Fantasy The Asura System

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𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝟒𝟒 𝐭𝐨 𝟒𝟖 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐛𝐞𝐞𝐧 𝐩𝐮𝐛𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐞𝐝. 𝐏𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐬𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝, 𝐞𝐧𝐣𝐨𝐲, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐝𝐨𝐧’𝐭 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐠𝐞𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐚 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞.

 

[Haiwaan]

Chapter 13:
The Asura’s Wrath – Ek Tarfa Qatl-e-Aam​

"Sword Art: Asura's First Breath - DARK MOON SLASH!"
Dhuyein ke andar se ek kaali, ardh-chandrakar (crescent shape) roshni nikli. Yeh roshni kisi aag ki tarah garam nahi, balki maut ki tarah thandi thi.
Vikram, jo apne 'Berserk Mode' mein tha aur ek pagal saand (bull) ki tarah aage badh raha tha, usne is hamle ko rokne ke liye apne dono haath cross kiye. Uski skin par ek moti Red Qi Armor thi jo kisi bhi steel weapon ko rok sakti thi.
CLANG!
Lekin jaise hi Aryan ki Shadow Fang ki roshni Vikram se takrayi, ek tez 'metal katne' ki awaaz aayi.
"Krr-zzzt!"
Vikram ki Red Armor, jise wo attoot (unbreakable) samajhta tha, wo kaanch ki tarah tootne lagi.
"KYA?!" Vikram ki laal aankhein phail gayin.
BOOOM!
Dhamaka hua aur Vikram piche ki taraf ghista chala gaya. Uske pairon ne stone floor mein 20 feet lambi naali bana di. Jab wo ruka, toh uske dono baazuon (arms) par gehre cuts lag chuke thay aur khoon tapak raha tha.
Poora stadium sunn (silent) tha. Sirf hawa ki sarsarahat sunayi de rahi thi.
Stage 9 Peak + Forbidden Pill = Invincible hona chahiye tha.
Lekin Aryan ne ek jhatke mein use zakhmi kar diya?
Aryan dhuyein se bahar aaya. Wo shant tha. Uske chehre par koi expression nahi tha, bas uski aankhein... wo Neeli se Gehre Purple rang mein badal chuki thin.
[System Notification]
[Asura Bloodline: 5% Awakened.]
[Effect: Fear Aura activated. Enemies with weak wills will tremble.]
Aryan ne apni talwaar ko zameen par tikaya aur Vikram ko dekha.
"Tch, tch, tch. Vikram, tune apni life-force jala di, apni humanity kho di, sirf mujhe harane ke liye? Aur fir bhi... tu itna kamzor hai?"
Vikram ka dimaag gusse se phat raha tha. Pill ke side-effect ne uski sochne ki shamta khatam kar di thi.
"CHUP KAR! MAIN STRONGEST HOON! MAIN TUJHE KHA JAUNGA!"
Vikram ne ek zor daar dahaad maari. Uske shareer se nikalne wali Red Qi ne ek Giant Red Snake ka shape le liya.
"Forbidden Art: Blood Snake Devour!"
Vikram hawa mein kooda aur us bada sa energy snake seedha Aryan ko nigalne ke liye lapka. Is hamle mein itni garmi thi ki paas baithe audience ke baal jhulasne lage.
Kavya chillayi, "Aryan, dodge karo! Yeh soul ko jala dega!"
Lekin Aryan hila nahi.
Usne apni talwaar ko myaan (sheath) mein wapis daalne ka action kiya (Iaijutsu stance).
"Badi machli choti machli ko khaati hai," Aryan badbadaya. "Lekin Dragon... sabko khata hai."
Aryan ke piche, hawa mein ek Black Dragon ka illusion bana (jo Kaalu jaisa dikhta tha par bada tha).
"Asura Phantom Step + Sword Art: Second Breath - THOUSAND CUTS."
SWISH!
Ek second ke liye, Aryan gayab ho gaya.
Bheed ko sirf ye dikha ki Aryan apni jagah se gayab hua, aur agle hi pal wo Vikram ke piche khada tha, apni talwaar ko wapis myaan mein rakhte hue.
Click.
Jaise hi talwaar myaan mein band hui...
Vikram ka Red Snake hawa mein hi bikhar gaya.
Aur fir...
SPLASH! SPLASH! SPLASH!
Vikram ke pure shareer par ek saath 100 cuts khul gaye.
Chhati par, pairon par, peeth par. Khoon ke faware har disha mein choot pade.
"AAAARRRGHHHH!"
Vikram dard se cheekhta hua zameen par gir pada. Wo khoon ke talab (pool) mein pada tadap raha tha. Pill ka asar khatam ho raha tha aur uska shareer wapis sikud raha tha.
Aryan ghum kar wapis Vikram ke paas aaya aur uska sar apne pair ke neeche daba diya.
"Yahi tha tera ghamand?" Aryan ne neeche jhuk kar pucha. "Tune meri cultivation cheenne ki baat ki thi na?"
VIP stand mein Elder Shang ka chehra safed pad gaya tha. "Yeh ladka... yeh insaan nahi hai!"
Elder Shang chillaye, "RUKO! Match khatam ho gaya hai! Vikram haar gaya hai! Aryan, piche hato!"
