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Chapter 40
Celestial Trial aur Maut ka Khel**
Heavenly Flute Temple ki subah hamesha ki tarah shant nahi thi. Mandir ke charon taraf se 'Spirit Horns' ki awaaz goonj rahi thi, jo is baat ka elaan kar rahi thi ki aaj **'Celestial Trial'** ka din hai. Yeh trial sirf ek imtehaan nahi tha, balki maut aur zindagi ke beech ki ek patli lakeer thi.
Aryan apne guest room ki balcony mein khada tha. Usne aaj ek naya 'Combat Suit' pehna tha jo Mei ne khud uske liye taiyaar kiya tha—kaale rang ka suit jis par neele crystals lage thay jo hawa mein maujood energy ko absorb kar rahe thay.
*Ting!*
**[System Update: Current Status]**
* **Realm:** Mortal Soul - Stage 3 (Peak).
* **Energy Density:** 450% higher than a normal Stage 3.
* **New Skill Unlocked:** 'Asura's Gaze' (Target ki kamzori dekhne ki shakti).
"Aaj ka din bada hai, Kaalu," Aryan ne apni sleeve mein chupe chote se dragon ko sehlaaya. Kaalu ne halke se dahaad mari, jaise wo bhi khoon peene ke liye utawla ho.
---
#### **The Trial Arena: Ek Bhayanak Mahaul**
Mandir ke bichon-beech ek vishal maidan tha jise **'The Arena of Echoes'** kaha jata tha. Maidan ke charon taraf unche-unche sunehre khambe thay jinpar mandir ke Elders aur Master Yan baithe thay. Bheed mein hazaron disciples thay jo Aryan ko aisi nazron se dekh rahe thay jaise wo koi bali ka bakra ho.
"Suno sabhi!" Master Yan ki awaaz maidan mein garji. "Aaj ka Celestial Trial shuru hota hai. Isme teen charan (phases) honge. Jo bhi ise paar karega, wo 'Inner Disciple' banega. Jo haarega... uski aatma hamesha ke liye mandir ki ghulami karegi!"
Aryan maidan ke beech mein pahuncha. Tabhi bheed ko cheerte hue **Master Zhao** (Emerald Province ka villain) wahan aaya. Uske piche Senior Brother Wei aur kuch khatarnak yoddha thay.
"Master Yan!" Zhao ne kutil muskaan ke saath kaha. "Maine suna hai yeh 'Mortal Trash' khud ko bohot takatwar samajhta hai. Kyun na trial ko thoda aur mazedaar banaya jaye? Main apna sabse behtareen 'Slave Warrior' iske saath maidan mein utaarunga."
Master Yan ne kuch kehna chaha, par Aryan ne haath utha kar unhe rok diya. "Muqabla jitna bada ho, jeetne ka maza utna hi zyada aata hai. Zhao, apne kutte ko bhej."
---
#### **Phase 1: The Trial of Willpower (Aatmic Dabav)**
Arena ki zameen par bane purane nishaan (runes) chamakne lage. Achanak, aasmaan se ek bhari dabav (pressure) Aryan par gira. Yeh dabav kisi pahad ke wazan jaisa tha.
| Stage | Spirit Pressure Level | Effect on Body |
| :--- | :--- | :--- |
| **Stage 1** | 500 kg | Muscles start to ache. |
| **Stage 2** | 2,000 kg | Bones start to crackle. |
| **Stage 3** | 10,000 kg | Blood starts to leak from pores. |
Aryan wahan bina hile khada raha. Jabki baki kuch disciples jo trial mein shamil thay, wo Stage 2 par hi behosh ho gaye. Master Zhao hairan tha. "Stage 3 ka dabav? Yeh kaise jhel raha hai?"
Aryan ne mann mein kaha, *"System, recalculate energy flow."*
Asura ki energy ko balance karne ke liye Aryan ne ek formula apply kiya:
$$E_{total} = \int_{0}^{t} (P_{spirit} - R_{asura}) dt$$
Yahan $P$ pressure hai aur $R$ Aryan ki resistance.
Dabav 15,000 kg tak pahunch gaya, par Aryan ne ek kadam aage badhaya aur apni aura release ki. *BOOM!* Maidan ki zameen phat gayi aur sara dabav gayab ho gaya. Phase 1 clear!
---
#### **Phase 2: The Combat - The Beast and The Assassin**
Maidan ka darwaza khula aur wahan se ek 15-foot lamba **'Thunder-Maned Lion'** (Mortal Soul Stage 9 Beast) bahar nikla. Uske piche Master Zhao ka sabse bada assassin, **Shadow-Ghost**, tha jo Stage 9 par tha.
