Fantasy The Asura System

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𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝟒𝟒 𝐭𝐨 𝟒𝟖 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐛𝐞𝐞𝐧 𝐩𝐮𝐛𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐞𝐝. 𝐏𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐬𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝, 𝐞𝐧𝐣𝐨𝐲, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐝𝐨𝐧’𝐭 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐠𝐞𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐚 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞.

 

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Update 22

 

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Update 22

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Chapter 22
Do Haseena, Ek Deewana aur Harem ka Mahayudh​

Weeping Ruins se Surya Sect tak ka rasta do din ka tha, lekin Aryan ke liye yeh do din kisi sadi (century) se kam nahi thay.
Vanya, jo hazaron saalon se qaid thi, ab poori tarah Aryan par chipak gayi thi. Wo paidal chalne se saaf mana kar chuki thi. Aryan ne use apne ghode (horse) par apne aage bithaya hua tha. Vanya ne Aryan ke dono haath apni kamar (waist) par kas ke rakhwa diye thay aur apna sar uske seene (chest) par tika diya tha.
"Aryan," Vanya ne upar dekh kar bade masoomiyat se pucha. "Tumhare is 'Sect' mein kya aur bhi ladkiyan hain?"
Aryan ne thoot (saliva) gataka. "Wo... haan, hain toh... matlab... dost hain meri."
Vanya ki aankhein thodi gehri purple hui. Usne Aryan ki thodi (chin) ko ungli se pakda aur apne kareeb khincha. "Yaad rakhna, Asura bloodline mein 'Patni' ka darja sabse upar hota hai. Agar kisi ne mere raste mein aane ki koshish ki, toh main unka dil nikaal kar Kaalu ko khila dungi."
Kaalu ne piche se ek khushi bhari dahaad maari—Roar! (Jaise keh raha ho, 'Mujhe manzoor hai!').
Aryan ne paseena pochha. "Beta Aryan, tere ache din khatam, aur maut ke din shuru."
Surya Sect - Main Gate
Sect ke main gate par aaj pehle se zyada bheed thi. Log besabri se Aryan ka intezaar kar rahe thay. Sabko laga tha ki wo Weeping Ruins mein mara gaya hoga.
Kavya gate ke paas ek patthar par baithi thi. Uske haath mein uski Ice Sword thi aur uska chehra hamesha ki tarah thanda tha, lekin uski nazrein raste par tiki thin. Uske bagal mein Elder Sharma bhi khade thay, thode pareshan.
"Aa gaya! Wo dekho!" kisi disciple ne chillaya.
Door se ek ghoda dhool udata hua aa raha tha. Jaise-jaise wo paas aaya, logon ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayin.
Aryan ghode par tha, lekin wo akela nahi tha. Uske aage ek aisi ladki baithi thi jise dekh kar lag raha tha ki koi purani painting zinda ho gayi ho. Vanya ke silver baal hawa mein udd rahe thay aur usne Aryan ka haath pakad kar apne honthon ke paas rakha hua tha.