Aryan ne Elder Shang ki taraf dekha. Uski purple aankhon ne Elder ko bhi dara diya.
"Haar gaya? Niyam kehta hai ki jab tak opponent 'I Give Up' na bole ya mar na jaye, match chalta rehta hai."
Aryan ne Vikram ke baal pakad kar uska sar uthaya. "Bol, give up karta hai?"
Vikram ke muh se khoon nikal raha tha, lekin uska ghamand abhi bhi baki tha. "T-Tu mujhe maar nahi sakta... Mera Chacha Elder hai... Main tujhe baad mein dekh lunga..."
Aryan muskuraaya. Ek bohot hi khatarnak muskaan.
"Baad mein? Vikram mere bhai, 'baad mein' kuch nahi hota. Jo hota hai abhi hota hai."
Aryan ne apni do ungliyan (two fingers) Vikram ke pet ke nichle hisse (Dantian - jahan cultivation store hoti hai) par rakhi.
Kavya samajh gayi ki Aryan kya karne wala hai. Wo haath muh par rakh kar khadi ho gayi.
"Nahi..."
Aryan ne thande dimaag se kaha: "System, iski energy absorb kar le. Waste nahi honi chahiye."
"Asura Devouring Technique!"
Aryan ne apni ungliyan Vikram ke Dantian mein ghusa di.
CRACK!
Vikram ki aankhein safed ho gayin. Uske andar se saari 'Golden Qi' khich kar Aryan ke haath mein aane lagi. Vikram ka shareer sookhne laga, jaise koi balloon se hawa nikal gayi ho.
"NAAAAHIIIIIIII! MERI CULTIVATION!" Vikram ki dardnaak cheekh ne poore Sect ki rooh kaanpa di.
Cultivation world mein, maut se bhi badtar saza hoti hai kisi ka Dantian todna. Kyunki iske baad wo insaan kabhi practice nahi kar sakta. Wo ek aam insaan se bhi kamzor, ek apahij (cripple) ban jata hai.
Kuch seconds baad, Aryan ne haath hataya.
Vikram behosh ho chuka tha. Wo ab ek boodhe aadmi jaisa kamzor lag raha tha.
[System Alert]
[Energy Absorbed.]
[Host Level Up!]
[Body Refining Stage 9 (Peak) -> Spirit Awakening Realm (Stage 1)!]
Aryan ke shareer se ek neeli roshni nikli aur aasmaan ki taraf gayi.
Boom!
Usne Spirit Awakening Realm mein break-through kar liya tha—match ke beech mein!
Aryan ne behosh Vikram ko ek laat maar kar stage se neeche fek diya, seedha Elder Shang ke pairon mein.
"Le jaiye apna kachra," Aryan ne heavy awaaz mein kaha. "Aaj ke baad yeh kisi ko bully nahi kar payega."
Poore Arena mein itni shanti thi ki agar sui (needle) bhi girti toh awaaz aati.
Log Aryan ko darr aur respect se dekh rahe thay.
Yeh wo 'Trash' Aryan nahi tha. Yeh ek Asura King tha.
Elder Shang gusse mein kamp rahe thay. Unka bhatija barbad ho gaya tha.
"Aryan! Tune Sect ke rules tode hain! Tune ek fellow disciple ko cripple kiya!"
Elder Shang stage ki taraf koodne hi wale thay ki ek aur shadow unke saamne aa gayi.
Yeh Elder Sharma thay. Aur unke haath mein Sect Master ka Token tha.
"Shang, apni hadd mein raho," Elder Sharma ne sakhti se kaha. "Vikram ne pehle Forbidden Pill khayi thi. Wo Aryan ko maarne wala tha. Aryan ne self-defense kiya. Aur..."
Elder Sharma ne Aryan ki taraf garv (pride) se dekha.
"...Aur ab Aryan Spirit Awakening Realm mein hai. Rules ke hisaab se, wo ab 'Outer Disciple' nahi, balki 'Core Disciple' banne ke layak hai. Tum ek Core Disciple ko bina Sect Master ki permission ke touch nahi kar sakte."
Elder Shang ne apni mutthi bhinchi. Unhein pata tha wo haar chuke hain.
"Theek hai... Theek hai! Lekin yeh yahan khatam nahi hua!"
Elder Shang apne behosh bhatije ko utha kar wahan se chale gaye.
Bheed ne dheere-dheere taaliyaan bajana shuru kiya.
Pehle ek aadmi, fir do, fir poora stadium.
"ARYAN! ARYAN! ARYAN!"
Aryan ne hawa mein haath hilaya.
Uski nazar VIP stand mein Kavya par padi.
Kavya ki aankhon mein aansu thay, lekin wo muskura rahi thi. Aryan ne use ek 'Flying Kiss' di (besharmi wapis aa gayi). Kavya ne sharma kar muh pher liya.
Fir Aryan ne Zara ki taraf dekha. Zara ne apne honthon par ungli rakhi aur wink kiya.
Deal yaad hai na?
Aryan ne ek gehri saans li.
"System, show me the Quest Rewards."
[Mission Complete: Win the Tournament.]
[Rating: SSS (Dominating Victory).]
[Rewards:]
* Mystery Lottery Box (Gold).
* 10,000 System Points.
* New Title: The Ruthless Rookie.
* Information unlocked: Location of your Parents.
Aryan ki muskaan gayab ho gayi.
"Parents?"
Aaj tak Aryan ko lagta tha wo anaath (orphan) hai.
"Matlab... wo zinda hain?"
Aryan stage se utra, Kaalu (Dragon) uske piche-piche chal raha tha.
Log rasta de rahe thay.
Ek chapter khatam hua, lekin asli kahani ab shuru hui thi. Aryan sirf Sect ka King nahi banna chahta tha. Ab use duniya ke raaz janne thay.

