malik aur uske bad jinno ke raja ne Raj 4 ko jin lok leker gya

jin lok dikhne me bhut khubsurat tha charo taraf khushiya hi khushiya thi
jin lok me kabhi Rat nhi hoti thi

Raj 4 .... Ye btao ki hmare aas pas kitne Rajya hi

jinno ka Raja ....... Malik hmare aaspas
Pari lok aur Pret lok hi pari lok to hmara Mitra hi lakin pret lok bhut hi
Bura aur dust hi wha ka Raja Pret Raj wo bhut hi

Nirdai aur papi hi Pret Raj ne pari lok pr hmla kr dia hi wha ki Rajkumari Pari ko pane ki liye kyoki jo Princess pari se shadi krega use ek esa bhala milega jisse bade se bada Planet bhi asani se nast kia ja sakta hi

Isliye Pret Raj ne pari lok pr Akraman kr dia hi pari lok ki mharani Rani pari ne hmare pas sahayta ke liye patra beja tha

Raj 4 ...... Chutiya fir kya mera muh dekh rha hi jaldi se sena tayar kro hm parilok ki sayta karne chalege

Jao turant

Jinno ka Raja ...... Ji abi jata hu aur sena ko tayar hone ka adesh deta hu

uske bad jinno ka Raja chla jata hi

location pari lok ..........

Rani pari apne seniko ke samne khadi thi aur sath me pari lok ke senapati aur Raj Kumari pari bhi thi

Rajkumari Pari ........... Ye
bhut Yi payari hi aur khatrnak nbhi ye duniya ki sabse saktisali pari hi inke pas ek esi sword hi jiska war kabhi khali nhi jata
ye hi hmari story ki 5 heroine

back to story ......

Rani pari ....... Mere pari lok ke bhadur seniko ajj wo samay a gya jb hme apne dushmano ko dhul chatani hogi

Ajj hm Bta denge ki pari lok ki sena bhi koi kam nhi hi ajj hm kisi bhi pret ko jinada nhi chodenge sb ko khatm krdenge

Aur uske bad sere seniko me utsah br gya aur sb chl diye
Pret Raj ke seniko se ladne

Location youdhbumi ........

Pari lok aur Pret lok ki sena aamne samne khadi thi koi piche hatne ko tayar nhi tha parilok ka netritwa Rani pari Rajguru aur senapati aur Rajkumari Pari kr rhi thi

preto ki sena pari lok se 5 guna jada thi

Pret Raj ...... Rani pari ab bhi samay hu man jao apni putri ka bibha hm se kr do tum hm se kabhi jit nhi paogi

Rani pari ........ Dust Pret Raj ajj tumhara any nishit hi chaye ajj hm mr kyo na jaye
tumhe ajj koi bhi nhi baca payega wo tumara malik setan bhi nhi

pret Raj ( gusse se ) bs Rani pari bhut ho gya ab aur nhi rum ne ajj mere malik hell ke king Lucifier ka apman kia hi seniko Akraman

Jin lok ki sena bhi wha puch jati hi aur fiza me ek drawni awaj gunjati hi

Raj 4 ........ Ruk jao Pret Raj nhi to tumhare tukde bhi Lucifier nko nhi milege

jb Pret Raj aur sb us aur dikhte hi to jin lok ki bishal sena a rhi hoti hi aur uske age ek ati sundar balak hota hi jiske mukh pr surya jesa prakash tha aur sath me jine e Badshah hote hi

ue dekh Pret Raj toda darta hi

Rani pari ............ Hme pata rha app hmari madad jarur krenge jin king

jin king....... Jin king hm apke khne pr nhi apitu hmare Samrath ke khne pr aye hi apki madad karne

j king ki baat sun wha sb chok jate hi ki kisi ne j king ko hra dia ye koi mamuli baat to thi nhi


Raj 4 ......... Pret Raj tumhare liye acha yhi ki hoga ki tum Rani pari se Mafhi mango aur yha se dafha ho jao nhi to tum wapas jinda nhi jaoge backe

pret Raj ........ Hahahaha ab jin king itna kamjor ho gya hi ki ek bache ki aad le kr aya hi hahaha kitne saram ki baat hi

jis jinn se pura sansar darta tha wo ek dudh pite bacche ko hmse ladne ke liye laya hi jao j king tum chudiya pahn lo aur ghar me betho

PRet Raj ki baat sun kr j king

j king ...... Hahaha hahaa pret Raj lagta hintum pagal ho gye ho jo bheki hui bate kr rhe ho jise tum bacha samajh rhe ho wo tumhara baap hi hmara samrath hi wo

je king ki baat sun kr kisi ko yakin nhi honrha tha ki kisi bache ne j king ko hara dia

lekin hmare Raj 4 bhai sahab pret Raj ki baat sun ke bhut gussa ho gye

Raj 4 ......... Tum jese do take ke pret ki itni aukat ab tum mughe ankhe dikhawoge aur uske bad hmare Raj 4 ne gusse me Apni 90 % energy lga di pura yudhbhumi thar - thar kapne lagi

AUr Raj 4 ne apni energy ko preto ki sena pr dekha isse itna bhayankar bospot hua hi pura pari lok aur Pret lok hil gya jb dhua hta to pret Raj ki seri sena ki pase tukdo me kati phati hui pure yudhbhumi me bikhri

hui thi ye dekh kr to jitne hi log yudhbhumi me the sb thar - 2 kapne lage pret Raj to niche gir gye unka jism to kap rha tha Rani pari sena pati rajguru aur Rajkumari Pari sath me jin king aur puri sena to de ke mare kap rahi thi

RAj 4 ........ Ek baar meri sun lo aur samaj lo ajj hm tumahari Jan bikh me de de rhe hi dubara ager mere samne agye to jinda nhi jaoge

apne malik us kutte Lucifier se kh dena us ka bapp a gya hi

pret Raj ( kapte hue )) ji ji me kh dunga.
aur uske baad wo wha se bhag gya

Me ......... J king hme ab yha se le chalo
Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya
 

Lucky..