Ghoda gate par aakar ruka.
Aryan neeche utra aur usne bade 'gentleman' style mein Vanya ko god (arms) mein utha kar neeche utara. Vanya ne utarte hi Aryan ka baazu (arm) pakad liya aur usse chipak gayi.
Kavya wahan se uthi aur dheere-dheere Aryan ki taraf badhi. Har kadam ke saath zameen par barf jam rahi thi. Uska gussa itna tha ki aas-paas ke disciples darr ke maare piche hat gaye.
"Aryan," Kavya ki awaaz itni thandi thi ki Aryan ka khoon jam gaya. "Mission ka pata lagane gaye thay ya biwi dhoondne?"
Aryan ne hichkichate hue kaha, "Kavya... suno toh sahi. Yeh Princess Vanya hain, Ruins mein qaid thin aur—"
"Princess?" Kavya ne Vanya ko upar se neeche tak dekha. "Aur yeh tumse aise kyun chipki hui hai jaise koi fevicol ka jod ho?"
Vanya ne Kavya ko dekha aur ek kutil (sly) muskaan di. Usne Aryan ka haath aur kas ke pakad liya aur apne seene (chest) se laga liya.
"Main iski mangetar (fiancée) hoon," Vanya ne garv se kaha. "Aur tum kaun ho? Aryan ki naukrani?"
Sannnnn!
Poore Sect mein sannata cha gaya. Kisi ne Ice Queen ko 'naukrani' bol diya tha!
Kavya ki aankhon mein neeli aag jal uthi. "Naukrani?! Main Surya Sect ki Core Disciple hoon, aur Aryan ka mujh par haq hai!"
"Haq?" Vanya hasi. "Maine iske saath Soul Bond kiya hai. Kya tumne kiya hai? Kya tumne iske saath wo 'special' raat bitayi hai jo humne gufa (cave) mein bitayi?"
Aryan ka dimaag ghoom gaya. "Gufa mein toh hum sirf soye thay! Yeh ladki aag laga rahi hai!"
Kavya ne Aryan ki taraf dekha, uski aankhon mein aansu aur gussa dono thay. "Gufa? Aryan... kya yeh sach hai?"
"Nahi! Matlab... haan hum gufa mein thay par waisa kuch nahi—"
Isse pehle ki Aryan baat poori karta, Zara (Treasure Pavilion wali) bhi bheed cheerte hue wahan pahunch gayi. Usne Vanya aur Kavya dono ko dekha aur apni kamar par haath rakha.
"Arre waah!" Zara ne taali bajayi. "Yahan toh party chal rahi hai aur mujhe bulaya hi nahi? Aryan darling, maine tumhare liye shehar se itne mehenge tohfe mangwaye, aur tum yahan nayi-nayi chidiyan la rahe ho?"
Ab scene kuch aisa tha:
* Kavya (Ice Queen): Gusse mein talwaar nikaalne wali thi.
* Vanya (Asura Princess): Aryan ka haath chhodne ko taiyaar nahi thi.
* Zara (Seductive Merchant): Aryan ko 'hisaab' sikhane ke mood mein thi.
Aryan ne apne sar par haath rakha. "System! Help me! Inhe kaise sambhalun?"
Ting!
[Warning: Harem stability is at 10%. Dangerous zone.]
[Suggestion: Run or Show Authority.]
Aryan ne ek gehri saans li aur apni Spirit Awakening power release ki.
"BAS!" Aryan zor se chillaya.
Teeno ladkiyan chup ho gayin aur use dekhne lagin.
"Kavya, Vanya meri dushman nahi hai, uske paas mere parents ka raaz hai. Zara, business aur dosti apni jagah hai. Aur Vanya... abhi tum naya-naya bahar aayi ho, thoda shant raho."