"Ek saath do?!" Mei bheed se chillayi, uski aankhon mein aansu thay. "Yeh nainsafi hai!"
Aryan ne apni Shadow Fang nikaali. Talwaar ab pehle se zyada kaali aur vishali lag rahi thi. Thunder Lion ne ek bhayanak dahaad maari aur Aryan ki taraf lapka. Uske piche Shadow-Ghost ek parchhayi bankar gayab ho gaya.
Aryan ne aankhein band ki. **'Asura's Gaze'** activate hui.
Use Lion ke seene mein ek chamakta hua point dikha—uska heart. Aur hawa mein ek dhundhli line dikhi—Shadow-Ghost ka rasta.
"Khatam!"
Aryan hawa mein uchla. Lion ne bijli (lightning) chhodi, par Aryan ne use Shadow Fang se block kiya.
**"Asura Slash: Void Rip!"**
Aryan ki talwaar ne Lion ka sar ek jhatke mein dhad se alag kar diya. Bheed sann reh gayi! Stage 3 ne Stage 9 Beast ko ek vaar mein khatam kiya?
Lekin Shadow-Ghost ab Aryan ke bilkul piche tha. Uska zehar bhara khanjar (dagger) Aryan ki gardan se sirf 1 inch door tha.
"Marr ja!" Shadow-Ghost hasa.
Aryan ne piche mude bina apni peeth par se ek laat (kick) maari. Uski kick mein gravity ka dabav tha.
*CRACK!* Shadow-Ghost ki pasliyan (ribs) choor-choor ho gayin aur wo maidan ke bahar ja gira.
---
#### **Phase 3: The Revelation - Clue of Vanya**
Phase 2 jeetne ke baad, Master Yan ne ek purana aaina (The Heavenly Mirror) maidan mein laya. "Yeh aaina tumhare dil ka raaz aur tumhare apnon ki halat dikhayega."
Aryan ne aaine mein haath rakha. Aaine se ek neeli roshni nikli aur ek tasveer dikhayi dene lagi.
Wahan ek kaala mahal tha jiske charon taraf laal dhuwaan tha—**'The Demon Forest of 3rd Star Layer'**. Wahan **Vanya** (Asura Princess) zanjeeron mein jakdi hui thi, lekin uska sharir ek ajeeb kaali aag mein jal raha tha. Uske samne ek bhayanak yoddha khada tha jo keh raha tha, "Vanya, tumhari 'Asura Essence' hi humare Lord ko jagayegi."
"VANYA!" Aryan zor se chillaya. Uski aankhon mein khoon utar aaya.
*Ting!*
**[New Mission: Rescue Vanya from the Demon Forest.]**
**[Reward: Rank jump to Earth-God Realm Stage 1.]**
Aaina achanak phat gaya kyunki Aryan ki gusse ki energy itni zyada thi ki aaina use jhel nahi paya.
---
#### **The Aftermath and Night of Passion**
Master Yan khade hue. "Trial khatam! Aryan ne woh kar dikhaya jo namumkin tha. Aaj se, Aryan Heavenly Flute Temple ka 'Head Disciple' hai!"
Master Zhao gusse se pagal ho kar wahan se nikal gaya, par Aryan ne use dekh kar mann mein kaha, *"Tera number jald aayega."*
Raat ko, Mei Aryan ke kamre mein aayi. Wo aaj bohot khush thi par Vanya ki tasveer dekh kar thodi chinta mein bhi thi.
"Tumne use dekha na?" Mei ne dheere se pucha. "Wo bohot takatwar lag rahi hai."
Aryan ne Mei ko khinch kar apni god (lap) mein bitha liya. "Wo meri 'Asura Princess' hai, Mei. Aur tum meri 'Flute Saintess' ho. Main kisi ko bhi dushman ke haath mein nahi chhodunga."
Mei ne Aryan ke gale mein haath dale. "Main jaanti hoon tum kal hi yahan se nikal jaoge use bachane. Isliye aaj raat... main nahi chahti ki hum cultivation ki baatein karein."
Mei ne apne libaas ki dori dhili ki. Aryan ne use zor se apne seene se lagaya. Us raat, mandir ki shanti mein sirf unki saanson ka shor tha. Mei ne Aryan ko apni 'Source Energy' ka ek hissa de diya taaki wo Demon Forest mein survive kar sake.
*Ting!*
**[Host Level Up!]**
**[Mortal Soul Stage 3 -> Stage 6!]**
Aryan ne aasmaan mein chamakte hue teesre star layer ki taraf dekha.
"Vanya... apna dil mazboot rakhna. Tera Raja aa raha hai."