“ɪ ᴋɴᴏᴡ ᴡʜᴏ ɪ ᴀᴍ, ᴀɴᴅ ɪ ᴀᴍ ᴅᴀᴍɴ ᴘʀᴏᴜᴅ ᴏꜰ ɪᴛ.”
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Update ............ 20 ( Pichle update me app ne dekha ki Raj 4 ne Badshah e jin ko hrake jinlok ka Raja bn gya ab age -)

Raj -4 ......... Ab mujhe le chalo apne jin lok

Badshah jin ...... Jo agya malik aur uske bad jinno ke raja ne Raj 4 ko jin lok leker gya

jin lok dikhne me bhut khubsurat tha charo taraf khushiya hi khushiya thi
jin lok me kabhi Rat nhi hoti thi

Raj 4 .... Ye btao ki hmare aas pas kitne Rajya hi

jinno ka Raja ....... Malik hmare aaspas
Pari lok aur Pret lok hi pari lok to hmara Mitra hi lakin pret lok bhut hi
Bura aur dust hi wha ka Raja Pret Raj wo bhut hi

Nirdai aur papi hi Pret Raj ne pari lok pr hmla kr dia hi wha ki Rajkumari Pari ko pane ki liye kyoki jo Princess pari se shadi krega use ek esa bhala milega jisse bade se bada Planet bhi asani se nast kia ja sakta hi

Isliye Pret Raj ne pari lok pr Akraman kr dia hi pari lok ki mharani Rani pari ne hmare pas sahayta ke liye patra beja tha

Raj 4 ...... Chutiya fir kya mera muh dekh rha hi jaldi se sena tayar kro hm parilok ki sayta karne chalege

Jao turant

Jinno ka Raja ...... Ji abi jata hu aur sena ko tayar hone ka adesh deta hu

uske bad jinno ka Raja chla jata hi

location pari lok ..........

Rani pari apne seniko ke samne khadi thi aur sath me pari lok ke senapati aur Raj Kumari pari bhi thi

Rajkumari Pari ........... Ye
bhut Yi payari hi aur khatrnak nbhi ye duniya ki sabse saktisali pari hi inke pas ek esi sword hi jiska war kabhi khali nhi jata
ye hi hmari story ki 5 heroine

back to story ......

Rani pari ....... Mere pari lok ke bhadur seniko ajj wo samay a gya jb hme apne dushmano ko dhul chatani hogi

Ajj hm Bta denge ki pari lok ki sena bhi koi kam nhi hi ajj hm kisi bhi pret ko jinada nhi chodenge sb ko khatm krdenge

Aur uske bad sere seniko me utsah br gya aur sb chl diye
Pret Raj ke seniko se ladne

Location youdhbumi ........

Pari lok aur Pret lok ki sena aamne samne khadi thi koi piche hatne ko tayar nhi tha parilok ka netritwa Rani pari Rajguru aur senapati aur Rajkumari Pari kr rhi thi

preto ki sena pari lok se 5 guna jada thi

Pret Raj ...... Rani pari ab bhi samay hu man jao apni putri ka bibha hm se kr do tum hm se kabhi jit nhi paogi

Rani pari ........ Dust Pret Raj ajj tumhara any nishit hi chaye ajj hm mr kyo na jaye
tumhe ajj koi bhi nhi baca payega wo tumara malik setan bhi nhi

pret Raj ( gusse se ) bs Rani pari bhut ho gya ab aur nhi rum ne ajj mere malik hell ke king Lucifier ka apman kia hi seniko Akraman

Jin lok ki sena bhi wha puch jati hi aur fiza me ek drawni awaj gunjati hi

Raj 4 ........ Ruk jao Pret Raj nhi to tumhare tukde bhi Lucifier nko nhi milege

jb Pret Raj aur sb us aur dikhte hi to jin lok ki bishal sena a rhi hoti hi aur uske age ek ati sundar balak hota hi jiske mukh pr surya jesa prakash tha aur sath me jine e Badshah hote hi

ue dekh Pret Raj toda darta hi

Rani pari ............ Hme pata rha app hmari madad jarur krenge jin king

jin king....... Jin king hm apke khne pr nhi apitu hmare Samrath ke khne pr aye hi apki madad karne

j king ki baat sun wha sb chok jate hi ki kisi ne j king ko hra dia ye koi mamuli baat to thi nhi


Raj 4 ......... Pret Raj tumhare liye acha yhi ki hoga ki tum Rani pari se Mafhi mango aur yha se dafha ho jao nhi to tum wapas jinda nhi jaoge backe

pret Raj ........ Hahahaha ab jin king itna kamjor ho gya hi ki ek bache ki aad le kr aya hi hahaha kitne saram ki baat hi

jis jinn se pura sansar darta tha wo ek dudh pite bacche ko hmse ladne ke liye laya hi jao j king tum chudiya pahn lo aur ghar me betho