Aryan ne Elder Sharma ki taraf dekha jo maza le rahe thay. "Elder, please Vanya ke rehne ka intezam kijiye. Mujhe Sect Master ko report deni hai."
Elder Sharma ne haste hue kaha, "Bilkul, bilkul. In haseenon ko main sambhalta hoon (halanki mere bas ki nahi hai), tum jao."
Aryan wahan se tezi se nikal gaya, piche teeno ladkiyon ki ghurrati hui nazron ko chhod kar.
Sect Master ka Hall
Sect Master Suryavansh Aryan ko dekh kar khush thay, lekin jab unhone Vanya ke baare mein suna, toh unka chehra serious ho gaya.
"Asura Princess... Vanya," Sect Master ne badbadaya. "Agar Central Empire ko pata chala ki humne ek Asura Princess ko panaah (shelter) di hai, toh wo hum par hamla kar denge."
"Lekin Master," Aryan ne kaha. "Wo meri madad kar sakti hain Earth Realm tak pahunchne mein. Aur unhe mere parents ke baare mein pata hai."
Sect Master ne Aryan ko dekha. "Theek hai. Lekin use Sect se bahar mat nikalne dena. Aur Aryan... ek mahine baad 'Spirit Spring' khulne wala hai. Sirf Top 3 Core Disciples hi usme naha sakte hain. Agar tum usme naha paye, toh tum seedha Earth Realm touch kar jaoge."
Aryan ki aankhein chamak uthin. Earth Realm!
Raat ka Waqt - Aryan ka Mansion
Aryan thaka-hara apne kamre mein aaya aur bistar par gir gaya.
"Finally... shanti."
Lekin shanti kahan?
Bistar ke kone se ek mulayam (soft) haath nikla aur Aryan ki chhati (chest) par phira.
Vanya wahan pehle se leti hui thi, ek patli silk ki nightdress mein jo uske silver baalon ke saath chamak rahi thi.
"Aryan," Vanya ne uske kaan mein whisper kiya. "Kavya aur Zara so chuki hain. Ab hum apna 'Soul Bond' thoda aur mazboot karein?"
Aryan ka dil kisi drum ki tarah dhadakne laga. Vanya uske upar jhuk gayi, uski purple aankhein andhere mein chamak rahi thin.
"Vanya... yeh... yeh sahi nahi hai," Aryan ne kaha, par usne use piche nahi dhakela.
Vanya ne uske honthon ke paas apne honth laye. "Asura Clan mein, taqatwar mard ki bahut saari raniyan hoti hain. Main pehli banna chahti hoon. Kya tum mujhe mana karoge?"
Aryan ne Vanya ki kamar pakdi aur use apne kareeb khincha. "Mana karna mere bas mein nahi hai..."
Dono ke honth milne hi wale thay ki khidki se ek barf ka gola (ice ball) andar aaya aur seedha dono ke beech mein phata!
CRASH!
"ARYAN! MAIN JAANTI THI TUM YAHI KAROGE!" Kavya khidki par khadi thi, uski aankhon mein aansu thay aur haath mein talwaar.
Aryan bistar se niche gir gaya. "KAVYA! Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?!"
"Main tumhari nigraani (watch) kar rahi thi!" Kavya chillayi.
Tabhi darwaza khula aur Zara wine ki bottle lekar andar aayi. "Arre, yahan toh pehle se bheed hai? Chalo, four-some party karte hain!"
Aryan ne aasmaan ki taraf dekha. "Bhagwan... mujhe Earth Realm nahi, seedha Swarg (Heaven) bhej de! Inke saath rehna cultivation se zyada mushkil hai!"