Fantastic update bro

 

[Jasdil]

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[111ramjain]

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Chapter 14:
Nayi Power, Nayi Zimmedari aur Cultivation ka Sach​

Tournament jeetne ke baad, Aryan ki zindagi raaton-raat badal gayi thi.
Jo Aryan kal tak ek tooti-footi jhopdi (hut) mein rehta tha, aaj use Sect ke sabse posh area—'Core Peak'—mein ek aalishan mansion mila tha. Yahan naukar-chakar thay, naram bistar tha, aur khane ke liye dher saara meat tha (jo Kaalu ke liye zaroori tha).
Raat ke waqt, Aryan apne room ki balcony mein khada hokar chand ko dekh raha tha. Kaalu uske pairon ke paas so raha tha, uska pet bhara hua tha.
"System," Aryan ne mann mein bola. "Mujhe ab tak bas maar-dhaad pata thi. Lekin ab jab main 'Spirit Awakening' realm mein hoon, mujhe is duniya ke Power Levels ke baare mein dhang se samjhao. Meri aukaat kya hai abhi?"
Ting!
[Host request accepted. Uploading Cultivation Database...]
Ek holographic chart Aryan ke saamne khul gaya.
[Cultivation Realms of Aaryavart World]
* Body Refining Realm (Sharir Shudhikaran):
* Focus: Sirf physical taqat. Muscles, bones aur skin ko lohe jaisa banana.
* Stages: 1 se 9.
* Aryan: Paar kar chuka hai.
* Spirit Awakening Realm (Aatma Jagran) - [YOU ARE HERE]:
* Focus: Apne andar ki 'Qi' (Prana) ko bahar nikalna. Is level par log elemental attacks (aag, barf, bijli) use kar sakte hain.
* Life Span: 150 - 200 saal.
* Sub-stages: Low, Mid, High, Peak.
* Earth Realm (Prithvi Yoddha):
* Power: Hawa mein chalna (Walk on air for short time). Ek jhatke se pahad todna.
* Status: Sect Elders aur Clan Leaders yahan hote hain. (Jaise Elder Shang aur Elder Sharma).
* Life Span: 300 saal.
* Sky Realm (Aakash Samrat):
* Power: True Flight (Udna). Ek shehar (city) ko akele tabah karne ki taqat.
* Status: Legendary Grandmasters. Pure Continent mein gine-chune log hain.
* Saint / Asura Realm (Devta/Rakshas):
* Power: Mythical. Inke baare mein sirf kahaaniyan hain.
Aryan ne chart dekha aur thoda serious ho gaya.
"Matlab main abhi Level 2 par hoon. Elder Shang Level 3 (Earth Realm) par hain. Agar unhone mujh par serious hamla kiya hota, toh main ek second mein mar jata."
System: [Correct. You survived because of luck and rules. To fight the real bosses, you need to reach Earth Realm quickly.]
Aryan ne mutthi bhinchi. "Toh agla target set hai. Earth Realm."
Tabhi darwaze par dastak (knock) hui.
"Kaun?" Aryan ne pucha.
Darwaza khula aur Kavya andar aayi.
Aaj usne Sect ki uniform nahi, balki ek simple blue saree pehni thi. Wo behad khoobsurat lag rahi thi, lekin thodi nervous thi.
"Aryan..." Kavya ne dheere se kaha. "Main... main tumhe 'Congratulations' bolne aayi thi."
Aryan muskuraaya aur railing se tek laga kar khada ho gaya. "Bas congrats? Koi gift nahi?"
Kavya aage aayi. "Tumne meri jaan bachayi, aur phir tournament mein meri izzat bachayi. Main tumhari karazdaar hoon."
Usne apni jeb se ek choti si Ice Jade Pendant nikali.
"Yeh meri maa ki aakhri nishaani hai. Yeh cultivation karte waqt dimaag shant rakhti hai. Yeh tum rakh lo."
Aryan hairan tha. Yeh Kavya ke liye bohot precious cheez thi.
"Kavya, main yeh nahi le sakta..."