PRet Raj ki baat sun kr j king

j king ...... Hahaha hahaa pret Raj lagta hintum pagal ho gye ho jo bheki hui bate kr rhe ho jise tum bacha samajh rhe ho wo tumhara baap hi hmara samrath hi wo

je king ki baat sun kr kisi ko yakin nhi honrha tha ki kisi bache ne j king ko hara dia

lekin hmare Raj 4 bhai sahab pret Raj ki baat sun ke bhut gussa ho gye

Raj 4 ......... Tum jese do take ke pret ki itni aukat ab tum mughe ankhe dikhawoge aur uske bad hmare Raj 4 ne gusse me Apni 90 % energy lga di pura yudhbhumi thar - thar kapne lagi

AUr Raj 4 ne apni energy ko preto ki sena pr dekha isse itna bhayankar bospot hua hi pura pari lok aur Pret lok hil gya jb dhua hta to pret Raj ki seri sena ki pase tukdo me kati phati hui pure yudhbhumi me bikhri

hui thi ye dekh kr to jitne hi log yudhbhumi me the sb thar - 2 kapne lage pret Raj to niche gir gye unka jism to kap rha tha Rani pari sena pati rajguru aur Rajkumari Pari sath me jin king aur puri sena to de ke mare kap rahi thi

RAj 4 ........ Ek baar meri sun lo aur samaj lo ajj hm tumahari Jan bikh me de de rhe hi dubara ager mere samne agye to jinda nhi jaoge

apne malik us kutte Lucifier se kh dena us ka bapp a gya hi

pret Raj ( kapte hue )) ji ji me kh dunga.
aur uske baad wo wha se bhag gya

Me ......... J king hme ab yha se le chalo
Laajawab update Bhai

New update ki pratiksa
 

Luffy

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Update ............ 20 ( Pichle update me app ne dekha ki Raj 4 ne Badshah e jin ko hrake jinlok ka Raja bn gya ab age -)

Raj -4 ......... Ab mujhe le chalo apne jin lok

Badshah jin ...... Jo agya malik aur uske bad jinno ke raja ne Raj 4 ko jin lok leker gya

jin lok dikhne me bhut khubsurat tha charo taraf khushiya hi khushiya thi
jin lok me kabhi Rat nhi hoti thi

Raj 4 .... Ye btao ki hmare aas pas kitne Rajya hi

jinno ka Raja ....... Malik hmare aaspas
Pari lok aur Pret lok hi pari lok to hmara Mitra hi lakin pret lok bhut hi
Bura aur dust hi wha ka Raja Pret Raj wo bhut hi

Nirdai aur papi hi Pret Raj ne pari lok pr hmla kr dia hi wha ki Rajkumari Pari ko pane ki liye kyoki jo Princess pari se shadi krega use ek esa bhala milega jisse bade se bada Planet bhi asani se nast kia ja sakta hi

Isliye Pret Raj ne pari lok pr Akraman kr dia hi pari lok ki mharani Rani pari ne hmare pas sahayta ke liye patra beja tha

Raj 4 ...... Chutiya fir kya mera muh dekh rha hi jaldi se sena tayar kro hm parilok ki sayta karne chalege

Jao turant

Jinno ka Raja ...... Ji abi jata hu aur sena ko tayar hone ka adesh deta hu

uske bad jinno ka Raja chla jata hi

location pari lok ..........

Rani pari apne seniko ke samne khadi thi aur sath me pari lok ke senapati aur Raj Kumari pari bhi thi

Rajkumari Pari ........... Ye
bhut Yi payari hi aur khatrnak nbhi ye duniya ki sabse saktisali pari hi inke pas ek esi sword hi jiska war kabhi khali nhi jata
ye hi hmari story ki 5 heroine

back to story ......

Rani pari ....... Mere pari lok ke bhadur seniko ajj wo samay a gya jb hme apne dushmano ko dhul chatani hogi

Ajj hm Bta denge ki pari lok ki sena bhi koi kam nhi hi ajj hm kisi bhi pret ko jinada nhi chodenge sb ko khatm krdenge

Aur uske bad sere seniko me utsah br gya aur sb chl diye
Pret Raj ke seniko se ladne

Location youdhbumi ........

Pari lok aur Pret lok ki sena aamne samne khadi thi koi piche hatne ko tayar nhi tha parilok ka netritwa Rani pari Rajguru aur senapati aur Rajkumari Pari kr rhi thi

preto ki sena pari lok se 5 guna jada thi

Pret Raj ...... Rani pari ab bhi samay hu man jao apni putri ka bibha hm se kr do tum hm se kabhi jit nhi paogi

Rani pari ........ Dust Pret Raj ajj tumhara any nishit hi chaye ajj hm mr kyo na jaye
tumhe ajj koi bhi nhi baca payega wo tumara malik setan bhi nhi

pret Raj ( gusse se ) bs Rani pari bhut ho gya ab aur nhi rum ne ajj mere malik hell ke king Lucifier ka apman kia hi seniko Akraman

Jin lok ki sena bhi wha puch jati hi aur fiza me ek drawni awaj gunjati hi

Raj 4 ........ Ruk jao Pret Raj nhi to tumhare tukde bhi Lucifier nko nhi milege

jb Pret Raj aur sb us aur dikhte hi to jin lok ki bishal sena a rhi hoti hi aur uske age ek ati sundar balak hota hi jiske mukh pr surya jesa prakash tha aur sath me jine e Badshah hote hi

ue dekh Pret Raj toda darta hi

Rani pari ............ Hme pata rha app hmari madad jarur krenge jin king

jin king....... Jin king hm apke khne pr nhi apitu hmare Samrath ke khne pr aye hi apki madad karne

j king ki baat sun wha sb chok jate hi ki kisi ne j king ko hra dia ye koi mamuli baat to thi nhi