 

[Haiwaan]

Chapter 22
Do Haseena, Ek Deewana aur Harem ka Mahayudh​

Weeping Ruins se Surya Sect tak ka rasta do din ka tha, lekin Aryan ke liye yeh do din kisi sadi (century) se kam nahi thay.
Vanya, jo hazaron saalon se qaid thi, ab poori tarah Aryan par chipak gayi thi. Wo paidal chalne se saaf mana kar chuki thi. Aryan ne use apne ghode (horse) par apne aage bithaya hua tha. Vanya ne Aryan ke dono haath apni kamar (waist) par kas ke rakhwa diye thay aur apna sar uske seene (chest) par tika diya tha.
"Aryan," Vanya ne upar dekh kar bade masoomiyat se pucha. "Tumhare is 'Sect' mein kya aur bhi ladkiyan hain?"
Aryan ne thoot (saliva) gataka. "Wo... haan, hain toh... matlab... dost hain meri."
Vanya ki aankhein thodi gehri purple hui. Usne Aryan ki thodi (chin) ko ungli se pakda aur apne kareeb khincha. "Yaad rakhna, Asura bloodline mein 'Patni' ka darja sabse upar hota hai. Agar kisi ne mere raste mein aane ki koshish ki, toh main unka dil nikaal kar Kaalu ko khila dungi."
Kaalu ne piche se ek khushi bhari dahaad maari—Roar! (Jaise keh raha ho, 'Mujhe manzoor hai!').
Aryan ne paseena pochha. "Beta Aryan, tere ache din khatam, aur maut ke din shuru."
Surya Sect - Main Gate
Sect ke main gate par aaj pehle se zyada bheed thi. Log besabri se Aryan ka intezaar kar rahe thay. Sabko laga tha ki wo Weeping Ruins mein mara gaya hoga.
Kavya gate ke paas ek patthar par baithi thi. Uske haath mein uski Ice Sword thi aur uska chehra hamesha ki tarah thanda tha, lekin uski nazrein raste par tiki thin. Uske bagal mein Elder Sharma bhi khade thay, thode pareshan.
"Aa gaya! Wo dekho!" kisi disciple ne chillaya.
Door se ek ghoda dhool udata hua aa raha tha. Jaise-jaise wo paas aaya, logon ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayin.
Aryan ghode par tha, lekin wo akela nahi tha. Uske aage ek aisi ladki baithi thi jise dekh kar lag raha tha ki koi purani painting zinda ho gayi ho. Vanya ke silver baal hawa mein udd rahe thay aur usne Aryan ka haath pakad kar apne honthon ke paas rakha hua tha.
Ghoda gate par aakar ruka.
Aryan neeche utra aur usne bade 'gentleman' style mein Vanya ko god (arms) mein utha kar neeche utara. Vanya ne utarte hi Aryan ka baazu (arm) pakad liya aur usse chipak gayi.
Kavya wahan se uthi aur dheere-dheere Aryan ki taraf badhi. Har kadam ke saath zameen par barf jam rahi thi. Uska gussa itna tha ki aas-paas ke disciples darr ke maare piche hat gaye.
"Aryan," Kavya ki awaaz itni thandi thi ki Aryan ka khoon jam gaya. "Mission ka pata lagane gaye thay ya biwi dhoondne?"
Aryan ne hichkichate hue kaha, "Kavya... suno toh sahi. Yeh Princess Vanya hain, Ruins mein qaid thin aur—"
"Princess?" Kavya ne Vanya ko upar se neeche tak dekha. "Aur yeh tumse aise kyun chipki hui hai jaise koi fevicol ka jod ho?"
Vanya ne Kavya ko dekha aur ek kutil (sly) muskaan di. Usne Aryan ka haath aur kas ke pakad liya aur apne seene (chest) se laga liya.
"Main iski mangetar (fiancée) hoon," Vanya ne garv se kaha. "Aur tum kaun ho? Aryan ki naukrani?"
Sannnnn!
Poore Sect mein sannata cha gaya. Kisi ne Ice Queen ko 'naukrani' bol diya tha!
Kavya ki aankhon mein neeli aag jal uthi. "Naukrani?! Main Surya Sect ki Core Disciple hoon, aur Aryan ka mujh par haq hai!"
"Haq?" Vanya hasi. "Maine iske saath Soul Bond kiya hai. Kya tumne kiya hai? Kya tumne iske saath wo 'special' raat bitayi hai jo humne gufa (cave) mein bitayi?"
Aryan ka dimaag ghoom gaya. "Gufa mein toh hum sirf soye thay! Yeh ladki aag laga rahi hai!"
Kavya ne Aryan ki taraf dekha, uski aankhon mein aansu aur gussa dono thay. "Gufa? Aryan... kya yeh sach hai?"
"Nahi! Matlab... haan hum gufa mein thay par waisa kuch nahi—"
Isse pehle ki Aryan baat poori karta, Zara (Treasure Pavilion wali) bhi bheed cheerte hue wahan pahunch gayi. Usne Vanya aur Kavya dono ko dekha aur apni kamar par haath rakha.