"Rakh lo!" Kavya ne zabardasti pendant uske haath mein thama diya. Uska haath Aryan ke haath se touch hua, aur dono ke beech ek current sa dauda.
Mahaual thoda romantic ho gaya tha. Aryan jhukne hi wala tha ki...
DHADAAAM!
Darwaza zor se khula.
"Darling! Main aa gayi!"
Zara (Treasure Pavilion wali) dhoom-dhadake ke saath andar ghusi. Uske haath mein wine ki bottle aur do glass thay.
Jaise hi usne Kavya ko Aryan ke saath dekha, uski smile ruk gayi.
"Oh," Zara ne Kavya ko upar se neeche tak dekha. "Lagta hai Ice Queen ne pehle hi line maar li."
Kavya gusse se laal ho gayi. "Zara! Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?"
Zara ne Aryan ke doosre side aakar uska haath pakad liya. "Main? Main apne 'Business Partner' ke saath celebration karne aayi hoon. Kyun Aryan, deal yaad hai na? Massage?"
Aryan dono ke beech phas gaya tha. Ek taraf thandi aag (Kavya), doosri taraf jwala mukhi (Zara).
[System Mission: Harem Management 101]
[Task: Dono ko shant karo bina kisi ko naraz kiye.]
[Reward: Charisma +20.]
Aryan ne hosh se kaam liya.
"Ladies, ladies! Ladne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Aaj ki raat celebration ki hai."
Aryan ne Zara se wine li aur Kavya ko pendant ke liye thank you bola.
"Kavya, yeh pendant mere dil ke paas rahega. Aur Zara, tumhari wine hum teeno piyenge."
Dono ladkiyan ek-doosre ko ghoor rahi thin, par Aryan ne mahaul sambhal liya. Raat bhar baatein hui, hasi-mazaak hua. Aryan ko ehsaas hua ki is nayi duniya mein wo akela nahi hai.
Der Raat (Jab sab chale gaye)
Aryan wapis akela tha. Nasha utar chuka tha.
"Ab waqt hai us aakhri reward ko check karne ka."
[Information unlocked: Location of your Parents.]
Aryan ne System command diya: "Show me."
Hawa mein ek purani tasveer (image) ban gayi.
Tasveer mein ek aadmi aur ek aurat thay. Aadmi Aryan jaisa dikhta tha, lekin uski aankhein bilkul Asura jaisi thin (Purple/Black). Aurat bohot sundar thi aur usne Central Empire ke shahi kapde pehne thay.
Ek awaaz (audio recording) play hui:
"Beta Aryan... agar tum yeh sun rahe ho, toh tum zinda bach gaye ho. Humein maaf karna humein tumhe chhodna pada. 'The Dark Sect' aur 'Empire' humare khoon ke pyaase thay. Tumhara khoon... Royal Asura Bloodline hai. Ise chupa kar rakhna jab tak tum Earth Realm paar na kar lo. Hum tumhe Forbidden City mein milenge..."
Message khatam ho gaya.
Aryan sann reh gaya.
"Royal Bloodline? Dark Sect? Empire?"
Matlab wo koi aam anaath nahi tha. Uske parents kisi badi politics ka shikaar hue thay.
Aryan ki aankhon mein aag jal uthi.
"Toh mujhe strong isliye nahi banna ki main survive kar sakun... mujhe strong isliye banna hai kyunki mujhe Empire se ladna hai."
System ne naya Main Quest update kiya:
[Main Quest: Journey to the Central Empire.]
[Requirement: Reach Earth Realm first.]
Aryan ne balcony se door aasmaan mein dekha, jahan Central Empire tha.
"Wait for me, Mom, Dad. Main aa raha hoon."
Lekin Sect chhodne se pehle, Aryan ko yahan ka hisaab poora karna tha.
Elder Shang abhi bhi zinda tha. Aur Vikram ka bad
la lene ke liye Inner Sect ke disciples zaroor aayenge.
Kahani abhi bas shuru hui thi.

 

[krish1152]

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[111ramjain]

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[spritemathews]

Mazedar update