Raj 4 ......... Pret Raj tumhare liye acha yhi ki hoga ki tum Rani pari se Mafhi mango aur yha se dafha ho jao nhi to tum wapas jinda nhi jaoge backe

pret Raj ........ Hahahaha ab jin king itna kamjor ho gya hi ki ek bache ki aad le kr aya hi hahaha kitne saram ki baat hi

jis jinn se pura sansar darta tha wo ek dudh pite bacche ko hmse ladne ke liye laya hi jao j king tum chudiya pahn lo aur ghar me betho

PRet Raj ki baat sun kr j king

j king ...... Hahaha hahaa pret Raj lagta hintum pagal ho gye ho jo bheki hui bate kr rhe ho jise tum bacha samajh rhe ho wo tumhara baap hi hmara samrath hi wo

je king ki baat sun kr kisi ko yakin nhi honrha tha ki kisi bache ne j king ko hara dia

lekin hmare Raj 4 bhai sahab pret Raj ki baat sun ke bhut gussa ho gye

Raj 4 ......... Tum jese do take ke pret ki itni aukat ab tum mughe ankhe dikhawoge aur uske bad hmare Raj 4 ne gusse me Apni 90 % energy lga di pura yudhbhumi thar - thar kapne lagi

AUr Raj 4 ne apni energy ko preto ki sena pr dekha isse itna bhayankar bospot hua hi pura pari lok aur Pret lok hil gya jb dhua hta to pret Raj ki seri sena ki pase tukdo me kati phati hui pure yudhbhumi me bikhri

hui thi ye dekh kr to jitne hi log yudhbhumi me the sb thar - 2 kapne lage pret Raj to niche gir gye unka jism to kap rha tha Rani pari sena pati rajguru aur Rajkumari Pari sath me jin king aur puri sena to de ke mare kap rahi thi

RAj 4 ........ Ek baar meri sun lo aur samaj lo ajj hm tumahari Jan bikh me de de rhe hi dubara ager mere samne agye to jinda nhi jaoge

apne malik us kutte Lucifier se kh dena us ka bapp a gya hi

pret Raj ( kapte hue )) ji ji me kh dunga.
aur uske baad wo wha se bhag gya

Me ......... J king hme ab yha se le chalo
Awesome update
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

Well-Known Member
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218
Update ............ 20 ( Pichle update me app ne dekha ki Raj 4 ne Badshah e jin ko hrake jinlok ka Raja bn gya ab age -)

Raj -4 ......... Ab mujhe le chalo apne jin lok

Badshah jin ...... Jo agya malik aur uske bad jinno ke raja ne Raj 4 ko jin lok leker gya

jin lok dikhne me bhut khubsurat tha charo taraf khushiya hi khushiya thi
jin lok me kabhi Rat nhi hoti thi

Raj 4 .... Ye btao ki hmare aas pas kitne Rajya hi

jinno ka Raja ....... Malik hmare aaspas
Pari lok aur Pret lok hi pari lok to hmara Mitra hi lakin pret lok bhut hi
Bura aur dust hi wha ka Raja Pret Raj wo bhut hi

Nirdai aur papi hi Pret Raj ne pari lok pr hmla kr dia hi wha ki Rajkumari Pari ko pane ki liye kyoki jo Princess pari se shadi krega use ek esa bhala milega jisse bade se bada Planet bhi asani se nast kia ja sakta hi

Isliye Pret Raj ne pari lok pr Akraman kr dia hi pari lok ki mharani Rani pari ne hmare pas sahayta ke liye patra beja tha

Raj 4 ...... Chutiya fir kya mera muh dekh rha hi jaldi se sena tayar kro hm parilok ki sayta karne chalege

Jao turant

Jinno ka Raja ...... Ji abi jata hu aur sena ko tayar hone ka adesh deta hu

uske bad jinno ka Raja chla jata hi

location pari lok ..........

Rani pari apne seniko ke samne khadi thi aur sath me pari lok ke senapati aur Raj Kumari pari bhi thi

Rajkumari Pari ........... Ye
bhut Yi payari hi aur khatrnak nbhi ye duniya ki sabse saktisali pari hi inke pas ek esi sword hi jiska war kabhi khali nhi jata
ye hi hmari story ki 5 heroine

back to story ......

Rani pari ....... Mere pari lok ke bhadur seniko ajj wo samay a gya jb hme apne dushmano ko dhul chatani hogi

Ajj hm Bta denge ki pari lok ki sena bhi koi kam nhi hi ajj hm kisi bhi pret ko jinada nhi chodenge sb ko khatm krdenge

Aur uske bad sere seniko me utsah br gya aur sb chl diye
Pret Raj ke seniko se ladne

Location youdhbumi ........

Pari lok aur Pret lok ki sena aamne samne khadi thi koi piche hatne ko tayar nhi tha parilok ka netritwa Rani pari Rajguru aur senapati aur Rajkumari Pari kr rhi thi

preto ki sena pari lok se 5 guna jada thi

Pret Raj ...... Rani pari ab bhi samay hu man jao apni putri ka bibha hm se kr do tum hm se kabhi jit nhi paogi

Rani pari ........ Dust Pret Raj ajj tumhara any nishit hi chaye ajj hm mr kyo na jaye
tumhe ajj koi bhi nhi baca payega wo tumara malik setan bhi nhi

pret Raj ( gusse se ) bs Rani pari bhut ho gya ab aur nhi rum ne ajj mere malik hell ke king Lucifier ka apman kia hi seniko Akraman