Celestial Trial aur Maut ka Khel**
Heavenly Flute Temple ki subah hamesha ki tarah shant nahi thi. Mandir ke charon taraf se 'Spirit Horns' ki awaaz goonj rahi thi, jo is baat ka elaan kar rahi thi ki aaj **'Celestial Trial'** ka din hai. Yeh trial sirf ek imtehaan nahi tha, balki maut aur zindagi ke beech ki ek patli lakeer thi.
Aryan apne guest room ki balcony mein khada tha. Usne aaj ek naya 'Combat Suit' pehna tha jo Mei ne khud uske liye taiyaar kiya tha—kaale rang ka suit jis par neele crystals lage thay jo hawa mein maujood energy ko absorb kar rahe thay.
*Ting!*
**[System Update: Current Status]**
* **Realm:** Mortal Soul - Stage 3 (Peak).
* **Energy Density:** 450% higher than a normal Stage 3.
* **New Skill Unlocked:** 'Asura's Gaze' (Target ki kamzori dekhne ki shakti).
"Aaj ka din bada hai, Kaalu," Aryan ne apni sleeve mein chupe chote se dragon ko sehlaaya. Kaalu ne halke se dahaad mari, jaise wo bhi khoon peene ke liye utawla ho.
---
#### **The Trial Arena: Ek Bhayanak Mahaul**
Mandir ke bichon-beech ek vishal maidan tha jise **'The Arena of Echoes'** kaha jata tha. Maidan ke charon taraf unche-unche sunehre khambe thay jinpar mandir ke Elders aur Master Yan baithe thay. Bheed mein hazaron disciples thay jo Aryan ko aisi nazron se dekh rahe thay jaise wo koi bali ka bakra ho.
"Suno sabhi!" Master Yan ki awaaz maidan mein garji. "Aaj ka Celestial Trial shuru hota hai. Isme teen charan (phases) honge. Jo bhi ise paar karega, wo 'Inner Disciple' banega. Jo haarega... uski aatma hamesha ke liye mandir ki ghulami karegi!"
Aryan maidan ke beech mein pahuncha. Tabhi bheed ko cheerte hue **Master Zhao** (Emerald Province ka villain) wahan aaya. Uske piche Senior Brother Wei aur kuch khatarnak yoddha thay.
"Master Yan!" Zhao ne kutil muskaan ke saath kaha. "Maine suna hai yeh 'Mortal Trash' khud ko bohot takatwar samajhta hai. Kyun na trial ko thoda aur mazedaar banaya jaye? Main apna sabse behtareen 'Slave Warrior' iske saath maidan mein utaarunga."
Master Yan ne kuch kehna chaha, par Aryan ne haath utha kar unhe rok diya. "Muqabla jitna bada ho, jeetne ka maza utna hi zyada aata hai. Zhao, apne kutte ko bhej."
---
#### **Phase 1: The Trial of Willpower (Aatmic Dabav)**
Arena ki zameen par bane purane nishaan (runes) chamakne lage. Achanak, aasmaan se ek bhari dabav (pressure) Aryan par gira. Yeh dabav kisi pahad ke wazan jaisa tha.
| Stage | Spirit Pressure Level | Effect on Body |
| :--- | :--- | :--- |
| **Stage 1** | 500 kg | Muscles start to ache. |
| **Stage 2** | 2,000 kg | Bones start to crackle. |
| **Stage 3** | 10,000 kg | Blood starts to leak from pores. |
Aryan wahan bina hile khada raha. Jabki baki kuch disciples jo trial mein shamil thay, wo Stage 2 par hi behosh ho gaye. Master Zhao hairan tha. "Stage 3 ka dabav? Yeh kaise jhel raha hai?"
Aryan ne mann mein kaha, *"System, recalculate energy flow."*
Asura ki energy ko balance karne ke liye Aryan ne ek formula apply kiya:
$$E_{total} = \int_{0}^{t} (P_{spirit} - R_{asura}) dt$$
Yahan $P$ pressure hai aur $R$ Aryan ki resistance.
Dabav 15,000 kg tak pahunch gaya, par Aryan ne ek kadam aage badhaya aur apni aura release ki. *BOOM!* Maidan ki zameen phat gayi aur sara dabav gayab ho gaya. Phase 1 clear!
---
#### **Phase 2: The Combat - The Beast and The Assassin**
Maidan ka darwaza khula aur wahan se ek 15-foot lamba **'Thunder-Maned Lion'** (Mortal Soul Stage 9 Beast) bahar nikla. Uske piche Master Zhao ka sabse bada assassin, **Shadow-Ghost**, tha jo Stage 9 par tha.