"Arre waah!" Zara ne taali bajayi. "Yahan toh party chal rahi hai aur mujhe bulaya hi nahi? Aryan darling, maine tumhare liye shehar se itne mehenge tohfe mangwaye, aur tum yahan nayi-nayi chidiyan la rahe ho?"
Ab scene kuch aisa tha:
* Kavya (Ice Queen): Gusse mein talwaar nikaalne wali thi.
* Vanya (Asura Princess): Aryan ka haath chhodne ko taiyaar nahi thi.
* Zara (Seductive Merchant): Aryan ko 'hisaab' sikhane ke mood mein thi.
Aryan ne apne sar par haath rakha. "System! Help me! Inhe kaise sambhalun?"
Ting!
[Warning: Harem stability is at 10%. Dangerous zone.]
[Suggestion: Run or Show Authority.]
Aryan ne ek gehri saans li aur apni Spirit Awakening power release ki.
"BAS!" Aryan zor se chillaya.
Teeno ladkiyan chup ho gayin aur use dekhne lagin.
"Kavya, Vanya meri dushman nahi hai, uske paas mere parents ka raaz hai. Zara, business aur dosti apni jagah hai. Aur Vanya... abhi tum naya-naya bahar aayi ho, thoda shant raho."
Aryan ne Elder Sharma ki taraf dekha jo maza le rahe thay. "Elder, please Vanya ke rehne ka intezam kijiye. Mujhe Sect Master ko report deni hai."
Elder Sharma ne haste hue kaha, "Bilkul, bilkul. In haseenon ko main sambhalta hoon (halanki mere bas ki nahi hai), tum jao."
Aryan wahan se tezi se nikal gaya, piche teeno ladkiyon ki ghurrati hui nazron ko chhod kar.
Sect Master ka Hall
Sect Master Suryavansh Aryan ko dekh kar khush thay, lekin jab unhone Vanya ke baare mein suna, toh unka chehra serious ho gaya.
"Asura Princess... Vanya," Sect Master ne badbadaya. "Agar Central Empire ko pata chala ki humne ek Asura Princess ko panaah (shelter) di hai, toh wo hum par hamla kar denge."
"Lekin Master," Aryan ne kaha. "Wo meri madad kar sakti hain Earth Realm tak pahunchne mein. Aur unhe mere parents ke baare mein pata hai."
Sect Master ne Aryan ko dekha. "Theek hai. Lekin use Sect se bahar mat nikalne dena. Aur Aryan... ek mahine baad 'Spirit Spring' khulne wala hai. Sirf Top 3 Core Disciples hi usme naha sakte hain. Agar tum usme naha paye, toh tum seedha Earth Realm touch kar jaoge."
Aryan ki aankhein chamak uthin. Earth Realm!
Raat ka Waqt - Aryan ka Mansion
Aryan thaka-hara apne kamre mein aaya aur bistar par gir gaya.
"Finally... shanti."
Lekin shanti kahan?
Bistar ke kone se ek mulayam (soft) haath nikla aur Aryan ki chhati (chest) par phira.
Vanya wahan pehle se leti hui thi, ek patli silk ki nightdress mein jo uske silver baalon ke saath chamak rahi thi.
"Aryan," Vanya ne uske kaan mein whisper kiya. "Kavya aur Zara so chuki hain. Ab hum apna 'Soul Bond' thoda aur mazboot karein?"
Aryan ka dil kisi drum ki tarah dhadakne laga. Vanya uske upar jhuk gayi, uski purple aankhein andhere mein chamak rahi thin.
"Vanya... yeh... yeh sahi nahi hai," Aryan ne kaha, par usne use piche nahi dhakela.
Vanya ne uske honthon ke paas apne honth laye. "Asura Clan mein, taqatwar mard ki bahut saari raniyan hoti hain. Main pehli banna chahti hoon. Kya tum mujhe mana karoge?"
Aryan ne Vanya ki kamar pakdi aur use apne kareeb khincha. "Mana karna mere bas mein nahi hai..."
Dono ke honth milne hi wale thay ki khidki se ek barf ka gola (ice ball) andar aaya aur seedha dono ke beech mein phata!
CRASH!
"ARYAN! MAIN JAANTI THI TUM YAHI KAROGE!" Kavya khidki par khadi thi, uski aankhon mein aansu thay aur haath mein talwaar.
Aryan bistar se niche gir gaya. "KAVYA! Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?!"
"Main tumhari nigraani (watch) kar rahi thi!" Kavya chillayi.
Tabhi darwaza khula aur Zara wine ki bottle lekar andar aayi. "Arre, yahan toh pehle se bheed hai? Chalo, four-some party karte hain!"
Aryan ne aasmaan ki taraf dekha. "Bhagwan... mujhe Earth Realm nahi, seedha Swarg (Heaven) bhej de! Inke saath rehna cultivation se zyada mushkil hai!"

Majedaar update bro.

 

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Superb update

 

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Nice update bro