Jin lok ki sena bhi wha puch jati hi aur fiza me ek drawni awaj gunjati hi

Raj 4 ........ Ruk jao Pret Raj nhi to tumhare tukde bhi Lucifier nko nhi milege

jb Pret Raj aur sb us aur dikhte hi to jin lok ki bishal sena a rhi hoti hi aur uske age ek ati sundar balak hota hi jiske mukh pr surya jesa prakash tha aur sath me jine e Badshah hote hi

ue dekh Pret Raj toda darta hi

Rani pari ............ Hme pata rha app hmari madad jarur krenge jin king

jin king....... Jin king hm apke khne pr nhi apitu hmare Samrath ke khne pr aye hi apki madad karne

j king ki baat sun wha sb chok jate hi ki kisi ne j king ko hra dia ye koi mamuli baat to thi nhi


Raj 4 ......... Pret Raj tumhare liye acha yhi ki hoga ki tum Rani pari se Mafhi mango aur yha se dafha ho jao nhi to tum wapas jinda nhi jaoge backe

pret Raj ........ Hahahaha ab jin king itna kamjor ho gya hi ki ek bache ki aad le kr aya hi hahaha kitne saram ki baat hi

jis jinn se pura sansar darta tha wo ek dudh pite bacche ko hmse ladne ke liye laya hi jao j king tum chudiya pahn lo aur ghar me betho

PRet Raj ki baat sun kr j king

j king ...... Hahaha hahaa pret Raj lagta hintum pagal ho gye ho jo bheki hui bate kr rhe ho jise tum bacha samajh rhe ho wo tumhara baap hi hmara samrath hi wo

je king ki baat sun kr kisi ko yakin nhi honrha tha ki kisi bache ne j king ko hara dia

lekin hmare Raj 4 bhai sahab pret Raj ki baat sun ke bhut gussa ho gye

Raj 4 ......... Tum jese do take ke pret ki itni aukat ab tum mughe ankhe dikhawoge aur uske bad hmare Raj 4 ne gusse me Apni 90 % energy lga di pura yudhbhumi thar - thar kapne lagi

AUr Raj 4 ne apni energy ko preto ki sena pr dekha isse itna bhayankar bospot hua hi pura pari lok aur Pret lok hil gya jb dhua hta to pret Raj ki seri sena ki pase tukdo me kati phati hui pure yudhbhumi me bikhri

hui thi ye dekh kr to jitne hi log yudhbhumi me the sb thar - 2 kapne lage pret Raj to niche gir gye unka jism to kap rha tha Rani pari sena pati rajguru aur Rajkumari Pari sath me jin king aur puri sena to de ke mare kap rahi thi

RAj 4 ........ Ek baar meri sun lo aur samaj lo ajj hm tumahari Jan bikh me de de rhe hi dubara ager mere samne agye to jinda nhi jaoge

apne malik us kutte Lucifier se kh dena us ka bapp a gya hi

pret Raj ( kapte hue )) ji ji me kh dunga.
aur uske baad wo wha se bhag gya

Me ......... J king hme ab yha se le chalo
Awesome update
 

Jaguaar

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Update ............ 20 ( Pichle update me app ne dekha ki Raj 4 ne Badshah e jin ko hrake jinlok ka Raja bn gya ab age -)

Raj -4 ......... Ab mujhe le chalo apne jin lok

Badshah jin ...... Jo agya malik aur uske bad jinno ke raja ne Raj 4 ko jin lok leker gya

jin lok dikhne me bhut khubsurat tha charo taraf khushiya hi khushiya thi
jin lok me kabhi Rat nhi hoti thi

Raj 4 .... Ye btao ki hmare aas pas kitne Rajya hi

jinno ka Raja ....... Malik hmare aaspas
Pari lok aur Pret lok hi pari lok to hmara Mitra hi lakin pret lok bhut hi
Bura aur dust hi wha ka Raja Pret Raj wo bhut hi

Nirdai aur papi hi Pret Raj ne pari lok pr hmla kr dia hi wha ki Rajkumari Pari ko pane ki liye kyoki jo Princess pari se shadi krega use ek esa bhala milega jisse bade se bada Planet bhi asani se nast kia ja sakta hi

Isliye Pret Raj ne pari lok pr Akraman kr dia hi pari lok ki mharani Rani pari ne hmare pas sahayta ke liye patra beja tha

Raj 4 ...... Chutiya fir kya mera muh dekh rha hi jaldi se sena tayar kro hm parilok ki sayta karne chalege

Jao turant

Jinno ka Raja ...... Ji abi jata hu aur sena ko tayar hone ka adesh deta hu

uske bad jinno ka Raja chla jata hi

location pari lok ..........

Rani pari apne seniko ke samne khadi thi aur sath me pari lok ke senapati aur Raj Kumari pari bhi thi

Rajkumari Pari ........... Ye
bhut Yi payari hi aur khatrnak nbhi ye duniya ki sabse saktisali pari hi inke pas ek esi sword hi jiska war kabhi khali nhi jata
ye hi hmari story ki 5 heroine

back to story ......

Rani pari ....... Mere pari lok ke bhadur seniko ajj wo samay a gya jb hme apne dushmano ko dhul chatani hogi

Ajj hm Bta denge ki pari lok ki sena bhi koi kam nhi hi ajj hm kisi bhi pret ko jinada nhi chodenge sb ko khatm krdenge

Aur uske bad sere seniko me utsah br gya aur sb chl diye
Pret Raj ke seniko se ladne

Location youdhbumi ........