"Ek saath do?!" Mei bheed se chillayi, uski aankhon mein aansu thay. "Yeh nainsafi hai!"
Aryan ne apni Shadow Fang nikaali. Talwaar ab pehle se zyada kaali aur vishali lag rahi thi. Thunder Lion ne ek bhayanak dahaad maari aur Aryan ki taraf lapka. Uske piche Shadow-Ghost ek parchhayi bankar gayab ho gaya.
Aryan ne aankhein band ki. **'Asura's Gaze'** activate hui.
Use Lion ke seene mein ek chamakta hua point dikha—uska heart. Aur hawa mein ek dhundhli line dikhi—Shadow-Ghost ka rasta.
"Khatam!"
Aryan hawa mein uchla. Lion ne bijli (lightning) chhodi, par Aryan ne use Shadow Fang se block kiya.
**"Asura Slash: Void Rip!"**
Aryan ki talwaar ne Lion ka sar ek jhatke mein dhad se alag kar diya. Bheed sann reh gayi! Stage 3 ne Stage 9 Beast ko ek vaar mein khatam kiya?
Lekin Shadow-Ghost ab Aryan ke bilkul piche tha. Uska zehar bhara khanjar (dagger) Aryan ki gardan se sirf 1 inch door tha.
"Marr ja!" Shadow-Ghost hasa.
Aryan ne piche mude bina apni peeth par se ek laat (kick) maari. Uski kick mein gravity ka dabav tha.
*CRACK!* Shadow-Ghost ki pasliyan (ribs) choor-choor ho gayin aur wo maidan ke bahar ja gira.
---
#### **Phase 3: The Revelation - Clue of Vanya**
Phase 2 jeetne ke baad, Master Yan ne ek purana aaina (The Heavenly Mirror) maidan mein laya. "Yeh aaina tumhare dil ka raaz aur tumhare apnon ki halat dikhayega."
Aryan ne aaine mein haath rakha. Aaine se ek neeli roshni nikli aur ek tasveer dikhayi dene lagi.
Wahan ek kaala mahal tha jiske charon taraf laal dhuwaan tha—**'The Demon Forest of 3rd Star Layer'**. Wahan **Vanya** (Asura Princess) zanjeeron mein jakdi hui thi, lekin uska sharir ek ajeeb kaali aag mein jal raha tha. Uske samne ek bhayanak yoddha khada tha jo keh raha tha, "Vanya, tumhari 'Asura Essence' hi humare Lord ko jagayegi."
"VANYA!" Aryan zor se chillaya. Uski aankhon mein khoon utar aaya.
*Ting!*
**[New Mission: Rescue Vanya from the Demon Forest.]**
**[Reward: Rank jump to Earth-God Realm Stage 1.]**
Aaina achanak phat gaya kyunki Aryan ki gusse ki energy itni zyada thi ki aaina use jhel nahi paya.
---
#### **The Aftermath and Night of Passion**
Master Yan khade hue. "Trial khatam! Aryan ne woh kar dikhaya jo namumkin tha. Aaj se, Aryan Heavenly Flute Temple ka 'Head Disciple' hai!"
Master Zhao gusse se pagal ho kar wahan se nikal gaya, par Aryan ne use dekh kar mann mein kaha, *"Tera number jald aayega."*
Raat ko, Mei Aryan ke kamre mein aayi. Wo aaj bohot khush thi par Vanya ki tasveer dekh kar thodi chinta mein bhi thi.
"Tumne use dekha na?" Mei ne dheere se pucha. "Wo bohot takatwar lag rahi hai."
Aryan ne Mei ko khinch kar apni god (lap) mein bitha liya. "Wo meri 'Asura Princess' hai, Mei. Aur tum meri 'Flute Saintess' ho. Main kisi ko bhi dushman ke haath mein nahi chhodunga."
Mei ne Aryan ke gale mein haath dale. "Main jaanti hoon tum kal hi yahan se nikal jaoge use bachane. Isliye aaj raat... main nahi chahti ki hum cultivation ki baatein karein."
Mei ne apne libaas ki dori dhili ki. Aryan ne use zor se apne seene se lagaya. Us raat, mandir ki shanti mein sirf unki saanson ka shor tha. Mei ne Aryan ko apni 'Source Energy' ka ek hissa de diya taaki wo Demon Forest mein survive kar sake.
*Ting!*
**[Host Level Up!]**
**[Mortal Soul Stage 3 -> Stage 6!]**
Aryan ne aasmaan mein chamakte hue teesre star layer ki taraf dekha.
"Vanya... apna dil mazboot rakhna. Tera Raja aa raha hai."
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