Pari lok aur Pret lok ki sena aamne samne khadi thi koi piche hatne ko tayar nhi tha parilok ka netritwa Rani pari Rajguru aur senapati aur Rajkumari Pari kr rhi thi

preto ki sena pari lok se 5 guna jada thi

Pret Raj ...... Rani pari ab bhi samay hu man jao apni putri ka bibha hm se kr do tum hm se kabhi jit nhi paogi

Rani pari ........ Dust Pret Raj ajj tumhara any nishit hi chaye ajj hm mr kyo na jaye
tumhe ajj koi bhi nhi baca payega wo tumara malik setan bhi nhi

pret Raj ( gusse se ) bs Rani pari bhut ho gya ab aur nhi rum ne ajj mere malik hell ke king Lucifier ka apman kia hi seniko Akraman

Jin lok ki sena bhi wha puch jati hi aur fiza me ek drawni awaj gunjati hi

Raj 4 ........ Ruk jao Pret Raj nhi to tumhare tukde bhi Lucifier nko nhi milege

jb Pret Raj aur sb us aur dikhte hi to jin lok ki bishal sena a rhi hoti hi aur uske age ek ati sundar balak hota hi jiske mukh pr surya jesa prakash tha aur sath me jine e Badshah hote hi

ue dekh Pret Raj toda darta hi

Rani pari ............ Hme pata rha app hmari madad jarur krenge jin king

jin king....... Jin king hm apke khne pr nhi apitu hmare Samrath ke khne pr aye hi apki madad karne

j king ki baat sun wha sb chok jate hi ki kisi ne j king ko hra dia ye koi mamuli baat to thi nhi


Raj 4 ......... Pret Raj tumhare liye acha yhi ki hoga ki tum Rani pari se Mafhi mango aur yha se dafha ho jao nhi to tum wapas jinda nhi jaoge backe

pret Raj ........ Hahahaha ab jin king itna kamjor ho gya hi ki ek bache ki aad le kr aya hi hahaha kitne saram ki baat hi

jis jinn se pura sansar darta tha wo ek dudh pite bacche ko hmse ladne ke liye laya hi jao j king tum chudiya pahn lo aur ghar me betho

PRet Raj ki baat sun kr j king

j king ...... Hahaha hahaa pret Raj lagta hintum pagal ho gye ho jo bheki hui bate kr rhe ho jise tum bacha samajh rhe ho wo tumhara baap hi hmara samrath hi wo

je king ki baat sun kr kisi ko yakin nhi honrha tha ki kisi bache ne j king ko hara dia

lekin hmare Raj 4 bhai sahab pret Raj ki baat sun ke bhut gussa ho gye

Raj 4 ......... Tum jese do take ke pret ki itni aukat ab tum mughe ankhe dikhawoge aur uske bad hmare Raj 4 ne gusse me Apni 90 % energy lga di pura yudhbhumi thar - thar kapne lagi

AUr Raj 4 ne apni energy ko preto ki sena pr dekha isse itna bhayankar bospot hua hi pura pari lok aur Pret lok hil gya jb dhua hta to pret Raj ki seri sena ki pase tukdo me kati phati hui pure yudhbhumi me bikhri

hui thi ye dekh kr to jitne hi log yudhbhumi me the sb thar - 2 kapne lage pret Raj to niche gir gye unka jism to kap rha tha Rani pari sena pati rajguru aur Rajkumari Pari sath me jin king aur puri sena to de ke mare kap rahi thi

RAj 4 ........ Ek baar meri sun lo aur samaj lo ajj hm tumahari Jan bikh me de de rhe hi dubara ager mere samne agye to jinda nhi jaoge

apne malik us kutte Lucifier se kh dena us ka bapp a gya hi

pret Raj ( kapte hue )) ji ji me kh dunga.
aur uske baad wo wha se bhag gya

Me ......... J king hme ab yha se le chalo
Superb update
 

Bhupinder Singh

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Update ............ 20 ( Pichle update me app ne dekha ki Raj 4 ne Badshah e jin ko hrake jinlok ka Raja bn gya ab age -)

Raj -4 ......... Ab mujhe le chalo apne jin lok

Badshah jin ...... Jo agya malik aur uske bad jinno ke raja ne Raj 4 ko jin lok leker gya

jin lok dikhne me bhut khubsurat tha charo taraf khushiya hi khushiya thi
jin lok me kabhi Rat nhi hoti thi

Raj 4 .... Ye btao ki hmare aas pas kitne Rajya hi

jinno ka Raja ....... Malik hmare aaspas
Pari lok aur Pret lok hi pari lok to hmara Mitra hi lakin pret lok bhut hi
Bura aur dust hi wha ka Raja Pret Raj wo bhut hi

Nirdai aur papi hi Pret Raj ne pari lok pr hmla kr dia hi wha ki Rajkumari Pari ko pane ki liye kyoki jo Princess pari se shadi krega use ek esa bhala milega jisse bade se bada Planet bhi asani se nast kia ja sakta hi

Isliye Pret Raj ne pari lok pr Akraman kr dia hi pari lok ki mharani Rani pari ne hmare pas sahayta ke liye patra beja tha

Raj 4 ...... Chutiya fir kya mera muh dekh rha hi jaldi se sena tayar kro hm parilok ki sayta karne chalege

Jao turant

Jinno ka Raja ...... Ji abi jata hu aur sena ko tayar hone ka adesh deta hu

uske bad jinno ka Raja chla jata hi

location pari lok ..........

Rani pari apne seniko ke samne khadi thi aur sath me pari lok ke senapati aur Raj Kumari pari bhi thi

Rajkumari Pari ........... Ye
bhut Yi payari hi aur khatrnak nbhi ye duniya ki sabse saktisali pari hi inke pas ek esi sword hi jiska war kabhi khali nhi jata
ye hi hmari story ki 5 heroine

back to story ......

Rani pari ....... Mere pari lok ke bhadur seniko ajj wo samay a gya jb hme apne dushmano ko dhul chatani hogi

Ajj hm Bta denge ki pari lok ki sena bhi koi kam nhi hi ajj hm kisi bhi pret ko jinada nhi chodenge sb ko khatm krdenge

Aur uske bad sere seniko me utsah br gya aur sb chl diye
Pret Raj ke seniko se ladne

Location youdhbumi ........

Pari lok aur Pret lok ki sena aamne samne khadi thi koi piche hatne ko tayar nhi tha parilok ka netritwa Rani pari Rajguru aur senapati aur Rajkumari Pari kr rhi thi

preto ki sena pari lok se 5 guna jada thi

Pret Raj ...... Rani pari ab bhi samay hu man jao apni putri ka bibha hm se kr do tum hm se kabhi jit nhi paogi

Rani pari ........ Dust Pret Raj ajj tumhara any nishit hi chaye ajj hm mr kyo na jaye
tumhe ajj koi bhi nhi baca payega wo tumara malik setan bhi nhi

pret Raj ( gusse se ) bs Rani pari bhut ho gya ab aur nhi rum ne ajj mere malik hell ke king Lucifier ka apman kia hi seniko Akraman

Jin lok ki sena bhi wha puch jati hi aur fiza me ek drawni awaj gunjati hi

Raj 4 ........ Ruk jao Pret Raj nhi to tumhare tukde bhi Lucifier nko nhi milege

jb Pret Raj aur sb us aur dikhte hi to jin lok ki bishal sena a rhi hoti hi aur uske age ek ati sundar balak hota hi jiske mukh pr surya jesa prakash tha aur sath me jine e Badshah hote hi

ue dekh Pret Raj toda darta hi

Rani pari ............ Hme pata rha app hmari madad jarur krenge jin king

jin king....... Jin king hm apke khne pr nhi apitu hmare Samrath ke khne pr aye hi apki madad karne

j king ki baat sun wha sb chok jate hi ki kisi ne j king ko hra dia ye koi mamuli baat to thi nhi


Raj 4 ......... Pret Raj tumhare liye acha yhi ki hoga ki tum Rani pari se Mafhi mango aur yha se dafha ho jao nhi to tum wapas jinda nhi jaoge backe

pret Raj ........ Hahahaha ab jin king itna kamjor ho gya hi ki ek bache ki aad le kr aya hi hahaha kitne saram ki baat hi

jis jinn se pura sansar darta tha wo ek dudh pite bacche ko hmse ladne ke liye laya hi jao j king tum chudiya pahn lo aur ghar me betho

PRet Raj ki baat sun kr j king

j king ...... Hahaha hahaa pret Raj lagta hintum pagal ho gye ho jo bheki hui bate kr rhe ho jise tum bacha samajh rhe ho wo tumhara baap hi hmara samrath hi wo

je king ki baat sun kr kisi ko yakin nhi honrha tha ki kisi bache ne j king ko hara dia

lekin hmare Raj 4 bhai sahab pret Raj ki baat sun ke bhut gussa ho gye

Raj 4 ......... Tum jese do take ke pret ki itni aukat ab tum mughe ankhe dikhawoge aur uske bad hmare Raj 4 ne gusse me Apni 90 % energy lga di pura yudhbhumi thar - thar kapne lagi

AUr Raj 4 ne apni energy ko preto ki sena pr dekha isse itna bhayankar bospot hua hi pura pari lok aur Pret lok hil gya jb dhua hta to pret Raj ki seri sena ki pase tukdo me kati phati hui pure yudhbhumi me bikhri

hui thi ye dekh kr to jitne hi log yudhbhumi me the sb thar - 2 kapne lage pret Raj to niche gir gye unka jism to kap rha tha Rani pari sena pati rajguru aur Rajkumari Pari sath me jin king aur puri sena to de ke mare kap rahi thi

RAj 4 ........ Ek baar meri sun lo aur samaj lo ajj hm tumahari Jan bikh me de de rhe hi dubara ager mere samne agye to jinda nhi jaoge

apne malik us kutte Lucifier se kh dena us ka bapp a gya hi

pret Raj ( kapte hue )) ji ji me kh dunga.
aur uske baad wo wha se bhag gya

Me ......... J king hme ab yha se le chalo
Nice update
 

ANUJ KUMAR

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Update........... 15
Location ............ Magic school

Location ............ Magic school

Mene Suwarna se bat ki thi ki mughe 5 lavel beast ka soul light chahiye

Usne kha tha ki kl night me chalenge
me apne bed pr let kr yahi soch rha tha

Ki kl me phli bar kisi se fight karne ja rha tha to soch rha tha kl kya hoga

Mene magic book me dekha tha ek aisa Tir Dhanush jo ki kisi bhi 10 lavel ke best ko behosh kr sakta tha

lakin tir ka nishana beast ke dil pr lagna chahiye

me ne socha mere pass kl rat tika samay hi ager mene wo Tir Dhanush hasil kr lia to mugje sikar me bhut fayda hoga

es liye mene apna colone banaya

clone ....... Raj 3

ME..... Raj 3 tumhe kl sari class leni hi mughe kuch kam hi kl sari class tum le lena

RAj 3....... Jo agya malik

Raj 3 ko adesh dene ke bad me apne T . F me gya aur wo spell ki practice karne lga jisse me qi Tir Dhanush bna sakta tha
mene do din lagatar practice ki
Abhi bs keval 45 % hi bna
tha

T . F me 4 days 16 hour practice krne ke bad mughe saphlata mili
Me bhut kush hua

Ab mere pass 8 hours bache the jungle jane me to me
Apne T . F se bahr nikla aur
apne room me agya wha mughe

Raj 3 mila mene use apne ander smahit kr lia
mugje sb pata chl gya tha ki ajj class me kya hua

Clone magic sikhne se mughe bhut fayda ho gya tha

fir mene apne ander se Raj 3 ko bahr nikala aur usse kha ki wo thi room me rhega jb me sikar pr jaunga

itna khkr me room se bahr nikla gya thodi der guhumne ke bad me park me jake ek

seat pr beth gya kuch der bad mughe esa lga ki jese mere piche se koi a rha hi mene jb mudkr dikah

To Aarti , Rohit aur Raja the aur unke sath wo badtameez Priya bhi thi
mene socha ab ye log mere pass kyo arhe
hi
Ab magic school me mugje sb phe channe lge the akhir ho bhi kyona

School ki top aur is Planet ki sbse powerfull Rajya ki 🤴 meri dost jo thi

Abi me kush soch rha tha ki Rohit bola

Rohit ........ Aur Raj bhai kha rhte ho ajjkl

Aarti ......... Raj tumne wo magic Sikh lia kya
jo hm ne library nse book lia tha
Mughe
unme se kuch shi se samajh nhi aya hi
Kya tum mughe bta sakte ho

Me ........ Mene kitni bar bola hi ki me tumara nouker nhi jo tumhe magic sikhau thik hi .

RAja .........
Bs bhut hua Raj hm tumhe apna dost mante hi lakin tum hmse Thik se bat bhi nhi karte ho
Ye galat hi

Me......
Mene kha tumse ki tum mughe apna dost mano

Priya..........
Menw to phle hi kha tha ki iske pas mt jao lakin nhi meri sunta hi kon hi

Me ..........
Tumhe mene kha ki tum mere pass awo
Bar bar mughe preshan karti rhti ho

Itna khkr library nki trafh chl dia
wha puch kr mene kuch magic spells learn kie
2 hours bad me apne room me agya

apne bed pr beth kr aram karne lga kyoki ajj mughe forest of Isla jana tha best ka sikar kr
soul light ko hasil karna rha

Ab karna mere pass nhi ata tha kyoki use pata tha ki mere sath Godess Suwarna hi

Time ......... Night 10.00

Me aur Suwarna jungle ki tarfh chl die pedal

Suwarna ........
hm kon se lavel best ka sikar karege
app mt karna me krungi abi apke pass utni power nhi hi

Me....... Hme 5 - 10 lavel beast ka sikar karna hi

Suwarna .......... Kya app konho kya gya hi 5 se 10 lavel ka best ka sikar karna koi asan kam nhi hi

YHa tk ki forest of Isla me Keval 12 lavel tk ke beast rhte hi
isme bhut khatra hi

ME........
me tum chinta mt karo mene sb soch lia

Ase hi bate karte karte hm forest of Isla me agye
jisse me forest me ander gya mughe apne aspas kisi powerfull beast ko sense kia
uska lavel 5 to 8 ho sakta tha

Mene Suwarna kon sachet rhne ke liye kha

Mene aur Suwarna ne dekha ki do best apas me ladh rhe hi 1 wala 6 lavel ka tha
Aur 2 wala 8 lavel ka tha

Me.....
Jb wo 8 lavel wala beast 6 lavel wale best ko mar dega to hm 8 wale prnhmla krenge
tb uski power km hogi kyoki usne 6 lavel ke beast ko mara hi
Hme jese hi 6 lavel best mare turnt hmka karna hi kyoki ager
hmne

6 lavel best ke soul light ke use absorb hone se phle use nhi mara to hm use nhi mar payenge

Kyoki uske bad uska lavel 14 lavel puch jayega tb hm usko nhi mar sakte aur kya pata hm sikar karne aye hi hm hi na sikar hi jaye

kuch der dono best apas me ladte rhe aur fir
DOno bhut fast ladh rhe the
Kuch der bad 6 lavel best har gya

Suwarna ne turant apne thunder magic ka istemal kia wo best jamin pr giranuse bhut
chote hu pr chote turant thik ho ja rhi

Thi ager Suwarna ke pass apni angle power hoti to wo ik second me is best ko mar sakti thi
but abi wo 13 year ki thi use sari power 18 year pr milti

suwarna .......
Lagta hi hmara akhiri samay a gya hi
mene isp apna lighting magic joki midium lavel 4 pr hi use kia

BUt is best ko jada phark nhi para

Suwarna.......
ab kuch ho der me ye soul light ko absorb kr lega tb hme ise nhi hara payege

MEne Tir Dhanush wala spel padha
Aur nishana uske dil pr lagay aur use chod
dia jise wo Tir uske dil pr lga wo 8 lavel beast ki chikh fure Isla ke jungle me gunj uthi

Kuch der bad wo best me gya aur uski 8 lavel soul light mene absorb kr lia mugjenitna dard hua ki me bta nhi sakta

mene 6 lavel ki soul light Suwarna ko dia absorb karne ke liye

Suwarna.....
ager app ise absorb kr lege to apke pas 14 lavel ki best soul light ho jayegi

Me........ Raj itna kud garj nhi hi tum ise absorb kr li isse tum 10 guna aur powerfull nho jaogi

Suwarna meri trafh dekha aur smile karte hue use absorb kr lia dard use bhi bhut hua pr kisi tarah usne wo dard saha

ME.....
ye tum meri trafh dekh kr smile kyo kr rhi ho

Meri baat sun ke Suwarna sarma gyi

Suwarna.......
Jb waqt ayega to bta dungi

Uske bad me aur Suwarna school a gye aur apne room me jakr so
Nice update
 
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